1. Easy (1.66 stars, 85 notes)
2. Hard (4.93 stars, 209 notes)
3. Insane (4.93 stars, 267 notes)
4. Normal (3.86 stars, 129 notes)

Apricot wrote:

carrot chan

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

.osb 파일이 제꺼에 보이는데 혹시 제가 뭐 만져서 그랬을수도 있거나 그런거 같지만
있다면 지워주세요 // 지울 필요 없어요.

[Easy]
별다른 이상은 없어보입니다

[Normal]
same

[Hard]
01:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 음... 전 이게 인세인에 들어가도 매우 힘들꺼같네요. 다른 파트에 비해 무척 힘들어보이는 부분같습니다. 아마 집중적으로 이곳에서 틀릴꺼같네요 // 글쎄요, 일단 보류.

맘같아선 서클 크기 +1 하고싶은데... // 제 하드 맵핑 스타일이라 패스

[Insane]
00:31:157 (1,2,3) - 1하고 2하고 3의 거리거 일정하지 않은건 뭔가 노림수라고 보지만
제가보기에는 좀 그런거같네요. 3을 한칸 오른쪽으로. // 수정

제가 할말은 이정도 인거 같네요.

Raging Bull wrote:

Weee. I should totally blacklist you because I don't think I'll ever find anything in your maps. I mean I can't even nazi your sliders D: //

General:
Eh nothing much. Maybe just map the break for easy/normal for consistency? I got bugged a lot about that in my map too when it was like 2 second break // I set break where possible if diff is easy or normal.
I don't think this song really needs kiai time. // It's a matter of personal preference.
01:36:603 - Correct me if I'm wrong but why did let kiai time continue during a spinner? I'm pretty sure you wouldn't know the difference. I believe you only used it for the kiai fountain. Remove the kiai time and keep the kiai fountain? // You can see the flying stars when you spin! >.<

Easy:
00:56:762 (1) - Hmm. I would extend this spinner a little bit more to 00:59:055 so it's not too short for easy. // Nope


Normal:
01:24:278 (1,1,1,1,1) - Hmm. I usually don't like having a note after a spinner on the easier difficulties. You also have a spinner,note,spinner,note,spinner combo which would rather tire the player out with spinner, readjust aim, spinner, readjust, spinner. Think you can tone it down a bit? If you really don't want to change it, at least change 01:27:336 (1) - because the spinner seems quite short compared to the other 2. // OK, fixed

Hard/Insane:
Nothing

winber1 wrote:

all suggestions. nothing much to say here.

General

--01:36:507 - idk, i just don't find this kiai time necessary. // I explained at the post above.

Insane

00:09:756 (5,6) - i like it better if these were switched around like this: // OK

SPOILER

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01:36:603 (1) - silence spinner? // nope

Hard

01:29:629 (1,2,3) - maybe it's just me, but i would like the spacing to be a little smaller. or at least no larger than how 01:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was spaced. Smaller spacing just fits this Hard difficulty more imo. In fact, I wouldn't even use this shape. THis difficulty reminds me of Insane way too much >_> to me it basically looks like insane with smaller spacing. // It's not too hard imo.
01:36:603 (1) - silence spinner?

Normal

00:23:514 - why not just map the same thing in all difficulties? i wouldn't really care that much if it was a guest diff tho, since people have different ideas. either that, or maybe you could remove this section from the other difficulties... or something. // For novice. Also explained at the post above.
00:32:304 (1) - i would just make this repeat slider 3/2 ticks in length and then add a note after it like this: // No, I followed instrument in this section.

SPOILER

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01:10:329 (6,7) - sounds much better imo if you did this imo : // OK

SPOILER

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01:36:603 (1) - silence?

Easy

00:23:514 - yea idk, maybe its just me, but i would rather have all diffs by the same mapper be equal >_>
01:08:992 (3) - idk this overlap doesn't look very nice to me // Fixed
01:36:603 (1) - yea silence maybe?

Nice map! :3

ykcarrot wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

01:36:603 - Correct me if I'm wrong but why did let kiai time continue during a spinner? I'm pretty sure you wouldn't know the difference. I believe you only used it for the kiai fountain. Remove the kiai time and keep the kiai fountain? // You can see the flying stars when you spin! >.<

Raging Bull wrote:

It's true you see flying stars in spinners, but you don't need to have kiai time DURING the spinner.

MMzz wrote:

Could I make a taiko please? :3

1. 01:34:215 (1,2,3) - It's kinda hard for newbie to read them imo. Make them one slider?

• 
  Fine~

1. 01:23:896 (5) - Add finish instead of (6).

1. 00:10:902 (1) - Stack with 00:09:565 (4)?
2. 00:18:164 (8) - Add clap?
3. 00:29:246 (7) - Add finish?
4. 00:41:476 (3) - ^ at the start of slider.
5. 00:47:590 (7) - Add new combo?
6. 01:05:743 (x) - Put a note? For example...stack with 01:05:361 (5)?
7. 01:23:896 (5) - Add finish instead of (6).

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for request~ // Kochirakoso~

[Easy]

1. 01:34:215 (1,2,3) - It's kinda hard for newbie to read them imo. Make them one slider? // OK

[Normal]

• 
  Fine~

[Hard]

1. 01:23:896 (5) - Add finish instead of (6). // Nope. I followed cymbal in the music.

[Insane]

1. 00:10:902 (1) - Stack with 00:09:565 (4)? // Fixed
2. 00:18:164 (8) - Add clap?
3. 00:29:246 (7) - Add finish?
4. 00:41:476 (3) - ^ at the start of slider.
5. 00:47:590 (7) - Add new combo?
6. 01:05:743 (x) - Put a note? For example...stack with 01:05:361 (5)?
7. 01:23:896 (5) - Add finish instead of (6).
   // Sorry, I won't change others.

Great mapset!
I love symmetry formation<3
Of course this song is soooo sweet<3
Good luck~

IceBeam wrote:

hello~

folder and map setting are fine,good job!

though as it's a short version,I don't see a good reason to add a break on the mapable part (easy and normal),especially after intro part
// I add break for novice if diff is Easy or Normal even in short ver.

[Easy]
00:36:125 - adding a note here would be perfect to keep the rhytm on,but I do realize how hard it would be to syncronize it with symmetrical pattern that comes ahead..

00:36:890 (1) - it'd be much better to shorten this slider to 00:37:654 and add a circle to 00:38:036 then,but again,you'll have to remap or change the placement of next objects as well

00:51:412 (2) - shouldn't it repeat at 00:51:985? :/ and then add 2 notes to 00:52:941 and 00:53:323

// Changed nothing

[Normal]
00:46:253 (4,5) - it was a little weird to hear then in normal sampleset,maybe start using normal hitsounds at 00:44:533?
then add whistles to 00:44:533 and 00:45:297 - sounds much better to me // No

00:56:380 (5) - placement is a bit odd now as it's not symmetrical,use this? // It's symmetrized with 00:53:323 (1)

SPOILER

01:11:094 (1) - move it 1/2 earlier? it would improve the rhytm // Nope

[Hard]
OD 7 for Hard is too much :/ reduce by 1(2)? //No, I keep both values 7 in Hard if there isn't any special reason.(For an example, diff spread problem)
and hp drain as well

00:44:533 (x) - same suggestion to use normal hitsounds from here and to add those 2 whistles as in Normal

great otherwise

[Insane]
OD -1 please // Why? It's an Insane diff.

00:44:533 (x) - again the same suggestion to use normal hitsounds from here and to add those 2 whistles as in Normal
00:53:705 (3) - add a whistle to logically finish this hitsound pattern? // Denied
01:05:934 (1) - ^
01:10:520 (1) - ^
01:10:902 (3) - ^
01:11:285 (5) - ^
01:15:680 (2) - stack with 01:14:533 (2)? // Fixed appropriately
01:16:444 (4) - ^
01:18:164 (1) - whistle again
01:29:629 (1,2,3) - reduce spacing please,that was totally unexpected .__. // No, I asked some people for test playing, they didn't miss them.

a very solid mapset,good job!
leaving a star icon so far,get a few more mods please~ // Thank you. Oh well... I think it's quite good enough now.