Aya Uchida - afraid... [CatchTheBeat]

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no kudosu
13:21 *Shirokane Rinko is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1289137 Aya Uchida - afraid...]
13:21 Shirokane Rinko: salad
13:23 Shirokane Rinko: thanks a lot
13:23 -Ken: well the diff looks pretty fine
13:23 -Ken: I'll try tho
13:24 Shirokane Rinko: thank you
13:24 -Ken: 00:13:505 (5) - I guess x:200 looks a bit better here
13:25 Shirokane Rinko: done
13:26 -Ken: 00:16:672 (8,1) -
13:26 -Ken: what about you increase distance a bit here
13:26 -Ken: it's platewalkable
13:28 Shirokane Rinko: x:250 better?
13:28 Shirokane Rinko: or increase more?
13:29 -Ken: maybe more
13:29 -Ken: like x:258
13:30 -Ken: up to you
13:30 -Ken: I'm bad at modding salad w
13:30 Shirokane Rinko: yep, 258 better
13:30 Shirokane Rinko: no problem
13:30 Shirokane Rinko: anyway you helped me
13:31 -Ken: 00:43:338 (5,1) -
13:31 -Ken: these looks close
13:31 -Ken: and the sound is kinda strong
13:31 Shirokane Rinko: This map old and have only mod v1 system, not all modders will want modding on v1
13:32 -Ken: oh I see
13:32 -Ken: maybe equal distance to this one 00:48:672 (7,1) -
13:33 Shirokane Rinko: 00:43:338 (5,1) - fixed
13:33 -Ken: okay
13:33 -Ken: I guess that's all I have to say
13:33 -Ken: looks fine to me xd
13:34 Shirokane Rinko: 00:48:672 (7,1) - hmmm, I can doing it closer to 7
13:34 -Ken: just a little bit if you want to
13:35 -Ken: 00:54:171 (9) -
13:35 -Ken: NC here
13:35 -Ken: and remove it here 00:54:838 (1) - ?
13:35 Shirokane Rinko: thanks
13:35 Shirokane Rinko: fixed
13:35 -Ken: np
13:36 Shirokane Rinko: 00:48:672 (7,1) - 1 - x:325
13:36 -Ken: yea that's good
13:36 Shirokane Rinko: better?
13:36 -Ken: yes
13:36 Shirokane Rinko: okay, nice
alienflybot
Requested to give some comments on Salad.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable
[Salad]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:00:839 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try to include some patterns that don't require much back-and-forth movements, such as vertical sliders and curve paths.
  2. 00:02:505 (5,1) - Ambiguous distance. If this is intended to be a dash, try to increase it and test to see if you will dash at this point intuitively.
  3. 00:04:838 (2,3,4) - This part can be hard to beginners as both (2,3) and (3,4) are ambiguous. Try to move (3) closer to (2) to fix this.
  4. 00:11:172 (1,2) - Add a dash here?
  5. 00:16:672 (8,1) - ^, by increasing the distance slightly.
  6. 00:21:505 (4,1) - ^
  7. 00:26:838 (6,1) - ^, please plan the parts that you want to add dash at, next time when you map.
  8. 00:32:172 (2,3,4,5,1) - Ambiguous distances at (4,5,1). Perhaps reduce the distance of (4,5) while increase the one at (5,1), to ensure everyone will tap their dashes at (5,1).
  9. 00:33:338 (2,3) - Here there is a dash, but 00:36:338 (2,3) - , 00:38:838 (2) - and 00:41:671 (5,6) - do not. This means there is a little flaw in consistency. Maybe remove the potential dash at 00:33:338 (2,3) - for consistency sake.
  10. 00:52:838 (1,2) - Strange to have a dash here, maybe follow a simpler rhythm for 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? You may try something like 4-4 (where hyphen means the dash position and 4s are streams with 4 circles).
  11. 00:54:171 - Consider starting the Kiai here instead of 00:52:838 - .
  12. 00:54:171 - 01:15:504 - Sliders like 00:54:838 (2) - can be slanted slightly, because their inner distances are quite large during gameplay.

    In general, there are notes that should be emphasized by adding dash to them, but they aren't; while some parts are added with dashes but the notes are not strong enough. It may be better if you choose to remake another version of Salad and plan ahead before start mapping the parts. (My usual practice is to treat every stanza as a checkpoint, and do some testplay to locate potential issues)

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

alienflybot wrote:

Requested to give some comments on Salad.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable
[Salad]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:00:839 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try to include some patterns that don't require much back-and-forth movements, such as vertical sliders and curve paths. - a bit reworked
  2. 00:02:505 (5,1) - Ambiguous distance. If this is intended to be a dash, try to increase it and test to see if you will dash at this point intuitively. - changed earlier (^)
  3. 00:04:838 (2,3,4) - This part can be hard to beginners as both (2,3) and (3,4) are ambiguous. Try to move (3) closer to (2) to fix this. - I think here all okey. not high spaceing
  4. 00:11:172 (1,2) - Add a dash here? - added
  5. 00:16:672 (8,1) - ^, by increasing the distance slightly. - increased
  6. 00:21:505 (4,1) - ^ - ^
  7. 00:26:838 (6,1) - ^, please plan the parts that you want to add dash at, next time when you map. - added
  8. 00:32:172 (2,3,4,5,1) - Ambiguous distances at (4,5,1). Perhaps reduce the distance of (4,5) while increase the one at (5,1), to ensure everyone will tap their dashes at (5,1). - okay, changed
  9. 00:33:338 (2,3) - Here there is a dash, but 00:36:338 (2,3) - , 00:38:838 (2) - and 00:41:671 (5,6) - do not. This means there is a little flaw in consistency. Maybe remove the potential dash at 00:33:338 (2,3) - for consistency sake. - removed
  10. 00:52:838 (1,2) - Strange to have a dash here, maybe follow a simpler rhythm for 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? You may try something like 4-4 (where hyphen means the dash position and 4s are streams with 4 circles). - a bit changed
  11. 00:54:171 - Consider starting the Kiai here instead of 00:52:838 - . - I think it better, changed on other diff too
  12. 00:54:171 - 01:15:504 - Sliders like 00:54:838 (2) - can be slanted slightly, because their inner distances are quite large during gameplay. - I think here all normal

    In general, there are notes that should be emphasized by adding dash to them, but they aren't; while some parts are added with dashes but the notes are not strong enough. It may be better if you choose to remake another version of Salad and plan ahead before start mapping the parts. (My usual practice is to treat every stanza as a checkpoint, and do some testplay to locate potential issues)

Good luck!
Thanks for mod, I will rewatch my diff to find some problems with dash
Rgamer065
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JBHyperion
Oh boy I haven't seen modding v1 in a while...

General:
  1. 00:16:838 - 00:27:505 - hitsound volume here should really be quieter than the sections before and after, since the music is much calmer. For example, 00:32:838 - is a similar section but it has half the hitsound volume and sounds much more fitting. I think 25-30% volume in both works fine


Hex's Cup:
  1. 00:42:838 (3) - Incorrectly snapped to 3/4, the drums follow a 1/4 rhythm but the strong beats are all on 1/2. Either make this a 1/1 slider or a 1/2 repeat slider
  2. 00:50:838 (3) - Makes sense to split this into 1/1 slider and circle to emphasize the strong red tick vocal, like you did with 00:50:172 (1,2) -
  3. 00:56:005 (2,3) - Strange rhythm choice since you skip the strong white tick vocal, I'd put the circle at 00:55:838 - and then move the slider forward to 00:56:172 - to better reflect that
  4. 00:58:672 (3) - Same deal here, the strong white tick vocal is in the sliderbody so doesn't get emphasized at all. Try replacing this with a circle and 1/1 slider. It's a bit more dense but since this is the kiai you can afford to do something a bit harder imo
  5. 01:03:505 - I get what you were trying to do here but skipping this circle throws the player off the previous 1/1 rhythm, and when you combine that with the low spacing it's a very awkward stop and wait. I'd add a circle here for the drum and increase the distance slightly


Salad:
  1. 00:06:004 (7,1) - It'd be nice if your first dash wasn't a sharp 1/2 one into a direction change, this is quite a harsh introduction for the player. Could you try making the slider (1) face right, or remove (7) to make an easier 1/1 dash instead please?
  2. 00:26:838 (6,1) - Should have a dash for consistency with your previous patterns, as well as to emphasize the strong cymbal sound
  3. 00:30:838 (2,3,4,1,2) - Much less movement in this part than anywhere else even though it's quite intense, perhaps you could try introducing a direction change, like this?
  4. 00:43:338 (5,1) - 00:54:003 (8,1) - Should also be a dash for consistency and emphasis on the strong cymbal sound, the latter especially so since it's the start of the kiai
  5. I would have liked to see more dashing in the kiai to set it apart from the rest of the map. Right now it feels very similar to the earlier parts despite being much more intense musically. You could try adding more dashes to strong vocal sounds like 00:56:171 (5,1) - 01:01:504 (5,1,2) - 01:06:837 (5,1) - 01:10:004 (4,1) - 01:12:171 (6,1,2) - and 01:15:337 (5,6) -


AFB's Platter:
  1. 00:01:172 (2) - I find the drum whistle volume here and throughout this section overbearing, it totally drowns out the actual sounds you're mapping. The 30% used in the previous diffs is far more suitable given the calmness of the intro section
  2. 00:09:346 - 00:10:505 - Missing claps on slidertails
  3. 00:10:755 (2,3) - Feels a bit too close together for good flow, I'd try and raise this distance a little
  4. 00:22:172 (1) - 70% finish volume is way too loud here given this isn't that mush stronger than the sounds around it, please reduce it to around 50% to be more in touch with the rest of your hitsounding. Happens throughout the diff in later pre-kiai sections, so please address this there as well
  5. 00:30:172 (1,2) - Awkwardly low spacing forces the player to stop, would be better as a held walk distance for playability
  6. 00:59:338 (5,1) - Very harsh to have strong hyper into a vertical pattern, especially when this strength is not expectable to the player. Either reduce the strength, curve the slider for more leniency, or both.
  7. 01:02:172 (1,2,3,4) - Was really surprised to see such a low-distance pattern here given how strong the vocals are, would definitely have preferred a dash between (2,3) for example, since this also avoids an awkwadly low spacing to 01:03:005 (4,1) -


Xetopia's Rain:
  1. 00:06:087 (4,1) - Quite a strong hyper into standstill, unexpected for the start of the map. I'd reduce this strength and/or curve the slider for better flow
  2. 00:01:838 (1,2) - 00:26:172 (1) - No sound on the blue ticks to justify these slider extensions, but you skipped over clear red tick sounds to do so. These should be snapped to end at 1/2 to better follow the music
  3. 00:26:505 (2,3,4,5) - Feels kinda underwhelming as a walk, and the first strong sound is a slider tail. Might just be personal preference, but some small jumps and/or direction changes here would make this much more interesting to play
  4. 00:51:172 (5,1) - Really bland to have no emphasis on this, it's the climax before a dramatic pause and then the kiai. Move (1) to the left side and give it a hyperdash for more impact
  5. 00:52:921 (2) - Mapped to no sound, please remove this for consistency with the Platter and Overdose
  6. 00:53:338 (6,1) - Uncomfortably strong hyper when compared to the surrounding ones when (a) this sound is no stronger musically, and (b) the stream following has very little movement and is easy to overshoot. Please consider reducing the distance here. If you do so, you may also want to reduce 00:54:005 (6,1) - slightly also for consistency, since that dashes into a strong antiflow movement
  7. 00:53:838 (5,6) - Check your hitsounding here, there's some really strange blue tick emphasis that totally throws the player off when trying to follow the main drum rhythm


Sinnoh's Overdose:
  1. 00:11:172 (4,5,6,7) - I don't hear any 1/4 rhythms here, removing (5,7) and sticking to 1/2 would be a more fitting option
  2. 00:53:338 (4,8) - These two are lower in pitch drum sounds compared to the others which are strong snares, it'd be nice to do something different with them for variety, such as making a horizontal movement, using antiflow, etc. Right now this just feels like a really plain and uninspired way to start the kiai
  3. 01:12:838 (1,2,3,4) - Personal preference but I'd have tried to do something more interesting here by incorporating the vocals to maybe do 1/2 zig-zags
  4. 01:15:505 (10) - NC would help clear the plate in preparation for the final spinner


Hope this helps, good luck! (:
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

JBHyperion wrote:

Oh boy I haven't seen modding v1 in a while...

Gonna post as I go, please don't kudosu til I'm done /o/


Salad:
  1. 00:06:004 (7,1) - It'd be nice if your first dash wasn't a sharp 1/2 one into a direction change, this is quite a harsh introduction for the player. Could you try making the slider (1) face right, or remove (7) to make an easier 1/1 dash instead please? - Fixed a bit
  2. 00:26:838 (6,1) - Should have a dash for consistency with your previous patterns, as well as to emphasize the strong cymbal sound - Okay
  3. 00:30:838 (2,3,4,1,2) - Much less movement in this part than anywhere else even though it's quite intense, perhaps you could try introducing a direction change, like this? - Added some other changes (idk what you mean on this picture)
  4. 00:43:338 (5,1) - 00:54:003 (8,1) - Should also be a dash for consistency and emphasis on the strong cymbal sound, the latter especially so since it's the start of the kiai - fixed
  5. I would have liked to see more dashing in the kiai to set it apart from the rest of the map. Right now it feels very similar to the earlier parts despite being much more intense musically. You could try adding more dashes to strong vocal sounds like 00:56:171 (5,1) - 01:01:504 (5,1,2) - 01:06:837 (5,1) - 01:10:004 (4,1) - 01:12:171 (6,1,2) - and 01:15:337 (5,6) - fixed
Ponchiwi
[Hex's Cup ]
  1. 00:03:505 (1) - move it a little further x=352
  2. 00:04:505 (2,3,4) - I dont like too much these notes, why you dont try this


[Salad ]
  1. 00:06:172 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - you should change the position of the dash in this section 'cause alwas you are taking the dash on the right
  2. 00:27:505 (1) - why not add dash here? aaa
  3. 00:43:505 (1) - would be nice if you add a dash
  4. 00:54:172 (1) - add more emphasis for the beginning of the kiai time so move to x=216


[AFB's Platter ]
  1. Looks so nice


[Xetopia's Rain ]
  1. 00:54:172 (1) - you could do it better and change this slider repeat for put sliders to make more intense this section
  2. 00:59:505 (1) - 01:04:838 (1) - same here
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Ponchiwi wrote:

[Salad ]
  1. 00:06:172 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - you should change the position of the dash in this section 'cause alwas you are taking the dash on the right - wut? I think here all good
  2. 00:27:505 (1) - why not add dash here? aaa - added on previous mod
  3. 00:43:505 (1) - would be nice if you add a dash - ^
  4. 00:54:172 (1) - add more emphasis for the beginning of the kiai time so move to x=216 - pattern was reworked by previous mod
alienflybot

JBHyperion wrote:

Oh boy I haven't seen modding v1 in a while...

AFB's Platter:
  1. 00:01:172 (2) - I find the drum whistle volume here and throughout this section overbearing, it totally drowns out the actual sounds you're mapping. The 30% used in the previous diffs is far more suitable given the calmness of the intro section - Reduced them to 30%.
  2. 00:09:346 - 00:10:505 - Missing claps on slidertails - Not changing as they don't fit, the current one is fine enough.
  3. 00:10:755 (2,3) - Feels a bit too close together for good flow, I'd try and raise this distance a little - Sure.
  4. 00:22:172 (1) - 70% finish volume is way too loud here given this isn't that mush stronger than the sounds around it, please reduce it to around 50% to be more in touch with the rest of your hitsounding. Happens throughout the diff in later pre-kiai sections, so please address this there as well - Reduced.
  5. 00:30:172 (1,2) - Awkwardly low spacing forces the player to stop, would be better as a held walk distance for playability - I made it to allow a short pause with a small walk, so players can focus on the next dash.
  6. 00:59:338 (5,1) - Very harsh to have strong hyper into a vertical pattern, especially when this strength is not expectable to the player. Either reduce the strength, curve the slider for more leniency, or both. - I made the stream easier to bridge instead, since the distance for hyperdash is already the minimum.
  7. 01:02:172 (1,2,3,4) - Was really surprised to see such a low-distance pattern here given how strong the vocals are, would definitely have preferred a dash between (2,3) for example, since this also avoids an awkwadly low spacing to 01:03:005 (4,1) - Enhanced the distance and made some fine-tuning here.


Hope this helps, good luck! (:
Thanks for mod!

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celerih
Tags on Sinnoh's diff still has Ascendance, in addition, add Celektus to tags since now you need to add hitsounders to tags

[
Hex's Cup
]

  1. 00:05:172 (4) - Would do something to differentiate this from 00:03:505 (1) - since you have the same time on vastly different sounds
  2. 00:08:172 (4) - Move this slightly to the left, so the walk to 00:08:838 (1) - is stronger, since right now it plays pretty awkwardly
  3. 00:10:172 (2,1) - Distance here is also pretty weak, please buff it up
  4. 00:24:172 (5) - based on past rhythms, you should be following the 1/2 here
  5. 00:56:005 (2) - starting on the red tick here is pretty subpar when both white ticks around it are much much stronger and should be prioritized
[
Salad
]

  1. 00:06:005 (7,1) - dash here can be buffed, it's noticeable weaker than the other ones in the map and more ambiguous
  2. 00:16:672 (8,1) - nerf dash here, it's pretty strong
  3. 00:32:172 (2,3,4,5,1) - walks here could also be nerfed, it's pretty limit to just walk them, and would be slightly too challenging on a salad player

AFB too stronk

[
Xetopia's Rain
]

  1. 00:04:172 (3,4) - why no 3/4 like 00:01:838 (1) -
  2. 00:06:172 (1) - tilt more to the right so it's not as easy to overshoot
  3. 00:14:172 (1) - Since SV is pretty high on this diff tilt this a lot more to shorten the slider. You need to slightly adjust yourself while dashing to full catch this and just creates super awkward unintended movement
  4. 00:26:172 (1) - extended slider here really doesn't work when you have a distinct sound on 00:26:338 -
  5. 00:32:088 - You keep using extended 3/4 sliders but then you go over this sound on the blue tick here ):
  6. 00:54:172 (1) - same issue as before with the SV, but here it's even more apparent because it's on a strong 1/4 hyper. Tilt this to make it shorter and easier to catch. Same applies on 00:59:505 (1) - and 01:04:838 (1) -

Sinnoh's diff doesn't have any major issues at a quick glance

Good luck with this map
Sinnoh

JBHyperion wrote:

Sinnoh's Overdose:
  1. 00:11:172 (4,5,6,7) - I don't hear any 1/4 rhythms here, removing (5,7) and sticking to 1/2 would be a more fitting option removed
  2. 00:53:338 (4,8) - These two are lower in pitch drum sounds compared to the others which are strong snares, it'd be nice to do something different with them for variety, such as making a horizontal movement, using antiflow, etc. Right now this just feels like a really plain and uninspired way to start the kiai redid
  3. 01:12:838 (1,2,3,4) - Personal preference but I'd have tried to do something more interesting here by incorporating the vocals to maybe do 1/2 zig-zags ya
  4. 01:15:505 (10) - NC would help clear the plate in preparation for the final spinner ya


Hope this helps, good luck! (:
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Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

celerih wrote:

Tags on Sinnoh's diff still has Ascendance, in addition, add Celektus to tags since now you need to add hitsounders to tags - added


[
Salad
]

  1. 00:06:005 (7,1) - dash here can be buffed, it's noticeable weaker than the other ones in the map and more ambiguous - Ok
  2. 00:16:672 (8,1) - nerf dash here, it's pretty strong - Really? I think it normal jump, but okay reduced to x:280
  3. 00:32:172 (2,3,4,5,1) - walks here could also be nerfed, it's pretty limit to just walk them, and would be slightly too challenging on a salad player - Maybe yes. But I like this pattern. no fix for now

Good luck with this map - thanks :з
Imai Lisa

JBHyperion wrote:

Xetopia's Rain:
  1. 00:06:087 (4,1) - Quite a strong hyper into standstill, unexpected for the start of the map. I'd reduce this strength and/or curve the slider for better flow - sure
  2. 00:01:838 (1,2) - 00:26:172 (1) - No sound on the blue ticks to justify these slider extensions, but you skipped over clear red tick sounds to do so. These should be snapped to end at 1/2 to better follow the music - yep
  3. 00:26:505 (2,3,4,5) - Feels kinda underwhelming as a walk, and the first strong sound is a slider tail. Might just be personal preference, but some small jumps and/or direction changes here would make this much more interesting to play - tbh i want to have a walk here, it's also my personal preference ww
  4. 00:51:172 (5,1) - Really bland to have no emphasis on this, it's the climax before a dramatic pause and then the kiai. Move (1) to the left side and give it a hyperdash for more impact - sure
  5. 00:52:921 (2) - Mapped to no sound, please remove this for consistency with the Platter and Overdose - yep
  6. 00:53:338 (6,1) - Uncomfortably strong hyper when compared to the surrounding ones when (a) this sound is no stronger musically, and (b) the stream following has very little movement and is easy to overshoot. Please consider reducing the distance here. If you do so, you may also want to reduce 00:54:005 (6,1) - slightly also for consistency, since that dashes into a strong antiflow movement - i remapped this stream
  7. 00:53:838 (5,6) - Check your hitsounding here, there's some really strange blue tick emphasis that totally throws the player off when trying to follow the main drum rhythm - @shirokane rinko

Ponchiwi wrote:

[Xetopia's Rain ]
  1. 00:54:172 (1) - you could do it better and change this slider repeat for put sliders to make more intense this section - idk, i want 1/1
  2. 00:59:505 (1) - 01:04:838 (1) - same here - ^

celerih wrote:

[
Xetopia's Rain
]

  1. 00:04:172 (3,4) - why no 3/4 like 00:01:838 (1) - better to fix 00:01:838 (1,2,3) - to 1/2
  2. 00:06:172 (1) - tilt more to the right so it's not as easy to overshoot - sure
  3. 00:14:172 (1) - Since SV is pretty high on this diff tilt this a lot more to shorten the slider. You need to slightly adjust yourself while dashing to full catch this and just creates super awkward unintended movement - yep, fixed
  4. 00:26:172 (1) - extended slider here really doesn't work when you have a distinct sound on 00:26:338 - fixed
  5. 00:32:088 - You keep using extended 3/4 sliders but then you go over this sound on the blue tick here ): - im gay sorry, fixed
  6. 00:54:172 (1) - same issue as before with the SV, but here it's even more apparent because it's on a strong 1/4 hyper. Tilt this to make it shorter and easier to catch. Same applies on 00:59:505 (1) - and 01:04:838 (1) - :eyes: fixed
thanks for mod!

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-Hex-
Applied all I guess. Since I reworked my diff, my previous diff was really meh.
@Rinko : Please do hitsound for me. Thanks.

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rew0825
Hello! as a request :3 //I don't mod v1 for a long time xD

Hex's Cup
  1. 00:22:838 (2) - Maybe this is should similar vertical like other notes as 00:20:172 (2,2,3) -
  2. 00:27:172 (3) - This note is close the edge. You should move it away from edge a bit.
  3. 00:49:505 (2,3) - Maybe you should change this to 1/1 slider for consistency with salad.
  4. 00:56:005 (3) - Maybe you should delete this for consistency with salad.
  5. 01:03:672 (4) - imo this slider is should start on 01:03:505 instead.
  6. 01:06:005 (1,2,3) - 01:11:338 (1,2,3) - imo the notes unnecessary to different with the start kiai because the sound isn't fit with vocal.
  7. 01:13:838 (1,2) - This should start on 01:14:172
Salad
  1. 00:03:172 (1,2) - The dash on this is look very hard. I suggest to add dash on 00:03:338 (2,3) - instead.
  2. 00:04:838 (2,3) - I not sure on this do you want to have dash or not, if have you should increase distance on this more but if not reduce the distance. (imo i think this shouldn't dash because it has dash on 00:06:005 (7,1) - )
  3. 00:07:838 (4,5) - Look this is so far like dash but it's not, You should reduce distance on this.
  4. 00:09:505 (2,3) - imo this is should flow but if you want this antiflow please reduce distance between end of slider (2) and (3).
  5. 00:13:838 (1,2) - This is should dash but now distance is look weird, You should increase distance on this more.
  6. 00:14:838 (3,4,5) - The distance on this is too far, You should move (4) to near (3,5) more.
  7. 00:32:172 (2,3,4,5) - I support celerih on this notes the distance is so wide.
  8. 00:32:672 (5,1) - On this the distance can increase more for dash surely.
  9. 00:33:338 (2,3) - I think on this is unnecessary to use dash like before on 00:17:505 (2) -
  10. 00:37:505 (5,6) - Same as 00:09:505 (2,3) -
  11. 00:38:838 (2,3) - ^^
  12. 00:40:172 (5,1) - This is good place to add dash.
  13. 00:45:505 (2,3) - This is antiflow and then 00:45:838 (3,4) - dash, It's so hard for salad you should change 00:45:505 (2,3) - to flow.
  14. 00:58:837 (5,6) - Maybe this is should reduce this distance.
  15. 01:00:171 (2,3) - ^^

@AFB I can't find issues on this diff except a lot of green lines xD //Very flow platter :3

Xetopia's Rain
  1. 00:05:172 (6,1) - It's not consistency with overdose. You should change this to only circle on (6)
  2. 00:54:088 - Hitsound is werid?
  3. 01:01:838 (6,1,2) - 01:02:338 (2,3,1) - It's not consistency with overdose, Please nerf it.
  4. 01:04:505 (5,6) - I think it's unnecessary to add hdash when compare with overdose.

@Sinnoh Need more star for pp TwT //just kidding it's very good :3

That's all from me! Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

rew0825 wrote:

Hello! as a request :3 //I don't mod v1 for a long time xD

Salad
  1. 00:03:172 (1,2) - The dash on this is look very hard. I suggest to add dash on 00:03:338 (2,3) - instead. - No fix, imo dash isn`t looking very hard
  2. 00:04:838 (2,3) - I not sure on this do you want to have dash or not, if have you should increase distance on this more but if not reduce the distance. (imo i think this shouldn't dash because it has dash on 00:06:005 (7,1) - ) - Maybe you have old version, in my diff all okay
  3. 00:07:838 (4,5) - Look this is so far like dash but it's not, You should reduce distance on this. - Ummm, idk, I stay it without changes
  4. 00:09:505 (2,3) - imo this is should flow but if you want this antiflow please reduce distance between end of slider (2) and (3). - distance is okay
  5. 00:13:838 (1,2) - This is should dash but now distance is look weird, You should increase distance on this more. - Okay
  6. 00:14:838 (3,4,5) - The distance on this is too far, You should move (4) to near (3,5) more. - No
  7. 00:32:172 (2,3,4,5) - I support celerih on this notes the distance is so wide. - Also how with celerih
  8. 00:32:672 (5,1) - On this the distance can increase more for dash surely. - Ok
  9. 00:33:338 (2,3) - I think on this is unnecessary to use dash like before on 00:17:505 (2) - There is no dash
  10. 00:37:505 (5,6) - Same as 00:09:505 (2,3) - 5,6 - no dash. 6,1 - start vocal part, I think dash need 2,3,4 - all no dash jump
  11. 00:38:838 (2,3) - ^^ - ^
  12. 00:40:172 (5,1) - This is good place to add dash. - Added
  13. 00:45:505 (2,3) - This is antiflow and then 00:45:838 (3,4) - dash, It's so hard for salad you should change 00:45:505 (2,3) - to flow. - No fix until BN check, sorry
  14. 00:58:837 (5,6) - Maybe this is should reduce this distance. - No
  15. 01:00:171 (2,3) - ^^ - For then??????

That's all from me! Good luck :) - Thanks a lot
-Hex-
  1. 00:56:005 (3) - I prefer JBH's suggestion :c
  2. 01:13:838 (1,2) - I'm following the vocal here.


Fixed the rest. Thanks!

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256,136,21505,2,0,L|272:80,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
112,152,22172,6,4,B|80:152|80:152|160:152|160:152,1,100,4|4,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,80,22838,2,0,L|304:128,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
144,168,23505,5,0,3:0:0:0:
264,224,23838,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,144,24172,2,0,L|400:88,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
264,160,24838,6,2,L|152:152,1,100,2|2,3:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
304,88,25505,2,0,L|408:88,1,100,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
280,176,26172,2,8,L|248:288,1,100,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
384,216,26838,5,8,3:3:0:0:
440,144,27005,1,8,3:3:0:0:
496,72,27172,1,12,3:3:0:0:
352,112,27505,6,6,L|256:64,1,100,6|6,3:2|1:3,0:0:0:0:
384,208,28172,2,0,L|400:272,1,50,2|2,3:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,28672,2,0,L|168:168,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,104,29338,2,2,P|368:128|440:184,1,150,2|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
288,224,30172,6,2,B|192:224|192:224|304:224|304:224,1,200,6|2,3:2|3:3,0:0:0:0:
408,136,31172,1,2,1:3:0:0:
456,112,31338,2,0,B|528:112|528:112|384:112|384:112,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,192,32338,6,4,L|256:128,2,50,4|6|4,1:3|1:3|1:3,0:0:0:0:
344,256,32838,5,4,3:2:0:0:
224,184,33172,2,8,L|200:120,1,50,12|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
408,112,33838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,34172,5,0,3:3:0:0:
408,80,34505,2,8,L|352:48,1,50,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,176,35172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,104,35505,6,0,L|304:224,1,100,0|8,3:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
184,176,36172,2,0,L|168:248,2,50,8|0|0,3:3|3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,36838,1,0,3:3:0:0:
184,64,37172,6,0,L|120:40,1,50,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,152,37838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,38172,6,4,L|104:128,1,100,4|12,3:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
232,208,38838,2,0,L|264:264,2,50,0|0|0,3:3|3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,39505,5,0,3:3:0:0:
240,224,39838,2,8,L|248:112,1,100,8|0,0:3|3:3,0:0:0:0:
112,104,40505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,40838,6,0,L|344:176,1,100,4|8,3:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
464,104,41505,2,4,L|344:104,1,100,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,200,42172,1,4,3:2:0:0:
376,248,42505,1,4,1:2:0:0:
256,152,42838,6,0,P|224:104|296:56,1,150,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
352,88,43505,6,6,L|352:208,1,100,6|6,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,136,44172,2,0,L|160:136,2,50,6|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
368,80,44838,6,6,L|264:80,1,100,6|6,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,45505,2,0,L|80:144,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,46172,6,6,L|392:192,1,100,6|6,3:2|1:3,0:0:0:0:
272,112,46838,1,2,3:3:0:0:
208,64,47005,1,2,3:0:0:0:
144,32,47172,1,2,1:3:0:0:
272,216,47505,6,2,L|168:216,1,100,2|2,3:3|1:3,0:0:0:0:
288,136,48171,1,2,3:3:0:0:
352,88,48338,1,2,3:0:0:0:
416,56,48505,1,2,1:3:0:0:
248,128,48838,6,4,L|144:128,1,100,4|4,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,72,49505,2,0,L|424:72,1,150
280,144,50338,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,192,50505,2,0,L|336:192,1,100,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,51005,2,0,L|144:120,1,100,0|4,3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
296,264,52838,6,8,P|392:192|280:96,1,300,6|8,3:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,192,54172,2,0,B|56:192|56:192|208:192|208:192,1,250,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
328,232,55338,6,4,B|368:232|368:232|296:232|296:232,1,100,4|4,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
240,88,55838,1,0,1:0:0:0:
160,48,56005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,88,56172,2,0,L|192:96,1,100,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,136,56838,6,4,L|419:129,1,100,4|4,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,224,57505,2,0,L|321:270,1,50,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,58005,6,4,L|92:120,1,100,4|4,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
164,66,58505,1,0,1:0:0:0:
244,111,58672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,120,58838,2,0,L|219:120,1,100,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,168,59505,6,0,P|411:269|304:294,1,250,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
167,224,60672,2,4,L|148:125,1,100,4|4,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
191,48,61172,1,0,1:0:0:0:
319,128,61505,2,0,L|364:150,2,50,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
175,200,62172,6,0,L|162:299,1,100,4|6,3:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
311,200,62838,2,0,L|327:101,1,100,0|6,2:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
208,160,63505,2,0,P|88:200|160:328,1,300,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
288,175,64838,6,0,P|363:92|274:25,1,250,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
143,152,66005,6,4,L|44:145,1,100,4|4,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
119,80,66505,1,0,1:0:0:0:
199,144,66672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,80,66838,2,0,L|168:80,1,100
320,216,67505,6,0,P|375:144|306:86,1,200,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
248,57,68338,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,160,68672,6,0,L|128:272,1,100,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,69172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,69338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,152,69505,2,0,L|248:128,1,100
416,296,70172,6,0,L|435:197,1,100,4|4,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,70838,2,0,L|300:237,1,50,4|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,71338,6,4,L|76:176,1,100,4|4,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
152,96,71838,1,0,1:0:0:0:
232,104,72005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,134,72172,2,0,L|412:133,1,100
252,175,72838,5,4,3:2:0:0:
468,87,73505,1,0,2:0:0:0:
340,183,73838,6,0,L|240:183,2,100,6|0|0,1:2|3:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
460,263,74838,2,0,L|360:263,1,100,0|0,2:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,191,75505,5,6,3:2:0:0:
256,192,75838,12,0,79838,0:0:0:0:
Kurokami
Although I can no longer push maps forward I still can help you to improve it.

[Salad]

00:03:172 (1,2,3) - This kind of pattern, where the players have to suddenly move backwards, after a very weird jump should be avoided. Furthermore, the jump shouldn't be between 1-2 but instead 2-3 because that is where the cymbal is.
00:13:838 (1,2) - Please increase the distance here to create a jump, just to follow your previous patterns.
00:32:172 (2,3,4,5,1) - This kind of pattern is something which requires more experience in jumping than a newer player most certainly has. I would move 3-4-5 more back to left just to lower the movement on that part and make the next jump stand out more.
00:34:838 (6) - Using a long slider here understandable but very bad choice, especially because there is a very strong drum in the middle of it. I would go with something like https://kurokami.s-ul.eu/A2mQzP5H.png instead.
00:37:505 (5,6,1) - I understand the jump between 6-1, that should be fine. My main problem here is the extra movement to right between 5 and 6. Keep in mind that new players are not yet used to different distances and the jump button, you should try to avoid giving them somewhat complicated movements.
00:38:838 (2,3,4) - Same applies to this as before, although a little bit better in this case.
00:45:505 (2,3) -
As a side note, this difficulty would benefit from some density increase. Currently, the gap between Platter and this is huge. Do not be afraid... to use more 1/2 especially not during the kiai.

[Rain]

00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It kinda bugs me that here you used 4 note and 2 sliders with not too much movement while in every other case 00:20:838 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:23:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - the pattern and rhythm is different. I would go with the same kind of patterns at least.
00:52:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Just wow Got me surprised at first. I would try to avoid going back to right with 00:54:172 (1) - but even that seems to be acceptable.
That two weird clap hitsounds at 00:34:005 (7) - 00:39:838 (2) - 00:53:838 (3) - should be changed into something more fitting.
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The rest of the mapset seems to be good enough. Although I did not mod for a while now so might missed some stuff.
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Kurokami wrote:

Although I can no longer push maps forward I still can help you to improve it. - Thank you

[Salad]

00:03:172 (1,2,3) - This kind of pattern, where the players have to suddenly move backwards, after a very weird jump should be avoided. Furthermore, the jump shouldn't be between 1-2 but instead 2-3 because that is where the cymbal is. - Okay
00:13:838 (1,2) - Please increase the distance here to create a jump, just to follow your previous patterns. - I do it earlier
00:32:172 (2,3,4,5,1) - This kind of pattern is something which requires more experience in jumping than a newer player most certainly has. I would move 3-4-5 more back to left just to lower the movement on that part and make the next jump stand out more. - Okay okay
00:34:838 (6) - Using a long slider here understandable but very bad choice, especially because there is a very strong drum in the middle of it. I would go with something like https://kurokami.s-ul.eu/A2mQzP5H.png instead. - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. Idk how remap this pattern, but I`m try
00:37:505 (5,6,1) - I understand the jump between 6-1, that should be fine. My main problem here is the extra movement to right between 5 and 6. Keep in mind that new players are not yet used to different distances and the jump button, you should try to avoid giving them somewhat complicated movements. - Ok
00:38:838 (2,3,4) - Same applies to this as before, although a little bit better in this case. - ^
00:45:505 (2,3) - - ^
As a side note, this difficulty would benefit from some density increase. Currently, the gap between Platter and this is huge. Do not be afraid... to use more 1/2 especially not during the kiai.

The rest of the mapset seems to be good enough. Although I did not mod for a while now so might missed some stuff.
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