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Aya Uchida - afraid... [CatchTheBeat]

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Memoriola
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liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders) // Fair enough, changed to 4 circles.
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead // I'm following drum sounds on that timeline. I keep this
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here // Same as above
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here // Same as above
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1) // Added
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4) // Remapped a bit
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here // Ok
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup // I think that's okay as the length of spinner fits with the music.
Thanks for the Mod !

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Imai Lisa
RU
141 posts
Joined June 2015
Imai Lisa

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3 - i don't thinl so
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar - ok
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed - ok
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose - made a little easier imo
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them - end of the slider emphasizes vocal
Thanks for the mod ;3
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gaaraati
HU
58 posts
Joined September 2013
gaaraati

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

General

I see that this mapset is made by all different mappers, so it's natural to see different mapping styles. However, some mapset settings and mapset overall difficulties should be consistent with each other (for example I see at least 3 different kiai settings through the whole map), and such things should be under controll by a same person (which is usually the mapset creator). So please have a look through all maps and check those things

Alright. Here's the real mods:

00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders)
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1)
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4)
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup
This difficulty is pretty well-made and I can't see much things to mod ^_^. A big problem, though, is that some combos has too many fruits. The ranking criteria says "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats", so you have to recheck all the maps to make this rule is not violated.
One possible mod: 00:42:005 (1) - The fruit on the blue tick is actually useless, so you may consider cancelling it. However, this is actually not a big deal

gaaraati's Platter

This part is written to all mappers because I want you to have a discussion about it. Compared to other difficulties,

Cup: CS=2.5, AR=6
Salad: CS=3, AR=7
Platter: CS=4, AR=8.5
Rain: CS=4, AR=9
Overdose: CS=4.5, AR=9.4

We can see there is a big gap between Salad and Platter. Therefore, although Platter's settings are still in rankable range, I still really suggest you should decrease the difficulties of Platter, especially its CS

00:20:505 (6) - This requires quite a precise movement to catch the fruit and make the hyperdash, so maybe you should ctrl+g to decrease its difficulty
00:29:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The consecutive jumps might be too hard for platter to read. You may consider to change them
00:46:005 (7,8,1) - This is an anti-flow after hyperdash. Please change it
00:57:505 (3,4,5) - ^
All streams after 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4) - All Hyperdashes Are Done Within 1/4 Beats! This violates the ranking criteria, and do you really think a platter player can manage them all?
00:59:838 (2,3) - Anti-flow after hyperdash
01:08:672 (1,2,3) - ^
00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them
This difficulty is also well-made, so I just give some personal advices
00:27:339 (5,1) - Maybe arrange a hyperdash here?
00:28:672 (6,7,1) - I think 6&7 should be a hyperdash instead of 7&1
01:09:838 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash here

This song is very cool and it's very interesting to see different mapping styles in this set. Hope these mods could be helpful!

P.S. I'll mod your other map within days. So please wait for it and you can mod my map first
Okay, I've changed the CS and some of the patterns due to the CS change. Thanks for the help.
Imai Lisa
RU
141 posts
Joined June 2015
Imai Lisa
Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
Чего-то особенного я не выискивал и все это лежит на поверхности

  • Salad
    00:03:172 (1,2,3) - думаю так будет лучше: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8899771
    00:05:505 (1,2,3,4,1) - подчеркни большим спейсингом 00:06:172 (1) -
    00:10:838 (3,4,5,1,2) - слишком большое расстояние между 1 и 2
    00:18:838 (4,5) - зачем ты выделяешь 5, если в другом таком же моменте (00:21:505 (1,2,3) - ) эта нота у тебя не подчеркнута? Выбери что-то одно. И да, если вдруг выберешь вариант с подчеркиваем последней ноты, то сделай спейсинг поменьше, а то это реально неудобно играть.
    00:33:505 (5,1,2,3,4) - сложно для newbie players
    00:43:338 (4,5) - нк на 5 и подчеркни ее
    00:54:005 (8,9) - ^
    00:55:338 (4,5) - сделай меньше расстояние между ними
    00:58:838 (3,4) - Я бы вообще это переделал, но ты можешь убрать один реверс и поставить ноту в это место(ну и офк выделить ее спейсингом)
    01:04:172 (2,3) - ^
    01:09:505 (1,2) - ^
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Shirokane Rinko
RU
140 posts
Joined December 2016
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko
[quote="Shanofanboy"]Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
Чего-то особенного я не выискивал и все это лежит на поверхности

  • Salad
    00:03:172 (1,2,3) - думаю так будет лучше: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8899771
    00:05:505 (1,2,3,4,1) - подчеркни большим спейсингом 00:06:172 (1) -
    00:10:838 (3,4,5,1,2) - слишком большое расстояние между 1 и 2
    00:18:838 (4,5) - зачем ты выделяешь 5, если в другом таком же моменте (00:21:505 (1,2,3) - ) эта нота у тебя не подчеркнута? Выбери что-то одно. И да, если вдруг выберешь вариант с подчеркиваем последней ноты, то сделай спейсинг поменьше, а то это реально неудобно играть.
    00:33:505 (5,1,2,3,4) - сложно для newbie players
    00:43:338 (4,5) - нк на 5 и подчеркни ее
    00:54:005 (8,9) - ^
    00:55:338 (4,5) - сделай меньше расстояние между ними
    00:58:838 (3,4) - Я бы вообще это переделал, но ты можешь убрать один реверс и поставить ноту в это место(ну и офк выделить ее спейсингом)
    01:04:172 (2,3) - ^
    01:09:505 (1,2) - ^

Исправил все, последние пункты с ремапом - ремапнул, спасибо.
Imai Lisa
RU
141 posts
Joined June 2015
Imai Lisa
>Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
>Earned 2 kudosu.
:оk_hand:
Shirokane Rinko
RU
140 posts
Joined December 2016
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Shanofanboy wrote:

>Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
>Earned 2 kudosu.
:оk_hand:
Найс распределение кудосу. :D
gaaraati
HU
58 posts
Joined September 2013
gaaraati
I fixed all of the spacing emphasis problems on my map. All spacings now should be correct according to music and platter "learning" difficulty standards.
I still want this one not to be a simple GGEZ dt farm map. So I stick to my mapping style and my variety of patterns
SangKrazF1nal3
MY
178 posts
Joined May 2016
SangKrazF1nal3

gaaraati wrote:

I fixed all of the spacing emphasis problems on my map. All spacings now should be correct according to music and platter "learning" difficulty standards.
I still want this one not to be a simple GGEZ dt farm map. So I stick to my mapping style and my variety of patterns
Regardless of the variety,I prefer you reconsidering it tho.
I still think it is lack of stability when in gameplay,try to used simple pattern slightly like simple 1/2 slider / 1/4 slider-kicks. This is just my suggestions.
:(

Other diffs,I might thought the Cup n Salad are safe for me :) at least. Just don't think the Platter feel good and need some polished hope that you understand what is the main point,the rhythming :)

I still think it was undermapped some parts. So,if the owner still want to make this map better. Just summon me when it is needed.
:idea:
No kudosu for this since I just giving some inspirations,when I fully mod only then you may. Thank you...
Imai Lisa
RU
141 posts
Joined June 2015
Imai Lisa
Аква живи
-Ken
TN
162 posts
Joined May 2014
-Ken
no kudosu
13:21 *Shirokane Rinko is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1289137 Aya Uchida - afraid...]
13:21 Shirokane Rinko: salad
13:23 Shirokane Rinko: thanks a lot
13:23 -Ken: well the diff looks pretty fine
13:23 -Ken: I'll try tho
13:24 Shirokane Rinko: thank you
13:24 -Ken: 00:13:505 (5) - I guess x:200 looks a bit better here
13:25 Shirokane Rinko: done
13:26 -Ken: 00:16:672 (8,1) - 
13:26 -Ken: what about you increase distance a bit here
13:26 -Ken: it's platewalkable
13:28 Shirokane Rinko: x:250 better?
13:28 Shirokane Rinko: or increase more?
13:29 -Ken: maybe more
13:29 -Ken: like x:258
13:30 -Ken: up to you
13:30 -Ken: I'm bad at modding salad w
13:30 Shirokane Rinko: yep, 258 better
13:30 Shirokane Rinko: no problem
13:30 Shirokane Rinko: anyway you helped me
13:31 -Ken: 00:43:338 (5,1) - 
13:31 -Ken: these looks close
13:31 -Ken: and the sound is kinda strong
13:31 Shirokane Rinko: This map old and have only mod v1 system, not all modders will want modding on v1
13:32 -Ken: oh I see
13:32 -Ken: maybe equal distance to this one 00:48:672 (7,1) - 
13:33 Shirokane Rinko: 00:43:338 (5,1) - fixed
13:33 -Ken: okay
13:33 -Ken: I guess that's all I have to say
13:33 -Ken: looks fine to me xd
13:34 Shirokane Rinko: 00:48:672 (7,1) - hmmm, I can doing it closer to 7
13:34 -Ken: just a little bit if you want to
13:35 -Ken: 00:54:171 (9) - 
13:35 -Ken: NC here
13:35 -Ken: and remove it here 00:54:838 (1) -  ?
13:35 Shirokane Rinko: thanks
13:35 Shirokane Rinko: fixed
13:35 -Ken: np
13:36 Shirokane Rinko: 00:48:672 (7,1) - 1 - x:325
13:36 -Ken: yea that's good
13:36 Shirokane Rinko: better?
13:36 -Ken: yes
13:36 Shirokane Rinko: okay, nice
alienflybot
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alienflybot
Requested to give some comments on Salad.

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[Salad]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:00:839 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try to include some patterns that don't require much back-and-forth movements, such as vertical sliders and curve paths.
  2. 00:02:505 (5,1) - Ambiguous distance. If this is intended to be a dash, try to increase it and test to see if you will dash at this point intuitively.
  3. 00:04:838 (2,3,4) - This part can be hard to beginners as both (2,3) and (3,4) are ambiguous. Try to move (3) closer to (2) to fix this.
  4. 00:11:172 (1,2) - Add a dash here?
  5. 00:16:672 (8,1) - ^, by increasing the distance slightly.
  6. 00:21:505 (4,1) - ^
  7. 00:26:838 (6,1) - ^, please plan the parts that you want to add dash at, next time when you map.
  8. 00:32:172 (2,3,4,5,1) - Ambiguous distances at (4,5,1). Perhaps reduce the distance of (4,5) while increase the one at (5,1), to ensure everyone will tap their dashes at (5,1).
  9. 00:33:338 (2,3) - Here there is a dash, but 00:36:338 (2,3) - , 00:38:838 (2) - and 00:41:671 (5,6) - do not. This means there is a little flaw in consistency. Maybe remove the potential dash at 00:33:338 (2,3) - for consistency sake.
  10. 00:52:838 (1,2) - Strange to have a dash here, maybe follow a simpler rhythm for 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? You may try something like 4-4 (where hyphen means the dash position and 4s are streams with 4 circles).
  11. 00:54:171 - Consider starting the Kiai here instead of 00:52:838 - .
  12. 00:54:171 - 01:15:504 - Sliders like 00:54:838 (2) - can be slanted slightly, because their inner distances are quite large during gameplay.

    In general, there are notes that should be emphasized by adding dash to them, but they aren't; while some parts are added with dashes but the notes are not strong enough. It may be better if you choose to remake another version of Salad and plan ahead before start mapping the parts. (My usual practice is to treat every stanza as a checkpoint, and do some testplay to locate potential issues)

Good luck!
Shirokane Rinko
RU
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Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

alienflybot wrote:

Requested to give some comments on Salad.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable
[Salad]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:00:839 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try to include some patterns that don't require much back-and-forth movements, such as vertical sliders and curve paths. - a bit reworked
  2. 00:02:505 (5,1) - Ambiguous distance. If this is intended to be a dash, try to increase it and test to see if you will dash at this point intuitively. - changed earlier (^)
  3. 00:04:838 (2,3,4) - This part can be hard to beginners as both (2,3) and (3,4) are ambiguous. Try to move (3) closer to (2) to fix this. - I think here all okey. not high spaceing
  4. 00:11:172 (1,2) - Add a dash here? - added
  5. 00:16:672 (8,1) - ^, by increasing the distance slightly. - increased
  6. 00:21:505 (4,1) - ^ - ^
  7. 00:26:838 (6,1) - ^, please plan the parts that you want to add dash at, next time when you map. - added
  8. 00:32:172 (2,3,4,5,1) - Ambiguous distances at (4,5,1). Perhaps reduce the distance of (4,5) while increase the one at (5,1), to ensure everyone will tap their dashes at (5,1). - okay, changed
  9. 00:33:338 (2,3) - Here there is a dash, but 00:36:338 (2,3) - , 00:38:838 (2) - and 00:41:671 (5,6) - do not. This means there is a little flaw in consistency. Maybe remove the potential dash at 00:33:338 (2,3) - for consistency sake. - removed
  10. 00:52:838 (1,2) - Strange to have a dash here, maybe follow a simpler rhythm for 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? You may try something like 4-4 (where hyphen means the dash position and 4s are streams with 4 circles). - a bit changed
  11. 00:54:171 - Consider starting the Kiai here instead of 00:52:838 - . - I think it better, changed on other diff too
  12. 00:54:171 - 01:15:504 - Sliders like 00:54:838 (2) - can be slanted slightly, because their inner distances are quite large during gameplay. - I think here all normal

    In general, there are notes that should be emphasized by adding dash to them, but they aren't; while some parts are added with dashes but the notes are not strong enough. It may be better if you choose to remake another version of Salad and plan ahead before start mapping the parts. (My usual practice is to treat every stanza as a checkpoint, and do some testplay to locate potential issues)

Good luck!
Thanks for mod, I will rewatch my diff to find some problems with dash
Rgamer065
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I LOVE THIIIIS!!!
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JBHyperion
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JBHyperion
Oh boy I haven't seen modding v1 in a while...

General:
  1. 00:16:838 - 00:27:505 - hitsound volume here should really be quieter than the sections before and after, since the music is much calmer. For example, 00:32:838 - is a similar section but it has half the hitsound volume and sounds much more fitting. I think 25-30% volume in both works fine


Hex's Cup:
  1. 00:42:838 (3) - Incorrectly snapped to 3/4, the drums follow a 1/4 rhythm but the strong beats are all on 1/2. Either make this a 1/1 slider or a 1/2 repeat slider
  2. 00:50:838 (3) - Makes sense to split this into 1/1 slider and circle to emphasize the strong red tick vocal, like you did with 00:50:172 (1,2) -
  3. 00:56:005 (2,3) - Strange rhythm choice since you skip the strong white tick vocal, I'd put the circle at 00:55:838 - and then move the slider forward to 00:56:172 - to better reflect that
  4. 00:58:672 (3) - Same deal here, the strong white tick vocal is in the sliderbody so doesn't get emphasized at all. Try replacing this with a circle and 1/1 slider. It's a bit more dense but since this is the kiai you can afford to do something a bit harder imo
  5. 01:03:505 - I get what you were trying to do here but skipping this circle throws the player off the previous 1/1 rhythm, and when you combine that with the low spacing it's a very awkward stop and wait. I'd add a circle here for the drum and increase the distance slightly


Salad:
  1. 00:06:004 (7,1) - It'd be nice if your first dash wasn't a sharp 1/2 one into a direction change, this is quite a harsh introduction for the player. Could you try making the slider (1) face right, or remove (7) to make an easier 1/1 dash instead please?
  2. 00:26:838 (6,1) - Should have a dash for consistency with your previous patterns, as well as to emphasize the strong cymbal sound
  3. 00:30:838 (2,3,4,1,2) - Much less movement in this part than anywhere else even though it's quite intense, perhaps you could try introducing a direction change, like this?
  4. 00:43:338 (5,1) - 00:54:003 (8,1) - Should also be a dash for consistency and emphasis on the strong cymbal sound, the latter especially so since it's the start of the kiai
  5. I would have liked to see more dashing in the kiai to set it apart from the rest of the map. Right now it feels very similar to the earlier parts despite being much more intense musically. You could try adding more dashes to strong vocal sounds like 00:56:171 (5,1) - 01:01:504 (5,1,2) - 01:06:837 (5,1) - 01:10:004 (4,1) - 01:12:171 (6,1,2) - and 01:15:337 (5,6) -


AFB's Platter:
  1. 00:01:172 (2) - I find the drum whistle volume here and throughout this section overbearing, it totally drowns out the actual sounds you're mapping. The 30% used in the previous diffs is far more suitable given the calmness of the intro section
  2. 00:09:346 - 00:10:505 - Missing claps on slidertails
  3. 00:10:755 (2,3) - Feels a bit too close together for good flow, I'd try and raise this distance a little
  4. 00:22:172 (1) - 70% finish volume is way too loud here given this isn't that mush stronger than the sounds around it, please reduce it to around 50% to be more in touch with the rest of your hitsounding. Happens throughout the diff in later pre-kiai sections, so please address this there as well
  5. 00:30:172 (1,2) - Awkwardly low spacing forces the player to stop, would be better as a held walk distance for playability
  6. 00:59:338 (5,1) - Very harsh to have strong hyper into a vertical pattern, especially when this strength is not expectable to the player. Either reduce the strength, curve the slider for more leniency, or both.
  7. 01:02:172 (1,2,3,4) - Was really surprised to see such a low-distance pattern here given how strong the vocals are, would definitely have preferred a dash between (2,3) for example, since this also avoids an awkwadly low spacing to 01:03:005 (4,1) -


Xetopia's Rain:
  1. 00:06:087 (4,1) - Quite a strong hyper into standstill, unexpected for the start of the map. I'd reduce this strength and/or curve the slider for better flow
  2. 00:01:838 (1,2) - 00:26:172 (1) - No sound on the blue ticks to justify these slider extensions, but you skipped over clear red tick sounds to do so. These should be snapped to end at 1/2 to better follow the music
  3. 00:26:505 (2,3,4,5) - Feels kinda underwhelming as a walk, and the first strong sound is a slider tail. Might just be personal preference, but some small jumps and/or direction changes here would make this much more interesting to play
  4. 00:51:172 (5,1) - Really bland to have no emphasis on this, it's the climax before a dramatic pause and then the kiai. Move (1) to the left side and give it a hyperdash for more impact
  5. 00:52:921 (2) - Mapped to no sound, please remove this for consistency with the Platter and Overdose
  6. 00:53:338 (6,1) - Uncomfortably strong hyper when compared to the surrounding ones when (a) this sound is no stronger musically, and (b) the stream following has very little movement and is easy to overshoot. Please consider reducing the distance here. If you do so, you may also want to reduce 00:54:005 (6,1) - slightly also for consistency, since that dashes into a strong antiflow movement
  7. 00:53:838 (5,6) - Check your hitsounding here, there's some really strange blue tick emphasis that totally throws the player off when trying to follow the main drum rhythm


Sinnoh's Overdose:
  1. 00:11:172 (4,5,6,7) - I don't hear any 1/4 rhythms here, removing (5,7) and sticking to 1/2 would be a more fitting option
  2. 00:53:338 (4,8) - These two are lower in pitch drum sounds compared to the others which are strong snares, it'd be nice to do something different with them for variety, such as making a horizontal movement, using antiflow, etc. Right now this just feels like a really plain and uninspired way to start the kiai
  3. 01:12:838 (1,2,3,4) - Personal preference but I'd have tried to do something more interesting here by incorporating the vocals to maybe do 1/2 zig-zags
  4. 01:15:505 (10) - NC would help clear the plate in preparation for the final spinner


Hope this helps, good luck! (:
Shirokane Rinko
RU
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Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

JBHyperion wrote:

Oh boy I haven't seen modding v1 in a while...

Gonna post as I go, please don't kudosu til I'm done /o/


Salad:
  1. 00:06:004 (7,1) - It'd be nice if your first dash wasn't a sharp 1/2 one into a direction change, this is quite a harsh introduction for the player. Could you try making the slider (1) face right, or remove (7) to make an easier 1/1 dash instead please? - Fixed a bit
  2. 00:26:838 (6,1) - Should have a dash for consistency with your previous patterns, as well as to emphasize the strong cymbal sound - Okay
  3. 00:30:838 (2,3,4,1,2) - Much less movement in this part than anywhere else even though it's quite intense, perhaps you could try introducing a direction change, like this? - Added some other changes (idk what you mean on this picture)
  4. 00:43:338 (5,1) - 00:54:003 (8,1) - Should also be a dash for consistency and emphasis on the strong cymbal sound, the latter especially so since it's the start of the kiai - fixed
  5. I would have liked to see more dashing in the kiai to set it apart from the rest of the map. Right now it feels very similar to the earlier parts despite being much more intense musically. You could try adding more dashes to strong vocal sounds like 00:56:171 (5,1) - 01:01:504 (5,1,2) - 01:06:837 (5,1) - 01:10:004 (4,1) - 01:12:171 (6,1,2) - and 01:15:337 (5,6) - fixed
Ponchiwi
MX
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Ponchiwi
[Hex's Cup ]
  1. 00:03:505 (1) - move it a little further x=352
  2. 00:04:505 (2,3,4) - I dont like too much these notes, why you dont try this


[Salad ]
  1. 00:06:172 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - you should change the position of the dash in this section 'cause alwas you are taking the dash on the right
  2. 00:27:505 (1) - why not add dash here? aaa
  3. 00:43:505 (1) - would be nice if you add a dash
  4. 00:54:172 (1) - add more emphasis for the beginning of the kiai time so move to x=216


[AFB's Platter ]
  1. Looks so nice


[Xetopia's Rain ]
  1. 00:54:172 (1) - you could do it better and change this slider repeat for put sliders to make more intense this section
  2. 00:59:505 (1) - 01:04:838 (1) - same here
Shirokane Rinko
RU
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Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Ponchiwi wrote:

[Salad ]
  1. 00:06:172 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - you should change the position of the dash in this section 'cause alwas you are taking the dash on the right - wut? I think here all good
  2. 00:27:505 (1) - why not add dash here? aaa - added on previous mod
  3. 00:43:505 (1) - would be nice if you add a dash - ^
  4. 00:54:172 (1) - add more emphasis for the beginning of the kiai time so move to x=216 - pattern was reworked by previous mod
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