Hi Tofu!
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Here I'm nitpicky, but you could cut out silence at the end of keysound files because some of them has a bit of it
Here I'm nitpicky, but you could cut out silence at the end of keysound files because some of them has a bit of it
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I'll suggest what to change to have better spread between diffs
00:25:223 - you could add note here
00:27:366 - you could add 1/1 ln here and 00:27:672 (27672|1) - change this to 1/1 ln
00:29:662 (29662|1) - add note here, the same sound as 00:29:509 (29509|3) -
00:32:876 (32876|2) - change this to 1/1 ln and add 00:33:335 - 1/1 ln here and 00:33:795 (33795|0) - tldr just add lns in places where you can hear piano or whatever it is
00:34:713 - as in 00:27
apply the same things later in this part, I'm too lazy to note everything :3
00:50:937 (50937|3) - missing note I guess (also 00:53:386 (53386|0) - 00:55:835 (55835|1) -
01:26:448 (86448|2,86754|2,87060|2) - this stack is meh
01:28:897 (88897|2,89203|2,89509|2) - this as well
flow is sometimes too onesided, you should vary it more
examples: 01:15:886 (75886|1,76040|0,76193|2,76346|1,76499|3,76652|2,76805|1,76958|0,76958|3,77111|2,77264|1,77417|0,77570|3,77723|2,77876|1) - 01:25:835 (85835|1,85988|2,86142|0,86295|1,86448|2,86601|3,86754|0,86754|2,86907|1,87060|2,87213|3,87366|1,87519|2) - 01:33:182 (93182|2,93335|0,93642|3,93795|1,94101|2,94254|0,94560|3,94713|1) - etc etc
00:25:223 - you could add note here
00:27:366 - you could add 1/1 ln here and 00:27:672 (27672|1) - change this to 1/1 ln
00:29:662 (29662|1) - add note here, the same sound as 00:29:509 (29509|3) -
00:32:876 (32876|2) - change this to 1/1 ln and add 00:33:335 - 1/1 ln here and 00:33:795 (33795|0) - tldr just add lns in places where you can hear piano or whatever it is
00:34:713 - as in 00:27
apply the same things later in this part, I'm too lazy to note everything :3
00:50:937 (50937|3) - missing note I guess (also 00:53:386 (53386|0) - 00:55:835 (55835|1) -
01:26:448 (86448|2,86754|2,87060|2) - this stack is meh
01:28:897 (88897|2,89203|2,89509|2) - this as well
flow is sometimes too onesided, you should vary it more
examples: 01:15:886 (75886|1,76040|0,76193|2,76346|1,76499|3,76652|2,76805|1,76958|0,76958|3,77111|2,77264|1,77417|0,77570|3,77723|2,77876|1) - 01:25:835 (85835|1,85988|2,86142|0,86295|1,86448|2,86601|3,86754|0,86754|2,86907|1,87060|2,87213|3,87366|1,87519|2) - 01:33:182 (93182|2,93335|0,93642|3,93795|1,94101|2,94254|0,94560|3,94713|1) - etc etc
Hyoer
00:22:468 (22468|3) - delete this I think, no sound you followed
00:24:917 (24917|1) - 00:26:142 (26142|1) -
00:34:483 (34483|1,34560|2) - you could ctrl+h this, there's too much pressure on left hand
00:34:943 (34943|0,35019|1,35172|0,35249|1) - ctrl+j this and 00:35:325 (35325|0) - move to 2 to make it more pitch correct and because of this 00:34:407 (34407|0,34483|1,34560|2,34713|0,34790|1,34866|2,34943|0,35019|1,35096|2,35172|0,35249|1) -
00:36:091 (36091|2) - move to 4 pls, stack on 3 hurts me
00:43:591 (43591|1,43744|1,43897|1) - this hurts my soul, please change this
00:52:009 (52009|1,52315|1,52621|1,52927|1,53233|1) - this anchor also hurts
01:15:810 (75810|2,75963|2,76116|2) - you can avoid it easily
you could vary kiai more tbh
01:25:606 (85606|1,85759|1,85912|1) - another stack
00:24:917 (24917|1) - 00:26:142 (26142|1) -
00:34:483 (34483|1,34560|2) - you could ctrl+h this, there's too much pressure on left hand
00:34:943 (34943|0,35019|1,35172|0,35249|1) - ctrl+j this and 00:35:325 (35325|0) - move to 2 to make it more pitch correct and because of this 00:34:407 (34407|0,34483|1,34560|2,34713|0,34790|1,34866|2,34943|0,35019|1,35096|2,35172|0,35249|1) -
00:36:091 (36091|2) - move to 4 pls, stack on 3 hurts me
00:43:591 (43591|1,43744|1,43897|1) - this hurts my soul, please change this
00:52:009 (52009|1,52315|1,52621|1,52927|1,53233|1) - this anchor also hurts
01:15:810 (75810|2,75963|2,76116|2) - you can avoid it easily
you could vary kiai more tbh
01:25:606 (85606|1,85759|1,85912|1) - another stack
Another
gl00:31:805 (31805|1,31958|2,32111|2) - ctrl+h to vary the part and get rid of 00:31:040 (31040|0,31193|1,31346|0,31499|1,31652|0,31805|1,31958|0) -
00:36:703 (36703|1,36856|1,37009|1) - eww, you could avoid this by moving 00:37:009 (37009|1) - to 1
00:37:315 (37315|1,37468|1,37621|1,37774|1) - ewww x2, please change this
00:39:841 (39841|1,39917|0,39994|1) - ctrl+h this to make it flow better
00:47:111 (47111|0,47264|0,47417|0,47570|0) - delet this
00:49:203 (49203|1,49254|3) - ctrl+h this and 00:49:636 (49636|1,49713|0) - ctrl+j this
00:58:386 (58386|2,58488|1) - these should be doubles
01:37:468 (97468|1,97621|1,97774|1,97927|1) - delet this x2
01:44:203 (104203|1,104356|1,104509|1,104662|1,104815|1,104968|1) - p l s c h a n g e t h i s
01:47:264 (107264|1,107417|1,107570|1,107723|1) - delet this x3
01:47:570 - 01:49:866 - vary this part more please, pitch is getting higher so the patterns could change
look for some one sided flow and try to vary it
00:36:703 (36703|1,36856|1,37009|1) - eww, you could avoid this by moving 00:37:009 (37009|1) - to 1
00:37:315 (37315|1,37468|1,37621|1,37774|1) - ewww x2, please change this
00:39:841 (39841|1,39917|0,39994|1) - ctrl+h this to make it flow better
00:47:111 (47111|0,47264|0,47417|0,47570|0) - delet this
00:49:203 (49203|1,49254|3) - ctrl+h this and 00:49:636 (49636|1,49713|0) - ctrl+j this
00:58:386 (58386|2,58488|1) - these should be doubles
01:37:468 (97468|1,97621|1,97774|1,97927|1) - delet this x2
01:44:203 (104203|1,104356|1,104509|1,104662|1,104815|1,104968|1) - p l s c h a n g e t h i s
01:47:264 (107264|1,107417|1,107570|1,107723|1) - delet this x3
01:47:570 - 01:49:866 - vary this part more please, pitch is getting higher so the patterns could change
look for some one sided flow and try to vary it