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haha5957
[General]
죄송합니다 제가보기엔 거의 문제가 되도않는 이상한데서 막 ㅠㅠ..
좋네용 @@@


[impossiblexu's Easy]
00:22:550 (2,3,4) - slider overlaps life gague.
I don't overlapping itself really matters but considering this is easy... kinda confusing i guess.

[Normal]
00:01:072 (1) - 첫 드럼사운드에 맞추신건 알겠는데 왠지 부자연스러운 느낌이에요.. 뒷부분이 가사를 따르고 있는것 같은데..

[Suzully's Hard]
00:50:163 (3) - 1 grid right seems better for me (does not really matter)
02:55:959 (5) -
02:58:686 (5) - (just suggestion) 2 sliders or 1 repeating slider + circle sounds better for me

[Lunatic]
다른 모딩에 보면 00:05:163 (5,1) - 이런거 완벽히 겹쳤으면 좋겠다고 늘 들어오던데...
(Ctrl+r/DS*0/Grid snap off) 라고 설명까지 친절하게 덧붙여주더군요 ㅠㅠ
상관있는지는 모르겠네요 -_-;

01:09:595 (1,2,3) - (2)의 위치를 적ㄱ절하게 조절해서 점프거리가 일정했으면 좋겠어요

01:11:640 (3,4,5,6,7) - 별모양이 살짝 이상하네용!

EDIT : 위에 제네럴에서 문제가 거의 없다고 썼어야됐는데 오타네요 으앙ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 무튼 쿠도스를 받았으니 별을 쏩니다!
Topic Starter
C R E A M
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haha5957 wrote:

[General]
죄송합니다 제가보기엔 거의 문제가 되도않는 이상한데서 막 ㅠㅠ..
좋네용 @@@


[impossiblexu's Easy]
00:22:550 (2,3,4) - slider overlaps life gague.
I don't overlapping itself really matters but considering this is easy... kinda confusing i guess.

[Normal]
00:01:072 (1) - 첫 드럼사운드에 맞추신건 알겠는데 왠지 부자연스러운 느낌이에요.. 뒷부분이 가사를 따르고 있는것 같은데.. //낮은 난이도에서 약간의 부자연스러움은 어쩔 수 없는것이죠. 1/2반복슬라이더 처리를 하려다가 반복이 많아지면 초보자들이 힘들어해서 그만뒀습니다. 어차피 노말 하는 유저들 원줄어드는거 보고 치지 음악듣고 안해요.

[Suzully's Hard]
00:50:163 (3) - 1 grid right seems better for me (does not really matter)
02:55:959 (5) -
02:58:686 (5) - (just suggestion) 2 sliders or 1 repeating slider + circle sounds better for me

[Lunatic]
다른 모딩에 보면 00:05:163 (5,1) - 이런거 완벽히 겹쳤으면 좋겠다고 늘 들어오던데...
(Ctrl+r/DS*0/Grid snap off) 라고 설명까지 친절하게 덧붙여주더군요 ㅠㅠ
상관있는지는 모르겠네요 -_-; // 그리드 끄고 디스탠스스냅 0으로 놓고 겹치라고 모딩 들어오는 경우는 같은 자리에서 겹놋이 나오는 경우에요. 그런경우에는 정확하게 안겹치면 이상하기 때문에 겹치라고 모딩이 들어오는 것이구요. 제 경우는 슬라이더의 끝부분과 노트이기 때문에 딱히 중요하지는 않아요. 그래도 완전히 겹쳐놨습니다. 그게 보기 좋은것 같아서.

01:09:595 (1,2,3) - (2)의 위치를 적ㄱ절하게 조절해서 점프거리가 일정했으면 좋겠어요 // 대칭 맞췄으니 일정할 필요 없습니다. 플레이에 전혀 지장 없더군요.

01:11:640 (3,4,5,6,7) - 별모양이 살짝 이상하네용! // 수정완료

EDIT : 위에 제네럴에서 문제가 거의 없다고 썼어야됐는데 오타네요 으앙ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 무튼 쿠도스를 받았으니 별을 쏩니다!

모딩과 쿠돗별 감사합니다.
Changed kiai time in Normal and Lunatic diff by HellDawn's modding. Thank you for mod and kudosu star.
Waiting for Suzully and impossiblexu's responses for haha5957's modding.

Edit: Thx for kudosu star Dolljoints. I didin't notice you cause you posted nothing on this thread. Sorry for my carelessness.
Phish_old
hi, you requested a mod in our modding queue :3

Suzullys Diff is not in the .osz !!
I think everything else is okay in the Folder...
Custom Hitwistle sounds more like a big Drum ^^ funny
btw, you know how to make the "delicious" Sliders :D

Mapset is rly awesome, found not that much...

[impossiblexu's Easy]
01:36:868 (1) - delete NC
02:53:231 (2) - do it perfectly D:

[Normal]
01:01:925 (3,4,5) - Hard to read for Normal Diff...
01:11:981 (1) - delete Whistle on the end of this slider?
02:48:800 (?) - Add Circle or Slider? (I know you are not following the vocals at this part, anyways...)
03:01:243 (4) - Add Whistle (or should i say drum lol)

[Lunatic]
Partly there are short Combos for a Lunatic Diff...
And i suggest Circle Size 3!
00:45:390 (2) - Reverse Selection
02:11:129 (4,1) - Definitely not readable spacing on first play :/

I will mod Suzullys Diff when i can download it D: (well, i think i wouldn't find something, Suzully is too awesome...)

Really nice Map :3
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

Phish wrote:

hi, you requested a mod in our modding queue :3

Suzullys Diff is not in the .osz !!
I think everything else is okay in the Folder...
Custom Hitwistle sounds more like a big Drum ^^ funny
btw, you know how to make the "delicious" Sliders :D

Mapset is rly awesome, found not that much...

[impossiblexu's Easy]
01:36:868 (1) - delete NC
02:53:231 (2) - do it perfectly D:

[Normal]
01:01:925 (3,4,5) - Hard to read for Normal Diff... // Yes bit hard actually. But I perfectly keep spacing so it will be a little practice for newbie players.
01:11:981 (1) - delete Whistle on the end of this slider? // fixed.
02:48:800 (?) - Add Circle or Slider? (I know you are not following the vocals at this part, anyways...) // I'm following piano sound at this part so won't fix.
03:01:243 (4) - Add Whistle (or should i say drum lol) // I can't hear any drum sound at this slider. Actually there is a drum sound on the white tick but the white tick is in the slider :D Since I'm following vocal at this part I can't add whistle(or drum lol).

[Lunatic]
Partly there are short Combos for a Lunatic Diff...
And i suggest Circle Size 3! // I would seriously consider this. I love big circle size :D However, there are many modders and MAT,BATs who don't like Circle Size 3 on Insane diff so hmm.... D:
00:45:390 (2) - Reverse Selection // won't fix. Sorry.
02:11:129 (4,1) - Definitely not readable spacing on first play :/ // I've let many test players to play my diff and no one get confused on that part. Nothing problem.

I will mod Suzullys Diff when i can download it D: (well, i think i wouldn't find something, Suzully is too awesome...)

Really nice Map :3

Thank you for mod. I don't know why Suzully's diff won't uploaded...... so I did full submit this map twice and finally Suzully's diff is downloadable now. >w<
Waiting for impossiblexu's response.
Dotsu

haha5957 wrote:

[impossiblexu's Easy]
00:22:550 (2,3,4) - slider overlaps life gague. Fixed
I don't overlapping itself really matters but considering this is easy... kinda confusing i guess.

Phish wrote:

[impossiblexu's Easy]
01:36:868 (1) - delete NC
02:53:231 (2) - do it perfectly D: Fixed
Thank you very much :D
Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [impossiblexu's Easy].osu
Suzully

haha5957 wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]
00:50:163 (3) - 1 grid right seems better for me (does not really matter) Moved it up by 1 grid.
02:55:959 (5) - I think it fit the music.
02:58:686 (5) - (just suggestion) 2 sliders or 1 repeating slider + circle sounds better for me ^
Thanks for mod, haha5957 :)
Fixed the point of haha's mod for now.

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Suzully's Hard].osu
Raging Bull
General:


Impossiblexu:
00:17:095 (1,2) - Maybe unstack these? Don't think stacks are a good idea in lower diff but up to you.
00:22:550 (2,3) - ^
01:38:913 (1,2) - ^
01:45:050 (1) - Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/5RYX
Nothing much. Good easy:3


Normal:
Kinda fast SV for normal but I guess it's okay.
00:01:072 (1) - Slider plays awkward for me. Maybe put the note when you first hear the vocal here 00:01:243 ?
00:58:686 - Kiai sounds a lot better here since it's on the downbeat. Maybe move it here?
02:02:777 - Start kiai here?
02:09:084 (2,3,4,1) - Why did spacing suddenly change here?
02:10:618 (1,2) - This might be confusing. Because the way you put 2 next to 1, beginners might think it's one repeat and might click 2 early. Maybe move 2 somewhere else?

Suzully:
Holy FFFF- I love the flow on this diff.

Lunatic:
I disagree with AR9. I think AR8 would play better. It's not really a fast song.
00:58:686 - Kiai over here instead?
02:01:413 (1,2,3,4) - These seems kinda confusing and it doesn't sound anything like you need a jump in the song. Also remove kiai time. It sounds better placed at 02:02:777 instead.

This map really deserves a star :3
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

Raging Bull wrote:

General:


Impossiblexu:
00:17:095 (1,2) - Maybe unstack these? Don't think stacks are a good idea in lower diff but up to you.
00:22:550 (2,3) - ^
01:38:913 (1,2) - ^
01:45:050 (1) - Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/5RYX
Nothing much. Good easy:3


Normal:
Kinda fast SV for normal but I guess it's okay.
00:01:072 (1) - Slider plays awkward for me. Maybe put the note when you first hear the vocal here 00:01:243 ? / hmm... I'll consider if another modder point out this but nothing awkward imo.
00:58:686 - Kiai sounds a lot better here since it's on the downbeat. Maybe move it here? / Fixed.
02:02:777 - Start kiai here? / Fixed.
02:09:084 (2,3,4,1) - Why did spacing suddenly change here? / Because of the symmetry I put a little jump.
02:10:618 (1,2) - This might be confusing. Because the way you put 2 next to 1, beginners might think it's one repeat and might click 2 early. Maybe move 2 somewhere else? / Fixed.

Suzully:
Holy FFFF- I love the flow on this diff.

Lunatic:
I disagree with AR9. I think AR8 would play better. It's not really a fast song. / Yes. It's not that fast song but not too slow that AR9 seems awkward. At first I made this map with AR8 but after I've ordered many test players who are pro or not, I decided to choose AR9 because some test players are confused with AR8.
00:58:686 - Kiai over here instead? / Fixed.
02:01:413 (1,2,3,4) - These seems kinda confusing and it doesn't sound anything like you need a jump in the song. Also remove kiai time. It sounds better placed at 02:02:777 instead. / Obviously not confusing. No one of my test players confused at this part although some of them are not pro(also with AR8 which is much more confusing). Also, I think this part deserve jump because the drum sound is going up. And kiai either.

This map really deserves a star :3

Thx for mod and kudosu star. >w<
And congratulation for your map ranked. :D
I checked out all and waiting for impossiblexu and Suzully's responses.
Raging Bull
\o/ Thanks! (◎`・ω・´)人(´・ω・`*)

My message is too short.
Suzully

C R E A M wrote:

I checked out all and waiting for impossiblexu and Suzully's responses.
I guess there is no point I have to fix /o/
Topic Starter
C R E A M

Suzully wrote:

C R E A M wrote:

I checked out all and waiting for impossiblexu and Suzully's responses.
I guess there is no point I have to fix /o/
Yes! lol Your map is too awesome. I just copy&paste your ID habitually with impossiblexu's :D
Lidan
Hey :3

[General]
  1. There's a .osb file without any storyboard in it, I guess you can delete that.
[Normal]
  1. 00:59:027 (X) - Add circle?
Couldn't find more.
Awesome map :D
al2e10
Here for you ~ :3

[Lunatic]
00:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6) - 2,4,6 Clap is much beautiful :3
00:51:527 (1-3rd) - Finish
00:58:686 (5) - ^
01:01:413 (6) - Remove it, it is strange for the musical
In the kiai time, use more Finish is much better than just a few.
02:11:129 (4,1) - This simi jump is weird
02:12:834 (1-1st) - Finish
03:02:606 (9) - Change it to spinner is much matter :3
**I think the sound effect can improve, if you need more mod for sound, you can pm me again.

[Hard]
Just rightly use the distance snap :3
Nothing mod
**Noticed that, don't copy and plaste all the time Orz

[All]
That;s a good map.
LUCKY STAR ~~~ good luck:3
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

KingsAL2 wrote:

Here for you ~ :3

[Lunatic]
00:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6) - 2,4,6 Clap is much beautiful :3 // fixed.
00:51:527 (1-3rd) - Finish // fixed.
00:58:686 (5) - ^ // fixed.
01:01:413 (6) - Remove it, it is strange for the musical //Removing that one is stranger.....
In the kiai time, use more Finish is much better than just a few. // I used more finish on kiai time! Fixed.
02:11:129 (4,1) - This simi jump is weird // seems bit weird but I think it fit to music and fun.
02:12:834 (1-1st) - Finish // fixed.
03:02:606 (9) - Change it to spinner is much matter :3 // hmm.... I will consider this.
**I think the sound effect can improve, if you need more mod for sound, you can pm me again.

[Hard]
Just rightly use the distance snap :3
Nothing mod
**Noticed that, don't copy and plaste all the time Orz

[All]
That;s a good map.
LUCKY STAR ~~~ good luck:3

Thx for mod and kudosu star~~ >w<
Your mod was helpful for me and if I have time I will pm you again. I am kinda busy these days T.T
And.... at this time I don't need to call anybody else! YEAH!!
YTYuyu
Yo Modding ur song because of ur request :)

impossiblexu's Easy:
00:01:413(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6zmk
00:04:140(1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6zot if u ignore this try to make it the same look as the 1st slider. i mean the slider points
00:51:868(1) - 1 grid down for the 4th point and 1 grid left for the end point
01:17:436(4) - 1 grid down
01:40:959(4) - x:152 y:184 for the end point. i want it to look even with the start point
02:02:777(1) - x:192: y:140 for the end point. ^
02:08:231(1) - x:460 y:32 ^

Normal:
01:35:945(5) - NC

Suzully's Hard:
00:38:913(3) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point. it should look even
02:20:334(1) - 1 grid down for the end point. ^

Lunatic:
00:26:100(6) - NC

This is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
Suzully

Byakugan249 wrote:

Suzully's Hard:
00:38:913(3) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point. it should look even Fixed.
02:20:334(1) - 1 grid down for the end point. ^ Fixed.
Thanks for mod~ :)

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Suzully's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo Modding ur song because of ur request :)

impossiblexu's Easy:
00:01:413(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6zmk
00:04:140(1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6zot if u ignore this try to make it the same look as the 1st slider. i mean the slider points
00:51:868(1) - 1 grid down for the 4th point and 1 grid left for the end point
01:17:436(4) - 1 grid down
01:40:959(4) - x:152 y:184 for the end point. i want it to look even with the start point
02:02:777(1) - x:192: y:140 for the end point. ^
02:08:231(1) - x:460 y:32 ^

Normal:
01:35:945(5) - NC //Fixed

Suzully's Hard:
00:38:913(3) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point. it should look even
02:20:334(1) - 1 grid down for the end point. ^

Lunatic:
00:26:100(6) - NC //Fixed

This is the best i can do. Star and GL :D

Thx for mod~~ and really thank you for 2kudosu star!
Waiting for impossiblexu!
Shiki
Hi~ :) from my queue

[Easy]
Fine to me :3

[Normal]
00:14:027 (3) - If you curve it like (2), it'd be awesome!
00:21:186 (6) - Copy (4) and ctrl+j?
01:28:515 (1,2) - The sound of (1)'s tail and (2)'s head is too noisy imo.

[Hard]
00:18:970 (1) - Do you think this one looks better?? http://puu.sh/6ADw
01:39:084 (3,4,1) - I heard drum here. Maybe add note at 01:39:169 and 01:39:339?
02:11:470 (3) - A grid right to the red control point.
02:14:879 (1,2) - Please don't overlap (1)'s body with (2)'s head. It looks bad imo.

[Insane]
I think AR9 is kinda fast for the song, AR8 may suit the song better??
00:40:703 (4) - Add clap?
00:58:686 (1) - New combo here?

That's all I can do :P
Good luck to the map~
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ :) from my queue

[Easy]
Fine to me :3

[Normal]
00:14:027 (3) - If you curve it like (2), it'd be awesome! // Fixed.
00:21:186 (6) - Copy (4) and ctrl+j? // Fixed.
01:28:515 (1,2) - The sound of (1)'s tail and (2)'s head is too noisy imo. // Fixed.

[Hard]
00:18:970 (1) - Do you think this one looks better?? http://puu.sh/6ADw
01:39:084 (3,4,1) - I heard drum here. Maybe add note at 01:39:169 and 01:39:339?
02:11:470 (3) - A grid right to the red control point.
02:14:879 (1,2) - Please don't overlap (1)'s body with (2)'s head. It looks bad imo.

[Insane]
I think AR9 is kinda fast for the song, AR8 may suit the song better?? // AR8 is disturbs the reading. SV is fast and note density is high :D
00:40:703 (4) - Add clap? // Fixed.
00:58:686 (1) - New combo here? // Fixed.

That's all I can do :P
Good luck to the map~

Thx for mod and kudosu star! Waiting for Suzully's response.
Teru21
hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queue
here we go xD

[impossiblexu's Easy]
b(O.<)d

[Normal]
00:57:322 (2) - this slider is closed by (1) it make it a bit messy. http://puu.sh/6zNR
02:17:606 (4) - http://puu.sh/6zPV

[Suzully's Hard]
00:14:879 (1,2) - grid : 2 times to the right (more tidy)
00:19:481 (2) - grid : 2 times to the left
00:20:845 (2) - grid : 4 times down (if dont want to change this, its okay.)
00:24:936 (2) - grid : 6 to the left ,
4 times down
01:44:879 (1) - grid : 2 times down
02:20:845 (2) - a bit ugly. try this http://puu.sh/6Cq9

[Lunatic]
b(>.O)d

thats all.. Good luck :P :)
Dotsu

Byakugan249 wrote:

impossiblexu's Easy:
00:01:413(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6zmk
00:04:140(1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6zot if u ignore this try to make it the same look as the 1st slider. i mean the slider points
00:51:868(1) - 1 grid down for the 4th point and 1 grid left for the end point
01:17:436(4) - 1 grid down
01:40:959(4) - x:152 y:184 for the end point. i want it to look even with the start point
02:02:777(1) - x:192: y:140 for the end point. ^
02:08:231(1) - x:460 y:32 ^
Fixed some and thanks a lot :D

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [impossiblexu's Easy].osu
Suzully

Teru21 wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]
00:14:879 (1,2) - grid : 2 times to the right (more tidy) Nah.
00:19:481 (2) - grid : 2 times to the left Nah but changed (1)'s shape.
00:20:845 (2) - grid : 4 times down (if dont want to change this, its okay.) Nah.
00:24:936 (2) - grid : 6 to the left ,
4 times down Nah.
01:44:879 (1) - grid : 2 times down Nah.
02:20:845 (2) - a bit ugly. try this http://puu.sh/6Cq9 Nah.
Thanks anyway.

EDIT:Oops, I forgot to check Shiki's mod. I'll fix it later~

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Suzully's Hard].osu
artpiggo
Lunatic
00:06:186 (3,4,5,6,7) - just make stream leads to next slider.

00:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same reason

00:44:709 (9) - try move to (156,152). It should flow not stay waiting.
01:00:050 (5) - try adding and move to (372,104)
01:04:140 (1) - move to (128,128)
01:38:572 (3) - move to (300,300)
02:01:584 (2) - (156,176)
02:01:754 (3) - (228,308)
02:01:925 (4) - (316,180)
02:03:629 (1) - just think that the distance from previous should not be only 1.0 cuz the rhythm goes purely tense here. so move it to left to make about 1.4x distance. Also move 02:04:481 (2) near to (1), too.
02:11:470 (1) - also in this. maybe try this.

02:16:413 (1) - (72,192)

Suzully
very fine with it.

Normal, impossiblexu
fine too.

9/10 This is apparently a good map. Try your best. Wish this map ranked. ^^
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

artpiggo wrote:

Lunatic
00:06:186 (3,4,5,6,7) - just make stream leads to next slider. // Fixed.

00:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same reason // This change disturbs flow with slider 1.

00:44:709 (9) - try move to (156,152). It should flow not stay waiting. // Fixed.
01:00:050 (5) - try adding and move to (372,104) // There is no beat here.
01:04:140 (1) - move to (128,128) // Nah.
01:38:572 (3) - move to (300,300) // ^
02:01:584 (2) - (156,176) // I think back and forth of the rythm is important at this part.
02:01:754 (3) - (228,308) // ^
02:01:925 (4) - (316,180) // ^
02:03:629 (1) - just think that the distance from previous should not be only 1.0 cuz the rhythm goes purely tense here. so move it to left to make about 1.4x distance. Also move 02:04:481 (2) near to (1), too. // Nothing problem with current spacing. and this is stacked with note 10.
02:11:470 (1) - also in this. maybe try this. // Will consider seriously.

02:16:413 (1) - (72,192) // Nah.

Suzully
very fine with it.

Normal, impossiblexu
fine too.

9/10 This is apparently a good map. Try your best. Wish this map ranked. ^^

Thank you for your kind modding. It was very helpful. I'll consider your suggestions more. Also, really thx for kudosu stars.
Sync
General:
If I didn't know any better, I think it's time for a bubble.
I really like this map. If I had more Kudosu, I would star this.

Lunatic:
I found nothing wrong. :oops:

Suzully's Hard:
01:14:964 (2) - Remove this hit circle.

Normal:
01:30:390 (1) - New combo
02:13:345 (1) - Make it repeat once. (I think it's generally ok to have a slider that repeats twice in normal, but in this case it seems to me as too difficult.)
02:13:856 (2) - Add a hit circle.
02:16:072 (1) - Same deal here.
02:16:584 (2) - ^^^

impossiblexu's Easy:
00:01:413 (1) - Move this back to the redtick and shorten it by one tick
00:02:095 (2) - Add a hit circle here
00:24:425 (1) - Move this back to the red tick
01:28:686 (1) - Move this back to the red tick and lengthen it by one tick
01:34:140 (1) - While I think this may be a little too hard for an easy, move this back one tick
01:39:595 (3) - Move it to the red tick and shorten it by one tick.
01:40:618 (4) - Add a hit circle
01:45:050 (1) - Move this back to the red tick
02:32:777 (1) - ^ and shorten it by one tick
Suzully

Shiki wrote:

[Hard]
00:18:970 (1) - Do you think this one looks better?? http://puu.sh/6ADw Fixed~
01:39:084 (3,4,1) - I heard drum here. Maybe add note at 01:39:169 and 01:39:339? I see your point, but this is hard diff so I don't want to put many streams~
02:11:470 (3) - A grid right to the red control point. Fixed~
02:14:879 (1,2) - Please don't overlap (1)'s body with (2)'s head. It looks bad imo. It looks fine imo sorry~

0sync wrote:

Suzully's Hard:
01:14:964 (2) - Remove this hit circle. Ah it's actually over mapped. Deleted~
Thanks a lot~ :)

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Suzully's Hard].osu
Sure
[Lunatic]
00:24:595 (1) - 리듬이 좀 어색하네요. 이렇게 한번 바꿔보세요. http://puu.sh/780G
02:01:413 - 키아이 여기 말고 02:02:777 에서 시작하세요.
02:19:652 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/165144 이렇게 바꿔보세요. 흐름이 한결 나아집니다.
02:21:356 (1,2,3) - 수직 반전
02:21:868 (1) - 노래 패턴에 따르면 02:24:425 까지 늘리는게 더 낫습니다. 흰색 긴선 바로 앞 빨간선에 힘이 들어가다보니..
02:53:402 (3,4,5) - 휘슬?


[Suzully's Hard]
Subarashii


[Normal]
00:32:777 (5) - 뉴콤보
00:34:140 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
00:35:163 (2) - 뉴콤보
00:37:890 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
00:38:572 (2) - 뉴콤보
02:21:868 (1) - 02:24:425 까지 늘리는게 더 낫습니다.
02:53:743 (2,3) - 휘슬?


[xu's Easy]
Can't mod.
In this song, heavy beats are on red tick mostly, but your map doesn't follow the music. :(
I suggest remap.


아흥 베리굿 잡 크림님 ;)
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

ykcarrot wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:24:595 (1) - 리듬이 좀 어색하네요. 이렇게 한번 바꿔보세요. http://puu.sh/780G
02:01:413 - 키아이 여기 말고 02:02:777 에서 시작하세요.
02:19:652 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/165144 이렇게 바꿔보세요. 흐름이 한결 나아집니다.
02:21:356 (1,2,3) - 수직 반전
02:21:868 (1) - 노래 패턴에 따르면 02:24:425 까지 늘리는게 더 낫습니다. 흰색 긴선 바로 앞 빨간선에 힘이 들어가다보니..
02:53:402 (3,4,5) - 휘슬?


[Suzully's Hard]
Subarashii


[Normal]
00:32:777 (5) - 뉴콤보
00:34:140 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
00:35:163 (2) - 뉴콤보
00:37:890 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
00:38:572 (2) - 뉴콤보
02:21:868 (1) - 02:24:425 까지 늘리는게 더 낫습니다.
02:53:743 (2,3) - 휘슬?


[xu's Easy]
Can't mod.
In this song, heavy beats are on red tick mostly, but your map doesn't follow the music. :(
I suggest remap.


아흥 베리굿 잡 크림님 ;)

모딩+쿠돗별 감사합니다. 수직반전 빼고 전부 고쳤습니다. 수직반전 시키는 부분의 경우 보컬의 음이 내려가기 때문에 노트도 내려가도록 배치했습니다. 그냥 기분상 그러는게 좋을것 같아서요 ㅎㅎ. 노말의 뉴콤보나 스피너의 경우 제가 다시 봐도 분명히 당근님 모딩대로 하는게 훨씬 나은데 꽤 많은수의 모딩을 받으면서 한번도 지적을 안받았다니 ㅠㅠ 퀄떨어지는 모딩만 받았던게 아닌가 싶어서 씁쓸하네요. 슬슬 장판이나 박쥐찾아볼려 했는데 저런 초보적인 실수가 남아있을줄은 몰랐습니다. 좀 더 두고봐야겠어요 일단.

Waiting for impossiblexu's response.
aston_old
[Lunatic]
- 00:00:050 (1,2,3) - I wish you did something more creative, like this:

But it's your choice.
- 01:00:220 (1,2) - This confused me in first play; you can keep but i'd lessen the jump here cause it felt random
- 02:43:752~2:59:368 - I think you should lower the sound a bit more on this part, maybe -20 or -30 per section, then jump back up as you did.
*Really good Lunatic diff.

[Suzully's Hard]
- 01:08:913 (3,4,5,6) - might be too difficult for a hard diff
- Overall, less use of streams would be better, but well mapped. Try to keep streams 5 or below.

[Normal]
- Nothing~

[impossiblexu's Easy]
- 00:01:413 (1) - slide to red tick before it; extend by 1 tick

Can't mod easy, from 2nd slider it's hard to determine how you want to map. Doesn't follow both vocal and music, just one. Should be fixed.

Found little wrong with mapset.
Once Easy is fixed, can be ranked? :D
star! >3< here! ‎(╯^ㅅ^)╯︵★
Topic Starter
C R E A M

aston wrote:

[Lunatic]
- 00:00:050 (1,2,3) - I wish you did something more creative, like this:
No change.

aston wrote:

- 01:00:220 (1,2) - This confused me in first play; you can keep but i'd lessen the jump here cause it felt random
Hmm... I will consider it.

aston wrote:

- 02:43:752~2:59:368 - I think you should lower the sound a bit more on this part, maybe -20 or -30 per section, then jump back up as you did.
Fixed!


aston wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]
- 01:08:913 (3,4,5,6) - might be too difficult for a hard diff
- Overall, less use of streams would be better, but well mapped. Try to keep streams 5 or below.
Streams in this map are not that hard. Even me, who is not pro, can easily FC this map with DT.


Thank you for mod and a star~~
Suzully

aston wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]
- 01:08:913 (3,4,5,6) - might be too difficult for a hard diff Sorry but I don't think so.
- Overall, less use of streams would be better, but well mapped. Try to keep streams 5 or below. Really well mapped? Hmm...imo it's enough easy as hard diff so I keep current mapset for now.
Ya. I can't play with DT though, because I'm not good at playing :P
Dotsu
I won't remap. If it's unrankable just remove my diff
Topic Starter
C R E A M

impossiblexu wrote:

I won't remap. If it's unrankable just remove my diff
I don't know that your diff is unrankable or not so I will wait for MAT, BAT who can judge this.
Waiting for MAT, BAT modding.
Topic Starter
C R E A M
gyaa.... stop going to graveyard my map T.T
arien666
[inpossiblexu's Easy]
Actually, most people say that 'It should be remapped' but I don't think so, it is on basic drum beat not melody or something. Most easy difficulty of rhythm games are just with basic beats like drum 1/1 beats ;_; So, I don't think why it should be remapped orz

[Suzully's Hard]
01:28:004 (1) - Is this really 1/3??? I dunno but it doesn't fit into melody ;_;



Not yet for something but whatever ;_:
Suzully

arien666 wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]
01:28:004 (1) - Is this really 1/3??? I dunno but it doesn't fit into melody ;_;
Oops it's my fault ;_;
Fixed! Thank you~

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Suzully's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
C R E A M
OK Fixed.
Faust
Hi.

Make sure the Audio Lead-in is a solid digit. Currently, it is 1974 ms. You can simply edit the OSU files individually.

I think your map is already good-enough, save for the few technical issues in general.
Rhythm itself is well-mapped and goes nicely in accordance to song. Needs some MAT attention, really.

I'll provide some minor fixes and some suggestions on what I feel needs some improvement.

Easy & Normal: are just minding their business being flawless.

If there's anything at all, it'd be that I'd ask you to look at some note arrangements and move a grid or so.

Suzully's Hard:

Pretty clean difficulty, I know Suzully likes straight-forward, easy-to-identify neat rhythm and patterns.
I find this quite care-free yet simple.

Very suited to the song, the occasional 1/4 and smartly positioned notes add the feel of challenge, which I think is what a Hard difficulty should express.

I do not have any complaints against this, since the mapping rhythm stays almost on the same wavelength throughout with constant spacing even at sections with symmetry.

- 02:53:402 (2) - Shift this 1 grid up.

- 03:03:288 - ~ - 03:08:061 - Could use a spinner, I think.

Lunatic:

You have a peculiar mapping. It holds up pretty nicely.
Intuitive jumps and note arrangement made consistent.

- 00:34:822 - Unsnapped inherited timing section.

- 00:35:334 - ^

- 00:35:334 - ^

- 00:40:959 - ^

From here on till the end of the map, I need you to go through the inherited timing sections and ensure they are properly snapped.

- 01:47:606 (1) - Why not make it perfect:
- 01:51:868 (2) - Touching up on the slider:
- 01:56:640 (1) - If you'd like to:
So on and so forth. If you like what I did and want to continue refining the sliders in any way you think is appropriate then you can follow through with the rest on your own.

- 02:12:322 (1,2) - Actually, I think it'd work better if you reversed their positions.

- 02:36:527 (5) - I feel this is not a very wise move. Here's a suggestion:
So in following what I did, the notes have the player go down and then the upper slider has the player reach up. So the movement is generally a "loop" which I think plays nicer than the jump.

- 02:45:050 (3) - I am not sure if this is intentional, but it is surely late on the vocals.

It should be on the previous blue tick.

- 02:50:163 (1) - Shift to previous blue tick. This starts late.

- 03:03:288 - ~ - 03:08:061 - As I wrote earlier. A spinner would be cool.

That's it.

Excellent mapset.
Suzully

Faust wrote:

Suzully's Hard:

Pretty clean difficulty, I know Suzully likes straight-forward, easy-to-identify neat rhythm and patterns.
I find this quite care-free yet simple.

Very suited to the song, the occasional 1/4 and smartly positioned notes add the feel of challenge, which I think is what a Hard difficulty should express.

I do not have any complaints against this, since the mapping rhythm stays almost on the same wavelength throughout with constant spacing even at sections with symmetry.

- 02:53:402 (2) - Shift this 1 grid up. Okay fixed~

- 03:03:288 - ~ - 03:08:061 - Could use a spinner, I think. Since CREAM didn't add a spinner here, so I didn't too.
Thanks Faust! :)

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Suzully's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
C R E A M
Thx for modding Faust. I feels like I got a MAT modding except you can't give me a bubble. Really high quality modding. Thanks again. And congratulations for first Japanese MAT Suzully. You really deserves to be a MAT.
Modding

Faust wrote:

Hi.
Make sure the Audio Lead-in is a solid digit. Currently, it is 1974 ms. You can simply edit the OSU files individually. Fixed to 2000ms

Lunatic:

You have a peculiar mapping. It holds up pretty nicely.
Intuitive jumps and note arrangement made consistent.

- 00:34:822 - Unsnapped inherited timing section.

- 00:35:334 - ^

- 00:35:334 - ^

- 00:40:959 - ^

From here on till the end of the map, I need you to go through the inherited timing sections and ensure they are properly snapped. Although those aren't neat, they never mess up playing or hitsounds so I didn't fixed

- 01:47:606 (1) - Why not make it perfect: Fixed

- 01:51:868 (2) - Touching up on the slider: Fixed

- 01:56:640 (1) - If you'd like to: Fixed

So on and so forth. If you like what I did and want to continue refining the sliders in any way you think is appropriate then you can follow through with the rest on your own.

- 02:12:322 (1,2) - Actually, I think it'd work better if you reversed their positions. Sorry but I don't think so

- 02:36:527 (5) - I feel this is not a very wise move. Here's a suggestion:
So in following what I did, the notes have the player go down and then the upper slider has the player reach up. So the movement is generally a "loop" which I think plays nicer than the jump. Fixed! Thank you for pointing out this

- 02:45:050 (3) - I am not sure if this is intentional, but it is surely late on the vocals.


It should be on the previous blue tick. It follows piano

- 02:50:163 (1) - Shift to previous blue tick. This starts late. It follows piano

- 03:03:288 - ~ - 03:08:061 - As I wrote earlier. A spinner would be cool. Spinner would be cool, but I'd like to maintain my style. I like to zip up the ends clearly.

That's it.

Excellent mapset.
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