From your Weekend Queue
00:56:691 (1,1) - Shouldn't this be one long slider? Don't hear another noticeable sound at 00:57:782 -
01:01:328 (3,1) - Consider increasing DS here since the sounds here are much more significant than 01:02:691 (3,4)
01:04:328 (2,3) - Why did you map this part with two circles when you could've done one long slider from 01:04:328 to 01:05:350 (as well as other parts) and continue following the instrument as you have for other parts
01:08:146 (1,1) - Here as well? (Some other parts you could increase DS if you decided to use my suggestion but I'm lazy too list them all)
01:40:974 (1) - This could just be part of the yellow combo
01:41:831 (1) - Also 01:40:402 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this could all be one combo since the only different sound I really hear is on 01:41:831 (3)
01:57:259 (5) - NC?
02:02:401 (4) - ^
02:04:110 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - - Listening to this part at 25% playback rate sounds a bit off. Are you sure timing here is correct?
02:23:831 (5,6) - Spacing should be a bit larger here imo since the sound is kinda 'rising' in a way
02:38:688 (5) - Why not use two kicksliders instead of a repeating one for consistency
02:41:544 to 02:43:187 - you have most streams about 8 notes but then from 02:43:830 to 02:44:901 - you go back to putting a NC on each 5th note of a stream. Since the music is basically the same and there's a noticeable beat on the 5th note of each stream, why not just keep 4 combo streams instead of the 8 note ones you have (idk if that's worded correctly, hopefully it makes sense)
02:46:688 (1,2) - Since you have some spacing at 02:47:830 (1,2) - add some spacing here too?
02:54:330 (4,6) - Not hearing any sound here?
03:04:972 (1,2) - Increase DS here, might throw players off
03:08:246 (7,1) - Flow here is weird compared to other kickslider to stream things you put
There was a recent clarification on song content rules (https://github.com/ppy/osu-wiki/pull/1049) so I'm not too sure if this song is technically allowed since the lyrics are a bit uhh... questionable
00:56:691 (1,1) - Shouldn't this be one long slider? Don't hear another noticeable sound at 00:57:782 -
01:01:328 (3,1) - Consider increasing DS here since the sounds here are much more significant than 01:02:691 (3,4)
01:04:328 (2,3) - Why did you map this part with two circles when you could've done one long slider from 01:04:328 to 01:05:350 (as well as other parts) and continue following the instrument as you have for other parts
01:08:146 (1,1) - Here as well? (Some other parts you could increase DS if you decided to use my suggestion but I'm lazy too list them all)
01:40:974 (1) - This could just be part of the yellow combo
01:41:831 (1) - Also 01:40:402 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this could all be one combo since the only different sound I really hear is on 01:41:831 (3)
01:57:259 (5) - NC?
02:02:401 (4) - ^
02:04:110 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - - Listening to this part at 25% playback rate sounds a bit off. Are you sure timing here is correct?
02:23:831 (5,6) - Spacing should be a bit larger here imo since the sound is kinda 'rising' in a way
02:38:688 (5) - Why not use two kicksliders instead of a repeating one for consistency
02:41:544 to 02:43:187 - you have most streams about 8 notes but then from 02:43:830 to 02:44:901 - you go back to putting a NC on each 5th note of a stream. Since the music is basically the same and there's a noticeable beat on the 5th note of each stream, why not just keep 4 combo streams instead of the 8 note ones you have (idk if that's worded correctly, hopefully it makes sense)
02:46:688 (1,2) - Since you have some spacing at 02:47:830 (1,2) - add some spacing here too?
02:54:330 (4,6) - Not hearing any sound here?
03:04:972 (1,2) - Increase DS here, might throw players off
03:08:246 (7,1) - Flow here is weird compared to other kickslider to stream things you put
There was a recent clarification on song content rules (https://github.com/ppy/osu-wiki/pull/1049) so I'm not too sure if this song is technically allowed since the lyrics are a bit uhh... questionable