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Bleach - KELUN - CHU-BURA (Tv size)

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Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 1 giugno 2010 at 16:56:12

Artist: KELUN
Title: CHU-BURA (TV Size)
Source: BLEACH
Tags: niedzwiedz1124 ztrot
BPM: 180
Filesize: 16450kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bankai (4,41 stars, 157 notes)
  2. Hollow (3,66 stars, 147 notes)
  3. Hollowification (4,82 stars, 204 notes)
  4. niedz's Taiko (4,97 stars, 337 notes)
  5. Shikai (2,69 stars, 111 notes)
  6. ztrot MIX (4,97 stars, 222 notes)
Download: KELUN - CHU-BURA (TV Size)
Download: KELUN - CHU-BURA (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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8th opening of Bleach.

Easy= Shikai
Normal= Hollow
Hard= Bankai
Insane= Hollowification
Insane 2= ztrot MIX (I'ts based on the partially done ztrot's diff. I've done it, actually, but he checked it, so it should be ok.)
Insane 3= niedz's Taiko

EDIT: Added Hard difficulty.
EDIT: Added new video.
EDIT: Changed BPM.
EDIT: Added new audio.
EDIT: Added Insane difficulty, some kiai and changed difficulty names.
EDIT: Addes some element, like comboburst, cursor, ecc...
[NOTE]: I didn't done these elements, I've only took from here and from another Bleach beatmap. Credits goes to the respective creators.
EDIT: Changed audio with a new one.
EDIT: Fixed background.
EDIT: Added niedz's taiko difficulty (thanks to niedzwiedz1124).
EDIT: Tried to replace beat to make it better.
EDIT: Added custom hitsound.
EDIT: Redone hitsond placing (thanks to Armin).
EDIT: Changed diff's names.
EDIT: Removed custom hitosund.

Thanks for mod to:
Mogsworth
Gladi
Leorda
MoonFragrance
Zekira
YGOkid8
Breeze
CDFA
Sallad4ever
xxheroxx
cyborg
orioncomet
LKs
Armin
Hikato
Kecco
wmfchris
Kurai_
NatsumeRin
Astom
Dusty
Beuchi-chan
osuplayer111
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Mogsy
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Here since the beginning
Mogsy
Offset is 11,270.
BPM (that I got) is 180.16.

Remap using distance spacing and make more difficulties. Otherwise, nuked.
If you have any specific questions, feel free to PM me, and I'll be glad to help!
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
I made the normal mode and I've redone the Easy mode.
Mogsy
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Here since the beginning
Mogsy
You had syncing problems. I'll upload the .osu's. I also fixed some combo number issues.

-Simple patterns
-Improper syncing
-Weird things used
-Combo numbers are screwy
-Spacing is screwy
-Needs a Hard difficulty
Nuked. Here's the specific list of what you need to change in each that I didn't change:

Normal:
-Spacing. Use Distance Spacing and don't make everything all the same pattern on the grid. It makes the map kinda...well, really boring. Space these out all evenly, so that the grid patterns aren't boring...essentially completely redo the spacing, make new grid patterns, etc.
-00:31:41 (9) - Notice how I made the slider repeat one last time so it flows smoothly with the music? Yeah. Where that slider ends, place the 10th beat (on the grid, it's perfect where it is on the timeline).
-Where I have the huge stacks? Space those out. I just did that for timeline syncing purposes.
-00:51:06 (3, 4, 5) - Feel free to experiment with the shapes of these sliders, but make sure that their length on the timeline remains the same. Same thing with all the thing I turned into sliders.

Once again, the .osus I am uploading aren't permanent fixes. You need to completely redo your spacing, I just did what I thought felt right for Normal, but Easy and Hard are completely up to you. Just keep the syncing the same for Normal, and despite being uberboring, I synced Easy.

Easy:
-This is so simple and boring. Redo this.

Download: KELUN - CHU-BURA (Tv size) (Kuroneko-sHerald) [Normal].osu

Download: KELUN - CHU-BURA (Tv size) (Kuroneko-sHerald) [Easy].osu
Andrea
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Andrea
Revived.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
Thanks :)

Added Hard difficulty.
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Mogsy
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Here since the beginning
Mogsy
Offset: 11,270
BPM: 180.100
Preview point: 00:43:918

That's what I got from a VERY quick look. I might be wrong, but I'll check it when I can mod again.
Also, add hitsounds, or this won't ever be ranked.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
Offset: 11,270 --> Done.
BPM: 180.100 --> Done.
Preview point: 00:43:918 --> Done.

Mogsworth wrote:

That's what I got from a VERY quick look. I might be wrong, but I'll check it when I can mod again.
Also, add hitsounds, or this won't ever be ranked.
I knows it, but I didn't think that someone could mod that beatmap so fast XD
Anyway, done.
penaxo
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Joined August 2009
penaxo
hola ^ ^ ... I want to say your map is very good but I think you should ke agrgarle more speed in the hollowificatio (speaking on the ctb) and more jumps ok

ps: your Beatmap te kedo genial * __ *
GladiOol
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GladiOol
BPM 180,05
Offset 590

At least, I'm not sure. Please have some one to double check this ^
Leorda
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Leorda
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

Gladi wrote:

BPM 180,05
Offset 590
At least, I'm not sure. Please have some one to double check this ^

Leorda wrote:

[Timing]
1) BPM : 180,10
Offset : 5.939
Please check my offset, seems not right
Leorda's BPM + Gladi's Offset seems to be right... to me.


Leorda wrote:

[General]
1) Bleach is in the Source, so you don't need a "Bleach" in Tags
2) CHU-BURA (TV Side) is in the Title, so you don't need a "Chu", "bura", "TV", and "size" in tags
3) KELUN is in the Artist, so you don't need a "Kelun" in Tags
So, substantially remain "Anime" and "Opening" XD
Done.

[Shikai]
Please check this map, are U following a vocal or rhythm? :o I never notice it before. Anyway, I've changed it.
01:03:240 (x) - Add note? --> Done.
01:08:571 (1) - No new combo --> Done.

[Hollow]
00:23:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Don't use finish hitsound too much --> Removed from 2,4,6,8.
00:44:584 (2) - Make it curve? --> I've tried to do it, but the result was terrible. So I didn't changed it.
[color=#BF80FF]00:45:917 (4) - ^
00:54:579 (1) - Unrankable slider LOL (Don't let startpoint overlap with endpoint, and that's makes can't follow the path, that's way too confuse) --> Now it's ok?
01:16:567 (2) - Make it curve? --> I've tried to do it, but the result was terrible. So I didn't changed it.
01:17:899 (4) - ^

[Hollowification]
00:48:748 (B) - The breaks are too short, please remove --> Done.
01:20:564 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000) ---> On AutoPlay it gives 2000 bonus score XD
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
[Gerneral]
Kiai must be used no more once during 1 minutes.
So i suggest kiai parts like this
01:15:861 ~ end of this song

[Shinkai]
00:13:895 (6,1,2) - (suggestion) make a prettier triangle
00:37:882 (4) - move a 1/2 tick forward
00:41:380 (1,2,3) - move a 1/2 tick backward
00:43:046 (4) - move a 1/2 tick forward
00:43:918 (kiai) - move to 00:43:878

[Bankai]
00:13:395 (4) - new combo
00:24:056 (4) - ^
00:25:555 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:380 (1) - ^
01:26:355 (1) - end at 01:28:687

[Hollow]
00:21:847 (1) - align with 00:21:431 (9)

[Hollowficatoin]
00:13:395 (5) - add new combo
00:18:476 (6,7,1,1,1,2,3,4) - move a 1/4 tick backward.
00:18:976 (1,1) - remove new combo
01:07:199 (9) - add new combo
01:08:531 (1) - delete new combo
01:09:697 (4) - add new combo
01:17:860 (6) - add new combo
Zekira
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Zekira
BPM: 180.05
Offset: 5910

Don't forget to resnap all notes, fix sliders, etc.

I cannot mod on a faulty timing. Once you have fixed, feel free to call me again.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

MoonFragrance wrote:

[Gerneral]
Kiai must be used no more once during 1 minutes.
So i suggest kiai parts like this
01:15:861 ~ end of this song

[Shinkai]
00:13:895 (6,1,2) - (suggestion) make a prettier triangle
00:37:882 (4) - move a 1/2 tick forward
00:41:380 (1,2,3) - move a 1/2 tick backward
00:43:046 (4) - move a 1/2 tick forward
00:43:918 (kiai) - move to 00:43:878

[Bankai]
00:13:395 (4) - new combo
00:24:056 (4) - ^
00:25:555 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:380 (1) - ^
01:26:355 (1) - end at 01:28:687

[Hollow]
00:21:847 (1) - align with 00:21:431 (9)

[Hollowficatoin]
00:13:395 (5) - add new combo
00:18:476 (6,7,1,1,1,2,3,4) - move a 1/4 tick backward.
00:18:976 (1,1) - remove new combo
01:07:199 (9) - add new combo
01:08:531 (1) - delete new combo
01:09:697 (4) - add new combo
01:17:860 (6) - add new combo
All Done.


Zekira wrote:

BPM: 180.05
Offset: 5910

Don't forget to resnap all notes, fix sliders, etc.

I cannot mod on a faulty timing. Once you have fixed, feel free to call me again.
Done.
YGOkid8
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General
IMO, it should either be:
Easy - Shikai
Normal - Hollow
Hard - Bankai

or:
Easy - Hollow
Normal - Shikai
Hard - Bankai

I mean, really, an ordinary Hollow better than a Bankai!? No wai d00d.

Shikai
The slider velocity is too high for this map, because of the BPM of the song. Please reduce the slider velocity. Also, increase Circle Size by 1.

Bankai
Now a bit too hard for a Normal, once again because of the Slider Velocity.

Hollow
01:20:555 (1) - Spinner is too short. Spinners need to get at least 2000 bonus from auto to be rankable.

Hollowification
01:20:555 (1) - Same thing; Too short.
-----------------------------------------------
If I was you, I'd bug ztrot, see if you can get him to map a difficulty for you. I'm sure he'd be more than happy to map a difficulty since it's Bleach :)

Because no Bleach map is Bleach if there's no ztrot. NONE AT ALL.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

YGOkid8 wrote:

General
IMO, it should either be:
Easy - Shikai
Normal - Hollow
Hard - Bankai

or:
Easy - Hollow
Normal - Shikai
Hard - Bankai

I mean, really, an ordinary Hollow better than a Bankai!? No wai d00d.
Yes, you are right. But I was thinking to Ichigo when I assigned name to difficulties, so"Hollow" is better than "Bankai", IMO (yes, I'm an Ichigo hollow fan :lol: ). I didn't added "Ichigo" in name difficulty because in that way is sound better (to me).

YGOkid8 wrote:

Shikai
The slider velocity is too high for this map, because of the BPM of the song. Please reduce the slider velocity. Also, increase Circle Size by 1. --> Done.

Bankai
Now a bit too hard for a Normal, once again because of the Slider Velocity. -->I hope that this isn't a problem.

Hollow
01:20:555 (1) - Spinner is too short. Spinners need to get at least 2000 bonus from auto to be rankable. --> Done.

Hollowification
01:20:555 (1) - Same thing; Too short. --> Done.

YGOkid8 wrote:

If I was you, I'd bug ztrot, see if you can get him to map a difficulty for you. I'm sure he'd be more than happy to map a difficulty since it's Bleach :)

Because no Bleach map is Bleach if there's no ztrot. NONE AT ALL.
Ill' try XD
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
I've bugged ztrot for you. Good luck with this beatmap.

BLEACH <3
Kuroneko-sHerald
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YGOkid8 wrote:

I've bugged ztrot for you. Good luck with this beatmap.
I've also did it XD
Zekira
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Zekira
[General]
Turn up the volume of the hitsounds please. There must always be an equal balance of hearing in hitsound and music. In this case I think it's best if you almost maximize it.
Re-snap the inherited timing points to the ticks that they're supposed to be at.
There's a part in the music file where it suddenly stops. If possible, PLEASE get a clean and good quality MP3. The timing sounds screwed up at some points because of that sudden silence. The silence can be found at 00:18:656.
The location of the New Combos are whack. Get a modder that has the enthusiasm to mod new combos.

[Shikai]
00:30:403 (4,5) - move the 4 1/2 back, 5 1/2 later. Fix the spacing of the entire combo afterwards.
00:33:402 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - remap this part. It doesn't sound nice.
00:43:149 (4) - get this on the white tick. Or at least if you're gonna follow the vocals, do it right and put it on the red tick. Fix spacing afterwards.
00:51:064 (2) - too repetitive, and a bit unintuitive. Do something else for this part.

[Bankai]
01:04:643: Unnecessary break.
01:08:559 (1) - alignment.
01:13:724 (4) - I don't like how this is being covered by the slider.
01:26:387 (1) - reduce by 1/4.

[Hollow]
00:17:490 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - you probably understand that THIS SOUNDS REALLY UGLY. Can you at least make it follow the guitar properly >_> see, it will definitely help if you could also hear the hitsounds, you know. Also, this is also becoming a problem with that sudden silence too.
00:18:989 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:21:822 (1) - you are definitely putting this on the wrong tick.

Hm, something's up, can't continue to mod atm orz
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Zekira
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Zekira
New MP3 timing.

BPM: 180.00
Offset: 6210

Resnap everything, fix the green points, sliders, etc.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

Zekira wrote:

New MP3 timing.

BPM: 180.00
Offset: 6210

Resnap everything, fix the green points, sliders, etc.
Done.
ztrot
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ztrot
small bit of my diff sorry for the wait

Download: KELUN - CHU-BURA (TV Size) (Kuroneko-sHerald) [ztrot MIX].osu
Breeze
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Breeze
[General]
  1. Anime Opening should not to be a tag, it contains too much, you can add other keyword about bleach to tag
  2. hitsound sounds loud, please lower a bit
[Shikai]
  1. 01:13:543 (2) - I'm afraid this hidden slider is hard to tell for newbie while playing
  2. 01:28:876 - remove clap
[Bankai]
  1. 01:28:876 - remove clap
[Hollow]
  1. notes are fine
[Hollowification]
  1. notes are fine
Do not abuse hitsound, there are few regular pattern of putting hitsound
such as every two long white tick a clap
And, if you listen to music carefully, you can get some origional hitsound that hid in music (drum and finish)

Anyway it's a good map
star
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Shikai:
00:44:210 (1,2,3) - Seems too confusing for an easy mode.
00:48:710 (6) - Move this 4 grids to the right.

Bankai:
Increase the circle size (<-) by 1.
00:19:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ;-;. I don't really understand what's wrong with it, but overall, I really dislike this part. I suggest a slider :3
01:16:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Too confusing for a normal mode D:. Good for a hard mode, though.

Hollow:
00:33:709 - Move this to the red tick and shorten the slider to the nearest red rick. Re-snap as neccesary.

Hollowfication:
01:03:876 - Remove this note.

Overall, it's not bad. Starred :D.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. Anime Opening should not to be a tag, it contains too much, you can add other keyword about bleach to tag -->Done.
  2. hitsound sounds loud, please lower a bit -->Done.
[Shikai]
  1. 01:13:543 (2) - I'm afraid this hidden slider is hard to tell for newbie while playing -->Changed.
  2. 01:28:876 - remove clap -->Done.
[Bankai]
  1. 01:28:876 - remove clap -->Done.

CDFA wrote:

Shikai:
00:44:210 (1,2,3) - Seems too confusing for an easy mode. -->Changed.
00:48:710 (6) - Move this 4 grids to the right. -->Done.

Bankai:
Increase the circle size (<-) by 1.-->Done.
00:19:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ;-;. I don't really understand what's wrong with it, but overall, I really dislike this part. I suggest a slider :3 -->Done in most part.
01:16:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Too confusing for a normal mode D:. Good for a hard mode, though. -->Changed.

Hollow:
00:33:709 - Move this to the red tick and shorten the slider to the nearest red rick. Re-snap as neccesary. -->Done.

Hollowfication:
01:03:876 - Remove this note. -->Done.
Zekira
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Zekira
Uh, I don't like p-bubbling stuff that hasn't been modded until 15 SP, so... starring this for now since I don't find anymore problems.

...actually, tbh, I don't feel like p-bubbling just yet since I'm pretty sure this map can be better, but in terms of rankability it looks fine now.
niedz
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niedz
;)

Download: KELUN - CHU-BURA (TV Size) (Kuroneko-sHerald) [niedz's Taiko].osu
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
Nice map :)
Too bad ztrot didn't finish his diff

There's nothing wrong from what I can see except in Hollowfication the stacking sliders in 00:54:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are making this diff too easy
Why don't you give them a jump or divide it just like in 00:44:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
As for niedz taiko you can find someone who is good with combo, try PMing blissfulyoshi in game for combo help

Anyway I want to give your map a star here you go :)
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

Sallad4ever wrote:

Too bad ztrot didn't finish his diff -->I hope that he'll finish it.

There's nothing wrong from what I can see except in Hollowfication the stacking sliders in 00:54:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are making this diff too easy
Why don't you give them a jump or divide it just like in 00:44:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -->Tried to do something more difficult.
As for niedz taiko you can find someone who is good with combo, try PMing blissfulyoshi in game for combo help -->I'll do it.
Diasios
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Diasios
[Bankai]

00:51:376 (2) - Questo slider suona male :S prova a far finire lo slider su un tick rosso (cioè fallo finire un tick prima) e aggiungi una ripetizione
00:57:209 (8) - New combo

[Hollowification]

00:57:543 (5) - New combo

Non trovo niente di sbagliato nelle altre difficoltà, però le trovo parecchio noiose/lineari :|
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

xxheroxx wrote:

[Bankai]

00:51:376 (2) - Questo slider suona male :S prova a far finire lo slider su un tick rosso (cioè fallo finire un tick prima) e aggiungi una ripetizione --> Fatto.
00:57:209 (8) - New combo --> Fatto.

[Hollowification]

00:57:543 (5) - New combo --> Fatto.

Non trovo niente di sbagliato nelle altre difficoltà, però le trovo parecchio noiose/lineari :| Lo so, purtroppo sono ancora un principiante :o Vedrò di provare a fare un restyling.
Aenna
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Aenna
Source : BLEACH

nice. :)
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
orioncomet
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orioncomet
[General]
- try offset 6214 - re snap all note
- BG Colour: Black

[Shikai]
01:15:543 (3) - spacing? or new combo

[Bankai]
00:46:209 (3) - star this silder at 00:46:043 and end at 00:46:876

[Hollow]
00:14:209 - add note?
00:31:378 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - move down 1grid(lvl3)

[Hollowification]
01:28:880 (9) - sound finish at last silder like other diff xD

starrrrr ~
Kuroneko-sHerald
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orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- try offset 6214 - re snap all note -->Done.
- BG Colour: Black -->Done.

[Shikai]
01:15:543 (3) - spacing? or new combo -->New combo.

[Bankai]
00:46:209 (3) - star this silder at 00:46:043 and end at 00:46:876 -->Done.

[Hollow]
00:14:209 - add note? -->Added.
00:31:378 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - move down 1grid(lvl3) -->Done.

[Hollowification]
01:28:880 (9) - sound finish at last silder like other diff xD -->Oh, I forgot it :P Done.
LKs
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LKs
cute skin >A<
good but hitsound need advanced

Shikai
[00:12:71] No finish
[00:15:54] ^
[00:23:38] ^
[00:26:21] ^
[00:30:79] move to [00:30:71]
[01:15:54] kiai start here

Bankai
[00:12:71] No finish
[01:20:71] no clap

Hollow
[00:59:54] remove
[01:04:21] too short break,its no sence

Hollowification
[00:11:54] no finish
[00:12:20] finish
[00:13:70] no finish
[00:14:04] ^
[00:14:20] finish
[00:19:04] no finish
[00:23:37] no finish
[00:24:37] ^
[00:48:20] slider no finish
[00:48:70] finish
[01:03:20] no finish
[01:03:37] ^
[01:03:70] finish
[01:15:54] ^ and begin kiai

+star
Kuroneko-sHerald
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LKs wrote:

Shikai
[00:12:71] No finish
[00:15:54] ^
[00:23:38] ^
[00:26:21] ^
[00:30:79] move to [00:30:71]
[01:15:54] kiai start here

Bankai
[00:12:71] No finish
[01:20:71] no clap

Hollow
[00:59:54] remove
[01:04:21] too short break,its no sence --> My poor break :(

Hollowification
[00:11:54] no finish
[00:12:20] finish
[00:13:70] no finish
[00:14:04] ^
[00:14:20] finish
[00:19:04] no finish
[00:23:37] no finish
[00:24:37] ^
[00:48:20] slider no finish
[00:48:70] finish
[01:03:20] no finish
[01:03:37] ^
[01:03:70] finish
[01:15:54] ^ and begin kiai
All Done.
Last edited by Kuroneko-sHerald , edited 2 times in total.
Diasios
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Joined August 2008
Diasios
[General]

  • • Elimina il file .osb, quindi fai una "full submission"
[Bankai]

  • • 00:36:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cerca di posizionare questi cerchi seguendo una simmetria: posiziona il 3 e il 6 perfettamente a metà dello schermo, facendo in modo che gli altri cerchi formino una piramide "perfetta"
    • 00:46:043 (3) - Rendi più visibile la fine dello slider
    • 00:50:043 (1) - Cancella questo slider, e aggiungi 3 cerchi rispettivamente a 00:50:047, 00:50:380 e 00:50:547
[Hollow]

  • • 00:54:880 (1) - Separa di più la fine slider dall'inizio slider
[Hollowification]

  • • Lo spacing è un pò strano: mantieni sempre attivo il distance snap e posiziona le note sempre (o quasi lol) alla stessa distanza
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Topic Starter
Kuroneko-sHerald

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

  • • Elimina il file .osb, quindi fai una "full submission"--> Fatto.
[Bankai]

  • • 00:36:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cerca di posizionare questi cerchi seguendo una simmetria: posiziona il 3 e il 6 perfettamente a metà dello schermo, facendo in modo che gli altri cerchi formino una piramide "perfetta"     --> Fatto.
    • 00:46:043 (3) - Rendi più visibile la fine dello slider --> Fatto.
    • 00:50:043 (1) - Cancella questo slider, e aggiungi 3 cerchi rispettivamente a 00:50:047, 00:50:380 e 00:50:547--> Fatto.
[Hollow]

  • • 00:54:880 (1) - Separa di più la fine slider dall'inizio slider --> Fatto.
[Hollowification]

  • • Lo spacing è un pò strano: mantieni sempre attivo il distance snap e posiziona le note sempre (o quasi lol) alla stessa distanza --> Non me n'ero accorto :o Modificato.
Armin
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Armin
Mod request done on IRC.
Starred :D
Hikato
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Joined August 2008
Hikato
[General]
Delete the .osb if it isn't used.

[Shikai]
00:46:213 (3) - Move back 1/2 and extend 1/2 (00:46:047-00:46:880)
01:14:713 (x) - Add a beat here.
01:15:380 (x) - Add a beat here.

[Bankai]
00:16:876 (1) - Add a repeat.
00:27:542 (1) - Add a repeat.
00:51:376 (4) - Extend by 1/2.
00:56:880 (7) - Move back 1/2 and extend 1/2.

[Hollow]
00:14:380 (x) - Add a beat here.
00:16:880 (1) - Extend by 1/2.
00:24:213 (1) - Move forward 1/2 or remove.
00:36:547 (2) - Remove. (Doesn't really fit well here.)
00:44:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this. Can you think of something better?
00:54:880 (1) - Nice B you have there. Personally, I'd remove this and map it properly since it kind of breaks the flow.
01:16:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this. Can you think of something better?

[Hollowification]
Firstly, I hate small circles. I don't think it fits for any map so I suggest changing it to 3 instead. Of course it's up to you so do as you wish.
00:24:876 (3) - Move forward 1/2.
00:45:543 (3) - Add a repeat.
00:47:543 (6) - Add a repeat.
00:52:876 (7) - Remove. (Doesn't really fit well here.)
00:56:209 (3) - Add a repeat.
00:58:876 (3) - Add a repeat.
01:01:543 (x) - Add a beat here.
01:09:043 (7) - Extend by 1/2.
01:10:043 (1) - Add a repeat.
01:14:209 (6) - Move forward 1/2.
01:16:209 (1) - Add a repeat.
01:17:543 (5) - Add a repeat.
01:28:876 (9) - Extend by 1/1.

Most of these are suggestions but I feel they improve the map. Use what you think seems good.

Nice map.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Topic Starter
Kuroneko-sHerald

Hikato wrote:

[General]
Delete the .osb if it isn't used. I thought that I've already delete it :? Done.

[Shikai]
00:46:213 (3) - Move back 1/2 and extend 1/2 (00:46:047-00:46:880) Done.
01:14:713 (x) - Add a beat here. Done, but I've removed the next beat.
01:15:380 (x) - Add a beat here. Done.

[Bankai]
00:16:876 (1) - Add a repeat. Done.
00:27:542 (1) - Add a repeat. Done.
00:51:376 (4) - Extend by 1/2. Done.
00:56:880 (7) - Move back 1/2 and extend 1/2. Done.

[Hollow]
00:14:380 (x) - Add a beat here. Done.
00:16:880 (1) - Extend by 1/2. Done.
00:24:213 (1) - Move forward 1/2 or remove. Done.
00:36:547 (2) - Remove. (Doesn't really fit well here.) Done.
00:44:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this. Can you think of something better? Done, I hope.
00:54:880 (1) - Nice B you have there. Personally, I'd remove this and map it properly since it kind of breaks the flow. Done.
01:16:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this. Can you think of something better? Done, I hope.

[Hollowification]
Firstly, I hate small circles. I don't think it fits for any map so I suggest changing it to 3 instead. Of course it's up to you so do as you wish. It was asking in a previous post, so, according to my reply to that post, I change it.
00:24:876 (3) - Move forward 1/2. Done.
00:45:543 (3) - Add a repeat. Done.
00:47:543 (6) - Add a repeat. Done.
00:52:876 (7) - Remove. (Doesn't really fit well here.) Done.
00:56:209 (3) - Add a repeat. Done.
00:58:876 (3) - Add a repeat. Done.
01:01:543 (x) - Add a beat here. Done.
01:09:043 (7) - Extend by 1/2. Done.
01:10:043 (1) - Add a repeat. Done.
01:14:209 (6) - Move forward 1/2. Done.
01:16:209 (1) - Add a repeat. Done.
01:17:543 (5) - Add a repeat. Done.
01:28:876 (9) - Extend by 1/1. Done.
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
I *think* it'll appear back every time you enter the "Design" tab box thing in Editor, but I dunno...
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Sry for the very late mod.

Is the source "BLEACH" supposed to be in all caps?
Are the kiai timings not supposed to line up exactly in every diff?

Currently you have 2 different offsets in your diffs. 6,210 and 6214. Please make the diffs consistent and make sure to resnap all the notes after you make the offset change

Shikai:
Combo mod:
00:13:714 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to be consistent with 00:18:880 (1) (you could change the other 2 combo sets in the beginning if you like this current pattern better)
00:24:380 (4,1) - ^

Bankai:
Resnap all the notes in this diff. since there are a lot of notes that are not snapped

Combo mod:
00:13:709 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:19:043 (1)
00:47:543 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:58:209 (1)

Hollow:
Normal mod:
01:17:547 (3,4) - the end of 3 is at the same point in the timeline as the start of 4

Combo mod:
00:13:714 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:24:380 (1)

Hollowification:
Combo mod:
00:14:709 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:20:043 (6)

niedz's Taiko:
You might want to add combos to the diff if they ever have coop taiko.

==============================
Nice map overall. Offset seems to be the only large problem right now. Star.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kuroneko-sHerald

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Sry for the very late mod.

Is the source "BLEACH" supposed to be in all caps? Yes. [cit.] "Bleach (ブリーチ, Burīchi), Romanized as BLEACH in Japan" from Wiki
Are the kiai timings not supposed to line up exactly in every diff?

Currently you have 2 different offsets in your diffs. 6,210 and 6214. Please make the diffs consistent and make sure to resnap all the notes after you make the offset change :o I alwalys forget to change offset or BPM in a random diff when edit timing :cry:

Shikai:
Combo mod:
00:13:714 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to be consistent with 00:18:880 (1) (you could change the other 2 combo sets in the beginning if you like this current pattern better) Done.
00:24:380 (4,1) - ^ Done.

Bankai:
Resnap all the notes in this diff. since there are a lot of notes that are not snapped Done.

Combo mod:
00:13:709 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:19:043 (1) Done.
00:47:543 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:58:209 (1) Done.

Hollow:
Normal mod:
01:17:547 (3,4) - the end of 3 is at the same point in the timeline as the start of 4 Done.

Combo mod:
00:13:714 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:24:380 (1) Done.

Hollowification:
Combo mod:
00:14:709 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:20:043 (6) Done.

niedz's Taiko:
You might want to add combos to the diff if they ever have coop taiko. Done.
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Overall•
Tutto Ok.

•Hollow•
00:54:880 (1) - Farlo finire 1/4 di beat prima? Se non hai capito ecco lo SS http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6983

•Bankai•
Un pò difficilotta come normal, ti consiglio di ridurre il distance spacing oppure di allargare i circle ^-^

Tutto ok per le diff restanti~
Bella mappa~
Bella song~
Star!~
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Topic Starter
Kuroneko-sHerald

Kecco wrote:

•Hollow•
00:54:880 (1) - Farlo finire 1/4 di beat prima? Se non hai capito ecco lo SS http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6983 Ho messo 2/4 prima.

•Bankai•
Un pò difficilotta come normal, ti consiglio di ridurre il distance spacing oppure di allargare i circle ^-^ Allargo i cerchi XD
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[Hollowifacation]
0:56:876 (4) Maybe it can extend 1/2 beat more?

[Hollow]
0:16:047 (6) left/down 1 grid such that (2,4,6) forms a stright line?

[Bankai]
0:14:547 (x) Maybe add a note here?

fine enough, star~
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Topic Starter
Kuroneko-sHerald

wmfchris wrote:

[Hollowifacation]
0:56:876 (4) Maybe it can extend 1/2 beat more? Done.

[Hollow]
0:16:047 (6) left/down 1 grid such that (2,4,6) forms a stright line? Don't know how to explain it, but no.

[Bankai]
0:14:547 (x) Maybe add a note here? Don't sounds fine to me.
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