YGOkid8 wrote:

I've bugged ztrot for you. Good luck with this beatmap.

Zekira wrote:

New MP3 timing.

BPM: 180.00
Offset: 6210

Resnap everything, fix the green points, sliders, etc.

1. Anime Opening should not to be a tag, it contains too much, you can add other keyword about bleach to tag
2. hitsound sounds loud, please lower a bit

1. 01:13:543 (2) - I'm afraid this hidden slider is hard to tell for newbie while playing
2. 01:28:876 - remove clap

1. 01:28:876 - remove clap

1. notes are fine

1. notes are fine

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Anime Opening should not to be a tag, it contains too much, you can add other keyword about bleach to tag -->Done.
2. hitsound sounds loud, please lower a bit -->Done.

[Shikai]

1. 01:13:543 (2) - I'm afraid this hidden slider is hard to tell for newbie while playing -->Changed.
2. 01:28:876 - remove clap -->Done.

[Bankai]

1. 01:28:876 - remove clap -->Done.

CDFA wrote:

Shikai:
00:44:210 (1,2,3) - Seems too confusing for an easy mode. -->Changed.
00:48:710 (6) - Move this 4 grids to the right. -->Done.

Bankai:
Increase the circle size (<-) by 1.-->Done.
00:19:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ;-;. I don't really understand what's wrong with it, but overall, I really dislike this part. I suggest a slider :3 -->Done in most part.
01:16:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Too confusing for a normal mode D:. Good for a hard mode, though. -->Changed.

Hollow:
00:33:709 - Move this to the red tick and shorten the slider to the nearest red rick. Re-snap as neccesary. -->Done.

Hollowfication:
01:03:876 - Remove this note. -->Done.

Sallad4ever wrote:

Too bad ztrot didn't finish his diff -->I hope that he'll finish it.

There's nothing wrong from what I can see except in Hollowfication the stacking sliders in 00:54:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are making this diff too easy
Why don't you give them a jump or divide it just like in 00:44:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -->Tried to do something more difficult.
As for niedz taiko you can find someone who is good with combo, try PMing blissfulyoshi in game for combo help -->I'll do it.

xxheroxx wrote:

[Bankai]

00:51:376 (2) - Questo slider suona male :S prova a far finire lo slider su un tick rosso (cioè fallo finire un tick prima) e aggiungi una ripetizione --> Fatto.
00:57:209 (8) - New combo --> Fatto.

[Hollowification]

00:57:543 (5) - New combo --> Fatto.

Non trovo niente di sbagliato nelle altre difficoltà, però le trovo parecchio noiose/lineari Lo so, purtroppo sono ancora un principiante Vedrò di provare a fare un restyling.

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- try offset 6214 - re snap all note -->Done.
- BG Colour: Black -->Done.

[Shikai]
01:15:543 (3) - spacing? or new combo -->New combo.

[Bankai]
00:46:209 (3) - star this silder at 00:46:043 and end at 00:46:876 -->Done.

[Hollow]
00:14:209 - add note? -->Added.
00:31:378 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - move down 1grid(lvl3) -->Done.

[Hollowification]
01:28:880 (9) - sound finish at last silder like other diff xD -->Oh, I forgot it Done.

LKs wrote:

Shikai
[00:12:71] No finish
[00:15:54] ^
[00:23:38] ^
[00:26:21] ^
[00:30:79] move to [00:30:71]
[01:15:54] kiai start here

Bankai
[00:12:71] No finish
[01:20:71] no clap

Hollow
[00:59:54] remove
[01:04:21] too short break,its no sence --> My poor break

Hollowification
[00:11:54] no finish
[00:12:20] finish
[00:13:70] no finish
[00:14:04] ^
[00:14:20] finish
[00:19:04] no finish
[00:23:37] no finish
[00:24:37] ^
[00:48:20] slider no finish
[00:48:70] finish
[01:03:20] no finish
[01:03:37] ^
[01:03:70] finish
[01:15:54] ^ and begin kiai

• • Elimina il file .osb, quindi fai una "full submission"

• 
  • 00:36:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cerca di posizionare questi cerchi seguendo una simmetria: posiziona il 3 e il 6 perfettamente a metà dello schermo, facendo in modo che gli altri cerchi formino una piramide "perfetta"
  • 00:46:043 (3) - Rendi più visibile la fine dello slider
  • 00:50:043 (1) - Cancella questo slider, e aggiungi 3 cerchi rispettivamente a 00:50:047, 00:50:380 e 00:50:547

• • 00:54:880 (1) - Separa di più la fine slider dall'inizio slider

• • Lo spacing è un pò strano: mantieni sempre attivo il distance snap e posiziona le note sempre (o quasi lol) alla stessa distanza

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Elimina il file .osb, quindi fai una "full submission"--> Fatto.

[Bankai]

• 
  • 00:36:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cerca di posizionare questi cerchi seguendo una simmetria: posiziona il 3 e il 6 perfettamente a metà dello schermo, facendo in modo che gli altri cerchi formino una piramide "perfetta" --> Fatto.
  • 00:46:043 (3) - Rendi più visibile la fine dello slider --> Fatto.
  • 00:50:043 (1) - Cancella questo slider, e aggiungi 3 cerchi rispettivamente a 00:50:047, 00:50:380 e 00:50:547--> Fatto.

[Hollow]

• • 00:54:880 (1) - Separa di più la fine slider dall'inizio slider --> Fatto.

[Hollowification]

• • Lo spacing è un pò strano: mantieni sempre attivo il distance snap e posiziona le note sempre (o quasi lol) alla stessa distanza --> Non me n'ero accorto Modificato.

Hikato wrote:

[General]
Delete the .osb if it isn't used. I thought that I've already delete it Done.

[Shikai]
00:46:213 (3) - Move back 1/2 and extend 1/2 (00:46:047-00:46:880) Done.
01:14:713 (x) - Add a beat here. Done, but I've removed the next beat.
01:15:380 (x) - Add a beat here. Done.

[Bankai]
00:16:876 (1) - Add a repeat. Done.
00:27:542 (1) - Add a repeat. Done.
00:51:376 (4) - Extend by 1/2. Done.
00:56:880 (7) - Move back 1/2 and extend 1/2. Done.

[Hollow]
00:14:380 (x) - Add a beat here. Done.
00:16:880 (1) - Extend by 1/2. Done.
00:24:213 (1) - Move forward 1/2 or remove. Done.
00:36:547 (2) - Remove. (Doesn't really fit well here.) Done.
00:44:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this. Can you think of something better? Done, I hope.
00:54:880 (1) - Nice B you have there. Personally, I'd remove this and map it properly since it kind of breaks the flow. Done.
01:16:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this. Can you think of something better? Done, I hope.

[Hollowification]
Firstly, I hate small circles. I don't think it fits for any map so I suggest changing it to 3 instead. Of course it's up to you so do as you wish. It was asking in a previous post, so, according to my reply to that post, I change it.
00:24:876 (3) - Move forward 1/2. Done.
00:45:543 (3) - Add a repeat. Done.
00:47:543 (6) - Add a repeat. Done.
00:52:876 (7) - Remove. (Doesn't really fit well here.) Done.
00:56:209 (3) - Add a repeat. Done.
00:58:876 (3) - Add a repeat. Done.
01:01:543 (x) - Add a beat here. Done.
01:09:043 (7) - Extend by 1/2. Done.
01:10:043 (1) - Add a repeat. Done.
01:14:209 (6) - Move forward 1/2. Done.
01:16:209 (1) - Add a repeat. Done.
01:17:543 (5) - Add a repeat. Done.
01:28:876 (9) - Extend by 1/1. Done.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Sry for the very late mod.

Is the source "BLEACH" supposed to be in all caps? Yes. [cit.] "Bleach (ブリーチ, Burīchi), Romanized as BLEACH in Japan" from Wiki
Are the kiai timings not supposed to line up exactly in every diff?

Currently you have 2 different offsets in your diffs. 6,210 and 6214. Please make the diffs consistent and make sure to resnap all the notes after you make the offset change I alwalys forget to change offset or BPM in a random diff when edit timing

Shikai:
Combo mod:
00:13:714 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to be consistent with 00:18:880 (1) (you could change the other 2 combo sets in the beginning if you like this current pattern better) Done.
00:24:380 (4,1) - ^ Done.

Bankai:
Resnap all the notes in this diff. since there are a lot of notes that are not snapped Done.

Combo mod:
00:13:709 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:19:043 (1) Done.
00:47:543 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:58:209 (1) Done.

Hollow:
Normal mod:
01:17:547 (3,4) - the end of 3 is at the same point in the timeline as the start of 4 Done.

Combo mod:
00:13:714 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:24:380 (1) Done.

Hollowification:
Combo mod:
00:14:709 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:20:043 (6) Done.

niedz's Taiko:
You might want to add combos to the diff if they ever have coop taiko. Done.

Kecco wrote:

•Hollow•
00:54:880 (1) - Farlo finire 1/4 di beat prima? Se non hai capito ecco lo SS http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6983 Ho messo 2/4 prima.

•Bankai•
Un pò difficilotta come normal, ti consiglio di ridurre il distance spacing oppure di allargare i circle ^-^ Allargo i cerchi XD

wmfchris wrote:

[Hollowifacation]
0:56:876 (4) Maybe it can extend 1/2 beat more? Done.

[Hollow]
0:16:047 (6) left/down 1 grid such that (2,4,6) forms a stright line? Don't know how to explain it, but no.

[Bankai]
0:14:547 (x) Maybe add a note here? Don't sounds fine to me.

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~
[General]
Why Hitsound's volume is so low, increasing the volume, I think that makes the map better. Done.

[Shikai]
00:34:380 (x) - Add note. Done.
00:37:047 (x) - ^ Done.
01:08:214 (5) - New combo ? No, beacuse I didn't do on similar part.

[Hollowification]
00:30:709 (4) - Create a slider ? I've created also a slider at 00:30:209 (3) -

Leorda wrote:

Recheck time

[Shikai]
00:18:880 (1) - Remove new combo? No.
00:19:547 (2) - New combo? No.
00:51:380 (2) - New combo?? No.
01:08:880 (6) - New combo? It's too long for easy diff Done.
01:14:380 (x) - Add note here? Feel empty~ Done.
01:19:547 (6) - New combo? It's too long for easy diff Done.
01:19:547 (6,7,8) - The pattern.... looks mess up..... Changed.

[Hollow]
00:37:713 (5,6) - Spacing error Modified.
00:45:547 (2) - I think this object makes me confusing when I test. Place another one?? Modified.
00:51:380 (4) - New combo?? Done.
01:12:714 (3) - ^ Done.

[Bankai]
01:11:380 (4) - New combo?? Done.
01:16:213 (1) - This curve is not right, maybe add 1 point and make it perfectly?? Done.
01:16:880 (2) - ^ Done.
01:17:547 (3) - ^ Done.
01:18:213 (4) - ^ Done.
01:18:880 (5) - ^ Done.
01:23:297 (1) - Move forward to red tick Done.
01:28:713 (8,9) - Move it like this?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9412 Done.

[Hollowification]
00:19:214 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:19:547 (3)? No.

[ztrot MIX]
Would be better if this rename it to "Ztrot's Mix" ztrot doesn't have the name capitalized.
00:32:880 (8) - New combo? No.
00:40:714 (3) - ^ Done.
00:45:547 (1) - Remove new combo?? Done.

[niedz's Taiko]
01:28:713 (8,9) - According to Rokodo's Taiko Modding Guide, do not use big don in 1/2 stream Deleted one hitsound.

Good job

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
3[I]s? look at the ranking creteria
don't want to use custom colors?

[Shikai]
00:12:547 (2,3) - use a slider instead since this is Easy.
00:13:714 (1,2) - ^ and the spacing will looks better.there's still lots of 1/2 circles, i won't list them all, this is suggestion, but i think you should consider about it.
no big problems but, 102 circles and 11 sliders, i haven't seen a Easy like this before.


[Hollow]
and a Normal full of circles?
though i admit there's not something seriously wrong but i can't say i like it.

[Bankai]
00:24:880 (3) - don't just want to save time, choose the slider, press E and R, continue to the next... remove hitsounds on the slider, add them on every beats plz.
00:26:714 (7) - 1 grid up.
00:36:380 (1) - same hitsounds problem. there's more in the kiai part. don't want to list them.
still, more sliders are needed, have a look at ztrot's diff.


[Hollowfication]
main problems are same as [Bankai]

[ztrot MIX]
where's the hitsounds.

[niedz's Taiko]
fine. but too easy imo. and... ztrot MIX has a more than 400,000 score in taiko mode, and [taiko] can only get a 358,000 or about. then why this exists. i suggest make it harder, maybe 100 more combos. otherwise though it's a nice diff, but few people will really play it.

Astom wrote:

hi~

[General]
-resize combo burst, max 500 x 767

uhm only that
nice song ~ star

Dusty wrote:

weird, [Hollowification] actually seems to me more like a Hard.

I don't think star.png is needed in beatmap skins Why not?

Delete the .osb, too. Again the osb? I hate osb It goes out of thin air.

[Shikai, Hollow]
ok-ish diffs, nothing blatantly wrong but also kinda boring


[Bankai]
all right

[Hollowification]
I didn't really like how you (ab)used repeat sliders but w/e they're probably more fun if you don't suck like me. You have an higher rank than me, so you can't suck

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All DIffs~
- I see a "soft-hitclap2.wav" on the song folder, but I don't see any section with Custom Overrides enabled on any diff, are you using it? If not, please delete it and Full Submit next time you update. I've used it for a while, but later I've decided to delete it, but I forgot to do it
Skin:
- I suggest to add custom score numbers images, your scorebar image covers the first one. Not a big deal though...

~Shikai~
No problams here~

~Hollow~
00:16:880 (1,2,3) - This can be confusing, the hitburst of (9) covers the reverse arrow of the slider, and it makes it a bit hard to see, could you flip vertically this pattern? :3 Done.
00:37:380 (4) - Nazi mod: Move 1 grid down to make it symmetryc to (2) =x Done.
00:42:047 (6) - New Combo. Done.
00:50:380 (2,3) - I'd suggest to stack them. Done.

~Bankai~
00:36:380 (1,2) - Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11324 That overlap looks a bit ugly imo =x Changed.

~Hollowification~
00:16:880 (1) - Enlarge to the white tick. Done.
00:58:880 (3,4) - Flip Vertically? Done.
01:20:880 (1) - Ughhh... I'd delete this spinner but meh, it's rankable so don't mind me xD XD

~ztrot MIX~
00:50:713 (3) - Really unexpected jump and hard to see >.< Modified.
01:25:713 (5) - This repeat sounds horrible imo ;_; Modified.
01:28:713 (8,9,10,11,12) - I can't seem to understand what are you following with this, specially the slider, it just sounds weird D: It follows the guitar D:

Wow this is really old D: Good luck >o< *star*
Thaks

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Come Offset usa 6.205, è molto meglio. Ricorda di farlo in tutte le difficoltà. Fatto.

[Difficulties]

[Shikai]

00:58:214 (5) - Aggiungi una new combo qui per farlo sembrare uguale a 01:08:880 (1). Fatto.
01:26:213 (4) - Povere le mie orecchie D: Cambialo per favore. lol Fatto.

[Hollow]

01:12:714 (1) - Leva il clap nel tick blu, suona davvero male. Fatto.

[Bankai]

01:28:713 (8,9) - Vuoi proprio distruggermi i timpani, eh? Certo <_< Modificato.

[Hollowification]

00:19:047 (7) - Aggiungi la new combo qui.
00:19:214 (1) - ... E rimuovila qui. Fatto.

[ztrot MIX]

00:51:380 (1,2,3,4) - WTF? Wrong spacing. Fixato.
01:28:713 (8) - New combo. Fatto.

arken1015 wrote:

SPOILER

CHU-BURA
「BLEACH」より アニメ
太鼓の達人12 太鼓の達人12 ドーンと増量版！

orz This song is also on TnT anyway ;_;
But 6 diffs limit so?