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merchat7

Joined December 2010

merchat7 2011-08-02T11:03:42+00:00

Liking this song, Chata

but wow long song... my mod
[General]
- Delete .osb since there is no storyboard
- Add something to source & tag? The album or so forth?
- Can you keep start point and end point for all difficulties the same? For example add the spinner in the beginning to all difficulties like in [Normal] or simply remove it.
- Your breaks are inconsistent, can you map something on some of the shorter break and make the longer break the same for all difficulties?
- Maybe higher stack leniency so that your beatmap looks a bit better.
[Easy]
+ 1ar (approach rate) Fits better with the speed of the song and feels less confusing in general.
00:48:787 (3,4,5) Stack this better, turn off grid snap and distant snap and try your best. Right now it's not perfect.
Nothing else grab my attention, pretty good.
[Normal]
- Ths is the only difficulty to use 1.0 tick rate, change to 0.5?
00:52:316 (2) This is not perfectly stack with end of slider (1)
01:11:140 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
01:14:669 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
01:35:257 (1,2) ^ not perfectly stack with each other
03:16:826 (1,2) Spacing, check ai mod to see if fixed.
03:26:434 (4) This is not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:38:983 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:48:002 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:51:532 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
Consider a higher stack leniency, since some look like they aren't stack properly, but are in the editor.
[Hard]
Flows nicely, no complain about anything. I didn't check the stacking like in [Normal] through.
[Insane]
00:17:218 (2) The previous note hit burst hides the end of this slider. Rearrange?
00:39:767 (1,2,3,4) This look like a stream which is confusing, space them out properly.
00:55:061 (8,9) Please don't overlap the slider, confusing and doesn't look good imo.
00:56:434 (3) Would look nicer if you move it up more.
00:57:022 (2) ^
01:48:787 (1,2,3,4) Again, look like a stream, space them out properly.
03:29:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Don't think a stream fits here. Please change it.
03:31:924 (6) Up more, adjust the slider at 03:32:708 to new position as well
03:32:120 (7) More right
03:32:512 (9) Stack this properly to end of slider (5) at 03:31:532
03:54:767 (3.4.5.6.7,8.9) Again, don't like the stream, please change it.
Seems ok, but definitely need modding by a more experience modder.

So all in all good map, but i see lot of copy and pasting, but they didn't really annoy me. Consider making the stack leniency higher and keeping start, end and break consistence and it should be much better. Jumps need more work on Insane, but all other diffs seems fine so... Starred!

Apricot

565 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Apricot 2011-08-02T11:41:17+00:00

Thank you for modding!

almost fixed!

SPOILER

Red Color: Haven't fixed, i think they're fine? in my opinion.

merchat7 wrote:
Liking this song, Chata but wow long song... my mod
[General]
- Delete .osb since there is no storyboard
- Add something to source & tag? The album or so forth?
- Can you keep start point and end point for all difficulties the same? For example add the spinner in the beginning to all difficulties like in [Normal] or simply remove it.
- Your breaks are inconsistent, can you map something on some of the shorter break and make the longer break the same for all difficulties?
- Maybe higher stack leniency so that your beatmap looks a bit better. 7 → 8
[Easy]
+ 1ar (approach rate) Fits better with the speed of the song and feels less confusing in general.
00:48:787 (3,4,5) Stack this better, turn off grid snap and distant snap and try your best. Right now it's not perfect.
Nothing else grab my attention, pretty good.
[Normal]
- Ths is the only difficulty to use 1.0 tick rate, change to 0.5?
00:52:316 (2) This is not perfectly stack with end of slider (1)
01:11:140 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
01:14:669 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
01:35:257 (1,2) ^ not perfectly stack with each other
03:16:826 (1,2) Spacing, check ai mod to see if fixed.
03:26:434 (4) This is not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:38:983 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:48:002 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:51:532 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
Consider a higher stack leniency, since some look like they aren't stack properly, but are in the editor.
[Hard]
Flows nicely, no complain about anything. I didn't check the stacking like in [Normal] through.
[Insane]
00:17:218 (2) The previous note hit burst hides the end of this slider. Rearrange?
00:39:767 (1,2,3,4) This look like a stream which is confusing, space them out properly.
00:55:061 (8,9) Please don't overlap the slider, confusing and doesn't look good imo.
00:56:434 (3) Would look nicer if you move it up more.
00:57:022 (2) ^
01:48:787 (1,2,3,4) Again, look like a stream, space them out properly.
03:29:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Don't think a stream fits here. Please change it.
03:31:924 (6) Up more, adjust the slider at 03:32:708 to new position as well
03:32:120 (7) More right
03:32:512 (9) Stack this properly to end of slider (5) at 03:31:532
03:54:767 (3.4.5.6.7,8.9) Again, don't like the stream, please change it.
Seems ok, but definitely need modding by a more experience modder.

So all in all good map, but i see lot of copy and pasting, but they didn't really annoy me. Consider making the stack leniency higher and keeping start, end and break consistence and it should be much better. Jumps need more work on Insane, but all other diffs seems fine so... Starred!

Thite

1,043 posts

Joined April 2010

Thite 2011-08-02T16:07:26+00:00

starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!

Masana

62 posts

Joined February 2009

Masana 2011-08-02T21:02:23+00:00

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Candy_old_1

32 posts

Joined May 2011

Candy_old_1 2011-08-02T21:03:03+00:00

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Sure

4,220 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2011-08-03T09:38:18+00:00

[General]
Offset : 2904 (Based on current offset. But don't forget to resnap all notes. This offset is to fix metronome.)

[Insane]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
00:52:708 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of custom normal clap
01:01:336 (2) - Hard to see rturn arrow. Yea... It seems almost unrankable. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124304
01:11:630 (8) - Try to delete this circle. It will be more fit to music.
02:01:728 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of custom normal clap.
02:20:649 (8) - Try to delete this circle. It will be more fit to music.
02:27:022 - Add a note with finish.
03:17:022 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of clap.
03:29:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream feels like overmapped.
03:54:767 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

[Hard]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
02:27:022 (10) - Add finish
03:11:140 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
03:11:140 (1) - ^

[Easy]
01:23:885 (1) - Add finish to end of slider
02:40:355 (1) - Make shorter to 02:46:042
02:51:532 (3) - Add finish to end of slider

I smelled 'copy and paste' in many sections. They are not so good idea, because of your mapping style is based on flow.
Be that as it may, it doesn't mean 'copy and paste' is good in symmetry style.
I understand you may be bored easily with making full ver map by 4 times.
Try to make variable pattern in next map, or you're lazy. >w<
Anyway good luck~ ☆ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)

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[deleted user] 2011-08-03T10:56:42+00:00

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Apricot

565 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Apricot 2011-08-03T10:58:29+00:00

Thank you for modding!
almost fixed!
and, added some random patterns.

SPOILER

ykcarrot wrote:
[General]
Offset : 2904 (Based on current offset. But don't forget to resnap all notes. This offset is to fix metronome.)

[Insane]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
00:52:708 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of custom normal clap
01:01:336 (2) - Hard to see rturn arrow. Yea... It seems almost unrankable. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124304
01:11:630 (8) - Try to delete this circle. It will be more fit to music.
02:01:728 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of custom normal clap.
02:20:649 (8) - Try to delete this circle. It will be more fit to music.
02:27:022 - Add a note with finish.
03:17:022 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of clap.
03:29:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream feels like overmapped.
03:54:767 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

[Hard]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
02:27:022 (10) - Add finish
03:11:140 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
03:11:140 (1) - ^

[Easy]
01:23:885 (1) - Add finish to end of slider
02:40:355 (1) - Make shorter to 02:46:042
02:51:532 (3) - Add finish to end of slider

I smelled 'copy and paste' in many sections. They are not so good idea, because of your mapping style is based on flow.
Be that as it may, it doesn't mean 'copy and paste' is good in symmetry style.
I understand you may be bored easily with making full ver map by 4 times.
Try to make variable pattern in next map, or you're lazy. >w<
Anyway good luck~ ☆ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)

phonic

1,068 posts

Joined October 2010

phonic 2011-08-03T11:04:37+00:00

Staaaaaaaaaaaaar

nicemap!!

Hard

02:30:354 でスピンを 02:33:492　ｵｽｽﾒします

02:36:629 スピンを入れて 02:39:766はどうですか??

応援してます

Apricot

565 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Apricot 2011-08-03T11:12:18+00:00

Elize wrote:
Staaaaaaaaaaaaar
nicemap!!

Hard

02:30:354 でスピンを 02:33:492　ｵｽｽﾒします

02:36:629 スピンを入れて 02:39:766はどうですか??

応援してます

modありがとうございます！
02:30:354~　スピン入れました！

poisonchan

257 posts

Joined January 2010

poisonchan 2011-08-06T21:18:45+00:00

Apricot-kun :3 Modding your map as your request

Hope it helps! <3

[!] = You NEED to change.
[?] = Suggestion.
[.] = If possible, change.

General

- What about those colours as your combos ?:
(To change it, open .osu file, look at [Colours] tab and change for this code, don't forget to change in all difficulties.)

[Colours]
Combo1 : 173,148,240
Combo2 : 250,182,241
Combo3 : 138,201,232

Easy

[Easy]
00:18:983 (6) - New combo.
00:19:375 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:512 (4) - New combo.
00:23:688 - Add a beat here.
00:25:649 (7) - Try making this slider look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125298 .
00:34:277 (4) - Don't stack this note under (3) ! New combo !
00:36:630 (3) - Don't stack this note under (1) !
00:38:983 (5) - New combo.
00:41:336 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:728 (2) - New combo.
00:46:826 (1,2) - Don't stack these notes !
00:48:787 (4,5) - Don't stack these notes !
00:55:061 (3) - Don't stack this note !
00:56:238 (4) - New combo.
01:02:512 (4) - New combo.
01:07:610 (2) - Don't stack this note !
01:15:061 (4) - New combo.
01:18:786 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
01:21:335 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
01:23:688 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from 01:23:885 (1) - )
01:28:003 (6) - New combo.
01:28:395 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:31:532 (4) - New combo.
01:34:668 (8) - Try making this slider look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125297 .
01:48:002 (5) - New combo.
01:50:356 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:50:748 (2) - New combo.
01:55:846 (1,2) - Don't stack these notes !
01:57:807 (4,5) - Don't stack these notes !
02:04:081 (3) - Don't stack this note !
02:05:258 (4) - New combo.
02:11:532 (4) - New combo.
02:16:630 (2) - Don't stack this note !
02:21:336 (1) - Don't stack this note !
02:24:081 (4) - New combo.
02:27:805 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:38:198 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
02:52:511 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
03:08:786 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
03:26:826 (4) - New combo.
03:30:551 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from 03:30:748 (1) - )
03:31:924 (2,3) - 2 is touching 3, and 3 is touching 2. Change the spacing a little to improve that ?
03:39:375 (4) - New combo.
03:51:924 (4) - New combo.
03:55:649 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from03:55:846 (1) - )
03:57:022 (2) - 2 is touching 1. Change the spacing to improve that ?
04:04:473 (4) - New combo.

You have unsnapped objects in your map, to fix that: Timing > Resnap all notes.

Normal

[Normal]
00:18:591 (5) - New combo.
00:21:336 (8) - New combo.
00:22:119 - Add a beat here? (If yes, add new combo here and remove from the next note)
00:23:688 - ^ - If don't, remove new combo from 00:24:081 (1) - and fix the spacing !
00:25:256 - Add a beat here?
00:25:649 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:25:649 (1,2,3) - Don't stack 2 on 1, and 3 on 2. Makes the flow odd !
00:31:924 (2) - Don't stack this note !
00:40:551 (7) - New combo.
00:50:355 (6) - New combo.
00:50:748 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:316 (2) - Unstack this note ! New combo.
00:55:846 (4) - New combo.
00:56:238 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:56:630 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
01:05:257 (5) - New combo.
01:08:395 (4) - New combo.
01:08:787 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:179 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
01:18:786 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
01:22:512 (1) - Remove this slider ?
01:21:335 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
01:23:688 - 01:24:080 - Add beats here?
01:27:611 (5) - New combo.
01:30:356 (8) - New combo.
01:31:139 - Add a beat here?
01:33:886 (6,7) - This spacing is wrong, fix it according to the 'Distance Snap' tool, don't stack 7 with (1) !!!!
01:34:669 (1,2,3) - Unstack (1) this with (7), don't stack (2) with (1) and (3) with (2) !!
01:36:630 (4) - Move it a little, so won't touch (1). New combo !
01:39:767 (6) - Fix the spacing.
01:40:944 (2) - Don't stack (2) on (1).
01:49:571 (8) - New combo.
01:59:375 (6) - New combo.
01:59:768 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:01:336 (2) - Unstack this note ! New combo.
02:04:865 (4) - New combo.
02:05:256 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:05:650 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
02:14:277 (5) - New combo.
02:17:414 (4) - New combo.
02:17:807 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:18:199 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
02:27:805 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:32:315 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
02:37:021 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:43:296 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
03:20:159 (4) - New combo.
03:20:944 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:29:571 (5) - New combo.
03:32:708 (4) - New combo.
03:33:492 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:42:903 (6) - New combo.
03:43:296 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:45:649 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:46:041 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:54:668 (5) - New combo.
03:57:806 (4) - New combo.
03:58:590 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?

You have unsnapped objects in your map, to fix that: Timing > Resnap all notes.

Uguu ;_; I don't have time to mod Hard and Insane today, but I will as soon as possible >3< Sorry! I mod it tomorrow!

Apricot

565 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Apricot 2011-08-07T08:10:34+00:00

All of new combo and stacks are fixed!
it helps me very well! Thank you pchan

SPOILER

poisonchan wrote:
General

- What about those colours as your combos ?:
(To change it, open .osu file, look at [Colours] tab and change for this code, don't forget to change in all difficulties.)

[Colours]
Combo1 : 173,148,240
Combo2 : 250,182,241
Combo3 : 138,201,232
Easy
[Easy]
00:18:983 (6) - New combo.
00:19:375 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:512 (4) - New combo.
00:23:688 - Add a beat here.
00:25:649 (7) - Try making this slider look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125298 .
00:34:277 (4) - Don't stack this note under (3) ! New combo !
00:36:630 (3) - Don't stack this note under (1) !
00:38:983 (5) - New combo.
00:41:336 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:728 (2) - New combo.
00:46:826 (1,2) - Don't stack these notes !
00:48:787 (4,5) - Don't stack these notes !
00:55:061 (3) - Don't stack this note !
00:56:238 (4) - New combo.
01:02:512 (4) - New combo.
01:07:610 (2) - Don't stack this note !
01:15:061 (4) - New combo.
01:18:786 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
01:21:335 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
01:23:688 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from 01:23:885 (1) - )
01:28:003 (6) - New combo.
01:28:395 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:31:532 (4) - New combo.
01:34:668 (8) - Try making this slider look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125297 .
01:48:002 (5) - New combo.
01:50:356 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:50:748 (2) - New combo.
01:55:846 (1,2) - Don't stack these notes !
01:57:807 (4,5) - Don't stack these notes !
02:04:081 (3) - Don't stack this note !
02:05:258 (4) - New combo.
02:11:532 (4) - New combo.
02:16:630 (2) - Don't stack this note !
02:21:336 (1) - Don't stack this note !
02:24:081 (4) - New combo.
02:27:805 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:38:198 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
02:52:511 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
03:08:786 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
03:26:826 (4) - New combo.
03:30:551 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from 03:30:748 (1) - )
03:31:924 (2,3) - 2 is touching 3, and 3 is touching 2. Change the spacing a little to improve that ?
03:39:375 (4) - New combo.
03:51:924 (4) - New combo.
03:55:649 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from03:55:846 (1) - )
03:57:022 (2) - 2 is touching 1. Change the spacing to improve that ?
04:04:473 (4) - New combo.

You have unsnapped objects in your map, to fix that: Timing > Resnap all notes.

Normal
[Normal]
00:18:591 (5) - New combo.
00:21:336 (8) - New combo.
00:22:119 - Add a beat here? (If yes, add new combo here and remove from the next note)
00:23:688 - ^ - If don't, remove new combo from 00:24:081 (1) - and fix the spacing !
00:25:256 - Add a beat here?
00:25:649 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:25:649 (1,2,3) - Don't stack 2 on 1, and 3 on 2. Makes the flow odd !
00:31:924 (2) - Don't stack this note !
00:40:551 (7) - New combo.
00:50:355 (6) - New combo.
00:50:748 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:316 (2) - Unstack this note ! New combo.
00:55:846 (4) - New combo.
00:56:238 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:56:630 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
01:05:257 (5) - New combo.
01:08:395 (4) - New combo.
01:08:787 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:179 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
01:18:786 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
01:22:512 (1) - Remove this slider ?
01:21:335 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
01:23:688 - 01:24:080 - Add beats here?
01:27:611 (5) - New combo.
01:30:356 (8) - New combo.
01:31:139 - Add a beat here?
01:33:886 (6,7) - This spacing is wrong, fix it according to the 'Distance Snap' tool, don't stack 7 with (1) !!!!
01:34:669 (1,2,3) - Unstack (1) this with (7), don't stack (2) with (1) and (3) with (2) !!
01:36:630 (4) - Move it a little, so won't touch (1). New combo !
01:39:767 (6) - Fix the spacing.
01:40:944 (2) - Don't stack (2) on (1).
01:49:571 (8) - New combo.
01:59:375 (6) - New combo.
01:59:768 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:01:336 (2) - Unstack this note ! New combo.
02:04:865 (4) - New combo.
02:05:256 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:05:650 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
02:14:277 (5) - New combo.
02:17:414 (4) - New combo.
02:17:807 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:18:199 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
02:27:805 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:32:315 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
02:37:021 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:43:296 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
03:20:159 (4) - New combo.
03:20:944 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:29:571 (5) - New combo.
03:32:708 (4) - New combo.
03:33:492 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:42:903 (6) - New combo.
03:43:296 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:45:649 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:46:041 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:54:668 (5) - New combo.
03:57:806 (4) - New combo.
03:58:590 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?

You have unsnapped objects in your map, to fix that: Timing > Resnap all notes.

Uguu ;_; I don't have time to mod Hard and Insane today, but I will as soon as possible >3< Sorry! I mod it tomorrow!

AisamaDX

211 posts

Joined November 2009

AisamaDX 2011-08-07T08:40:48+00:00

かみ　Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

Peace_old_1

83 posts

Joined May 2011

Peace_old_1 2011-08-08T13:01:02+00:00

えっちねぃｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ1star~

Mercurius

Former osu! Champion: 2014

501 posts

Joined November 2010

Mercurius 2011-08-09T22:46:30+00:00

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

Suzully

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2,446 posts

Joined July 2010

Suzully 2011-08-10T07:26:11+00:00

sirokuro123

sirokuro123 2011-08-10T08:19:39+00:00

this song & map is nice

star!!

Let's hold out mutually

swish

1,194 posts

Joined February 2009

swish 2011-08-11T10:00:13+00:00

茶太

nimba_old

101 posts

Joined May 2010

nimba_old 2011-08-13T19:13:20+00:00

ちゃったちゃった
ちゃったちゃった
ちゃったちゃった

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2011-08-14T01:27:30+00:00

[General]
I'm afraid they'll say slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable now (it's unrankable because it's unrankable rofl), anyway take care of it and ready for a solution. (1 may still fit...well)
Copy&Paste whole patterns is a bad habit = =|||

[Easy]
00:25:649 (4) - try to make it don't have a stack part with other notes~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130228 (meh my slider drawing skill is not that good either)
00:47:609 (3) - finish at the end instead of clap?
01:34:668 (5) - same as 00:25:649 (4)
01:54:276 (4) - change the direction slightly?

02:40:354 (1) - seems like just a spinner in a long break...= = a little strange, also lower the volume if possible because this part is really quiet.
03:20:551 (4) - new combo
03:58:198 (4) - ^

[Normal]
AR+1
00:55:845 (1,2,3) - i'll say better not to use this kind of placements in a Normal diff (or say anything below Hard), would be a little confusing.
01:08:394 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:492 (3,4) - similar here. maybe just remove 4
02:04:864 (1,2,3) - = =|||
02:17:413 (1,2,3) - ^
02:50:354 (1,2,3) - how about?

03:20:551 (2,3) - ~~~= =|||
03:26:433 (4,2) - the reverse arrow is not really hidden, but still may be too confusing to average/newbie players, reconsider it?
03:33:100 (2,3) - ._.
03:37:805 (3,4) - again i think this is not fit.
03:40:158 (2) - slider reverse arrow thing again.
03:45:256 (1,2,3) - o.o
03:51:531 (4,2) - i'll say no...
03:58:198 (2,3) - = =

[Hard]
01:30:354 (9) - miss a clap at the beginning?
01:44:080 (1,2) - make the spacing farther = =
02:36:629 - i suggest you to map this break... it's really a consistent part with 02:27:805 - 02:36:629 imo.

[Insane]
01:11:727 (8,9,1,2,3) - not a fan of placements like this (because "no move" fits really few situations imo...)
03:46:041 (4,1,2,3,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130240 www

Insane and Hard have a better quality than the easier diffs... = =||| star.

Apricot

565 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Apricot 2011-08-14T03:46:01+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
SPOILER
[General]
I'm afraid they'll say slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable now (it's unrankable because it's unrankable rofl), anyway take care of it and ready for a solution. (1 may still fit...well)
Copy&Paste whole patterns is a bad habit = =|||

[Easy]
00:25:649 (4) - try to make it don't have a stack part with other notes~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130228 (meh my slider drawing skill is not that good either)
00:47:609 (3) - finish at the end instead of clap?
01:34:668 (5) - same as 00:25:649 (4)
01:54:276 (4) - change the direction slightly?
[attachment=1:594f4]134.png[/attachment:594f4]
02:40:354 (1) - seems like just a spinner in a long break...= = a little strange, also lower the volume if possible because this part is really quiet.
03:20:551 (4) - new combo
03:58:198 (4) - ^

[Normal]
AR+1
00:55:845 (1,2,3) - i'll say better not to use this kind of placements in a Normal diff (or say anything below Hard), would be a little confusing.
01:08:394 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:492 (3,4) - similar here. maybe just remove 4
02:04:864 (1,2,3) - = =|||
02:17:413 (1,2,3) - ^
02:50:354 (1,2,3) - how about?
[attachment=0:594f4]135.png[/attachment:594f4]
03:20:551 (2,3) - ~~~= =|||
03:26:433 (4,2) - the reverse arrow is not really hidden, but still may be too confusing to average/newbie players, reconsider it?
03:33:100 (2,3) - ._.
03:37:805 (3,4) - again i think this is not fit.
03:40:158 (2) - slider reverse arrow thing again.
03:45:256 (1,2,3) - o.o
03:51:531 (4,2) - i'll say no...
03:58:198 (2,3) - = =

[Hard]
01:30:354 (9) - miss a clap at the beginning?
01:44:080 (1,2) - make the spacing farther = =
02:36:629 - i suggest you to map this break... it's really a consistent part with 02:27:805 - 02:36:629 imo.

[Insane]
01:11:727 (8,9,1,2,3) - not a fan of placements like this (because "no move" fits really few situations imo...)
03:46:041 (4,1,2,3,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130240 www

Insane and Hard have a better quality than the easier diffs... = =||| star.

thank you NatsumeRin. <3
ALL Fixed!

m i z u k i

418 posts

Joined February 2010

m i z u k i 2011-08-16T06:04:17+00:00

Apricot

565 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Apricot 2011-08-16T06:34:19+00:00

modありでつ

m i z u k i wrote:
SPOILER
いーじーとのーまるが完璧ですめんどくｓかったからやらなかったわけじゃないです
コピペのところも直してくださいでもべつになおさなくてもいいです提案です
ひっとさうんどにかんしてはぬーぶなのでもっど出来ないです

[Hard]
insaneでmodしたすぴんをはーどでも直してみてください
00:25:060 (7) - New combo
00:25:256 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:668 - のーとひとつほしい
00:38:786 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:38:982 (4) - New combo No.
01:02:315 (1) - Remove new combo
01:02:511 (3) - New combo
01:04:080 (5) - New combo
01:04:668 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:649 (7) - New combo
01:06:237 (1) - Remove new combo
01:14:864 (1) - Remove new combo
01:15:060 (3) - New combo
01:18:198 - おとほしいです
02:11:335 (1) - Remove new combo
02:11:531 (3) - にゅーｋんぼ
02:49:570 - この辺になにかしら音がほしい
04:07:609 - のーとください

[Insane]
00:39:766 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:40:551 (5) - New combo No.
01:18:198 - ここに一つノート置いてもいいと思います
02:30:256 (1) - ここからすぴんのほうがいいかもしれないです
02:36:531 (1) - ここも上とおなじ
02:42:805 (1) - ここも
02:49:080 (1) - こ
03:31:531 (1) - にゅーこんぼ
03:42:511 - 音ほしいです
03:54:080 - http://gyazo.com/b14e46dfa394e0d6385ccc051acae1e3　この音のとり方どうでしょうか
もしくは03:55:060 - ここからすらいだーにする
03:55:060 - にゅーこんぼ No.
04:03:492 (1) - Remove new combo No.
04:07:609 - のーといっこほしい

kioukiou

774 posts

Joined June 2008

kioukiou 2011-08-17T18:55:15+00:00

Nothing major problem i can find.
Btw,I love this song . @@

Apricot

565 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Apricot 2011-08-17T18:57:45+00:00

some new combo mod by kioukiou~~
thank you! ヾ(o･ω･)ﾉﾟ

Peace_old_1

83 posts

Joined May 2011

Peace_old_1 2011-08-29T09:54:17+00:00

[Insane]
00:38:786 (1) - RNC
00:39:766 (1) - NC
02:24:080 (5) - DS(＾＾)

[Hard]
00:35:060 (1) - 形が綺麗ではないかも？

[Normal]
fine!

[Easy]
fine!

Astom

1,588 posts

Joined October 2008

Astom 2011-10-01T09:47:31+00:00

o/

[General]

Finish kiai time here 02:27:021 in all diff.
Timing points are 1ms unsnaped, so resnap them (yea I know it's silly but anyway someone will point it to you later so fix it now).

[Easy]
Suggestions:

00:38:982 (1) sounds out of place, I suggest delete it and add a circle in 00:38:982, then a slider from 00:39:374 to 00:39:766 with one repetition and finally a slider from 00:40:551 to 00:41:335, like this
SPOILER
01:34:276 (1) - delete this spinner, don't fits really well the song, so change it for a circle in 01:34:276, a slider from 01:34:668 to 01:35:453, then add another slider from 01:35:845 to 01:36:433 with one repetition (delete circle in 01:37:021) like this
SPOILER
02:26:433 (3) - delete a repeat in this slider and finish it in 02:27:021 (add finish at end) like this:
SPOILER

Next are hitsounds suggestions, just do them if you like them

01:23:884 (1) - finish at the end of this slider.
01:24:864 (2) - add clap
01:26:433 (4) - -^
01:28:002 (1) - -^
01:25:256 (3) - remove clap at beginning of this slider
01:26:825 (5) - -^
01:28:394 (2) - remove clap at beginning of this slider and add it at end of it.
01:29:178 (3) - -^
01:29:962 (4) - change clap for whistle.
01:55:845 (1) - add whistle
03:11:139 (1) - finish at beginning of this slider.
03:17:021 (1) - clap at beginning of this slider.

[Normal]
Suggestions:

02:26:433 (4) - make it a little more longe and finish it in 02:27:021, remove finish at beggining and add it at end, like this:
SPOILER

[Hard]
Hitsounds suggestions, just do them if you like them

Move this timing point 02:27:707 to 02:27:609, and lower volume to 50%
02:28:394 (2) - add clap at beginning of this slider.
02:29:178 (4) - add clap.
02:29:962 (6) - -^
03:11:139 (1) - add finish.
03:14:668 (2) - clap instead of finish, too much finish together don't sound pretty well.

[Thoughts/Opinions]

You swap your claps placement from |x|o|x|o|x| to |o|x|o|x|o| in easy, sometimes sounds good and other times you can clearly heard drum sounding like |x|o|x|o|x| (circles are claps) so sounds a little strange, but I don't think than someone is going to miss for that, just to point it, other diff are fine because have more circles so is less noticeable.
Totally luv your insane diff. was pretty fun.

Nice map, I totally love chata's songs and your map is pretty good.
Good luck.

ET sc2

28 posts

Joined August 2010

ET sc2 2011-10-22T12:46:59+00:00

quite nice map!
http://hiphotos.baidu.com/etsc2/pic/item/605f2eb036c4b38730add1db.jpg

Although I lost many combo at the first time~

Breeze

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Breeze 2011-11-03T14:08:15+00:00

Easy

02:52:315 - 03:10:943 - I feel this break is kinda long, try map this part? Since there is already a break at 02:27:413 - 02:40:158, just 12s ago
Notes are all fine, just some finish sound I feel move 1/2 beat backward seems better
1. 01:05:256 (3)
2. 02:14:276 (3)
3. 03:42:119 (3)
02:38:198 - I found you used 60% volume in other diff. at this part, use 60% to make hitsound accordance?

Normal

01:22:904 - Drag break to here?
03:12:315 (2), 03:13:100 (3), 03:13:884 (4) - Add clap?

Hard

02:10:551 (6) - This spacing looked a bit far, it's playable, just spacing far more than other tiny jumps

Insane

01:49:570 (5) - Finish instead of clap seems better?
02:01:923 (2) - Remove finish here, add finish to 02:02:119 (2)
02:06:237 (3) - I think this slider doesn't fit this song here
03:29:962 (5) - Add finish, remove finish of 03:30:354 (1)

nice map in all
let me know when you have any reply

Apricot

565 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Apricot 2011-11-03T18:43:27+00:00

Breeze wrote:
Easy
02:52:315 - 03:10:943 - I feel this break is kinda long, try map this part? Since there is already a break at 02:27:413 - 02:40:158, just 12s ago fixed!
Notes are all fine, just some finish sound I feel move 1/2 beat backward seems better fixed!
01:05:256 (3)
02:14:276 (3)
03:42:119 (3)
02:38:198 - I found you used 60% volume in other diff. at this part, use 60% to make hitsound accordance? fixed!

Normal
01:22:904 - Drag break to here? fixed!
03:12:315 (2), 03:13:100 (3), 03:13:884 (4) - Add clap? fixed!

Hard
02:10:551 (6) - This spacing looked a bit far, it's playable, just spacing far more than other tiny jumps fixed!

Insane
01:49:570 (5) - Finish instead of clap seems better? fixed!
02:01:923 (2) - Remove finish here, add finish to 02:02:119 (2) It's fine imo. I'll keep it.
02:06:237 (3) - I think this slider doesn't fit this song here fixed!
03:29:962 (5) - Add finish, remove finish of 03:30:354 (1) fixed!

thank you for mod!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!