NatsumeRin wrote:

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[General]
I'm afraid they'll say slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable now (it's unrankable because it's unrankable rofl), anyway take care of it and ready for a solution. (1 may still fit...well)
Copy&Paste whole patterns is a bad habit = =|||

[Easy]
00:25:649 (4) - try to make it don't have a stack part with other notes~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130228 (meh my slider drawing skill is not that good either)
00:47:609 (3) - finish at the end instead of clap?
01:34:668 (5) - same as 00:25:649 (4)
01:54:276 (4) - change the direction slightly?
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02:40:354 (1) - seems like just a spinner in a long break...= = a little strange, also lower the volume if possible because this part is really quiet.
03:20:551 (4) - new combo
03:58:198 (4) - ^

[Normal]
AR+1
00:55:845 (1,2,3) - i'll say better not to use this kind of placements in a Normal diff (or say anything below Hard), would be a little confusing.
01:08:394 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:492 (3,4) - similar here. maybe just remove 4
02:04:864 (1,2,3) - = =|||
02:17:413 (1,2,3) - ^
02:50:354 (1,2,3) - how about?
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03:20:551 (2,3) - ~~~= =|||
03:26:433 (4,2) - the reverse arrow is not really hidden, but still may be too confusing to average/newbie players, reconsider it?
03:33:100 (2,3) - ._.
03:37:805 (3,4) - again i think this is not fit.
03:40:158 (2) - slider reverse arrow thing again.
03:45:256 (1,2,3) - o.o
03:51:531 (4,2) - i'll say no...
03:58:198 (2,3) - = =

[Hard]
01:30:354 (9) - miss a clap at the beginning?
01:44:080 (1,2) - make the spacing farther = =
02:36:629 - i suggest you to map this break... it's really a consistent part with 02:27:805 - 02:36:629 imo.

[Insane]
01:11:727 (8,9,1,2,3) - not a fan of placements like this (because "no move" fits really few situations imo...)
03:46:041 (4,1,2,3,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130240 www

Insane and Hard have a better quality than the easier diffs... = =||| star.

thank you NatsumeRin. <3
ALL Fixed!

m i z u k i wrote:

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いーじーとのーまるが完璧ですめんどくｓかったからやらなかったわけじゃないです
コピペのところも直してくださいでもべつになおさなくてもいいです提案です
ひっとさうんどにかんしてはぬーぶなのでもっど出来ないです

[Hard]
insaneでmodしたすぴんをはーどでも直してみてください
00:25:060 (7) - New combo
00:25:256 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:668 - のーとひとつほしい
00:38:786 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:38:982 (4) - New combo No.
01:02:315 (1) - Remove new combo
01:02:511 (3) - New combo
01:04:080 (5) - New combo
01:04:668 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:649 (7) - New combo
01:06:237 (1) - Remove new combo
01:14:864 (1) - Remove new combo
01:15:060 (3) - New combo
01:18:198 - おとほしいです
02:11:335 (1) - Remove new combo
02:11:531 (3) - にゅーｋんぼ
02:49:570 - この辺になにかしら音がほしい
04:07:609 - のーとください

[Insane]
00:39:766 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:40:551 (5) - New combo No.
01:18:198 - ここに一つノート置いてもいいと思います
02:30:256 (1) - ここからすぴんのほうがいいかもしれないです
02:36:531 (1) - ここも上とおなじ
02:42:805 (1) - ここも
02:49:080 (1) - こ
03:31:531 (1) - にゅーこんぼ
03:42:511 - 音ほしいです
03:54:080 - http://gyazo.com/b14e46dfa394e0d6385ccc051acae1e3　この音のとり方どうでしょうか
もしくは03:55:060 - ここからすらいだーにする
03:55:060 - にゅーこんぼ No.
04:03:492 (1) - Remove new combo No.
04:07:609 - のーといっこほしい

1. Finish kiai time here 02:27:021 in all diff.
2. Timing points are 1ms unsnaped, so resnap them (yea I know it's silly but anyway someone will point it to you later so fix it now).

1. 00:38:982 (1) sounds out of place, I suggest delete it and add a circle in 00:38:982, then a slider from 00:39:374 to 00:39:766 with one repetition and finally a slider from 00:40:551 to 00:41:335, like this
   
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2. 01:34:276 (1) - delete this spinner, don't fits really well the song, so change it for a circle in 01:34:276, a slider from 01:34:668 to 01:35:453, then add another slider from 01:35:845 to 01:36:433 with one repetition (delete circle in 01:37:021) like this
   
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3. 02:26:433 (3) - delete a repeat in this slider and finish it in 02:27:021 (add finish at end) like this:
   
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1. 01:23:884 (1) - finish at the end of this slider.
2. 01:24:864 (2) - add clap
3. 01:26:433 (4) - -^
4. 01:28:002 (1) - -^
5. 01:25:256 (3) - remove clap at beginning of this slider
6. 01:26:825 (5) - -^
7. 01:28:394 (2) - remove clap at beginning of this slider and add it at end of it.
8. 01:29:178 (3) - -^
9. 01:29:962 (4) - change clap for whistle.
10. 01:55:845 (1) - add whistle
11. 03:11:139 (1) - finish at beginning of this slider.
12. 03:17:021 (1) - clap at beginning of this slider.

1. 02:26:433 (4) - make it a little more longe and finish it in 02:27:021, remove finish at beggining and add it at end, like this:
   
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1. Move this timing point 02:27:707 to 02:27:609, and lower volume to 50%
2. 02:28:394 (2) - add clap at beginning of this slider.
3. 02:29:178 (4) - add clap.
4. 02:29:962 (6) - -^
5. 03:11:139 (1) - add finish.
6. 03:14:668 (2) - clap instead of finish, too much finish together don't sound pretty well.

1. You swap your claps placement from |x|o|x|o|x| to |o|x|o|x|o| in easy, sometimes sounds good and other times you can clearly heard drum sounding like |x|o|x|o|x| (circles are claps) so sounds a little strange, but I don't think than someone is going to miss for that, just to point it, other diff are fine because have more circles so is less noticeable.
2. Totally luv your insane diff. was pretty fun.

Breeze wrote:

Easy

1. 02:52:315 - 03:10:943 - I feel this break is kinda long, try map this part? Since there is already a break at 02:27:413 - 02:40:158, just 12s ago fixed!
2. Notes are all fine, just some finish sound I feel move 1/2 beat backward seems better fixed!
   
   1. 01:05:256 (3)
   2. 02:14:276 (3)
   3. 03:42:119 (3)
3. 02:38:198 - I found you used 60% volume in other diff. at this part, use 60% to make hitsound accordance? fixed!

Normal

1. 01:22:904 - Drag break to here? fixed!
2. 03:12:315 (2), 03:13:100 (3), 03:13:884 (4) - Add clap? fixed!

Hard

1. 02:10:551 (6) - This spacing looked a bit far, it's playable, just spacing far more than other tiny jumps fixed!

Insane

1. 01:49:570 (5) - Finish instead of clap seems better? fixed!
2. 02:01:923 (2) - Remove finish here, add finish to 02:02:119 (2) It's fine imo. I'll keep it.
3. 02:06:237 (3) - I think this slider doesn't fit this song here fixed!
4. 03:29:962 (5) - Add finish, remove finish of 03:30:354 (1) fixed!

Natteke wrote:

Omedetou, Apricotttto :3