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Chata - see-saw!! (Short Ver.)

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Astom
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Uhm some suggestions

[General]
-Start kiai in 01:04:797 like holy's diff

[Hinacle]
-00:09:497 (1,2,3,4) - 1/3? in other diff are 1/4, actually that circles are 1/1 not 1/4 due to music rythm and sound of drump but due to voice are 1/4, I'm not sure what to say in this situation but probably is better use a slider like in easy.

[Insane]
-00:04:797 (2) - finish at start instead of whistle. (with reduction of volume)
-00:07:197 (1) - finish (with reduction of volume)
-00:09:522 (1) - -^
-00:35:397 (1,2,3,4) - finish instead of clap in (3) and delete (4) ? (also fix their position)
-00:44:997 (1,2,3,4) - -^
-00:40:497 (5) - finish at end
-00:50:397 (1) - finish instead of whistle at start
-01:04:797 (1) - finish at start
-01:14:397 (1) - -^
-01:28:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't think than that circles and claps suit music at all, I think than something like hinacle's diff suits better.
-01:38:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - -^
-01:38:397 (7) - finish instead of clap
Topic Starter
merchat7
Sakura Hana
SPOILER

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Skin]
Fun fact, you need to make that spinner circle less transparent (more opaque) because it's barely visible Increased to 75% opacity, should be a lot more noticeable now
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/131364 Hey it's a pink note!
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/131366 Hey it's a pink approach circle! there must be a note behind the hitb-- OH F ITS A SPINNE- damn missed ;_;

[General]
Two of your diffs are missing the 2nd offset red line, more specifically your guest ones
Actually i dont think you need the 2nd red line due to v
I dont think this is a 3/4 timing signature song. k, removed
Combo color 3 and 4 are very similar i recommend you swap your colors around by editing the .osu file. Switched combo color 2 and 3
Kiai should start here: 01:04:797 - Since the previous kiai section is the build up to the chorus, so it makes no sense to start kiai earlier (hoLysoup got it right \o/) Changed for my diffs and hinacle

[Insane]
01:01:197 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I seriously disagree with this, is it even following the song? o.o in either case it's a bit too much. The song + video suddenly get faster here and i wanted to represent that with the stream and also to lead in to the kiai time. It's not really following the vocal properly so, changed so that it does.
You spam claps for a large portion of the map, i recommend you go with claps on 2 and 4 instead. Reduced clap for 01:23:997 - 01:40:497. Don't think i used clap anywhere else except for the part at the beginning.
01:50:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I disagree with this too sorry ._. for the same reasons as the other one. Meh, i give up mapping this part. Replaced with spinner.

[Easy]
Ehh, dont use slider speed changes on the easiest diff, that's about it. Fixed, but use 0.8x distant snapping rather than 1.0x snapping instead. 1.0x snapping spaced out the sliders a bit too much.

Also i dont know why but that video is lagging a lot (even tho i got a strong computer) i recommend you re-encode it or something, Good Luck!~ Will try reencoding, but i don't know why it is lagging in the first place through. I used x264 to encode the video.
Astom
SPOILER

Astom wrote:

o/
Uhm some suggestions

[General]
-Start kiai in 01:04:797 like holy's diff Fixed in Sakura Hana's mod.

[Insane]
-00:04:797 (2) - finish at start instead of whistle. (with reduction of volume) k, 40% volume
-00:07:197 (1) - finish (with reduction of volume) ^
-00:09:522 (1) - -^ ^
-00:35:397 (1,2,3,4) - finish instead of clap in (3) and delete (4) ? (also fix their position) Done, changed 3 to slider
-00:44:997 (1,2,3,4) - -^ ^
-00:40:497 (5) - finish at end Done
-00:50:397 (1) - finish instead of whistle at start Done
-01:04:797 (1) - finish at start Done
-01:14:397 (1) - -^ ^
-01:28:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't think than that circles and claps suit music at all, I think than something like hinacle's diff suits better. Imo, it fit well with how she is singing and since this is an Insane, i want to follow how she is singing as accurately as possible.
-01:38:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - -^ ^
-01:38:397 (7) - finish instead of clap clap feel better with current pattern

Ty for mods

Hinacle wrote:

00:09:497 (1,2,3,4) - These go on 1/4 snap.Done.
Wasn't fixed on the one that i downloaded, so i fixed this for you.
KayeSara
As your mod4mod on my queue~
Time for modding~All of them just a suggestion.
[General]
Nothing


[Easy]
  1. All of my spinner suggestion is what the mat think, even I do nt think so. That's bloody ignorable issue.
  2. 00:28:797 (1) - spin is too hard for easy that appear fastly. Remove it from 00:28:947 to 00:31:197.
  3. 00:59:997 (3) - Remove it, it does't fit the rhythm just in my opinion. Add a reverse slider, from 00:59:997 to 01:00:597 (01:00:297 should be the reverse time
  4. 01:00:897 - Add a note
  5. 01:01:197 (1) - As I said before, too fast, then make it from 01:01:347 to 01:02:997
  6. 01:21:897 (1) - ^
  7. 01:40:797 (1) - ^
  8. 01:45:597 (1) - ^
    That's all~

[hoLysoup's Normal]
  1. Overlapping this not a big problem, just for some mat don't like it. Anyway, change it will makes it nicer.
  2. 00:22:197 (2) - overlap the 00:22:797 (3)
  3. 01:14:097 (2) - ^
  4. 01:24:297 (1) - let this slider on 01:23:997, add a note on 01:24:597 (Actually, you can do as your style, but you should keep the same rhythm as you do. Just like 01:04:797 (1)
  5. 01:33:897 (1) - Remove, add a slider from 01:33:597 to 01:33:897
  6. 01:34:797 (3) - overlap
  7. All of them just a suggestion

[Hinacle]
  1. 00:36:797 (4,5) - Actually, I don't feel fit for rhythm, making a note on 00:36:747, add a slider from 00:36:897 to 00:37:147.
  2. 00:41:547 (4) - Same as 00:36:797, OK, just remove it, add a slider from 00:41:597 to 00:41:897 and reverse to 00:42:197.
  3. All of them just a suggestion

[Insane]
  1. 00:50:397 (1) - if make slider velocity 0.5X maybe better? (Same as 00:51:597 (1) and 00:52:797 (1) )
  2. 01:09:147 (1,2) - Making a slider instead of it or you can overlap those notes...just feel beeter :) becasuse too much 1/6 beat snap divisor is hard to catch the rhythm.
  3. 01:09:747 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:40:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - A little slow... add note in the middle of them?
    Again, all of it are just suggestion, just keep your own mind ;)

Good Luck~
pieguyn
Easy:

00:09:597 (1,2) - Should be 1/3 later...also, remove the whistle from the body of (1)?
00:26:297 (4) - New combo?

hoLysoup's Nomal:

01:27:597 (4) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider?
01:38:297 (4) - New combo?

Hinacle:

00:36:797 (4) - This should end 1/6 earlier
00:46:097 (1) - ^
01:11:397 (3) - This should end 1/6 later
01:13:397 (7) - End it 1/6 earlier?

Insane:

00:09:522 (1,2,3) - These should be 1/3 later
00:31:697 (1) - Should be 1/6 later
00:32:547 (5) - ^
00:38:997 (6) - Should end 1/6 later
00:41:247 (1) - Should be 1/6 later
00:41:597 (3) - Should end 1/6 earlier
00:42:147 (5) - Should be 1/6 later
00:42:297 (6) - Should end 1/6 later
00:49:097 (7) - Perhaps end this 1/3 later?
01:01:797 (3,4) - Space these farther out? I keep thinking these are 1/2s :?
01:10:697 (3) - End it 1/3 earlier?
01:11:547 (2) - Move it 1/6 later
01:13:147 (3) - End it 1/3 later?
01:17:897 (4) - End it 1/3 earlier?
01:19:097 (3) - End it 1/6 earlier
01:19:697 (3) - ^
01:20:297 (3) - ^
01:26:397 (4) - New combo? (If you do, please remove the NC from 01:27:297 (1) and add one on 01:27:597 (2))

Nice map~ :)
Topic Starter
merchat7
KayeSara
SPOILER

KayeSara wrote:

As your mod4mod on my queue~
Time for modding~All of them just a suggestion.
[General]
Nothing


[Easy]
  1. All of my spinner suggestion is what the mat think, even I do nt think so. That's bloody ignorable issue.
  2. 00:28:797 (1) - spin is too hard for easy that appear fastly. Remove it from 00:28:947 to 00:31:197. This should be fine, auto can get 12k point and i can clear this even if i spin at 150-200 spins per minute.
  3. 00:59:997 (3) - Remove it, it does't fit the rhythm just in my opinion. Add a reverse slider, from 00:59:997 to 01:00:597 (01:00:297 should be the reverse time Done, adjusted spinner
  4. 01:00:897 - Add a note Made spinner start here instead
  5. 01:01:197 (1) - As I said before, too fast, then make it from 01:01:347 to 01:02:997 ^, already made spinner longer
  6. 01:21:897 (1) - ^ Since all spinner suggestion is because of what mat thinks... I will just say, mat already checked this and no complaints about the spinner.
  7. 01:40:797 (1) - ^ ^
  8. 01:45:597 (1) - ^ ^
    That's all~
[Insane]
  1. 00:50:397 (1) - if make slider velocity 0.5X maybe better? (Same as 00:51:597 (1) and 00:52:797 (1) ) 0.5x is too much, 0.75x works better
  2. 01:09:147 (1,2) - Making a slider instead of it or you can overlap those notes...just feel beeter :) becasuse too much 1/6 beat snap divisor is hard to catch the rhythm. This is an Insane, i want to follow the vocal as closely as possible and i like it this way.
  3. 01:09:747 (1,2) - ^ ^
  4. 01:40:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - A little slow... add note in the middle of them? Death stream doesn't really fit this part, i just want to follow the piano here.
    Again, all of it are just suggestion, just keep your own mind ;)

Good Luck~
pieguy1372
SPOILER

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

00:09:597 (1,2) - Should be 1/3 later...also, remove the whistle from the body of (1)? This is snapped to 1/4 and is on the blue tick. Should be correct. K, removed whistle.
00:26:297 (4) - New combo? One combo for this part is fine i think

Insane:

00:09:522 (1,2,3) - These should be 1/3 later Snapped to 1/4 on blue tick. Should be correct.
00:31:697 (1) - Should be 1/6 later Already tested this at 0.25x playback, the place it is at right now is correct.
00:32:547 (5) - ^ ^ 0.25x playback, the place it is at right now seems correct.
00:38:997 (6) - Should end 1/6 later Don't see a problem with it ending at 1/3 snap
00:41:247 (1) - Should be 1/6 later Should be fine
00:41:597 (3) - Should end 1/6 earlier I feel slider is too short is it end 1/6 earlier
00:42:147 (5) - Should be 1/6 later Seems right to me
00:42:297 (6) - Should end 1/6 later Same as 01:41:597
00:49:097 (7) - Perhaps end this 1/3 later? Want to keep 1 tick between the notes at 1/3 snap
01:01:797 (3,4) - Space these farther out? I keep thinking these are 1/2s :? K. 0.9x spacing (1.0x feels too much)
01:10:697 (3) - End it 1/3 earlier? Follows vocal better like this
01:11:547 (2) - Move it 1/6 later Seems fine
01:13:147 (3) - End it 1/3 later? ^
01:17:897 (4) - End it 1/3 earlier? Follows vocal better
01:19:097 (3) - End it 1/6 earlier ^
01:19:697 (3) - ^ ^
01:20:297 (3) - ^ Doesn't really follow vocal properly, but will be weird to make this one longer than the rest
01:26:397 (4) - New combo? (If you do, please remove the NC from 01:27:297 (1) and add one on 01:27:597 (2)) This part is following a combo pattern, so no change.
No change in beat position and slider length since i think they are all fine

Nice map~ :)

ty for mods, holysoup and hinacle will check later.
Hinacle
All fixed!!

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Download: Chata - see-saw!! (Short Ver.) (merchat7) [Hinacle].osu
Esupanitix
Sorry, can't find anything in particular that's wrong with it. I can't identify anything, so sorry. It's good enough for my tastes. I'm not that picky, though.
hoLysoup
uploaded~
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Topic Starter
merchat7
uploaded

@Esupanitix
Ty for trying to mod.
SPOILER
ah message too short....
loveFantasy
hi~

[General]
  1. about the break, i suggest you start it at 00:11:997 in all diff (don't adjust anything in Insane), and don't manually change it's ending time (it plays ok though.)
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:522 (1) - remove whistle on slider body, it's too noisy
  2. 00:26:297 (4) - this worth a new combo
  3. 01:00:897 (1) - start it at 01:01:197
  4. 01:23:097 (T) - don't end a KIAI section during a spinner
[Normal]
  1. 01:14:397 (3) - this should has a new combo and the new combo of 01:15:597 (1) - should be on 01:16:797 (3) - imo
  2. 01:35:997 (5) - new combo should be here
[Hinacle]
  1. 00:24:897 (4) - change end point to whistle?
  2. 01:02:397.. - because you use 2 soft-finish beforehand, this point feel "miss a hitsound"...change spinner to slider or put a note here and put the spinner shortly afterward?
  3. 01:29:597 (3) - finish endpoint?
  4. 01:40:797 (1,2) - use 2/3 instead of 3/4?
  5. 01:45:597.. - use 2/3?
[Insane]
  1. 01:02:197 (1) - sync bad with music, i suggest just use circle and slider to map the vocal
  2. 01:10:697 (3) - some will say end it at 01:11:197, but i really think end this at 01:11:247 provide better flow..because this is a long slider and the later combo are in 1/2
Topic Starter
merchat7
loveFantasy
SPOILER

loveFantasy wrote:

hi~

[General]
  1. about the break, i suggest you start it at 00:11:997 in all diff (don't adjust anything in Insane), and don't manually change it's ending time (it plays ok though.) Seems like only Easy has a manually changed ending time, fixed. Changed when Hinacle's break time begins so that it's the same as other diffs.


[Easy]
  1. 00:09:522 (1) - remove whistle on slider body, it's too noisy Done
  2. 00:26:297 (4) - this worth a new combo Hm, since someone before has also suggested this, i will change it.
  3. 01:00:897 (1) - start it at 01:01:197 A bit worry about spinner length, but i guess it's fine.
  4. 01:23:097 (T) - don't end a KIAI section during a spinner Changed to be the same as hoLysoup's Normal
[Insane]
  1. 01:02:197 (1) - sync bad with music, i suggest just use circle and slider to map the vocal K, I think it's fine she sings just "Ne~" for this part.
  2. 01:10:697 (3) - some will say end it at 01:11:197, but i really think end this at 01:11:247 provide better flow..because this is a long slider and the later combo are in 1/2 This was intentionally done so that you have time to hit (1) in the next combo. For some reason i kept hitting (1) too late when the slider is put here or get a 100 on slider.

Thanks for mod holysoup & hinacle will check later.
- Suima -
As your request on my queue
General Speaking:
nothing

Insane:
remove the slider in 1:56:397

Hard:
remove the spinner in 0:44:397

Hinacle:
Why put a beat in 1:08:997?
slider in 1:19:097(1) replace in 1:18:797

Easy:
I have seen it. No problem I found.
Hinacle
done~!!

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Download: Chata - see-saw!! (Short Ver.) (merchat7) [Hinacle].osu
JoJo
Hi hi ~ My mod here :D
Take from KPY and JoJo's queue ~ ><

Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.

[General]
  • 'spinner-background.png' should be 1023*692 and currently is 1024*692 ~ ><
    Well..The comboburst images you're using is not cut perfectly in the right.
    I suggest you to remake them @.@ (comboburst-3.png is Okay)
    Please unify the Stack Leniency in all diffs ~!
[Insane]
  • 00:32:297 (4) - Could be stack better.
    01:50:397 (1) - Unify the end point of this like other diffs do. End it at 01:54:672 ~
[Hinacle]
  • 00:51:297 (2) - Not Stack perfectly.
[hoLysoup's Normal]
  • 01:01:197 (1) - Spacing ?
[Easy]
  • 01:43:097 (1) - Too close to the spinner imo.
Well.. @.@ Don't like nazi so that's all ><
Nice map ~ Star'd ~
wmfchris
[Insane]
Maybe whistle is too frequently used? There's some section that Chata sang in a lower melody, then putting a whistle which is a high tone excessively sounds weird.
00:04:797 (2) - There's a vocal 1/6 eariler who is lourder than the echo at 00:04:797, so I think you may start slider 1/6 eariler. This is an insane and maybe you should fix this :3
00:11:097 (x) - maybe start this right after (3), or on the vocal "four!" that maybe too short x_x
00:24:797 (2) - whistle?
00:28:397 (2) - ^
- I'm not sure about that, but some note+slider 4-plets sounds odd to me orz
00:43:997 (4) - remove whistle
01:49:197 (7) - use a slow slider (remember to NC) and mute the ending?
01:54:597 (s) - end the spinner at similar time of other diffs
01:56:397 (1) - remove so that it ends like other diffs, this sounds well already when one finishes the map.

you may need more efforts on arranging notes, but it seems technically well : D

[Miracle Hinacle]
00:27:897 (1) - minor fix on slider shape
112,320,27897,6,0,B|52:256|112:176,1,150,2|2

GJ!

[Normal]
00:09:522 (1) - [Nazi] down 1 grid lv4 to make it symmetrical
01:18:597 (4) - putting a slider before new combo instead of a single note here?
01:21:297 (1) - remove clap at middle tick, finish at last?

[Easy]
ok.

starrrrrrrrr D:
Topic Starter
merchat7
kevin840310
SPOILER

kevin840310 wrote:

As your request on my queue
General Speaking:
nothing

Insane:
remove the slider in 1:56:397 It's fine, i want to follow the drums at the end.

Easy:
I have seen it. No problem I found.

JoJo
SPOILER

JoJo wrote:

Hi hi ~ My mod here :D
Take from KPY and JoJo's queue ~ ><

Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.

[General]
  • 'spinner-background.png' should be 1023*692 and currently is 1024*692 ~ >< Fixed
    Well..The comboburst images you're using is not cut perfectly in the right.
    I suggest you to remake them @.@ (comboburst-3.png is Okay) I can prob fix comboburst-0 (erase the stick a bit), but the rest idk. I'll let holysoup look at it.
    Please unify the Stack Leniency in all diffs ~! From my understanding, it doesn't need to be consistent as, while Hard/Insane may need higher stack leniency (so that stack look better in game). Easy and Normal doesn't. Will change my Easy if holysoup change through.
[Insane]
  • 00:32:297 (4) - Could be stack better. Should be fixed now
    01:50:397 (1) - Unify the end point of this like other diffs do. End it at 01:54:672 ~ Done
[Easy]
  • 01:43:097 (1) - Too close to the spinner imo. I think it's fine there is two~ white tick or so before this note and again, you can always stop spinning earlier (one of the first thing i learn when i start playing osu).
Well.. @.@ Don't like nazi so that's all ><
Nice map ~ Star'd ~

wmfchris
SPOILER

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
Maybe whistle is too frequently used? There's some section that Chata sang in a lower melody, then putting a whistle which is a high tone excessively sounds weird. Ah you're right, for some reason i had a strange idea of putting whistle every time she sings. Reduced for the part after the break, the rest seems fine i think. Tell me if not..
00:04:797 (2) - There's a vocal 1/6 eariler who is lourder than the echo at 00:04:797, so I think you may start slider 1/6 eariler. This is an insane and maybe you should fix this :3 I find it weird to do this mainly because i want to keep consistency with previous section. You're right that it is 1/6 earlier through (or 1/8 since we're snapping in 1/4 here).
00:11:097 (x) - maybe start this right after (3), or on the vocal "four!" that maybe too short x_x Guess i'll change to the blue tick right after (3).
00:24:797 (2) - whistle? Done
00:28:397 (2) - ^ ^
- I'm not sure about that, but some note+slider 4-plets sounds odd to me orz Feel fine to me, but up for suggestions.
00:43:997 (4) - remove whistle Done
01:49:197 (7) - use a slow slider (remember to NC) and mute the ending? This part doesn't seem like it slow down. It just suddenly end and the gap is to represent that. So no. Don't think it need to be mute as this part is quite loud.
01:54:597 (s) - end the spinner at similar time of other diffs Fixed in earlier mod
01:56:397 (1) - remove so that it ends like other diffs, this sounds well already when one finishes the map. Want to keep this, will remove if someone has a very good reason for me to do so. This part is nagging me to map it in Insane :P.

you may need more efforts on arranging notes, but it seems technically well : D

[Easy]
ok.

starrrrrrrrr D:

ty for stars and mods :D holysoup & hinacle will check them later.
Hinacle

wmfchris wrote:

[Miracle Hinacle] wwwwww
00:27:897 (1) - minor fix on slider shape
112,320,27897,6,0,B|52:256|112:176,1,150,2|2
Done

GJ!
Thank you mod~!!

Download: Chata - see-saw!! (Short Ver.) (merchat7) [Hinacle].osu
SYSEN
hello...

general:
easy kiai time ends at 1:23:997
holysoup kiai ends at 1:23:997
hinacle and insane ends at 1:23:097

maybe make them ends same for all diff?

easy:
01:20:997 (4) - make the slider start at 01:20:697 end at 01:21:597

holysoup:
no problem.......

hinacle:
00:05:847 (6) - new combo......(if you apply this nc, you should apply the nc below to follow this NC)
00:03:447 (5) - nc

00:27:797 (x) - add note here?
00:34:997 (x)- ^
00:40:497 (5,6) - spacing?
00:43:197 (1) - make it end at 00:43:597? or make slider (2) start at 00:43:597?
00:44:397 (1) - somehow.... i feel like it's better to change this spinner into the rythm my suggestion is:
Copy paste the rythm at 00:43:197 (1) - 00:44:297(3) and make slider at 00:45:597 and end it at 00:45:797 it sounds better imo


00:54:597 (4) - about this, im a bit confused....maybe you can:
1.make the new combo here, or
make the SV changes in 00:55:097 (1)

insane:
01:20:697 (1) - i thought i missed this note when i play this map because of the volume xD

star because it has unique 1/3 and 1/6's xD
Backstep
Here this is my mod :3

[Easy]
00:07:197 (1) remove whistle.
00:23:997 (3) 1 grid left ? (lv4 grid)
00:36:597 (1) 1 grid right and 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid)
00:38:997 (3) 1 grid left ? (lv4 grid)
00:39:597 (4) 1 grid right and 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid)
00:46:797 (1) 2 grid up ? (lv4 grid)
00:52:797 (3-4) 2 grid up ? (lv4 grid)
00:59:997 (3) 1 grid right (lv4 grid)
01:07:197 (4) 1 grid down ? (lv4 grid)
01:16:797 (5) 1 grid right (lv4 grid)
01:25:797 (3) 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid)
01:35:397 (3) 1 grid down ? (lv4 grid)

[hoLysoup's Normal]
00:04:797 (2) whistle
00:08:397 (2) ^
00:10:122 (2) ^
00:11:322 (4) finish

[Hinacle]
Seem fine for me

[Insane]
01:48:197 (2) x=104, y=144
01:48:397 (3) x=40, y=232
01:48:597 (4) x=104, y=320
01:49:197 (7) 1 grid up ? (lv3 grid)

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
merchat7
Index-San
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Index-San wrote:

hello...

general:
easy kiai time ends at 1:23:997
holysoup kiai ends at 1:23:997
hinacle and insane ends at 1:23:097

maybe make them ends same for all diff? I think it's fine, Easy & Normal have a spinner for this part while Hard & Insane map this part out. But if this is unrankable i will change.

easy:
01:20:997 (4) - make the slider start at 01:20:697 end at 01:21:597 I want to put the slider on the strong beat and i think here is where the strong beat is. 01:20:697 feel like a weak note to me due to volume.

insane:
01:20:697 (1) - i thought i missed this note when i play this map because of the volume xD Opps forgot to put another timing section here. Fixed (90% voluime)

star because it has unique 1/3 and 1/6's xD lol

backstep
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backstep wrote:

Here this is my mod :3

[Easy]
00:07:197 (1) remove whistle. Done
00:23:997 (3) 1 grid left ? (lv4 grid) ^
00:36:597 (1) 1 grid right and 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid) ^
00:38:997 (3) 1 grid left ? (lv4 grid) ^
00:39:597 (4) 1 grid right and 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid) ^
00:46:797 (1) 2 grid up ? (lv4 grid) ^
00:52:797 (3-4) 2 grid up ? (lv4 grid) ^
00:59:997 (3) 1 grid right (lv4 grid) ^
01:07:197 (4) 1 grid down ? (lv4 grid) ^
01:16:797 (5) 1 grid right (lv4 grid) ^
01:25:797 (3) 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid) ^
01:35:397 (3) 1 grid down ? (lv4 grid) ^

[Insane]
01:48:197 (2) x=104, y=144 Done
01:48:397 (3) x=40, y=232 ^
01:48:597 (4) x=104, y=320 ^
01:49:197 (7) 1 grid up ? (lv3 grid) ^
Quite helpful suggestion for Insane ^^

Good Luck!

Ty for star and mods, holysoup & hinacle will check later.
hoLysoup
reupload~
Your message is too short.
WELL MY MESSAGE DOESN"T HAVE TO BE LONG ALL THE TIME OK!?

Download: Chata - see-saw!! (Short Ver.) (merchat7) [hoLysoup's Normal].osu
Kiddo-Kun
[Insane]
00:10:872 (1) - This spinner starts too early. Actually, I recommend removing this spinner and adding in something else.
01:56:397 (1) - Perhaps remove the repeat. Sounds much better this way.

That's all I have to say.
jossieP
chata <3
first mod from kei&kyon's queue
3rd mod that I made >_<

Insane

00:07:047 (x) - Add a note?
00:13:197 (B) - I think break should star here
00:32:297 (4) - delete this note and extend previous slider to here?
00:32:997 (7) - ^
00:36:897 (4) - delete and replace (3) with a slider that end on 00:36:997 ?
00:39:297 (7) - delete and exteend previous slider to here?
00:41:397 (2) - move a tick previous
00:41:897 (4) - delete and exteend previous slider to here?
01:02:172 (x) - add a slider like (2) or 2 notes like (3,4), then move the spinner to 01:02:447 and finish spinner on 01:03:447 or delete the spinner >_<
01:05:997 (3) - add finish
01:07:197 (1) - ^
01:08:297 (6) - ^
01:09:297 (2) - stack with (1) ?
01:09:897 (2) - ^
01:10:697 (3) - add finish?
01:13:147 (3) - move a tick previous and exteend to original finish?
01:15:597 (3) - add finish
01:16:797 (1) - add finish
01:19:097 (3) - replace with a circle?
01:19:697 (3) - ^
01:21:097 (3) - delete
01:21:997 (1) - remove new combo and put new combo on the next circle?
01:26:297 (x) - add a note
01:27:497 (x) - ^
01:27:797 (x) - ^
01:28:097 (x) - ^
01:28:797 (1) - move to 01:28:697
01:28:997 (x) - add a note
01:29:397 (4) - move to 01:29:297
01:29:597 (x) - add a note
01:29:997 (6) - delete
01:30:797 (9) - delete
01:35:897 (x) - add a note
01:45:597 (1,2,3~ the rest) - use a high spacing


Hinacle >w<

00:13:197 (B) - I think break should star here
00:40:697 (6) - delete?
01:15:597 (2) - add finish please
01:16:797 (1) - ^
01:27:797 (x) - add a note?
01:28:097 (x) - ^
01:39:597 (1) - delete?


hoLysoup <3 ~

00:13:197 (B) - I think break should star here
01:22:797 (3) - add finish?
01:36:297 (2) - missed clap?
01:40:797 (S) - delete finish?

Easy

00:13:197 (B) - I think break should star here
00:57:297 (3) - add clap?
00:57:597 (1) - remove all claps from here?
00:59:097 (2) - add clap?
01:00:897 (4) - add note?
01:01:197 (S) - remove finish
01:07:797 (4) - remove clap
01:11:397 (1) - remove finish
01:14:097 (2) - remove clap
01:17:397 (5) - ^
01:45:597 (S~) - 2 consecutive and looooong spinners


That is all >_< Im newbie at modding, but I hope to be helpful
Hinacle
Done>~<

Your message is too short :( :( :( :( :( :(

Download: Chata - see-saw!! (Short Ver.) (merchat7) [Hinacle].osu
Muya
- Easy:
00:09:597 - Please vocal's "one two three four" do not matching. timing is bad orz
00:12:597 - why break time start here? I think unnecessary
00:56:997 (3) - add clap to 2nd note?

- holysoup:
00:09:597 - Please vocal's "one two three four" do not matching. timing is bad orz
00:12:597 - why break time start here? please back to default
01:01:197 (1,2) - maybe hard timing
01:08:997 (1,2) - ^ same. delete (1)?
01:38:297 (5) - add new combo
01:45:597 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Really hard here, reduce note?

- Hinacle:
00:09:597 - ボーカルの"one to three four"に合わせないでください。タイミングがおかしいです
00:12:597 - 休憩をここからにする必要はないと思います

- Insane:
00:09:597 - Please vocal's "one two three four" do not matching. timing is bad orz
00:12:597 - why break time start here? I think unnecessary
01:49:197 (7) - change to circle?


so many spinner maps orz
I want to reduce :(
Mok
Heya :D

[Holysoup]
BSD: 1/6.
From 00:07:197 (1) to 00:11:322 (4) - Check spacing.

[Hinacle]
Check spacing after the break.

Pretty okay :3
Topic Starter
merchat7
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Insane]
00:10:872 (1) - This spinner starts too early. Actually, I recommend removing this spinner and adding in something else. I want to keep this, and the only other thing i can add other than a spinner is a circle. So i think it's fine like this. Also from my understanding, spinner can start at any tick as long as it's after the note, but changed to 1/4 snapping for this part.
01:56:397 (1) - Perhaps remove the repeat. Sounds much better this way. I think ii's fine.

That's all I have to say.

ikari_kyon
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ikari_kyon wrote:

chata <3
first mod from kei&kyon's queue
3rd mod that I made >_<

Insane

00:07:047 (x) - Add a note? No, because i want the slider to be the last note of the combo, also want to leave a space for a sort of jump.
00:13:197 (B) - I think break should star here I think it's fine, don't think i will change the break time anymore unless there is something unrankable about it.
00:32:297 (4) - delete this note and extend previous slider to here? i think this is too easy for Insane and doesn't follow vocal as well
00:32:997 (7) - ^ ^
00:36:897 (4) - delete and replace (3) with a slider that end on 00:36:997 ? Having a gap there play better. I think (3,4) is fine as it is.
00:39:297 (7) - delete and exteend previous slider to here? I use slider when ever she hold a note. Since she sing a note here i put a circle.
00:41:397 (2) - move a tick previous I'm sure it is correct like this (test in 0.25x playback)
00:41:897 (4) - delete and exteend previous slider to here? She sing a note here so i represent it with a circle
01:02:172 (x) - add a slider like (2) or 2 notes like (3,4), then move the spinner to 01:02:447 and finish spinner on 01:03:447 or delete the spinner >_< I want a spinner here to show that the music suddenly get faster. Also, the spinner is a good way to end a section since i can map the next part anyway i want. Didn't change (3,4) to slider as again, she sings note there and not hold it.
01:05:997 (3) - add finish No
01:07:197 (1) - ^ Don't think it fits
01:08:297 (6) - ^ ^
01:09:297 (2) - stack with (1) ? It play well like this
01:09:897 (2) - ^ ^
01:10:697 (3) - add finish? Feel like a finish spam.
01:13:147 (3) - move a tick previous and exteend to original finish? Ty, 1 tick backward in 1/6. Feel a lot better now.
01:15:597 (3) - add finish No
01:16:797 (1) - add finish Don't want to spam too much finish
01:19:097 (3) - replace with a circle? Don't see a problem with this being a slider
01:19:697 (3) - ^ ^
01:21:097 (3) - delete Done, minor remap so that it's feel better
01:21:997 (1) - remove new combo and put new combo on the next circle? I put new combo here because she start singing here
01:26:297 (x) - add a note No to all, i think the note is already correct as it is.
01:27:497 (x) - ^
01:27:797 (x) - ^
01:28:097 (x) - ^
01:28:797 (1) - move to 01:28:697 Keeping it the same since all note were on white ticks
01:28:997 (x) - add a note No
01:29:397 (4) - move to 01:29:297 looks fine
01:29:597 (x) - add a note ^
01:29:997 (6) - delete Hm want to keep it so that it's interesting
01:30:797 (9) - delete ^ boring for them all to be 1 tick circle
01:35:897 (x) - add a note no
01:45:597 (1,2,3~ the rest) - use a high spacing Spacing is fine imo.

Easy

00:13:197 (B) - I think break should star here Keeping consistency with other diffs (the break all start at 00:12:597) .
00:57:297 (3) - add clap? There is already clap on the next slider
00:57:597 (1) - remove all claps from here? I think it's fine, hitsound feel empty without claps here.
00:59:097 (2) - add clap? No change since i didn't remove clap from previous suggestion
01:00:897 (4) - add note? I left this gap here so beginner know a spinner is coming
01:01:197 (S) - remove finish Done
01:07:797 (4) - remove clap Done
01:11:397 (1) - remove finish Done, replaced with whistle
01:14:097 (2) - remove clap Done
01:17:397 (5) - ^ ^
01:45:597 (S~) - 2 consecutive and looooong spinners Don't really think anything else fit, since it'll probably be too hard for beginners to play. And it last about 8 seconds, i agree this is long, but no one is forcing you to spin the whole 8 seconds.


That is all >_< Im newbie at modding, but I hope to be helpful Not bad for your 3rd mod, some helpful suggestion ^^

Muya
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Muya wrote:

- Easy:
00:09:597 - Please vocal's "one two three four" do not matching. timing is bad orz Timing is correct, please check in editor at 0.25x playback
00:12:597 - why break time start here? I think unnecessary Doesn't really make a different game play wise
00:56:997 (3) - add clap to 2nd note? Doesn't fit

- Insane:
00:09:597 - Please vocal's "one two three four" do not matching. timing is bad orz Same as Easy, timing is correct
00:12:597 - why break time start here? I think unnecessary Same as easy, doesn't make a difference
01:49:197 (7) - change to circle? Slider work better


so many spinner maps orz
I want to reduce :( Spinner are fun :D

Mok
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Mok wrote:

Heya :D

[Holysoup]
BSD: 1/6. It's 1/4 at the beginning, the rest is 1/3 or 1/6 through.

Pretty okay :3

Ty for mods, holysoup & hinacle will look at it later.Will ask Sakura Hana for a recheck very soon (after i finish the Insane for my 4th beatmap or when my 1st beatmap get ranked)
Megurine Luka
Hi. Mod as requested
Sorry for being late. :o

[General]
Make spinner-background.png into black and white
It will confuse players when they spin.

[Easy]

AR-1~2
OD-1


[Normal]

AR-1

[Hard]&[Insane]

Nothing I can suggest

Very good map. Even though timing section really confuse me a lot.
If you do not make any change, plz do not give me KD.
Good job and Good luck :)
Topic Starter
merchat7
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod as requested
Sorry for being late. :o

[General]
Make spinner-background.png into black and white I don't think so, the default spinner isn't black and white and when i see a spinner, i know i have to spin.
It will confuse players when they spin.

[Easy]

AR-1~2 -1 ar
OD-1 -1 od

[Hard]&[Insane]

Nothing I can suggest

Very good map. Even though timing section really confuse me a lot. Can you tell me what you find confusing about the timing section?
If you do not make any change, plz do not give me KD.
Good job and Good luck :) Ty

Thanks for mod, holysoup will check it later. Also minor fixes to combo burst, redownload if you want.
Megurine Luka
So Quick reply :D

All notes sound excellent. What I mean is the timing section(those lines) is difficult to identify whether the notes are off or not.

But I think all of them are fit when I tried.

So good Job. 8-)
hoLysoup
reupload~
Your message is too short.
iS it?
is it really?
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Download: Chata - see-saw!! (Short Ver.) (merchat7) [hoLysoup's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
merchat7
@Megurine Luka
Just happened to check the beatmap thread and saw your post so i reply straight away.
Thanks for reply

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@hoLysoup
messsage not too short? :P

uploaded!

Edit: Finally finish my 4th beatmap's Insane,trying to catch Sakura Hana online for a recheck atm. Seem like i have bad luck with mats, Sakura Hana's currently taking a break so will try to find someone else.
Breeze
Rechecked and it looked nice enough for a bubble
good luck
my message is too short
hoLysoup

Breeze wrote:

Rechecked and it looked nice enough for a bubble
good luck
my message is too short
^^!
Topic Starter
merchat7
Thanks for checking and bubble :)



Message too short -_-
ztrot
Hello I was doing a random mod over livestream today and your map got picked.

[Gen]
it seems your skin has lots of uneven elements you spinner wobbles and I can see loads of cut artifacts on the spinner meter.

Also it seems your map is not currently snapped the the grid when resnapping I was asked for a save prompt.

you could also us an offset of zero.

Easy: seems really fun I like the nice simple patterns good job.

Normal: looks good too

Hard: loved it :3

Insane: I might take the time to try and work on your patterns a bit more but that is up to you

contact me after you have fixed the skin and the snapping.
Topic Starter
merchat7

ztrot wrote:

Hello I was doing a random mod over livestream today and your map got picked.

[Gen]
it seems your skin has lots of uneven elements you spinner wobbles and I can see loads of cut artifacts on the spinner meter.Should be better now.

Also it seems your map is not currently snapped the the grid when resnapping I was asked for a save prompt. Look like there's a bug, I save one of my difficulty to a different name, for example Easy2, resnap all note and copy and paste it to the original difficulty. I check whether there were two notes overlapping each other and i found a few. http://puu.sh/5VNs It's snap to 00:26:297 in both version which is strange. I would think ai mod would point out if I had a snapping error so I guess it's just a bug. I also never changed the timing since I ask for a timing check right after i submitted this. Similar thing with the other difficulties. So i think the snapping is fine. The beginning is snap to 1/4 btw.

you could also us an offset of zero. Don't see a problem with current offset so I'll keep it like this.

Easy: seems really fun I like the nice simple patterns good job.

Normal: looks good too

Hard: loved it :3

Insane: I might take the time to try and work on your patterns a bit more but that is up to you I did get that thought too, but i really have no idea what to change, sorry.

contact me after you have fixed the skin and the snapping.
Thanks for checking, tell me if you really want me to resnap all the notes.
ztrot
Resetting the offset wouldn't hurt the map in anyway but would make the menu flashes work a lot better I don't see why you can't change it and resnap everything just to be safe
Topic Starter
merchat7
Changed a few stuff
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[General]

- Everything resnap to 1/6 (manually snap the beginning to 1/4, specifically 00:09:525 - 00:11:325).
- Offset changed to 0 (+3 offset on all timing point).

[Easy]

- Polish a bunch of sliders.

[Hinacle]

- Snapped all timing point properly to a note / end of slider.

[Insane]

- Polish the difficulty.
- Remap 00:21:600 - 00:49:300
ztrot
Very nice looks good now thanks for taking the time to improve your map :D poof
Sakura
[Skin]
You will need to make your spinner metre more opaque I can barely see it at all ._.


Should be fine for rank after it's fixed.
Topic Starter
merchat7
Change spinner opacity from 80% > 90%.
Sakura
Ok that was a really small thing so~

Ranked!

Congratulations on your first ranked map ^_^
hoLysoup
^^ congrats merchat! :)
Kotone
Congrats~
Chata<3
Akemi_Homura
Congrats~~! :)
Nymph
chata~
Topic Starter
merchat7
Ty everyone. First ranked map ^^
Hinacle
Congrats!!

chata~!!
Kawayi Rika
Congratulations· :)

merchat7
IkkiMinami
1st :D
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