15:39 AllieBork: What you should work on is aesthetics mostly
15:40 seselis1: i know...
15:40 AllieBork: 00:06:644 (2,3,4) - for instance here you could make a triangle
15:40 AllieBork: the rest is good but basically, blanketing and geometry
15:40 AllieBork: 00:09:569 (2,3,4,1) - here same (same pattern even)
15:40 AllieBork: 00:11:946 (1,2) - could easily be blanketed
15:41 AllieBork: Wait, do you know what blanketing is?
15:41 seselis1: yes
15:41 AllieBork: okay good
15:42 AllieBork: 00:12:678 (3,4,1,2) - this looks good (as a positive example)
15:42 AllieBork: 00:14:872 (1) - blanket
15:42 seselis1: but if I blanket then it wouldn't have a righ ds
15:43 seselis1: right*
15:43 seselis1: so should I still blanket?
15:43 AllieBork: I managed to blanket it and keep DS roughly the same
15:44 AllieBork:
https://gyazo.com/e1462a560603b730a1c920b72bcd98c115:44 AllieBork: and in hard, for sure. slight distance snap variations in hard is absolutely no problem
15:45 AllieBork: 00:20:723 (1) - IMO would look better if you put the sliderend up a little, so it'd stay roughly the same distance from the previous slider
15:45 AllieBork:
https://gyazo.com/b7e12e559774348cabe5f0c988fcd1b615:45 AllieBork: a bit like this
15:46 AllieBork: 00:26:574 (1) - I think it'd look a lot better parallel to the previous slider
15:47 AllieBork: 00:30:231 (3) - blanket this better
15:47 AllieBork: 00:32:242 (4,1,2,3) - I don't really like the slowdown here in each difficulty, it's too sudden and not justified enough IMO
15:48 AllieBork: 00:33:887 (1) - blanket
15:48 AllieBork: 00:35:716 (2) - blanket
15:48 AllieBork: 00:38:276 (1) - blanket
15:49 AllieBork: 00:39:007 (3) - this could be blanketed slightly better (nitpick)
15:49 AllieBork: 00:40:104 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - wouldn't it follow the music better to have (2,3) and (5,6) stacked, rather than (3,4) and (6,1)?
15:50 AllieBork: 00:44:127 (1) - blanket better
15:50 AllieBork: 00:47:052 (1) - blanket this just like you did with the previous slider
15:51 AllieBork: 00:49:246 (3) - blanket
15:51 AllieBork: 00:49:978 (1) - blanket
15:51 AllieBork: 00:55:280 (4) - make this parallel with the previous slider
15:51 AllieBork: 00:55:828 (1) - blanket
15:52 AllieBork: I almost forgot to mention all of this is for Hard
15:52 AllieBork: (I'll post logs in the thread if you don't want to go through it now)
15:52 seselis1: wait if i make parallel
15:52 seselis1: will it be comfortable to play?
15:53 AllieBork: you could either make it parallel with 00:54:731 (2) or with 00:54:366 (1). Either would be fine
15:53 AllieBork: Since it's a very small return slider either is comfortable
15:53 AllieBork: 00:55:828 (1) - blanket
15:53 AllieBork: 00:58:754 (1) - ^
15:53 AllieBork: 00:59:485 (3) - ^
15:54 AllieBork: 01:01:679 (1) - could be blanketed slightly better, if you line up the sliderpoints with the approach circle of (5)
15:54 seselis1: ok, but what about last parallel?
15:55 AllieBork: 01:02:411 (1) - definitely blanket it around the (5)
15:55 AllieBork: can you tell me where you're talking about?
15:55 AllieBork: 01:04:971 (2) - blanket
15:55 seselis1: 00:26:574 (1) -
15:55 AllieBork: 01:06:068 (1) - blanket
15:55 AllieBork: ok checking
15:56 AllieBork: What's the problem there? it looks fine to me when made parallel
15:56 AllieBork: 01:11:187 (3) - blanket
15:56 seselis1: oh ok it seemed a bit uncomfortable to play idk
15:57 AllieBork: having it parallel or having a curvy slider plays almost the same
15:57 AllieBork: if you want to alleviate it, move the slider slightly down (also restores distance snap)
15:58 AllieBork:
https://gyazo.com/2bece059f445020a928b96606d232cc7 like this
15:59 AllieBork: 01:16:307 (1) - blanket better
15:59 AllieBork: 01:19:232 (1) - ^
15:59 AllieBork: 01:42:636 (1) - ^
16:00 AllieBork: 01:41:539 (2,3) - I think it'd look a lot better like this
https://gyazo.com/20784a486eb496d4dd6530ce397b635416:01 AllieBork: but really I think there shouldn't be that long a slider there to begin with, since there's sounds in the middle of it
16:01 AllieBork: important sounds*
16:01 AllieBork: 01:44:099 (1) - blanket
16:02 AllieBork: this looks weird, but blanketing doesn't really fix it as it messes up distance snap
16:02 AllieBork: 01:49:218 (4) - (forgot this ^)
16:03 AllieBork: 01:49:950 (1,4) - make these sliders fit together better by blanketing. You might have to adjust (3) to stay symmetrical with (4)
16:04 AllieBork: 01:54:338 (1) - semi-blanket this around these two 01:55:069 (3,4)
16:04 AllieBork: 02:00:920 (3) - could blanket this too
16:05 AllieBork: and that's about it for Hard. It's a lot but it's basically all blanketing ^^