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Sky Ferreira - Obsession

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RandomJibberish
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, August 26, 2011 at 11:42:15 AM

Artist: Sky Ferreira
Title: Obsession
Tags: Larto
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5217kb
Play Time: 03:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.4 stars, 165 notes)
  2. Hard (4.72 stars, 347 notes)
  3. Larto's Normal (4.15 stars, 277 notes)
Download: Sky Ferreira - Obsession
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THIS TIME THIS TIME
Last edited by RandomJibberish , edited 7 times in total.
Larto
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Joined June 2008
Larto
Listen up, I have been mapping this for you, kind sir.
I've got a difficulty, ain't a bad map that I made there.
For you, now what you could do for meeeeeeee

My sliders are quite ordinary, I spat them out.
And the max score is kinda scary, I need you now.
Make it just better in some kind of wa-ha-hay.

So here's my confession,
This time, this time.
My diff is not a Normal!
I kinda made you a Hard there!
This time, this time.
It might be a bit hardish!

I want you, to fix that
I want you, to help that
I want you - to put it quite formal -
Want you to make this a Normal.

And to make the sliders prettier. Actually, this might be just what you need with a Normal/Hard, but I really just wanted to write out some lyrics there. And you can actually sing those! Try it!

http://pastebin.com/CUFYWfyn
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
General:
I spent a while trying to wipe what I thought was dirt on my screen off my screen, but it turns out it was just on Sky's face. Whoops lol

Hard:
02:23:741 (6) - I love Krisom Krosses as much as any manly man, but I couldn't help but feel this was a bit forced. At least, that's what old Shinta thought. Now, I'm not so sure anymore. Are we human? Or are we, indeed, dancer?
Sometimes I forget how sexy you are, then all I need to do is look at this. Or It's OK or The Girls. But certainly not your face.

Larto's Hard You Lying Whore:
00:32:972 (8) - Adjust this a slight bit so it's more symmetrical. AIN'T NOTHIN' WRONG WITH OCD
01:24:202 (1) - Could you perhaps make this a slight curve (e.g.) It just seems better for a long slider like this. For prettiness and science.
02:42:202 (3) - Not exactly in line with 1 and 2, brother. I'm sorry.
02:42:664 (4) - Perhaps you could place this somewhere more creatively than stacked onto 1, partially because you're not doing a very good job at pretending this is a normal. Perhaps near the center bottom?

Maybe a Normal:
00:23:279 (1,2,3) - Much as I shouldn't care, it wouldn't be too hard to move this entire thing a grid down so it overlaps with the HP bar that bit less. (+copypantry)
00:33:895 (4,5) - Stack may be a bit confusing for Easy players. Maybe not, get another opinion. Even if it's yours.
01:15:433 - Missing break draggage, in comparison with other difficulties.
02:19:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remember what I said before? Me neither (clarification: hp bar)
02:28:818 - Missing break draggage.

This mod isn't very+good, I'm sorry. But I was afraid of nazi'ing at times mwaha
SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
Spinner on [Larto] and [Hard] should start at the same time
Just saying
I love you, RJ
narakucrimson
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narakucrimson
Efficiency is my second name (?)

[General]

  1. NotShinta wrote:

    I spent a while trying to wipe what I thought was dirt on my screen off my screen, but it turns out it was just on Sky's face. Whoops lol
    Sorry, lol'd at that xD
  2. Nothing to mention here, actually. Everything looks tidy enough.
[Easy]
  1. I found this a little hard, to be honest (you know, not "hard", but hard for an Easy). I don't really know what to say about it, though. It might be because I'm not used to 1/3 maps :P I know there isn't much point in saying this, but it's just for you to keep in mind if more people complain~
    Though I don't think that will happen :P
  2. 00:33:433 (3) - Just an idea here, I think a whistle could fit. Same for 00:37:126 (3).
  3. 00:37:587 (4,1) - Perhaps I'd place this some grids down to not make it so jumpy (for Easy, of course :P).
  4. 01:10:818 (2,3) - I really don't know why, but these really confused me while testing :O Again, maybe it's just me >.<
    You could try this, so that the approach circle of (2) is more visible:
    SPOILER
  5. 01:33:895 (3) - Maybe a clap here could do :D The "maybe" is because your hitsounding is kinda, uh... It's cool, but weird :P You don't use claps on these beats all the time - like in the next combo - so... You decide n.n
  6. 02:17:279 (2,3) - Same as in 01:10:818 (2,3) Or you could even try to do a sligthly different pattern, such as:
    SPOILER
    Just suggestions, as you know~
  7. 02:56:972 (2) - Maybe you could use a whistle here, to you know, emphasize somehow that this is the last chorus and climax and stuff.
  8. 03:04:356 (2) - (^)
  9. 03:06:202 (1) - And a clap here :V
  10. 03:20:049 (2,3) - And actually, by now, I guess the player would understand this, having played two similar patterns through the song. Or you can try the previous suggestions :P
  11. Looks good, as always :D
[Larto's Normal]
  1. 01:10:818 (4) - Everything sounded pretty smooth until this clap. Consider removing it~
  2. 02:17:279 (4) - But somehow, it doesn't sound bad here :P Just writting this so that you see that I checked it, and it wasn't some random naziing hehe (It doesn't sound bad in 03:20:049, too)
  3. It's kind of Hard-ish, indeed. But you know it's awesome.
[Hard]
  1. 00:33:433 (7) -
    Try a whistle,
    you will like,
    I know
  2. 00:37:126 (7) - (^)
  3. 01:50:510 (2) - And here, here, a whistle seems more appropriate imo. It need something softer than a clap. Actually, sorry to make you go back, but I have to say the same about 00:44:049 (2).
  4. Really cool, RJ! :D
That's all I have to say. Sorry for the poor mod >.<
Have your well-deserved star :D
SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
(song reference here)

ADD LARTO TO TAGS FORGOT TO SAY THIS BUT DO IT AHAHAHA (oh god I'm tired)

[Hard] Nazi-ish things here.
00:59:741 (2) - Could blanket better with (5).
01:01:126 (2) - Could blanket better with (3).
01:11:126 (1) - Move one grid up?
01:15:433 - Unsnahapped break drag, beginning and end.
01:32:510 (5) - Could blanket better with (6).
01:38:972 (5) - Could blanket better with (4) and (6) and also get rid of the sharp edge please.
02:28:356 - Unsahapped drags again.

[Lartella's Normality]
01:28:202 (5,6) - :\

AHAAA

(Well, it looks like I made a song reference anyway. Oh, oh no, oh no, oh no, oh.)
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Your background image is 1025x768. This amuses me. I wouldn't bother cropping it though.
01:13:126 - Resnap the inherited timing section for kiai time ending here.
01:52:049 - Change the kiai end point here so it's snapped on the 1/3 after the start like the first chorus.
02:19:587 - Resnap the inherited timing section for kiai time ending here.
02:54:664 - Change the kiai end point here so it's snapped on the 1/3 after the start like the first chorus.
This actually matters somewhat.

Easy:

I WANT YOU to resnap those 2 unsnapped objects.
02:54:664 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider like the other two choruses. It shouldn't remain unfinished just because it starts on a different tick, you know!
03:07:433 - Pretty strange gap here. It doesn't work well like it does at 01:48:664 I think, so please add an object or two after it to fill the void.

I'm sorry, but my computer decided to be a big silly and not want to deliver sound at this point, so I'll mod the rest later when I can be bothered to fix it properly. Restarting a computer solves 90% of technical issues.

Larto's Normal:

02:19:587 (1) - Please lower this down one space to prevent it from being so sticky with the previous slider.
02:41:741 (2,3) - Pretty weird jump there, Fraulein. You may as well have 3's placement being a horizontal flip of 2.

Hard:

01:14:972 - This break isn't snapped 1/1 after the last object for some strange reason.
01:50:279 (1) - Move 1/6 back and respace. Trust me, it's far less awkward like that because that's how it is in the song with the vocals. Don't be afraid to stray from 1/3 when it's very clearly on another tick.
02:21:433 - Ignoring consistency with the first chorus (which is excusable because of the spinner there but not here), I'd end kiai time at this point.

Fun Edit!
Boring Edit.
Bubbled after discussing a couple of minor things in IRC.
ztrot
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ztrot
Yeah looked this over quite a bit and everything looks pretty decent I liked the patterns in hard and the normal was pretty fun for a normal easy was well easy anyways good job and enjoy the rank!
RandomJibberish
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I love you ztrot
HellDawn
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Congrats
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