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Magicphoenix
Love the song, but please ,PLEASE!!! AR 7 ;www;
Topic Starter
JoJo
@KayeSara, @S o r d a, @swish, @Tenshi-nyan, @Magicphoenix
Star thanks guys~ >o<//
And Tenshi's kd star~ ^w^

@kanpakyin
Thanks for timing help ~
Nice double star ~ xD

@Magicphoenix
Yea..I'm not sure.. Maybe I will lower it later ~ Still WIP now ~ >~<

EDIT:
@Tenshi-nyan
SPOILER

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

this seriously needs some intensive modding when it's done. Massive overmapping... too high difficulty settings... etc...
Yah I see ... @_@ I make the most difficult diff so maybe I have overmapped some parts .. This song is so slow and cute so .. ><
I will try my best ~ ><
Nymph
...I am late
Tenshi-nyan
I shall keep an eye on this.

This song is my absolute favourite out of the Clannad album, and I wanted to map it as well, so you guys may have beat me to it.

I still may map my own version of this song... if I don't like what becomes of this map.
So many slow songs, not only Clannad, get overmapped to a degree that they don't fit the song. Which is not fun.
Don't make a map harder than absolutely necessary...

The rythm on Nymph's diff seems to fit the song pretty well... Any diff with more notes than this is overmapped D:

All I can say for now to this map is, work on it. I wanna see a masterpiece of map for this song. It deserves nothing else.

In order to counter overmapping, reduce a shitload of notes. 1/4 does not fit the song at all. Especially the part from 00:39:518 - to 01:37:130 - and 02:58:799 - 03:03:000 - has way too many notes in it.

Also, I recommend reducing the Difficulty settings to
HP: 4-5
AR: 6
OD:6-7

This song is very calm, so keep that in mind while mapping T_T

Argh I just had to clear out my mind a bit... I could kill someone if they were to talk badly about Clannad and this song >_<
I also know that people have different ideas of a good map than me, so... D:
kanpakyin
I'm pretty should my diff didn't overmapped.However I'm not totally finish it..
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Tenshi-nyan
SPOILER

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

I shall keep an eye on this.

This song is my absolute favourite out of the Clannad album, and I wanted to map it as well, so you guys may have beat me to it.
My fav too.. ><

I still may map my own version of this song... if I don't like what becomes of this map.
So many slow songs, not only Clannad, get overmapped to a degree that they don't fit the song. Which is not fun.
Don't make a map harder than absolutely necessary... You are right.. I'm ready to remap some parts.@_@

The rythm on Nymph's diff seems to fit the song pretty well... Any diff with more notes than this is overmapped D:

All I can say for now to this map is, work on it. I wanna see a masterpiece of map for this song. It deserves nothing else.

In order to counter overmapping, reduce a shitload of notes. 1/4 does not fit the song at all. Especially the part from 00:39:518 - to 01:37:130 - and 02:58:799 - 03:03:000 - has way too many notes in it.

Also, I recommend reducing the Difficulty settings to
HP: 4-5
AR: 6
OD:6-7

This song is very calm, so keep that in mind while mapping T_T

Argh I just had to clear out my mind a bit... I could kill someone if they were to talk badly about Clannad and this song >_<
I also know that people have different ideas of a good map than me, so... D:
Thanks~ >< Kudos for useful suggestions~
Nymph
frost-b-spec
:)
subarasikibuta
这么多了……求一个rank的……
Topic Starter
JoJo
@frost-b-spec
★ arigatou ! >w</

@3kinnagi
SPOILER

3kinnagi wrote:

这么多了……求一个rank的……
谢谢星~目标rank无雾~ xD
SuzuMia Haruhi
8-) Noting to say
Suimya
>3<
loveFantasy
哈哈哈和柯林懶到不行

靠你了
Topic Starter
JoJo
@SuzuMia Haruhi, @-Sekai-
Star Thanks ! ^^

@loveFantasy
SPOILER

loveFantasy wrote:

哈哈哈和柯林懶到不行

靠你了
液~收到~虽然比懒没人能赢我~ ^o^//
(baka KPY深有体会~ 8-) )
谢谢星~ =w=
Sylfear
;)
_Kiva
;) fight
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Reflain, @_Kiva
Star Thanks ! >o<

@Sorda

KD star special thanks !! ^w^//
Rorry
  
Selee
Timing:

1st timeline:
BPM: 99.960
Offset: 39519

2nd timeline:
BPM: 99.960
Offset: 159586

3rd timeline:
BPM: 99.960
Offset: 197015

4th timeline:
BPM: 97.000
Offset: 248635

5th timeline:
BPM: 93.000
Offset: 249872

yea..I just adjust a little from kanpakyin's timing, hopefully it's getting better~

Star for the song/cute BG ;_;
wcx19911123
哈哈哈
之前的占位就是为了现在啊

[General]
mp3 is 124 kbps , make it 128-192 plz , pay attention to timing when done this

[俺の嫁]
00:55:125 - whistle
01:12:532 (2) - far to next spinner
01:13:132 (1) - not to voice down but use a silenced spinner hitsound , will be better when playing
01:37:142 (1) - ^
01:37:142 (1) - whistle
02:00:985 - delete this useless green line
02:17:358 (2) - repeat 1 time less , pay attention to next spacing
02:47:794 - delete this useless green line
02:49:189 (1,2) - vol=15%
02:57:396 - delete this useless green line
03:12:599 (1) - 236,136,192599,6,0,B|196:92|120:168|176:228|228:264|256:280|256:280|284:264|336:228|392:168|316:92|
03:18:076 - delete this useless green line
03:19:415 - vol=35
03:20:616 - ^
03:23:017 - ^
03:27:819 - vol=40 , add finish , remove clap
03:30:220 - vol=35
03:32:621 - ^ , ok I ignore this kind of suggestion from now on , I think 40% clap is too noisy
03:34:880 - delete this useless green line
03:37:423 - vol=40
03:47:027 - remove clap , add finish
03:56:484 - kaki end at 03:56:630 and delete this line
03:56:630 (1,2) - vol=25 , and add finish at 03:56:630
04:12:452 (1) - not to voice down but use a silenced spinner hitsound , and slience end
this is the most awesome Easy I had even seen 0.0

[KPY]
00:58:726 (1) - move third square to x:296 y:320
01:12:232 (4,5,6) - to slider
01:16:883 (1) - too short
01:35:941 (1,2,3,4,5) -make spacing smaller plz
01:55:149 (1) - this really ugly >_> make it fatter plz
02:02:052 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/43Gv , not to follow vocal just for adding clap at 02:02:352 is very odd imo
02:13:756 (5,1) - 5.9x jump is too huge to be in this diff
02:21:859 (1,2) - ._.
03:17:015 (1,2) - ._.
03:39:824 (5) - http://puu.sh/43Hb
04:12:452 (1) - end at 04:17:291
some anti-jump is too huge , fix this it will be a awesome Normal

[Jojo]
00:51:223 (4) - http://puu.sh/43Hw
00:52:724 (5,6,7,8,9) - to pentagon
02:01:751 (2,4) - stack better
02:34:164 (11) - ctrl+r
02:36:865 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/43I2
02:39:586 - break start here
02:59:994 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/43Ib
03:18:215 - clap is mess from now on , look how claps working in Easy
03:57:231 - remove finish
I suggest to remap the claps in the ending , then it will be a nice diff

awesome sb
awesome mapset
edit : 顺带说下,staff写进creator's words里
zsr123
啊 很喜欢这歌啊 :)

介意加我一个taiko diff吗?
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Rorry
Double Star Thanks ! >o<//

@犀利
谢谢~ 神Timing~ 8-)

@zsr123
:| 抱歉~不喜欢taiko.. 但是谢谢><
Topic Starter
JoJo
@wcx
SPOILER

wcx19911123 wrote:

哈哈哈
之前的占位就是为了现在啊

[General]
mp3 is 124 kbps , make it 128-192 plz , pay attention to timing when done this OK~I will fix the timing after all diff updated.

[Jojo]
00:51:223 (4) - http://puu.sh/43Hw OK~
00:52:724 (5,6,7,8,9) - to pentagon OK~
02:01:751 (2,4) - stack better Fixed~
02:34:164 (11) - ctrl+r OK~
02:36:865 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/43I2 Nice idea~
02:39:586 - break start here
02:59:994 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/43Ib OK~
03:18:215 - clap is mess from now on , look how claps working in Easy 0.0
03:57:231 - remove finish Removed finish of the end of the slider...This is my fault @_@
I suggest to remap the claps in the ending , then it will be a nice diff

edit : 顺带说下,staff写进creator's words里这个最后放上去~不然每次upload代码都会出错~
感谢神mod~~~(还有星星海~液~
Nymph

wcx19911123 wrote:

哈哈哈
之前的占位就是为了现在啊

[新人尼姆芙]
00:55:125 - whistle forgot...
01:12:532 (2) - far to next spinner don't bother me that much cause the spinner is long enough, but still fixed.
01:13:132 (1) - not to voice down but use a silenced spinner hitsound , will be better when playing what if other diffs want
their diffs with no silienced spinner.

01:37:142 (1) - ^
01:37:142 (1) - whistle this silence is on purpose
02:00:985 - delete this useless green line
02:17:358 (2) - repeat 1 time less , pay attention to next spacing good idea
02:47:794 - delete this useless green line K
02:49:189 (1,2) - vol=15% 15? 20 here
02:57:396 - delete this useless green line K
03:12:599 (1) - 236,136,192599,6,0,B|196:92|120:168|176:228|228:264|256:280|256:280|284:264|336:228|392:168|316:92| I like
mine pretty much..

03:18:076 - delete this useless green line
03:19:415 - vol=35
03:20:616 - ^
03:23:017 - ^ 30 seems good for me. 其实耳机有很大区别的..
03:27:819 - vol=40 , add finish , remove clap Actually clap is on purpose, but..whatever, finish seems good for me now. K


03:30:220 - vol=35 40 is better.
03:32:621 - ^ , ok I ignore this kind of suggestion from now on , I think 40% clap is too noisy
03:34:880 - delete this useless green line
03:37:423 - vol=40 40 is too low.
03:47:027 - remove clap , add finish K
03:56:484 - kaki end at 03:56:630 and delete this line Actually Kiai seems too bad for my eyes..I decided to deleted the Kiais.
03:56:630 (1,2) - vol=25 , and add finish at 03:56:630 15 too low? then 20. Finish is not necessary.
04:12:452 (1) - not to voice down but use a silenced spinner hitsound , and slience end
this is the most awesome Easy I had even seen 0.0
完毕

Download: riya - Chiisana Tenohira (Joshua Lost) [Nymph no Yume].osu
Topic Starter
JoJo
MP3 file exchanged. Redownload plz ~
Sorry for inconvenience ~ >A<

All diff Timing fixed.
Shiro
Shouldn't the title be "Chiisana Te no Hira" ?...

viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 this is how to change the title without duplicating the map.
Topic Starter
JoJo

Odaril wrote:

Shouldn't the title be "Chiisana Te no Hira" ?...
Hmm.. I try to search online and finally consider that both title are okay so...
Anyway , Title is changed to 'Chiisana Te no Hira'.
And thank you ~

Sorry , trouble everyone to redownload again . >_<
kanpakyin

wcx19911123 wrote:

[KPY]
00:58:726 (1) - move third square to x:296 y:320 X
01:12:232 (4,5,6) - to slider What do you mean?
01:16:883 (1) - too short X,that's ok for a Hard.
01:35:941 (1,2,3,4,5) -make spacing smaller plz It is too hard to do that.
01:55:149 (1) - this really ugly >_> make it fatter plz Fixed something
02:02:052 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/43Gv , not to follow vocal just for adding clap at 02:02:352 is very odd imo X,not now.
02:13:756 (5,1) - 5.9x jump is too huge to be in this diff It's a Hard
02:21:859 (1,2) - ._. ^
03:17:015 (1,2) - ._. ^
03:39:824 (5) - http://puu.sh/43Hb Change a bit!
04:12:452 (1) - end at 04:17:291 Fixed due to new MP3 and New timing.
some anti-jump is too huge , fix this it will be a awesome Normal I would like to say this is a Hard diff D:
Thanks but just change a little bit.

Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira (Joshua Lost) [KPY no Kibou].osu
Nymph
Fix the heart shape slider for a little bit :P

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira (Joshua Lost) [Nymph no Yume].osu
Kiddo-Kun
[General]
There are two .osb files. Delete one.
Tags aren't the same for all diffs. Please fix that.

[Nymph no Yume]
02:16:807 (1) - Remove new combo to match the vocals a little better.
02:19:208 (3) - Add new combo to match previous parts.
02:38:416 (3) - Add a whistle or a finish to this note.
02:39:636 - Remove this inheriting section. What ever you changed the timing point can be used.
02:44:437 (5) - Make this slider more symmetrical.
03:55:480 (5) - New combo.
03:56:680 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider.

[KPY no Kibou]
02:20:409 (5) - Add a finish to this note.
00:56:675 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:55:199 (1) - Move the tail of this slider up one tick (Grid Lvl 3)
03:18:265 (1) - Add a finish to the start of this slider like you did with 02:01:201 (1)
03:35:522 (1) - Add a finish to this spinner.
03:50:978 (5) - Add new combo.
03:53:079 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Koubou]
02:01:201 (1) - Add a finish to the start
02:19:208 (10) - Eh, I'm not sure about this slow down...But whatever.
02:33:614 (10) - New combo.
02:34:815 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:15:350 - Why not do something like this for the break?

03:31:470 (10) - New combo.
03:32:671 (1) - Remove new combo.

Everything else is fine. Sexy looking map. Plays fine.

STARED~
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Kiddo-Kun
SPOILER

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[General]
There are two .osb files. Delete one. Fixed
Tags aren't the same for all diffs. Please fix that. Fixed @kanpakyin Update before fix plz ~

[Koubou]
02:01:201 (1) - Add a finish to the start Fixed
02:19:208 (10) - Eh, I'm not sure about this slow down...But whatever. Err.
02:33:614 (10) - New combo. OK
02:34:815 (1) - Remove new combo. OK
03:15:350 - Why not do something like this for the break? Fixed

03:31:470 (10) - New combo. OK
03:32:671 (1) - Remove new combo. OK

Thank you for modding ^^
kanpakyin
>Kiddo-Kun
All reject sorry :<

.........................................................
Nymph

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Nymph no Yume]
02:16:807 (1) - Remove new combo to match the vocals a little better. ya..I don't think so
02:19:208 (3) - Add new combo to match previous parts. Don't think so either.
02:38:416 (3) - Add a whistle or a finish to this note.I think it don't need hitsound here.
02:39:636 - Remove this inheriting section. What ever you changed the timing point can be used. K
02:44:437 (5) - Make this slider more symmetrical. I didn't meant to make this a symmetrical slider..
03:55:480 (5) - New combo. No I don't think so.
03:56:680 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider. with this volumn, finish really meant nothing.
thanks~

Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira (Joshua Lost) [Nymph no Yume].osu
Leorda
Leorda : JOJO-SENPAIIIII!!!!!!
Kanpakyin : Hoi Hora!

Nymph no Yume
* Don't use the kickslider (having more than one repeating slider), beginner player will confusing of this stuff. Example : 01:35:991 (1). Other than that is fine for me...

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KPY no Kibou
* Change the PreviewTime to 86928. Fix this using a notepad/wordpad, to make the Preview Time is same on each diff

01:10:781 (2,3) - I don't think this jump is fit to the song
01:44:695 (4) - New combo?
02:30:313 (4) - The head slider isn't following the song, move it to 02:30:613?
03:42:725 (3,4) - I think these doublets are confusing for some players. Try add note at 03:42:575 or change something

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Koubou
* Some this diff are including the burai slider that the slider is unreadable. So, make sure some slider are a clear path (e.g. 02:08:404 (7)). Also, it's included in new rules~

00:52:774 (5) - New combo for new pattern
02:19:208 (10) - New combo for slowdowns slider
03:12:649 (4) - ^ (?)

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I cannot find something wrong :cry:
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Leorda
SPOILER

Leorda wrote:

Leorda : JOJO-SENPAIIIII!!!!!! Hazukashi >//< You're much better than me yeah ~
Kanpakyin : Hoi Hora! Errrr... What's that ...0.0 (Asked by bakaKPY =w=)

Koubou
* Some this diff are including the burai slider that the slider is unreadable. So, make sure some slider are a clear path (e.g. 02:08:404 (7)). Also, it's included in new rules~ Yeah..I will try~

00:52:774 (5) - New combo for new pattern OK~
02:19:208 (10) - New combo for slowdowns slider OK~
03:12:649 (4) - ^ (?) Uh..I'm not sure for this one~

------------------------------------------------------------------------

I cannot find something wrong :cry:

Thank you ! And sorry for checking it late because I have not received any E-mail this time..I don't know why.. TwT
Nymph

Leorda wrote:

Nymph no Yume
* Don't use the kickslider (having more than one repeating slider), beginner player will confusing of this stuff. Example : 01:35:991 (1). Other than that is fine for me... :P ehhh....I think it is fine...cause this diff is more like a normal =v=.. So I think I can keep it, thanks!
EnakoRin
General
  • try offset = 197037
    个人认为这种透明的spinner圈转起来很痛苦LOL
    SB\bubble可以转得再慢一点
    加个slider的球的皮肤的话更好看
Nymph no Yume
  • 01:37:192 (1) - 声音加大点,然后加个whistle?
    02:19:208 (3) - new combo?
    02:48:039 (6) - new combo?
    02:57:643 (7) - new combo?
    03:50:678 (3) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish会比较有感觉
KPY no Kibou
  • 你到底用了几种DS orz
    00:43:770 (6) - 仔细看这个slider是歪的- -
    00:50:373 (1,2) - 不知道normal玩家能不能适应这种jump
    01:04:779 (3) - 可以让这个最后一个圆圈刚好盖住后面的4
    01:11:381 (3,4) - 因为前面用了JUMP,所以我建议这两个之间的距离弄成和01:10:781 (2,3)一样
    03:42:725 (3,4) - 不好看,重叠在一起吧
    03:58:181 (1,2) - 喂喂这是什么情况
    我觉得完全可以加大AR(比如AR7)做成HARD。这个难度从排列上讲比NOMAL难,但是做HARD就合适
Koubou
  • 03:12:649 (4) - 这个真心不好看- -
nice map,STAR AND KDS STAR(KDS暂时不够,有了再来补上 :x )
速速RANK,我去肛#1
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Weiren
SPOILER

Weiren wrote:

General
  • try offset = 197037 这个好像off了= =?
    个人认为这种透明的spinner圈转起来很痛苦LOL那就继续痛苦下去吧~(咳。。咳。。。
    SB\bubble可以转得再慢一点 嗯~减慢了点
    加个slider的球的皮肤的话更好看 OK~立刻让KayeSara帮我做一个!
KPY no Kibou
  • 我觉得完全可以加大AR(比如AR7)做成HARD。这个难度从排列上讲比NOMAL难,但是做HARD就合适
其实我就是让他做hard的。。(捂脸

Koubou
  • 03:12:649 (4) - 这个真心不好看- - 嗯。。。改了。。。@_@
nice map,STAR AND KDS STAR(KDS暂时不够,有了再来补上 :x ) XD
速速RANK,我去肛#1 好的好的=w=
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
Nice Program ! =w= 谢谢猥人~
Nymph

Weiren wrote:

Nymph no Yume
  • 01:37:192 (1) - 声音加大点,然后加个whistle? 这里想故意静音
    02:19:208 (3) - new combo?
    02:48:039 (6) - new combo?
    02:57:643 (7) - new combo?我觉得其实加不加NC区别都不大..
    03:50:678 (3) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish会比较有感觉 不太觉得..一瞬间觉得Soft finish不错 不过为了统一 还是算啦..
谢了 :P
kanpakyin

Weiren wrote:

KPY no Kibou
  • 你到底用了几种DS orz 2種 .__.
    00:43:770 (6) - 仔细看这个slider是歪的- - = =好把.
    00:50:373 (1,2) - 不知道normal玩家能不能适应这种jump 這是H
    01:04:779 (3) - 可以让这个最后一个圆圈刚好盖住后面的4 不要..
    01:11:381 (3,4) - 因为前面用了JUMP,所以我建议这两个之间的距离弄成和01:10:781 (2,3)一样 暫時還是保持現狀把orz..
    03:42:725 (3,4) - 不好看,重叠在一起吧 我覺得很不錯啊 D:
    03:58:181 (1,2) - 喂喂这是什么情况 .__.後面jump,這裏new combo適合
    我觉得完全可以加大AR(比如AR7)做成HARD。这个难度从排列上讲比NOMAL难,但是做HARD就合适 icon什麼得不可信阿 D:
Thanks.
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