Midnaait wrote:

Hey, M4M
// = Optional/Suggestion

[General]

Disable Widescreen Support check o/
// HP is a bit too low on the lower diffs, consider making it a bit higher?
// BG coordinates should be 0,-50. I think it looks better that way

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,-50

I'm not familiar with that, I'll just ask Stefan about it

[Futsuu]

00:04:017 - Change to d, same pitch as 00:04:354 -
00:09:410 - ^ oki owo
From 00:22:051 to 00:32:837 - I think this part is a bit too dense for a Futsuu, so I'd delete some notes and make some patterns a bit simpler, you could use this as a basic structure for example: http://puu.sh/vRjug/83b85b3fc8.jpg I deleted some notes, I hope that's still not too dense
00:39:916 - // Delete this note and change 00:40:421 - to don? Would suit well for the piano imo you're right.
01:12:949 - Delete for a bit more lenghty break, It's a bit too dense again I think
01:18:343 - ^ owo

I'd look a bit into the density, comparing with Kantan is a lot more dense[/notice]

[Muzukashii]

00:24:579 - I think this extra note kills the flow a bit, consider deleting it mmh ok
00:46:067 - Delete this kat, triplet is not necessary here imo it could fit, but I deleted the 2nd one now
00:46:657 (198,199) - Ctrl+G? Snare sounds first and plays better great
00:47:837 and 00:48:343 - Invert those triples, piano notes are higher in the first triplet rather than the second I really thought the same then.
If you did ^^^ change 00:48:680 - to kat okay

Kiai is a bit difficult, but I'll let it pass lol

[Oni]

00:08:736 - Delete? no piano there well yeah, and changed 00:08:904 (25) - to d.
00:40:506 - Move this to 00:40:169 - piano there
00:46:657 - k? snare lol
01:10:421 - kkd triplet there? The guitar solo is really clear there
01:15:815 - ^
01:21:208 - ^ alright
01:23:483 - Delete? Melody stops there oki! I also deleted 01:23:820 (522) -
01:36:713 - dkdkd there, drums call it that fits well
01:37:303 - Add d? Same reason as above yea

Good luck

Stefan wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:57:275 (236) - und 01:05:534 (271,272) - könnte man entfernen, damit mehr Rest Times eingebracht werden. ok
Kiai - generell sollte man auch irgendwo eine 3/2 bzw. 1/1 Pause unterbringen, aber idk.. eventuell kann der nächste BN da Vorschläge geben. dann warte ich darauf, bevor ich hier noch irgendeinen Unsinn veranstalte

[Futsuu]
00:30:140 (92,93,94,95) - kann eventuell so geändert werden: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/4Yw1fHEg.png done, nur habe ich keine Ahnung, ob 00:31:489 (96,97,98,99,100,101) - jetzt so doof ist.
00:41:938 (133) - während 00:40:927 (131,132,134,135,136) - einen guten Follow zum Piano haben, finde ich (133) wiederum unpassend und würde sich bieten, zu entfernen. yw der Sound dort war eh langweilig.
00:44:466 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - So von der Musik könnte man auch hier wieder das Piano prioritsieren: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/G96cXDtZ.png Die Note bei 00:46:657 - würde ich dann auch entfernen. klingt besser, yeah
00:47:837 (151,152,153,154,155) - könnte man auch konsistenter gestalten imo: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/24YurPrx.png ok
00:51:208 - würde ich dann raten zu entfernen, da es eines der schwächeren Töne ist und sich als Pause ermöglicht. finde den gar nicht so schwach, aber kann man machen
00:53:904 - der dk kd Übergang passt meiner Meinung nach nicht wirklich hierher, dkd k ist besser. ? das sieht bei mir alles so aus
00:54:410 - 01:05:197 - Wie ich schon zuvor gesagt habe, muss die Futsuu - da du die Muzukashii hier nicht einfacher gestalten willst - für diesen Teil gebufft werden. 00:54:410 - 00:59:803 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/a1hUz8OL.png und 01:00:477 - 01:05:197 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/isEhMdzQ.png (Hitsounds kannst du anpassen, wie es dir gefällt) "da du die Muzukashii hier nicht einfacher gestalten willst" - ich habe gesagt, dass ich nur nicht genau weiß, wie ich die Muzukashii dort vereinfachen soll und ich nicht direkt auf den Punkt zurückgreifen möchte, die Futsuu zu buffen. Zumal das schon ziemlich heftig ist für eine Futsuu, oder? Zu dem Thema lasse ich es erstmal unverändert.


derp dang

Arrival wrote:

lowering the volume to 70 for the pre preview point part then putting it to 90 sounds better to me
lower it here 00:54:410 - again and re 90 for the kiai I can't hear any difference but you should know what you're talking about, so I'll just change it LOL

oni

00:42:949 (239,240,241,242,243) - i'd definetly replace this by kkdkd, the kk start flowing better after a dk kd oki

01:07:893 - kiai's good although it could have been made a bit more interesting via some pattern differenciation there's one thing I don't like in the kiai, maybe you know something better for 01:22:725 (511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522) - ? Idk but it's weird to play for me (maybe it's just me and I am stupid or something). I like the rest

in muzukashii i really think breaks after a bicolour triplet should be more important.
it's also lacking a bit in breaks, dont hesitate to give like 2/1 breaks to players before main downbeats. if you have troubles putting some, tell me and i'll help you out. mmm yeah maybe I need help with that, otherwise I would make it more worse I guess lol

by the way, in the muzu, do you think I should make 01:26:433 (385) - as a k?

lower diffs seem good except kiai in futsuu which repeats itself to much, diversif your patterning a bit. with kkd's for exemple. did it, hope that's fine now owo?

Gabe wrote:

add stefan thenutritiousguy in the tags :<

Kisses wrote:

owo what's this

• [Stefan's Kantan]
  
  

  Ranking Criteria wrote:

  If a 1/2 pattern is used, the patterns must stay simplistic and be followed by a rest moment. For songs that follow a swing beat, this limit is 1/3.

1. From 01:16:994 to 01:29:466 - there is no 3/1 or longer rest moments within this session while combining 1/2 triplets in the pattern chain, which is in fact quite similar to the difficulty of a typical Futsuu. I would suggest rearranging the pattern like this to allow break between every 1/1+1/2 cluster. (cursor at 01:23:062 - )

• [Futsuu]

1. From 00:11:264 to 00:29:972 - this part is rather consecutively mapped without 2/1 or longer breaks and the pattern chain is even longer than those in the kiai. I would suggest you to remove notes like 00:16:994 (47,51) - to crack the chain into smaller ones. This would help emphasize the intensity of the music from 00:18:680 to 00:22:051 - as well.

• [Muzukashii]

1. From 01:07:893 to 01:38:736 - despite this session being the difficulty spike, it would be better to use 3/2 rests to avoid consecutive mapping, given Futsuu has certain number of 2/1 breaks. You may delete one or two notes like 01:29:803 (401) - to achieve the said purpose.

Stefan wrote:

💤

1. 00:00:983 (3) - to d
2. 00:04:017 (12) - to d
3. 00:06:376 (19) - to d
4. 00:09:410 (27) - to d

1. 00:15:477 (58,59,60,61) - changed to d k k d instead (already forgot what I had here before)
2. 00:28:960 (144,145,146) - to ddk (kkd before)
3. 00:43:202 (242,243) - ctrl+g
4. 00:45:646 (258) - to d
5. 00:46:152 (262) - made this to k

1. 00:04:017 (11) - to d
2. 00:09:410 (26) - to d
3. 00:34:185 (134) - to k because of the sound

1. 00:57:107 (177) - to d because it's pretty much the same sound as 00:56:433 -

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hello, I would like to mention some difficulty/spread issues existing in the lower difficulties of the set.

• [Futsuu]

1. From 00:11:264 to 00:29:972 - this part is rather consecutively mapped without 2/1 or longer breaks and the pattern chain is even longer than those in the kiai. I would suggest you to remove notes like 00:16:994 (47,51) - to crack the chain into smaller ones. This would help emphasize the intensity of the music from 00:18:680 to 00:22:051 - as well. okie, I removed those at 00:13:455 - , 00:16:152 - , 00:16:994 - , 00:18:343 - , 00:21:039 - , 00:23:736 - , 00:29:129 -

• [Muzukashii]

1. From 01:07:893 to 01:38:736 - despite this session being the difficulty spike, it would be better to use 3/2 rests to avoid consecutive mapping, given Futsuu has certain number of 2/1 breaks. You may delete one or two notes like 01:29:803 (401) - to achieve the said purpose. *placeholder*

Raiden wrote:

it seems you want to make some changes, go ahead

in addition, I think the muzu should have at least some 3/2 break in that kiai as well, lots of 1/2+1/4 grouped together
but at the same time Oni is super dense in 1/4 albeit simple patterns huuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhh middle way!!!!