Will try but not sure I'm pointing out every repeating parts, so try to find out same parts which my mod can be applied.
00:00:495 - Sound feels like continuing.
Better make LN like
this. (Somewhat similar with Ash's special diff)
Same for 00:02:676 - col 4 00:04:858 - col 1 00:11:404 - col 1 00:13:585 - col 4
But not for 00:01:585 - 00:05:949 - ~~~ these parts since you focused on drum sounds.
Added for all before 00:09:760 - for consistency
00:05:949 (5949|0,5949|2,5949|3,6085|0,6085|1,6188|3,6188|2,6324|0,6324|1,6324|3,6460|3,6460|2,6597|1,6733|3,6733|0) -
Try to increase note density a bit slower.
Will delete 00:06:188 (6188|3) - this note if I were you.
There is sound so kinda wanna keep
00:09:631 - 00:10:722 - make these to doubles. Same for other parts.
these sounds arent so strong to me, better not
00:11:813 - sounds a lot similar with 00:11:949 - so maybe make double or jack. Same for other parts.
00:12:222 - also similar with 00:11:949 - so triple or jack. Same for other parts.
00:22:790 - 00:23:335 - 00:23:881 - 00:24:426 - add a note (this part feels too light for me)
00:27:904 (27904|2,28176|2,28722|2) - are these snapped right? feels like about 1/24 snap (110bpm) faster for me.
Maybe u should
change starting bpm to 220 and move 1/12 snapor not i'm not sure
Same for other parts
I dont think so, but I rather changed the offset to 488
00:30:085 (30085|1,30358|1) - Same for here too
00:37:449 (37449|2) - also this one too
I felt like offset is about 10ms late.
I tested offset for 485ms and it was better. Maybe I'm wrong.
Plz change offset
after checking my mod if I was right.
I should have made general box lol00:28:040 - add a note here and so for other parts
How about patterning like
this seems not consistent with music imo
00:35:131 (35131|3) - should make LN longer 00:35:404 -
fixed
00:35:949 - triple? 00:38:131 - 00:44:676 - 00:46:858 - 00:55:585 - too
00:41:949 - 00:50:676 - 00:59:404 - add a note on col 3
rearranged that part
01:13:858 - probably missing a note on col 1
added
01:26:540 (86540|2) - move this note to col 2 and rearrange 01:26:676
intended jacks(86676|1,86676|0,86676|3,86813|1,86949|2,86949|3,86949|0,87085|2,87222|1,87222|3,87222|0,87358|1,87495|0,87495|3,87495|2,87631|2,87767|0,87767|3,87767|1,87904|2) - this part
00:26:404 - 01:36:222 - seems better to add a note on col 1 for me to give point to bell sound.
00:59:813 - add a note on col 1
01:00:222 - add a note on col 4
01:00:767 - add a note on col 2
01:00:904 (60904|1) - move to 3 or 4
01:01:585 (61585|0) - I know why you used this LN, but kinda feel useless for me
rearranged and deleted the LN
01:36:495 - to 01:40:040 - and 01:40:858 - to 01:43:040 -
you should probably use LN like
this or
this or
thisAnd if you change pattern to somewhat similar with my suggestion, I'm sure I can put some SVs that matches well with this song.
i dont wanna such trick pattern tbh. and actually this part may not need such SVs. Lighter SVs are prefered
01:48:154 (108154|3,108222|3) - 01:50:608 (110608|2,110676|2) - Not a fan of these jacks (which can distract players while playing
at least for me)
this is ok as long as it follows music imo01:53:949 - finish with quad or make those triple to LN and end at 01:56:131 -
rearrangedPlease look at Ash's special diff mod too.