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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 Februari 2018 at 17:29:06

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Astral Dogma
Tags: Saten PAX VESANIA Yui Itsuki 伊月ゆい Lantis fairy empire gothic lolita rock metal
BPM: 180
Filesize: 13909kb
Play Time: 05:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Maximum - 4Key (4,49 stars, 3800 notes)
  2. Saten (5,33 stars, 1354 notes)


Download: Yousei Teikoku - Astral Dogma
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2017-06-08 11:23 - AfifAkilie -: di ingame atau di forum mas mod nya ? :o
2017-06-08 11:23 puxtu: irl aja
2017-06-08 11:26 - AfifAkilie -: 00:59:299 - add 1 soalnya kedenger suara gitar/synth?
2017-06-08 11:26 - AfifAkilie -: 01:01:966 - add 4 ^
2017-06-08 11:26 puxtu: aduh gw ga follow itu
2017-06-08 11:26 puxtu: cuma ngelayer drum disini
2017-06-08 11:26 - AfifAkilie -: owh okey
2017-06-08 11:27 puxtu: xd
2017-06-08 11:28 - AfifAkilie -: 01:01:383 - ghost note?
2017-06-08 11:31 puxtu: iya kyknya
2017-06-08 11:31 - AfifAkilie -: 01:23:799 - ctrl+h?, takutnya banyak yg mindblock disini xd
2017-06-08 11:32 puxtu: ok xd
2017-06-08 11:32 - AfifAkilie -: 01:39:466 - ini sama juga
2017-06-08 11:34 - AfifAkilie -: 02:03:966 - add 4 soalnya ada suara snare?
2017-06-08 11:35 - AfifAkilie -: 02:04:133 - delete 1
2017-06-08 11:37 - AfifAkilie -: 02:57:133 - ctrl+h
2017-06-08 11:37 puxtu: done
2017-06-08 11:38 - AfifAkilie -: 03:21:299 - add 1
2017-06-08 11:38 - AfifAkilie -: 03:21:466 - del 4
2017-06-08 11:40 puxtu: done
2017-06-08 11:42 - AfifAkilie -: 04:58:466 - note 3 pindah ke 2 ? soalnya beda suara
2017-06-08 11:43 puxtu: ok
2017-06-08 11:43 puxtu: 01:18:133 (78133|1,78133|0) - bagian ini menurut lo gimana
2017-06-08 11:52 - AfifAkilie -: kurang pas aja sih rasanya wkwk
2017-06-08 11:52 puxtu: wkkwk
2017-06-08 11:52 - AfifAkilie -: terutama dibagian ini
2017-06-08 11:52 - AfifAkilie -: 01:18:258 - suara nya ga berubah tapi burst nya berubah?
2017-06-08 11:53 - AfifAkilie -: saran nya sih kaya [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8291420 begini]
2017-06-08 11:53 - AfifAkilie -: walaupun hampir ga ada bedanya sama patternnya yg sebelumnya
2017-06-08 11:55 puxtu: ok gw ganti
2017-06-08 11:56 puxtu: dah
2017-06-08 11:59 - AfifAkilie -: udah kayanya itu aja xd
2017-06-08 11:59 puxtu: xd
2017-06-08 11:59 puxtu: yakin?
2017-06-08 12:02 - AfifAkilie -: wait
2017-06-08 12:04 - AfifAkilie -: 01:21:716 - 01:24:383 - 01:25:549 - 01:25:883 - 01:27:049 - 01:35:049 - 01:36:216 - 01:37:716 - bagian itu emang ikutin vocal atau emang ghost note ? owo)
2017-06-08 12:05 puxtu: disitu emang ada bass drum kan?
2017-06-08 12:07 - AfifAkilie -: ga ada kayanya :/, coba hitsound di off in
2017-06-08 12:08 puxtu: ada wkwkw
2017-06-08 12:10 - AfifAkilie -: owh ok ok
2017-06-08 12:10 puxtu: denger baik2 deh
2017-06-08 12:10 - AfifAkilie -: 01:19:049 - coba yg itu
2017-06-08 12:11 puxtu: iya itu jelas bgt ada
2017-06-08 12:12 - AfifAkilie -: oh iya deh ada xd, baru sadar pas dimax volume
2017-06-08 12:12 puxtu: lel
2017-06-08 12:15 - AfifAkilie -: udah deh kayanya itu aja owo)
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2017-06-08 13:08 puxtu: hello!
2017-06-08 13:08 Minseo2000: o/
2017-06-08 13:08 puxtu: mod my map pls
2017-06-08 13:08 puxtu: can i have a hamburger pls
2017-06-08 13:08 Minseo2000: oh
2017-06-08 13:09 puxtu: can i have a hamburger pls
2017-06-08 13:09 Minseo2000: not sure about mod
2017-06-08 13:09 Minseo2000: but i can testplay
2017-06-08 13:09 Minseo2000: and say a few things on irc
2017-06-08 13:09 puxtu: can i have a hamburger pls
2017-06-08 13:09 Minseo2000: to mod i'll have to wait till the weekends
2017-06-08 13:09 puxtu: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=El1BhIQFMfs
2017-06-08 13:09 puxtu: ^ me coming to mod queue
2017-06-08 13:10 Minseo2000: youtube =\
2017-06-08 13:10 Minseo2000: brb getting vpn up
2017-06-08 13:10 Minseo2000: D:
2017-06-08 13:10 Minseo2000: what's the map btw
2017-06-08 13:10 puxtu: lol did they block youtube in your country?
2017-06-08 13:10 puxtu: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1242149 Yousei Teikoku - Astral Dogma [Maximum]]
2017-06-08 13:10 Minseo2000: china
2017-06-08 13:10 Minseo2000: :c
2017-06-08 13:10 puxtu: i love china
2017-06-08 13:11 Minseo2000: dl'ing
2017-06-08 13:11 Minseo2000: aaaa
2017-06-08 13:11 Minseo2000: filthy frank =\
2017-06-08 13:12 puxtu: dont you love that guy
2017-06-08 13:12 Minseo2000: cringe tho
2017-06-08 13:12 Minseo2000: xdddd
2017-06-08 13:12 Minseo2000: still dl'ing map
2017-06-08 13:12 Minseo2000: almost there
2017-06-08 13:12 Minseo2000: yay done
2017-06-08 13:13 Minseo2000: i'll play it through and say a few things xd
2017-06-08 13:13 puxtu: ayyay
2017-06-08 13:15 puxtu: xd
2017-06-08 13:19 Minseo2000: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8291503 =\
2017-06-08 13:19 Minseo2000: not sure if i can say much about this map
2017-06-08 13:20 puxtu: hey that's pretty good score
2017-06-08 13:20 Minseo2000: didn't expect myself to sightread FC
2017-06-08 13:20 Minseo2000: oh well
2017-06-08 13:20 Minseo2000: onto the editor
2017-06-08 13:20 puxtu: ay
2017-06-08 13:20 Minseo2000: well, if there's anything i felt during testplay it is that it felt heavier on the ring fingers than the index
2017-06-08 13:21 puxtu: ow
2017-06-08 13:21 Minseo2000: it could be just me tho
2017-06-08 13:22 Minseo2000: 00:08:133 - ~ 00:08:466 - making this more random/trilly like 00:13:799 - ~ 00:14:133 - might better represent the piano imo
2017-06-08 13:23 puxtu: ok
2017-06-08 13:24 Minseo2000: 00:20:466 (20466|2,20633|2) - 00:21:299 (21299|0,21466|0) - 00:21:799 (21799|3,21966|3) - 00:26:633 (26633|2,26799|2) - the sudden stacking felt a bit awkward considering that the notes were at least 1/1 apart previously
2017-06-08 13:24 Minseo2000: nothing major tho
2017-06-08 13:25 puxtu: ow
2017-06-08 13:25 puxtu: moved
2017-06-08 13:25 Minseo2000: i'm picking up a few missing notes in the part after this
2017-06-08 13:25 Minseo2000: not sure if you left them out on purpose cuz they're small or smth
2017-06-08 13:26 puxtu: which one?
2017-06-08 13:26 Minseo2000: 00:34:799 - ~ 00:54:799 - there's a constant 1/1 ticking sound in this section
2017-06-08 13:26 Minseo2000: but some of them are very small
2017-06-08 13:26 puxtu: yeah
2017-06-08 13:26 puxtu: it's really hard to hear
2017-06-08 13:26 Minseo2000: some are a bit more audible tho
2017-06-08 13:26 Minseo2000: 00:37:799 -
2017-06-08 13:26 puxtu: i wouldn't map that beat
2017-06-08 13:26 Minseo2000: 00:40:466 -
2017-06-08 13:26 Minseo2000: 00:41:799 -
2017-06-08 13:27 puxtu: still very small
2017-06-08 13:27 Minseo2000: etc
2017-06-08 13:27 puxtu: ;w;
2017-06-08 13:27 puxtu: but it become louder later on
2017-06-08 13:27 Minseo2000: imo those are about as loud as the one mapped at 00:37:133 (37133|2) -
2017-06-08 13:27 Minseo2000: well it shouldn't matter too much even if you ignored them tho since they really aren't audible until you really try listening to them
2017-06-08 13:28 puxtu: i thought so
2017-06-08 13:28 Minseo2000: well
2017-06-08 13:29 Minseo2000: moving on?
2017-06-08 13:29 puxtu: nya
2017-06-08 13:29 Minseo2000: 00:56:133 - ~ 00:57:466 - imo this section is quite underwhelming dispite the guitar buildup
2017-06-08 13:29 Minseo2000: 00:58:799 - ~ 01:00:133 - as with this part
2017-06-08 13:30 Minseo2000: subjective tho
2017-06-08 13:30 puxtu: well what do you want me to do with it
2017-06-08 13:31 Minseo2000: probably adding some notes for the guitar
2017-06-08 13:31 Minseo2000: it felt underwhelming since it's right before a 1/2 double section
2017-06-08 13:31 Minseo2000: oh and there's strings as well at the later part
2017-06-08 13:32 Minseo2000: 00:56:633 - , 00:56:799 - , 00:57:133 - strings i think
2017-06-08 13:33 puxtu: more like a violin sound to me
2017-06-08 13:33 Minseo2000: well a violin is a string instrument but eh that doesn't matter much xed
2017-06-08 13:33 Minseo2000: *xd
2017-06-08 13:34 puxtu: exde
2017-06-08 13:34 Minseo2000: exdee
2017-06-08 13:35 puxtu: eeexdeee
2017-06-08 13:35 Minseo2000: moving on?
2017-06-08 13:36 puxtu: yee
2017-06-08 13:36 Minseo2000: 01:23:466 (83466|1,83522|2,83570|1,83633|3,83633|0,83633|2,83799|1,83855|2,83904|1,83966|3,83966|2,83966|0) - imo it might be better if these two had different directions
2017-06-08 13:36 puxtu: yeah i already did this
2017-06-08 13:36 puxtu: in previous irc mod
2017-06-08 13:36 Minseo2000: o ok
2017-06-08 13:36 Minseo2000: xd
2017-06-08 13:36 puxtu: but i haven't update xd
2017-06-08 13:36 puxtu: exde
2017-06-08 13:36 Minseo2000: well then i'll be ignoring all the other similar patterns then xd
2017-06-08 13:36 Minseo2000: well what else can i say xdddd
2017-06-08 13:37 puxtu: yes pls
2017-06-08 13:37 puxtu: xd
2017-06-08 13:38 Minseo2000: 02:17:466 - ~ 02:28:133 - oh right this is what i meant by harder on my ring fingers than my index fingers
2017-06-08 13:38 Minseo2000: there's alot more [1][2][1] and [4][3][4] mini-trills than [2][1][2] and [3][4][3] trills
2017-06-08 13:39 Minseo2000: not sure if you intended it tho
2017-06-08 13:39 puxtu: yeah im changing those right now
2017-06-08 13:40 puxtu: done
2017-06-08 13:40 Minseo2000: oh and on a similar note 02:33:466 - ~ 02:38:799 - anchors seem to be harsher on the left ring finger
2017-06-08 13:41 Minseo2000: 02:33:466 (153466|0,153633|0,153799|0,153966|0) - 02:34:466 (154466|0,154633|0,154799|0,154966|0,155133|0) - 02:35:799 (155799|0,155966|0,156133|0,156299|0) - 02:36:966 (156966|0,157133|0,157299|0,157466|0,157633|0) -
2017-06-08 13:42 puxtu: whats that
2017-06-08 13:42 Minseo2000: a few 4-note anchors and 5-note anchors after coming in succession
2017-06-08 13:42 Minseo2000: xd
2017-06-08 13:42 Minseo2000: maybe you can try moving a few anchors to other columns
2017-06-08 13:42 Minseo2000: should i try moving them around?
2017-06-08 13:48 puxtu: nah
2017-06-08 13:48 puxtu: i did it myself
2017-06-08 13:48 Minseo2000: o ok
2017-06-08 13:48 Minseo2000: just when i was about to upload a screenshot xd
2017-06-08 13:48 puxtu: o
2017-06-08 13:49 Minseo2000: well
2017-06-08 13:49 puxtu: i actually went to watch meme video and i forgot you're here
2017-06-08 13:49 Minseo2000: xd
2017-06-08 13:49 Minseo2000: rip
2017-06-08 13:49 puxtu: xd
2017-06-08 13:49 puxtu: jk
2017-06-08 13:49 puxtu: xD
2017-06-08 13:49 Minseo2000: well tbh i can't say more about this map
2017-06-08 13:49 puxtu: XDD
2017-06-08 13:49 puxtu: xdDDxd
2017-06-08 13:49 puxtu: aye
2017-06-08 13:49 Minseo2000: if anything it's the anchoring at the kiai at the end
2017-06-08 13:49 puxtu: i see
2017-06-08 13:49 Minseo2000: 03:52:133 (232133|0,232299|0,232466|0,232633|0,232799|0) - 03:52:799 (232799|1,232966|1,233133|1,233299|1,233466|1) - like these for example
2017-06-08 13:50 Minseo2000: 03:54:799 (234799|1,234966|1,235133|1,235299|1,235466|1,235633|1) - or this
2017-06-08 13:50 Minseo2000: xd
2017-06-08 13:50 Minseo2000: but that's about it
2017-06-08 13:50 puxtu: ok ok i got it
2017-06-08 13:50 puxtu: xd
2017-06-08 13:50 Minseo2000: it does get a bit repetitive at the end but the song is somewhat repetitive so nothing much you can do about that =\
2017-06-08 13:50 puxtu: xdxd
2017-06-08 13:50 Minseo2000: the map seems mostly okay to me xd
2017-06-08 13:51 puxtu: :ok_hand:
2017-06-08 13:51 Minseo2000: ye i'm done
2017-06-08 13:51 Minseo2000: lol
2017-06-08 13:51 Minseo2000: even if i try modding this weekend i won't be able to pull out anything
2017-06-08 13:51 Minseo2000: hope this helped xd
2017-06-08 13:51 puxtu: lmao ok then
2017-06-08 13:51 puxtu: it does xd
2017-06-08 13:51 Minseo2000: for rank?
2017-06-08 13:52 puxtu: yes
2017-06-08 13:52 Minseo2000: good luck then o.o)b
2017-06-08 13:52 puxtu: owo)b
2017-06-08 13:52 puxtu: post the log
2017-06-08 13:52 Minseo2000: o
2017-06-08 13:52 Minseo2000: oki

free kds or smth xd
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owo i am modding ur map
00:11:133 - 1 note here probs
make 01:23:633 - and 01:23:966 - doubles (compare them to this 01:22:966 - ) do this for all the other same stuff if u consider this (cbf pasting all the time points on here xdddddddd)
01:34:799 - rearrange triple so its different from 01:34:299 (94299|0,94299|3,94299|1,94466|0,94466|3,94466|1,94633|3,94633|0,94633|1) -


cool acc map, veryy solid
only thing i dont like is the overuse of this pattern but that doesnt really matter tbh

also use this as bg pls http://puu.sh/wiDeb/d5eb13f096.png
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puxtu wrote:

Worms wrote:

also use this as bg pls http://puu.sh/wiDeb/d5eb13f096.png
smh fam http://puu.sh/wiLRa/28112693a1.png
prankt xdDDDDdD
also i mutualed
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hi puxtu >////<

03:50:883 (230883|1) - Remove ;these parts kind of are too long and no break when the rest is only like 3 note burts... idk yousei teikoku song lmao
03:53:216 (233216|0) - Remove
05:04:216 (304216|1) - Remove
05:06:549 (306549|0) - Remove
05:21:549 (321549|2) - Remove

goodluck~
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