spboxer3 wrote:

general

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  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. lead-in to 1500ms? lead-in is too short now, you can notice the issue when test. HP Bar suddenly increase to max. that's the reason I recommend it.

- done

Normal

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  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:46:471 (5) - add NC to indicate decelerate? (also, looks you make 4 measure before, consider make the new combo identical?) ok
2. 01:43:198 (5) - ^ ok
   
   
3. 02:06:107 (3,1) - consider to avoid overlaps? 02:06:107 (3) - slider end will show 300/100hit.png to make overlaps for this pattern. ok
   
   
4. 02:24:653 (1) - Umm... sorry to nazi it. but I notice your NC are kinda irregular, remove NC for 02:24:653 (1) - & 02:31:198 (1) - and add it at 02:29:562 (7) - ((to correspond the next part.

ok

senaya's Hard

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  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:14:016 (5) - I find the logic for your newcombo, but looks you miss the NC here, is intentionally?
2. 01:56:016 (1,4) - Umm... I'd rather stack it (make (4) under (1)'s slider end) to make the composing clear.
   
   
3. 02:29:562 (2,3) - lol'd, sound make the rhythm reverse is better to play and hear. ((fit the voice and drum.
   
   
4. 02:36:653 (1,2,3) - [optional] to make manual stack leniency? like this: ↓
   
   image and code

   
   

   292,232,156653,5,4,0:0:0
   284,216,156925,1,4,0:0:0
   276,204,157198,2,4,B|264:184,2,17.5

   
   
5. 02:47:016 (2,3) - same issue as 02:29:562 (2,3) -

Collab30

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  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:43:471 - add note here? It's too empty for hardest diff. also, it's more fit for the rhythm imo (follow the voice.) ok
2. 01:20:834 (5,1) - [minor] well, recommend to make blanket, but now is fine too. left it as it is now
   
   
3. 01:30:107 (1,2,3) - Umm, a kinda confuse for player since you used analogous spacing for 1/2 and 1/1. perhaps add NC will make this pattern more readable. fixed
   
   
4. 02:54:107 (5) - [minor] make the second node move 3 left grid (size 4) to make slider shape more smooth?

I think it's fine

contact me to get recheck your map, but please (T_T) you should used 2 color to reply my mod
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.

spboxer3 wrote:

[senaya's Hard]

1. 00:14:016 (5) - I find the logic for your newcombo, but looks you miss the NC here, is intentionally?
   yes, because there's not much left before the spinner i decided to not add a nc there.
2. 01:56:016 (1,4) - Umm... I'd rather stack it (make (4) under (1)'s slider end) to make the composing clear.
   done. changed spacing from 1.6x to 1.8x and moved 01:56:834 (2) under end of 01:55:062 (3) too.
3. 02:29:562 (2,3) - lol'd, sound make the rhythm reverse is better to play and hear. ((fit the voice and drum.
   fixed.
4. 02:36:653 (1,2,3) - [optional] to make manual stack leniency? like this: ↓
   
   image and code

   
   

   292,232,156653,5,4,0:0:0
   284,216,156925,1,4,0:0:0
   276,204,157198,2,4,B|264:184,2,17.5

   hmm. i think i'm going to leave is as it is since i copypasted it from natty30's collab :3
5. 02:47:016 (2,3) - same issue as 02:29:562 (2,3) -
   fixed.

rickyboi wrote:

I love this song !

Natteke wrote:

lmao ok mate