1. Hard (4.77 stars, 156 notes)
2. Insane (4.96 stars, 220 notes)
3. Normal (3.26 stars, 106 notes)
4. TW-KUMA01's Another (5 stars, 326 notes)

1. Offset 3066. Not only your red line is on a weird spot (although it's not a big deal at all), it's too early. This also means you need to fix the timing sections by +24ms.
2. Skin: The (1) for the combo skin looks weird, it looks slightly offcenter to the right. Not a big deal but it did confuse me in the editor (was trying to snap notes all the time lol). Look here.
3. No preview time set.

1. 00:26:316 (4,1) - This is alright but I don't like it. It would be much better if you could make them a jump. The music calls for it atleast. Also don't think the new combo on that (1) is really necessary, unless you used it to reset the colors for the next one.
2. 00:27:816 - I know you're trying to follow the voice here but this spot seems empty to me. Maybe add a note? If you do so I suggest to make it right where (3) currently is, those 2 being stacked feels good. Also fix the spacing between 1-2-3 then so it's equal.
3. 00:33:816 - ^
4. 00:43:191 - Same here actually. Also make it where current (1) is and stack it.
5. 01:04:191 (1) - Don't think NC is really necessary. Up to you if you really want it I guess.
6. 01:29:316 (1,1) - Pretty much the same as the above. These antijumps feel really bad and anticlimatic, especially for an end. Epic jumps wouldn't be hard and would fit nicely.

1. OD-1. OD7 feels kinda too much for a "hard". May be personal preference, but yeah.
2. HPdrain -1. It plays fine as it is if you don't miss, but you don't really get HP back if you miss here and there, it's just barely stable with a slight bump towards higher hp. For a hard, that's too hard imo.
3. 00:27:816 - Just like in insane, this emptiness bugs me. Add a note please.
4. 00:33:816 - ^
5. 00:40:003 (3,4) - 1 grid up. Looks nicer.
6. 00:45:816 - Add a note.
7. 01:30:066 (1) - Don't stack it, just distance it from the last note by distance snap. Feels better.

1. Use claps on every 3rd white tick as well. Fits the music and there are almost no awkward positions (i.e. sliders that go over it, or stuff on red ticks) since everything is mapped in 1/1 pretty much. (actually after a while I noticed you were doing this, so do this at the start as well, later on when longer sliders kick in looks fine as it is now, though)
2. 00:25:542 (1) - Since your map is full of 1/1 that seems a little boring. This is a good spot to add some change. Shorten the slider by 1 tick and add a circle where it currently ends the repeat. Like this @timeline. This shouldn't be too hard for a normal diff.
3. 00:26:667 (1) - This new combo really doesn't do good though. I suppose it's fine if you really want a color change but it doesn't really look nice.
4. 00:30:417 (1) - Remove this NC.
5. 00:33:417 (4) - New combo here and remove NC from the slider that's coming afterwards.
6. 01:04:167 (1) - Remove this NC.
7. 01:25:167 (4) - 1 grid right so it looks better with 2-3-4 forming a better triangle.
8. 01:27:042 (1,2,3,4,1) - These don't form a nice square. You would probably need grid4 to fix them but it doesn't look to bad.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Remove 2010 from the source and put it on Tags instead.
Combo colour #2 is hard to see in the background http://puu.sh/3wz6
The kiai fountain at the end feels anti climatic i recommend removing it.

[Insane]
00:26:034 (2,3,4) - I recommend you unstack (4) uneven stacks are pretty annoying to read, specially when the combo colour blends with the background.fine

[Hard]
All kiai times are unsnapped!
00:26:128 (3,4,1) - I'd recommend the same suggestion as [Insane] however since this one isnt as bad, ill leave it as a suggestion in here.done
01:30:066 (1) - Unstack this note, doesnt fit to leave the cursor hanging in there. nope

[Normal]
00:33:816 (2) - Please dont use kick sliders on the easiest difficulty because new players cant tell how many times it repeats, if anything i'd recommend adding a note instead of the last repeat. I changed it to something else

Like the maps and the song, SP+3

TW-KUMA01 wrote:

HI
Could i ask for a gd about Insane...?

star~~

1. 00:26:691 (1) - Add a finish.
2. 00:34:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm...Newbie will be cunfused by these notes which is on the red line...it's maybe not a big issue though.
3. 01:04:191 (1) - Add a finish?

1. 01:04:191 (3) - Add a finish?

1. 00:26:691 (1) - Add a finish.
2. 00:30:066 (x) - Put a note?
3. 01:04:191 (1) - Add a finich?

• 
  Turn the volume up.

1. 00:14:503 (7) - Back-sound is not 1/3 beat. It's 1/4 here. In addition, finish this slider at 00:14:972.
2. 00:25:847 (10,1,2,1) - Nonsensical spacing...
3. 00:30:253 (x) - Put a note.
   Most of notes are put on white line, but some of them are put on red line.
   For example...01:17:503 (1,2).
   What I mean is...putting on red line is not bad, however this way to use is boring a bit.
   I feel like these notes don't follow rhythm well.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Why do you have a skinned go.png if you dont have a countdown? done

[Another]
Rename this to Kuma's Another or something like that? done
This diff uses the same background as the other diffs, why does it have different combo colors? done
Circle Size -1 please. done
OD+2? done
00:20:316 (5) - This kind of shape looks kinda weird since only the reverse arrow is slanted. done
00:38:316 (6) - People deleting skin elements will have this slider visibility destroyed (a.k.a dont hide it under hitbursts even if they are translucent) also same comment as the previous one. spaced it out a little more

[Normal]
00:34:378 (1) - Please unstack, i totally didnt see this note at all i changed the rhythm

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hi there ohouran, checking bubbles for Mr. bliss.

[General]
- That light blue blends in with the background a little, I would use a darker shade of blue. Changed both combo colors
- YOUR SPINNER CIRCLE IS ONE PIXEL TOO BIG THE WORLD WILL END

[Normal]
00:30:051 (4,1) - Put the new combo on (4) instead?
i did this instead


[Hard]
00:51:426 (5) - New combo here because of spacing change.
i put the new combo on (4) instead of (5)

[someone's Another]
00:50:301 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I hit too many times ugh i have no idea what means, and the diff is TW-KUMA01's Another

OH WELL

ouranhshc wrote:

SapphireGhost wrote:

[someone's Another]
00:50:301 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I hit too many times ugh i have no idea what means, and the diff is TW-KUMA01's Another
I meant that I hit the stream too many times and it caused me to miss the (1). Not a big deal, though ~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Wait wait wait, hold it up there, why do u even have custom spinner skin elements if u dont use any spinners?

James2250 wrote:

Normal:
00:20:676 (1,2) - switch new combo to follow your previous patterns fixed
00:33:801 (2,1,2,3,4) - no claps on this part? fixed

Hard:
00:50:301 (3,1) - try and move this around so the repeats wont be hidden by the previous hitbursts (at least on the default skin) fixed

Insane:
00:26:301 (4,1) - kind of confusing while playing imo, space out more? done

Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I will rank~

ouranhshc wrote:

TOP THE CHARTS!!!!!