1. Add this 2 green Timing Sections: 01:44:961 (no kiai) and 01:45:060 (kiai).

1. 00:38:305 (1) - It seems a bit boring. Convert it into two 2/1 beat sliders like:
2. 00:41:484 (1) - ^
3. 02:49:828 (2) - I suggest removing this note and add a 1/1 beat slider in 02:49:431.

1. 01:00:557 (1,2,1,2) - You should follow the same pattern of New Combo as the next "Get up, get up" (01:57:775 (1,2,3,4)).
2. 01:22:809 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Something similar as before. Maybe you should use the same NC pattern as 00:38:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3).
3. 01:36:120 (2,1) - You should add some notes between those.
4. 02:16:451 (3) - Convert it into a 1/2 slider.
5. 02:19:630 (3) - ^

1. 00:28:371 (3) - Quite hard to sightread this note x_x
2. Overall, it looks more than a light Insane than a Hard for me. Consider renaming it?

1. 00:03:239 (9,10) - Add a kat in 0:03:140, as it sounds way better a kkd than a -kd.
2. 00:06:418 (18,19) - ^
3. 00:09:597 (27,28) - ^
4. 00:12:775 (36,1) - ^
5. 01:36:517 (x) - Add a d.
6. 01:36:716 (21) - d.
7. 01:49:232 (x) - Add a d.
8. 01:49:431 (22) - d.
9. 02:24:795 (51,52,53,54) - K D K D.
10. 02:37:510 (61,62,63,64) - ^

Deif wrote:

I'm finally here, MagicPhoenix o/ \o

General:

1. Add this 2 green Timing Sections: 01:44:961 (no kiai) and 01:45:060 (kiai).

Easy:

1. 00:38:305 (1) - It seems a bit boring. Convert it into two 2/1 beat sliders like: [attachment=0:89f8c]Captura.PNG[/attachment:89f8c]
2. 00:41:484 (1) - ^ fix both
3. 02:49:828 (2) - I suggest removing this note and add a 1/1 beat slider in 02:49:431. ok

Normal:

1. 01:00:557 (1,2,1,2) - You should follow the same pattern of New Combo as the next "Get up, get up" (01:57:775 (1,2,3,4)). fix
2. 01:22:809 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Something similar as before. Maybe you should use the same NC pattern as 00:38:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3). kay
3. 01:36:120 (2,1) - You should add some notes between those. nope sry
4. 02:16:451 (3) - Convert it into a 1/2 slider. in this case i want to highlight the beat, not the "Get up! Get up!" so i refuse sry
5. 02:19:630 (3) - ^^

Hard:

1. 00:28:371 (3) - Quite hard to sightread this note x_x i have no problems with it lol
2. Overall, it looks more than a light Insane than a Hard for me. Consider renaming it?

:(((

Pretty solid mapset, though I wanna see those changes in taiko diffy to try it again. Have a star~

MoonShade wrote:

This map is great, so I have just a few nazi stuff to tell you:

Easy
02:38:305 (3,1) - little overlapping bothers me ok

Normal:
00:25:193 (4,2) - they belong on the same spot nope ^^

Hard:
00:14:265 (5) and 00:15:656 (2) could easily be put on the same location ok
01:01:749 (2,4) - overlapping, maybe this? nope sry
02:03:338 (2) - put it on the same spot as 02:02:345 (3)? nope

Other:
In your hard diff, your 3. combo colour differs from all the other diffs lol

As said, great map, have my star :3

Deif wrote:

Dunskin's Taiko Oni:

1. 00:03:239 (9,10) - Add a kat in 0:03:140, as it sounds way better a kkd than a -kd. It sure would, but I'm mapping along the drums in
   the background and there're just two beats :/
2. 01:36:517 (x) - Add a d. fixed
3. 01:36:716 (21) - d. fixed
4. 01:49:232 (x) - Add a d. fixed
5. 01:49:431 (22) - d. fixed
6. 02:24:795 (51,52,53,54) - K D K D. fixed
7. 02:37:510 (61,62,63,64) - ^

fixed

1. Slider Velocity is faster, try to lower it?

1. too much 1/2 note. try to make it easier?

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

ellow~~ :3
*you posted 2 maps on my queue, then i select this map xD*
i think... i can give some suggestion to you~ because you got a Cool Mapset!


Easy

1. Slider Velocity is faster, try to lower it?

slow enough imo = =
00:13:272 (2) - make it balance with behind? ok
00:16:451 (5) - why dont start the New Combo at here? fix
00:25:987 (3) - ^ no
01:51:020 (2) - delete this slider? and use the previous slider do a return? ok
02:37:510 (2,3) - right 1 grid? kay
02:43:471 (1) - down + left 3 grid? no

Normal

1. too much 1/2 note. try to make it easier?

...
00:35:325 (1) - start from 00:35:126 to here and do a return? nope
00:38:305 (1) - dont do any jump at NORMAL~ use back x1.0 distance snap fix
01:02:941 (4,5,6) - change to the slider? ok
01:06:914 (1) - delete New Combo? no
01:50:623 (1) - ^ ok
02:14:067 (3) - delete this note? follow the lyrics...
02:17:246 (3) - ^ the only part where i want to follow the beats..sorry

Hard
00:15:458 (1) - delete this New Combo? ok
00:18:636 (1) - ^ ok
00:43:073 (1) - make it balance with behind kay
other looks nice!

-----
Cool mapset!
shoot a little star to you~
GoodLuck!~!!!

Nyquill wrote:

Mod post reserved. Will be doing this once I wake up from a nice nap.

Kind of sad because after this there's a marathon map queued in my queue :/

Alright here I gooooo
I.... am having a hard time find something to complain about. Sorry if I can't make a half page mod post like the others
I love the way you make (mapping) it look so easy :/

[General]
Taiko diff has different Kiai times from other diffs
Wanna have the end spinner at 02:51:815 instead?

Almost all suggestions:
[Easy]
00:24:398 - Why not have a note here? want a little break there
00:30:358 (3,4,5) - Having the reverse slider on the lyrics "Off my mind" would make it sound awesome ^^. Suggesting you swap (3) with (4,5) and then arrange it to your liking. It's a good idea but i'd have to place the (3) on a red line and I don't want to
01:30:358 (3,4,5,6) - Move two grids right LOL I see what you want to attain by it but no sry, it would cause spacing problems

[Normal]
00:33:934 - Have a reverse slider here, and a hit circle at 00:34:729 ok
01:20:623 (2) - Two ways you can do this. Decrease length of slider by 2 and create a slider between this slider and the 3 hitcircles after, or
do this: 2nd

SPOILER

[Hard]
I was fcing this diff until after the break :/. I don't know, I was expecting a calmer part to be slightly more forgiving on my hands and it throws a jump like 02:16:054 (1,2,3) (Of course, it is probably just because I'm bad at this game ). The star immediately afterwards at 2:18:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6) is fine but I thought I should hit (6) before (5) so I missed there as well. The positioning of (3) needs to be moved to the left and down a bit to make it look nicer. Changed pattern a bit

00:28:371 (3,4,5,6) - suggesting you swap the positions of (3) and (4,5,6) ok

Loved this map, sent a kudosu star your way ^^.

NotShinta wrote:

General:
- Should the map still be in WIP/Help? It seems complete enough and you did ask me to mod it, so I would assume it's completed. oops
- Some reasonable people might say you should use tick rate 2, as it's supposedly technically correct and lands on things in the music. Try it out and see how it sounds to you. I think it sounds slightly better with, but it's up to you. Don't like TR2 that much, sorry

Hard:
00:18:636 (6,7,8) - While you do seem to use a lot of spacing increases in this difficulty, it seems a bit odd to have one in the middle of a combo; can easily trip one up, as it doesn't seem to be called for musically. It's an easy jump and helps the flow, I added a NC so I hope it'll be okay
00:28:570 (4,5,6) - This triple feels a bit forced for difficulty, as there doesn't seem to be anything 1/4 at this point to justify it, so this can seem a bit unnatural, rather than epic. fix (the same can be said for 00:50:623 (3,4,5) I will keep this one for now - I change if someone points the same out again , 01:36:517 (1,2,3) same , etc. same)
00:38:305 (1,2,3,4) - I'd personally recommend Ctrl+J'ing (flipping vertically) this, as the anti-jumpy nature of 00:38:305 (1) with (3) of the previous combo can be difficult to read quickly. Plus it looks nicer and less clustered that way. i agree
02:03:636 - Perhaps you could add a hitcircle here, adding to the next stream, since this is part of the drum roll the next stream is mapped to; of course, this means you'll have to respace 02:03:736 (3,4,5,6,7) as well, but it may sound better that way. agree

Normal:
- For future reference, mapping without slight overlaps like you do can generally feel and look quite a bit better. You've got the whole playfield at your advantage. Otherwise, quite nicely mapped. I will keep it in mind, thanks ;3

Easy:
00:49:431 (1) - I think, for an Easy, going 'backwards' compared to the previous combo might feel a bit unnatural (if I don't make sense, I apologise, I'm tired so ask me when the morning comes). You could rearrange 00:48:438 (2) so it flows naturally into this, like so. I understand what you're trying to say very good, but I disagree. The next comboes will help you get into the flow very easy again and it's not like the flow will be influenced a lot by that slider
02:27:974 (1) - Perhaps remove the new combo here for consistency? Changed new combo pattern a bit , incl. your suggsetion

Didn't want to go particularly nitpicky on the mapset. Each difficulty is fun, anyway. Good job!

1. 02:13:570 (T) - unused section
2. make the lean-in 2000ms with notepad
3. and cancel the re-KIAI there

1. 00:47:047 (3,4,1) - make them more like a perfect trangle?
2. 01:59:365 (1) - 2 grids right

1. 00:26:385 (2) - place this right under 00:25:193 (4)?

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Set slider tick rate to 2 on all difficulties. I do agree , this might fit to the song, but I really dislike Slider Tick Rate 2 because i just don't like the sound at all, sorry but I won't follow this suggestion

[Hard]
00:18:636 (1,2,3) - I dont hear anything in the song as to why these should have higher spacing than 00:19:630 (1,2,3) The song give a falling feeling there so I wanted a drop-down jump there...reduced the distance a bit
00:21:418 (6,1) - Not a good place for a jump. I bet you'd get mad at me but I disagree on this one, because the jump flows perfectly into the pattern and gives a good feeling. Or did I misunderstand "not a good place"? xD
00:42:279 (2,3,4) - Move these to the bottom for consistence with the previous 2 sliders.
00:43:868 (2,3,4) - Move these to the top for the same reason ^
After you do both of the above flip vertically 00:41:484 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) so to not create an anti-jump. I was too lazy to look at this flip no but I did it in a way so it does not create an anti-jump
00:46:650 (1,2) - Once again i dont see a reason for a jump here if there should be a jump it would be at the timeline of 00:46:252 (2,1) these 2. They're falling together...I don't see any problems mapping along to the lyrics, it's actually a pretty cool idea I think xD
00:57:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - If you at least were making a pattern and this was an [Insane] difficulty this would be fine, but at this point i dont see the reason for the inconsistent spacing changes. This is a jump lol D:_
00:54:001 (3,1) - Spacing error. It's the same as the lesjuh-map, slight jumps, they won't catch much attention or confusion from the player, it just give a nice feeling. I think no one would mistake this for a 1/1 note or something
01:33:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Why are you accelerating the spacing here? i dont feel anything in the song that hints me to acceleration. If I'd map my jumps fitting to the song I would have like...~5 in the whole map =A= It's the same reasoning like 00:21:418
01:40:292 (1) - Reverse selection, for consistence with what you're doing in this section, since hitcircles are near the end of the sliders, not near the start. Why would I need consistency in a jump pattern, it's ok IMO
02:16:451 (3,4) - Why the anti-jump? fix
02:18:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cool pattern, however i think this would be better on an Insane... This plays good and not insane at all IMO, I will keep it for now and think over it
02:19:630 (1,2) - Switch new combo. sure
02:20:822 (4,5) - A jump is fine, but from 5 to 1, not 4 to 5. fix
02:22:411 (3,4) - Another inconsistence, you increased spacing through 1,2,3 and spacing goes short again on 4. It's not inconsistency but normal spacing...I've seen it over 9000 times and don't see any reason to suddenly pick this out
02:23:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again i dont see a reason for acceleration here. It follows the e-guitar and that one is clearly raising the tention leading to the final part to the song, of course I will accelerate to follow the guitar
02:30:557 (3) - New combo. fix
02:44:067 (2,3) - Once again i dont see why randomly jump, there's nothing in the song that hints to a jump here. Once again, it's to give the pattern a good feeling

[Dunskin's Taiko Oni]
This feels more like a muzukashii with increased diff settings tbh.
HP5, CS6, AR6 please :<

[Normal]
01:06:914 (1) - Remove new combo, i dont see the need to show 2 Geki/Katu in a row when the strong one is the last note, feels anti-climatic. huh

I guess most of your problems are centered on Hard, i highly suggest you get more mods on that difficulty, popping for now

1. Timing: The offset was really early and later on it screws stuff over. Use these settings:
   BPM 151 Offset 172
   BPM 151 Offset 133690 (you don't have this red line, you have a green line around there, just make it into a red one instead of adding a new red one).
   Don't forget to resnap correctly.
2. Those green combo colors are too similar. You should either remove one or make them have bigger contrast between each other.

1. Rename this diff to Insane.
2. 02:13:681 - This part here felt kinda weird with those claps. If it's intentional, I guess I am okay with that, but I suggest to make it a custom clap instead.

1. This is too hard for a normal. Slightly harder normals are ok, but this is more of a Hard. I'll list areas which you should watch out for, and change somehow. That will be in blue. Rename this diff to Hard.
2. OD-1. It's quite circle heavy, and quite dense on the timeline. Be more forgiving on the new guys. AR+1 so it matches the difficulty better.
3. 00:33:934 (4) - Move this lower and turn it so it's pointing towards the next note. This could be mistaken for a double repeater. Something like this comes to mind. Also fix any spacing issues that could be created by doing this.

1. Rename this to Normal.
2. AR+1. AR3 feels a bit too slow for the map speed.
3. 00:29:166 - Map something here.
4. 00:39:497 - ^
5. 00:41:087 - ^
6. 00:42:676 - ^
7. 00:44:265 - ^
8. 00:49:034 - ^
9. 01:01:749 - ^
10. 01:23:603 (1,2,1,2,3) - To save space, I will just write like this. Map something on the 2nd and 4th white ticks to make it more normal-like. Don't need to map all, just to fill up the emptiness.
11. 01:33:537 - ^
12. 01:46:252 - ^
13. Gonna stop here, you probably know where to add stuff. Just try not go over 3~3.15 stars for this diff, to keep the diff spread acceptable.

lolcubes wrote:

Hey there!

[General]:

1. Timing: The offset was really early and later on it screws stuff over. Use these settings:
   BPM 151 Offset 172
   BPM 151 Offset 133690 (you don't have this red line, you have a green line around there, just make it into a red one instead of adding a new red one).
   Don't forget to resnap correctly.
2. Those green combo colors are too similar. You should either remove one or make them have bigger contrast between each other.

[Hard]:

1. Rename this diff to Insane.
2. 02:13:681 - This part here felt kinda weird with those claps. If it's intentional, I guess I am okay with that, but I suggest to make it a custom clap instead.

[Normal]:

1. This is too hard for a normal. Slightly harder normals are ok, but this is more of a Hard. I'll list areas which you should watch out for, and change somehow. That will be in blue. Rename this diff to Hard.
2. OD-1. It's quite circle heavy, and quite dense on the timeline. Be more forgiving on the new guys. AR+1 so it matches the difficulty better.
3. 00:33:934 (4) - Move this lower and turn it so it's pointing towards the next note. This could be mistaken for a double repeater. Something like this comes to mind. Also fix any spacing issues that could be created by doing this.

[Easy]:

1. Rename this to Normal.
2. AR+1. AR3 feels a bit too slow for the map speed.
3. 00:29:166 - Map something here.
4. 00:39:497 - ^
5. 00:41:087 - ^
6. 00:42:676 - ^
7. 00:44:265 - ^
8. 00:49:034 - ^
9. 01:01:749 - ^
10. 01:23:603 (1,2,1,2,3) - To save space, I will just write like this. Map something on the 2nd and 4th white ticks to make it more normal-like. Don't need to map all, just to fill up the emptiness.
11. 01:33:537 - ^
12. 01:46:252 - ^
13. Gonna stop here, you probably know where to add stuff. Just try not go over 3~3.15 stars for this diff, to keep the diff spread acceptable.

The taiko looked fine. The timing is completely off and the diff spread is terrible. You should fix those at all costs.
Once you fix stuff, call me back for a recheck and if everything checks out, I will rebubble.

Magicphoenix wrote:

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Set slider tick rate to 2 on all difficulties. I do agree , this might fit to the song, but I really dislike Slider Tick Rate 2 because i just don't like the sound at all, sorry but I won't follow this suggestion

Sakura Hana wrote:

Excuse me? something fits the song better but you're ignoring the suggestion over "I dont like it"?
I thought the maps are supposed to follow the song?

Also just because something works on one map doesnt mean it works on every other map in the world, it's case-by-case scenario.

Re-Popping because my point still stands

Raging Bull wrote:

Hard:
01:04:741 (1) - Sounds better if you remove the slider and add a note at 01:04:940 (x). Doesn't sound as though the vocal started on red tick. It's following the beats
01:36:728 (1) - Add 1/2 slider just like at 00:52:224 (1) for consistency? Up to you though. nope sry
01:44:277 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with 00:59:774 (2) and 01:56:993 (2) ? The difference here is these are 4 circles, so i divide each Let's go into 2 combos. It's the same as 02:25:610, you could just as well say 00:59:774 & 01:56:993 needs NC to keep consistency with the other notes. I differ the circle & sliders there
01:58:781 (1,2) - Remove these two sliders and add a note at downbeat? Sounds better imo since I think you're mapping to the vocals but the 2 sliders don't fit. It will also be more consistent with 01:02:158 (1). ok
02:25:610 (1) - Same note as 01:44:277 (1). Remove the NC so it will be consistent with 00:59:774 (2) and 01:56:993 (2) ? nope
02:31:769 (1) - Remove this NC to be consistent with 00:53:019 (3,4) and 01:37:920 (3,4). Plus I think he is still singing on the same line in the chorus, so imo I don't think NC was necessary. ok
02:37:133 (4) - Change these into 2 1/1 notes? Your current NCing pattern is ruined because how this slider ends at where NC should have happened. ok

Idk. Just submitting so hopefully it doesn't get ranked yet. Just doing a check through. (Now that I can say I'm slightly better modder than last time I posted )

Edit: Yay done.

1. I find tick rate 2 to sound better. Also, it will fix the ugly unsymmetriness of the sliders in the Easy diff.

1. I'd suggest to rename this to Normal and raise the difficulty settings a bit. The mapping is pretty much what a Normal diff should be, but the difficulty settings are too low. For a better diff spread I'd suggest to just raise this to Normal rather than trying to remap it into Easy.
2. 00:41:496 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical ? Your previous pattern was symmetrical on both axis, but this one is symmetrical only on one. D:
3. 01:17:655 (2) - Asymmetric slider.
4. 01:20:039 (5) - Asymmetric slider.
5. 01:24:410 (2,1) - Asymmetric sliders.
6. 01:33:946 (1) - Asymmetric slider.
7. 01:53:019 (3) - Asymmetric slider.
8. 02:27:994 (2) - Asymmetric slider.
9. 02:31:173 (2) - Asymmetric slider.
10. 02:35:941 (1) - Asymmetric slider.
    Sorry for this naziness, but these sliders really bugged me off. They're obviously aimed at being symmetric, yet they aren't, and it caught my eye even when playing. The map would look really a lot nicer if the sliders were symmetric.

1. 00:39:907 (3) - Asymmetric slider.
2. 00:43:085 (3) - Asymmetric slider.
3. 01:06:926 (1) - This new combo feels weird. Why is this note a combo on its own ? It'd be better to remove it to finish the pattern before the break.
4. 01:38:715 (1,2) - and 01:40:304 (1,2) - and 01:51:430 (1,2) - and 01:53:019 (1,2) - : the three finishes sound too busy imo... I think it sounds better to remove the second one, like you did at
5. 01:56:198 (1,2) - That's really nazi of me, but these sliders' end don't stack perfectly. It caught my eye while playing and would be very easy to fix while making the diff look a lot nicer.
6. 02:47:862 (2) - I don't undestand why this isn't the same slider as 02:47:067 (1) - ? Wouldn't it look and play better (be it only for consistency) ?

1. I must say I completely disagree with these jumps. I fail to see what sense they make according to the song. Just because this is an Insane doesn't mean it needs superdifficult confusing jumps...

• That was pretty good =o

Odaril wrote:

Random bubble check time~

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and why).
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. I find tick rate 2 to sound better. Also, it will fix the ugly unsymmetriness of the sliders in the Easy diff.

Oh goodie..

Easy

1. I'd suggest to rename this to Normal and raise the difficulty settings a bit. The mapping is pretty much what a Normal diff should be, but the difficulty settings are too low. For a better diff spread I'd suggest to just raise this to Normal rather than trying to remap it into Easy. ..ok
2. 00:41:496 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical ? Your previous pattern was symmetrical on both axis, but this one is symmetrical only on one. D: No, I don't see any reason to make this symmetric 'cause previous pattern was previous as well. Also, t looks and plays fine/color]
3. 01:17:655 (2) - Asymmetric slider.
4. 01:20:039 (5) - Asymmetric slider. I don't think you will notice this at all when playing...also it's so symmetric in my eyes already I'm scared of doing it even more asymmetric
5. 01:24:410 (2,1) - Asymmetric sliders. fix
6. 01:33:946 (1) - Asymmetric slider. o_O?
7. 01:53:019 (3) - Asymmetric slider. fix
8. 02:27:994 (2) - Asymmetric slider. ^
9. 02:31:173 (2) - Asymmetric slider. ^
10. 02:35:941 (1) - Asymmetric slider. ^
    Sorry for this naziness, but these sliders really bugged me off. They're obviously aimed at being symmetric, yet they aren't, and it caught my eye even when playing. The map would look really a lot nicer if the sliders were symmetric.Honestly I don't care for sooooooo symmetric symmetrical sliders 1:1 that much...so I think I wasn't able to fix them all 1-1, but I tried my best...ty =)

Hard

1. 00:39:907 (3) - Asymmetric slider. fix
2. 00:43:085 (3) - Asymmetric slider. fix
3. 01:06:926 (1) - This new combo feels weird. Why is this note a combo on its own ? It'd be better to remove it to finish the pattern before the break.
4. 01:38:715 (1,2) - and 01:40:304 (1,2) - and 01:51:430 (1,2) - and 01:53:019 (1,2) - : the three finishes sound too busy imo... I think it sounds better to remove the second one, like you did at
5. 01:56:198 (1,2) - That's really nazi of me, but these sliders' end don't stack perfectly. It caught my eye while playing and would be very easy to fix while making the diff look a lot nicer. ok
6. 02:47:862 (2) - I don't undestand why this isn't the same slider as 02:47:067 (1) - ? Wouldn't it look and play better (be it only for consistency) ? fix

Insane

1. I must say I completely disagree with these jumps. I fail to see what sense they make according to the song. Just because this is an Insane doesn't mean it needs superdifficult confusing jumps...

Dunskin's Taiko Oni

• That was pretty good =o

Pay attention to symmetry issues. They can make a map look a lot worse than it should.