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Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月5日 at 17:40:24

Artist: Horie Yui
Title: PRESENTER (TV Size)
Source: DOG DAYS
Tags: Elements Garden Nakaramu Kanata
BPM: 151
Filesize: 14182kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.66 stars, 219 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 298 notes)
  3. Normal (2.42 stars, 88 notes)
Download: Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)
Download: Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1ST Beatmap (之前亂做的不算><)

DOG DAYS ED

Mapset
Normal : Done
Hard : Done
Insane : Done
GiNa
沒辦法下載,請重新上傳一次。
不然我無法mod ;__;
重新上傳後,PM我就好

EDIT:
Sorry for delay.
From my queue ;D

My Mod
[General]
-Make an Easy

[Normal]
Seems fine to me, good job.

[Hard]
00:48:476 (7) – NC here?
01:29:800 (1) – Why is this spinner so loud? Try to add a timing section at 01:32:085 -, which is S with 25%.
That’s all I got.

[Insane]
01:29:800 (1) – same thing as [Normal].

Have a star ;D
Andrea
Revived.

SPOILER
Short message and stuff, you know it.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

gina91189 wrote:

沒辦法下載,請重新上傳一次。
不然我無法mod ;__;
重新上傳後,PM我就好

EDIT:
Sorry for delay.
From my queue ;D 不,是我的失誤導致你無法MOD

My Mod
[General]
-Make an Easy

[Normal]
Seems fine to me, good job.

[Hard]
00:48:476 (7) – NC here?
01:29:800 (1) – Why is this spinner so loud? Try to add a timing section at 01:32:085 -, which is S with 25%.
That’s all I got.

[Insane]
01:29:800 (1) – same thing as [Normal].

Have a star ;D
抱歉,一直忘記回覆

大大所說的大致上都改好了。感謝你的意見和星星。

osuplayer111 wrote:

Revived.

SPOILER
Short message and stuff, you know it.
You are so fast.= =

Thank you. :)
CivelMamosora
看到你上次在我的布告欄裡的留言囉^^

BPM150.97是我用一個軟體測出來的@@

我玩過你做的圖囉!! 做的比我還好太多了呢~ 說不定會被Ranked呢^^

最近新增了太鼓的圖 做了很久 假如你對太鼓有興趣的話 可以玩玩看喔

畢竟PRESENTER是我做的第一張圖 若有什麼做不好的地方 還請大大多多指教^.^!!
ShadowSoul
Normal
00:09:535 (1) - Remove New Combo Lol

Hard
Nice

Insane
00:07:151 (6) - New Combo

That map is really nice .. :D Star of course <3
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

ShadowSoul wrote:

Normal
00:09:535 (1) - Remove New Combo Lol done

Hard
Nice

Insane
00:07:151 (6) - New Combo done

That map is really nice .. :D Star of course <3
thank your modding :)
Breeze
[General]
  1. OSB文件没用就删掉吧,当然,这不是必须删的,随你
  2. 现在的RANK标准是必须至少要有一个3星以下的难度,虽然现在normal已经够简单了,不过恐怕会有BAT说这个
[All diffculties]
  1. 00:29:403 spinner - 我总觉得这里结束spinner太早了,后面难度倒是可以往后拉一点,简单难度的拉得离后面note太近也会对新手很难, 尝试降低些音量应该会好些
[Normal]
  1. 01:32:184 Spinner - 这里静音(5%音量)或许更好,其实也都差不多:D
[Hard]
  1. 00:33:575, 00:33:972 - 这两处加个note是不是会感觉更好呢?
  2. 00:42:913 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个note的spacing也挺骗人的,不过hard难度这么用问题应该也不大
  3. 00:50:462 (2) - 这里重叠不一定能看出来是1/4拍, 有可能会误读成1/2拍, 把这个note放出来一点可能更好
nice map
star
EnakoRin
General
  • 歌曲包里面有个osb文件,如果不准备做SB请删掉它重新Full Submission
    offset = 786?
    最近要求使用192kbps的音乐文件,你看要不要换一个 (你的是160kbps的)
    01:27:416 (2) - Kiai在这里停止
Normal
  • Circle Size - 1
    这个难度总体偏难了,因为这是最低难度,它同时承担了Easy的任务。还有就是最低3.4星貌似不能RANK
    00:00:794 (2) - 第一个圈加finish
    00:08:144 (2) - 删掉,听起来不合节拍
    00:16:688 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
    00:26:224 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
    00:31:191 (1,2,3) - 这样重叠会让不少新人很困惑
    00:34:171 (4) - 加whistle
    00:40:529 (1,2) - 第一个圈加finish
    00:42:913 (1) - 不建议在这种难度里面用变速slider
    00:51:257 (1,2,3) - 还是分开吧
    00:54:833 (2,1) - 距离大了
    00:58:807 (1,2) - 我之前这么做被喷过,还是分开吧
    01:07:151 (2) - new combo
    01:18:674 (2) - 第一个圈加finish
    01:20:661 (3) - new combo
    01:25:032 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
    01:26:423 (2,3) - 太近了
    01:29:601 (1) - 静音
Hard
  • 00:00:794 (2) - 第一个圈加finish;不对称,重新画下
    00:16:688 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
    00:40:727 (3,5,7,9) - 加finish
    00:53:244 (6) - 第一个圈加finish
    00:56:423 (1,2,3) - 加finish
    00:57:416 (4) - new combo
    00:57:416 (4,6) - 没有重叠好
    01:01:588 (5) - 下移一点?这样看着不舒服
    01:20:264 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
    01:25:032 (5) - 第一个圈加finish
    01:26:820 (8) - new combo
    01:27:217 (1) - 去掉new combo
    01:27:416 (2) - new combo
    01:29:800 (1) - 静音
Insane
  • 不够难啊..AR + 1?
    00:00:794 (3) - 第一个圈加finish
    00:15:495 (6) - 下移一点
    00:15:893 (7) - new combo
    00:40:529 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
    00:51:654 (2,7) - 第一个圈加finish
    00:57:217 (4,5) - 没有重叠好,关掉GS和DS重新排列
    01:13:707 (4) - new combo?
    01:17:085 (1,2,3,4) - 加finish
    01:18:674 (2) - 第一个圈加finish
    01:28:211 (3,4) - 第一个圈加finish
    01:29:800 (1) - 静音
图不错,Star
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. OSB文件没用就删掉吧,当然,这不是必须删的,随你 DONE
  2. 现在的RANK标准是必须至少要有一个3星以下的难度,虽然现在normal已经够简单了,不过恐怕会有BAT说这个 嘗試降底Normal的難度直到3星以下
[All diffculties]
  1. 00:29:403 spinner - 我总觉得这里结束spinner太早了,后面难度倒是可以往后拉一点,简单难度的拉得离后面note太近也会对新手很难, 尝试降低些音量应该会好些 DONE
[Normal]
  1. 01:32:184 Spinner - 这里静音(5%音量)或许更好,其实也都差不多:D 全部難度都改成5%
[Hard]
  1. 00:33:575, 00:33:972 - 这两处加个note是不是会感觉更好呢? DONE
  2. 00:42:913 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个note的spacing也挺骗人的,不过hard难度这么用问题应该也不大 想保留,所以害玩家重玩幾次吧WWW
  3. 00:50:462 (2) - 这里重叠不一定能看出来是1/4拍, 有可能会误读成1/2拍, 把这个note放出来一点可能更好 DONE


nice map
star
感謝Modding和星星

Weiren wrote:

General
  • 歌曲包里面有个osb文件,如果不准备做SB请删掉它重新Full Submission DONE
    offset = 786?DONE
    最近要求使用192kbps的音乐文件,你看要不要换一个 (你的是160kbps的) 轉檔成192kbps 暫時保留,我的軟件沒辦法從低kbps轉成高kbps。我嘗試找其他MP3檔
    01:27:416 (2) - Kiai在这里停止 DONE
Normal
  • Circle Size - 1
    这个难度总体偏难了,因为这是最低难度,它同时承担了Easy的任务。还有就是最低3.4星貌似不能RANK 嘗試降低到3星以下
    00:00:794 (2) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    00:08:144 (2) - 删掉,听起来不合节拍 DONE
    00:16:688 (1) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    00:26:224 (1) - 第一个圈加finish 本來就有加WWW
    00:31:191 (1,2,3) - 这样重叠会让不少新人很困惑 為了加長前面的Spinner的長度,直接刪掉那個(1,2)
    00:34:171 (4) - 加whistle DONE
    00:40:529 (1,2) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    00:42:913 (1) - 不建议在这种难度里面用变速slider 我也覺得會讓人誤讀=w=,DONE
    00:51:257 (1,2,3) - 还是分开吧 DONE
    00:54:833 (2,1) - 距离大了 DONE
    00:58:807 (1,2) - 我之前这么做被喷过,还是分开吧 WWW DONE
    01:07:151 (2) - new combo 不明白原因,這個加new combo會很難讀譜??
    01:18:674 (2) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    01:20:661 (3) - new combo DONE
    01:25:032 (1) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    01:26:423 (2,3) - 太近了 拉開了一點
    01:29:601 (1) - 静音 DONE
Hard
  • 00:00:794 (2) - 第一个圈加finish;不对称,重新画下 DONE
    00:16:688 (1) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    00:40:727 (3,5,7,9) - 加finish 加了後很奇怪,所以改為(2)的第二個圈加Finish
    00:53:244 (6) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    00:56:423 (1,2,3) - 加finish DONE
    00:57:416 (4) - new combo DONE
    00:57:416 (4,6) - 没有重叠好 DONE
    01:01:588 (5) - 下移一点?这样看着不舒服 DONE
    01:20:264 (1) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    01:25:032 (5) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    01:26:820 (8) - new combo DONE
    01:27:217 (1) - 去掉new combo DONE
    01:27:416 (2) - new combo DONE
    01:29:800 (1) - 静音 DONE
Insane
  • 不够难啊..AR + 1? 你這觸=w=DONE
    00:00:794 (3) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    00:15:495 (6) - 下移一点 DONE
    00:15:893 (7) - new combo DONE
    00:40:529 (1) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    00:51:654 (2,7) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    00:57:217 (4,5) - 没有重叠好,关掉GS和DS重新排列 用Ctrl+R和網格重排了一次
    01:13:707 (4) - new combo? DONE
    01:17:085 (1,2,3,4) - 加finish 全加好像太吵了,所以只有加(1)
    01:18:674 (2) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    01:28:211 (3,4) - 第一个圈加finish DONE
    01:29:800 (1) - 静音 DONE
图不错,Star
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
感謝Modding和星星
RobotoRaccoon
Mod :o


Normal
00:06:348 (1,2) - Move both right 1 grid
00:45:686 (1,2,3) - All 3, right 1 grid, to fit in with (4)

Hard
• Tick Rate 2
00:14:295 (3) - Remove NC
00:47:474 (4) - This is not directly under the slider end, Place it directly under the slider end, so you see in the top right hand corner:
Prev: 0.00x
00:50:653 (3) - Looks odd being the only slider in this area with a Red Waypoint.
01:07:143 (3) - Same as 00:47:474,
Prev: 0.00x
01:26:216 (7) - ^

Insane
00:05:752 (7) - ^
00:19:461 (8) - ^
01:23:633 (11) - ^

-
Really good map!
I would star it if the option was available...
"Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon. "
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

Mod :o


Normal
00:06:348 (1,2) - Move both right 1 grid done
00:45:686 (1,2,3) - All 3, right 1 grid, to fit in with (4) done

Hard
• Tick Rate 2 done
00:14:295 (3) - Remove NC done
00:47:474 (4) - This is not directly under the slider end, Place it directly under the slider end, so you see in the top right hand corner:
Prev: 0.00x
00:50:653 (3) - Looks odd being the only slider in this area with a Red Waypoint.
01:07:143 (3) - Same as 00:47:474,
Prev: 0.00x
01:26:216 (7) - ^

Insane
00:05:752 (7) - ^
00:19:461 (8) - ^
01:23:633 (11) - ^

-
Really good map!
I would star it if the option was available...
"Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon. "
thank your modding :)
frost-b-spec
thx reqs~

[Hard]
0.31.183(x) - add object

[Normal]
0.31.183(x) - add object
1.17.077(2) - retuen -1

XD
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[Hard]
0.31.183(x) - add object It's urgent.

[Normal]
0.31.183(x) - add object ^
1.17.077(2) - retuen -1 I want to keep 5 return.

XD
thank your mooding
[Loli]Dark
我可以不給你star嗎
反正系統不給我給ww
:o :o :o :o :o :o
The 08 team_Bourdon
你好~ ;)

Normal
00:27:607 (1) - make it 10% sound.
00:31:382 (1) - start from here to 00:33:766 (2), your note of rhythm are very strange...
00:51:646 (3) - make it balance with behind
00:53:236 (1) - at beginning add a finish?
00:56:415 (1,2,3) - delete this circle, and add a slider at 00:56:415 to 00:56:713 and do a return.
00:57:607 (4,5) - ^, add a slider at 00:57:408 to 00:57:607 and do a return.
01:12:309 (1) - try to emphasize the areas of kiai time?
01:23:435 (3) - delete a return

Hard
  1. this difficulty's note rhythm are very strange.
00:05:951 (1) - delete this New Combo
00:07:044 (x) - add a note?
00:08:633 (x) - ^
00:27:607 (1) - same as easy, make it 10% sound
00:31:382 (1) - start at 00:31:580 ?
00:41:117 (5,6) - change to a slider?
00:41:911 (9,10) - change to a slider to 00:42:507?
00:58:501 (5,6) - delete this circle.
01:00:189 (2) - make it close a bit with the previous slider...
01:02:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - make them close a bit
01:08:733 (3,4,6,1) - ^
01:26:613 (x) - add a note?

Insane
00:24:229 (6) - add a New Combo
00:48:070 (3,4,5,6,7) - make them close a bit
00:54:031 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:59:593 (3,4) - make them close a bit with the previous note
01:04:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make them close a bit
01:10:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^
01:11:514 (9) - add a New Combo
01:12:905 (2) - make it close a bit with the previous note
01:21:845 (8) - add a New Combo

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加油~!!! :D
給你一顆小星星~ :3
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

你好~ ;)

Normal
00:27:607 (1) - make it 10% sound. Done.
00:31:382 (1) - start from here to 00:33:766 (2), your note of rhythm are very strange... Done.
00:51:646 (3) - make it balance with behind 看不懂= =
00:53:236 (1) - at beginning add a finish? Done.
00:56:415 (1,2,3) - delete this circle, and add a slider at 00:56:415 to 00:56:713 and do a return.
00:57:607 (4,5) - ^, add a slider at 00:57:408 to 00:57:607 and do a return. 對於這難度來說太難了
01:12:309 (1) - try to emphasize the areas of kiai time? 暫時不需要了
01:23:435 (3) - delete a return Done. 話說我到底為甚麼會加return = =

Hard
  1. this difficulty's note rhythm are very strange. 因為這個難度是很早之前做的,當時我不會做圖T.T
00:05:951 (1) - delete this New Combo Done.
00:07:044 (x) - add a note? 起步不想太急
00:08:633 (x) - ^ ^
00:27:607 (1) - same as easy, make it 10% sound Done.
00:31:382 (1) - start at 00:31:580 ? 想跟Normal同步
00:41:117 (5,6) - change to a slider?
00:41:911 (9,10) - change to a slider to 00:42:507? 我挺喜歡這個圓W 不太想動
00:58:501 (5,6) - delete this circle. 刪了覺得很奇怪??所以想保留
01:00:189 (2) - make it close a bit with the previous slider... 將1跟2都拉近了
01:02:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - make them close a bit 我怕會讓人誤讀
01:08:733 (3,4,6,1) - ^ ^
01:26:613 (x) - add a note? 結尾也不想太急

Insane
00:24:229 (6) - add a New Combo 這個位置放New combo會令人誤讀吧=w=
00:48:070 (3,4,5,6,7) - make them close a bit 雖然是ins難度,不過不想改變Note與Note之間的距離
00:54:031 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:59:593 (3,4) - make them close a bit with the previous note 這距離我再後慮看看,可能真的太遠了
01:04:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make them close a bit
01:10:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^ 這個我也覺得有點遠=w=若果再有其他玩家提出這問題的話,我會後慮修改
01:11:514 (9) - add a New Combo Done.
01:12:905 (2) - make it close a bit with the previous note 為了對稱所以不太想動。弱弱的問一下,其實4.61算不算很超過的距離?
01:21:845 (8) - add a New Combo Done.

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加油~!!! :D
給你一顆小星星~ :3 謝謝了
感謝大大的Mod. 謝謝了. :)
Backstep
Hi. :)

a little mod in your map. 8-)

[Normal]
00:03:170 (1) 1 grid down ? (lv4 grid)
00:06:746 (2) 1 grid left and 2 grid down ? (lv4 grid)
00:08:733 (4) x=292, y=148
00:09:527 (5) x=228, y=308
00:18:269 (3) 1 grid left ? (lv4 grid)
00:19:858 (1) 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid)
00:21:448 (3) 1 grid left and 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid)
00:22:242 (4) 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid)
00:42:110 (2) 1 grid left ? (lv4 grid)
01:12:309 (1) finish at start slider.
01:18:666 (2) ^

[Hard]
Seem fine for me. :D

[Insane]
00:21:448 (7) finish at start slider.
01:29:395 (5) 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid)

Great arrange note :3
loveFantasy
你好

[General]
  1. 建議弄個custom set的消音sliderslide在0:31~0:37使用, 這區域中的sliderslide太不適合了
  2. 看完所有難度後我認為01:24:031結束KIAI是比較好的
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:786 (2) - 起點加finish
  2. 00:13:501 (1) - 建議在00:15:885停, 有難度上的因素要考慮, 並且這邊是1/8鼓的起點, 並不算糟糕的spinner結束點
  3. 00:16:680 (1) -
  4. 00:23:037 (1) - 這是兩處很特別的(vocal), 值得自己擁有一個new combo
  5. 00:32:971 (1,2,3) - 調整一下(2)的位置吧..肉眼可見的spacing誤差
  6. 00:58:799 (1) - 同General處講的, 這個slider最好消音sliderslide
[Hard]
  1. 同Normal前奏處是可以多加些N:finish的
  2. 00:16:680 (1) - 這邊的綠線遲了9ms, 我不知道是否你是故意這樣讓起頭音效是S 75%這條線的, check一下
  3. 承上, 和Normal一樣可以考慮一下怎麼配合那個vocal
  4. 00:43:699 (5) - 值得new combo
  5. 00:51:944 (2) - (1,2,3)可以不照spacing擺, 比較容易強調出是3/4 note
  6. 00:53:236 (6) - new combo
  7. 00:59:196 (2,1) - 我個人認為這個跳很突然
  8. 01:09:130 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 同00:51:944, 事實上這種3/4是更適合做跳的地方, 歌曲給的感覺也是這樣
  9. 01:10:719 (4) - new combo
  10. 01:20:256 (1) - 所有點都可以上finish
[Insane]
  1. 感覺欠了一些finish..基本上和Hard一樣的位置
  2. 00:06:746 (1) - 這個可以作為3/4擺到藍線上(00:06:646)
  3. 00:22:242 (8) - 值得new combo
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

backstep wrote:

Hi. :)

a little mod in your map. 8-)

[Normal]
00:03:170 (1) 1 grid down ? (lv4 grid)
00:06:746 (2) 1 grid left and 2 grid down ? (lv4 grid) Done.
00:08:733 (4) x=292, y=148 Done.
00:09:527 (5) x=228, y=308 Done.
00:18:269 (3) 1 grid left ? (lv4 grid) Done.
00:19:858 (1) 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid) Done.
00:21:448 (3) 1 grid left and 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid) Done.
00:22:242 (4) 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid) Done.
00:42:110 (2) 1 grid left ? (lv4 grid) Done.
01:12:309 (1) finish at start slider. Done.
01:18:666 (2) ^ Done.

[Hard]
Seem fine for me. :D

[Insane]
00:21:448 (7) finish at start slider. Done.
01:29:395 (5) 1 grid up ? (lv4 grid) Done.

Great arrange note :3
Thank your modding :)


loveFantasy wrote:

你好

[General]
  1. 建議弄個custom set的消音sliderslide在0:31~0:37使用, 這區域中的sliderslide太不適合了 這樣說起來也覺得怪怪的,00:58:799那邊也應讓需要 :) 。我不肯定能夠成功做到(不太記得怎樣弄了= =),但是我會嘗試做。
  2. 看完所有難度後我認為01:24:031結束KIAI是比較好的 Done.
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:786 (2) - 起點加finish Done.
  2. 00:13:501 (1) - 建議在00:15:885停, 有難度上的因素要考慮, 並且這邊是1/8鼓的起點, 並不算糟糕的spinner結束點 我想統一三個難度,可以的還是想保留這個完結點。
  3. 00:16:680 (1) -
  4. 00:23:037 (1) - 這是兩處很特別的(vocal), 值得自己擁有一個new combo ???
  5. 00:32:971 (1,2,3) - 調整一下(2)的位置吧..肉眼可見的spacing誤差 調整了一下,不過要完全對稱貌似很困難
  6. 00:58:799 (1) - 同General處講的, 這個slider最好消音sliderslide
[Hard]
  1. 同Normal前奏處是可以多加些N:finish的 Done.
  2. 00:16:680 (1) - 這邊的綠線遲了9ms, 我不知道是否你是故意這樣讓起頭音效是S 75%這條線的, check一下 不,這是我調整失誤造成=w= Done.
  3. 承上, 和Normal一樣可以考慮一下怎麼配合那個vocal ??
  4. 00:43:699 (5) - 值得new combo 加NC怕讓人誤讀(雖說這裡本來就會讓人誤讀W
  5. 00:51:944 (2) - (1,2,3)可以不照spacing擺, 比較容易強調出是3/4 note
  6. 00:53:236 (6) - new combo Done.
  7. 00:59:196 (2,1) - 我個人認為這個跳很突然 我挺喜歡這部份=w= 如果有其他玩家再提出這點,我會後慮修改
  8. 01:09:130 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 同00:51:944, 事實上這種3/4是更適合做跳的地方, 歌曲給的感覺也是這樣 我應該明白大大的意思。不過這是我第一張地圖(算是吧?),所以不想做得太複雜,也是我能力還沒夠,怕影響ranked。
  9. 01:10:719 (4) - new combo Done.
  10. 01:20:256 (1) - 所有點都可以上finish 這樣貌似會太吵??


[Insane]
  1. 感覺欠了一些finish..基本上和Hard一樣的位置 Done.
  2. 00:06:746 (1) - 這個可以作為3/4擺到藍線上(00:06:646) 我覺得保留現在就可以了。不過也讓我多學了一個技巧 :)
  3. 00:22:242 (8) - 值得new combo 有點花
Thank your modding :)
loveFantasy
Normal/Hard你不懂我意思的那部分, 以Normal來說, 即是

00:17:474 (2) -
00:23:435 (2) -
這兩點都加上new combo. 如此一來

00:16:680 (1) -
00:23:037 (1) -
就成為了自己一個combo顏色的note, 拿來配合音樂本身很特別的vocal發單音

這是我個人的design idea, 看看你喜不喜歡

另外在3/4稍稍增大spacing是不會影響rank的, 很多著名mapper都會如此做, 但是保持spacing也是完全沒問題的, 所以一樣是看你的選擇
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

loveFantasy wrote:

Normal/Hard你不懂我意思的那部分, 以Normal來說, 即是

00:17:474 (2) -
00:23:435 (2) -
這兩點都加上new combo. 如此一來

00:16:680 (1) -
00:23:037 (1) -
就成為了自己一個combo顏色的note, 拿來配合音樂本身很特別的vocal發單音

這是我個人的design idea, 看看你喜不喜歡 這方面我覺得比較奇怪,本身我自己沒有做過這些。所以暫時保留吧 :)

另外在3/4稍稍增大spacing是不會影響rank的, 很多著名mapper都會如此做, 但是保持spacing也是完全沒問題的, 所以一樣是看你的選擇
畢竟我還是新手,我害怕我會處理得不好 :o
Megurine Luka
Hello. My mod.
:) 对不起来晚了。前阵子有些忙

[General]


[Normal]
总的来说有些地方不是很合歌曲的感觉._.
试着调整空当或者使用合适的slider和circle
把Beat snap divisor改成1/4
00:09:527 - 换成一个circle如何?
00:44:494 (3) - 减少一个来回
00:46:084 (2) - 从这个之后改成这样试试看
意思就是缩短3,去掉3的来回,00:47:673的地方添4,5拉长

[Hard]
00:09:726 (2) - 改成这样
00:13:501 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这一段可以使用绿线使声音减响
00:41:315 (6) - del
00:42:110 (10) - ^
00:48:468 (1) - del NC
00:49:064 (X)- add circle
00:49:262 (2,3,4) - 向后拖到00:49:461 (2,3,4) , 2 加一个NC
01:26:812 (1) - spacing, 拉远

[Insane]
00:10:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 处理方法如H
Nice Map


冲着Inane的map很想给星,但是现在星星增值了所以抱歉。
Good Luck Though。
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hello. My mod.
:) 对不起来晚了。前阵子有些忙 不要緊 :) 反正我修圖也很慢

[General]

[Normal]
总的来说有些地方不是很合歌曲的感觉._.
试着调整空当或者使用合适的slider和circle
把Beat snap divisor改成1/4
00:09:527 - 换成一个circle如何? Done
00:44:494 (3) - 减少一个来回 有點奇怪所以沒改到
00:46:084 (2) - 从这个之后改成这样试试看 這樣貌似會動到後面的半圓。太複雜所以沒改到
意思就是缩短3,去掉3的来回,00:47:673的地方添4,5拉长

[Hard]
00:09:726 (2) - 改成这样 Done
00:13:501 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这一段可以使用绿线使声音减响 Done
00:41:315 (6) - del
00:42:110 (10) - ^ 這兩個我想保留。不想拆掉圓形TT
00:48:468 (1) - del NC Done
00:49:064 (X)- add circle
00:49:262 (2,3,4) - 向后拖到00:49:461 (2,3,4) , 2 加一个NC 我覺得原本的比較好,所以保留
01:26:812 (1) - spacing, 拉远 Done

[Insane]
00:10:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 处理方法如H Done
Nice Map

冲着Inane的map很想给星,但是现在星星增值了所以抱歉。 不要緊,這點我非常明白=w= 得到您的星星認可我就足夠了 :)
Good Luck Though。
感謝modding :)
Kotone
Hi
General
ok

[Normal]
00:45:686 (1) - 我覺得這裏不跟vocal挺怪的
01:25:024 (1) - 頭加finish
01:28:203 (3) - ^

Hard
00:15:885 (3) - 加多一個repeat,然後在00:16:084 - ,00:16:282 - ,00:16:481 - 3點上加whistle如何?
00:31:382 - 同Normal
00:58:004 (2,3,4,5,6) - 在Hard裹這樣遮我不知道會不會被噴,畢竟不是Insane.自己看着辦吧
01:23:534 (5) - 感覺多餘,刪?

Insane
首先我想說像00:00:786 (3,4) - 這些頭叠頭我感覺不美觀 不過只是個人感覺而已
00:31:382 - 同上
00:43:302 (3,4) - whistle
01:28:799 (4) - finish

nice map
沒很多kd我就不射了
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

karenying wrote:

Hi
General
ok

[Normal]
00:45:686 (1) - 我覺得這裏不跟vocal挺怪的 Done
01:25:024 (1) - 頭加finish Done
01:28:203 (3) - ^ Done

Hard
00:15:885 (3) - 加多一個repeat,然後在00:16:084 - ,00:16:282 - ,00:16:481 - 3點上加whistle如何? Done.
00:31:382 - 同Normal 這個位置放Finish太響了
00:58:004 (2,3,4,5,6) - 在Hard裹這樣遮我不知道會不會被噴,畢竟不是Insane.自己看着辦吧 這個我了解的。我會看情況再調整
01:23:534 (5) - 感覺多餘,刪? Done. 這個我其實知道的=w=一直偷懶沒改

Insane
首先我想說像00:00:786 (3,4) - 這些頭叠頭我感覺不美觀 不過只是個人感覺而已 這是我挺喜歡做的www雖然我承認不太美觀,不過好處是很容易做到對稱。所以嘛,讓我偷懶一下
00:31:382 - 同上
00:43:302 (3,4) - whistle Done.
01:28:799 (4) - finish Done.

nice map
沒很多kd我就不射了
感謝大大的Modding :)
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ ertyukjh010 ~ :)

我的MOD来了 ~ 很好听的歌啊 ~ 好喜欢 >_<

[General]

你的MP3文件是 160 Kbps,换成192会更好吧?

最好不要在第1个红线前面放NOTE.

Read in time 3000 太长了, 2000 就好了.

01:29:593 (1) - 静音吧.


[Insane]

00:10:123 (3) - 往上移动2格.
00:26:415 (2,4) - 可以试试删除NOTE.
00:42:309 - 加个NOTE.
00:57:209 (4,5) - 没叠好.
01:29:395 (5) - 换成一个NOTE在01:29:593会更好.


[Hard]

AR-1
00:00:587 (2) - 这个多余,建议删掉.
00:16:680 (1) - 加Finish.
00:37:540 (1) - 删掉NC.
00:57:408 (1,2,3) - 这间距太小了,跟前面一样就好.


[Normal]

没问题,一切都好~


很不错的MAP啊 ~ 送你一颗小星星加油RANK ~

good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ ertyukjh010 ~ :)

我的MOD来了 ~ 很好听的歌啊 ~ 好喜欢 >_< Dog Days萬歲XD

[General]

你的MP3文件是 160 Kbps,换成192会更好吧? 嗯,您幫我換了XDD

最好不要在第1个红线前面放NOTE. 0.0

Read in time 3000 太长了, 2000 就好了. Done

01:29:593 (1) - 静音吧. 將INS的轉盤搬前了一格~,其餘兩個難度沒影響

[Insane]

00:10:123 (3) - 往上移动2格. Done
00:26:415 (2,4) - 可以试试删除NOTE. 原來的效果比較好
00:42:309 - 加个NOTE. Done
00:57:209 (4,5) - 没叠好. 重疊了一次,應該可以了
01:29:395 (5) - 换成一个NOTE在01:29:593会更好. 直接刪掉w 與另外兩個難度統一

[Hard]

AR-1 之前跟朋友開玩笑,之後忘了改回去:P
00:00:587 (2) - 这个多余,建议删掉. Done
00:16:680 (1) - 加Finish. Done
00:37:540 (1) - 删掉NC. Done
00:57:408 (1,2,3) - 这间距太小了,跟前面一样就好. Done

[Normal]
没问题,一切都好~ ^^

很不错的MAP啊 ~ 送你一颗小星星加油RANK ~ 再次感謝大大的mod和星星 ^^

good luck ~ ;)
safawu
This is a awesome map and wonderful song!Nice, I like it very much :3
here are some suggestions,just in my opinion,you can ignore it if you think it not good :3
[Normal]
i can not make normal diff well since i play not much NM diffs.
so i can't mod NM diff and give your suggestions,sry

[Hard]
[00:21:468 (1)]new combo here may be better i think
[00:31:402 (1)]the same suggestion of this time of insane diff
[00:36:170 (5,6)]this place may be a little strange @ @,also in insane diff,maybe i can't understand your rhythm :3
[00:45:905]try putting a circle here?
[01:05:574]change the new combo to here?
[01:18:289 (1)]new combo here
[01:22:064]why not add one circle here? :3
[01:22:461 (1)]add new combo here
[01:27:428 (1)]new combo here?(i think this place is hard to place a new combo or not D:)

[Insane]
[00:27:627 (1)]ending in 30610 then make the hit voice quiter?and then see next advice
[00:31:402 (1)]try moving to 30805,and then add a circle at 31402?
[00:34:580 (2)]what about ending in 34779?or change to 2 circles?in my opinion 34978 may be better for not putting anything?
[00:35:574 (5)]a slider may be better for bgm?
[00:39:150 (1,2,3,4)]can you try 1:circle at 39194;2:unchange;3:slider from 39457 to 39467;4:unchange
[01:10:739)(stream)][not mod]nice stream,i like it :3

sry for not shooting star since i have only one KD QAQ
expect for being ranked :)
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

safawu wrote:

This is a awesome map and wonderful song!Nice, I like it very much :3 最愛江堀+1~
here are some suggestions,just in my opinion,you can ignore it if you think it not good :3
[Normal]
i can not make normal diff well since i play not much NM diffs.
so i can't mod NM diff and give your suggestions,sry Not at all! ^^

[Hard]
[00:21:468 (1)]new combo here may be better i think Done
[00:31:402 (1)]the same suggestion of this time of insane diff 我再後慮看看0.0 因為我覺得原來的比較流暢
[00:36:170 (5,6)]this place may be a little strange @ @,also in insane diff,maybe i can't understand your rhythm :3 懶的用3連點=w=我再嘗試調整一下
[00:45:905]try putting a circle here? 有點奇怪0.0
[01:05:574]change the new combo to here? 這樣只會更亂吧0.0??
[01:18:289 (1)]new combo here ^ 我覺得原本的比較好
[01:22:064]why not add one circle here? :3 可能是為了對稱吧:P
[01:22:461 (1)]add new combo here ^
[01:27:428 (1)]new combo here?(i think this place is hard to place a new combo or not D:) Done.

[Insane]
[00:27:627 (1)]ending in 30610 then make the hit voice quiter?and then see next advice 同Hard
[00:31:402 (1)]try moving to 30805,and then add a circle at 31402? ^
[00:34:580 (2)]what about ending in 34779?or change to 2 circles?in my opinion 34978 may be better for not putting anything? Done.
[00:35:574 (5)]a slider may be better for bgm? Done.
[00:39:150 (1,2,3,4)]can you try 1:circle at 39194;2:unchange;3:slider from 39457 to 39467;4:unchange 0.0?
[01:10:739)(stream)][not mod]nice stream,i like it :3 是說我怕這距離會有點遠:P

sry for not shooting star since i have only one KD QAQ 不要緊^^ 現在KD的確升值很多 作為OSU的玩家我是明白的=w=
expect for being ranked :) 謝謝了^^ 感謝您的MOD~
safawu

ertyukjh010 wrote:

safawu wrote:

[00:39:150 (1,2,3,4)]can you try 1:circle at 39194;2:unchange;3:slider from 39457 to 39467;4:unchange 0.0?
不用谢>w<

@ @就是在39150放一个circle,39349也放一个circle,39547放一个到39647的四分拍slider,39945放一个circle
感觉可能更合适点,四分拍改成单个circle好像也行的样子

其实原来的多听几遍发现也挺好的,本来那段节奏挺快的note放的顺序也没多大影响 :3
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
原來如此。改過一下也不錯耶,更接近歌曲的節奏

不過我比較喜歡原來比較密集的擺法=w=

不過大大很厲害啊,可以將節奏聽的這麼仔細。

謝謝解答。^^
safawu
有KD了 补射个小星星 =w=
Teru21
hi from teruteru modding & guest diff queue sorry for the late..

[Insane]
00:35:375 (2) - add whistle
00:36:865 (2) - ^ instead of 00:36:865
00:56:435 (1,2,3) - add finish
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Teru21 wrote:

hi from teruteru modding & guest diff queue sorry for the late..

[Insane]
00:35:375 (2) - add whistle Done
00:36:865 (2) - ^ instead of 00:36:865 0.0?
00:56:435 (1,2,3) - add finish add in (1)
Thank your mod~~
abalee
suggestion:
Hard:
For me I hope it could be less streams so that it won't be too hard from [Normal]
00:46:501 (3) - remove the clap(coz it doesn't have clap in nearby part.)

Normal:
00:03:190 (1,2) - although it should be fine while using 1/1 in such place, I still think following the vocal could be better.

Pretty fine for new mapper.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

abalee wrote:

suggestion:
Hard:
For me I hope it could be less streams so that it won't be too hard from [Normal] 嗯,嘗試減少了部份連點
00:46:501 (3) - remove the clap(coz it doesn't have clap in nearby part.) Remove it ~

Normal:
00:03:190 (1,2) - although it should be fine while using 1/1 in such place, I still think following the vocal could be better. Done ~

Pretty fine for new mapper.
Thank your mod and star ~
wmfchris
[insnae]
duplicated timeline: 16700
00:02:792 (*) - 2個長slider 搭2個短slider感覺會好一點 用1/2 slider + note這樣
00:10 ~ 00:16 - 加入漸大聲既變化啦
00:25:839 (*) - 用3/4slider + notes
00;33:190 (2) - whistle
00:36:964 (2) - ^

前後難度差太遠 : <
mod mod 下走左去聽綠袖子

[Hard]
00:33:388 (4,5,6) - spacing
01:09:150 (1) - right 1 grid

gogogo ._.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
每天FB都見面我就不打招呼了:P

wmfchris wrote:

[insnae]
duplicated timeline: 16700 這是甚麼0.0
00:02:792 (*) - 2個長slider 搭2個短slider感覺會好一點 用1/2 slider + note這樣 well
00:10 ~ 00:16 - 加入漸大聲既變化啦 啊,這個會累死我。該死的這主要很不錯=3=
00:25:839 (*) - 用3/4slider + notes 對稱優先
00;33:190 (2) - whistle done
00:36:964 (2) - ^ done

前後難度差太遠 : < ...........
mod mod 下走左去聽綠袖子 這啥

[Hard]
00:33:388 (4,5,6) - spacing GJ 肯定是我哪天手殘碰到=A="
01:09:150 (1) - right 1 grid done

gogogo ._. ^^
謝謝modding
wmfchris
Coro
M4M~

[Hard]
00:41:534 - (4-1) note stacking 有点难看到

[Insane]
00:42:925 - (1-2-3-4-5) notes 有点太靠近
00:59:415 - (2-3) 应该太大的 jump 吧...

看起来能改的东西都已经改了,加油~
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

CoroQuetz wrote:

M4M~

[Hard]
00:41:534 - (4-1) note stacking 有点难看到 會後慮搬開

[Insane]
00:42:925 - (1-2-3-4-5) notes 有点太靠近 INS就沒差啦><
00:59:415 - (2-3) 应该太大的 jump 吧... 之前好像有人提出過;我再後慮要不要拉近一點

看起来能改的东西都已经改了,加油~ 謝謝mod :)
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.
lol 崛江由衣

General:
没东西好挑呢


Normal:
Issues
00:00:408 (1) - 像这样物件在红线之前 可能之后会有人要求你offset往前推呢……我先提一下好了 别的diff也是
00:31:402 (1) - newcombo BUG, 加newcombo

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:26:435 (2) - 我觉得长白线起更舒服


Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:55:640 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这是跟的钢琴?感觉有点长了 不过玩起来没问题 无视我吧


Insane:
Issues
00:31:402 (1) - newcombo BUG, 加newcombo

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:01:600 (4) - newcombo? 距离有点远还是红白线接 感觉nc好读点

没槽点呢 够8星就不射啦~好运 闪人=_=
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.
lol 崛江由衣

General:
没东西好挑呢


Normal:
Issues
00:00:408 (1) - 像这样物件在红线之前 可能之后会有人要求你offset往前推呢……我先提一下好了 别的diff也是 嗯,所有難度Offset變成負數:P
00:31:402 (1) - newcombo BUG, 加newcombo Done. 原來還有這種隱藏BUG(咦?

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:26:435 (2) - 我觉得长白线起更舒服 啊....因為不懂在其他位置開始,感覺那位置開始是最容易做


Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:55:640 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这是跟的钢琴?感觉有点长了 不过玩起来没问题 无视我吧 我都沒留意鋼琴聲的說~只是覺得很好聽就放了=w= Nymph大大聽得真仔細0.0


Insane:
Issues
00:31:402 (1) - newcombo BUG, 加newcombo Done.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:01:600 (4) - newcombo? 距离有点远还是红白线接 感觉nc好读点 一開始就算了,2pc開始都應該會記得;主要是影響後面的顏色,所以不想改:P

没槽点呢 够8星就不射啦~好运 闪人=_= 哈哈,謝謝 Nymph大大 的modding :)
Garven
[Normal]
Tick rate 2 sounds better
00:16:700 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty of the set.
00:31:402 (1) - ^ This is also kind of a strange rhythm anyway considering the music...

[Hard]
Tick rate 2 sounds better
HP Drain -1 or 2 please.
00:31:402 (1) - Yeah, I'm still not feeling why you have a slider here.
The small streams might not be appropriate for this level of difficulty.

[Insane]
00:31:402 (1) - You may want to end the spinner a little earlier and start these on the red tick. Feels better.

Solid set here - especially for your first. Excellent job~
Let me know what you think of the suggestions.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
Tick rate 2 sounds better Done. But I think the combo may be too high!?? What do you think. Tick rate 1 & Tick rate 2
00:16:700 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty of the set. Change that and end at 00:15:905. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/188789
00:31:402 (1) - ^ This is also kind of a strange rhythm anyway considering the music... Thank you so much. This problem has troubled me for a long time. Now. And than the spinner end at 00:29:415.

[Hard]
Tick rate 2 sounds better Done.
HP Drain -1 or 2 please. Done. -2
00:31:402 (1) - Yeah, I'm still not feeling why you have a slider here. Same to Norma, Start on the red line.
The small streams might not be appropriate for this level of difficulty. I want to keep it yet. Some player played it and they can read the pattern.

[Insane]
00:31:402 (1) - You may want to end the spinner a little earlier and start these on the red tick. Feels better. Same to Normal, Start on the red line.

Solid set here - especially for your first. Excellent job~ Thank you. :)
Let me know what you think of the suggestions.
Thank your mod. :)
I don't know what should I do if I want to get bubble. What do you think and how should I do??
lolcubes
Mod requested by Garven.

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:607 (2) - Maybe remove this note? It doesn't really follow the music.
  2. 00:09:846 (2) - I don't like this note because it interrupts the vocal while not following anything significant in the music. I think you should just remove it. If you feel that having only 2 circles is too little, maybe make a slider out of 00:09:548 (1,3)? It sounds better too, imo.
  3. 00:21:468 (7) - New combo. Also when you do it, try this, I think it sounds better. To clarify: You remove a repeat from the said slider, and you put 2 notes on the next circle. It plays nice and follows the music better.
  4. 00:27:627 - Add a note? You have it in your hard. You can just start the spinner 1/2 later or something (you also did this in your hard). Also add a finish to that note.
  5. 00:30:806 - Soft hitsound set please. So it's silent like it's supposed to be.
  6. 00:36:567 (1) - Remove new combo, and move the slider to 00:36:468 instead. After that, put a new combo on 00:36:866 (2). Fix the position too, so it looks something like this. It follows the music better and feels better to me.
  7. 00:59:614 (3) - New combo.
  8. 01:26:832 (5,1) - It would be nice if you could increase this spacing, it would feel great.
  9. 01:29:614 - Add a note here? You can start the spinner 1/2 later.
  10. 01:29:614 (1) - Maybe use 5% volume for the whole spinner? (even after you move it if you added a note)
[Hard]
  1. 00:27:627 (5) - Finish?
  2. 00:29:415 - Use a soft hitsound set for this, so the end is more silent.
  3. 00:33:786 (6,7) - Try this. It follows the vocal better and then it sounds better too. You will have to fix the positions somehow though.
  4. 00:59:614 (3) - New combo.
  5. 01:29:614 - Add a note? And then start the spinner after it.
  6. 01:29:614 (1) - Use 5% for the whole spinner?
[Normal]
  1. 00:29:415 - Use a soft hitsound set for this, so the end is more silent.
  2. 00:31:203 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - This rhythm sounds kinda off and is hard to follow. Maybe try this? I find that this works better. Feel free to change it however you want though, but it would be nice if the timeline was atleast similar. This is only a suggestion though, since I am not really happy how mine ended up too haha.
  3. 00:58:024 (5,1) - Increase this spacing a little.
  4. 01:29:614 (1) - Use 5% for the whole spinner?
I don't think the streams in Hard really fit, but they aren't that wrong I suppose. It would be nice if you could remove them completely and think of something else though.
edit2: deleted edit1 cause i'm stupid.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

lolcubes wrote:

Mod requested by Garven.

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:607 (2) - Maybe remove this note? It doesn't really follow the music. Done
  2. 00:09:846 (2) - I don't like this note because it interrupts the vocal while not following anything significant in the music. I think you should just remove it. If you feel that having only 2 circles is too little, maybe make a slider out of 00:09:548 (1,3)? It sounds better too, imo. Done. Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189508
  3. 00:21:468 (7) - New combo. Also when you do it, try this, I think it sounds better. To clarify: You remove a repeat from the said slider, and you put 2 notes on the next circle. It plays nice and follows the music better. Done. Jumping :P
  4. 00:27:627 - Add a note? You have it in your hard. You can just start the spinner 1/2 later or something (you also did this in your hard). Also add a finish to that note. Done.
  5. 00:30:806 - Soft hitsound set please. So it's silent like it's supposed to be.
  6. 00:36:567 (1) - Remove new combo, and move the slider to 00:36:468 instead. After that, put a new combo on 00:36:866 (2). Fix the position too, so it looks something like this. It follows the music better and feels better to me. How about this ^^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189516
  7. 00:59:614 (3) - New combo. Done.
  8. 01:26:832 (5,1) - It would be nice if you could increase this spacing, it would feel great. It's hard to increase the spacing 0.0
  9. 01:29:614 - Add a note here? You can start the spinner 1/2 later. Done.
  10. 01:29:614 (1) - Maybe use 5% volume for the whole spinner? (even after you move it if you added a note) Done.
[Hard]
  1. 00:27:627 (5) - Finish? Done.
  2. 00:29:415 - Use a soft hitsound set for this, so the end is more silent. Done.
  3. 00:33:786 (6,7) - Try this. It follows the vocal better and then it sounds better too. You will have to fix the positions somehow though. Done.
  4. 00:59:614 (3) - New combo. Done.
  5. 01:29:614 - Add a note? And then start the spinner after it. Done.
  6. 01:29:614 (1) - Use 5% for the whole spinner? Done.
[Normal]
  1. 00:29:415 - Use a soft hitsound set for this, so the end is more silent. Done.
  2. 00:31:203 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - This rhythm sounds kinda off and is hard to follow. Maybe try this? I find that this works better. Feel free to change it however you want though, but it would be nice if the timeline was atleast similar. This is only a suggestion though, since I am not really happy how mine ended up too haha. How about this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189495 :)
  3. 00:58:024 (5,1) - Increase this spacing a little. It is difficult to symmetry. I want to keep it ~
  4. 01:29:614 (1) - Use 5% for the whole spinner? Done ><
I don't think the streams in Hard really fit, but they aren't that wrong I suppose. It would be nice if you could remove them completely and think of something else though. I will delete all~~
edit2: delete edit cause i'm stupid. :P
Thank your mod~~ :)
lolcubes
[Insane]
  1. 00:33:985 (1) - Remove this new combo.
  2. 00:36:766 (7,8,1) - Fix the spacing.
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:415 - Move this timing section to 00:30:806. Also swap to soft sounds (you forgot to do this :p).
  2. 00:33:786 (6) - You have a whistle here in insane. Maybe put it here too?
  3. 00:34:581 (8) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:32:793 (1,2,3) - Try this. The way you made them, you try to create a rhythm of your own which you shouldn't do if there is already an existing rhythm. The stuff I posted sounds much better atleast. You will have to think of some positioning for them though.
Fix those and I'll bubble.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

lolcubes wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:33:985 (1) - Remove this new combo. Done
  2. 00:36:766 (7,8,1) - Fix the spacing. Fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:415 - Move this timing section to 00:30:806. Also swap to soft sounds (you forgot to do this :p). HaHa!! I forgot this, sorry :P Fixed !
  2. 00:33:786 (6) - You have a whistle here in insane. Maybe put it here too? Fixed
  3. 00:34:581 (8) - ^ Fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:32:793 (1,2,3) - Try this. The way you made them, you try to create a rhythm of your own which you shouldn't do if there is already an existing rhythm. The stuff I posted sounds much better atleast. You will have to think of some positioning for them though. Fixed
Fix those and I'll bubble. Thank you ^^
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