karenying wrote:

Hi
General
ok

[Normal]
00:45:686 (1) - 我覺得這裏不跟vocal挺怪的 Done
01:25:024 (1) - 頭加finish Done
01:28:203 (3) - ^ Done

Hard
00:15:885 (3) - 加多一個repeat,然後在00:16:084 - ,00:16:282 - ,00:16:481 - 3點上加whistle如何? Done.
00:31:382 - 同Normal 這個位置放Finish太響了
00:58:004 (2,3,4,5,6) - 在Hard裹這樣遮我不知道會不會被噴,畢竟不是Insane.自己看着辦吧 這個我了解的。我會看情況再調整
01:23:534 (5) - 感覺多餘,刪? Done. 這個我其實知道的=w=一直偷懶沒改

Insane
首先我想說像00:00:786 (3,4) - 這些頭叠頭我感覺不美觀 不過只是個人感覺而已 這是我挺喜歡做的www雖然我承認不太美觀，不過好處是很容易做到對稱。所以嘛，讓我偷懶一下
00:31:382 - 同上
00:43:302 (3,4) - whistle Done.
01:28:799 (4) - finish Done.

nice map
沒很多kd我就不射了

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ ertyukjh010 ~

我的MOD来了 ~ 很好听的歌啊 ~ 好喜欢 >_< Dog Days萬歲XD

[General]

你的MP3文件是 160 Kbps,换成192会更好吧? 嗯，您幫我換了XDD

最好不要在第1个红线前面放NOTE. 0.0

Read in time 3000 太长了， 2000 就好了. Done

01:29:593 (1) - 静音吧. 將INS的轉盤搬前了一格~，其餘兩個難度沒影響

[Insane]

00:10:123 (3) - 往上移动2格. Done
00:26:415 (2,4) - 可以试试删除NOTE. 原來的效果比較好
00:42:309 - 加个NOTE. Done
00:57:209 (4,5) - 没叠好. 重疊了一次，應該可以了
01:29:395 (5) - 换成一个NOTE在01:29:593会更好. 直接刪掉w 與另外兩個難度統一

[Hard]

AR-1 之前跟朋友開玩笑，之後忘了改回去:P
00:00:587 (2) - 这个多余，建议删掉. Done
00:16:680 (1) - 加Finish. Done
00:37:540 (1) - 删掉NC. Done
00:57:408 (1,2,3) - 这间距太小了，跟前面一样就好. Done

[Normal]
没问题，一切都好~ ^^

很不错的MAP啊 ~ 送你一颗小星星加油RANK ~ 再次感謝大大的mod和星星 ^^

good luck ~

safawu wrote:

This is a awesome map and wonderful song!Nice, I like it very much :3 最愛江堀+1~
here are some suggestions,just in my opinion,you can ignore it if you think it not good :3
[Normal]
i can not make normal diff well since i play not much NM diffs.
so i can't mod NM diff and give your suggestions,sry Not at all! ^^

[Hard]
[00:21:468 (1)]new combo here may be better i think Done
[00:31:402 (1)]the same suggestion of this time of insane diff 我再後慮看看0.0 因為我覺得原來的比較流暢
[00:36:170 (5,6)]this place may be a little strange @ @,also in insane diff,maybe i can't understand your rhythm :3 懶的用3連點=w=我再嘗試調整一下
[00:45:905]try putting a circle here? 有點奇怪0.0
[01:05:574]change the new combo to here? 這樣只會更亂吧0.0??
[01:18:289 (1)]new combo here ^ 我覺得原本的比較好
[01:22:064]why not add one circle here? :3 可能是為了對稱吧:P
[01:22:461 (1)]add new combo here ^
[01:27:428 (1)]new combo here?(i think this place is hard to place a new combo or not D:) Done.

[Insane]
[00:27:627 (1)]ending in 30610 then make the hit voice quiter?and then see next advice 同Hard
[00:31:402 (1)]try moving to 30805,and then add a circle at 31402? ^
[00:34:580 (2)]what about ending in 34779?or change to 2 circles?in my opinion 34978 may be better for not putting anything? Done.
[00:35:574 (5)]a slider may be better for bgm? Done.
[00:39:150 (1,2,3,4)]can you try 1:circle at 39194;2:unchange;3:slider from 39457 to 39467;4:unchange 0.0?
[01:10:739)(stream)][not mod]nice stream,i like it :3 是說我怕這距離會有點遠:P

sry for not shooting star since i have only one KD QAQ 不要緊^^ 現在KD的確升值很多 作為OSU的玩家我是明白的=w=
expect for being ranked 謝謝了^^ 感謝您的MOD~

ertyukjh010 wrote:

safawu wrote:

[00:39:150 (1,2,3,4)]can you try 1:circle at 39194;2:unchange;3:slider from 39457 to 39467;4:unchange 0.0?

Teru21 wrote:

hi from teruteru modding & guest diff queue sorry for the late..

[Insane]
00:35:375 (2) - add whistle Done
00:36:865 (2) - ^ instead of 00:36:865 0.0?
00:56:435 (1,2,3) - add finish add in (1)

abalee wrote:

suggestion:
Hard:
For me I hope it could be less streams so that it won't be too hard from [Normal] 嗯，嘗試減少了部份連點
00:46:501 (3) - remove the clap(coz it doesn't have clap in nearby part.) Remove it ~

Normal:
00:03:190 (1,2) - although it should be fine while using 1/1 in such place, I still think following the vocal could be better. Done ~

Pretty fine for new mapper.

wmfchris wrote:

[insnae]
duplicated timeline: 16700 這是甚麼0.0
00:02:792 (*) - 2個長slider 搭2個短slider感覺會好一點 用1/2 slider + note這樣 well
00:10 ~ 00:16 - 加入漸大聲既變化啦 啊，這個會累死我。該死的這主要很不錯=3=
00:25:839 (*) - 用3/4slider + notes 對稱優先
00;33:190 (2) - whistle done
00:36:964 (2) - ^ done

前後難度差太遠 : < ...........
mod mod 下走左去聽綠袖子 這啥

[Hard]
00:33:388 (4,5,6) - spacing GJ 肯定是我哪天手殘碰到=A="
01:09:150 (1) - right 1 grid done

gogogo ._. ^^

CoroQuetz wrote:

M4M~

[Hard]
00:41:534 - (4-1) note stacking 有点难看到 會後慮搬開

[Insane]
00:42:925 - (1-2-3-4-5) notes 有点太靠近 INS就沒差啦><
00:59:415 - (2-3) 应该太大的 jump 吧... 之前好像有人提出過；我再後慮要不要拉近一點

看起来能改的东西都已经改了，加油~ 謝謝mod

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.
lol 崛江由衣

General:
没东西好挑呢


Normal:
Issues
00:00:408 (1) - 像这样物件在红线之前 可能之后会有人要求你offset往前推呢……我先提一下好了 别的diff也是 嗯，所有難度Offset變成負數:P
00:31:402 (1) - newcombo BUG, 加newcombo Done. 原來還有這種隱藏BUG（咦?

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:26:435 (2) - 我觉得长白线起更舒服 啊....因為不懂在其他位置開始，感覺那位置開始是最容易做


Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:55:640 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这是跟的钢琴？感觉有点长了 不过玩起来没问题 无视我吧 我都沒留意鋼琴聲的說~只是覺得很好聽就放了=w= Nymph大大聽得真仔細0.0


Insane:
Issues
00:31:402 (1) - newcombo BUG, 加newcombo Done.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:01:600 (4) - newcombo? 距离有点远还是红白线接 感觉nc好读点 一開始就算了，2pc開始都應該會記得；主要是影響後面的顏色，所以不想改:P

没槽点呢 够8星就不射啦~好运 闪人=_= 哈哈，謝謝 Nymph大大 的modding

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
Tick rate 2 sounds better Done. But I think the combo may be too high!?? What do you think. Tick rate 1 & Tick rate 2
00:16:700 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty of the set. Change that and end at 00:15:905. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/188789
00:31:402 (1) - ^ This is also kind of a strange rhythm anyway considering the music... Thank you so much. This problem has troubled me for a long time. Now. And than the spinner end at 00:29:415.

[Hard]
Tick rate 2 sounds better Done.
HP Drain -1 or 2 please. Done. -2
00:31:402 (1) - Yeah, I'm still not feeling why you have a slider here. Same to Norma, Start on the red line.
The small streams might not be appropriate for this level of difficulty. I want to keep it yet. Some player played it and they can read the pattern.

[Insane]
00:31:402 (1) - You may want to end the spinner a little earlier and start these on the red tick. Feels better. Same to Normal, Start on the red line.

Solid set here - especially for your first. Excellent job~ Thank you.
Let me know what you think of the suggestions.

1. 00:00:607 (2) - Maybe remove this note? It doesn't really follow the music.
2. 00:09:846 (2) - I don't like this note because it interrupts the vocal while not following anything significant in the music. I think you should just remove it. If you feel that having only 2 circles is too little, maybe make a slider out of 00:09:548 (1,3)? It sounds better too, imo.
3. 00:21:468 (7) - New combo. Also when you do it, try this, I think it sounds better. To clarify: You remove a repeat from the said slider, and you put 2 notes on the next circle. It plays nice and follows the music better.
4. 00:27:627 - Add a note? You have it in your hard. You can just start the spinner 1/2 later or something (you also did this in your hard). Also add a finish to that note.
5. 00:30:806 - Soft hitsound set please. So it's silent like it's supposed to be.
6. 00:36:567 (1) - Remove new combo, and move the slider to 00:36:468 instead. After that, put a new combo on 00:36:866 (2). Fix the position too, so it looks something like this. It follows the music better and feels better to me.
7. 00:59:614 (3) - New combo.
8. 01:26:832 (5,1) - It would be nice if you could increase this spacing, it would feel great.
9. 01:29:614 - Add a note here? You can start the spinner 1/2 later.
10. 01:29:614 (1) - Maybe use 5% volume for the whole spinner? (even after you move it if you added a note)

1. 00:27:627 (5) - Finish?
2. 00:29:415 - Use a soft hitsound set for this, so the end is more silent.
3. 00:33:786 (6,7) - Try this. It follows the vocal better and then it sounds better too. You will have to fix the positions somehow though.
4. 00:59:614 (3) - New combo.
5. 01:29:614 - Add a note? And then start the spinner after it.
6. 01:29:614 (1) - Use 5% for the whole spinner?

1. 00:29:415 - Use a soft hitsound set for this, so the end is more silent.
2. 00:31:203 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - This rhythm sounds kinda off and is hard to follow. Maybe try this? I find that this works better. Feel free to change it however you want though, but it would be nice if the timeline was atleast similar. This is only a suggestion though, since I am not really happy how mine ended up too haha.
3. 00:58:024 (5,1) - Increase this spacing a little.
4. 01:29:614 (1) - Use 5% for the whole spinner?

lolcubes wrote:

Mod requested by Garven.

[Insane]

1. 00:00:607 (2) - Maybe remove this note? It doesn't really follow the music. Done
2. 00:09:846 (2) - I don't like this note because it interrupts the vocal while not following anything significant in the music. I think you should just remove it. If you feel that having only 2 circles is too little, maybe make a slider out of 00:09:548 (1,3)? It sounds better too, imo. Done. Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189508
3. 00:21:468 (7) - New combo. Also when you do it, try this, I think it sounds better. To clarify: You remove a repeat from the said slider, and you put 2 notes on the next circle. It plays nice and follows the music better. Done. Jumping
4. 00:27:627 - Add a note? You have it in your hard. You can just start the spinner 1/2 later or something (you also did this in your hard). Also add a finish to that note. Done.
5. 00:30:806 - Soft hitsound set please. So it's silent like it's supposed to be.
6. 00:36:567 (1) - Remove new combo, and move the slider to 00:36:468 instead. After that, put a new combo on 00:36:866 (2). Fix the position too, so it looks something like this. It follows the music better and feels better to me. How about this ^^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189516
7. 00:59:614 (3) - New combo. Done.
8. 01:26:832 (5,1) - It would be nice if you could increase this spacing, it would feel great. It's hard to increase the spacing 0.0
9. 01:29:614 - Add a note here? You can start the spinner 1/2 later. Done.
10. 01:29:614 (1) - Maybe use 5% volume for the whole spinner? (even after you move it if you added a note) Done.

[Hard]

1. 00:27:627 (5) - Finish? Done.
2. 00:29:415 - Use a soft hitsound set for this, so the end is more silent. Done.
3. 00:33:786 (6,7) - Try this. It follows the vocal better and then it sounds better too. You will have to fix the positions somehow though. Done.
4. 00:59:614 (3) - New combo. Done.
5. 01:29:614 - Add a note? And then start the spinner after it. Done.
6. 01:29:614 (1) - Use 5% for the whole spinner? Done.

[Normal]

1. 00:29:415 - Use a soft hitsound set for this, so the end is more silent. Done.
2. 00:31:203 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - This rhythm sounds kinda off and is hard to follow. Maybe try this? I find that this works better. Feel free to change it however you want though, but it would be nice if the timeline was atleast similar. This is only a suggestion though, since I am not really happy how mine ended up too haha. How about this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189495
3. 00:58:024 (5,1) - Increase this spacing a little. It is difficult to symmetry. I want to keep it ~
4. 01:29:614 (1) - Use 5% for the whole spinner? Done ><

I don't think the streams in Hard really fit, but they aren't that wrong I suppose. It would be nice if you could remove them completely and think of something else though. I will delete all~~
edit2: delete edit cause i'm stupid. :P

1. 00:33:985 (1) - Remove this new combo.
2. 00:36:766 (7,8,1) - Fix the spacing.

1. 00:29:415 - Move this timing section to 00:30:806. Also swap to soft sounds (you forgot to do this :p).
2. 00:33:786 (6) - You have a whistle here in insane. Maybe put it here too?
3. 00:34:581 (8) - ^

1. 00:32:793 (1,2,3) - Try this. The way you made them, you try to create a rhythm of your own which you shouldn't do if there is already an existing rhythm. The stuff I posted sounds much better atleast. You will have to think of some positioning for them though.

lolcubes wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:33:985 (1) - Remove this new combo. Done
2. 00:36:766 (7,8,1) - Fix the spacing. Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:29:415 - Move this timing section to 00:30:806. Also swap to soft sounds (you forgot to do this :p). HaHa!! I forgot this, sorry Fixed !
2. 00:33:786 (6) - You have a whistle here in insane. Maybe put it here too? Fixed
3. 00:34:581 (8) - ^ Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:32:793 (1,2,3) - Try this. The way you made them, you try to create a rhythm of your own which you shouldn't do if there is already an existing rhythm. The stuff I posted sounds much better atleast. You will have to think of some positioning for them though. Fixed

Fix those and I'll bubble. Thank you ^^

lolcubes wrote:

Yep, I like how you handled that spot in Normal, good job.

Here you go, Bubbled!
Good luck on your first map!

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
00:17:296 (4) - This curve could look a lot smoother with two points instead of one. Fixed

SPOILER

00:21:468 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:33:786 (6) - You should stack this with the 5 instead. Fixed
00:59:614 (1,2) - It'd be cool if you could position/shape these sliders so that they didn't slightly overlap with 01:00:806 (3) - Fixed
00:55:640 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Kind of going beyond this level of a Hard difficulty. Remove the 3 at least, and the 5 would also be good but less accurate to the music. Adjust pattern accordingly, of course. Fixed
01:32:197 - Move this timing section to 01:29:813 - to line up with other difficulties Fixed. I was forgot this

Kawayi Rika wrote:

恭喜啊 ~ 第1张 神图 ~

Nymph wrote:

grats~

I will be back wrote:

人家還沒背完就rank了QAQ

ykcarrot wrote:

Hmm... offset +10ms better?
Maybe it's only for me. :p

lolcubes wrote:

Grats on your first map!
Dunno offset was okay for me. o_o

edit: I ssed it with +5, but I use +5 on like 90% maps out there haha.

Garven wrote:

Did some asking around and some testing and I'll set the online offset to +10.

Sorry 'bout that.