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[ Inner Oni ]
00:21:801 (1) ~ 00:32:369 (24) - There is only k. how about 6d 6k 6d 6k?
00:38:164 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - Um, this isn't great idea... think that you play this with DT. i think just kdkd is better.
00:42:937 (77) - k. no big sound, and KdK is hard to hit than kdK.
00:56:829 (172) - delete?
01:21:119 (317,318,319) - ddd or ddk. In next kkd after this, melody is going up.
01:27:426 (1) , 01:29:983 (1) , 01:32:880 (1) , 01:35:437 (1) - so many spinner. exspecially, i think 01:35:437 (1) this spinner doesn't need.
01:43:619 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - same part 00:38:164
01:48:392 (56) - same part 00:42:937
02:05:437 (181) ~ 02:10:551 (231) - this is my suggestion.
1) not 5 5 5 5, 1 3 1 3 1 3 1 3
2) 02:08:165 (207) ~ 02:10:551 (231) - reverse 02:05:437 (181) ~ 02:07:823 (205)
03:12:596 (629,630) - ctrl g? to extraordinary
03:16:517 (1) , 03:19:074 (1) , 03:21:971 (1) , 03:24:528 (1) - same part 01:27:426
03:32:710 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - same part 00:38:164
04:05:438 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157) - ^
04:10:210 (178) - same part 00:42:937
04:19:073 (247) ~ 04:21:460 (271) - same part 02:05:437
04:42:767 (432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440) - maybe have greater pattern like d d k k d d k d k(or d cause of next K) than kdkd.
04:43:619 (441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456) - i think this part is little diffrent with another same part. this part is climax so it looks great that add some notes like note that follow melody.
05:26:574 (680) -delete?
05:32:710 (700,701,702,703,704,705,706,707,708,709,710,711,712,713,714,715) - same part 00:38:164
Song is nice and map too!
really fun to mod xD
Good luck~
[ Inner Oni ]
00:21:801 (1) ~ 00:32:369 (24) - There is only k. how about 6d 6k 6d 6k?
00:38:164 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - Um, this isn't great idea... think that you play this with DT. i think just kdkd is better.
00:42:937 (77) - k. no big sound, and KdK is hard to hit than kdK.
00:56:829 (172) - delete?
01:21:119 (317,318,319) - ddd or ddk. In next kkd after this, melody is going up.
01:27:426 (1) , 01:29:983 (1) , 01:32:880 (1) , 01:35:437 (1) - so many spinner. exspecially, i think 01:35:437 (1) this spinner doesn't need.
01:43:619 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - same part 00:38:164
01:48:392 (56) - same part 00:42:937
02:05:437 (181) ~ 02:10:551 (231) - this is my suggestion.
1) not 5 5 5 5, 1 3 1 3 1 3 1 3
2) 02:08:165 (207) ~ 02:10:551 (231) - reverse 02:05:437 (181) ~ 02:07:823 (205)
03:12:596 (629,630) - ctrl g? to extraordinary
03:16:517 (1) , 03:19:074 (1) , 03:21:971 (1) , 03:24:528 (1) - same part 01:27:426
03:32:710 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - same part 00:38:164
04:05:438 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157) - ^
04:10:210 (178) - same part 00:42:937
04:19:073 (247) ~ 04:21:460 (271) - same part 02:05:437
04:42:767 (432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440) - maybe have greater pattern like d d k k d d k d k(or d cause of next K) than kdkd.
04:43:619 (441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456) - i think this part is little diffrent with another same part. this part is climax so it looks great that add some notes like note that follow melody.
05:26:574 (680) -delete?
05:32:710 (700,701,702,703,704,705,706,707,708,709,710,711,712,713,714,715) - same part 00:38:164
Song is nice and map too!
really fun to mod xD
Good luck~