Remap pls :^)
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This section for some reasons completely ignores pitch, and putting to much focus on the phasing out, which is signified by kats here.
I suggest you should try to map to pitch here, it seems like the more prominent thing here.
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Seeing as the combos in this part focus around following the snare a bit and then deviating over to melody (except for downbeats, which are always d) i have some suggestions to make:
Since you start deviating from the snare every 2 Downbeats, the melody can be emphasized a more at following points:
----> 00:45:664 (94) - changing this note to k will match up with the melody pitch here and is coherent with 00:46:005 (96) - concerning melody pitch.
----> 00:56:573 (170) - the same goes for this note.
----> 01:01:858 (207,208,209,210,211) - making this a ddkkd will follow the melody much more and also match up with 01:02:369 (212) -
Also:
----> 00:57:255 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194) - this combo seems a bit out of place, since the pretty long/difficult stream doesnt emphasize anything special, whereas 00:51:801 (134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155) - emphasises the cymbal/halftime of the section.
I suggest you replace this combo with one that looks more like 00:46:346 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) -
--------------------- 01:14:812 (280) - to 01:49:073 -
Is split up into 4 quarters (green lines).
1st quarter:
-> 01:10:039 (258) - why deviate from the snare here? change to d?
-> 01:14:812 (280) - same goes for this, as note placement should be enough to emphasize vocals.
2nd quarter:
-> 01:20:948 (314,315,316) - why this sudden deviation from an 1/2 kat placement? please change it to fit in with it (e.g. ddd)
3rd quarter is fine!
4th quarter is fine aswell!
-------------------- 01:49:073 - to 02:10:892 - (first half of kiai)
The whole vocal emphasis part with the triplets/5lets in the 1st kiai should be mapped with triplets only, and in the 2nd kiai should be mapped with 5lets to give the player a little more of a gentle difficulty curve between the kiais.
You already did this a bit by making 02:39:071 - this section after the kiai a bit harder than the same section before the 1st kiai (00:51:682 - )
Otherwise pretty solid!
------------------- 02:10:892 - to 02:32:710 - (second half of kiai)
Very solid similar to the same section outside of kiai, but
02:18:221 (287,288,289,290,291) - consider making this a kdkkd to incorporate the melody (lying on the 3rd note) into the pattern somehow? (Just as a note, 02:12:767 (246,247,248,249,250) - this is fine for me since the pitch is lower here and fits :3c)
02:21:545 (315) - consider removing this to emphasize the kind of sliding between the pitches the synth does, instead of blurring it out with a d?
------------------- 02:32:710 - to 02:54:528 - (After the kiai)
02:37:738 (410) - consider removing to prevent the yucky pattern and also to emphasize the sliding pitch synth in the 2 k's.
02:42:767 (444,445,446,447,448,449,450) - kdkkddk to emphasize beat/melody properly?
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1st quarter:
-> 02:59:130 (558,559) - & 03:03:903 (580) - ; again placement should be enough for emphasis on vocal, i dont think these k's are neccessary.
2nd quarter:
-> 01:20:948 (314,315,316) - why this sudden deviation from an 1/2 kat placement? please change it to fit in with it (e.g. ddd)
3rd quarter is fine!
4th quarter is fine!
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03:54:528 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - This has some weird 3/2 gaps that dont really sound good;
I suggest you map it so it doesnt have any 3/2 gaps, but still emphasizes the vocals.
Something like that or similar.
Else its fine!
------------------- 04:10:892 - to 04:32:710 - (1st half of 2nd kiai)
The whole vocal emphasis should be done with 5lets here!
See my suggestion for the 1st half of 1st kiai!
------------------- 04:32:710 - 04:54:528 - (2nd half of 2nd kiai)
04:37:312 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399) - this pattern looks quite hard and can be simplified to ddkdk k firstly, to give the melody more emphasis since the pitch slides here again, and to make this pattern not unnecessarily hard since its one of the only offhand patterns here.
04:43:363 (442) - remove this note to emphasize melody a bit?
------------------ After 2nd Kiai
05:30:324 (696,698,700,702) - color those to d since theres no pitch rising synth here?
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The Rest actually looks fine!
Good luck with this map, its pretty good, but needs some polish!