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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, October 19, 2017 at 11:29:53 PM

Artist: ClariS x GARNiDELiA
Title: clever -TV MIX-
Source: クオリディア・コード
Tags: qualidea code ending captin1
BPM: 182
Filesize: 19261kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. captin's Extra (5.29 stars, 352 notes)
  2. captin's Normal (2.2 stars, 171 notes)
  3. Easy (1.48 stars, 103 notes)
  4. Hard (3.36 stars, 256 notes)
  5. Insane (4.2 stars, 299 notes)


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#24

9/24 - thanks jonathanlfj for video, timing change
Normal and Extra by captin1!
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first haha
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Hello!

  • [Easy]
  1. All perfectly.

    [Hard]
  2. 00:17:102 (3) - I would make the bend a bit stronger.
  3. 00:27:486 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7954763
  4. 00:40:020 (1,2) - It may be better to direct them in different directions, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7954802

    [Insane]
  5. 00:10:673 (1,1) - This overlay ugly.


Good luck!
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[General]

soft-sliderslide.wav isn't at least 100ms long, which is the minimum for a .wav according to the ranking criteria. these get looped anyway, so just loop it like 20 times or so in an audio editor and you should be fine (yours is 6ms)

Consider swapping the orange and blue-green combo colors, combo1 and combo2 are pretty similar, and combo3 and 4 are pretty similar. If you swap those two, it adds a bit more diversity visually. This is super optional though, feel free to just ignore this.

[Easy]

HP 1 is too low, use HP 2 instead.

00:13:640 (1) - Think you can do a better rhythm here to follow the vocals. Consider something like this - https://puu.sh/vMx2D/633e05bda7.jpg
^A similar rhythm to what i suggest also would apply to things like 00:24:190 (1,2,3) - where currently you're mapping white ticks and skipping vocals on 00:24:684, 00:25:014, 00:25:344
01:02:767 - vocal on tail isn't good here, maybe make 01:02:437 - a circle and then have 01:02:767 - be a slider?
01:14:305 (2) - Spacing inconsistency

nice diff

[captin normal]

I notice that when you use a slower SV, you up the DS so that the 1/2 gaps dont overlap, I suggest you just keep the DS consistent and just let it overlap. Seems kinda weird to have slower sliders but than have everything be spaced the same visually.

Overall the kiai feels pretty underwhelming in terms of rhythm. Parts like 00:51:888 (1,2) and 01:02:437 (1) are undermapping the song, especially consdering you didn't' hesitate to use a lot of 1/2 rhythms earlier when the song was weaker. Consider implementing more 1/2 rhythms to appropriately match the songs intensity.

Things like 00:57:162 (1,2) - this part are fine because of the 1/1 vocals, but especially when there are 1/2 vocals going on you shouldn't be undermapping them like this.

Not much else to say, I didn't agree with rhythm in the start (you skipped a lot of vocals :c), but you were consistent so I can't complain much.

[Hard]

00:15:618 (6,7,8) - doesnt really fit with your vocal focused rhythm to this point. 00:15:783 (7,8) a ctlr+g of these two would provide a better rhythm. (adjust the pattern after, of course :p)
00:21:552 (1) - Seems like a really excessive slowdown, especially for a hard. I can imagine players not being able to read this. I tried .5 and that seemed a lot better; consider that?
00:24:025 (1,2,3) - Fix stacking, same for 00:24:190 (3,5) -
00:25:014 - extended vocal here, so similar to earlier a ctrl+g of 00:24:849 (6,7) - would provide a better rhythm.

00:29:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - The vocals are grouped in sections of 3 and should be mapped accordingly imo (Your insane diff does this properly). See what you did for 00:18:915 (1,2,3); I suggest doing something similar to this. If you don't want to just use reverse sliders again, you could do someting like this - https://puu.sh/vMxTA/abf3f520a4.jpg

00:49:250 (1,1) - Consider using two circles instead of a single 1/2 slider, would fit the intensity of those sounds better.

[Insane]

00:15:618 (6,7) - ctrl+g would provide better rhyth imo, considering 00:15:783 - is a held vocal. Same applies to 00:26:168 (3,4) -
00:37:041 (7) - consider making this the stream instead, consider it's the most intense drums in this section.
00:40:020 (1) - Making this two circles would differentiate it from the vocals later in the measure. If you applie this, make 00:46:283 (5) - a 1/2 slider for consistency.
On a similar note to the above, 00:41:338 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:46:613 (1,2,3) - is a bit of an inconsistency. Better if you pick one rhythm and use it for both measures, considering they're extremely similar. I personally like 00:46:613 (1) - because the way you set up the sliders into a triangle formation relates well with the 3 vocals conceptually.
00:51:558 (6) - should be slower imo, would be much more impactful of an SV boost if this was a slow slider.
01:05:569 (3) - based on how you seem to be emphasizing vocals via spacing (i.e. 01:03:261 (5) - ), this seems like it deserves a bit more spacing than what you have. Maybe you can move 3 and 4 so that 01:05:569 (3)'s tail stacks on 01:04:250 (2)'s head
01:06:228 (1) - NC 01:06:393 (3) - instead? Especially since for 01:08:866 (6,7,1) - you NC the downbeat. Regardless of what you do, be consistent with it.
01:16:942 (5) - NC

Hope I could help out in some way. Good luck!
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Hobbes2 wrote:

quickie

[General]

soft-sliderslide.wav isn't at least 100ms long, which is the minimum for a .wav according to the ranking criteria. these get looped anyway, so just loop it like 20 times or so in an audio editor and you should be fine (yours is 6ms)

Consider swapping the orange and blue-green combo colors, combo1 and combo2 are pretty similar, and combo3 and 4 are pretty similar. If you swap those two, it adds a bit more diversity visually. This is super optional though, feel free to just ignore this.

[Easy]

HP 1 is too low, use HP 2 instead. i don't think it's too low

00:13:640 (1) - Think you can do a better rhythm here to follow the vocals. Consider something like this - https://puu.sh/vMx2D/633e05bda7.jpg
^A similar rhythm to what i suggest also would apply to things like 00:24:190 (1,2,3) - where currently you're mapping white ticks and skipping vocals on 00:24:684, 00:25:014, 00:25:344 was not my intention to cover most of the vocals
01:02:767 - vocal on tail isn't good here, maybe make 01:02:437 - a circle and then have 01:02:767 - be a slider? i have no issue with vocals on slider tails
01:14:305 (2) - Spacing inconsistency fixed
nice diff
[Hard]

00:15:618 (6,7,8) - doesnt really fit with your vocal focused rhythm to this point. 00:15:783 (7,8) a ctlr+g of these two would provide a better rhythm. (adjust the pattern after, of course :p) ctrl-g would mean mapping a downbeat on slidertail also this is consistent with 00:12:981 (5,6,7) -
00:21:552 (1) - Seems like a really excessive slowdown, especially for a hard. I can imagine players not being able to read this. I tried .5 and that seemed a lot better; consider that? i don't think so, considering the player's cursor isn't in fast motion given the 1/4 slider repeat sliders before it
00:24:025 (1,2,3) - Fix stacking, same for 00:24:190 (3,5) - fixed, i think
00:25:014 - extended vocal here, so similar to earlier a ctrl+g of 00:24:849 (6,7) - would provide a better rhythm. would cause same problem as mentioned previously

00:29:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - The vocals are grouped in sections of 3 and should be mapped accordingly imo (Your insane diff does this properly). See what you did for 00:18:915 (1,2,3); I suggest doing something similar to this. If you don't want to just use reverse sliders again, you could do someting like this - https://puu.sh/vMxTA/abf3f520a4.jpg will try and change

00:49:250 (1,1) - Consider using two circles instead of a single 1/2 slider, would fit the intensity of those sounds better. i prefer sliders

[Insane]

00:15:618 (6,7) - ctrl+g would provide better rhyth imo, considering 00:15:783 - is a held vocal. Same applies to 00:26:168 (3,4) - same as hard
00:37:041 (7) - consider making this the stream instead, consider it's the most intense drums in this section. just made the whole thing a stream
00:40:020 (1) - Making this two circles would differentiate it from the vocals later in the measure. If you applie this, make 00:46:283 (5) - a 1/2 slider for consistency. i suppose but i'm more comfortable with how it is now
On a similar note to the above, 00:41:338 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:46:613 (1,2,3) - is a bit of an inconsistency. Better if you pick one rhythm and use it for both measures, considering they're extremely similar. I personally like 00:46:613 (1) - because the way you set up the sliders into a triangle formation relates well with the 3 vocals conceptually. hm perhaps i view this differently. in the case in which two measures are similar i see this as an opportunity to use variation in patterns to avoid repetition
00:51:558 (6) - should be slower imo, would be much more impactful of an SV boost if this was a slow slider. that would be unnecessary imo, i really only like to change sv with discernible changes in the song's pacing
01:05:569 (3) - based on how you seem to be emphasizing vocals via spacing (i.e. 01:03:261 (5) - ), this seems like it deserves a bit more spacing than what you have. Maybe you can move 3 and 4 so that 01:05:569 (3)'s tail stacks on 01:04:250 (2)'s head good suggestion, changed
01:06:228 (1) - NC 01:06:393 (3) - instead? Especially since for 01:08:866 (6,7,1) - you NC the downbeat. Regardless of what you do, be consistent with it. put the nc on 6
01:16:942 (5) - NC yes

Hope I could help out in some way. Good luck!


Thank youu
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"Hobbes2"
[captin normal]

I notice that when you use a slower SV, you up the DS so that the 1/2 gaps dont overlap, I suggest you just keep the DS consistent and just let it overlap. Seems kinda weird to have slower sliders but than have everything be spaced the same visually. i think it's fine as an overall design choice in the map since they're always after sliders. with the way sliders work this should feel just as intuitive as keeping 1.0 spacing and maintains the visual style that i'm looking for. could also blab about polarity consistency but nobody cares about that anyways

Overall the kiai feels pretty underwhelming in terms of rhythm. Parts like 00:51:888 (1,2) and 01:02:437 (1) are undermapping the song, especially consdering you didn't' hesitate to use a lot of 1/2 rhythms earlier when the song was weaker. Consider implementing more 1/2 rhythms to appropriately match the songs intensity. dropped a couple notes in

Things like 00:57:162 (1,2) - this part are fine because of the 1/1 vocals, but especially when there are 1/2 vocals going on you shouldn't be undermapping them like this.

Not much else to say, I didn't agree with rhythm in the start (you skipped a lot of vocals :c), but you were consistent so I can't complain much.

thank
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51478
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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Title:clever -TV Mix-
TitleUnicode:clever -TV Mix-
Artist:ClariS x GARNiDELiA
ArtistUnicode:ClariS×GARNiDELiA
Creator:Trust
Version:captin's Normal
Source:クオリディア・コード
Tags:qualidea code ending captin1
BeatmapID:1270537
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posted
hi from queue

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:24:684 (5) - stackmiss? but i guess have some intention
  2. 00:26:168 (3,3) - I think this overlap is not desirable.
  3. 01:08:041 (2) - I think that ctrl+G is better imo
  4. 01:15:294 (1) - I think slider from 01:15:129 - I didnt felt some intention
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:49:910 (1,2) - just suggestion. I think that ctrl+G to better. but it is trivial suggestion. so please ignore if you dont like
  • [captin's Extra]
  1. 00:14:629 (4) - I think about x136 y376 to better imo
  2. 00:15:783 (4) - about x192 y100 ^
  3. 01:03:591 (7) - I think ctrl+G. In this case, I thought that it was easy to see
  4. 01:17:931 (5) - ^


Sorry so shorter mod
Good luck! :)
posted
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_kotachi_ wrote:

hi from queue

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:24:684 (5) - stackmiss? but i guess have some intention looks ok
  2. 00:26:168 (3,3) - I think this overlap is not desirable. made it not overlap as much
  3. 01:08:041 (2) - I think that ctrl+G is better imo prefer to keep
  4. 01:15:294 (1) - I think slider from 01:15:129 - I didnt felt some intention tried to change
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:49:910 (1,2) - just suggestion. I think that ctrl+G to better. but it is trivial suggestion. so please ignore if you dont like hmm its ok


Sorry so shorter mod
Good luck! :)


thanks :)
posted
hi from my queue~
Easy
- 00:29:464 (1,2) - blanket
- 01:17:602 (4,1) - blanket
- 01:24:195 (2,3) - ^
Captin's Normal
- 00:20:069 (4,5) - blanket
- 00:51:558 (5,1,2,3) - overlap
- 01:03:096 (3,4) - blanket
Hard
- 00:09:025 (3,4) - Blanket
- 00:14:300 (3,4,5) - ^ ewe
- 00:32:596 (2,3) - ^
- 00:34:410 (5,1) - ^
- 00:59:800 (1,3) - overlap
- 01:03:426 (5,1) - blanket
- 01:04:250 (3,4) - ^
- 01:06:888 (3,4,5) - ^
- 01:16:283 (2,3,4) - ^
- 01:17:602 (4,5) - ^
- 01:19:909 (2,3) - ^
- 01:25:349 (3) - move to top way better
Insane
- 00:10:673 (1,1) - overlap
- 00:30:618 (4,1) - blanket
- 01:15:294 (5,1) - overlap
- 01:23:865 (2,3) - blanket
Captin's Extra
- 00:31:443 (3,1) - not bad overlap, but you can move slider 1
- 00:31:443 (3,1) - idk, i feel its weird. you can change or keep it
thats all for me, gluck ;)
posted
Fixed 00:14:300 (3,4,5) - on Hard

ty for modding!
posted
no changes on my diffs, the blankets are fine and that overlap is intentional on normal, and i prefer my current placements on extra

thanks!
posted
Hard
00:39:606 (4) - could use triple here from drums

Insane
00:10:673 (1,1) - I'm not a fan of this overlap but it isn't that significant

01:09:937 (6) - I would add a note between 01:09:525 (5,7) - here to match the vocals
OR
01:09:525 (5) - reduce the length of this slider and a triple here with the slider 01:09:855 (6,7,8) -

00:50:734 (1) - Instead of this reverse slider I would add single notes to match 00:51:228 (2,3) -

00:57:739 (5) - A note here could be added between 00:57:492 (4,5) - to match the 1/4 beat pattern that you used for 00:58:399 (8,1) - and 00:56:997 (1,2,3) -

01:04:250 (2) - You can increase this slider to the blue tick but that's just me i think it sounds fine without it as well

Sorry for a short post hopefully it helped tho good luck :)
posted
[i]
  1. 00:18:256 (3) - missing normal sampleset
  2. 01:07:052 (6) - missing normal sampleset on head


[h]
  1. 00:29:959 (2,3) - well nice missing hitsounds lol
  2. 00:31:443 (4) - wanna use a drum additions? (in order, clap-finish-finish)


[captin n]
  1. 00:30:454 (3,4) - stacks are off lol
  2. 00:48:756 (3,1) - the DS here is weird and not pretty consistent as the others are using 1x ds (i'd consider that multi bpm is the same bpm as 182 though LOL)
  3. mind to explain what are these spacings for on a normal diff? firstly it went a normal constant DS though, then on that 1/2 note, u went on 1.4x ds there, like 00:16:278 (1,2) - for example


this is all i could find though. as i have expected from you guys LOL

gl
posted

Arastelia wrote:

Hard
00:39:606 (4) - could use triple here from drums i don't hear any drums lol

Insane
00:10:673 (1,1) - I'm not a fan of this overlap but it isn't that significant i like it

01:09:937 (6) - I would add a note between 01:09:525 (5,7) - here to match the vocals i prefer keeping a 1/1 for difficulty control and i feel it fits fine
OR
01:09:525 (5) - reduce the length of this slider and a triple here with the slider 01:09:855 (6,7,8) -

00:50:734 (1) - Instead of this reverse slider I would add single notes to match 00:51:228 (2,3) - i prefer using a slider

00:57:739 (5) - A note here could be added between 00:57:492 (4,5) - to match the 1/4 beat pattern that you used for 00:58:399 (8,1) - and 00:56:997 (1,2,3) - not in my liking

01:04:250 (2) - You can increase this slider to the blue tick but that's just me i think it sounds fine without it as well would rather end it on the white, the beat is stronger

Sorry for a short post hopefully it helped tho good luck :)


fixed all from lit,

tyvm you two
posted

lit120 wrote:


[captin n]
  1. 00:30:454 (3,4) - stacks are off lol
  2. 00:48:756 (3,1) - the DS here is weird and not pretty consistent as the others are using 1x ds (i'd consider that multi bpm is the same bpm as 182 though LOL) its fine
  3. mind to explain what are these spacings for on a normal diff? firstly it went a normal constant DS though, then on that 1/2 note, u went on 1.4x ds there, like 00:16:278 (1,2) - for example avoiding overlaps in 1/2 while keeping 1/1 ds normal


this is all i could find though. as i have expected from you guys LOL

gl

ty
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72,259,56008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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163,80,57492,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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38,291,59140,1,0,1:0:0:0:
71,163,59470,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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88,124,61612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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11,236,62107,2,0,L|28:323,1,60,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
98,333,62437,6,0,P|140:306|227:303,1,120,4|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
294,319,62931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,319,63096,2,0,P|336:346|423:349,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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251,234,64415,2,0,L|123:200,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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463,61,66228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,268,67382,1,8,1:2:0:0:
222,323,67712,6,0,L|93:332,2,120,4|8|8,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
236,191,68701,1,8,1:2:0:0:
254,58,69030,2,0,L|383:49,1,120,12|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
441,101,69525,1,0,1:0:0:0:
401,228,69855,1,0,1:0:0:0:
299,149,70184,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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59,189,71008,2,0,P|43:235|60:318,1,120,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
180,332,71668,1,4,1:0:0:0:
180,332,71833,1,0,1:0:0:0:
266,230,72162,1,4,1:0:0:0:
391,274,72492,2,0,L|467:268,1,60,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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491,207,76283,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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posted
nm from my queue~

captins extra
00:41:508 (2,4,6) - overlapping is ugly here imo
01:01:123 (1) - move to x:304 y:241?
insane
00:19:909 (3) - i dont think this should be the same as 00:18:920 (1,2) - since the rhythm is different
00:26:502 (4,5,1) - this flows pretty awkwardly
00:57:167 (3,5) - this overlap isnt very pretty
hard
00:24:524 (4,5,6) - this pattern is very hard for this difficulty :o
00:58:816 (2,3,4) - same here
00:55:024 (3,4,5,1) - i think it works here since flow is more linear


good luck !
posted
from my q
sry for late...
[Easy]
  1. 01:17:607 (4,1) - fix the blanket? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9267293

[captin's Normal]
  1. aimod said it has lots of ds problems...but I know what you do wwwwww
  2. 00:00:454 (1) - unsnapped object.
  3. 00:19:415 (2) - maybe add a finish in the head will be better.

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:524 (4,5,6) - I think it's unbalanced distance compared with 00:24:854 (6,7,1) - ,I prefer move them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9267358

can't find anything in Insane qwq
[captin;s Extra]
  1. 00:33:096 (5,1) - maybe too near

can't find more problems...
GL~
posted

Yusomi wrote:

nm from my queue~
insane
00:19:909 (3) - i dont think this should be the same as 00:18:920 (1,2) - since the rhythm is different they don't sound different,
care to elaborate?

00:26:502 (4,5,1) - this flows pretty awkwardly how exactly
00:57:167 (3,5) - this overlap isnt very pretty it's just an overlap in the editor, barely noticeable in gameplay
hard
00:24:524 (4,5,6) - this pattern is very hard for this difficulty i have to disagree
00:58:816 (2,3,4) - same here same
00:55:024 (3,4,5,1) - i think it works here since flow is more linear


good luck !

[Crz]Sword wrote:

from my q
sry for late...
[Easy]
  1. 01:17:607 (4,1) - fix the blanket? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9267293 it seems fine how it is already

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:524 (4,5,6) - I think it's unbalanced distance compared with 00:24:854 (6,7,1) - ,I prefer move them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9267358 i gave the notes a little more spacing

can't find anything in Insane qwq
GL~


thank you two :)
posted
i actually watched this anime xD

[General]
soft-sliderslide should be the 44b file http://puu.sh/xZ35V.wav

[Easy]
00:28:810 (4,2) - stacking
01:08:376 (2) - feel like the consecutive circle pattern should be here instead of 01:11:013 (2,3) due to higher drum intensity
01:12:991 (1,1) - probably want to fix the slight overlap here

[captin's Normal]
Because of the density of 1/2 stacks I suggest you use AR5 here for better readibility, also OD 3.5 considering Easy is already 2
00:00:454 (1) - its unsnapped xD
00:51:563 (5,2,3) - hmm i would avoid overlapping gimmicks like this in a Normal, there are better ways to place this so the 2nd slider is mostly visible
01:02:442 (1,2,3) - spacing should be 1.4

[Hard]
00:09:030 (3) - NC
00:39:031 (2) - i'd use a circle for the strong vocals at 00:39:362, repeat here just feels underwhelming
01:13:980 (2) - oh no please don't do anti jumps in a Hard like this LOL

[Insane]
00:21:557 (1) - i like the slow down here, but it might catch some people on surprise for this difficulty level so i suggest you use 0.5x like the intro
00:36:063 - volume setting is different for red/green line here
00:37:210 (8,1) - this is a pretty intense jump for this difficulty level, i suggest you tone the spacing down to within 4x
01:20:903 (1,2,3,4) - hmm not a big fan of the spacing change here this late into the song, see if you can do something else here

[captin's Extra]
00:51:563 (4,5) - a spacing change here would be cool since the vocals start here, it also leads better into the kiai jumps
01:01:618 (5,6) - idk why but i find this pattern super hard to hit, try stacking 01:01:783 (6) with start of 01:02:442 (1)
01:10:684 (4) - bring this a bit closer to 01:11:013 (1) would flow a lot better
posted

jonathanlfj wrote:

i actually watched this anime xD

[General]
soft-sliderslide should be the 44b file http://puu.sh/xZ35V.wav oh right

[Easy]
00:28:810 (4,2) - stacking fixed
01:08:376 (2) - feel like the consecutive circle pattern should be here instead of 01:11:013 (2,3) due to higher drum intensity i want to keep sr under 1.5 for the green star xD
01:12:991 (1,1) - probably want to fix the slight overlap here fix

[Hard]
00:09:030 (3) - NC ok
00:39:031 (2) - i'd use a circle for the strong vocals at 00:39:362, repeat here just feels underwhelming done
01:13:980 (2) - oh no please don't do anti jumps in a Hard like this LOL tried to fix

[Insane]
00:21:557 (1) - i like the slow down here, but it might catch some people on surprise for this difficulty level so i suggest you use 0.5x like the intro k
00:36:063 - volume setting is different for red/green line here fix
00:37:210 (8,1) - this is a pretty intense jump for this difficulty level, i suggest you tone the spacing down to within 4x keeping to preserve some "insane" feel to the diff, also given extra is so jump heavy it seems ok to me
01:20:903 (1,2,3,4) - hmm not a big fan of the spacing change here this late into the song, see if you can do something else here i don't really know what else i want to do, i moved the stack close to the slider but idk it seems ok to me


thanks!! waiting for captin
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