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Try to make some greend points have different volume settings to emphasize music's parts. (for example, only kiai should have 90% volume settings, in my opinion).
I'll try to not mention slow part rhytmics, because idk how to fix them. Anyway, i think, that you can improve and make here one stable.
[Muzukashii]
That's all i can suggest.
Good emphasizing, but there are some strange gaps in diffs. Density can be polished a bit to.
Anyway, good luck !
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Try to make some greend points have different volume settings to emphasize music's parts. (for example, only kiai should have 90% volume settings, in my opinion).
I'll try to not mention slow part rhytmics, because idk how to fix them. Anyway, i think, that you can improve and make here one stable.
[Muzukashii]
- 00:35:218 - do not miss sound here, because it will be easier to play then (sudden triple is harder, than tap and triple after it)
- 01:10:754 - 01:12:182 - 01:13:611 - 01:14:147 - - i think that you should fill those gaps too.
- 01:33:789 - don here maybe?
- 01:52:004 (425,426,427) - k k d suits better, imo.
- Also, check timing points, AIMod says something about it.
- 00:02:005 - you miss really loud vocal/instrumental here.
- 00:06:505 - if you tried to make here instrumental part, sso better to map this huge gap between 00:06:505 - 00:08:005 (19) -, because there are a lot of sounds here.
- 00:34:504 - 00:35:218 - the same suggestion for gap, as i said above, but as i already said in Muzu, even if you not decided to fix that gap, so fix 00:35:218 - that lack of note here.
- 00:42:093 - i hear sound here. In moments, when you decide between two things (wher ethere is 5-note stream, how to map : triple then tap, or tap then triple) better to choose triple then tap, because of better emphasizing. There are a lot of that kind of moments in map, so check them again and think about it. 01:02:004 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - you did it here, for example.
- 01:07:905 - you are mapping vocal here (starting with 01:04:504 (124) - ), so better to not miss vocal sounds here. And do not forget, one simple note here will not break density of the part.
- 01:15:397 - ^
- 01:33:789 - as i requested in Muzu, better to fill this gap by don.
- 01:37:361 (297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304) - 01:40:218 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - similar, but mapped different. For better stability try to make them similar.
- 00:28:789 (72) - fix AIMod (object isn't on tick)
- Do not also forget to fix timing points.
- 00:06:505 (22,23) - well, in Inner Oni it looks really empty.
- 00:17:362 (1) - be very accurate with that, disputable decision.
- 00:24:861 (45,46,50,51,55,56) - i hear sounds between them. Yes, you choose vocal, but they are so loud, just think about emphasizing them somehow.
- 00:37:182 - delete here and add one at 00:38:611 - for better rhytm.
- 00:42:004 (4,5,6) - oh well, here you mapped triple, but not mapped it before.
- 00:55:307 (103,104) - swap them for better rhytm.
- 00:57:986 - delete to emphasize vocal (which starts at 00:58:075 (125) - )
- 01:33:968 (363,364,365,366) - non-reasonable 1/6 here. It's like overmapping
- 01:43:343 (445,453) - better to make them similar, it will make stream mor enjoyable and a bit more stable rhytm.
- 01:44:772 (460,465) - if you like, so what about kats here?
That's all i can suggest.
Good emphasizing, but there are some strange gaps in diffs. Density can be polished a bit to.
Anyway, good luck !