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FELT - Intertwined infinite/Sky Gate--Introduction/Wind God

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Wonki
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Wonki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 6월 11일 일요일 at 오후 2:24:20

Artist: FELT
Title: Intertwined infinite/Sky Gate--Introduction/Wind God Girl Arrange
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Milky Wink NAGI☆ 舞花 Maika Reitaisai SP 風神少女 Wind God Girl 東方花映塚　〜 Phantasmagoria of Flower View
BPM: 50
Filesize: 10105kb
Play Time: 05:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Trinity - 7Key (5.32 stars, 3643 notes)
Download: FELT - Intertwined infinite/Sky Gate--Introduction/Wind God Girl Arrange
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Almost complete!

Map based on LN

First kiai: Piano + hihat
Second kiai: Vocal + hihat
Last kiai: Piano + Vocal + hihat

Any advice is welcome
BG changed! 2017/06/03 Hitsound changed! 2017/6/11 Please re- download
Last edited by Wonki , edited 28 times in total.
Vampir
138 posts
Joined December 2014
Vampir
IRC
2017-02-24 23:21 Vampir: 디멘트
2017-02-24 23:22 Vampir: 새로받아야
2017-02-24 23:22 Vampir: 노말나옴
2017-02-24 23:22 Wonki: 글쿤
2017-02-24 23:28 Vampir: ths
2017-02-24 23:28 Vampir: 손
2017-02-24 23:28 Vampir: 개아프네요
2017-02-24 23:28 Wonki: ㄹㅇ?
2017-02-24 23:28 Vampir: 저
2017-02-24 23:28 Vampir: 손수술했잖슴;
2017-02-24 23:28 Vampir: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-02-24 23:28 Vampir: 좀씩 쉬었다 해야함
2017-02-24 23:30 Wonki: 글쿤
2017-02-24 23:30 Vampir: 폭타가없어서
2017-02-24 23:30 Vampir: 넘아쉽네요
2017-02-24 23:30 Wonki: 글쿤
2017-02-24 23:30 Wonki: 애초에
2017-02-24 23:30 Wonki: 비펨이 낮아서
2017-02-24 23:30 Vampir: ㅠ
2017-02-24 23:30 Wonki: ㅋㅋ
2017-02-24 23:30 Wonki: 노래만딱좋은
2017-02-24 23:30 Vampir: ㅋ캔뮤같은패턴을 기대했는데
2017-02-24 23:30 Vampir: 그것도 그거고
2017-02-24 23:30 Vampir: 왼손 약지가 날라가서
2017-02-24 23:30 Vampir: 잘치지도 몬하겠음
2017-02-24 23:31 Wonki: :((
2017-02-24 23:31 Wonki: 이제
2017-02-24 23:31 Vampir: 일단
2017-02-24 23:31 Vampir: 곡이 개씹좋으므로
2017-02-24 23:31 Wonki: 힘들었던곳
2017-02-24 23:31 Vampir: 추천하나드림
2017-02-24 23:31 Vampir: 롱잡이 개인적으로 다 힘들었네요
2017-02-24 23:31 Vampir: 오랜만에 보는거라
2017-02-24 23:31 Wonki: 몇군데 골라주시면
2017-02-24 23:31 Vampir: 눈도 아프고 팔도아프고
2017-02-24 23:31 Wonki: 쿠도숩니다
2017-02-24 23:31 Wonki: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-02-24 23:31 Vampir: 모딩잘안하니
2017-02-24 23:31 Vampir: 쿠도는 안바라구
2017-02-24 23:31 Wonki: 글쿤
2017-02-24 23:31 Vampir: 연타구간이
2017-02-24 23:31 Wonki: 그럼
2017-02-24 23:31 Vampir: 좀힘듬
2017-02-24 23:32 Wonki: 마지막쪽이요?
2017-02-24 23:32 Vampir: ㅇㅇ
2017-02-24 23:32 Vampir: 그냥 연타가
2017-02-24 23:32 Vampir: 왼쪽에나오는걸
2017-02-24 23:32 Vampir: 제가못맞추는거일수듀ㅜㅗ
2017-02-24 23:32 Wonki: 후살이라 이해점
2017-02-24 23:32 Wonki: 글쿤
dkingo
550 posts
Joined June 2016
dkingo
Hallo wonki, a rough mod.

Hmm this map is outside of my ability but I'll try

mod
[General]
Add 東方Project as the source?

[Trinity]
00:26:821 - Add a note for the piano

00:49:914 (49914|5) - This LN actually begins about half column later

00:51:436 - Add a note for the loud piano sound

00:53:175 - ^

01:02:523 - There is a quiet voice which you can map

01:11:871 (71871|0) - Move to col 4 then move 01:12:305 (72305|3) - to col 1 or 2 for better pitch following

01:18:175 (78175|2) - This LN begins in 01:18:229 - If the middle LN follows the vocal, it should end in 01:18:148 -

01:28:501 - You missed a kick here

01:33:175 - I think the sound here is not strong enough for 4 notes+LN, my suggestion is deleting 01:33:175 (93175|1,93175|5) -

01:36:218 - Add a note for the kick

01:39:805 - A loud cymbal sound which you can map

01:41:327 - ^

01:42:305 - A quiet cymbal sound

01:46:762 - Add a note in the middle column

02:04:588 - Add a note for the snare

02:26:544 - Add a note for that quiet voice

02:35:566 - Add a note for the cymbal

03:04:044 (184044|6,184044|5) - I think the sound isn't strong enough for double

03:25:566 (205566|5,205566|6) - ^

03:43:610 - You can use more than double for this drum

04:19:588 (259588|1,259588|0,259697|6,259697|5) - Ctrl+g

Ok that's all~

Good luck with your map :D
Wonki
930 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
Wonki

dkingo wrote:

Hallo wonki, a rough mod.

Hmm this map is outside of my ability but I'll try

mod
[General]
Add 東方Project as the source? added

[Trinity]
00:26:821 - Add a note for the piano Can not hear

00:49:914 (49914|5) - This LN actually begins about half column later

00:51:436 - Add a note for the loud piano sound nope just 1note

00:53:175 - ^

01:02:523 - There is a quiet voice which you can map Focus on piano sound

01:11:871 (71871|0) - Move to col 4 then move 01:12:305 (72305|3) - to col 1 or 2 for better pitch following [01:11:001 (71001|2,71436|1,71871|0) - ]

01:18:175 (78175|2) - This LN begins in 01:18:229 - If the middle LN follows the vocal, it should end in 01:18:148 -

01:28:501 - You missed a kick here intended

01:33:175 - I think the sound here is not strong enough for 4 notes+LN, my suggestion is deleting 01:33:175 (93175|1,93175|5) - 01:33:175 (93175|0,93175|6) - i changed LN for chi- sound

01:36:218 - Add a note for the kick

01:39:805 - A loud cymbal sound which you can map intended

01:41:327 - ^ intended

01:42:305 - A quiet cymbal sound intended

01:46:762 - Add a note in the middle column

02:04:588 - Add a note for the snare

02:26:544 - Add a note for that quiet voice um?

02:35:566 - Add a note for the cymbal

03:04:044 (184044|6,184044|5) - I think the sound isn't strong enough for double I don't think so

03:25:566 (205566|5,205566|6) - ^ ^

03:43:610 - You can use more than double for this drum

04:19:588 (259588|1,259588|0,259697|6,259697|5) - Ctrl+g NOPE

Ok that's all~

Good luck with your map :D
thank you
Murumoo
Beatmap Nominator
719 posts
Joined February 2016
Murumoo
핰 :)
Wonki
930 posts
Joined February 2016
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Wonki

Murumoo wrote:

핰 :)
땡큐
BryLego
BryLego
I love it!
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
Joined March 2013
ArcherLove
hi~
from RMM queue

00:44:262 (44262|2,44262|5,44479|4,44479|1,44697|3) - like this? http://puu.sh/uv3Oh/a766a8455a.jpg
00:46:001 (46001|5,46218|4) - http://puu.sh/uv3Ph/e8598a13a0.jpg better visual imo
00:51:436 (51436|3) - move to 6
01:07:305 (67305|1) - move to1?
01:11:218 (71218|4) - to 4?
01:14:914 (74914|5,75131|6) - ctrl+j?
01:17:305 (77305|3) - to 2?
01:17:957 (77957|0) - flow better to 3 imo
01:19:479 (79479|0) - move to 2?
01:20:131 (80131|2,80349|5) - http://puu.sh/uv3UN/03efd8eb02.jpg better visual imo
01:23:066 - missing note? add to 2 (the deep sound)
01:24:667 - add note to 4?
01:26:001 (86001|0) - better flow on 7 imo
01:26:653 (86653|1) - to 1?
01:27:414 (87414|1,87523|0) - ctrl+j?
01:28:392 (88392|0,88610|5,88610|1,88610|6) - how about http://puu.sh/uv445/f77eabbc8b.jpg
01:47:305 (107305|0) - move to3 flow better imo
01:52:523 - add note to 4?
02:05:349 (125349|2,125349|3,125349|6,125457|1,125457|5,125457|0,125566|2,125566|4,125675|3,125675|1,125784|0,125784|2) - suggestion http://puu.sh/uv48I/b102dd1876.jpg
02:09:914 (129914|1) - move to 4?
02:13:284 (133284|1) - move to 2?
02:24:479 (144479|1,144697|0) - ctrl+j?
02:47:088 (167088|1) - move to3?
03:11:871 (191871|2) - move to 7
03:37:088 - add note to 4?
03:40:566 - ^
03:55:240 (235240|5,235240|0,235240|3,235349|6,235349|4,235349|1) - http://puu.sh/uv4gx/6008cf6682.jpg ?
05:01:110 (301110|0,301110|1) - move to 2-3?
05:04:153 (304153|0) - move to 6?

very good LN placement~
good luck:3
Wonki
930 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
Wonki

ArcherLove wrote:

hi~
from RMM queue

00:44:262 (44262|2,44262|5,44479|4,44479|1,44697|3) - like this? http://puu.sh/uv3Oh/a766a8455a.jpg
00:46:001 (46001|5,46218|4) - http://puu.sh/uv3Ph/e8598a13a0.jpg better visual imo
00:51:436 (51436|3) - move to 6 fixed
01:07:305 (67305|1) - move to1 fixed
01:11:218 (71218|4) - to 4?
01:14:914 (74914|5,75131|6) - ctrl+j?
01:17:305 (77305|3) - to 2?
01:17:957 (77957|0) - flow better to 3 imo
01:19:479 (79479|0) - move to 2? fixed
01:20:131 (80131|2,80349|5) - http://puu.sh/uv3UN/03efd8eb02.jpg better visual imo fixed
01:23:066 - missing note? add to 2 (the deep sound)
01:24:667 - add note to 4?
01:26:001 (86001|0) - better flow on 7 imo fixed
01:26:653 (86653|1) - to 1?
01:27:414 (87414|1,87523|0) - ctrl+j?
01:28:392 (88392|0,88610|5,88610|1,88610|6) - how about http://puu.sh/uv445/f77eabbc8b.jpg
01:47:305 (107305|0) - move to3 flow better imo fixed to 4
01:52:523 - add note to 4?
02:05:349 (125349|2,125349|3,125349|6,125457|1,125457|5,125457|0,125566|2,125566|4,125675|3,125675|1,125784|0,125784|2) - suggestion http://puu.sh/uv48I/b102dd1876.jpg
02:09:914 (129914|1) - move to 4?
02:13:284 (133284|1) - move to 2?
02:24:479 (144479|1,144697|0) - ctrl+j?
02:47:088 (167088|1) - move to3?
03:11:871 (191871|2) - move to 7
03:37:088 - add note to 4? fixed
03:40:566 - ^ fixed
03:55:240 (235240|5,235240|0,235240|3,235349|6,235349|4,235349|1) - http://puu.sh/uv4gx/6008cf6682.jpg ? fixed
05:01:110 (301110|0,301110|1) - move to 2-3?
05:04:153 (304153|0) - move to 6?

very good LN placement~
good luck:3
thank you
Garalulu
933 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
00:51:653 (51653|0) - 왜 이건 1/1 길이인가 00:53:392 (53392|4) - 요거와 달리
01:54:588 - 이거슨 02:08:501 - 와 같이 2개가 되어야 한다
02:15:023 - 여기도 드럼 있음
02:16:979 - ^
02:54:479 (174479|0) - 요거 02:54:479 (174479|1) - 와 길이가 달라 어색한 느낌
03:51:762 (231762|5,231762|6,231871|6,231871|5) - 굳이 이 드럼을 잭으로 넣을 필요가 있나 생각하오
03:52:631 (232631|0,232631|1,232740|0,232740|1) - ^
05:18:175 - 05:18:392 - 여기도 음이 변하는 구간이니 롱놋이 있으면 좋을듯


롱놋 짱짱맵
Wonki
930 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
Wonki

Garalulu wrote:

00:51:653 (51653|0) - 왜 이건 1/1 길이인가 00:53:392 (53392|4) - 요거와 달리 몰러
01:54:588 - 이거슨 02:08:501 - 와 같이 2개가 되어야 한다 알겟다
02:15:023 - 여기도 드럼 있음 의도
02:16:979 - ^ ^
02:54:479 (174479|0) - 요거 02:54:479 (174479|1) - 와 길이가 달라 어색한 느낌 누가 언급하면 바꾸려고햇는데 잘됬군
03:51:762 (231762|5,231762|6,231871|6,231871|5) - 굳이 이 드럼을 잭으로 넣을 필요가 있나 생각하오 수정
03:52:631 (232631|0,232631|1,232740|0,232740|1) - ^ ㅇ
05:18:175 - 05:18:392 - 여기도 음이 변하는 구간이니 롱놋이 있으면 좋을듯 난 없는거같음


롱놋 짱짱맵
떙스
Garalulu
933 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
Talk about remaked chart
irc
20:22 Wonki: 루루
20:22 Wonki: 미안한데
20:22 Wonki: 리멬을해서
20:22 Wonki: 맵텟하나만더해주라
20:22 Garalulu: :3
20:22 Garalulu: np
20:22 *Wonki is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1220737 FELT - Intertwined infinite/Sky Gate--Introduction/Wind God Girl Arrange]
20:22 Wonki: 전보다
20:22 Wonki: 치기시워
20:23 Wonki: 쉬우어
20:23 Garalulu: 라오어
20:29 Garalulu: =ㅈ=
20:29 Wonki: 루루5.3다른거
20:29 Wonki: 몇점나와
20:29 Garalulu: 포스님 마라톤 같은 경우는 890k
20:30 Wonki: 이정도면
20:30 Wonki: 불렙은아니지
20:30 Wonki: ?
20:30 Garalulu: 나한텐 아니긴 한데
20:30 Garalulu: 롱놋 안하는 사람들한테는
20:30 Garalulu: 어려울수도
20:30 Wonki: 이거랭크시킬거임
20:30 Wonki: 치다가
20:30 Wonki: 꼬인는부분
20:30 Wonki: 뭐있었는지좀
20:30 Wonki: 아렬줘
20:31 Garalulu: 04:17:088 (257088|2,257088|0,257197|2,257197|0,257305|3,257305|4) - 이런 구조라던가
20:31 Wonki: 거기는
20:31 Wonki: 좀염려했다
20:31 Wonki: 롱놋을좀
20:31 Wonki: 04:17:088 -
20:31 Wonki: 여기서
20:31 Wonki: 끊었다가
20:32 Wonki: 04:17:305 - 여기서다시롱놋으로이을까
20:32 Garalulu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8250680
20:32 Garalulu: 이렇게만 해도
20:32 Garalulu: 편함
20:33 Wonki: 좋군
20:33 Wonki: 다른곳은?
20:33 Garalulu: 04:47:957 (287957|1,287957|2,288066|1,288066|2,288175|1,288175|2) - here
20:34 Wonki: 저기불편했음?
20:35 Garalulu: 3개 연달아 나오는 구조는 뭔가
20:35 Garalulu: 불편함
20:35 Wonki: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/ ... nknown.png
20:35 Wonki: 이렇게하면
20:35 Wonki: 어떨거같아
20:35 Garalulu: 굳
20:36 Wonki: 다른곳은없어?
20:36 Garalulu: 03:07:305 (187305|2,187523|1,187740|0) - 여긴 왜 롱놋이 안 붙어있으
20:37 Wonki: 보컬롱놋인데
20:37 Wonki: 보컬이 끊어지잖아
20:37 Garalulu: ㅇㅎ
20:38 Garalulu: 03:57:305 - 여기 부분에 롱놋 넣어도 ㄱㅊ을듯
20:38 Garalulu: 다라다라
20:38 Garalulu: 하면서 올라가는 음
20:39 Garalulu: 04:01:001 - 여기서는 롱놋이 끊기고 넘어가기보단 여기서부터 위로 쭈욱 연결되는게 좋을듯
20:39 Wonki: 3에?
20:40 Wonki: 이건바꿨어
20:40 Garalulu: 트릴 부분에서 하나씩 롱놋으로 하는 방법도 있고 여러가지
20:42 Wonki: 네놈끝나고쿠도수를줘야겠군
20:42 Wonki: 다른곳은없는가
20:42 Garalulu: 05:15:784 - 여긴 살짝 못생겼어
20:42 Wonki: 못생겨도
20:42 Garalulu: 차라리 67로 붙여놓는게 이쁨
20:42 Wonki: 치기는편하다
20:42 Garalulu: 12 롱놋이랑 어우러져서
20:42 Garalulu: 12 67 구조
20:43 Wonki: 알겟다
20:43 Garalulu: 05:21:218 - 여기 가운데에 노트 하나 추가해도 조흠
20:43 Wonki: 아ㅣㄹ겠다
20:43 Garalulu: 끝
20:44 Wonki: 좋았다
20:44 Wonki: od와 hp는 적절한가
20:44 Garalulu: 매퍼의 악랄함을 판별할 수 있는데
20:44 Garalulu: 너무 자비로움
20:44 Wonki: 너무자비로워?
20:44 Garalulu: 대부분의 노트 배치가 정박이니
20:45 Garalulu: OD 8 해도 ㄱㅊ
20:45 Garalulu: 어차피 깰놈은 꺠서
20:45 Wonki: 7.5정도로
20:45 Wonki: 하겠다
20:45 Garalulu: HP는 흠
20:45 Garalulu: 롱놋을 잘 친다 = HP 상관없이 깬다
20:45 Garalulu: 롱놋을 못 친다 = HP 상관없이 죽는다
20:45 Garalulu: 이거라
20:45 Garalulu: 맘대로해도될듯
20:45 Wonki: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:45 Wonki: 8.3까지내릴까
20:45 Garalulu: 딱히 한꺼번에 몰아쳐서 죽이는 구간도 없어서
20:46 Garalulu: 으악 으악 하다가 쥭는 사람이 태반일거야
20:46 Wonki: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:46 Wonki: 8.3까지내리겠다
20:46 Garalulu: owo)b
20:46 Wonki: 포스트하면
20:46 Wonki: 쿠도수를주도록하지네놈
20:46 Garalulu: 아싸
20:46 Garalulu: 2개월만의 쿠도수다
Wonki
930 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
Wonki

Garalulu wrote:

Talk about remaked chart
irc
20:22 Wonki: 루루
20:22 Wonki: 미안한데
20:22 Wonki: 리멬을해서
20:22 Wonki: 맵텟하나만더해주라
20:22 Garalulu: :3
20:22 Garalulu: np
20:22 *Wonki is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1220737 FELT - Intertwined infinite/Sky Gate--Introduction/Wind God Girl Arrange]
20:22 Wonki: 전보다
20:22 Wonki: 치기시워
20:23 Wonki: 쉬우어
20:23 Garalulu: 라오어
20:29 Garalulu: =ㅈ=
20:29 Wonki: 루루5.3다른거
20:29 Wonki: 몇점나와
20:29 Garalulu: 포스님 마라톤 같은 경우는 890k
20:30 Wonki: 이정도면
20:30 Wonki: 불렙은아니지
20:30 Wonki: ?
20:30 Garalulu: 나한텐 아니긴 한데
20:30 Garalulu: 롱놋 안하는 사람들한테는
20:30 Garalulu: 어려울수도
20:30 Wonki: 이거랭크시킬거임
20:30 Wonki: 치다가
20:30 Wonki: 꼬인는부분
20:30 Wonki: 뭐있었는지좀
20:30 Wonki: 아렬줘
20:31 Garalulu: 04:17:088 (257088|2,257088|0,257197|2,257197|0,257305|3,257305|4) - 이런 구조라던가
20:31 Wonki: 거기는
20:31 Wonki: 좀염려했다
20:31 Wonki: 롱놋을좀
20:31 Wonki: 04:17:088 -
20:31 Wonki: 여기서
20:31 Wonki: 끊었다가
20:32 Wonki: 04:17:305 - 여기서다시롱놋으로이을까
20:32 Garalulu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8250680
20:32 Garalulu: 이렇게만 해도
20:32 Garalulu: 편함
20:33 Wonki: 좋군
20:33 Wonki: 다른곳은?
20:33 Garalulu: 04:47:957 (287957|1,287957|2,288066|1,288066|2,288175|1,288175|2) - here
20:34 Wonki: 저기불편했음?
20:35 Garalulu: 3개 연달아 나오는 구조는 뭔가
20:35 Garalulu: 불편함
20:35 Wonki: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/ ... nknown.png
20:35 Wonki: 이렇게하면
20:35 Wonki: 어떨거같아
20:35 Garalulu: 굳
20:36 Wonki: 다른곳은없어?
20:36 Garalulu: 03:07:305 (187305|2,187523|1,187740|0) - 여긴 왜 롱놋이 안 붙어있으
20:37 Wonki: 보컬롱놋인데
20:37 Wonki: 보컬이 끊어지잖아
20:37 Garalulu: ㅇㅎ
20:38 Garalulu: 03:57:305 - 여기 부분에 롱놋 넣어도 ㄱㅊ을듯
20:38 Garalulu: 다라다라
20:38 Garalulu: 하면서 올라가는 음
20:39 Garalulu: 04:01:001 - 여기서는 롱놋이 끊기고 넘어가기보단 여기서부터 위로 쭈욱 연결되는게 좋을듯
20:39 Wonki: 3에?
20:40 Wonki: 이건바꿨어
20:40 Garalulu: 트릴 부분에서 하나씩 롱놋으로 하는 방법도 있고 여러가지
20:42 Wonki: 네놈끝나고쿠도수를줘야겠군
20:42 Wonki: 다른곳은없는가
20:42 Garalulu: 05:15:784 - 여긴 살짝 못생겼어
20:42 Wonki: 못생겨도
20:42 Garalulu: 차라리 67로 붙여놓는게 이쁨
20:42 Wonki: 치기는편하다
20:42 Garalulu: 12 롱놋이랑 어우러져서
20:42 Garalulu: 12 67 구조
20:43 Wonki: 알겟다
20:43 Garalulu: 05:21:218 - 여기 가운데에 노트 하나 추가해도 조흠
20:43 Wonki: 아ㅣㄹ겠다
20:43 Garalulu: 끝
20:44 Wonki: 좋았다
20:44 Wonki: od와 hp는 적절한가
20:44 Garalulu: 매퍼의 악랄함을 판별할 수 있는데
20:44 Garalulu: 너무 자비로움
20:44 Wonki: 너무자비로워?
20:44 Garalulu: 대부분의 노트 배치가 정박이니
20:45 Garalulu: OD 8 해도 ㄱㅊ
20:45 Garalulu: 어차피 깰놈은 꺠서
20:45 Wonki: 7.5정도로
20:45 Wonki: 하겠다
20:45 Garalulu: HP는 흠
20:45 Garalulu: 롱놋을 잘 친다 = HP 상관없이 깬다
20:45 Garalulu: 롱놋을 못 친다 = HP 상관없이 죽는다
20:45 Garalulu: 이거라
20:45 Garalulu: 맘대로해도될듯
20:45 Wonki: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:45 Wonki: 8.3까지내릴까
20:45 Garalulu: 딱히 한꺼번에 몰아쳐서 죽이는 구간도 없어서
20:46 Garalulu: 으악 으악 하다가 쥭는 사람이 태반일거야
20:46 Wonki: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:46 Wonki: 8.3까지내리겠다
20:46 Garalulu: owo)b
20:46 Wonki: 포스트하면
20:46 Wonki: 쿠도수를주도록하지네놈
20:46 Garalulu: 아싸
20:46 Garalulu: 2개월만의 쿠도수다
Thanks again !
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
7K WAO

something

01:01:436 (61436|4,61436|0,61653|1,61653|5,61871|2,61871|6,62088|4,62088|0,62957|6,62957|3,63175|5,63175|2,63392|4,63392|1,63610|3,63610|0) - i hate the fact its reversed from the pitch direction, left to right
01:07:088 (67088|6,67088|2,67305|0,67305|4) - you can make a jack / 1/4 shield to layer the same piano pitch

i personally think, generally these triplets at many differents instrument around 01:24:697 - 01:38:610 could be toned down to reduce their intensity, its still opening, and i think its good for transition to the next section, also to make variation with 02:34:262 - so the copy paste doesn't looks obvious

example, 01:27:740 (87740|5,87849|5,87957|1) - can remove this to favor slightly better playability than mashing non-downbeat beats
01:26:218 (86218|1) - these hi-hat tho, i can't differ whether 123 is hi-hat or snare because both layered in 123 123 123 or 567 567 567

nice LN stuff, i couldn't complaint much since its pretty solid overall and each section is well-varied, i feel you can add more 1234567 stairy based LN pattern between the symmetrical 123 S 567 style for variation, you know, something stairy and visually appealing like o2jam ish pattern, you got the idea

good luck ponki! :DD
Wonki
930 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
Wonki

Arzenvald wrote:

7K WAO

something

01:01:436 (61436|4,61436|0,61653|1,61653|5,61871|2,61871|6,62088|4,62088|0,62957|6,62957|3,63175|5,63175|2,63392|4,63392|1,63610|3,63610|0) - i hate the fact its reversed from the pitch direction, left to right
01:07:088 (67088|6,67088|2,67305|0,67305|4) - you can make a jack / 1/4 shield to layer the same piano pitch

i personally think, generally these triplets at many differents instrument around 01:24:697 - 01:38:610 could be toned down to reduce their intensity, its still opening, and i think its good for transition to the next section, also to make variation with 02:34:262 - so the copy paste doesn't looks obvious

example, 01:27:740 (87740|5,87849|5,87957|1) - can remove this to favor slightly better playability than mashing non-downbeat beats
01:26:218 (86218|1) - these hi-hat tho, i can't differ whether 123 is hi-hat or snare because both layered in 123 123 123 or 567 567 567

nice LN stuff, i couldn't complaint much since its pretty solid overall and each section is well-varied, i feel you can add more 1234567 stairy based LN pattern between the symmetrical 123 S 567 style for variation, you know, something stairy and visually appealing like o2jam ish pattern, you got the idea

good luck ponki! :DD
Thank youi! Who taught ponki
Reba
823 posts
Joined August 2013
Reba
01:12:740 (72740|5,73175|6) - 이거 두개 Ctrl +J 하면 오른쪽에 7 -> 6 -> 5 -> 4 가 된다 3210땡

01:18:229 (78229|2) - 굳이 정확한 타이밍을 안맞춰도 됨. 01:18:175 (78175|5,78175|6) - 이거랑 맞춰도 전혀 헷갈리지 않음. 지금이 오히려 조금 헷갈림

01:21:218 (81218|2,81653|4,81871|3) - 이거보다는 이게 더 어울림 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8299186

01:37:523 (97523|3,97631|1) - 좀 치기 불편하다 121 은, 그러므로 Ctrl + J 를 해주자

01:47:523 (107523|2,107523|0,107523|1) - 뭔가 이상해보인다, 이렇게 바꿔주자 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8299220

02:09:914 (129914|2) - 이 노트가 끝나는 타이밍을 02:10:784 - 여기까지 늘려주면 더 잘짰다고 소문날것이다

03:14:914 (194914|1) - 1칼럼으로 벌려버려

03:31:001 (211001|5,211218|4,211436|6,211653|3,211871|4,212088|5,212305|4) - 더 참신한 패턴으로 할수있을거같다. 예 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8299239

04:06:218 (246218|1,247088|1) - 이거의 의도를 2놋으로 바꿔라, 그리하면 더 잘생겨질지어니 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8299248

04:48:175 (288175|2) - 뒤지기 싫으면 지워라

05:04:262 (304262|4) - 이것도 지워라. 노트수를 맞추면서 패턴까지 희생할 필요는 없다

일단은 여기까지 하겠다 나중에 와서 또 훑어보지
Wonki
930 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
Wonki

Reba wrote:

01:12:740 (72740|5,73175|6) - 이거 두개 Ctrl +J 하면 오른쪽에 7 -> 6 -> 5 -> 4 가 된다 3210땡

01:18:229 (78229|2) - 굳이 정확한 타이밍을 안맞춰도 됨. 01:18:175 (78175|5,78175|6) - 이거랑 맞춰도 전혀 헷갈리지 않음. 지금이 오히려 조금 헷갈림

01:21:218 (81218|2,81653|4,81871|3) - 이거보다는 이게 더 어울림 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8299186

01:37:523 (97523|3,97631|1) - 좀 치기 불편하다 121 은, 그러므로 Ctrl + J 를 해주자

01:47:523 (107523|2,107523|0,107523|1) - 뭔가 이상해보인다, 이렇게 바꿔주자 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8299220

02:09:914 (129914|2) - 이 노트가 끝나는 타이밍을 02:10:784 - 여기까지 늘려주면 더 잘짰다고 소문날것이다

03:14:914 (194914|1) - 1칼럼으로 벌려버려

03:31:001 (211001|5,211218|4,211436|6,211653|3,211871|4,212088|5,212305|4) - 더 참신한 패턴으로 할수있을거같다. 예 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8299239

04:06:218 (246218|1,247088|1) - 이거의 의도를 2놋으로 바꿔라, 그리하면 더 잘생겨질지어니 :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8299248

04:48:175 (288175|2) - 뒤지기 싫으면 지워라

05:04:262 (304262|4) - 이것도 지워라. 노트수를 맞추면서 패턴까지 희생할 필요는 없다

일단은 여기까지 하겠다 나중에 와서 또 훑어보지
한개빼고다고침.
Remuring
556 posts
Joined May 2015
Remuring
늦었지만 모딩을 하겠다.


00:57:496 - 사실상 이쯤에서 피아노 소리 띠링 하는 소리들리는데 추가해도 괜찮고 그냥 냅둬도 괜찮을듯
01:16:979 - 여기하고 01:17:631 - 여기 소리 빠졌는데 의도면 추가하지않아도될듯
02:08:175 (128175|3) - 이걸 지우고 02:08:066 - 여기에 노트하나 추가하는건 어떰? 4콜에 추천
03:30:566 - 03:33:610 - 03:34:479 - 03:35:784 - 03:39:262 - 이런곳에 피아노 음 추가하는거도 나쁘지않을거같다 그리고
03:41:001 - 이거 피아노 소리큰데 하나 더 추가해도될듯
03:41:979 - 여기도 노트하나 추가해주면 좋겠다 소리 하나 들리네

내가 볼수있는건 이정도다
전체적으로 잘짜였네 근데 넘 어렵다
어쨋든 꿀잼
늦어서 미안하다.
그리고 별하나
Wonki
930 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
Wonki

R e m u r i n g wrote:

늦었지만 모딩을 하겠다.


00:57:496 - 사실상 이쯤에서 피아노 소리 띠링 하는 소리들리는데 추가해도 괜찮고 그냥 냅둬도 괜찮을듯
01:16:979 - 여기하고 01:17:631 - 여기 소리 빠졌는데 의도면 추가하지않아도될듯 ㅇ
02:08:175 (128175|3) - 이걸 지우고 02:08:066 - 여기에 노트하나 추가하는건 어떰? 4콜에 추천
03:30:566 - 03:33:610 - 03:34:479 - 03:35:784 - 03:39:262 - 이런곳에 피아노 음 추가하는거도 나쁘지않을거같다 그리고
03:41:001 - 이거 피아노 소리큰데 하나 더 추가해도될듯
03:41:979 - 여기도 노트하나 추가해주면 좋겠다 소리 하나 들리네 ㅇ

내가 볼수있는건 이정도다
전체적으로 잘짜였네 근데 넘 어렵다
어쨋든 꿀잼
늦어서 미안하다.
그리고 별하나
Hestia-
271 posts
Joined June 2010
Hestia-
hihi Wonki !!!

[Trinity]
Honestly, remove the notes at the beginning and start the map at 00:42:903 - It's not good sitting through boring section. :? Let people skip this~
01:27:740 (87740|6,87849|6) - Remove, weird right hand only 3note chord minijack thing, I think it's better with 2 notes
01:31:218 (91218|6,91327|6) - Remove
01:34:697 (94697|5,94805|5) - Remove
01:37:740 - This shield is annoying, remove
01:38:175 (98175|6,98284|6) - Remove
01:45:131 (105131|0,105240|0) - Remove
02:01:246 (121246|4) - Start at 02:01:218 - Even though it fits the music it plays weird
02:37:305 (157305|2,157414|2) - Remove
02:40:784 (160784|6,160892|6) - Remove
02:44:262 (164262|0,164371|0) - Remove
02:47:740 (167740|6,167849|6) - Remove
02:54:697 (174697|5,174805|5) - Remove
02:59:805 - put something here? or not, it is fine
03:29:044 (209044|2,209153|2) - remove
03:29:479 (209479|0,209588|0) - Remove
04:01:218 (241218|4,241218|2) - This shield is annoying, remove
04:11:218 (251218|6,251327|6) - Remove
04:54:697 (294697|6,294805|6) - Remove
05:01:001 (301001|1,301110|1) - Remove

Fun map :) gogo~
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