1. Edgy Difficulty Name (8.43 stars, 2732 notes)

Cyndere wrote:

[EDGY]

Corrosion difficulty name when

00:08:762 (5) - guitar sound change here, could change flow direction to emphasize yea maybe

00:15:334 (1,2,3) - i prefer this to be just 120 degree angle rotation instead of 2 slider blankets, looks nicer and better emphasis sure

00:16:763 (4,2) - slider polish? done

00:16:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - scaping maybe, 2 3 equidistant from 1, same with 4 5 yea i redid the jumps

00:24:691 (12,1) - i dont like this overlap, move 1 a bit down? sure

00:26:334 (5,1) - move down to make 1 blanket 3; make other necessary changes after you move it did

00:27:334 (1,2) - move 2 on same line of projection as 1 did

00:29:048 (1) - good slider, needs a little smoothing up on the last tail k did

00:29:048 (1,1,2) - scaping, or blanket done

00:37:619 (1,2,1,2,3) - i feel like theese should be tiny junps. stacking seems undermapped i disagree, it builds up to the next section quite nicely and putting jumps would give too much emphasis for a small stream

00:38:476 (1,2,3,1) - not exactly in a straight line (just nitpicky things) yea probs, i dont see what you mean though lol

00:43:333 (4,1) - overlap fixed

00:43:761 (1) - missing an important vocal beat here i guess its well emphasized IMO

00:44:833 (5,1) - straight line? :eyes: ill stop mentioning this here even if i see more fixed

00:45:904 (7,1) - distance here and 00:47:190 (1,2) - distance here are inconsistent not a problem IMO

00:47:904 (4,5,6) - equal spacing? made it the same angle as the rest of the jumps

00:47:476 (1) - beat should start here. guitar sound repeats, not being emphasized properly (i know you want to emphasize the scream, so you can just make it 1 tick shorter and then add beat. good suggestion, but i was following the screams for the entire section and to randomly make it follow the guitar for one pattern seems silly

00:48:476 (1,2,3) - strong guitar sounds start at 00:48:618 (1,2,3) - adjust this? also same issue as 00:15:334 (1,2,3) | also makes 00:49:333 (4,5,6) - just a double, which properly emphasizes it cuz the drums are only a double, not a triple same as above was following the vocals as the priority and to start to follow the guitar all of a sudden sounds silly

00:56:333 (5,2) - overlap fixed

01:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the way the stream overlaps doesnt look nice, polish? i agree, fixed

01:07:475 (3,1) - rotate a little so no overlap sure

01:16:761 (4,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i know it disappears when the stream comes, but i still like it when everything is related to each other so blanket? sure

01:20:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - change something up to emphasize start of scream yea probably

01:21:904 (2,4,6) - use fade away effect here? would look nice like you did here 01:22:047 (3,5,7) - yea polished it up a bit

01:27:333 (1) - looks weird fixed

01:28:190 (1) - everything from here to kiai looks nice, gj thanks

01:59:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - looks super clustered yea maybe a bit

02:07:047 (6,7,8) - personal issue, make 8 stack with 02:07:474 (3) - sure

02:15:618 (1) - make slider end stack with something there, overlap doesnt look nice i disagree, i think the stream overlap looks fine i did redo the jumps on 2:14 to make it look a bit nicer though

02:19:617 (5) - nc here? voice emphasis i did it to keep the ncs consistant

02:21:189 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - clustered i agree that is shit looking

02:23:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - nice pattern! thanks

02:24:904 (2,3,4,5,6) - scaping agree, fixed

02:52:475 (2,1) - i know the 2 is supposed to lead into 1, but it kinda looks like a failed blanket, so rotate 1 away from vertical plane i polished it up a bit

02:53:903 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - nice pattern/flow/blanket thanks

02:58:189 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - clustered, just make 2 beats on each combo stack with each other so it looks smoother i agree

02:59:974 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^

03:26:403 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - honestly you can just stack most of the streams looks fine to me

03:28:403 (8,1) - rotate 1 away from 8 i moved it a bit upwards

03:36:760 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - blanket? was made as a back and forth and not a triangle

03:44:475 (1) - cool slider, just fix the bottom curve done

04:15:902 (2) - the way the skeleton is made without red anchor in the center makes the slider look not smooth | e.g = https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7379057 did

04:18:474 (2,2) - blanket plis sure

04:01:616 (1) - here up to the 300bpm section could use some horizontal sliders this section looks fine as it is to me

04:32:945 (1,1) - stack? sure

04:35:645 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - clustered it looks fine to me

04:38:245 (2,2) - overlap, should be as good as 04:37:845 (1,1) - yea sure, fixed

04:39:445 (1,2) - use this as a chance to make horizontal sliders these sliders look fine to me imo

04:43:645 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - woo 8 star section, a bit clustered, just copy paste 1 equilateral triangle, but idk u expect me to mod 300 bpm?? :eyes: fixed spacing

04:53:245 (1) - pls make symmetrical slider fixed

04:50:845 (1) - 300bpm kiai section could still use a bit more long horizontal sliders i think the kiai is fine with curve sliders

05:46:616 (1,3,5) - SCAPING fixed

05:49:187 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing? fixed

05:57:187 (5,6,7,6,7,8) - make any 2 of these stack yea probably

05:56:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - one direction flow only??? yea i wanted the end kiai to have streams that stood out but i did it really poorly will remap

06:07:187 (1) - you did the red anchor here but not 04:15:902 (2) - here WUT yea sorry i was dumb earlier

06:07:187 (1,1) - blanket pls done

06:09:901 (7,3,4) - stack or something, happens alot with most of the streams, i shuda pointed this out earlier, ill just stop mentioning looks fine to me

06:11:830 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - worst choke than UTA :^) arles plsbut i feel its one of the easier spaced streams to hit LMFAO

06:46:616 (4,5,6) - parallel pls done

06:55:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - one direction flow??? yea once again i feel this stream was really shit will remap

[CONCLUSION]
-well done on slow sections
-can work on some emphasis and slider shapes
-can spam more blanket and aesthetics

pls KDs, didnt let me do a IRC

Wnd wrote:

they call me mapwrecker
[Edgy Difficulty Name]

thats crazy

00:21:620 (2) - this stream starts at a really low point on the screen, would recommend moving it up if possible streams are in a fine spot IMO
also the spacing of 00:21:762 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - is very inconsistent spacing is within .05 its fine
01:05:404 (4) - creates an awkward curve, moving it to the right a bit makes it look nicer imo fixed
01:07:475 (3) - ^ but down instead of right fixed
01:14:619 (1) - nice sausage thanks
01:40:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the drum beats here are shifted over between the beats, adding a red line at 01:40:511 (1) - gets the circles matched with the drums (it makes the transition into the next slider very odd though red point spam is bad, and it would also make the maps timing overly complicated)
02:21:404 (6) - no reason in the music for such a sharp direction change in stream here, for example at 02:32:475 (1) - the vocals got slightly louder, giving a good reason for a sharp curve and spacing change i agree i'll redo that curve
02:26:761 (1) - move down small amount to match distance snap of rest of burst fixed
02:58:475 (1) - again with sudden curves same as earlier i agree its bad
03:00:761 (1) - good place for direction change, paired with guitar sound change, but 03:00:618 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - looks sloppy; make some beats stack and/or move around a few notes to cause less awkward overlap yea that curve looks really bad again aha
03:18:761 (1) - good use of direction change again thanks
06:09:330 (6) - very large spacing change, maybe fine though intentional to make it a wide triangle to play
06:57:473 (1) - drum kick here, can afford to change direction of stream since this one only goes one direction yea i agree i need to remap that stream

i don't like how often you go to the edges of the play area but i think that's just a problem i have and nobody else does
maybe a bit more variety in stream shapes :^)

ayygurl wrote:

kudosu for timing plox

btw try something like this for the notes (not the placement)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7384323

Nikakis wrote:

Nice song and creative map.But let's discuss some things :


00:00:763 (1,1) - : You should avoid those gaps especially on metal songs like this.It has so many sounds to map.I recommend adding a timing section with 1.0 SV right on the red tick and put some reverse sliders.The first is gonna have 3 ticks,the second one two,and the last one a single.So it will look something like this : (Wait some seconds till the video starts,it has some delay when you re trying to watch a video on puush) https://puu.sh/unHTY/073fb00bc3.mp4 i feel that's entirely unneeded since there is only 3 sounds there and to over complicate them seems unnecessary

00:04:191 (1) - : Extend this slider's size a bit,it's too small.High SV + tiny slider isn't recommended at all : https://puu.sh/unIjq/de11a6bbf3.png sure i guess, doesn't hurt to do it

00:09:334 (1) - : Remove this NC nced because of the ding sound and because of the spacing change

00:15:048 (4,5) - : Space out those notes a bit sure

00:19:048 (2,3,4) - : I 25%'d the speed of the song,i don't hear any triple sound.Simply delete one circle of the 3 and map them as single notes i know its hard to hear but there is definitely 3 separate sounds

00:19:905 (2,3,4) - : ^ same as above, this time the 3 separate sounds are much more clear

00:25:620 (1) - : Move the slider a little up,it's too weird that you have it there.Place it on the head of the previous slider : https://puu.sh/unJIJ/b68c9f5d0c.png i feel it looks fine as it is and to move it over the slider would look worse IMO

00:49:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - : Delete those stream notes they make no sense.Replace them with two single notes : https://puu.sh/unNMm/507da48084.png i know there isn't sounds on those specific notes but i was following the whole sound with them similar to 06:40:616 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

00:51:904 (1) - : I recommend to delete this giant slider,it just doesn't fit on the whole tempo of the song.Make it circles. (I know you focused on the guy's scream but basic beats have the priority now) i know the giant slider doesn't fit 'too' well but i feel it's nicer to have a longer slider there than 3 separate sliders or random jumps

00:55:619 (2) - : Make it circles added

00:55:619 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - : I don't know about this part,please try this : https://puu.sh/unOYX/9aa693599e.png done

00:59:904 (1) - , 01:07:904 (1) - : Put Kiai on this duration that i've linked. good idea, but i reserved kiai time for the chorus's so i feel it's unnecessary

01:06:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - : There is a noticable change here on the beat,why do you continue the stream?Try this https://puu.sh/unPDe/d59a82ec26.png i nced the start of those sounds to make the change show up since i felt it was unnecessary to change the stream just for 3 beats just like how i did 03:43:331 -

01:07:904 (1) - : Make this slider smaller and add one more : https://puu.sh/unRj0/d409f3a9e1.png i disagree, i feel the long slider follows those 2 beats well and looks a lot nicer than 2 sliders IMO

01:13:904 (2,3,4,5,6) - : Space them out sure

02:01:618 (5) - : Add NC sure

02:02:475 (1) - : Remove NC,and put it on 02:02:689 (4) - done

02:03:904 (2,3,4,5,6) - : Uncomfortable flow,remap it. done

02:08:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - : They are too far from the previous slider,move them a bit. done

02:29:618 (5,6,7,8) - : Ctrl + G thanks, fixed

02:36:761 (1) - : Remove NC done

02:37:332 (1) - : ^ done

02:39:332 (1) - : ^ done

02:40:761 (1,1) - : ^ the ncs start on every new stream, and for the last note the last beat is louder so i wanted to properly emphasize it similar to 02:33:047 (1) -

02:42:380 (1,1) - : ...^ the 3 ncs are here to make the 1/3rd beats stand out like what i did on 00:40:905 (1,2,3,1,1) - and 06:54:616 (9,1,1) -

03:20:046 (4,5,1,2) - : Bad flow,remap it. i originally mapped it to make some variety there but i agree its ugly

03:44:474 (1) - : Unrankedable slider cause ball's follow up isn't clear,remap it. i really don't get what you mean the slider is clearly visible and easy to follow?

04:13:616 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - : ?????? Why NC changes? the ncs are there since i nced the slow sections on separate notes like i did here 01:39:333 -

04:15:902 (2) - : Slider doesn't follow the exact rhythm and also you have an akward gap there.Do this : https://puu.sh/unTzi/ac9b3a41ee.png , https://puu.sh/unTC4/112914ccf1.png i didn't emphasize the beat there since i was following the vocals

04:29:445 (1) - : Remove NC sure

04:29:845 (1) - : ^ nah, i was mostly trying to keep the numbers below 6 in this section so it doesn't become too hard to read

04:30:245 (1) - : ^ sure

04:33:845 (1) - : Bad placement of the slider,try this https://puu.sh/unTS9/41e0a81ad5.png my primary focus was to keep the sliders on the downbeat there in a straight line, so the random curve one there doesn't look too nice IMO

Your map rocks after this part for real

05:01:645 (1) - : Remove NC sure

05:02:045 (1) - : ^ i hear a whoosh sound here for an nc

05:03:445 (1) - : If you listen carefully,there is a triple sound here.Make it a triple. although i do hear a sound on the blue tick, a random triple there would be entirely unexpected and random

05:42:616 (1) - : Remove NC,(I don't know why you are changing the combos so often.You only change the combo when the tempo is changing or you have different slider velocity.Keep that in mind.) done, i just nced that a alot since i thought it looked nice but i agree its too much

05:43:187 (1) - : ^ i kept the nc here since the vocals got louder

05:43:759 (1) - : ^ done

05:45:759 (1) - : ^ i disagree since those 3 look better as singular ncs than all being one

05:46:045 (1) - : ^ ^

05:46:330 (1) - : ^ ^ also, there is a slider velocity change here so an nc is required

05:50:902 (6) - : Add NC sure

06:06:045 (1) - : Remove NC i disagree since theres a sound on every downbeat there i'm emphasizing

06:07:187 (1) - : ^ ^

06:08:330 (1) - : ^ ^

06:35:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - : Space them out,you need to emphasize this part done

06:54:997 (1) - : Remove NC refer to earlier where i nced individual 1/3rd notes

~You gotta fix some little problems on some flow parts,but im sure in the future you will fix them.Good luck
on hitsounding it and maybe ranking it!

Blind wrote:

00:03:334 (1) - time the dip of the slider to be at its peak at 00:03:655 (yellow tick) to match with guitar
- should end on white tick because no new note at blue tick but more importantly, the drum on the white tick is so loud as it's basically the only thing playing i feel it's fine as it is
00:04:191 (1) - eeeeeeeeeeehh just make up an excuse saying the slider ends on a blue tick cause ur mapping it to the screaming lol
- at the very least make all these 'empty' slider ends 5% volume ya excuse made up it allows for optimal playability!!! and yea i agree needs low volume thatll come with hitsounding soon™
00:11:048 (1) - same thing as last slider ^
00:12:763 (1) - ya ok this blue tick slider thing keeps happening whatever ppl do it but i dont like it, ur choice if you want to change it yea i actually hear some notes there so i added some
00:17:334 (1) - would be nice if this was symmetrical to time it with the guitar vibrato i agree it looks nicer but it was just made to represent the whole sound than individual parts of it
02:52:475 (1) - and here as well same as above
00:22:191 (1) - change so edge is on the red tick before not blue yea i changed it to end on blue but making the edge end on red is too much work currently
00:26:048 (3,1) - imperfect blanket looks fine to me
00:44:761 (4) - i dont think this beat exists, same here 00:49:333 (4) and here 00:53:904 (4) and here 01:16:761 (4) and here 01:25:904 (4) beat exists only on the blue tick and why i made it a kickslider there to hopefully make its funky rhythm stand out and why i had a note before that was just to not make it play ackward but thanks on 53 and 1:16 i added the funky kickslider thing so thanks for that!!
01:09:904 (6,2) and 01:12:262 (7,4) - can stack directly on top of each other. this probably happened after changing stack leniency fixed
01:28:666 (4) and 01:29:523 (3) and 01:30:380 (4) and 01:31:237 (3) ill try to fix the stack
01:31:904 (1,2,3,4) - should be mapped in 1/2 (white and red main beat ticks) even though i hear the 1/4th here i'm gonna keep the 2nd half of these beats as 1/3rd since it seems so weird that it starts on 1/3rd then changes to 1/4th then goes back to 1/3rd so for playability sake it stays 1/3rd!!
01:32:856 (2,3) - should be mapped in 1/4 (triplet) same as above
01:33:904 (1,2,3,1) - should have much larger spacing to indicate more clearly that they are in 1/3 its fine as it is to me since its larger spacing than the 1/3rd section before triples
01:42:618 (2) - could be a repeating slider or triplet was following the vocals
01:48:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - LISTEN AGAIN, the beginning of this isnt a stream fixed
01:56:189 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - also listen again fixed
01:57:047 (1) - put the slider edges (red slider points) on white ticks once again i was following the whole sound (totally not an excuse for lazy xd)
02:15:618 (1) - just end on white tick lol ya i get it has a sound there but to make it play better blue tick lol
02:17:689 (2,3,4) - i dont think there's anything here lol fixed
02:29:761 (6,7,8) - not a triplet, get rid of 7, the triplet is in the next pair of notes, inbetween 02:29:904 (8,9) i hear the sound on the blue tick where it is currently
02:37:618 (1) - vibrato is in 1/4, change red slider points to reflect this once again it was to emphasize the whole sound
02:56:475 (1) - can bump to yellow tick for better timing i would like to keep all these weird ass sliders as 1/4th so none seem unexpected
03:22:474 (6,7,8) - no triplet once again i hear some sound on the blue tick
04:08:759 (1,2) - perhaps smaller spacing, similar to 04:09:616 (1,2,3) ya sure
04:19:045 (1) - put edge on white tick once again following whole sound xddd
04:26:759 (2,3) and 04:27:616 (2,3) - missing beat in red tick inbetween these two notes added
yamete part - i know for you, it makes sense that there are combo colors in threes because the word 'yamete' has three syllables. the thing is , you're mapping the drums and the voice at the same time - they're both emphasising each white tick, which leads me to think that the combos should be in twos. it's easier to read in twos i tried it oh yea on the yamete part i guess ill add them if you find them easier to read since you can actually play it
05:36:045 (1,1) - imperfect looks fine to me
05:41:473 (1) - put corners to 1/4 timing same as before following whole sound
05:55:830 (2,3,4) - no notes fixed
06:01:045 (5,6) - note inbetween these two on red tick, the triplet after shouldnt be there that triples hard to distinguish so i just assumed its right before the downbeat like the rest of them
06:04:902 (1,1) - imperfect once again looks fine to me
06:06:045 (1) and 06:07:187 (1) - end on white tick yea i get there's sounds there but i was making the sliders line up with the loud sounds on the downbeat
06:08:759 (1,2) - where's the stream i don't hear a stream here lol
06:18:687 (2,3,4) - dont exist fixed
06:22:616 (1) - 1/4 timing it is in 1/3rd? if you mean the curve same old excuse xd
06:30:330 (2,3) - could be triplet yea maybe
06:35:473 (5) - no note refer to earlier
06:40:045 (6) - no note refer to earlier
06:41:473 (1) - end on red tick i get there's a sound there but it was made to be a 3/4th pause like the rest of them
06:55:258 (2,3,4) - no notes was following the whole scream with the stream