1. 01:20:223 (1,2) - Weź zrób prostą linię bo coś u mnie zgrzyta.
2. 01:27:950 - 66%, zapomniałeś że ma być tyle.
3. 01:43:859 (3,1,3) - Popraw kocyki.
4. 02:03:405 (4,1) - Jak wyżej, no i oczywiście pamiętaj żeby poprawić potem to kółeczko: 02:05:223 (3) -
5. 03:25:678 (1) - Zawsze możesz dać bardziej wyruchanny wzorek, też równie symetryczny.

1. Generally speaking I would really appreciate if the distances between the patterns were more polished as now some of them are a little bit too cramped when compared with the other. For example: 00:20:223 (3,4,5,1) - 00:28:405 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - etc. That is quite a nazi thing yet I would really like to see it distanced in a little bit more consistent way. ;3;
2. 00:15:223 - Missing clap.
3. 00:22:496 - I highly suggest that either you or the hoest or Krfawy, which is me, uses a C2 tick here in order to use a clappy hitsound that would fulfill the role in a completely perfect manner, especially after I had to help the hoest with the whole procedure aka hitsound the map myself LOL. Same goes for 00:31:587 - and 00:55:223 -
   00:25:678 (1) - More symmetry please. XD
4. 01:08:405 (6) - Uh I want to see it as a 100% symmetrical slider again. =w=
5. 01:32:496 (5) - And again maybe... I really am a symmetry weirdo, sorry!
6. 01:35:223 (3) - Mmm... to be honest the shape of the wave is not that convincing, don't you mind making it a little bit more polished? The directions of the very first and the very last lines are crooked now.
   
   The 1.10x kiai change might be not that huge but it's really nice as the difference is not too big in terms of the SV and the spacing. Also, I really like the old vibes from that 2011-like symmetrical mapping and those unorthodox sliders that now would be made with just three anchors. Great job! :3

1. 01:17:950 (5) - Miało być na X348 Y200.
2. 02:23:178 (3,4) - Whoever mapped that (I guess it is mapped by Blue Dragon aka Mismagius, isn't it?), could you please simplify this moment by removing the note number 3 or both of them? Now it might be even harder to be played than it is in Insane and I don't think it should be mapped harder in the highest difficulty than it is right now, not to mention that the players might be really startled with the density of the current pattern when compared to the rest of the map.
3. 02:45:678 (3) - Popraw.
   
   Nice Hard everyone. Also, Insane seems fine from my point of view.

ezek wrote:

02:23:519 - You should add a circle here to cover the vocal. ok

Good luck!

Irreversible wrote:

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00:00:223 (1) - That bump in the slider makes really no sense, what is it following? Maybe you could let it bump when she says la.. I think good for 3/2 sounding, think I and 00:07:496 (1) -
00:27:496 (3,4,1) - Mhh, I feel like this symmetry is unfitting because 00:29:314 (1) - sounds like an entirely new part and should thus not be THAT obviously connected with 00:27:496 (3) - , if you ask me. Leave now for becouse I not have any idea for differenting, maybe good to change but no idea how and for now keeping as is.
00:37:041 (2) - Mind making this slider shape a bit more distinct? Right now it looks like a draft of what it's going to become. Fixed, 01:37:041 (4) - this too.
00:44:087 - Why the break? I think good for newers becouse long song and no break not good idea think I.
00:54:769 (1) - This also feels super random. For vocals
00:58:405 (1,2,3) - I liked this pattern, but 01:02:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - felt super unconnected to the song (compared to the first one) and rather spammy with the 5 circles here. I'd go over this pattern again. Um I think it suit song nice and not too hard for one setion with circles...
01:07:496 (3,1) - Again, forced symmetry if you asked me. 01:09:314 (1) - has nothing to do with 01:07:496 (3) - , even more, it's such a distinctive sound here that this slider doesn't even fit (why not going for the lalal again= I want keep clean motif and good wub for clap sound I think... but if you give can better me exampel how repair will good me becouse no idea how different
01:10:678 (2) - That slider doesn't fit imo. The direction looks off (placement wise), but worse, the rhythm doesn't quite match the song, since you ignore the strong opportunities e.g. 01:11:359 - Compensating for easier rytm for noobs, they feel good. 01:11:587 - 01:12:041 - most important and mapped, noobs will feel rytm very good, also good flow think I
01:16:587 (1,2) - If you wanted to use symmetry or same slider shapes, then this would be the time. Blanket time. XD
Ugh.... 01:23:859 (1,2) - those two sliders should be connected songwise! not 01:25:678 (2,1) - x_x haha Fixed.
01:35:223 (2) - is that a copy paste section lol Yes.
01:49:314 (1,2,3) - Good example of symmetry
02:25:678 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Same as above
02:52:950 (1,1) - Same as above
03:04:314 (2,3) - Completely unrelated slider shapes even tho there's a good opportunity to highlight the song better. They work good D:
03:12:950 (5) - Wouldn't it make more sense to have it ctrl + j ?03:12:041 (3) - move this dow na bit so it wouldn't overlap, if you fix it Fixed.
03:13:063 (5,1) - Symmetry issue again But they feel and play good as now :<

tl:dr : Symmetry use issue, sometimes rhythm issues. structure generally isn't tht bad and design is ok.

hope that can help a bit since you're so /

also, i didn't mean anything mean, but im too tired to word it nicely,

love,
irre

1. 01:45:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - Whistles seems inconsistent here, as they are placed more often than the previous objects. Try to keep whistles on upbeats instead.
2. 01:51:132 (3) - Just like the previous slider, reverse the whistle to make it on the head instead, and add a whistle on 01:52:496 (4) - .
3. 02:11:132 (1) - In this section with spinners only, it might get a little too overwhelming for this difficulty, since you're pulling out 4 spinners in a row. I'd recommend using sliders instead. You can easily make something simple, fun and more relaxing.
4. 02:56:586 (1) - You can delete the new combo on this one, since there's none on 00:00:223 (1,2) -
5. 03:08:405 (2,3) - If you want to do overlaps like these sliders, you have to take into consideration the flow, which in this case, is not represented greatly. Instead, you could make the first wave of the slider (3) to go down, so you can do something like this:
   
   Example

   

1. 01:39:996 (3) - You could be moving this circle to x:232 y:285. It will make a nice straight flow between the previous and the next slider and it will have a consistent spacing.
2. 02:59:314 (1) - Delete the new combo on this object, and add a new combo to 03:00:223 (2) - .
3. There is a little inconsistency with hitsounds on these objects:
   01:05:678 (1,2) - , 01:09:314 (1,2) - , 02:32:950 (1,2) - , 02:36:587 (1,2) - , 03:07:496 (1,2) - . 03:11:132 (1,2) -

1. 00:01:587 (3,4) - In the first section, it is the only time these objects are not being stacked. You might wanna make it consistent as well.
2. 00:16:359 (6,1) - You should be following the vocals here. The long note should be placed where the circle (6) is, so reverse both of these objects.
3. 00:20:905 - A note could be added here, as the similar sounds are being represented by the previous two circles. Also add a note to 00:28:178 -, 00:35:450 - for the same reason.
4. 00:55:678 - Because of the snapping of the next slider and the rhythm of 00:54:769 (1,2) - , it feels like there's missing a beat here. Add a circle, and stack it to the next slider.
5. 01:28:859 (5,6) - Symmetry-wise, I would rather see something like this, as it will make the spacing more even:
   
   Example

   
6. 01:33:632 - Same thing as mentioned previously.
7. 01:34:996 (2) - Try to make this slider a little more straight with the previous flow. I feel like it isn't having the same angle.
8. 01:54:769 (1) - Having three reverses arrow might be a little too much, also considering that the vocals on 01:54:769 - is more present. Delete one reverse arrow and create a 1/2 slider to follow the vocals.
9. 02:25:223 - Maybe this slider could have a finish hitsound, just like 02:24:769 (4) - ? That could match pretty well.

1. 00:03:859 (1,2,3,1,2) - Make these objects' emplacement similar as the previous section and the two nexts. It makes it weird to not have a consistent back-and-forth movement.
2. 00:23:405 (1) - Ðelete this new combo, it breaks the consistency. (Even thought I believe it was put there because the spacing is slightly different.. that's not really an issue c:)
3. 00:26:814 - Delete the whistle on the head of this slider, and add whistles to 00:26:359 (3,5) - as they will be following the back sounds.
4. 00:33:859 (3) - 00:55:450 (4) - Delete the whistle on the end of these slider, it is not needed, and there's currently too many whistles.
5. 01:45:109 - You can easily add a note here or do something similar as 01:48:405 (3,4) - .
6. 03:24:769 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This spam of 1s is totally not necessary. The stream itself doesn't show much variety, while the sliders are making jumps. I would totally understand the reason to make 1s for the sliders, but not the stream. Delete all the new combos on the stream.

Krfawy wrote:

02:23:178 (3,4) - Whoever mapped that (I guess it is mapped by Blue Dragon aka Mismagius, isn't it?), could you please simplify this moment by removing the note number 3 or both of them? Now it might be even harder to be played than it is in Insane and I don't think it should be mapped harder in the highest difficulty than it is right now, not to mention that the players might be really startled with the density of the current pattern when compared to the rest of the map. idk, this is the simplest i can do without plain ignoring the 1/4 rhythm there which is pretty important to me. adding a 3-repeat slider would work but im not a big fan of those in lower diffs lol

Gabe wrote:

Here I am! Hi!

You can disable letterboxes during break time o3o I very like letterbox in during break time. o3o

Easy

1. 01:45:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - Whistles seems inconsistent here, as they are placed more often than the previous objects. Try to keep whistles on upbeats instead. I highlight how here screm she, think I works here. D:
2. 01:51:132 (3) - Just like the previous slider, reverse the whistle to make it on the head instead, and add a whistle on 01:52:496 (4) - . Fixed.
3. 02:11:132 (1) - In this section with spinners only, it might get a little too overwhelming for this difficulty, since you're pulling out 4 spinners in a row. I'd recommend using sliders instead. You can easily make something simple, fun and more relaxing. Fixed.
4. 02:56:586 (1) - You can delete the new combo on this one, since there's none on 00:00:223 (1,2) - I want keep NC as in set whole, and less HP losing with NC and similar to beginning combos.
5. 03:08:405 (2,3) - If you want to do overlaps like these sliders, you have to take into consideration the flow, which in this case, is not represented greatly. Instead, you could make the first wave of the slider (3) to go down, so you can do something like this: Fixed
   
   Example

   

Hard Collab

1. 00:01:587 (3,4) - In the first section, it is the only time these objects are not being stacked. You might wanna make it consistent as well. Fixed
2. 00:16:359 (6,1) - You should be following the vocals here. The long note should be placed where the circle (6) is, so reverse both of these objects. Think I sound weird to vocals more... I very like my version more sorry. ;w;
3. 00:20:905 - A note could be added here, as the similar sounds are being represented by the previous two circles. Also add a note to 00:28:178 -, 00:35:450 - for the same reason. That very hard for hard diff and very dance, too dance and hard me for. This too for 01:33:632
4. 01:28:859 (5,6) - Symmetry-wise, I would rather see something like this, as it will make the spacing more even: Fixed.
   
   Example

   
5. 01:34:996 (2) - Try to make this slider a little more straight with the previous flow. I feel like it isn't having the same angle. Fixed.
6. 01:54:769 (1) - Having three reverses arrow might be a little too much, also considering that the vocals on 01:54:769 - is more present. Delete one reverse arrow and create a 1/2 slider to follow the vocals. Krfawy like this pattern very much and say nice it play hard for, think I should be good. xD
7. 02:25:223 - Maybe this slider could have a finish hitsound, just like 02:24:769 (4) - ? That could match pretty well. Well finish before always here and in insane, very consistent is as now.

Insane Collab
While I understand this is a collab, I believe there could be an issue with the first kiai with the other two kiais, because it is the only one that has barely no jumps and has less wider spacings. It would be way better if it was harmonized with the other two kiais. Think I this isn't bad, maybe 01:10:905 (2) - can CTRL+H but the first kiak good for first kiai, think I.

1. 00:03:859 (1,2,3,1,2) - Make these objects' emplacement similar as the previous section and the two nexts. It makes it weird to not have a consistent back-and-forth movement. Fixed
2. 00:23:405 (1) - Ðelete this new combo, it breaks the consistency. (Even thought I believe it was put there because the spacing is slightly different.. that's not really an issue c:) Ackshulley made I NCs for overlaps like them 00:07:496 (1,2,1,2,3) - 01:23:405 (2,1,2) - Can keep it? D:
3. 00:26:814 - Delete the whistle on the head of this slider, and add whistles to 00:26:359 (3,5) - as they will be following the back sounds. Fixed
4. 00:33:859 (3) - 00:55:450 (4) - Delete the whistle on the end of these slider, it is not needed, and there's currently too many whistles. Fixed
5. 03:24:769 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This spam of 1s is totally not necessary. The stream itself doesn't show much variety, while the sliders are making jumps. I would totally understand the reason to make 1s for the sliders, but not the stream. Delete all the new combos on the stream. Stream now two have 1s 03:24:769 (1) - 03:25:223 (1) - introduce for spam in sliders and "FEEL GOOOOOOD" sounding, okay should think I now. :3

Fun map c:

1. Current offset is late, after various testing I got 14.755 - Test it out, it should be way better.
2. Add "riffy" into the tags, since Bakari changed name this is necessary.

1. 00:36:132 (4) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack this circle under the previous sliderend, it might be hard to see for new players and they will probably end up missing it. Move it somewhere else and rearrange your pattern.
2. 01:16:132 (5,1) - I highly suggest to not overlap circles and sliders together on the easiest difficulty of the mapset, it might be hard to read for beginners.
3. 01:31:132 (1,2) - Same as above, this one is even worse though because it covers most of the sliderbody.
4. 01:34:314 (4) - Once again, please don't place circles under previous sliderends, because they will hardly get noticed by new players.
5. 01:39:769 (3,1,2,3,4) - Way too many circles in a row if you ask me, this might be tiring to play. What about adding a slider in the middle of the pattern or something?
6. 02:56:586 (1) - There shouldn't be a new combo here if you want to be consistent with 00:11:132 (2) -.
7. 03:04:314 (2) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack this with the previous slider, it might be tricky to read for beginners. Move it above instead? You will need to respace your pattern though.
8. 03:09:314 (3) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit. You will also need to rework your pattern there.
9. 03:23:405 (2,3) - Another overlap which I would avoid in the easiest difficulty, but it's not that bad as the others.

1. What about using HP4 to be consistent with the settings of the other difficulties?

1. 00:45:678 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing is clearly inconsistent here, you've used 1.2x in the entire pattern and then we have 00:46:132 (6,7) - which have 1.35x spacing, this is heavily inconsistent compared to the rest of the difficulty and should be fixed.
2. 00:49:769 (7) - This isn't centered properly, I doubt the placement is intentional.
3. 01:54:996 (1) - I feel like this slider is way too soon after spinner. To solve this, I'd end the spinner at 01:54:087 - It will follow the vocals this way and also fix the issue.
4. 02:09:314 - Shouldn't there be a break here as well if you want to be consistent with the rest of the upcoming breaks?
5. 02:37:950 (3) - I think this would work better as a circle rather than a slider. The end of it doesn't follow anything in the music.

1. AR6 feels way too low imo for this difficulty, what about using 7 at least? Would play better.

1. 00:07:496 (1,2,3,4) - I would transform these circles into sliders like you did on the similiar previous parts for consistency.
2. 00:59:314 (3) - This slider sounds weird to me due to the blue tick and also because afterwards 00:59:769 isn't clickable, which makes it even worse imo. What about removing the slider repeat and add a circle at 00:59:769 and 00:59:996? Plays way better imo.
3. 01:06:587 (3) - Same suggestion as above.
4. 01:17:950 (5) - This circle isn't stacked properly yet. To fix this place it at x:348 y:202.
5. 01:54:769 (1) - This slider is quite boring to play due to the many repeats. What about splitting it into 3 sliders instead?
6. 02:22:723 (2) - This slider is completely touching the HP Bar and should be moved down.
7. 02:35:223 (2) - Not sure if the sliderwhistle on the body is intentional.

1. 00:00:223 (1,2,1,2,3) - It's kinda weird to see the new combos on the beginning inconsistent despite the patterns you've used. Comparing this with 00:03:859 (1,2,3,1,2) - 00:07:496 (1,2,1,2,3) - 00:11:132 (1,2,1,2,1) - just doesn't feel right. Can you make them consistent please?
2. 00:56:132 (6,1) - This could be confused to a 1/4 rhythm because it's not stacked. I highly suggest to stack them together in order to avoid this.
3. 01:10:678 (1,2) - Kinda unexpected spacing and rhythm change if you ask me, I'd make them closer in order to make it easier to read at first sight.
4. 01:43:405 (7) - CTRL+G on this slider would give a way better flow.
5. 01:44:769 (3,4,5) - Is there any reason of why this triplet is so largely spaced? It's inconsistent with rest and what makes it worse is that we're in a calm part of the song, so the spacing change is unjustified.
6. 02:08:859 (3,1) - Same as 00:56:132.
7. 02:13:859 (4,5) - Why are they so far away? Make them closer, feels way too large compared to the similiar patterns.
8. 02:17:496 (4,5) - Same as above for this and 02:21:132 (4,5) - this.
9. 02:32:041 (5,6,1) - I disagree with the spacing here because you have 02:32:041 (5,6) - a large spacing here and then 02:32:496 (6,1) - a really close one here right afterwards. Consider moving 02:32:950 (1) - on the left a bit more.
10. 02:52:950 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - Please be consistent with comboing here as well, like suggested on the first part of the map.
11. 03:11:587 (4) - The beginning of this slider is really hard to see due to 03:11:473 (3) - covering it. My suggestion is to stack 03:11:359 (2,3) - these two circles on the slider beginning in order to avoid this.
12. 03:26:700 (1,1) - This jump is kinda huge compared to the others, what about placing 03:27:041 (1) - on the center of the grid? It would flow and play better, while not having a not too huge jump.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Current offset is late, after various testing I got 14.755 - Test it out, it should be way better. Fixed.
2. Add "riffy" into the tags, since Bakari changed name this is necessary. When Bakari go riffy? Fixed. XD

~Easy~

1. 01:39:769 (3,1,2,3,4) - Way too many circles in a row if you ask me, this might be tiring to play. What about adding a slider in the middle of the pattern or something? Fixed.
2. 02:56:586 (1) - There shouldn't be a new combo here if you want to be consistent with 00:11:132 (2) -. I want new becouse they gap vocal no instrument, important to keep this as too whole set in.
3. 03:09:314 (3) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit. You will also need to rework your pattern there. Fixed.
4. Overlaps hard not for noobs and beginner. I noob am too and good to play, too Krfawy and fluffypony666 sayed ok too she had harder more easies seen.

~Mk's Normal~

1. What about using HP4 to be consistent with the settings of the other difficulties? 2 > 3.5 > 5 > 6.5 = Difficulti evry go 1.5 more. Very consistent!

1. 00:45:678 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing is clearly inconsistent here, you've used 1.2x in the entire pattern and then we have 00:46:132 (6,7) - which have 1.35x spacing, this is heavily inconsistent compared to the rest of the difficulty and should be fixed. Fixed.
2. 00:49:769 (7) - This isn't centered properly, I doubt the placement is intentional. Fixed.
3. 01:54:996 (1) - I feel like this slider is way too soon after spinner. To solve this, I'd end the spinner at 01:54:087 - It will follow the vocals this way and also fix the issue. Fixed.
4. 02:09:314 - Shouldn't there be a break here as well if you want to be consistent with the rest of the upcoming breaks? This.
5. 02:37:950 (3) - I think this would work better as a circle rather than a slider. The end of it doesn't follow anything in the music. Fixed.

~Collab Hard~

1. AR6 feels way too low imo for this difficulty, what about using 7 at least? Would play better. Very easy play 6. 7 High too me for.

1. 00:07:496 (1,2,3,4) - I would transform these circles into sliders like you did on the similiar previous parts for consistency. Think I this nice change here, I want this keep very. :<
2. 00:59:314 (3) - This slider sounds weird to me due to the blue tick and also because afterwards 00:59:769 isn't clickable, which makes it even worse imo. What about removing the slider repeat and add a circle at 00:59:769 and 00:59:996? Plays way better imo. Hm me for hitsound tick theres so good. And too hard begin for song, first kiai so good for me think I. D:
3. 01:17:950 (5) - This circle isn't stacked properly yet. To fix this place it at x:348 y:202. Fixed.
4. 01:54:769 (1) - This slider is quite boring to play due to the many repeats. What about splitting it into 3 sliders instead? Krfawy sayed me write word his own: "Uhm, if I make this work as some separate notes, I don't think it is going to be as nice as it is right now. Surely, the very slider is quite long yet it isn't harming anyone with these reverses and it still forces people to pay attention on how the song works + it's a little break from clicking but we still have to hold the pressure on the very clicking button. It should be fine as it is. :3".
5. 02:22:723 (2) - This slider is completely touching the HP Bar and should be moved down. I call Blue Dragon
6. 02:35:223 (2) - Not sure if the sliderwhistle on the body is intentional. And too Blue Dragon call.

~Collab Insane~

1. 00:00:223 (1,2,1,2,3) - It's kinda weird to see the new combos on the beginning inconsistent despite the patterns you've used. Comparing this with 00:03:859 (1,2,3,1,2) - 00:07:496 (1,2,1,2,3) - 00:11:132 (1,2,1,2,1) - just doesn't feel right. Can you make them consistent please? Always put I combo news while overlap paternes becouse easir reed to, me for. Think I good is.
2. 00:56:132 (6,1) - This could be confused to a 1/4 rhythm because it's not stacked. I highly suggest to stack them together in order to avoid this. Think I it veri easy follow now. xD Cosmolade death not und changed.
3. 01:10:678 (1,2) - Kinda unexpected spacing and rhythm change if you ask me, I'd make them closer in order to make it easier to read at first sight. Ym... I noob and easy folow to me for. I can keep pleas? :<
4. 01:43:405 (7) - CTRL+G on this slider would give a way better flow. Fixed.
5. 01:44:769 (3,4,5) - Is there any reason of why this triplet is so largely spaced? It's inconsistent with rest and what makes it worse is that we're in a calm part of the song, so the spacing change is unjustified. Fixed.
6. 02:08:859 (3,1) - Same as 00:56:132. Easy reed too too! Changed becouse Cosmolade changed so I too.
7. 02:13:859 (4,5) - Why are they so far away? Make them closer, feels way too large compared to the similiar patterns. Call I EncoreW.
8. 02:17:496 (4,5) - Same as above for this and 02:21:132 (4,5) - this. Too EncoreW
9. 02:32:041 (5,6,1) - I disagree with the spacing here because you have 02:32:041 (5,6) - a large spacing here and then 02:32:496 (6,1) - a really close one here right afterwards. Consider moving 02:32:950 (1) - on the left a bit more. And call EncoreW too hier.
10. 02:52:950 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - Please be consistent with comboing here as well, like suggested on the first part of the map. Too again, overlappers easiy read to combos with me for.
11. 03:11:587 (4) - The beginning of this slider is really hard to see due to 03:11:473 (3) - covering it. My suggestion is to stack 03:11:359 (2,3) - these two circles on the slider beginning in order to avoid this. Fixed.
12. 03:26:700 (1,1) - This jump is kinda huge compared to the others, what about placing 03:27:041 (1) - on the center of the grid? It would flow and play better, while not having a not too huge jump. But end song of intens, very work good hier!

Andrea wrote:

~Collab Hard~

1. 02:22:723 (2) - This slider is completely touching the HP Bar and should be moved down. i don't change HP overlaps, sorry!
2. 02:35:223 (2) - Not sure if the sliderwhistle on the body is intentional. i guess it isn't, mapset owner can remove that

Irreversible wrote:

N

gurl hey gurl
02:25:678 (1,2,3) - these slider shapes don't look polished.. idk why u need to go for that weird bezier XD (pls check them) Gurl, no one's ever making me change MY bezier curves, gurl. NO ONE! bye gurl!!!
03:24:087 (4) - blanket

good gurl

love,
irre

1. 01:39:755 (3,1,2,3,4) - This is still unchanged, even though you said that you fixed it.

1. 02:21:118 (4,5) - The spacing here didn't get fixed, make it like 02:17:482 (4,5) - this and 02:13:845 (4,5) - this.
2. 03:26:687 (1,1) - I still feel that this jump is way too huge and should be nerfed a bit.

1. 00:22:482 (2) - What about using the same slider shape of 00:35:664 (3) - and 01:33:845 (3) - ? It would make the only overlaps left more consistent.

1. 03:23:051 (2) - This is the only circle which is landing on a blue tick in the entire difficulty, the other blue ticks are all in the sliders. Transform 03:23:051 (2) - this and 03:23:392 (3) - sliderstart into a slider and add a circle at 03:23:845 to fix this.

1. 00:39:755 (4,1,2) - That's kind of overlaps you would try to avoid for this level difficulties, considering low ar this may cause issues in readability.
2. 00:43:846 (1,2) - Move 00:44:073 (2,3,4) a bit away to make spacing visually identical as 00:43:619 (3,1) - I guess that what was indented originally? They are currently not due to stacking.
3. 00:59:301 (3) - Repeat is snapped to nothing in the background and actually misses all the strong beats around. Probably split it or alter someway. // Same for 01:06:573 (3) -
4. 01:22:255 (1) - I guess this is supposed to be 1\2 repeat not 1\4, 1\4 is really lands on nothing here

1. 00:23:619 (3) - If you mapping this rhythms it would be good to stress them with some kind of addition hitsound otherwise this sounds bland with skipped drum\bass line. Soft whistle on the head as variant. // 01:21:801 (4) -
2. 00:31:119 (5) - ^ for repeat
3. 01:05:664 (1,2) - Logically should use same hitsounds on the ends // same 01:09:301 (1,2) - 03:11:119 (1,2) - // and somewhat consistent with 03:07:482 (1,2) - 03:22:028 (1,2) -
4. 01:55:437 (2) - Considering vocals it would be better to finish this on 01:56:118

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General

♢ In the first 15 seconds of the map for all diffs, every object has a whistle hitsound. You should add some more variety to this so the player gets some more active feedback. No other hitsound need, but can I remove whistles some for vartiye, better now.

It would help to do this with these sections too where you just use a lot of whistles in general 01:12:936 - but its less needed since there's still some variation there.



Insane Collab

♢ 00:26:801 (6) - I don't think the slider fits here because there's no strong sound on this sliderhead at 00:26:800 - , try starting the slider on circle 5 maybe? General rytm song of support idea of triple using think I, it quite consistence is as do. Too for this 00:49:300 (1) -

♢ 00:49:300 (1) - This slider is oddly structured with the previous jump section, i think overlapping more fully with 00:48:618 (4) - will make this look nicer visually too Think fixed?

♢ 01:20:892 (3,4,5) - the rhythm density of this pattern doesn't feel like it fits the song, the song is composed of a lot of 1/2 based rhythms but the pattern is made up of 1/4 beats. Simplify this? Triple und slider for guitar und vocal so is okay.

♢ 02:10:437 (5) - This circle doesn't fit with your rhythm concepts at 02:09:528 (1,2,3,4,6) - and everything after 02:11:118 - because it's not on a strong vocal section. Would suggest removing it somehow Fixed Bakari for.

♢ 03:01:346 (7,8,9) - This triple would possibly fit a lot better starting at 03:01:118 - because theres a sound you miss at 03:01:232 - but very little sound at 03:01:459 - .Example of a place where you did this: 03:18:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Fixed.

♢ 03:15:664 - same situation as above Fixed.



Hard Collab

♢ AR is a bit low for the dense parts. I'd recommend 6.7 or 7, or smth in between Dense parts aren't very, AR6 gut even me for und play cannot.

♢ 00:14:755 (1,2,3) - Fixing the AR issue will make these less confusing for Hard players, (too low of an ar makes it look like a triple once you get to the note) but if you dont change the ar, you should remove these kinds of varying overlaps from the map :p They easy predictable, if even AR6. :V

♢ 00:59:301 (3) - While this slider follows the 3/4 rhythm scheme the song also uses, it isnt alligned properly with the beats. The vocal notes happen at 00:59:414 - and 00:59:755 - , just after the slider head and reverse arrow. Starting the slider at 00:58:732 - or 00:59:073 - will allign much better with the melody. That hard, melodicaly harder than insane. No, simplication is now, weird may be, but work is. Now rytm okay.


♢ 01:09:301 (1,2,3) - Using 3 different types of curvature makes the slider arrangement appear unstructured, as an alternative i'd recommend replacing 01:10:209 (3) - with the same slider as 01:09:755 (2) - and flipping it 01:08:846 (6,2,3) - Same slider rotated. Maked I more same look you for!

♢ 01:54:755 (1) - This slider feels like it undermaps the rhythm a lot kind of randomly, you skip some pretty prominent vocal notes and the melody on the pluck. Additionally, you end the slider on a strong note, which I think deserves a lot more emphasis bc its on a downbeat 01:56:573 - . I'd suggest reworking the rhythm here Krfawy sayed it for vocals und simplifectino of song und reversing simply und hard same time at for players, so ok.



Normal Mk

♢ Would recommend lowering the slider tick rate to 1, higher slidre tick rate makes new players more vulnerable to sliderbreaks Easy has 1 tick und prefer I 2 in Normal.

♢ 00:58:392 (1,2) - vs 01:05:664 (1,2) - I wouldn't recommend using this rhythm variation here, since gameplay should be made really simple for the player, so introducing the 3/4 rhtyhm one randomly would hurt them. They're both ok, just choose one :p

♢ 01:54:982 - since this spinner and slider 01:52:710 (1,1,2) - are both mapped to the unique vocal rhythms im surprised you skipped this note, I think it would be fititng to put something here

♢ 02:25:664 (1,2) - 02:32:937 (1,2) - see my first point :p. For this part too 03:00:209 -



Easy

♢ 00:31:118 - Would recommend not skipping this downbeat, they're a key note when counting the beats to the song This und 00:36:573 - simplification I have, must ist, und if maped those clickable, not easy for easy, so keep I them.

♢ 00:54:755 (1) - You should really give beginner players mroe time to spin here. Easy diff guidelines say to avoid spinners less than 4 beats, so ending it here 00:56:573 - would work 1. Guidelines for 180bpm but 132bpm hier, is okay. 2. Und this option not rytmical.

♢ 01:11:118 - Even though this is on a downbeat, it feels unfitting to map to this note because the intense music stops here. Making this whole thing 01:10:664 (2) - a single 2/1 slider would work Fixed.

♢ 01:23:846 (1,2) - The sharp V shapes here dont really fit in with the rest of the aesthetic choices you use in your map. This is a little pickier, but I think using some curves here would solve that Really, I lazy this for...





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