oWingz wrote:

Nice and relaxing map
Star~

Just suggestions
[Easy]
00:52:490 - Remove Spinner for break
02:20:441/02:26:823 - Break time
03:26:823 - Remove Spinner for break

[Normal]
00:31:990 - Remove Slider 3 and Circle 1 //Add Break
03:27:156 - Remove Spinner for break

[Hard]
Hard map is hard

Megurine Luka wrote:

看见V+图就想mod >///<
Nice Skin&BG..

[Easy]
Clap的声音都略重了._.相对起来很多地方感觉finish的音效就足够了._.
比如[00:11:490][1]和[00:14:157][3]试试看只下finish~个人感觉好听很多
因为曲子本身就比较轻柔突然那么重的clap总觉得很破坏._.clap的音量调低了``看看怎么样

很多clap再斟酌下？
不是一定要玩万金油下法的吧>▽<没那能力啊``只能用万金油了``
顺带一提._.最后一个spinner下clap实在太让人难受了Q.Q

[Normal]
音效方面同Easy
00:20:157 [5] 拉的对称一点会比较好&move down
00:32:157 [6] 太直..拉弯点
好多条子都太直了..个人感觉不好看其实偶比较喜欢略弯的``
如果相邻几个一起直就还好..有时候会出现前一个直后一个弯视觉上就不是很好看
00:36:491 [3] ^

完全可以拉成这样..

00:20:157 [5] move down..almost touch the life bar
00:44:824 [3] 拉条有点崩
00:48:824 [1] move down..
01:14:157 [3] 太直
02:06:823 [1] ^
02:19:490 [1] move up
03:52:824 [1,2] move down
03:54:824 [5] 拉条崩，最好拉的和前一个对称的样子这样?
04:15:156 [1] 一样的问题..下clap太难受了Q.Q去掉了

[Hard]
00:42:490 [10] spacing
01:07:157 [3,4]

try this

01:16:490 [4,5,6] spacing可以适当拉大点
01:23:823 [1] move down
02:08:490 [4,6] 拉条略崩
02:18:157 [4,5,6] 同第三条
02:29:823 [5] move down
03:09:823 [6,7,8]

try this

03:13:823 [2,3,4,5] 同第三条感觉没以前好看了..
03:43:156 [5,8] new combo
03:51:157 [6] move up



anyway, star☆

Lan wings wrote:

全部搞定``省略的已经全部修改

LKs wrote:

general

我比较喜欢把BG图片叫做"BG"
..................歌曲文件叫做它的英文名等找到whistle的音效后再改了一起full
有两个osb文件 删掉其中明显是歌曲改名之前的那个
sliderball给人的感觉略小找菲姐<_<

Easy

AR不用这么低。。2或3比较好AR还是OD``AR本来就是2``于是我把OD也跟AR弄一样算了
[02:08:156] slider形状不好OK
[03:13:490] 这两个slider形状都要重塑OK
[03:24:823] 这个复制(ctrl+c)之前的slider6粘贴(ctrl+v)到这里 再弄一个垂直翻折效果(ctrl+j)你确定?``那样slider开始方向就反了..
[04:07:490] 形状OK
[04:10:156]^OK
主要是一些slider的形状不够圆滑 另外s-whistle这个音效不太适合这首歌求找一个whistle的音效

Normal

同理ar上升2~3个我觉得现在的AR还可以啊``
其实吧..如果没有easy你这个难度就可以当easy了

Hard

[02:53:490] 诸如此类的slider形状要注意OK

整体来说不错

1. "of" is rather generic as a tag (it might make this map come up when seaching something completely unrelated), so I think it's better to remove it.
2. I don't think sherrie__fay is needed as tag either since they didn't make a diff ?
3. Remove the unnecessary transparency (on the sides) on the default-comma and default-dot pictures. As of now they exceed the maximum allowed size for skin elements.
4. Remove the unnecessary transparency on scorebar-colour.png, which is bigger than the maximum allowed.
5. For the elements you skin out, use a 1x1 transparent pixel. With your current pictures, osu! draws the transparent pictures anyway, which is a waste of resources.
6. Crop the spinner background to 1023x692 cutting the bottom. The current resolution makes the background look bad in-game: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/123256
7. There are two osb files. Delete the useless one.
8. Your mp3 bitrate is below 128 kbps. It'd be better to find a new one.

1. What's the point of using tick rate 2 if you silence the ticks ? Use tick rate 1.
2. I think you should make it a bit harder, for difficulty spread purposes. The gap between Easy and Normal is quite big.

1. The preview point is different from the other diffs'. They must be all the exact same.
2. I don't really like the slowdowns, because they were quite unexpected and might throw off new players.
3. 00:15:156 (7,8,1) - Due to stacking, this stack looks rather bad in-game. Unstack ?
4. 03:47:490 (1,2,3) - Same.

• Seems fine.

Odaril wrote:

As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. "of" is rather generic as a tag (it might make this map come up when seaching something completely unrelated), so I think it's better to remove it.fixed
2. I don't think sherrie__fay is needed as tag either since they didn't make a diff ?fixed
3. Remove the unnecessary transparency (on the sides) on the default-comma and default-dot pictures. As of now they exceed the maximum allowed size for skin elements.fixed
4. Remove the unnecessary transparency on scorebar-colour.png, which is bigger than the maximum allowed.fixed
5. For the elements you skin out, use a 1x1 transparent pixel. With your current pictures, osu! draws the transparent pictures anyway, which is a waste of resources.fixed
6. Crop the spinner background to 1023x692 cutting the bottom. The current resolution makes the background look bad in-game: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/123256fixed
7. There are two osb files. Delete the useless one.fixed
8. Your mp3 bitrate is below 128 kbps. It'd be better to find a new one.fixed

Easy

1. What's the point of using tick rate 2 if you silence the ticks ? Use tick rate 1.fixed
2. I think you should make it a bit harder, for difficulty spread purposes. The gap between Easy and Normal is quite big.
   Easy diff always for noob, don't they? i find a frirnd who rank #180000+ to test this diff and he only got an A..if i increase the difficulty..i think noobs won't get a good result...

Normal

1. The preview point is different from the other diffs'. They must be all the exact same.fixed
2. I don't really like the slowdowns, because they were quite unexpected and might throw off new players.
   DS1.0 will make the slider looks a bit long and ugly,so i changed it to DS0.75.will it do?
3. 00:15:156 (7,8,1) - Due to stacking, this stack looks rather bad in-game. Unstack ?fixed
4. 03:47:490 (1,2,3) - Same.fixed

Hard

• Seems fine.

Here's a new mp3 (found by Hinacle, lowered bitrate by me, cut by Jarby). It's louder than your mp3, so you'll have to make all timing sections use louder volume. The new offset is 1980 (that's +490ms). Remember to resnap all notes and timing sections.

kioukiou wrote:

[Easy]
00:57:980 (1) - 補上new combo (silly bug)fixed
02:47:314 (1) - ^fixed
03:32:647 (1) - ^fixed
[Normal]
00:30:647 (1) - 跟Easy一樣。fixed

Nice map,挑不出什麼重大錯誤

TicClick wrote:

Please, don't give kudosu. My mod is too small for it.

Normal
00:33:981 (2) - move it a little bit closer to circle. Hope you see what I meanfixed
00:46:647 (5) - 1 grid left (lvl 4)fixed
01:23:647 (8,2) - 1 grid down (lvl 4)fixed
01:31:313 (4,6) - 1 grid downfixed
01:32:313 (5) - 1 grid down. Don't forget to move 01:34:313 (7) - toofixed
02:24:647 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/4VFcfixed

Hard
03:27:646 (1,1) - merge these two into oneI'll think it over
03:34:980 (7) - new combo?fixed
03:50:313 (4,5) - 1 grid right (lvl 4)fixed

I won't write that it's awesome map and I want to see it ranked. I just wanna tell you it's one of the most beautiful maps for me.
And I really like this song though I don't like 95% of Vocaloids' songs.

TicClick wrote:

Please, don't give kudosu. My mod is too small for it.

Normal
00:33:981 (2) - move it a little bit closer to circle. Hope you see what I mean
00:46:647 (5) - 1 grid left (lvl 4)
01:23:647 (8,2) - 1 grid down (lvl 4)
01:31:313 (4,6) - 1 grid down
01:32:313 (5) - 1 grid down. Don't forget to move 01:34:313 (7) - too
02:24:647 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/4VFc

Hard
03:27:646 (1,1) - merge these two into one
03:34:980 (7) - new combo?
03:50:313 (4,5) - 1 grid right (lvl 4)


I won't write that it's awesome map and I want to see it ranked. I just wanna tell you it's one of the most beautiful maps for me.
And I really like this song though I don't like 95% of Vocaloids' songs.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my Mod; sorry it took so long

Blue = Suggestion Red = Fix this


Such a lovely Skin and SB~

[Easy]

Nothing to see here.


[Normal]

00:57:980 (3,4) - You should move 3 and 4 up a little like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140803fixed
01:20:314 (4) - Move this out a little so it's not under (3); same with (5). It may look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140806fixed
02:31:314 (5) - Please space out like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140808 You'll need to fix up (6) thoughfixed

Nothing else that I can see here.

[Hard]

00:39:980 (4) - Don't place a sliderstart under another slider please.fixed
02:29:313 (3) - Please move this out from under (2)fixed
03:27:646 (1,1,1) - Two spinners is generally the upper limit when it comes to spinner combos. I suggest removing maybe the first one, mapping the extra space, then leaving the other two.fixed


Pretty good, too.


All in all, this is a pretty awesome map. The SB and Skin complement it brilliantly. Fix these things up and I'd probably be looking to bubble this.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

After Fixing a few minor things, I can see this being ranked fairly quickly.

Bubbled

1. files with name default-0, default-1 , etc - it's a numbers on your notes/sliders.
   But you have default-percent and default-x. This files are totally useless. Remove them.
   
2. Also i downloaded useless Thumbs.db file in SB folder. It's a hidden system file, maybe you didn't see it. Remove it too, if you can.
   
   
3. Set slidertick 2 in Easy for consistency

Aleks719 wrote:

Some stuff

1. files with name default-0, default-1 , etc - it's a numbers on your notes/sliders.
   But you have default-percent and default-x. This files are totally useless. Remove them.fixed
   
2. Also i downloaded useless Thumbs.db file in SB folder. It's a hidden system file, maybe you didn't see it. Remove it too, if you can.O.O can't del
   
   
3. Set slidertick 2 in Easy for consistency

fixed

Fix it please and ask Azure for bubble repairing~
So, bubbled map is not need in stars
Good luck with ranking~

When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file).

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

There's one thing that bugs me, so I'm asking you for a confirm first.

You completely muted the sliderticks in some parts, but i honestly believe that they will sound great, especially in Easy where they really add a lot more rhythm to the flow (mostly in the 2/1 sliders).
I agree that the default sound may not seem the best one, but it may feel nice just by lowering its volume a bit.
Try this and you'll get what i mean:
[attachment=0:3fb41]soft-slidertick2.zip[/attachment:3fb41]

I lowered the volume so while playing it's really soft, and really adds a lot in my opinion.

Let me know what you want to do (forum PM or game PM are ok).

Then, please check these since you're at it:
[Normal] I'd set HP Drain to 4 (currently it's 5), feels more balanced that way.
[Normal] 00:28:313 (4) - remove this, it makes the spinner a bit more predictable and feels good overall.
[Normal]02:32:646 (6) - actually it looks better if you move it a bit to the left (one square grid 4), it matches the other stacks better.

I really like this map, it's a great job for a first map and a good map overall

My1 wrote:

you should set a sliderbordercolor (the gold of my skin for example lets of look bad...

My1 wrote:

I always play easy and the slidertick doesnt seem to have changed...
and osu says ist is the newest version...

HellDawn wrote:

Why u didn't add sherrie__fay to tag. He made sb *-*

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Great, sliderborder added.

Since everything else is fine and what i pointed out were really small things, here you go /o/
Grats for your first ranked map.

My1 wrote:

I always play easy and the slidertick doesnt seem to have changed...
and osu says ist is the newest version...

You need to fully redownload the .osz.
Also, the hitsound's volume is quite low, it's just barely noticeable but it makes a great difference, trust me.

My1 wrote:

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

You need to fully redownload the .osz.
Also, the hitsound's volume is quite low, it's just barely noticeable but it makes a great difference, trust me.

why that???

My1 wrote:

and what is WIP

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Oooooh, let me add her to the online tags then.

Sorry about that