Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my Mod; sorry it took so long

Blue = Suggestion Red = Fix this


Such a lovely Skin and SB~

[Easy]

Nothing to see here.


[Normal]

00:57:980 (3,4) - You should move 3 and 4 up a little like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140803fixed
01:20:314 (4) - Move this out a little so it's not under (3); same with (5). It may look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140806fixed
02:31:314 (5) - Please space out like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140808 You'll need to fix up (6) thoughfixed

Nothing else that I can see here.

[Hard]

00:39:980 (4) - Don't place a sliderstart under another slider please.fixed
02:29:313 (3) - Please move this out from under (2)fixed
03:27:646 (1,1,1) - Two spinners is generally the upper limit when it comes to spinner combos. I suggest removing maybe the first one, mapping the extra space, then leaving the other two.fixed


Pretty good, too.


All in all, this is a pretty awesome map. The SB and Skin complement it brilliantly. Fix these things up and I'd probably be looking to bubble this.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

After Fixing a few minor things, I can see this being ranked fairly quickly.

Bubbled

1. files with name default-0, default-1 , etc - it's a numbers on your notes/sliders.
   But you have default-percent and default-x. This files are totally useless. Remove them.
   
2. Also i downloaded useless Thumbs.db file in SB folder. It's a hidden system file, maybe you didn't see it. Remove it too, if you can.
   
   
3. Set slidertick 2 in Easy for consistency

Aleks719 wrote:

Some stuff

1. files with name default-0, default-1 , etc - it's a numbers on your notes/sliders.
   But you have default-percent and default-x. This files are totally useless. Remove them.fixed
   
2. Also i downloaded useless Thumbs.db file in SB folder. It's a hidden system file, maybe you didn't see it. Remove it too, if you can.O.O can't del
   
   
3. Set slidertick 2 in Easy for consistency

fixed

Fix it please and ask Azure for bubble repairing~
So, bubbled map is not need in stars
Good luck with ranking~

When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file).

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

There's one thing that bugs me, so I'm asking you for a confirm first.

You completely muted the sliderticks in some parts, but i honestly believe that they will sound great, especially in Easy where they really add a lot more rhythm to the flow (mostly in the 2/1 sliders).
I agree that the default sound may not seem the best one, but it may feel nice just by lowering its volume a bit.
Try this and you'll get what i mean:
[attachment=0:3fb41]soft-slidertick2.zip[/attachment:3fb41]

I lowered the volume so while playing it's really soft, and really adds a lot in my opinion.

Let me know what you want to do (forum PM or game PM are ok).

Then, please check these since you're at it:
[Normal] I'd set HP Drain to 4 (currently it's 5), feels more balanced that way.
[Normal] 00:28:313 (4) - remove this, it makes the spinner a bit more predictable and feels good overall.
[Normal]02:32:646 (6) - actually it looks better if you move it a bit to the left (one square grid 4), it matches the other stacks better.

I really like this map, it's a great job for a first map and a good map overall

My1 wrote:

you should set a sliderbordercolor (the gold of my skin for example lets of look bad...

My1 wrote:

I always play easy and the slidertick doesnt seem to have changed...
and osu says ist is the newest version...

HellDawn wrote:

Why u didn't add sherrie__fay to tag. He made sb *-*

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Great, sliderborder added.

Since everything else is fine and what i pointed out were really small things, here you go /o/
Grats for your first ranked map.

My1 wrote:

I always play easy and the slidertick doesnt seem to have changed...
and osu says ist is the newest version...

You need to fully redownload the .osz.
Also, the hitsound's volume is quite low, it's just barely noticeable but it makes a great difference, trust me.

My1 wrote:

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

You need to fully redownload the .osz.
Also, the hitsound's volume is quite low, it's just barely noticeable but it makes a great difference, trust me.

why that???

My1 wrote:

and what is WIP

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Oooooh, let me add her to the online tags then.

Sorry about that