Colin Hou wrote:

黑喂狗！

Garven wrote:

Did some IRC modding.

SPOILER

13:55 <Garven> : 00:28:692 (1) -
13:56 <Garven> : How about ending it at 00:30:978 - ?
13:56 <Lalarun> : OK!
13:56 <Garven> : Applies to all difficulties
13:58 <Garven> : I am worried about how many 1/2 rhythms there are in this Easy though.
13:58 <Garven> : Especially with 01:16:692 (1,2,3,4) -
13:58 <Garven> : So many in a row
13:58 <Garven> : Maybe delete the 2 and 4
13:59 <Garven> : 01:35:549 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an easy
13:59 <Garven> : 01:37:263 (3,4) - Kind of a tricky rhythm
14:01 <Lalarun> : hm
14:01 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End this at 02:21:978 - to allow for more recovery time
14:02 <Garven> : 02:32:692 (1) - Too soon after spinner
14:03 <Garven> : 02:34:406 (3,4) - Same as earlier
14:03 <Garven> : 02:36:692 (1) - End this at 02:39:978 -
14:04 <Garven> : 02:55:549 (2,2) - eeeh I really don't like these in Easy difficulties
14:04 <Garven> : 03:03:549 (1) - delete
14:06 <Lalarun> : OK!
14:06 <Garven> : 03:10:978 (1) - How about this rhythm here? http://puu.sh/nC0l
14:09 <Lalarun> : OK, thank you!
14:13 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End this at 02:21:978 -
14:13 <Garven> : In [Normal]
14:14 <Lalarun> : change~
14:15 <Garven> : 02:29:263 (4) - remove finish from the end
14:16 <Lalarun> : wow
14:16 <Lalarun> : thank you XD
14:16 <Garven> : 03:03:549 (1) - add new combo
14:17 <Lalarun> : 03:04:121 (2) - remove
14:17 <Lalarun> : ?
14:18 <Garven> : no, leave it
14:18 <Garven> : Only add on 1
14:18 <Lalarun> : OK
14:19 <Garven> : btw
14:19 <Garven> : Tick rate 2 sounds much better~
14:20 <Lalarun> : OK!
14:22 <Garven> : In hard
14:22 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End at 02:21:978 -
14:26 <Garven> : Ijou Nasi: 02:19:549 (1,2,1,2) - hidoi ;_;
14:27 <Garven> : 02:20:763 (1) - end at 02:21:978 -
14:28 <Lalarun> : hm
14:30 <Lalarun> : bad spacing?
14:31 <Garven> : I kept slide rbreaking.
14:31 <Garven> : 100's
14:35 <Lalarun> : wow XD
14:35 <Garven> : I have a suggestion for your storyboard too
14:36 <Garven> : Right now you have strobes going every two beats
14:36 <Garven> : I think if you have strobes during strong parts of the song, it would fit much better
14:37 <Garven> : So strobe at 02:41:264 - then 02:42:264 -
14:37 <Garven> : And follow that pattern
14:38 <Garven> : Follow that until 02:59:549 -
14:38 <Garven> : You can do a long long strobe here
14:38 <Garven> : and at 03:01:835 - and 03:04:121 -
14:39 <Lalarun> : hm,
14:39 <Lalarun> : Sorry
14:40 <Lalarun> : I can't SB
14:40 <Garven> : Who made this SB?
14:41 <Garven> : Because right now the strobe feels off-time
14:41 <Garven> : The strong rhythmica emphasis doesn't like every two beats during this part

14:33 <Garven> : 02:11:549 (1) - Hrm, feels weird. Might be better having it like this: http://puu.sh/nCg0
14:34 <Garven> : 02:20:692 (1) - end this at 02:21:978 -
14:34 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - end this at 02:20:692 - and start 02:20:692 (1) - at 02:20:835 -
14:36 <val0108> : 02:11:692 (2) - done
14:39 <Garven> : That's all for your diff
14:39 <val0108> : 02:20:692 (1) -
14:39 <val0108> : done
14:39 <val0108> : but,02:19:549 (1) - not change
14:40 <Garven> : Hm, okay

Lalarun wrote:

Garven wrote:

Did some IRC modding.

SPOILER

13:55 <Garven> : 00:28:692 (1) -
13:56 <Garven> : How about ending it at 00:30:978 - ?
13:56 <Lalarun> : OK!
13:56 <Garven> : Applies to all difficulties
13:58 <Garven> : I am worried about how many 1/2 rhythms there are in this Easy though.
13:58 <Garven> : Especially with 01:16:692 (1,2,3,4) -
13:58 <Garven> : So many in a row
13:58 <Garven> : Maybe delete the 2 and 4
13:59 <Garven> : 01:35:549 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an easy
13:59 <Garven> : 01:37:263 (3,4) - Kind of a tricky rhythm
14:01 <Lalarun> : hm
14:01 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End this at 02:21:978 - to allow for more recovery time
14:02 <Garven> : 02:32:692 (1) - Too soon after spinner
14:03 <Garven> : 02:34:406 (3,4) - Same as earlier
14:03 <Garven> : 02:36:692 (1) - End this at 02:39:978 -
14:04 <Garven> : 02:55:549 (2,2) - eeeh I really don't like these in Easy difficulties
14:04 <Garven> : 03:03:549 (1) - delete
14:06 <Lalarun> : OK!
14:06 <Garven> : 03:10:978 (1) - How about this rhythm here? http://puu.sh/nC0l
14:09 <Lalarun> : OK, thank you!
14:13 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End this at 02:21:978 -
14:13 <Garven> : In [Normal]
14:14 <Lalarun> : change~
14:15 <Garven> : 02:29:263 (4) - remove finish from the end
14:16 <Lalarun> : wow
14:16 <Lalarun> : thank you XD
14:16 <Garven> : 03:03:549 (1) - add new combo
14:17 <Lalarun> : 03:04:121 (2) - remove
14:17 <Lalarun> : ?
14:18 <Garven> : no, leave it
14:18 <Garven> : Only add on 1
14:18 <Lalarun> : OK
14:19 <Garven> : btw
14:19 <Garven> : Tick rate 2 sounds much better~
14:20 <Lalarun> : OK!
14:22 <Garven> : In hard
14:22 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End at 02:21:978 -
14:26 <Garven> : Ijou Nasi: 02:19:549 (1,2,1,2) - hidoi ;_;
14:27 <Garven> : 02:20:763 (1) - end at 02:21:978 -
14:28 <Lalarun> : hm
14:30 <Lalarun> : bad spacing?
14:31 <Garven> : I kept slide rbreaking.
14:31 <Garven> : 100's
14:35 <Lalarun> : wow XD
14:35 <Garven> : I have a suggestion for your storyboard too
14:36 <Garven> : Right now you have strobes going every two beats
14:36 <Garven> : I think if you have strobes during strong parts of the song, it would fit much better
14:37 <Garven> : So strobe at 02:41:264 - then 02:42:264 -
14:37 <Garven> : And follow that pattern
14:38 <Garven> : Follow that until 02:59:549 -
14:38 <Garven> : You can do a long long strobe here
14:38 <Garven> : and at 03:01:835 - and 03:04:121 -
14:39 <Lalarun> : hm,
14:39 <Lalarun> : Sorry
14:40 <Lalarun> : I can't SB
14:40 <Garven> : Who made this SB?
14:41 <Garven> : Because right now the strobe feels off-time
14:41 <Garven> : The strong rhythmica emphasis doesn't like every two beats during this part

14:33 <Garven> : 02:11:549 (1) - Hrm, feels weird. Might be better having it like this: http://puu.sh/nCg0
14:34 <Garven> : 02:20:692 (1) - end this at 02:21:978 -
14:34 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - end this at 02:20:692 - and start 02:20:692 (1) - at 02:20:835 -
14:36 <val0108> : 02:11:692 (2) - done
14:39 <Garven> : That's all for your diff
14:39 <val0108> : 02:20:692 (1) -
14:39 <val0108> : done
14:39 <val0108> : but,02:19:549 (1) - not change
14:40 <Garven> : Hm, okay

Thx Garven~

Fixed!

Garven wrote:

[All difficulties]
I still think Tick rate 2 would fit this song better. Changed

[Normal, Hard, Ijou Nashi]
00:28:692 (1) - End this at 00:31:978 - OK

[Ijou Ari]
Tick rate is still 0.5. Change to at least 1, but 2 is better~

val0108 wrote:

lららんがOK!しか言ってなくて萌えた。

Garven wrote:

Ack, a few more things, sorry:

[Hard]
01:34:978 (1) - New combo
02:32:120 (1) - New combo

[Normal]
03:03:549 (1) - Remove new combo

[Easy]
01:36:121 (1) - New combo
02:33:263 (1) - New combo
02:41:263 (1) - New combo
03:04:121 (1) - New combo

If someone else asks you to add new combos to the notes at 03:03:549 - in any of your difficulties, refuse them. The way the combo works in this phrase the new combo shouldn't be applied until 03:04:121 -

Garven wrote:

Rebubbled!

Dangaard wrote:

Some few things should be fixed

[Easy]
02:54:406 (2,1) - there is a timing overlap here wow.thanks XD

[Normal]
You should increase HP by 1 and OD by 2　fixed

[Hard]
Increase OD by 1 fixed

[Ijou Nashi]
Increase OD by 1 fixed
00:14:406 (9,10) - sounds like there is missing a beat after these fixed

[Ijou Ari]
Increase OD by 1fixed

Dangaard wrote:

I think you forgot to increase OD in Hard

Colin Hou wrote:

iloveteemobutofcoursenotthisone;w;\\rebubbled

Derekku wrote:

Unfortunately, we'll have to unrank this since there are at least two major issues.

[Ijou Ari]
00:28:692 (1) - Yes, this sounds good, but making crumbled sliders to abuse slider speeds (e.g. hold sliders) has been unrankable for the past year or two.done
00:55:835 (1) - Personally, I'd change this so a 1/4 slider; 1/8 makes this feel like a hold slider as well.I think the sound of here to be 1/8.and no change.I'll ask you
01:39:549 (1) - Second repeat is 100% invisible.done

I haven't looked through the rest of the mapset, but overall it seems pretty solid (good job!). Let's get this re-ranked quickly! (:

Lalarun wrote:

val0108 wrote:

異常ありまくりんぐ。すまんららん

Edit: http://puu.sh/pPss

どんまい！
帰ったらすぐ直す、ありがと！

Derekku wrote:

Unfortunately, we'll have to unrank this since there are at least two major issues.

[Ijou Ari]
00:28:692 (1) - Yes, this sounds good, but making crumbled sliders to abuse slider speeds (e.g. hold sliders) has been unrankable for the past year or two.
00:55:835 (1) - Personally, I'd change this so a 1/4 slider; 1/8 makes this feel like a hold slider as well.
01:39:549 (1) - Second repeat is 100% invisible.

I haven't looked through the rest of the mapset, but overall it seems pretty solid (good job!). Let's get this re-ranked quickly! (:

1. 00:46:692 (2) - Regarding the fact that this difficulty is a Hard, this jump is too big ! I don't mind having a jump here, but this one is too much unexpected. Better like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:03:549 (1,2) - It is hard to recover after a spinner, so if you could do an easier pattern here. (The jump is kinda huge, vertical and it is at the right edge of the screen, this is not really comfortable to play).

1. 00:20:514 (4,5) - Not sure if this 1/8 is a good thing. I mean the song is 210BPM, this is just evil. xD
2. 00:42:835 (4,5) - Hm, this pattern is very confusing. The AR is very high, so you can hardly say which is the slider and which is the circle.
   
   SPOILER

   
   ^ When I see this, I expect (4) to be the slider, but it isn't :/
3. 00:55:621 - Personally, i would add a circle here. :3
4. 02:02:835 (2,3) - Same thing as before here.

Kurai wrote:

Let's see ~

[Hard]

1. 00:46:692 (2) - Regarding the fact that this difficulty is a Hard, this jump is too big ! I don't mind having a jump here, but this one is too much unexpected. Better like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:03:549 (1,2) - It is hard to recover after a spinner, so if you could do an easier pattern here. (The jump is kinda huge, vertical and it is at the right edge of the screen, this is not really comfortable to play).

Kurai wrote:

Let's see ~

[Hard]

1. 00:46:692 (2) - Regarding the fact that this difficulty is a Hard, this jump is too big ! I don't mind having a jump here, but this one is too much unexpected. Better like this : changed
   
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:03:549 (1,2) - It is hard to recover after a spinner, so if you could do an easier pattern here. (The jump is kinda huge, vertical and it is at the right edge of the screen, this is not really comfortable to play). changed

[Ijou Nashi]

1. 00:20:514 (4,5) - Not sure if this 1/8 is a good thing. I mean the song is 210BPM, this is just evil. xD sorry, no change
2. 00:42:835 (4,5) - Hm, this pattern is very confusing. The AR is very high, so you can hardly say which is the slider and which is the circle. changed
   
   SPOILER

   
   ^ When I see this, I expect (4) to be the slider, but it isn't :/
3. 00:55:621 - Personally, i would add a circle here. :3 changed
4. 02:02:835 (2,3) - Same thing as before here. changed

That's a very good mapset, goodjob ~ However I won't rebubble if you don't fix the issues I pointed out, Those need to be changed (expect 00:55:621 and the 1/8 doubles in Ijou Nashi).

Call me back when fixes are done. ~

theowest wrote:

Kurai wrote:

Let's see ~

[Hard]

1. 00:46:692 (2) - Regarding the fact that this difficulty is a Hard, this jump is too big ! I don't mind having a jump here, but this one is too much unexpected. Better like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:03:549 (1,2) - It is hard to recover after a spinner, so if you could do an easier pattern here. (The jump is kinda huge, vertical and it is at the right edge of the screen, this is not really comfortable to play).

oh snap. i guess i'll be losing my SS ;_;

Kurai wrote:

Ok ~ let's rerank this. :3

ziin wrote:

Lunatic princess?

[general]
offset +5　i change to +10
lolcubes was getting +15, and I normally hit early. Any further changes can be made on a per user basis I think, but since both of us were hitting late you should at least do +5, and double check it yourself.
This is the worst overmapping I've seen in a long, long time.

[hard]
00:43:549 (4) - all of my hate. I'm going to vote 1 if this note stays in the map. I can't believe it got ranked once with it here...
00:46:121 (4) - what the hell is going on here. Do I have the right mp3?
02:29:548 (1) - you're killing me

[easy]
00:43:549 (2) - move it 1/1 later and take off a repeat changed

[normal]
00:43:549 (4) - I'm going to point it out on every single difficulty. changed
00:46:121 (3) - This should fit much better. http://puu.sh/pYZa
02:22:978 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the slider end should really be a soft hitsound

[ijou nashi]
this type of overmapping isn't as bad as the stuff found in hard/normal/easy, so I don't feel as strongly about it. Nevertheless I still dislike it.
01:44:121 - nevermind I take that back. I don't expect you to change this, and I don't expect my threat of voting 1 is going to change your mind (it's going to happen unless you make major changes to this difficulty).

Please don't take me telling you I'm going to vote 1 on your map the wrong way. At least I'm telling you the reason (and before it's ranked at that, so you at least have the opportunity to change it), unlike the anonymous voters.