Monstrata wrote:
Let me know if you need help pushing this forward~
Monstrata wrote:
Let me know if you need help pushing this forward~
Manysi wrote:
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looks kinda weird how 00:12:117 (2,3) - is blanketed but 00:12:562 (3,4) - not originally it was blanket'd things were changed here
just a suggestion: you could use 4 circles here instead 00:43:673 (3,4) - so it would make this solo piano part stand out i think i like the pattern now
02:11:673 (1) - what are you guys mapping with this? I cant seem to hear anything :S im mapping the slowly increasing sound?
Hard
01:14:562 (4,5) - maybe stack thease to emphasize the lack of wubs keeping for consistency
02:21:451 (2) - feel like this should be the same as 02:17:895 (2) - for the sake of consistent rhythm keeping as well for rhythm simplification
Insane
00:13:229 (2) - ctrl+g would play better (the spacing is quite big currently 00:12:562 (1,2) - )
00:21:006 (4) - same thing. Would emphasize 00:21:451 (1) - well. keeping this one
I know this is an insane but using the same pattern for a bunch of different things is meh 00:41:006 (3,4,5) - 00:49:006 (5,6,1) - 00:55:229 (2,3,4) - the last one is just overmapped... not introducing that kind of stuff in this kind of insane, im making the spread more linear so thats why i didnt do the technique that you suggested, and the overmapped one seems fine
Here, a couple alternatives that arent above the difficulty level https://puu.sh/unN6y/c6438ae3f2.jpg
01:24:562 (1,2) - this felt underwhelming cuz previously you mapped clicks on much weaker beats then thease. Also, the next one of thease are circles for some reason: 01:38:784 (1,2,3,4) - its for consistency as i previously did 01:10:340 (1,2) -
01:27:229 (4) - nc missing this was intentional
Expert
I dont wanna meddle in this masterpiece.
HabiHolic wrote:
Hi! sorry for late M4M!
[Normal]
00:46:340 (1) - this one is here?
i think i like it curved
[Hard]
00:09:006 (1) - made curve? i dont think hoot will like it curved
02:58:931 (1) - change 1/8? its 1/4 in all diff so im keeping it for diff consistency
[Insane]
02:48:117 (4) - move up please. now is flow is bad imo..
it flows well to me imo due to symmetry
GL! your map so very good :3
Monstrata wrote:
Expert
00:12:117 (3) - Ctrl+G flows better imo. I don't think flowbreak is necessary here yet cuz its a calm section of the map and you dont need to introduce sharp angles yet. someone pointed this out before irc, your point is correct but i feel like keeping the pattern itself because i like my usage of sliders in some section to be different
00:31:006 (4,5) - Kinda odd for the note on 00:31:229 - to be a slider-end. I think people will try to click there because of the sound. The blue tick after seems less important in comparison. i think its more pleasant to play the rhythm like this due to tapping consistency
01:25:895 (1) - Could be more symmetrical in design.
01:34:340 (1,2) - Felt a bit empty here in terms of rhythm. idk how to reply to this but i have to say that i like how it looks right now xd
02:21:006 (3) - This isn't following the same doublet rhythm as the rest of your rhythm choice in this combo. i have to hit that bell sound somehow, ill ask suggestions around
02:37:229 (1) - This is 1/12 snapping, not 1/16
02:48:562 (1,2,3,1) - This arrangement doesn't end up emphasizing blue tick notes like 02:48:895 (3) - that you've emphazied with 02:47:562 - 02:48:229 - i dont quite understand this but i did focus on making the kicks clickable (??)
Insane
00:19:673 (1,2,3) - I don't think this rhythm is necessary. You could just have done a 1/1 slider. The extra click sounds overmapped imo. changed it to 1/2 repeat instead
01:37:895 (1,2) - You could have used a more similar slider design for visual consistency here since they both play into (our out of) 1/4 stream patterns. i think im satisfied with the shape itself as i use the technique frequently
Normal
01:15:229 (2,3,4) - Spacing could be more even here.
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When you're ready!
Replying to the 3 points that I still can't agree on.RyoKazuka wrote:
Monstrata wrote:
Expert
00:31:006 (4,5) - Kinda odd for the note on 00:31:229 - to be a slider-end. I think people will try to click there because of the sound. The blue tick after seems less important in comparison. i think its more pleasant to play the rhythm like this due to tapping consistency
It's not more pleasant xP. the clicking rhythm is 3/4 and theres a clearly stronger note that lands on the white tick.
02:21:006 (3) - This isn't following the same doublet rhythm as the rest of your rhythm choice in this combo. i have to hit that bell sound somehow, ill ask suggestions around
Use a rhythm like this then, unless you actually got opinions for this point since you said you'll ask for suggestions around.
02:48:562 (1,2,3,1) - This arrangement doesn't end up emphasizing blue tick notes like 02:48:895 (3) - that you've emphazied with 02:47:562 - 02:48:229 - i dont quite understand this but i did focus on making the kicks clickable (??)
It's clickable but its not emphasized, especially when its the second note in a triplet (which really makes it the weakest imo). Basically think along the lines of removing 02:48:784 (2) - and using a gap instead so you can focus on the blue tick rhythm instead of adding an extra click on the red tick that doesn't follow anything you've been following so far.
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When you're ready!thanks for the mod !
have to wait for hoot to update his
2017-03-19 16:49 RyoKazuka: i wanted to ask you about how to change the pattern
2017-03-19 16:49 RyoKazuka: but you aint on
2017-03-19 16:49 RyoKazuka: and like i said
2017-03-19 16:49 RyoKazuka: IM DESPERATE
2017-03-19 16:49 Exote: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1208035 BilliumMoto - HDHR [Expert]]
2017-03-19 16:49 RyoKazuka: so went on to pm him saying im ready
2017-03-19 16:49 Exote: man
2017-03-19 16:49 RyoKazuka: WHICH IM NOT SO READY TBH
2017-03-19 16:51 RyoKazuka: first point
2017-03-19 16:51 RyoKazuka: It's not more pleasant xP. the clicking rhythm is 3/4 and theres a clearly stronger note that lands on the white tick.
2017-03-19 16:51 Exote: sec
2017-03-19 16:51 Exote: let me
2017-03-19 16:51 Exote: first take a lok
2017-03-19 16:51 Exote: ok
2017-03-19 16:51 Exote: so
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: you're aware why
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: 00:30:895 (3,4,5) -
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: his
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: line here
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: doesn surpsie me at all
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: what he wants u to do is
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: 00:31:229 - make this here clickable
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: cuz the sound is
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: STRONG
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: yes, its consistent now
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: and yes, its more pleasent
2017-03-19 16:52 Exote: but u lose alot of power
2017-03-19 16:53 RyoKazuka: N I N J A
2017-03-19 16:53 RyoKazuka: ok
2017-03-19 16:53 RyoKazuka: i think
2017-03-19 16:53 RyoKazuka: i understand now
2017-03-19 16:53 Exote: yea
2017-03-19 16:53 Exote: emphasis stuff
2017-03-19 16:53 Exote: if the sound is MUCH Stronger than the rest of this area
2017-03-19 16:53 Exote: then u must make it clickable
2017-03-19 16:53 Exote: well not must, but it's recommended u do so
2017-03-19 16:53 Exote: so it makes sense
2017-03-19 16:54 RyoKazuka: i tend to make the map looked more mbc winner material
2017-03-19 16:54 Exote: i c
2017-03-19 16:54 RyoKazuka: but if the suggestion is a mbc winner material
2017-03-19 16:54 RyoKazuka: then
2017-03-19 16:54 RyoKazuka: ok
2017-03-19 16:54 Exote: anyway
2017-03-19 16:54 RyoKazuka: wait fixing
2017-03-19 16:54 Exote: http://puu.sh/uQ5Mq/aaa52e5c15.jpg
2017-03-19 16:54 Exote: there
2017-03-19 16:54 Exote: u have it
2017-03-19 16:54 Exote: easy fix
2017-03-19 16:54 RyoKazuka: ill adjust it to be more
2017-03-19 16:54 RyoKazuka: comfortable to play
2017-03-19 16:54 Exote: sure
2017-03-19 16:54 RyoKazuka: i dont like that patterning
2017-03-19 16:54 Exote: ill look at the 2nd part
2017-03-19 16:55 Exote: line
2017-03-19 16:55 Exote: *
2017-03-19 16:55 RyoKazuka: sure
2017-03-19 16:55 RyoKazuka: ay
2017-03-19 16:56 Exote: 02:20:895 (2,3,4) -
2017-03-19 16:56 Exote: im giving u
2017-03-19 16:56 Exote: the easy fix as well
2017-03-19 16:56 Exote: and the best imo
2017-03-19 16:56 Exote: http://puu.sh/uQ5Uz/fae134d072.jpg
2017-03-19 16:56 Exote: thats literally bomb
2017-03-19 16:56 Exote: must use imo
2017-03-19 16:58 RyoKazuka: okok wait
2017-03-19 16:59 Exote: ugh
2017-03-19 16:59 Exote: the third point
2017-03-19 16:59 Exote: he alreasdy told u how to fix
2017-03-19 16:59 Exote: idk why didnt u do so xd
2017-03-19 17:00 Exote: tell me when you're ready
2017-03-19 17:00 Exote: so we can discuss it real quick
2017-03-19 17:00 RyoKazuka: ok i fixd it
2017-03-19 17:00 Exote: ok so
2017-03-19 17:00 RyoKazuka: do you wanna see
2017-03-19 17:00 Exote: wait
2017-03-19 17:00 Exote: whab tou the third point?
2017-03-19 17:00 RyoKazuka: first point so far
2017-03-19 17:00 Exote: yea yea
2017-03-19 17:00 RyoKazuka: lemme see second point
2017-03-19 17:00 Exote: lets fix all of those
2017-03-19 17:00 Exote: and then
2017-03-19 17:00 Exote: im here dw
2017-03-19 17:01 RyoKazuka: holy
2017-03-19 17:02 RyoKazuka: your seuggestion is
2017-03-19 17:02 RyoKazuka: DA BOMB
2017-03-19 17:02 Exote: YASSSS
2017-03-19 17:02 RyoKazuka: this plays better tbh
2017-03-19 17:02 Exote: yep
2017-03-19 17:02 RyoKazuka: damn son
2017-03-19 17:02 Exote: reminds me of skystar
2017-03-19 17:02 Exote: that kind of pattern
2017-03-19 17:02 Exote: so its a win win
2017-03-19 17:02 Exote: ;6)
2017-03-19 17:02 Exote: brbbbbb why u fix
2017-03-19 17:04 RyoKazuka: :^))))))))))))
2017-03-19 17:04 RyoKazuka: fixd seconf
2017-03-19 17:04 RyoKazuka: third
2017-03-19 17:04 RyoKazuka: now
2017-03-19 17:04 RyoKazuka: ok third
2017-03-19 17:04 RyoKazuka: point
2017-03-19 17:05 RyoKazuka: i really dont understand
2017-03-19 17:05 RyoKazuka: english iz badz sorry for my badz englizh
2017-03-19 17:06 Exote: ok
2017-03-19 17:06 Exote: so
2017-03-19 17:06 Exote: i didnt explain yet
2017-03-19 17:06 Exote: the third one
2017-03-19 17:06 RyoKazuka: like
2017-03-19 17:06 Exote: 02:48:895 (3) -
2017-03-19 17:06 Exote: tehres a snare
2017-03-19 17:06 RyoKazuka: wat does he wants me to emphasize
2017-03-19 17:07 RyoKazuka: theres the
2017-03-19 17:07 RyoKazuka: whistle sound
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: and u want to emphize
2017-03-19 17:07 RyoKazuka: and kick + finish sound
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: in the song
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: thers a snare
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: not in ur map
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: so
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: the thing is
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: 02:48:784 (2) -
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: beacuse u have this
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: here
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: it kinda underpowers the next strong sound
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: and it is as if you[re not emphasizing anything
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: get it?
2017-03-19 17:07 RyoKazuka: you want me to space it?
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: no
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: remove 2
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: 02:48:784 (2) -
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: because of 2
2017-03-19 17:07 Exote: 3 loses its power
2017-03-19 17:08 Exote: plays like a regular stream
2017-03-19 17:08 RyoKazuka: but then
2017-03-19 17:08 RyoKazuka: the momentum will be weird
2017-03-19 17:08 RyoKazuka: having to stop 02:48:784 (2) - here for a while
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: 02:47:229 (1,2) -
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: ?
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: u have the same thing here
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: slider 1
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: u stop
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: and then 2
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: he wants u to do the same thing
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: kickslider
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: stop
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: and then blue tick
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: meaning u have to remove 2
2017-03-19 17:09 Exote: it plays fine dw
2017-03-19 17:10 RyoKazuka: oooooooooooooooooooooo
2017-03-19 17:10 RyoKazuka: okokokok
2017-03-19 17:10 RyoKazuka: now i get it
2017-03-19 17:10 Exote: ;)
2017-03-19 17:11 RyoKazuka: his explanation is so high level im getting left out lol
2017-03-19 17:11 RyoKazuka: okok
2017-03-19 17:11 Exote: eeh
2017-03-19 17:11 Exote: maybe
2017-03-19 17:11 RyoKazuka: its like
2017-03-19 17:11 RyoKazuka: ' what does he wants actually ' lmao
2017-03-19 17:12 RyoKazuka: i think im the at the dumb side
2017-03-19 17:12 Exote: XD
2017-03-19 17:12 Exote: well
2017-03-19 17:12 Exote: ur gettin the map ranked anyway
2017-03-19 17:12 Exote: u must be used to it
2017-03-19 17:12 RyoKazuka: o
2017-03-19 17:12 RyoKazuka: ok
2017-03-19 17:12 RyoKazuka: now i know why i map like this
2017-03-19 17:12 RyoKazuka: 02:48:562 (1,2,3,1) -
2017-03-19 17:12 Exote: ye[p
2017-03-19 17:12 RyoKazuka: 02:48:784 (2) - here that sound here
2017-03-19 17:12 RyoKazuka: at the very beginning
2017-03-19 17:12 RyoKazuka: i map every sound
2017-03-19 17:13 RyoKazuka: i mean
2017-03-19 17:13 Exote: yeaa
2017-03-19 17:13 RyoKazuka: this section
2017-03-19 17:13 RyoKazuka: including the
2017-03-19 17:13 RyoKazuka: 02:33:229 (2,3) - the weird hi hats
2017-03-19 17:13 Exote: its not bad to map anything u hear
2017-03-19 17:14 Exote: as long as u emphasize the right stuff
only me can call him monstra. thanks /jkRyoKazuka wrote:
ay thanks monstra xd
https://www.reddit.com/r/osugame/commen ... e_changes/Gaia wrote:
00:50:340 (1) - 01:59:229 (1) - these are rankable? lol wew
congratz