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JonTron - Firework

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-Helium-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freitag, 10. Februar 2017 at 14:54:50

Artist: JonTron
Title: Firework
BPM: 124
Filesize: 22571kb
Play Time: 04:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Firework (3,5 stars, 428 notes)
  2. Hard (3,1 stars, 334 notes)
  3. pacsu's dance (4,28 stars, 467 notes)
Download: JonTron - Firework
Download: JonTron - Firework (no video)
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JonTron music is best music

need modz because im bad mapping

pacsu diff is crazy xD
Heroe
Not bad i guess but there are some misstakes that you should fix.

- Unreadable sliders:
01:16:724 (1) - keep in mind that these kind of sliders are unreadable for new players. They cant know in what direction the slider goes.
01:20:595 (5) -
01:32:208 (4) -
01:36:079 (3) -
02:20:353 (3) -
02:28:337 (3) -
02:34:143 (5) -
02:47:208 (1) -
02:49:627 (5) -
03:36:079 (4) - unreadable and looks bad

- Overmapping:
02:25:918 (8) - this circle is not needed but you have to decide if its good or not.
some more circles but they are not as bad as this circle.



Please dont use such a big distance for other diffs. Dont make unreadable sliders.

And please place the reverse-slider that it goes to the next object for more flow.

Good Job so far.
pacsu
hum ... so lets play your map ...
4 min later
HO MY GOD it s the best map i ever seen

lets mod this

in general
the map is good but , there is 1 point
00:50:111 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - here for example , your map is always in circle , there is no jumps in star like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7246407
so maybe add some star jumps will be cool for your map

lets get to the point now
00:57:853 (11) - add a new combo here
01:10:676 (11) - this look bad https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7246437 do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7246443
01:24:466 (3,4,5) - make theme 4 tics , and no 2 tics , it s sound better , and you can do it for all the time he say HA HA HA
01:36:079 (3) - why ?
for all the stars , just make the perfect star , and copy past it all the time , and use the menu edit , and rotate it
01:54:708 (8) - the " replaaace" there is 3 sounds and your slider do only 2 sounds
01:56:643 (4) - same
02:24:224 (7) - why a "T" he say Shine so make a "S"
same for all the letters , dont put randomely a letter
03:46:240 (4) - xDDD


ok , i hope this will help you
continue like this ;)
Topic Starter
-Helium-

pacsu wrote:

hum ... so lets play your map ...
4 min later
HO MY GOD it s the best map i ever seen becau8se of the best song ever xD

lets mod this

in general
the map is good but , there is 1 point
00:50:111 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - here for example , your map is always in circle , there is no jumps in star like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7246407
so maybe add some star jumps will be cool for your map will se were it fits :D

lets get to the point now
00:57:853 (11) - add a new combo here
01:10:676 (11) - this look bad https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7246437 do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7246443 Fixed
01:24:466 (3,4,5) - make theme 4 tics , and no 2 tics , it s sound better , and you can do it for all the time he say HA HA HA
01:36:079 (3) - why ?
for all the stars , just make the perfect star , and copy past it all the time , and use the menu edit , and rotate it How i said in your mod....i had to fix it ;_; i want a perfect star but i cant ;_;
01:54:708 (8) - the " replaaace" there is 3 sounds and your slider do only 2 sounds Fixed......i think....
01:56:643 (4) - same Fixed......i think....
02:24:224 (7) - why a "T" he say Shine so make a "S"
same for all the letters , dont put randomely a letter The letters are for "Jontron" thecreator of the song and a meme legend xP
03:46:240 (4) - xDDD fixed xD : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7252108


ok , i hope this will help you Helped a much thx
continue like this ;)
pacsu
How i said in your mod....i had to fix it ;_; i want a perfect star but i cant ;_;
YES YOU CAN
01:32:208 (4) - this star in almost perfect https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7253338
you just have to use the grid snap

and do a prefect pentagone
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7253423

after this use symetrie

and the star is done
like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7253445
Topic Starter
-Helium-

pacsu wrote:

How i said in your mod....i had to fix it ;_; i want a perfect star but i cant ;_;
YES YOU CAN
01:32:208 (4) - this star in almost perfect https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7253338
you just have to use the grid snap

and do a prefect pentagone
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7253423

after this use symetrie

and the star is done
like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7253445

YOU'RE THA REAL MVP ;_;
kanor
if you tend to rank, you should make at least another normal
[Hard]
i deeply recommend the distance snap in a hard diff,1.2ds is ok otherwise you should keep the ds in this diff looks similar
00:33:176 (7) - make it repeat to follow the clap at 00:33:660 -
00:39:950 (5,6,7) - they are different ryhthm but with a similar spacing...... try to distinguish them
01:02:934 (3,5) - not good lap
01:54:708 (8) - would miss the vocal
01:56:643 (4) - ^
02:24:224 (7) - its unrankable
02:24:224 (7) - break here doesnt feeling well, try to follow the instrument
interesting sliders

too many random jump at insane.....in my opinion, we can firstly focus on hard
GL :)
JiruPiru
Hello there! Here is your mod from my queue (p/5803850#p5803850)

First of all, why the hell use normal sampleset at the start, EARAPE!!!!11!!1!1!1
Also no hitsounds, are those going to be added or what?

Anyway sorry for sounding a bit rude, but I loved this map, here are some mod stuffs:

Hard
00:55:918 (6) - NC
01:00:998 (1) - Probably better as a drum until 01:47:692
01:54:708 (8) - What is this slider trying to follow?
01:56:643 (4) - ^
02:08:740 (5) - NC
02:11:885 (3) - Sexy

Firework
Just hitsounds really!

I believe to get it more rankable you will need an Easy and/or normal, just sayin'.
Topic Starter
-Helium-

kanor wrote:

if you tend to rank, you should make at least another normal is in work ^^
[Hard]
i deeply recommend the distance snap in a hard diff,1.2ds is ok otherwise you should keep the ds in this diff looks similar
00:33:176 (7) - make it repeat to follow the clap at 00:33:660 - done
00:39:950 (5,6,7) - they are different ryhthm but with a similar spacing...... try to distinguish them will try ^^
01:02:934 (3,5) - not good lap ?
01:54:708 (8) - would miss the vocal fixed
01:56:643 (4) - ^ fixed
02:24:224 (7) - its unrankable Fixed
02:24:224 (7) - break here doesnt feeling well, try to follow the instrument hope its ok like this
interesting sliders

too many random jump at insane.-. ok .....in my opinion, we can firstly focus on hard
GL :)

DilPil111 wrote:

Hello there! Here is your mod from my queue (p/5803850#p5803850)

First of all, why the hell use normal sampleset at the start, EARAPE!!!!11!!1!1!1.-.
Also no hitsounds, are those going to be added or what?yeah .-.

Anyway sorry for sounding a bit rude, but I loved this map thanks .-., here are some mod stuffs:

Hard
00:55:918 (6) - NCfix
01:00:998 (1) - Probably better as a drum until 01:47:692fix
01:54:708 (8) - What is this slider trying to follow?fix
01:56:643 (4) - ^fix
02:08:740 (5) - NCfix
02:11:885 (3) - Sexy ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Firework
Just hitsounds really!

I believe to get it more rankable you will need an Easy and/or normal, just sayin'. is in work ^^
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