Hai!
M4M!
This is not 5 minutes Drain time.
02:53:666 - Please map this break or else it will not surpass 5 minutes drain.General----
I think volume in entire map is a little bit too loud, i cant hear the song's drums, only the taiko drums.
Please change so they are beautifully balanced.
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Map itself---
00:42:166 (181) - And
00:43:499 (186,188) -
What are these red tick kats doing there? The whole section uses kats in a very fitting manner, and this kinda breaks it for no reason :s
Please kats on white ticks so it sounds good
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The whole map uses mostly finishers mapped to pitch.
I think it can be done differently so it shows the song better what instruments are playing,
There is Cymbal sounds and theres other sounds you made a finisher out of:
00:54:999 (242) - Cymbal = D
01:10:999 (343) - Not Cymbal = D???
I think Cymbals should be K finisher, while every other finisher sound should be K
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01:50:999 (643) - Unfinish, i cant hear anything that warrants a finisher.
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01:53:666 (664) - Similarily, you shouldnt leave out finishers like this in any case if you dedicate to them like you did in this map.
Please somehow make this a finisher.
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01:54:999 (671) - Please finish.
02:08:999 (26) - Please finish.
02:31:666 (138) - Please make this a finisher even if you have to remove notes. I think you are leaving out too many finishers when at other times, you map them well and fitting. Sometimes you also map finishers that i can not really hear, so make it somehow intuitively please.
02:40:333 (197) - This is a really sharp cymbal, are you sure to leave it only as don?
Maybe cut off stream and make it a finisher?
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Apart from the finishers, i dont really have much to complain about at the moment.
And you have to get the drain time up.
Good luck with rank!