Jerry wrote:

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Hello~ Here's your mod as requested via forum-PM

• Add these tags:

1. リヴァイスディー - Japanese title of the game
   
2. Paralyzed - people might search for the song without the colon

1. 00:12:159 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - Remap this part with some reference to what you did before at 00:06:826 - and 00:09:493 -. The current pattern here is rather messy and will be very confusing to new players Well ok, added note after finisher to make it more similar

1. 00:26:992 - Move this to 00:26:326 -, it compliments the previous ddk that you set at 00:23:492 - and also flows with the guitars in the music better Ok
   
   
2. 00:31:159 - Move this over to 00:31:492 - to follow the vocals more closely? I like it better the way it is
   
   
3. 00:59:492 - Move this to 00:59:326 - and then change it to a don? It matches the flow of the music better imo Yeah, it is

1. 00:26:826 - This gap here ruins the flow for this part imo, I'd suggest adding a note here to follow the drums in the music Ok
   
   
2. 00:37:326 - Change this to a don, it accompanies the lowering of the vocal's pitch better Ok
   
   
3. 00:45:492 - Don for this? Creates a consistent d d rhythm with the one before at 00:44:159 - But it's the same pitch as previous k, that's why it is as it is
   
   
4. 00:52:159 - Move this to 00:52:659 -, that way you'll have a more solid "oo oooo" rhythm starting from 00:50:492 - to 00:54:159 - Ok, also switched to k
   
   
5. 01:00:992 - Remove this note, it allows for a more consistent and strong overall rhythm for this part. It also flows better with the vocals Ok
   
   
6. 01:02:826 - Move to 01:02:992 -, reason being the same as above ^ (You can add a don at 01:03:326 - as a little extra as well, for the sake of consistency with all the other 4-note patterns) All applied

1. 00:04:992 (17) - I suggest using a don for this instead as the beat here in the music is deep and heavy, just like 00:02:326 (5) - Ok, let's give it a shot
   
   
2. 00:52:992 (272) - Change this to kat, it matches the flow of the vocals notes here Na-ah. Well if you think for a moment, I mapped that as don because I follow the music, not the vocals. Though there's no drum sound I won't change it because it will ruin the consistency and the structure of this map in my mind and i don't want that to happen at all. Even it will cost me a ranking for this map lol
   
3. 01:15:992 (402) - Change this to a don? The music's direction kinda goes downwards here which would be better accompanied with a don before capping it off with the Finish afterwards Ok

1. 00:46:659 (277,278) - Swap these two notes to k d, you can have a consistent d k d rhythm with what you've set at 00:45:159 -. I like don on 277 more.
   
   
2. 00:05:159 (20) - Remove this for the sake of consistency with 00:02:492 - since there's no sound here? Ok

The harder difficulties (mainly Oni and Inner Oni) are pretty much solid, however I suggest getting more mods for Kantan and Futsuu as those difficulties can be further improved in the aspects of pattern consistencies and flow

Good luck!

thanks for mod!

Updated!

Unmei Muma wrote:

burn:soon

Hitsu wrote:

Unmei Muma wrote:

burn:soon

excuse me? xd
i don't understand what that means

Unmei Muma wrote:

it's just another pokemon status condition
and soon as in

mod soon

Unmei Muma wrote:

3good5me, if i were bn i would have bubbled this tbh
only thing is in kantan/futsuu, the 1.05 may be reduced to 1.00

Arrival wrote:

Same this would have been bubbled already if I were one lol

JarHed wrote:

Mod Is Here!

Kantan:

- 00:39:326 (68) - I added a Kat(Finisher) here because it is the same soundset as 00:41:492 (71,72) - Also this seems to sound better in the map as well. It has a bit lower pitch, that's why it is d.

- I don't see much else that i would see to change i like the Kantan

Futsuu:

- 01:20:992 (102) - This may just be my sick sense in Futsuu but i think adding a Don here makes it a better Ending in this Futsuu difficulty because it completes the sound at this point in the song, This is just personal preference you don't have to change it if you'd like. Pitch is not lowering to the point here that. i should make this d.

- 01:10:826 (69) - Even tho its the end of this phrase i don't beleive there is a need for a finisher here. Doesn't match up in the sounds in my personal opinion. Omg, that was the only diff with finisher there. Thanks for noticing.

- I like the Futsuu, Difficulty jump in my opinion is perfect. Great Job!

Muzukashii:

- Nothing to change here. AWESOME JOB! Thanks then :3

Oni:

- I beleive this pattern here would be better as it matches the soundset 00:03:409 (9,10,11,12,13,14) -
Shown Here: I Beleive this suits the Oni more. (Personal Preference.)

- Same thing here ^ 00:06:076 (22,23,24,25) -
Shown Here:

For all the above.
I made these parts as they are to make difference with Inner so i'll keep it as is is.

- 01:15:409 (401) - Add a Don here, In the song there is a 1/4 here and it should be in an Oni. Yeah, sounds better.

Good job on the Oni.

Inner Oni:

- I don't have much to put here but you could increase the SV in the Khai time a little more to 1.10x to have more in-tenseness. But make sure to ease into it as well. All hard diffs have the same SV so i don't think there is a reason to change that though it's Inner and there is a sense it should be more speedy.

Awesome job and good luck with ranking my friend. Hope this mod helps out! I'll take all the luck you offer me to get a BN check.

Arrival wrote:

Double post for notification purpose

[Kantan]

00:14:159 - this part is a bit too tricky. I'd suggest deleting 00:14:159 (23) - and moving 00:14:492 (24) - to 00:13:826 - sure, it's good that way

00:38:159 (64,65) - Delete these notes and add a finisher at 00:39:326 - so it goes a bit better with the song and is coherent with the following notes ok, sure!

00:49:492 - The kiai time is too dense. I'd recommend deleting notes such as 00:51:159 (4) - / 00:53:826 (10) - etc deleted that you've mentioned and some more

00:57:826 (18,19,20) - You need a 4/1 break during the kiai, so I'd suggest doing like this . You can do the same at 01:08:492 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - since it is the same musical structure. done

01:10:826 - For the last part consider doing as I told you earlier to nerf a bit the diff, aka deleting notes such as 01:12:492 (45) - etc done; also changed a bit at the end

The Kantan is a bit too hard atm. yeah that's true lol

[Futsuu]

You could create a 2/1 break here 00:22:326 (67) - by removing the note for exemple. yeah, that fits good

00:36:326 (111) - This triplet is quite unfitting and make the diff a bit too hard. deleted, also chanhed 00:36:492 (111) to d 'cuz feels more fiiting

00:38:826 - This part is a bit too hard to. Remove this note 00:39:659 (123) - and make this 00:39:826 (124) - a don. Do the same for the others. ok

00:54:826 - This string of note is too long. 00:57:826 (27) - Delete this note for some rest. ok, nice

01:20:659 (100,101,102,103) - Considering this is the end of the map, I think removing these 01:20:659 (100,102) - would be more fitting. made like in kantan

[Muzukashii]

Again the diff is a bit too hard in density. Lower the density by removing uneeded notes such as 00:03:992 (11) - or 00:38:659 (158) - and making 2/1 breaks after you use 1/4 patterns. i think that i nerfed it a bit :thinking:

[Oni]

00:38:659 (193) - Delete this note so the finisher next to it can be emphasized better ok

00:47:492 (239,240,241,242,243,244,245) - I'd do it like this, the downbeat will be more emphasized well i tried it but i'm not happy with the result so i'll stick with what it is

01:10:242 (368) - triplet and quintuplet next to each other is a bit too much for the Oni imo, what about changed but with dkddk to emphasize the drum before the 5plet

01:16:742 (404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413,414) - The rhythms used here are really different from the ones used here 01:11:409 (375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387) - , try to make it a bit more consistent hitsounding wise. changed

[Inner Oni]

00:26:659 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153) - This feels pretty much out of nowhere, there is no real musical reason behind this pattern. This would be much more fitting 25-50% playback rate please, really noticeable synth sounds

01:00:159 (376) - No finisher here although there are at 00:49:492 (298) - and 00:54:826 (336) - ? Either remove them all or add one here. i won't add it because there is no strong cymbal sound but those two have that so... no reason to delete those and likely no reason to add on what you've mentioned; also on all other diffs there is the same - i didn't put finisher on that moment on ANY diff

01:04:492 - The logic of 1/4 triplet or quintuplet - 1/2 note - 1/4 triplet etc feel very off at this part. You can make some changes for exemple at 01:06:409 (422) - , moving this note to 01:06:742 - to emphasize the downbeat, and doing kind of the same structure later on. yeah, this is good, changed

01:14:076 (478,479,480,481,482) - what about to ass some variety while keeping the structure ? ass some variety :DDD I CAN DO THAT LOL; changed 2plet to dk but i don't like kkd and kdd too there so i'll stick with ddd

Surono wrote:

>Oni
* 00:44:076 - delete this, Inner doesnt have it lol yeah it's random
* then 00:44:159 - finish it sure
* 00:47:992 - 00:48:159 - choose 1 to emphasize with kat 00:48:159 (243) 'cuz of increasing pitch then

>Muzu
* 00:20:826 - to 00:20:492 - here, 00:20:659 - to 00:20:826 - here, better stucture was the second note on other time??? added don after what i achieved to make it better @@
* 00:27:492 - don, a bit close with futsuu and far with oni ok

Surono wrote:

I DL'd this map bcus youve request it on my queu I guess and I forget it lul
lookin for this map, good luck.

Etsu wrote:

hi, i was checking my queue and i saw that you requested this map a long time ago and thought to help you so i going mod?

1. You have hitsound "111.mp3 and taiko-normal-hitwhistle.wav" that is not being used, you must delete it.

1. 00:01:826 (2,3) - I think that these notes should not be for a kantan is a bit weird
2. 00:07:159 (7) - delete?
3. 00:15:159 (21,23) - ^
4. 00:19:659 (32) - ^
5. 00:39:326 (64) - change K like other diff?
6. 00:45:492 (73) - change k?
7. 01:00:826 - must map here for consistency like 00:50:159 (2) -
8. 01:05:826 (27) - move to 01:06:159 - ?
9. 01:10:826 (34) - feel better finish for end kiai imo
10. 01:15:492 (41) - change kat? the sound is increased
11. 01:19:992 (49) - change don?

1. 00:17:492 (51) - add finish like other diff?
2. 00:22:659 (67) - move to 00:22:326 - is better imo
3. 00:38:826 (119) - feel don finish here

1. 00:06:076 (18) - must remove this note, since it has no note in the diff oni .. or better that note would be better in Oni
2. 00:10:993 (36,37) - maybe control + g for variation
3. 00:11:409 (39) - delete?
4. 00:40:659 (160) - feel better don finish is better sound imo
5. 00:49:826 (191,192,193) - control + g?
6. 01:14:076 (292) - remove
7. 01:17:159 (305) - ^

1. 00:03:992 (12) - i think delete this like 00:06:659 - is you are close to the diff inner imo
2. 00:13:159 (56) - ^
3. 00:17:659 (82) - delete? is long pattern this section, consistency 00:28:326 -
4. 00:50:492 (256) - change kat?
5. 00:52:659 (268,269) - control + g? feel better sound imo

1. 00:52:076 (314) - maybe change kat here better for inner imo
2. 01:14:409 (481) - ^

Etsu wrote:

hi, sorry for delay here my mod :> rip 2 kudos

Etsu wrote:

hi, sorry for delay here my mod :> rip 2 kudos

[General]

1. You have hitsound "111.mp3 and taiko-normal-hitwhistle.wav" that is not being used, you must delete it. 111 ok but second is used o:

[Kantan]

1. 00:01:826 (2,3) - I think that these notes should not be for a kantan is a bit weird i'll remap here somehow
2. 00:07:159 (7) - delete? same
3. 00:15:159 (21,23) - ^ same for here
4. 00:19:659 (32) - ^ and here
5. 00:39:326 (64) - change K like other diff? yeah, sure
6. 00:45:492 (73) - change k? i'll delete this tbh
7. 01:00:826 - must map here for consistency like 00:50:159 (2) - sure lol
8. 01:05:826 (27) - move to 01:06:159 - ? i'll delete this too bcz it's stupid as hell
9. 01:10:826 (34) - feel better finish for end kiai imo yep
10. 01:15:492 (41) - change kat? the sound is increased it makes it way down here so no
11. 01:19:992 (49) - change don? that seems better
    

[Futsuu]

1. 00:17:492 (51) - add finish like other diff? yep
2. 00:22:659 (67) - move to 00:22:326 - is better imo yep
3. 00:38:826 (119) - feel don finish here it's K in all other diffs lul

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:06:076 (18) - must remove this note, since it has no note in the diff oni .. or better that note would be better in Oni all the notes shouldn't be consistent in all diffs so nope for this
2. 00:10:993 (36,37) - maybe control + g for variation don't feel like it
3. 00:11:409 (39) - delete? not really since i'm keeping note from first suggestion
4. 00:40:659 (160) - feel better don finish is better sound imo same as futsuu
5. 00:49:826 (191,192,193) - control + g? it feels ok as it is
6. 01:14:076 (292) - remove same as previous two
7. 01:17:159 (305) - ^ same

[Oni]

1. 00:03:992 (12) - i think delete this like 00:06:659 - is you are close to the diff inner imo ok
2. 00:13:159 (56) - ^ same
3. 00:17:659 (82) - delete? is long pattern this section, consistency 00:28:326 - sure
4. 00:50:492 (256) - change kat? it's kick and low sound so no
5. 00:52:659 (268,269) - control + g? feel better sound imo it's ok with pitch so i'll keep it

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:52:076 (314) - maybe change kat here better for inner imo makes sense, it's also has a bit increased sound
2. 01:14:409 (481) - ^ but here not really

1. I believe that the offset is a bit wrong, since there is only one timing point I recommend to shift the offset by about -6ms (from 1493 to 1487).
2. Hitsound volumes are insufficient, the song suppresses the custom hitsounds. Use a program (example: Audacity) to increase the volumes of them.

1. 01:05:492 - Starting from here, red tick kats (a.k.a d k ddk d kkd k usage of rhythms) don't fit the drums, you are using custom hitsounds and it conflicts what you've been used also. Try using some sort of similiar rhythm to make it harmonious with the melody. It also conflicts of your rhythm choice that you used on Oni diff.

1. 00:20:326 - Removing this note will keep the spread balanced between this and Inner Oni.
2. 00:27:659 - I think you can add a triplet here to emphasize the 1/4 vocals like you did in Inner, by using ddk or kdk.
3. 00:30:826 - Move this note to 00:30:992 - here to keep the rhythm similiar to Inner Oni, they look a bit inconsistent to me right now.
4. 00:39:742 - You can delete this note, there is no 1/4 sound on it and it'll create some difference between Inner and this. Also from Muzukashii to Oni spread will be adjusted too.
5. 00:40:992 (201,202,203) - Instead of k d d, I recommend d k k to follow the drums by using kats on snare sounds.
6. 00:54:826 (276,277,278,279) - Swap these four to adjust the rhythm by emphasizing vocals and drums with kats.

1. 00:19:326 - From the beginning until 00:21:826 - this spot, there is no 3/2 break so I recommend deleting the note at 00:19:326 to provide one. Also,
   it is neccesary for consistency with 00:21:826. Same occasion at 00:24:659 -
2. 00:22:826 - Finisher would be good with custom hitsounds.
3. 00:39:159 (155) - Delete this note to make the rhythm consistent with other spots, as in 00:41:826 -
4. 01:05:159 - You should put a note here. There is already a break at 00:59:492 - this spot. In order to provide another break, 01:11:159 (280) - you can delete this note.
5. 01:10:659 - Add a note here or make a 1/4 triplet kkk to balance the spread between Oni and this, since it's the same with Futsuu.

1. 00:11:159 - You can add a note here to create a difference on rhythm, and also keep the spread balanced with Muzu.
2. 00:19:992 - 00:25:326 - Add notes here to balance the spread. While having 1/4 triplet on Muzukashii, you can't leave 1/1 notes on Futsuu.
3. 00:26:159 (65) - Delete this note and 00:25:826 (64) - move this one to 00:25:992 - here to emphasize vocals.
4. 00:48:992 - Adding a note here will be good, and also you need to add a note at 00:48:826 - here on Kantan.
5. 01:00:659 - Also add a note here.

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello, sorry for the delay I totally forgot about it.

[General]

1. I believe that the offset is a bit wrong, since there is only one timing point I recommend to shift the offset by about -6ms (from 1493 to 1487). okay
2. Hitsound volumes are insufficient, the song suppresses the custom hitsounds. Use a program (example: Audacity) to increase the volumes of them. made them louder, hope they are good now

[Inner Oni]

1. 01:05:492 - Starting from here, red tick kats (a.k.a d k ddk d kkd k usage of rhythms) don't fit the drums, you are using custom hitsounds and it conflicts what you've been used also. Try using some sort of similiar rhythm to make it harmonious with the melody. It also conflicts of your rhythm choice that you used on Oni diff. i wanted to remap this anyway because wtf was i thinking when i mapped this lol

[Oni]

1. 00:20:326 - Removing this note will keep the spread balanced between this and Inner Oni.
2. 00:27:659 - I think you can add a triplet here to emphasize the 1/4 vocals like you did in Inner, by using ddk or kdk.
3. 00:30:826 - Move this note to 00:30:992 - here to keep the rhythm similiar to Inner Oni, they look a bit inconsistent to me right now.
4. 00:39:742 - You can delete this note, there is no 1/4 sound on it and it'll create some difference between Inner and this. Also from Muzukashii to Oni spread will be adjusted too.
5. 00:40:992 (201,202,203) - Instead of k d d, I recommend d k k to follow the drums by using kats on snare sounds. so much better lmao
6. 00:54:826 (276,277,278,279) - Swap these four to adjust the rhythm by emphasizing vocals and drums with kats.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:19:326 - From the beginning until 00:21:826 - this spot, there is no 3/2 break so I recommend deleting the note at 00:19:326 to provide one. Also,
   it is neccesary for consistency with 00:21:826. Same occasion at 00:24:659 -
2. 00:22:826 - Finisher would be good with custom hitsounds. not too sure about this since i didn't use it on any other diff
3. 00:39:159 (155) - Delete this note to make the rhythm consistent with other spots, as in 00:41:826 -
4. 01:05:159 - You should put a note here. There is already a break at 00:59:492 - this spot. In order to provide another break, 01:11:159 (280) - you can delete this note.
5. 01:10:659 - Add a note here or make a 1/4 triplet kkk to balance the spread between Oni and this, since it's the same with Futsuu. made kdk instead

[Futsuu]

1. 00:11:159 - You can add a note here to create a difference on rhythm, and also keep the spread balanced with Muzu.
2. 00:19:992 - 00:25:326 - Add notes here to balance the spread. While having 1/4 triplet on Muzukashii, you can't leave 1/1 notes on Futsuu.
3. 00:26:159 (65) - Delete this note and 00:25:826 (64) - move this one to 00:25:992 - here to emphasize vocals.
4. 00:48:992 - Adding a note here will be good, and also you need to add a note at 00:48:826 - here on Kantan.
5. 01:00:659 - Also add a note here.
   
   all changed

After those adjustments on Futsuu, Kantan spread must be balanced too. You may call me back.

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Recheck.

[Muzukashii]

00:06:070 - There is a note on that spot, but there isn't a note on Oni. I suggest otherwise. ok sure

Everything else is fine for me.

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Everything looks good, let's give it a shot.

Bubbled!

Surono wrote:

Kantan
* 00:01:487 - ~ 00:17:486 - spread and consistency still not good in this part imo, 00:02:153 - 00:04:820 - so yeah add both don here would make the build pattern balanced and not sudden increased, 00:12:986 - kinda hard and futsuu just similar density, I recommend to move 00:12:820 - in here as similar before and with the consistency of futsuu, because its simple and first rhythm emphasis from the song than 00:12:986 - mapped in this drum. 01:10:820 - dont forget apply in this part too check
* 01:00:820 - kat, seems good with intense of vocal and also to balance with next colors pattern. duhh smth about density spread each other~ k, seems fine
* 01:03:153 - you forget in here, well kat. yeah close to the end of map, point above and here for kiai should be consindered for sake consistency density between each diffs. if applying this i think it's don better bcz vocal is very still there and no drums, but yeah i changed

Futsuu
*00:19:320 - 00:21:320 - 00:22:653 - 00:24:653 - 00:35:320 - 00:31:320 - 00:35:320 - somehow it would be balanced between each diffs if you deleted these notes and kiai density seems good, you can let the rest of kiai part since the beginning until before entering the kiai has high density than kiai ahah, so yeah should be deleted those Ive pointed out anndd 00:22:820 - give it finish for consistency with the others after deleted those notes i see what you're saying yet didn't like deleting all mentioned (some parts while deleted just sounded really stupid D:), still deleted some and did a bit of variation here and there
* 01:00:153 - why its not finisher, maybe don finish it or just give it finish in this kat? ok just it.. for me it matters at all, I will rebubble it i didn't make notes finishers at same moments on every other diffs and i still think it's not that much of a cymbal sound comparing to the very start of kiai (also it's only on this short ver of song lmao)

Protoescapist wrote:

Awesome mapset. Всё и так зачетно. Удачи в ранке :3

1. 00:33:486 - The finisher usage seems a bit inconsistent, so as long as there is not a really good reason behind this, I suggest making this usage consistent between other diffs.
   00:38:820 ~ 00:44:153 - Between these spots there is no difficulty change between Kantan and Futsuu except the usage of 1/2 at 00:43:653 - this spot on Futsuu. Try to make them a bit different. You can add some notes on Futsuu since the change from Futsuu to Muzukashii seems a bit wide compared to the rest of the spread.

1. 00:14:570 - Removing this is a good idea since 00:09:236 - this spot doesn't have a note in it.
2. 00:30:653 - Change this to don or make it kat on Inner Oni to keep the colors consistent. Muzukashii should be considered too.
3. 00:45:153 - The triplet usage seems different between this, Muzukashii and Inner Oni. Since Inner Oni is the best option, I suggest changing here and Muzukashii to dkd too.

1. Apparently Muzukashii 3/2 break issues are still there, some sections are still too long. I remember it was longer so I wanted you to remove a note by giving as an example, but still, from the beginning to 00:19:153 - here there are no 3/2 breaks (the minimum is two) while the section is actually 54/1 long without a break. Same occasion goes for 00:25:486 ~ 00:38:820 - between this section as 42/1 which is still pretty long and needs at least one 2/1 break. Kiai has some occasions but they are acceptable because the part is meant to be the most dense part of the map. This is the reason for bubble pop. If you can't decide where to put breaks, I can help in the future.
2. 00:42:820 - 00:43:320 - You don't have finishers on those notes.

1. 01:00:153 - You have a don finisher while on Futsuu, Muzukashii, Oni and Inner Oni you have a simple kat there even though on some of them you are still be able to put a finisher. Make your mind to keep them consistent. My suggestion is to put finishers to the other diffs since there is a 4-stanza start, which means it's the middle of the kiai.

frukoyurdakul wrote:

I wish you called me I totally forgot about you lol i decided to wait and i forgot to even think about reminding you so whatever xd

[General]

1. 00:33:486 - The finisher usage seems a bit inconsistent, so as long as there is not a really good reason behind this, I suggest making this usage consistent between other diffs. oops, that's quite a mistake; ok i've made them just regular notes here
   00:38:820 ~ 00:44:153 - Between these spots there is no difficulty change between Kantan and Futsuu except the usage of 1/2 at 00:43:653 - this spot on Futsuu. Try to make them a bit different. You can add some notes on Futsuu since the change from Futsuu to Muzukashii seems a bit wide compared to the rest of the spread. yep, added some

[Oni]

1. 00:14:570 - Removing this is a good idea since 00:09:236 - this spot doesn't have a note in it. phphphph yeah don't know why i decided to do a variation there
2. 00:30:653 - Change this to don or make it kat on Inner Oni to keep the colors consistent. Muzukashii should be considered too. okay, made it k on rest
3. 00:45:153 - The triplet usage seems different between this, Muzukashii and Inner Oni. Since Inner Oni is the best option, I suggest changing here and Muzukashii to dkd too. ofc

[Muzukashii]

1. Apparently Muzukashii 3/2 break issues are still there, some sections are still too long. I remember it was longer so I wanted you to remove a note by giving as an example, but still, from the beginning to 00:19:153 - here there are no 3/2 breaks (the minimum is two) while the section is actually 54/1 long without a break. Same occasion goes for 00:25:486 ~ 00:38:820 - between this section as 42/1 which is still pretty long and needs at least one 2/1 break. Kiai has some occasions but they are acceptable because the part is meant to be the most dense part of the map. This is the reason for bubble pop. If you can't decide where to put breaks, I can help in the future. i think that i kinda managed to pull this off on my own but help will still be appreciated ;w;
2. 00:42:820 - 00:43:320 - You don't have finishers on those notes. fixed

[Kantan]

1. 01:00:153 - You have a don finisher while on Futsuu, Muzukashii, Oni and Inner Oni you have a simple kat there even though on some of them you are still be able to put a finisher. Make your mind to keep them consistent. My suggestion is to put finishers to the other diffs since there is a 4-stanza start, which means it's the middle of the kiai. lol wuuut how is this possible that i missed deleting finish there, god help me with my stupid mistakes

Yeap, you may call me back after you handle these.

frukoyurdakul wrote:

[General]

00:33:486 - Yeah this note needs a finisher on all diffs. Also remove the note on Futsuu at 00:33:653 -

01:00:153 - Same on this note, make them all dons and put a finisher on them, after that on Oni 01:00:070 - remove this note. arrgh this is tough for me because i was sticking with that thought that there is no cymbals sound is the song itself there but ok I GIVE UP

01:10:820 - Same on this too, on Muzukashii, Oni and Inner Oni you need a finisher on them. Also make the colors consistent.

[Kantan]

00:52:153 (5) - I think this can be moved 00:51:986 - here to cover up an off-beat rhythm on the first 4-stanza and keep the rhythm more simpler on the 2nd 4-stanza structure. Same goes on with 01:02:820 (23) - to 01:02:653 - here. oh this is pure gold thanks

ye alright

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Last check.

[Oni]
01:10:736 - Let's introduce finishers after 1/4 snaps on Inner Oni, remove this note.

Surono wrote:

luv dude fruko gg, for QAT and qt pls. sorry for late Hitsu, Gratz!

Namki wrote:

поздравляю!

igorsprite wrote:

nice