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Grynpyret - A Song About Naps

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Ambrew
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, February 4, 2017 at 3:10:13 PM

Artist: Grynpyret
Title: A Song About Naps
Tags: grynpyret boba beach vinxis
BPM: 80
Filesize: 7007kb
Play Time: 03:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Somnolence (4.24 stars, 538 notes)
Download: Grynpyret - A Song About Naps
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is the background pic OKAY?
if any1 has a better background pic for this plz message
kthx <3
pacsu
lets go for mod

in general : good shit xD

00:04:271 - maybe overmap here whis a circle
00:12:896 (2,4,2,4,2,4) - it s kinda empty whisout hitsound here
00:24:146 (1) - maybe place this circle on the 2
00:40:271 (1,2,3,4,5) - the distance snap is not the same , why not just copy past this 00:39:146 (1,2,3,4,5) - it s better when you start the right to the left
01:11:396 (6) - the sound at the end is not realy marked
01:30:146 (1,2,3) - this in preaty weird , i think a stream whis circles will be better whis the music
01:45:240 - maybe a circle here or remove this 01:45:146 (1) - , because when i play a was focus more on the piano that the " hoc hoc hoc"
03:03:146 (1,2,3,4) - i think it s a bit hard for this level
03:09:146 (1) - make the spiner start here 03:08:865 -


i hope my mod in not totaly useless , dont forget that im a new maper , so sorry if it s bad
Topic Starter
Ambrew
omg sorry I will reply to this LOL
I think most of this I fixed
Hishiro Chizuru
Somnolence
00:10:646 (8,1) - blanket?
00:10:646 (8,3,1) - these overlaps are a bit nitpicky, but you have a lot of space to work with because of the slow beat of the song at this time (there are more of these, but I won't point them out, as there are a lot xd)
00:10:646 (8,3,1) - fix blanket
00:18:896 (2,3,4) - 2 and 4 have the same sound, but 3 is different, so maybe make three somewhere different and 4 come back to where 2 is?
00:21:896 (3,4) - Blanket fix
00:41:771 (4) - the sliderend has a really significant sound, so maybe adjust it so that there is a note or slider head on the white upbeat tick?
00:47:959 (1) - move this so the slider head is on the white tick
00:52:646 (4,5) - blanket fix
01:06:146 (1) - it reeeaaallllyyy bothers me for some reason, the end of the slider. Move the last anchor down a bit so there is no gap in end of the slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7500136
01:08:396 (2,4) - maybe blanket?
02:17:959 (4,5) - maybe get rid of these two?

Very creative, and nice~~

Don't take my mod too too seriously, as they might hinder your creativeness!

One thing that might be a bit of a problem are the overlaps in the non-kiai parts of the song, they might be needlessly hard to read.

Also, work on your blankets ;)

Cheers! Very good map!
mindmaster107
NOT DONE
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Quick issue with spacing with spaced streams. 00:39:146 (1,2,3,4) and 00:31:646 (1,2,3,4) use the same pattern, but one is 1/6 and the other is 1/8.
A suggestion could be use 1/8th sliders (In your case 1/16th) with the tails making a pattern to show that this pattern in of higher intensity, and therefore is 1/3. Or you could just under-map the 1/8 streams with a kickslider.
There are a few other such things I will be pointing out when I have time, but please check your spaced streams.
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