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AnikiG4
:3
Topic Starter
GiNa

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here~ and request got from: Kanon's Mod Queue~

General:
BG1 seems to be a bit odd for me, for the proportion seems a bit strange, so maybe fix it a little ? Just need to increase the height imo. I took the original one and cut off most of the background XD

Easy:
00:57:305 (5) - I don't really like nazi but this spacing is really a little ugly :P  Moved a little, but still the pattern.
others fine~

Hard:
I suggest more soft-whistles on this diff, seems the hitsounds now is a little too simple. Yes, it's simple, but I'll stay the same for now.
00:42:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Because seeing you changed to normal hitsound at here:00:42:861 (6), Then I suggest all of these using normal hitsound, and cancel the clap hitsounds. And consider add a volumn increasing here seems to be very nice. That's not really what I want, but still thanks for the suggestion, instead of that, I increased the volumes only.
00:43:833 (3) - add note here Fixed
01:16:194 (8) - finish instead of whistle? Fixed

Good luck~

RinNa wrote:

:3
Thanks for the star, 會長sama !
grvyd
Star~
Leorda
Hello

General

* I'm not sure if Outro video is safe

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Easy
00:31:194 (5) - Make sure the sliderbody is visible for easy diff, this will be easier to see for beginner player if you change this
00:40:083 (4) - ^
01:15:083 (3) - ^

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Haku's Normal
* Are you overusing the kiai ._.? Seriously
* I think this Slider Velocity is high than Hard diff

00:51:194 (4) - Remove finish
00:57:583 (1) - Remove clap
00:59:250 (4) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
01:18:694 (1) - Too near from spinner, it's inappropriate for normal diff (?) (look the timeline)

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Hard

* AR -1?

00:33:694 (6,1) - No anti-jump please
00:40:083 (1) - I think this slider is pretty silly

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Winber1's Insane
01:02:027 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Not sure if 1/8 streams are unrankable

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cya
Rukario
General:
- BG1 has wrong aspect ratio. it should be 1024x768. At the moment it is at 1024x759.
- Why do you really need two different BGs? Got a good explanation?

Haku's Normal:
This diff still has all the kiai fountains, and the other diffs don't. Please remove them.

Hard:
Use tick rate 2 like Normal did?
00:33:694 (6,1) - Please get rid of that anti-jump. Plays and looks fairly bad.

Winber1's Insane:
Tick Rate 2, Please.

Easy was rather boring, in terms of rhythm but the other were pretty cool. Especially Insane. Gonna recheck this
Topic Starter
GiNa

flatps wrote:

Star~
Thanks for your star !

Leorda wrote:

Hello

General

* I'm not sure if Outro video is safe It's prefectly safe.

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Easy
00:31:194 (5) - Make sure the sliderbody is visible for easy diff, this will be easier to see for beginner player if you change this Fixed
00:40:083 (4) - ^ I'll keep this for now
01:15:083 (3) - ^ ^

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Hard
* AR -1? No, but thanks for your suggestion.

00:33:694 (6,1) - No anti-jump please Fixed
00:40:083 (1) - I think this slider is pretty silly Changed it to 2 circles.

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cya Bye ;D

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- BG1 has wrong aspect ratio. it should be 1024x768. At the moment it is at 1024x759. I just deleted BG1.
- Why do you really need two different BGs? Got a good explanation?

Hard:
Use tick rate 2 like Normal did? Fixed
00:33:694 (6,1) - Please get rid of that anti-jump. Plays and looks fairly bad. Fixed

Easy was rather boring, in terms of rhythm but the other were pretty cool. Especially Insane. Gonna recheck this I know my Easy is boring ;__; thanks for your mod.
winber1

Leorda wrote:

Winber1's Insane
01:02:027 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Not sure if 1/8 streams are unrankable
if this were to be true, i could easily have just doubled the bpm or something. 1/8 streams are completely rankable if they make sense and are playable (at least imo). this stream is only at what most people call bpm 216 anyways , which is very easily playable for many people.

and @Rukarioman: tick rate is two now (though it doesn't really sound much different, and it doesn't help people read the SV change either lol, at least imo)

Download: Sakakibara Yui - Toki Tsukasadoru Juuni no Meiyaku (TV Size) (gina91189) [Winber1's Insane].osu
HakuNoKaemi
Haku's Normal
* Are you overusing the kiai ._.? Seriously It's not called overusing, seriously. It's called overusing when you use fountains in a contnued pulse-like manner.
* I think this Slider Velocity is high than Hard diff It's nothing, it's more about how you mapped than what setting you used that decide the difficulty.

00:51:194 (4) - Remove finish
00:57:583 (1) - Remove clap
00:59:250 (4) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider it's 0.02 O.O and it's considered unecessary nazi, since it don'tchange much because of auto-stacking
01:18:694 (1) - Too near from spinner, it's inappropriate for normal diff (?) (look the timeline) Following music make it easier
Haku's Normal:
This diff still has all the kiai fountains, and the other diffs don't. Please remove them. It's not called overusing, seriously. It's called overusing when you use fountains in a contnued pulse-like manner. i used 4 fountains that are godly placed, plus them don't prevent the player from seeing the notes. Plus it's a Guideline and not even a rule, that I broke for a good reason: making the map better. So i won't remove it.
The song it's an Andantino on the 1st part, from the Kiai start the Tempo become more mosso, and become a Moderato espressivo
Sir Minelli
Stop asking HakuNoKaem to remove the kiai fountains already.

He wont be doing so, and the fountains are not unrankable whatsoever.

I would though add them to the other difficulties to keep the same kiai timing style (which I think fits properly and doesn't look bad)
But if the mapper doesn't feel like it, HakuNoKaem doesnt' really need to remove his.
winber1
In all honesty, I don't think those fountains fit as well as they could. The music just isn't epic enough in those few places in comparison to the rest of the section at least in my opinion. However, they are logically placed and are consistent to a specific pattern in the music, so I have no problem with them being there. I myself wouldn't really want to add it in, but I don't think it's a problem having different kiai times if it is the mappers decision to do so.

although i do not consider it overusing kiai times, i also do not consider them the best use of fountains. That's basically my view.

Well, i guess the final decision goes to gina. If she wants to add the kiai fountains in her difficulties, I will gladly follow. If not, well, i'll just leave it as is then lol.
Topic Starter
GiNa

winber1 wrote:

In all honesty, I don't think those fountains fit as well as they could. The music just isn't epic enough in those few places in comparison to the rest of the section at least in my opinion. However, they are logically placed and are consistent to a specific pattern in the music, so I have no problem with them being there. I myself wouldn't really want to add it in, but I don't think it's a problem having different kiai times if it is the mappers decision to do so.

although i do not consider it overusing kiai times, i also do not consider them the best use of fountains. That's basically my view.

Well, i guess the final decision goes to gina. If she wants to add the kiai fountains in her difficulties, I will gladly follow. If not, well, i'll just leave it as is then lol.
Yea, those fountains didn't fit in the music perfectly, but they do work though.
I won't ask or tell Haku to change them since people have their own style.
So what I am trying to say is ... "Personally, I do like those fountains, however, I don't really want to add them in my difficulties because somehow, they do hurt my eyes badly, but they won't break any gameflow for sure".
I guess we should keep what we have right now or even just go back to the original kiai we had before.
winber1

gina91189 wrote:

or even just go back to the original kiai we had before
omg yes :3

i don't find anything wrong with long kiai times ._.
Topic Starter
GiNa

winber1 wrote:

gina91189 wrote:

or even just go back to the original kiai we had before
omg yes :3

i don't find anything wrong with long kiai times ._.
You are so excited
By the way, that's what I thought too, long kiai is fine to me.

EDIT:
And yes, I guess we could just go back to the original one.

Rukario
Looks alright now. The kiai makes sense and it's okay because the different kiai is on a guest mapper diff.
Bubbled.


EDIT: someone made me notice that the custom hitclaps have too much silence in the beginning, which makes them lag the offsets and let it feel wrong.
jericho2442
fixed hitsounds
http://puu.sh/3RHe
http://puu.sh/3RHh

just replace them
Topic Starter
GiNa

Rukarioman wrote:

Looks alright now. The kiai makes sense and it's okay because the different kiai is on a guest mapper diff.
Bubbled.


EDIT: someone made me notice that the custom hitclaps have too much silence in the beginning, which makes them lag the offsets and let it feel wrong.
That's what I feel too.

jericho2442 wrote:

fixed hitsounds
http://puu.sh/3RHe
http://puu.sh/3RHh

just replace them
Done, and thanks !
stiss
so good song :D
fighting for star
good luck.
your cute girl!!
Topic Starter
GiNa

stiss wrote:

so good song :D
fighting for star
good luck.
your cute girl!!
lol
Thanks, even though I don't really know you.
Rukario
Alright now everything should be fine. Re-Bubbled.

Look at this message.
Do you think it's too short?
...
Well, then you're a hypocrit.

:3
Topic Starter
GiNa

Rukarioman wrote:

Alright now everything should be fine. Re-Bubbled.

Look at this message.
Do you think it's too short?
...
Well, then you're a hypocrit.

:3
lol, you made me laugh on those strike sentences.
Anyways, thanks !
EDIT:
Hey! Rukarioman, I just saw your interview, it was aswsome imo ;3
winber1
Gratz on bubble! :3!

Rukarioman wrote:

hypocrit.
hypocrite*
kevinli111
NICE MAP xDD 我才剛剛學到如何star別人的map而已 xDD
Topic Starter
GiNa

kevinli111 wrote:

NICE MAP xDD 我才剛剛學到如何star別人的map而已 xDD
Thanks
kanpakyin
Bubble了..加油找bat lol
好把...
預先恭喜
Topic Starter
GiNa

kanpakyin wrote:

Bubble了..加油找bat lol
好把...
預先恭喜
Thanks
我最近比較lazybusy,不過我會加油的 :)
SapphireGhost
When I downloaded this to mod, I only got [Easy] and [car's Taiko]! Not sure why this happened but you might want to ask someone else if they get the same thing.
Topic Starter
GiNa

SapphireGhost wrote:

When I downloaded this to mod, I only got [Easy] and [car's Taiko]! Not sure why this happened but you might want to ask someone else if they get the same thing.
Seems like other people got that problem too.
So, self-popped for doing the full/standard submit.
SapphireGhost
Great, I can do a full mod now. Also, most of this is overlap stuffs that you don't have to change.

[General]
Tick Rate: It's good to use the same Tick Rate for each difficulty, it keeps things consistent and there are sliderticks where there should be.

[Haku's Normal]
I'm not a big fan of the kiai bursts, but it's ok.
01:15:639 (3) - Maybe take this out from under the slider? I think it looks better.

[Hard]
00:47:861 (2,3,4,5,6) - Remove the slight overlap here. (Stacking causes (2,3,4) to hit (5).)
00:54:527 (3) - It would also be nice to remove the overlap with (1) here.

[winber1's Insane]
00:50:083 (5) - Possibly remove the overlap with (4), it doesn't look as good as the other overlaps.
01:13:972 (5,6) - Same here ~

Looks good! Have a regular star and also a kudosu star for the self-pop.
Topic Starter
GiNa

SapphireGhost wrote:

Great, I can do a full mod now. Also, most of this is overlap stuffs that you don't have to change.

[General]
Tick Rate: It's good to use the same Tick Rate for each difficulty, it keeps things consistent and there are sliderticks where there should be. There would be too many for Easy then, so changed Taiko's only.

[Hard]
00:47:861 (2,3,4,5,6) - Remove the slight overlap here. (Stacking causes (2,3,4) to hit (5).) I guess there are fine there ... ? So no changed.
00:54:527 (3) - It would also be nice to remove the overlap with (1) here. Fixed

Looks good! Have a regular star and also a kudosu star for the self-pop. Thanks for the stars, but you also pointed out a big problem for me >w<, so I won't really care about this self-popped.
jameskong1
not sure if I had star'd or not
oh well have a nice shooting star :D
Suzully
Steins;Gate! o.o    
I hope bubble come back :D    
Topic Starter
GiNa

Suzully wrote:

Steins;Gate! o.o    
I hope bubble come back :D    
Don't worry, Rukarioman will rebubble my map.
Anyways, thank you ;D
HakuNoKaemi
[Haku's Normal]
I'm not a big fan of the kiai bursts, but it's ok.
01:15:639 (3) - Maybe take this out from under the slider? I think it looks better.
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Toki Tsukasadoru Juuni no Meiyaku (TV Size) (gina91189) [Haku's Normal].osu
Evil_Twilight
觸口羊好萌
觸口羊好觸
角蜀咩好神
角蜀咩好O
Topic Starter
GiNa

Evil_Twilight wrote:

觸口羊好萌
觸口羊好觸
角蜀咩好神
角蜀咩好O
G神你也不要來黑我!
Rukario
Got all the diffs now, so have your bubble repaired.

jericho2442
fix your comboburst-0 and comboburst-2 size as i told you in irc,
make combo color 3 and 4 abit more different because at the moment when kiai hits they are waaaay too hard to notice a difference.

Insane
00:17:027 (2,3,4,5,1) - this spacing plays bad, the jump on (5,1) is identical spacing but different timing to the spacing at (2,3) i really advise to space (5,1) closer like the timing asks for

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fix them and i will rank, popping untill so it dont get ranked with the two general problems
Topic Starter
GiNa

jericho2442 wrote:

fix your comboburst-0 and comboburst-2 size as i told you in irc,
make combo color 3 and 4 abit more different because at the moment when kiai hits they are waaaay too hard to notice a difference.

Insane
00:17:027 (2,3,4,5,1) - this spacing plays bad, the jump on (5,1) is identical spacing but different timing to the spacing at (2,3) i really advise to space (5,1) closer like the timing asks for

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fix them and i will rank, popping untill so it dont get ranked with the two general problems
Fixed all of them :D
jericho2442
everything is now fixed sooooooo ranked, please enjoy it hahaha xD
NanaDesu
恭喜觸咩咩 >_<



小車車神觸!

小車車神觸
Kite
congrats! map is pretty nice
Nymph
:P grats~ nice job
IceBeam
Really nice job!
Gratz~
Komeiji Yuki
Congra meimei :3
Topic Starter
GiNa
Thank, guys >w<
I finally achieved my goal, which is get 1 map ranked before my summer vacation ends ;3.
kurohana
oh, it's ranked? but... i haven't modded yet!
joke xDD
congratz to your first ranked map :)
spboxer3
恭喜了 :)
rating是求出來的lol
winber1
CONGRATZ!!!!!! :3
HakuNoKaemi
2nd ranked guest... thank jeri-chan :3
Topic Starter
GiNa
There comes you guys >w<
Thank you guys for your guest diffs.
MoodyRPG
oh I remember this mod, is now ranked

Congrats ~
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