LOW - Through The Years And Far Away

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zsr123

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

4:44 - 1 diff

[mikako]
00:21:439 (1,2,3,4) - 话说这地方音乐有在响吗
00:31:545 (8) - x248 y144 ok
00:40:703 (6,7,8,9) - 弄个正方形吧 ok
01:24:597 (9) - NC?
后面没啥问题了- -
谢谢 :)
spboxer3
18:18 spboxer3: 00:30:913 (1,2) - [Normal]交換一下NC? 我覺得這個節奏的差距並沒有很大(可能你加NC的用意是為了補HP) 可是NC在後頭比較符合音樂 
18:18 spboxer3: 00:30:913 (1,2) - [Normal]交換一下NC? 我覺得這個節奏的差距並沒有很大(可能你加NC的用意是為了補HP) 可是NC在後頭比較符合音樂
18:19 zsr123: hao wo kan kan
18:20 spboxer3: 恩 話說拼音基本上我是看不懂的Orz... 盡量不要用拼音 雖然有些我能看懂Orz...
18:21 zsr123: 恩。。。 刚才输入法没切过来。。 其怪win8在这游戏里面切中文要按3次 切回英文却只按一次
18:21 spboxer3: 刪掉不常用的就好了
18:22 zsr123: 改好了 00:30:913 (4) - 取消了NC 00:32:492 (1) - NC
18:22 spboxer3: 話說win8有點厲害
18:22 zsr123: 就一个输入法。。
18:22 zsr123: win8 切输入法很麻烦。。 要设置成2种语言 而不是和以前 中文状态下 切换输入法的关闭
18:22 zsr123: 现在是切换 中文 和 英文= =
18:24 spboxer3: 01:25:544 (2,3) - ,01:27:123 (1,2) - 這種的我會建議盡量別overlaps
18:25 spboxer3: 能稍微分開點是沒關係的 就算spacing開了些 至少會比較乾淨
18:26 spboxer3: 01:29:650 (5,1,2,3) - 說實話 我的做法會讓
18:26 spboxer3: 會讓這些作出弧度
18:26 zsr123: 意思是那2个slider不要和note有重叠是吧?
18:26 spboxer3: 對
18:26 zsr123: 好
18:27 spboxer3: 我所說的弧度是指整齊的 不是像現在有地方很彎 但是有地方卻比較平滑
18:27 zsr123: 好
18:28 spboxer3: 01:41:650 (5) - NC在這01:43:544 (1) - 移除
18:28 zsr123: 我看看 该怎么摆 有辅助线就好了= =
18:28 spboxer3: 01:46:702 (3) - 01:48:597 (1) - 同上
18:29 spboxer3: 02:02:176 (5) - 02:03:755 (1) - ^
18:29 spboxer3: 後續不多說 稍微看一下吧 NC部分
18:30 zsr123: 恩
18:30 spboxer3: 舉例來說02:02:492 - 這位置是下一段的開始處 02:02:176 (5,6,7) - 卻是接續在一起的 於是我會把NC加在02:02:176 - 而不是02:03:755 -
18:30 spboxer3: 能懂我的意思
18:31 spboxer3: 你現在給人的感覺是NC超出界了
18:31 spboxer3: 上一段越線到下一個小節
18:32 spboxer3: 02:12:281 (5) - 這邊少了NC 記得補上
18:33 spboxer3: 話說你的Normal combo數好像都太長了點 記得注意一下 最好重新檢查過 我的建議是盡量別超過7 雖然有時候會有例外 這不是絕對的 但是通常Normal到7 combo已經很少見了
18:34 zsr123: 恩 我把全部的NC看一遍先。。。 貌似是我以前乱用NC了= = 没有跟着音乐的小节...
18:34 spboxer3: 02:57:439 (3) - 建議重拉lol 現在的slider比以前好看多 沒有大礙但是建議改一下
18:34 spboxer3: 如果你覺得現在就好也是可以的
18:35 spboxer3: 那NC部分我就先不說了
18:35 zsr123: 改过或许更好 我先试试
18:35 zsr123: 恩。。
18:35 spboxer3: 三個點就可以 不用用到4個
18:37 spboxer3: 03:23:334 (1,2,3,4) - 這種節奏在Normal裡很難讀懂 尤其是1/4的開頭要快不快要慢不慢 容易讓新手困惑 即使打了幾遍還是會覺得怪怪的
18:38 zsr123: 03:23:334 (1,2,3,4) - 那这里用spinner过渡下吧?
18:38 spboxer3: 03:35:965 (3,4,1) - 這種形狀實在有點怪怪的Orz... 考慮看看要不要做得有想法點 雖然這張2年了Orz... 可是以現在的技術來說感覺比較偏向隨手擺放的感覺
18:39 spboxer3: 好
18:39 spboxer3: 03:44:492 - note然後spinner延後至03:44:807 -
18:40 spboxer3: 這地方雖然節奏有變 但是還是能感覺出來重音是在03:44:807 -
18:40 spboxer3: 而前頭4個1/2,1/1感覺得出來是一組的
18:41 spboxer3: 所以我會建議改成我說的方式
18:43 spboxer3: 03:59:807 (4,5) - 如果你要這樣擺 那04:01:071 - 應該也要下個note 這樣才會符合這種節奏的sample 聽起來會順耳的多 如果要另外的擺法我會建議03:59:807 (4) - move到03:59:650 - & 04:00:439 (5) - ->04:00:281 -
18:44 spboxer3: 04:05:018 (5) - 是1/6不是1/8
18:44 zsr123: 恩 目前正在改 03:55:965的地方。。
18:44 zsr123: 03:35
18:45 spboxer3: 沒關係 我一直說下去 你可以慢慢改
18:45 zsr123: 好
18:45 spboxer3: 如果有問題可以跟我說 :P
18:45 zsr123: 恩
18:48 spboxer3: 我覺得Normal有點傷阿...
18:49 spboxer3: Hard:
18:50 spboxer3: 00:54:913 (2) - 感覺節奏多餘了 即使Taiko中這種做法很常見 但是這是standard 又加上這是首非常安靜的歌 因此不適合
18:51 zsr123: 是normal伤还是hard ? = =
18:51 spboxer3: 是Normal傷
18:51 spboxer3: Hard剛剛看auto感覺還OK
18:52 zsr123: 03:59:807 (4) - 04:00:439 (5) - 这2个我觉得不改比较好点= =
18:52 zsr123: 主要问题出在哪了? = =
18:52 zsr123: normal.
18:52 spboxer3: 那考慮在04:00:913 - 加個note??
18:52 spboxer3: 對 在Normal
18:53 spboxer3: 比較亂點
18:55 zsr123: 这个地方想保留= = 00:55:229 (2) - 音量降低至10%应该会好点
18:56 zsr123: 04:00:913 (6) - 04:01:071 (7) - 这2地方都加了note
18:57 spboxer3: 自創音效不能靜音或是接近聽不到
18:57 spboxer3: Orz...
18:57 zsr123: 居然有这种规定= =
18:57 spboxer3: 有
18:58 spboxer3: 只是因為不想改間距??
18:58 zsr123: 我觉得这样很好听呀= =
19:00 spboxer3: 不改沒關係 我只是說說我的意見
19:01 spboxer3: 01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 看得出來是種有想法的排列 可是感覺後頭萎了
19:02 spboxer3: 感覺是漸進式的增加 可是後頭的間距變小了
19:02 zsr123: 04:05:018 (5) - 正在修改。。
19:02 spboxer3: 沒關係 慢慢改 我先說~
19:05 spboxer3: 01:56:176 (3) - 我的看法-> 01:56:176 - &01:56:334 - 用note 然後01:56:492 - 開始slider 這樣會比較適合 看你決定吧
19:06 spboxer3: 02:02:334 (6) - 打法其實不是很好
19:08 spboxer3: 以玩家的角度來打這個pattern 02:02:334 - 用打擊點是適合的 但是02:02:492 - 也是重音而且比前頭更強 應該也要用打擊才對 可是用了slider reverse導致了只有音效 但沒有打擊感 強烈建議修改
19:09 spboxer3: 02:57:439 (3) - 同樣形狀問題 看你要不要改~
19:11 zsr123: 等等 有点乱= = 你现在说的是Hard吧?
19:11 spboxer3: 對 我剛剛寫Hard: 以下的都是Hard
19:12 zsr123: 好
19:12 spboxer3: 03:18:913 (7,8,9,10,11) - 這邊一樣 打擊感問題 click的時機都在1/4上 這樣會非常難打的 通常我們click的
19:13 spboxer3: 時機只有在1/1,1/2上
19:13 spboxer3: 1/4都是在連打部分使用
19:14 spboxer3: 03:24:281 (7,8) - 中間的03:24:597 - 感覺加個節奏會更好
19:15 spboxer3: 如果要加我會建議把8移到03:24:597 - 後頭再加上note 同樣是打擊點問題
19:17 zsr123: 01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个地方改成了 从1~9间距递增 应该行吧 话说有个note放在了x504 y88的位置 没问题吧??
19:18 spboxer3: 04:05:018 (5,1,2,3) - 這段節奏5的位置越線到開頭了 因此會產生1與2,3不連貫 而04:06:913 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 很明顯的就是一個梗 可因為前頭1的位置導致不一致
19:19 spboxer3: 剛剛那個1~11的部分等上傳後再看吧 你現在這樣說我不太清楚呢:<
19:19 zsr123: en
19:20 spboxer3: 04:35:965 (3,4,5,6) - 保持一直線??
19:21 spboxer3: 04:37:860 (7) - 別忘記對齊6
19:21 spboxer3: 對了 記得Hard 的NC也要重新看過
19:23 spboxer3: 再多找一些modder來看 之後找我recheck吧
Topic Starter
zsr123

spboxer3 wrote:

18:18 spboxer3: 00:30:913 (1,2) - [Normal]交換一下NC? 我覺得這個節奏的差距並沒有很大(可能你加NC的用意是為了補HP) 可是NC在後頭比較符合音樂 
18:18 spboxer3: 00:30:913 (1,2) - [Normal]交換一下NC? 我覺得這個節奏的差距並沒有很大(可能你加NC的用意是為了補HP) 可是NC在後頭比較符合音樂
18:19 zsr123: hao wo kan kan
18:20 spboxer3: 恩 話說拼音基本上我是看不懂的Orz... 盡量不要用拼音 雖然有些我能看懂Orz...
18:21 zsr123: 恩。。。 刚才输入法没切过来。。 其怪win8在这游戏里面切中文要按3次 切回英文却只按一次
18:21 spboxer3: 刪掉不常用的就好了
18:22 zsr123: 改好了 00:30:913 (4) - 取消了NC 00:32:492 (1) - NC
18:22 spboxer3: 話說win8有點厲害
18:22 zsr123: 就一个输入法。。
18:22 zsr123: win8 切输入法很麻烦。。 要设置成2种语言 而不是和以前 中文状态下 切换输入法的关闭
18:22 zsr123: 现在是切换 中文 和 英文= =
18:24 spboxer3: 01:25:544 (2,3) - ,01:27:123 (1,2) - 這種的我會建議盡量別overlaps
18:25 spboxer3: 能稍微分開點是沒關係的 就算spacing開了些 至少會比較乾淨
18:26 spboxer3: 01:29:650 (5,1,2,3) - 說實話 我的做法會讓
18:26 spboxer3: 會讓這些作出弧度
18:26 zsr123: 意思是那2个slider不要和note有重叠是吧?
18:26 spboxer3: 對
18:26 zsr123: 好
18:27 spboxer3: 我所說的弧度是指整齊的 不是像現在有地方很彎 但是有地方卻比較平滑
18:27 zsr123: 好
18:28 spboxer3: 01:41:650 (5) - NC在這01:43:544 (1) - 移除
18:28 zsr123: 我看看 该怎么摆 有辅助线就好了= =
18:28 spboxer3: 01:46:702 (3) - 01:48:597 (1) - 同上
18:29 spboxer3: 02:02:176 (5) - 02:03:755 (1) - ^
18:29 spboxer3: 後續不多說 稍微看一下吧 NC部分
18:30 zsr123: 恩
18:30 spboxer3: 舉例來說02:02:492 - 這位置是下一段的開始處 02:02:176 (5,6,7) - 卻是接續在一起的 於是我會把NC加在02:02:176 - 而不是02:03:755 -
18:30 spboxer3: 能懂我的意思
18:31 spboxer3: 你現在給人的感覺是NC超出界了
18:31 spboxer3: 上一段越線到下一個小節
18:32 spboxer3: 02:12:281 (5) - 這邊少了NC 記得補上
18:33 spboxer3: 話說你的Normal combo數好像都太長了點 記得注意一下 最好重新檢查過 我的建議是盡量別超過7 雖然有時候會有例外 這不是絕對的 但是通常Normal到7 combo已經很少見了
18:34 zsr123: 恩 我把全部的NC看一遍先。。。 貌似是我以前乱用NC了= = 没有跟着音乐的小节...
18:34 spboxer3: 02:57:439 (3) - 建議重拉lol 現在的slider比以前好看多 沒有大礙但是建議改一下
18:34 spboxer3: 如果你覺得現在就好也是可以的
18:35 spboxer3: 那NC部分我就先不說了
18:35 zsr123: 改过或许更好 我先试试
18:35 zsr123: 恩。。
18:35 spboxer3: 三個點就可以 不用用到4個
18:37 spboxer3: 03:23:334 (1,2,3,4) - 這種節奏在Normal裡很難讀懂 尤其是1/4的開頭要快不快要慢不慢 容易讓新手困惑 即使打了幾遍還是會覺得怪怪的
18:38 zsr123: 03:23:334 (1,2,3,4) - 那这里用spinner过渡下吧?
18:38 spboxer3: 03:35:965 (3,4,1) - 這種形狀實在有點怪怪的Orz... 考慮看看要不要做得有想法點 雖然這張2年了Orz... 可是以現在的技術來說感覺比較偏向隨手擺放的感覺
18:39 spboxer3: 好
18:39 spboxer3: 03:44:492 - note然後spinner延後至03:44:807 -
18:40 spboxer3: 這地方雖然節奏有變 但是還是能感覺出來重音是在03:44:807 -
18:40 spboxer3: 而前頭4個1/2,1/1感覺得出來是一組的
18:41 spboxer3: 所以我會建議改成我說的方式
18:43 spboxer3: 03:59:807 (4,5) - 如果你要這樣擺 那04:01:071 - 應該也要下個note 這樣才會符合這種節奏的sample 聽起來會順耳的多 如果要另外的擺法我會建議03:59:807 (4) - move到03:59:650 - & 04:00:439 (5) - ->04:00:281 -
18:44 spboxer3: 04:05:018 (5) - 是1/6不是1/8
18:44 zsr123: 恩 目前正在改 03:55:965的地方。。
18:44 zsr123: 03:35
18:45 spboxer3: 沒關係 我一直說下去 你可以慢慢改
18:45 zsr123: 好
18:45 spboxer3: 如果有問題可以跟我說 :P
18:45 zsr123: 恩
18:48 spboxer3: 我覺得Normal有點傷阿...
18:49 spboxer3: Hard:
18:50 spboxer3: 00:54:913 (2) - 感覺節奏多餘了 即使Taiko中這種做法很常見 但是這是standard 又加上這是首非常安靜的歌 因此不適合
18:51 zsr123: 是normal伤还是hard ? = =
18:51 spboxer3: 是Normal傷
18:51 spboxer3: Hard剛剛看auto感覺還OK
18:52 zsr123: 03:59:807 (4) - 04:00:439 (5) - 这2个我觉得不改比较好点= =
18:52 zsr123: 主要问题出在哪了? = =
18:52 zsr123: normal.
18:52 spboxer3: 那考慮在04:00:913 - 加個note??
18:52 spboxer3: 對 在Normal
18:53 spboxer3: 比較亂點
18:55 zsr123: 这个地方想保留= = 00:55:229 (2) - 音量降低至10%应该会好点
18:56 zsr123: 04:00:913 (6) - 04:01:071 (7) - 这2地方都加了note
18:57 spboxer3: 自創音效不能靜音或是接近聽不到
18:57 spboxer3: Orz...
18:57 zsr123: 居然有这种规定= =
18:57 spboxer3: 有
18:58 spboxer3: 只是因為不想改間距??
18:58 zsr123: 我觉得这样很好听呀= =
19:00 spboxer3: 不改沒關係 我只是說說我的意見
19:01 spboxer3: 01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 看得出來是種有想法的排列 可是感覺後頭萎了
19:02 spboxer3: 感覺是漸進式的增加 可是後頭的間距變小了
19:02 zsr123: 04:05:018 (5) - 正在修改。。
19:02 spboxer3: 沒關係 慢慢改 我先說~
19:05 spboxer3: 01:56:176 (3) - 我的看法-> 01:56:176 - &01:56:334 - 用note 然後01:56:492 - 開始slider 這樣會比較適合 看你決定吧
19:06 spboxer3: 02:02:334 (6) - 打法其實不是很好
19:08 spboxer3: 以玩家的角度來打這個pattern 02:02:334 - 用打擊點是適合的 但是02:02:492 - 也是重音而且比前頭更強 應該也要用打擊才對 可是用了slider reverse導致了只有音效 但沒有打擊感 強烈建議修改
19:09 spboxer3: 02:57:439 (3) - 同樣形狀問題 看你要不要改~
19:11 zsr123: 等等 有点乱= = 你现在说的是Hard吧?
19:11 spboxer3: 對 我剛剛寫Hard: 以下的都是Hard
19:12 zsr123: 好
19:12 spboxer3: 03:18:913 (7,8,9,10,11) - 這邊一樣 打擊感問題 click的時機都在1/4上 這樣會非常難打的 通常我們click的
19:13 spboxer3: 時機只有在1/1,1/2上
19:13 spboxer3: 1/4都是在連打部分使用
19:14 spboxer3: 03:24:281 (7,8) - 中間的03:24:597 - 感覺加個節奏會更好
19:15 spboxer3: 如果要加我會建議把8移到03:24:597 - 後頭再加上note 同樣是打擊點問題
19:17 zsr123: 01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个地方改成了 从1~9间距递增 应该行吧 话说有个note放在了x504 y88的位置 没问题吧??
19:18 spboxer3: 04:05:018 (5,1,2,3) - 這段節奏5的位置越線到開頭了 因此會產生1與2,3不連貫 而04:06:913 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 很明顯的就是一個梗 可因為前頭1的位置導致不一致
19:19 spboxer3: 剛剛那個1~11的部分等上傳後再看吧 你現在這樣說我不太清楚呢:<
19:19 zsr123: en
19:20 spboxer3: 04:35:965 (3,4,5,6) - 保持一直線??
19:21 spboxer3: 04:37:860 (7) - 別忘記對齊6
19:21 spboxer3: 對了 記得Hard 的NC也要重新看過
19:23 spboxer3: 再多找一些modder來看 之後找我recheck吧
谢谢 :)


edit : updated (2013/5/17 10:57)
MineC24
Modding queue~

imo, AR - 1

00:49:860 (4,5) - umm... avoid these please? (My thinking -> confuse..)
01:43:544 (1) - remove NC
01:48:597 (1) - ^
02:02:176 (1) - imo, remove NC and 02:02:492 (3) - add NC
02:02:492 (3,4) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766091 (02:03:755 (4)'s 3rd slider point -> x:280 y:232)
03:18:281 (4) - change by 01:29:650 (5)
04:13:860 (1) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/2Xdrt.jpg
00:27:755 (3,4) - avoid these
01:03:124 (6) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766098 (Blanket)
01:23:334 (5) - imo, NC
01:24:597 (9) - NC and 01:24:913 (1) - remove NC
02:51:597 (3) - imo, grid up
03:11:966 (5) - imo, NC
03:13:229 (9) - NC and 03:13:545 (1) - remove NC

GL :)
Topic Starter
zsr123

MineC24 wrote:

Modding queue~

imo, AR - 1 done

00:49:860 (4,5) - umm... avoid these please? (My thinking -> confuse..)
01:43:544 (1) - remove NC has made some changes around here
01:48:597 (1) - ^ done
02:02:176 (1) - imo, remove NC and 02:02:492 (3) - add NC done
02:02:492 (3,4) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766091 (02:03:755 (4)'s 3rd slider point -> x:280 y:232) done ;)
03:18:281 (4) - change by 01:29:650 (5)
04:13:860 (1) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/2Xdrt.jpgdone
00:27:755 (3,4) - avoid these
01:03:124 (6) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766098 (Blanket) done
01:23:334 (5) - imo, NC
01:24:597 (9) - NC and 01:24:913 (1) - remove NC
02:51:597 (3) - imo, grid up done
03:11:966 (5) - imo, NC
03:13:229 (9) - NC and 03:13:545 (1) - remove NC

GL :)
thank you :)


updated
OEvil
[Hi, From My Quene ]
Sorry My Mod Sucks

[Normal]
It was Good

[Hard]
- 00:41:334 (3) - Move to {x:392 y:208}.
- 00:41:650 (4) - Move to {x:352 y:120}.
- 03:28:545 (4) - Move to {x:356 y:288}.
- 03:28:703 (5) - Move to {x:396 y:252}.

Also Add More Difficulties
Topic Starter
zsr123

OEvil wrote:

[Hi, From My Quene ]
Sorry My Mod Sucks

[Normal]
It was Good

[Hard]
- 00:41:334 (3) - Move to {x:392 y:208}.
- 00:41:650 (4) - Move to {x:352 y:120}.
???



I changed these notes to slider , might be better


- 03:28:545 (4) - Move to {x:356 y:288}. done
- 03:28:703 (5) - Move to {x:396 y:252}.done

Also Add More Difficulties 2 diffs will be fine imo, because of this music. the easiest diff might not be very easy for new player, but if I make a easier diff than this one it would be boring to play imo,and it's very long. also this music it's not suitable for an Insane diff
thank you :D


updated
Verlaren
request via PM in game.

2013-05-31 12:39 zsr123: Hi,can you help mod my map ? :)
2013-05-31 12:40 Verlaren: hi. At the moment i accept request from my queue
2013-05-31 12:40 zsr123: I see, thanks . :)
2013-05-31 12:40 Verlaren: np
2013-05-31 12:42 Verlaren: you can try XD Read my rules and two latest posts
2013-05-31 12:43 zsr123: the map I want you to mod which the music is 95bpm x.x
2013-05-31 12:44 Verlaren: link pls
2013-05-31 12:45 zsr123: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/31535
2013-05-31 12:45 Verlaren: I want to listen to the song
2013-05-31 12:45 zsr123: ok, hope you like it ^.^
2013-05-31 12:47 Verlaren: Now i look at your map, wait pls
2013-05-31 12:48 zsr123: thank you :D
2013-05-31 12:48 Verlaren: go irc mod?
2013-05-31 12:49 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 12:49 Verlaren: let's go
2013-05-31 12:49 Verlaren: general --->
2013-05-31 12:50 Verlaren: first? deselect letterbox during breaks/ you haven't a storyboard
2013-05-31 12:50 Verlaren: ,*
2013-05-31 12:50 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 12:51 Verlaren: fine, next
2013-05-31 12:51 Verlaren: Normal
2013-05-31 12:52 Verlaren: OD -1 IMO
2013-05-31 12:52 zsr123: done
2013-05-31 12:52 Verlaren: 00:29:018 (4,5) - spacing error
2013-05-31 12:54 zsr123: it's ok here imo
2013-05-31 12:54 Verlaren: Slider velocity 1.70 too large for normal/ Change on 1 or 1.1
2013-05-31 12:54 Verlaren: 00:30:913 (5) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:55 Verlaren: sounds is reeally good
2013-05-31 12:55 Verlaren: 00:35:650 (4) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:55 zsr123: 1.7 is fine since bpm is very low looks like same speed with SV1 bpm 170+
2013-05-31 12:57 Verlaren: 00:41:018 (4) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:58 zsr123: sorry these finish sounds not good to me @ @
2013-05-31 12:59 Verlaren: it's a pity
2013-05-31 12:59 zsr123: not gonna add any finish before 01:06:913 (1) - @ @
2013-05-31 12:59 Verlaren: 00:51:123 (5) - remove whistle from tail
2013-05-31 13:00 Verlaren: 00:55:860 (3) - set volume - 20% rather than 40%
2013-05-31 13:00 Verlaren: is better
2013-05-31 13:01 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:01 Verlaren: 01:05:965 (5) - ^
2013-05-31 13:03 zsr123: maybe 30% sounds better
2013-05-31 13:05 Verlaren: 01:06:913 (1,2) - make a symmetrical sliders.
2013-05-31 13:06 Verlaren: 01:06:913 (1,2) - (1) touches reverse arrow (2)
2013-05-31 13:07 Verlaren: 01:26:176 (3,4,5) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:07 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:08 Verlaren: 01:25:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - uneven spacing between patterns. fix it
2013-05-31 13:09 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:09 Verlaren: 01:36:597 (1) - maybe add clap on slider's start?
2013-05-31 13:10 zsr123: sounds not good to me @ @
2013-05-31 13:11 Verlaren: 01:37:229 (2,3) - (2) touches (3)'s end. Replace 01:38:492 (3)
2013-05-31 13:11 Verlaren: 01:38:492 (3,1) - (3) touches reverse arrow (1)
2013-05-31 13:12 Verlaren: 01:55:544 (2) - move on x:263 y:63
2013-05-31 13:13 zsr123: i dont see any problem here . the arrow is visible clearly
2013-05-31 13:13 Verlaren: IMO, lol )
2013-05-31 13:14 zsr123: 01:55:544 (2) - done
2013-05-31 13:14 Verlaren: 02:05:965 (2) - too many reverses, try to find something else here
2013-05-31 13:15 Verlaren: 02:40:386 (3) - remove whistle, add finish (slider's start point)
2013-05-31 13:16 Verlaren: 02:41:650 (4) - bad idea. slider's end is hidden
2013-05-31 13:17 Verlaren: 02:56:807 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing between patterns. fix it
2013-05-31 13:17 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:19 Verlaren: 03:44:807 (1) - spinner must be started on 03:44:492
2013-05-31 13:20 Verlaren: 04:09:439 (2,3) - move on two grids down
2013-05-31 13:21 Verlaren: 04:34:386 (2,3) - hard for normal. Change on slider
2013-05-31 13:22 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:22 Verlaren: 04:39:191 (1) - must be ended on 04:44:830
2013-05-31 13:23 Verlaren: That's all for normal, Hard -->
2013-05-31 13:23 Verlaren: When you're done, tell me
2013-05-31 13:24 zsr123: ok ready for hard
2013-05-31 13:25 Verlaren: let's go
2013-05-31 13:26 Verlaren: 00:30:913 (3,4,5) - make a symmetrical tringle
2013-05-31 13:26 Verlaren: 00:38:176 (2,3,4) - ^
2013-05-31 13:27 Verlaren: 00:55:860 (5) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:27 Verlaren: 01:05:966 (3,4,5) - ^
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:10:703 (1,2,3,4) - make a symmetrical square
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:26:176 (4,5,6) - volume
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:29:334 (1) - ^
2013-05-31 13:29 Verlaren: 01:34:386 (1,2,3) - maybe stack this patterns?
2013-05-31 13:29 Verlaren: 01:35:649 (5,6) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:30 Verlaren: 01:44:492 (7) - move on x:316 y:344
2013-05-31 13:31 zsr123: most of these were done
2013-05-31 13:32 Verlaren: 01:47:334 (1,3,5) - remake sliders. Use new 3-point system and make them symmetrical
2013-05-31 13:32 Verlaren: 01:53:649 (5) - remake slider
2013-05-31 13:33 Verlaren: 01:58:703 (3) - move to x:68 y:232
2013-05-31 13:34 Verlaren: 02:02:334 (5,1) - Is not good idea. Unstack pls
2013-05-31 13:35 Verlaren: 02:15:439 (3,4) - (3) touches reverse arrow (4)
2013-05-31 13:37 Verlaren: 02:36:913 (3,4,5,6) - change on --> http://puu.sh/353Et.jpg
2013-05-31 13:37 Verlaren: and remake 02:37:860 (6)
2013-05-31 13:38 Verlaren: 02:42:597 (4) - move on x:208 y:108
2013-05-31 13:39 Verlaren: 03:06:913 (1) - make a clear slider
2013-05-31 13:40 Verlaren: 03:25:229 (1,2,3,4) - why silince?
2013-05-31 13:41 Verlaren: 03:46:071 (1,3) - i recommend remake this sliders, they is not beautiful
2013-05-31 13:42 Verlaren: 03:57:439 (3) - i suggest remake this slider
2013-05-31 13:43 Verlaren: 04:13:860 (3) - use new system and make clear slider
2013-05-31 13:44 Verlaren: 04:44:830 - add note with finish
2013-05-31 13:44 zsr123: ok, i'll remake these slider after you finish modding , and may I ask where I can find the new system you mention ? @ @
2013-05-31 13:45 Verlaren: simply make new slider with 3 points
2013-05-31 13:46 Verlaren: of course if you make a simple slider )
2013-05-31 13:47 zsr123: ok :p
2013-05-31 13:47 Verlaren: That's all, good luck. And if you have a questions, you can ask me XD
2013-05-31 13:47 zsr123: ok thank you very much :D
Topic Starter
zsr123

Verlaren wrote:

request via PM in game.

2013-05-31 12:39 zsr123: Hi,can you help mod my map ? :)
2013-05-31 12:40 Verlaren: hi. At the moment i accept request from my queue
2013-05-31 12:40 zsr123: I see, thanks . :)
2013-05-31 12:40 Verlaren: np
2013-05-31 12:42 Verlaren: you can try XD Read my rules and two latest posts
2013-05-31 12:43 zsr123: the map I want you to mod which the music is 95bpm x.x
2013-05-31 12:44 Verlaren: link pls
2013-05-31 12:45 zsr123: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/31535
2013-05-31 12:45 Verlaren: I want to listen to the song
2013-05-31 12:45 zsr123: ok, hope you like it ^.^
2013-05-31 12:47 Verlaren: Now i look at your map, wait pls
2013-05-31 12:48 zsr123: thank you :D
2013-05-31 12:48 Verlaren: go irc mod?
2013-05-31 12:49 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 12:49 Verlaren: let's go
2013-05-31 12:49 Verlaren: general --->
2013-05-31 12:50 Verlaren: first? deselect letterbox during breaks/ you haven't a storyboard
2013-05-31 12:50 Verlaren: ,*
2013-05-31 12:50 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 12:51 Verlaren: fine, next
2013-05-31 12:51 Verlaren: Normal
2013-05-31 12:52 Verlaren: OD -1 IMO
2013-05-31 12:52 zsr123: done
2013-05-31 12:52 Verlaren: 00:29:018 (4,5) - spacing error
2013-05-31 12:54 zsr123: it's ok here imo
2013-05-31 12:54 Verlaren: Slider velocity 1.70 too large for normal/ Change on 1 or 1.1
2013-05-31 12:54 Verlaren: 00:30:913 (5) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:55 Verlaren: sounds is reeally good
2013-05-31 12:55 Verlaren: 00:35:650 (4) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:55 zsr123: 1.7 is fine since bpm is very low looks like same speed with SV1 bpm 170+
2013-05-31 12:57 Verlaren: 00:41:018 (4) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:58 zsr123: sorry these finish sounds not good to me @ @
2013-05-31 12:59 Verlaren: it's a pity
2013-05-31 12:59 zsr123: not gonna add any finish before 01:06:913 (1) - @ @
2013-05-31 12:59 Verlaren: 00:51:123 (5) - remove whistle from tail
2013-05-31 13:00 Verlaren: 00:55:860 (3) - set volume - 20% rather than 40%
2013-05-31 13:00 Verlaren: is better
2013-05-31 13:01 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:01 Verlaren: 01:05:965 (5) - ^
2013-05-31 13:03 zsr123: maybe 30% sounds better
2013-05-31 13:05 Verlaren: 01:06:913 (1,2) - make a symmetrical sliders.
2013-05-31 13:06 Verlaren: 01:06:913 (1,2) - (1) touches reverse arrow (2)
2013-05-31 13:07 Verlaren: 01:26:176 (3,4,5) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:07 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:08 Verlaren: 01:25:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - uneven spacing between patterns. fix it
2013-05-31 13:09 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:09 Verlaren: 01:36:597 (1) - maybe add clap on slider's start?
2013-05-31 13:10 zsr123: sounds not good to me @ @
2013-05-31 13:11 Verlaren: 01:37:229 (2,3) - (2) touches (3)'s end. Replace 01:38:492 (3)
2013-05-31 13:11 Verlaren: 01:38:492 (3,1) - (3) touches reverse arrow (1)
2013-05-31 13:12 Verlaren: 01:55:544 (2) - move on x:263 y:63
2013-05-31 13:13 zsr123: i dont see any problem here . the arrow is visible clearly
2013-05-31 13:13 Verlaren: IMO, lol )
2013-05-31 13:14 zsr123: 01:55:544 (2) - done
2013-05-31 13:14 Verlaren: 02:05:965 (2) - too many reverses, try to find something else here
2013-05-31 13:15 Verlaren: 02:40:386 (3) - remove whistle, add finish (slider's start point)
2013-05-31 13:16 Verlaren: 02:41:650 (4) - bad idea. slider's end is hidden
2013-05-31 13:17 Verlaren: 02:56:807 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing between patterns. fix it
2013-05-31 13:17 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:19 Verlaren: 03:44:807 (1) - spinner must be started on 03:44:492
2013-05-31 13:20 Verlaren: 04:09:439 (2,3) - move on two grids down
2013-05-31 13:21 Verlaren: 04:34:386 (2,3) - hard for normal. Change on slider
2013-05-31 13:22 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:22 Verlaren: 04:39:191 (1) - must be ended on 04:44:830
2013-05-31 13:23 Verlaren: That's all for normal, Hard -->
2013-05-31 13:23 Verlaren: When you're done, tell me
2013-05-31 13:24 zsr123: ok ready for hard
2013-05-31 13:25 Verlaren: let's go
2013-05-31 13:26 Verlaren: 00:30:913 (3,4,5) - make a symmetrical tringle
2013-05-31 13:26 Verlaren: 00:38:176 (2,3,4) - ^
2013-05-31 13:27 Verlaren: 00:55:860 (5) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:27 Verlaren: 01:05:966 (3,4,5) - ^
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:10:703 (1,2,3,4) - make a symmetrical square
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:26:176 (4,5,6) - volume
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:29:334 (1) - ^
2013-05-31 13:29 Verlaren: 01:34:386 (1,2,3) - maybe stack this patterns?
2013-05-31 13:29 Verlaren: 01:35:649 (5,6) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:30 Verlaren: 01:44:492 (7) - move on x:316 y:344
2013-05-31 13:31 zsr123: most of these were done
2013-05-31 13:32 Verlaren: 01:47:334 (1,3,5) - remake sliders. Use new 3-point system and make them symmetrical
2013-05-31 13:32 Verlaren: 01:53:649 (5) - remake slider
2013-05-31 13:33 Verlaren: 01:58:703 (3) - move to x:68 y:232
2013-05-31 13:34 Verlaren: 02:02:334 (5,1) - Is not good idea. Unstack pls
2013-05-31 13:35 Verlaren: 02:15:439 (3,4) - (3) touches reverse arrow (4)
2013-05-31 13:37 Verlaren: 02:36:913 (3,4,5,6) - change on --> http://puu.sh/353Et.jpg
2013-05-31 13:37 Verlaren: and remake 02:37:860 (6)
2013-05-31 13:38 Verlaren: 02:42:597 (4) - move on x:208 y:108
2013-05-31 13:39 Verlaren: 03:06:913 (1) - make a clear slider
2013-05-31 13:40 Verlaren: 03:25:229 (1,2,3,4) - why silince?
2013-05-31 13:41 Verlaren: 03:46:071 (1,3) - i recommend remake this sliders, they is not beautiful
2013-05-31 13:42 Verlaren: 03:57:439 (3) - i suggest remake this slider
2013-05-31 13:43 Verlaren: 04:13:860 (3) - use new system and make clear slider
2013-05-31 13:44 Verlaren: 04:44:830 - add note with finish
2013-05-31 13:44 zsr123: ok, i'll remake these slider after you finish modding , and may I ask where I can find the new system you mention ? @ @
2013-05-31 13:45 Verlaren: simply make new slider with 3 points
2013-05-31 13:46 Verlaren: of course if you make a simple slider )
2013-05-31 13:47 zsr123: ok :p
2013-05-31 13:47 Verlaren: That's all, good luck. And if you have a questions, you can ask me XD
2013-05-31 13:47 zsr123: ok thank you very much :D
thanks :)


updated
Zero__wind
Hi :3 from my queue. Sorry for the delay

Hard
00:27:755 (3,4) - make them seperate may be better
00:35:650 (1,2,3) - recommended to follow the more noticeable melody in the background, this current one is kindda hard to catch
01:08:176 (1) - unneccessary NC
01:24:597 (9,1,2,3) - too close. The hitsound is still loud then I think it means that it's still in a strong part, then you should still use larger spacing to fit
01:44:807 (8,1) - make them seperate would look better, forget about the distance snap, this is a Hard
01:48:281 (2) - seems should be up 1 grid
02:01:860 (4,5,1,2) - a bit confusing to be in this diff, avoid stacking may be better
02:46:703 (2,3) - maybe make them a blancket
03:13:860 (2,3) - make them further from each other
03:42:281 (6,7) - ^
04:28:386 (4) - NC

Normal
CS3 plz
01:16:702 (3,4,1) - omg this is not recommended to be in a Normal, though you may say the BPM is low. Also other similar ones
01:34:702 (1) - this is too short to be in a Normal diff. Also other similar ones. 03:54:597 (1) - this length is ok

that's all
good luck
Topic Starter
zsr123

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 from my queue. Sorry for the delay

Hard
00:27:755 (3,4) - make them seperate may be better done
00:35:650 (1,2,3) - recommended to follow the more noticeable melody in the background, this current one is kindda hard to catch
01:08:176 (1) - unneccessary NC NC removed
01:24:597 (9,1,2,3) - too close. The hitsound is still loud then I think it means that it's still in a strong part, then you should still use larger spacing to fitdone
01:44:807 (8,1) - make them seperate would look better, forget about the distance snap, this is a Harddone
01:48:281 (2) - seems should be up 1 griddone
02:01:860 (4,5,1,2) - a bit confusing to be in this diff, avoid stacking may be betternow 1 stacks with 2,might be better imo
02:46:703 (2,3) - maybe make them a blancket
03:13:860 (2,3) - make them further from each other
03:42:281 (6,7) - ^
04:28:386 (4) - NC done

Normal
CS3 plz circle size ? it's 3
01:16:702 (3,4,1) - omg this is not recommended to be in a Normal, though you may say the BPM is low. Also other similar ones removed a note
01:34:702 (1) - this is too short to be in a Normal diff. Also other similar ones. 03:54:597 (1) - this length is ok fixed

that's all
good luck
thank you

updated 2013/6/10 10:08
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