Xinely wrote:

hello

General :
- maybe add soft-sliderslide if u want, begining part like 00:00:878 (1) - sounds so noisy // yeah, it sounds noisy. Added.

Easy :
- 00:04:707 (2) - maybe u want nc this since the music pattern is changed (and consistent with normal diff) // Since I do not prefer a single object combo in lower diffs, I'd like to keep the current combo.
- 00:09:175 (2) - end the slider at 00:09:814 - and circle for 00:10:133 - to keep consistency with 00:06:622 (2,3) - ? // This is some internal structure I've organized based on what I felt with the song. I've consistently expressed the concept at 01:09:814 (1,2,3).
- 00:14:920 (2) - try keep 1,0x spacing to next slider. its possible or if you follow guitar then 00:15:878 - this still can be mapped as well // Regarding 0.9x spacings, those are an intentional setting because usually longer spacings are difficult for beginners. Lowering the spacing would give a less pressure for aiming. Wanted to emphasize with the drums here.
- 00:24:016 - i think the blank is quite long here maybe add a manual break or map 00:25:133 - with 3/2 slider repeat? // Added a repeat at the previous slider to avoid the break while drum beats were ongoing.
- 00:28:963 (1) - 0,92x spacing
- 00:38:218 (3) - extend ur slider to 00:38:697 - so it follows vocal and the gap is 1/1 instead of 3/2? // I feel this kind of stuff to be a preference issue.
- 00:40:771 (3) - 00:48:431 (3) - 00:50:983 (3) - same with above if u agree
- 00:44:282 (1) - 00:54:495 (1) - 0,92x spacing
- 01:04:069 (3) - whistle to emphasis that instrument // Thanks for telling the inconsistency with insane. Fixed.
- 01:12:048 - make a blank here is somehow empty with someone, maybe add a circle? consistency like with 01:09:175 (4) - // as mentioned above, I'd prefer the current rhythm as what I felt in this song.

Normal :
- 00:02:154 - add note for guitar too? // With the instruments I'm expressing, adding a note would break consistency.
- 00:16:197 - drum finish for consistency with insane diff // thx
- 00:23:856 (3) - nc for consistency // I'd like it to be in the same combo since as you can see, this is a 90 degree rotated pattern afterall.
- since you follow drum on this part, 00:26:090 - map with 1/2 slider for emphasis the music as well? // Blanks are also a technique to place an emphasis on objects and that's how I did here.
- 00:34:707 (1) - why this slider doesnt follow vocal when you follow vocal so much on prev? imo http://puu.sh/trwgw/24f99bc9d7.jpg this can work well // Since this part is the transition before the kiai, this was how I wanted to do stuffs. Also if you see enh, you'll notice these were all consistently done.
- 00:45:878 (4) - imo this can be harder, with you follow drums or vocals, maybe try 2 of 1/2 sliders? // The background musics are out, I'd like to keep this simple.
- 00:56:090 - add note too for vocal? // Seeming how I mapped in hard, it wouldn't be possible for consistency issue.
- 01:04:069 - whistle for emphasis instrument // yes
- 01:26:888 (4) - this can be harder as well imo with emphasis vocal at 01:27:207 - too, try shorter the slider at that vocal and add a circle on whitetick? // If you see how the map ends by difficulty, easy just ends with a slider end, and h&i ends with two 1/2 notes stacked. As a normal difficulty, I thought just doing giving a single 1/2 click after the slider would be the best to create a linear difficulty curve.

Hard :
- 00:02:633 - i think you need to map this too because that sound is same with 00:02:314 (4) - // To emphasize the drums at the purple square, leaving it unmapped felt more effective for me.
- 00:18:750 - add note for consistency with 00:21:303 - ? // You will notice this pattern is similar with insane. I've left there unmapped to make it less difficult than insane.
- 00:25:133 (1) - change to 1/4 slider repeat and add circle on whitetick? to make some thing like 00:15:558 (2,3) - // 1/4 slider is a rare concept in this difficulty, and appears only at special consistent spots of 00:15:718 (3) - 01:17:154 (4). Making here also a 1/4 reverse would make the other two lose its emphasis.
- 00:26:090 - just suggestion but you can 1/4 slider repeat here if want to emphasis the drums
- 00:30:239 (3,4) - since most rhythms of your are about vocal, how about swap rhythm here for follow vocal better? // Made the pattern to follow the vocals better.
- 00:36:303 - add note too for continue the drum from 00:36:143 (2) - ? // emphasis blank.
- 01:04:069 - whistle // yes
- 01:02:792 (3) - only my taste tho since this can be possible to make jump, try ctrl+g? it can improve flow too // Since this diff isn't really jumpy at all, I wouldn't like to insert one.
- 01:20:186 (2) - maybe move to 464,128 to improve flow? i just feel weird to see different flow from 01:20:186 (2,3) - when rest is straight flow here // 01:20:026 (1,2) is meant to be a mirrored flow of 01:19:547 (2,3) so I'd like to keep this.
- 01:21:941 - maybe keep map this because its weird if you skip piano suddenly // blank for a vocal transition.
- 01:23:218 (3) - similar with 01:02:792 (3) - , just personal taste tho

Insane :
- lower your OD like 7? imo OD 8 CS 5 is too cruel for insane diff // 7 is too less challenging on this kind of diff.
- 00:30:080 (6,1) - maybe swap nc for consistency? // Oh.... thanks!
- 01:03:271 (3) - maybe ctrl+g to keep the flow. i mean zig zag one (from left to right then right to left again) // The current flow is the one I'd like to express.

ok should be all

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