00:03:537 - 00:08:715 - May want to have this all as a downwards staircase with quarter doubles. If you reference pporse's 7k, you'll notice the intro does just this for good reason. Melodically, it makes sense. -
I want to keep the jumps on every red tick to emphasise them, but I made all go leftwards.00:08:983 (8983|2) - Make this a double for consistency reasons.
00:14:697 (14697|2) - If you choose not to jack, make this a double for consistency.
Both of these aren't jumps because it would make an extremely awkward minijack which I don't really want to do.00:08:715 (8715|1,8715|0,8804|3,8804|2,8894|0,8894|1,8983|2,9072|0,9072|3,9161|2,9161|1,9251|3,9251|0,9340|2,9340|1,9429|0,9429|3) - To be honest, I'd double jack this section like so.
https://puu.sh/tUHcg/75076e3319.png It seems more fitting, and makes sense versus the current setup. You could also do
https://puu.sh/tUHiI/96c1b9d72f.png something like that, or singles. This one is up to you, and if you feel it fits however.
00:14:429 (14429|3,14429|0,14519|2,14519|1,14608|0,14608|3,14697|2,14786|0,14786|1,14876|3,14876|2,14965|1,14965|0,15054|2,15054|3,15144|0,15144|1) - Same as before. I feel that jacks fit here better.
00:31:572 (31572|3,31572|0,31661|2,31661|1,31751|3,31751|0,31840|2,31929|1,31929|0,32019|2,32019|3,32108|0,32108|1,32197|3,32197|2,32286|0,32286|1) - Same thing as the other sections like this.
00:37:286 (37286|0,37286|3,37376|1,37376|2,37465|3,37465|0,37554|2,37644|1,37644|0,37733|2,37733|3,37822|0,37822|1,37911|3,37911|2,38001|1,38001|0) - Same thing as the other sections like this.
00:48:715 (48715|0,48715|3,48804|2,48804|1,48894|3,48894|0,48983|1,49072|2,49072|3,49161|1,49161|0,49251|2,49251|3,49340|1,49340|0,49429|3,49429|2,49519|1,49608|2,49608|3) - Same thing as other sections like this.
01:40:144 (100144|3,100144|0,100233|2,100233|1,100322|3,100322|0,100411|2,100501|1,100501|0,100590|2,100590|3,100679|0,100679|1,100769|3,100769|2,100858|0,100858|1) - The usual here.
01:45:858 (105858|3,105858|2,105947|1,105947|0,106036|3,106036|2,106126|1,106215|3,106215|0,106304|1,106304|2,106394|0,106394|3,106483|2,106483|1,106572|0,106572|3) - Usual advice with this stuff.
01:51:483 (111483|3,111572|0,111572|2,111661|3,111661|1,111751|0,111751|2,111840|1,111929|3,111929|2,112019|0,112019|1,112108|3,112108|2,112197|1,112197|0,112286|2,112286|3) - The usual complaint here.
I really don't like putting jacks here mostly because the song is so soft that jacks just feel wrong and out of place unless they're consistent throughout the whole map which isn't the mapping style I went for.00:09:519 - 00:14:429 - It seems like here, your alternations of your staircases switch at awkward and random times. Consider switching them every half beat, when the melody calls for it.
00:20:947 - 00:25:679 - Your staircases are everywhere! Make them organized and consistent with the others.
No staircase here just a light jumpstream?00:15:233 - 00:20:144 - Your staircases should be downwards again here as well.
00:26:572 - 00:31:572 - Your staircases should be downwards again here as well.
00:38:090 - 00:43:001 - Needs downwards staircases to fit the music.
00:49:429 (49429|3,49429|2,49519|1,49608|2,49608|3) - Staircases should resume here.
01:35:144 - 01:40:144 - Downwards staircases here.
01:46:661 - 01:51:483 - Downwards staircases.
This gets boring really quickly and when it's going on for a while it's becomes awkward to play and change from00:25:679 (25679|3,25769|1,25858|0,25858|2,25947|3,25947|1,26036|2,26036|0,26126|1) - This pattern looks really messy. Change to something like this?
https://puu.sh/tUHV9/e851abab39.png 00:42:644 (42644|1,42644|3,42733|2,42822|3,42822|1,42911|0,43001|1,43001|3,43090|2,43090|0,43179|3,43179|1,43269|2) - This seems really awkward for someone to play.
01:51:483 (111483|3,111572|2,111572|0,111661|1,111661|3,111751|2,111751|0,111840|1) - This is usually super awkward and messy to play in short bursts. Change to something else?
It's just an ordinary double trill it's common in jumpstream maps? it plays fine esp on this low bpm00:26:229 - Just some ideas, if you could get someone to SV these four notes properly, it would be rad. -
Nice idea!00:43:001 - Alright, this part is confusing. Directly before the melody change, you have the same pattern, and it continues, before switching again. Change either the pattern here, or the one before it. -
There is a beat in the background that starts to build up here.00:49:429 - 01:29:519 - The music reaaaaally focuses on those melodic LNs, so I HIGHLY suggest adding those here. If you don't the staircases here need to be desperately organized like the others. -
It's a jumpstream map so adding LN's with the jumpstream would be... disgusting to say the least and i don't really want to map the LN and just ignore other beats, keeping this as a jumpstream map sorry.01:31:036 (91036|0,91036|3) - This beat should be at 01:30:860 -
Nice catch!01:42:286 (102286|3,102286|2) - Consider making this a triple due to the heavy piano notes.
01:43:001 (103001|3,103001|1) - Same thing.
01:43:715 (103715|0,103715|1) - Same thing.
01:45:144 (105144|0,105144|1) - Same thing.
If I did this I'd have to make the jumpstream after this into a handstream to keep it consistent and I prefer it to just be a jumpstream, they're already emphasized with the jumps anyways01:52:286 - 01:54:965 - The drum notes switch really rapidly here. Consider keeping the pattern together fora couple beats before changing pattern. -
Changes when the new beat starts01:55:054 (115054|2) - Make this a double for consistency. -
It's still building up into the jumptrill here