Hi, m4m from your q! Sorry for 1 day delay plz
General:
Advanced:
Hobbes2's Another:
Liiraye's Extra
I really can't find anything in highest difficulties, sorry plzzz
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/625702
This mapset is awesome, GL!
General:
- Try moving your offset by +6, ( 440 ) seems a little bit better
- Maybe try to lower video "weight"? 20 Mb is too heavy imo
- Check Widescreen Support through all diffs
- SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 in .osu is kinda strange, fix it? Though I think you choosed too fast slider velocity for lowest diff in mapset, but this is only my feeling
- 00:01:283 (2,2,2,2) - Maybe make them identical or like use 2 forms? As these sliders represent similar sounds
- 00:09:490 (1,2) - uhh blanket can be better ( Also 00:05:811 (2,1,2) - 00:08:500 (3,4) - 00:20:103 (4,1) - 00:27:603 (1,2) - 00:34:396 (3,4) - 00:37:084 (2,3) - ( <-- This especially ) 00:54:773 (1,2) - 01:06:094 (1,3) - 01:12:886 (1,2) - ( <-- This too ) 01:29:867 (2,3) - 02:02:981 (1,2) - )
- 00:26:471 (3,4) - These are too different sounds, maybe show it by using 2 different sliders? ( Same here 01:10:622 (1,2) - and here 01:28:735 (1,2) - 01:37:792 (1,2) -
- 00:27:037 (4,2) - Make a stack maybe? Alsom you could try to stack 00:25:339 (1,1) - these too
- 00:33:264 (2,3) - Maybe try to blanket them? As you used many blankets before it wouldn't hurt map's structure
- 00:49:113 (3,3) - You can represent this break in music by using some sliders with non standart form like https://puu.sh/wFznF/017321e1fb.png
- 01:01:000 (4) - Spacing error
- 01:11:754 (2,3) - Try to stack?
- 01:17:132 (4,3) - Try to avoid this overlap ( though it's easy )
- 02:01:566 (1) - Cool!
- 02:12:603 (2,2,2,2) - Oh you did what I wrote in about these sliders here lol why not making the same in the beginning?
Advanced:
- 00:02:556 - Maybe place circle here? Same goes for 00:07:084 - 02:13:877 - 02:18:405 -
- Blankets that can be improved (or objects that can be mapped as blankets): 00:03:264 (3,5) - 00:04:679 (7,1) - 00:55:198 (2,4) - 00:56:471 (6,1) - 01:06:660 (3,4) - 01:16:849 (6,1) - 01:35:528 (1,4) - 01:37:792 (1,2) - 01:56:754 (3,4) - 02:15:292 (5,6) -
- 00:11:047 (5,6) - Spacong error
- 00:14:584 (2,5) - Stack them?
- 00:17:415 (1,2,3) - 1/3 in Advanced is kinda uhh but difference in spacing bothering me more
- 00:24:207 (4) - I would put here same 1/2 slider as you did 00:23:075 (1,1) - here, because sound is very strong
- 00:40:622 (5) - Highly recommend to make 2 1/2 sliders here, otherwise you miss strong sound on 00:40:905 -
- 00:52:509 (1,2,3) - Maybe try this thythm instead? https://puu.sh/wFBWQ/811dc8d147.png Circle with your rhythm supports pretty weak sound imo
- 01:04:254 - I would make here a circle, though you did it 01:06:094 (1,2,3) - here
- 01:46:424 - Make a circle?
- 02:02:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can't really catch what you are following here.. Try my rhythm, it seems much better with that https://puu.sh/wFCfE/b6769cf9d6.png
- 00:01:000 (3,5) - Why no blanket(
- 00:03:264 (4,5) - They aren't fully parallel, fix it
- 00:08:924 (7) - NC?
- 00:48:405 (2,3) - Maybe space 00:48:688 (3) - this circle out? Because you did stack in previous pattern with 1/2 gap in between, this could prevent reading difficulties
- 00:51:801 (3,4) - Why no stack like 00:47:273 (3,4) - here?
- 01:02:698 (3,2) - Try to stack?
- 01:53:641 (1) - Inconsistency in NC placement with 00:18:547 (4) -
- 02:06:943 (8) - Give this slider some new shape as it represents different sound
- 02:08:924 (3,2) - Try to avoid this overlap
- You mapped 00:00:434 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section in the beginning, maybe map same in the end for consistency?
Hobbes2's Another:
- Check blankets: 00:11:047 (2,3) - 01:15:433 (3,5) -
- 00:00:434 (1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm you are trying to follow isn't right. Music pattern here is like https://puu.sh/wFLjG/bd17c05ddf.png
- 00:16:849 (1,1) - Kinda strange that you make here bigger spacing than 00:08:924 (1,1) - here, though sounds in 2nd situation is louder than in 1st
- 00:26:471 (1) - Too passive slider imo, you could try something like 2 1/2 sliders and circle here
- 01:01:566 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try my rhythm instead, it follows main sounds imo https://puu.sh/wFLAE/b77501fc37.png
- 01:17:839 (1,1,1,1,1) - Better show some difference between 1/1 and 1/2 rhythms here
- 01:46:000 (1) - Stack is broken, though same suggestion here ^
- set kiais pls
- 01:27:886 (2) - Stack is broken
Liiraye's Extra
- 00:17:415 (1,1) - Why they aren't stacked like all next sliders? This may cause reading difficulties
I really can't find anything in highest difficulties, sorry plzzz
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/625702
This mapset is awesome, GL!