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Rawtekk - Amber's Love Was Like A Marble (Billain Remix) [Ca

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Spectator
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018년 3월 21일 수요일 at 오후 1:23:52

Artist: Rawtekk
Title: Amber's Love Was Like A Marble (Billain Remix)
Tags: dubstep neurofunk dnb drum and bass
BPM: 172
Filesize: 13148kb
Play Time: 05:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Love (5.83 stars, 1051 notes)
Download: Rawtekk - Amber's Love Was Like A Marble (Billain Remix)
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Amber's Love Was Like A Marble (Billain Remix)



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♥ Nominated by Sorcerer and Ascendance
Last edited by Spectator , edited 55 times in total.
CLSW
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[Love]
01:31:552 (5) - 이거 길이를 조금 더 길게 하시면 01:31:290 (4) - 의 하이퍼대시 받고 오른쪽 키 쭉 누르고 있는 상태에서도 쉬프트 탭만으로 처리가 가능해서 좀 더 재밌을거같네요
01:45:593 (4,5) - 조금 흐트러진 형태인데 이 부분 정돈해주시는게 어떨지
01:57:279 (1,2) - 1에서 2로 가는 흐름이 지금까지의 역동적인 움직임과는 갭이 있네요. 개인적으로는 (2)를 우측 코너에 배치하는 형태로 만들어두시면 좋을 것 같습니다
02:12:628 (1) - 이거 노랑틱에 끝나는데 혹시 의도하신건지
03:45:854 (3,1) - 이것 역시 01:57:279 (1,2) - 처럼 (1)을 반대편에 놓으시면 좋을 것 같습니다
04:02:511 (1) - 어정쩡한 고각도 슬라이더보다는 그냥 쭉 왼편에서 오른편으로 가는 슬라이더가 흐름 상 좋아보이네요
05:08:442 (1) - 하이퍼대시 들어가있는게 어울려보여요
:idea:
Spectator
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CLSW wrote:

[Love]
01:31:552 (5) - 이거 길이를 조금 더 길게 하시면 01:31:290 (4) - 의 하이퍼대시 받고 오른쪽 키 쭉 누르고 있는 상태에서도 쉬프트 탭만으로 처리가 가능해서 좀 더 재밌을거같네요
01:45:593 (4,5) - 조금 흐트러진 형태인데 이 부분 정돈해주시는게 어떨지
01:57:279 (1,2) - 1에서 2로 가는 흐름이 지금까지의 역동적인 움직임과는 갭이 있네요. 개인적으로는 (2)를 우측 코너에 배치하는 형태로 만들어두시면 좋을 것 같습니다
02:12:628 (1) - 이거 노랑틱에 끝나는데 혹시 의도하신건지
03:45:854 (3,1) - 이것 역시 01:57:279 (1,2) - 처럼 (1)을 반대편에 놓으시면 좋을 것 같습니다
04:02:511 (1) - 어정쩡한 고각도 슬라이더보다는 그냥 쭉 왼편에서 오른편으로 가는 슬라이더가 흐름 상 좋아보이네요
05:08:442 (1) - 하이퍼대시 들어가있는게 어울려보여요
:idea:
노랑틱에 끝나는 슬라이더 제외 전부 수정했습니다
감사합니다
Ascendance
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Ascendance
will it happen
Ascendance
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Ascendance
Call me when you’re ready :)
Spectator
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log
2018-03-13 11:04 Ascendance: ab
2018-03-13 11:05 Spectator: ㅁ
2018-03-13 11:06 Ascendance: y is it overdrive the old name was better
2018-03-13 11:06 Spectator: what was it
2018-03-13 11:06 Spectator: oh love
2018-03-13 11:06 Ascendance: Love
2018-03-13 11:07 Spectator: updated
2018-03-13 11:07 Ascendance: okokok
2018-03-13 11:09 Ascendance: tags would be nice
2018-03-13 11:09 Ascendance: dubstep neurofunk dnb drum and bass
2018-03-13 11:09 Ascendance: etc
2018-03-13 11:09 Ascendance: normal-hitfinish2.wav
2018-03-13 11:09 Ascendance: unused hs
2018-03-13 11:10 Spectator: o
2018-03-13 11:10 Spectator: both fixed
2018-03-13 11:10 Ascendance: 01:13:936 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - remove hdashes here i think
2018-03-13 11:10 Ascendance: it's inconsistent rn with the others
2018-03-13 11:11 Ascendance: (im modding btw before you update w)
2018-03-13 11:11 Spectator: ah I think it's fine because pitch is gettin higher at that part
2018-03-13 11:12 Ascendance: well none of 01:15:680 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - have hyperdashes and the pitch is higher there
2018-03-13 11:12 Ascendance: that's why it's currently inconsistent
2018-03-13 11:12 Spectator: I'll fix that
2018-03-13 11:12 Ascendance: you could probably make the nc's more consistent in that doubles section also
2018-03-13 11:12 Spectator: ok fixed
2018-03-13 11:13 Ascendance: 01:17:686 (5,1) - hdash?
2018-03-13 11:13 Spectator: fixed NC as well
2018-03-13 11:14 Spectator: yeah sure
2018-03-13 11:15 Ascendance: 01:24:314 (3) - maybe point this right and 01:25:012 (3) - left for a bit more cleaner movement
2018-03-13 11:15 Ascendance: just slightly
2018-03-13 11:15 Spectator: can I keep it lol I like the aesthetic
2018-03-13 11:16 Ascendance: ya
2018-03-13 11:16 Ascendance: 01:29:982 (3) - ctrl+h and moving it back to the original position feels much nicer to me, the current movement is a bit odd
2018-03-13 11:16 Ascendance: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10460563
2018-03-13 11:17 Spectator: o yeah
2018-03-13 11:17 Spectator: fixd
2018-03-13 11:17 Ascendance: 01:32:163 (1) - slight reduction to x:310 feels nice
2018-03-13 11:18 Spectator: sure
2018-03-13 11:19 Ascendance: 01:34:953 (1,2,3) - how do you feel about something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10460574 ?
2018-03-13 11:21 Spectator: looking great
2018-03-13 11:22 Ascendance: 03:42:802 (4) - x:380 gives a little more leniency here
2018-03-13 11:23 Ascendance: 03:44:721 (1) - same here with x:270
2018-03-13 11:25 Spectator: yes
2018-03-13 11:25 Spectator: both fixed
2018-03-13 11:26 Ascendance: 03:51:349 (7,1) - seems a little too far, reduce a bit plz
2018-03-13 11:26 Ascendance: maybe 03:51:697 (1) - x:84
2018-03-13 11:28 Spectator: moved to 71
2018-03-13 11:28 Ascendance: 04:00:418 (2,3) - the whole map you've been hdashing to the sounds like 04:00:680 (3) -
2018-03-13 11:29 Ascendance: so through this section it's really inconsistent since you aren't hdashing to 04:02:075 - etc etc
2018-03-13 11:29 Ascendance: i'd rework the hdashing up until 04:04:081 -
2018-03-13 11:30 Spectator: ok fixed
2018-03-13 11:31 Ascendance: 04:09:837 (1,2) - x:294 gives some leniency, the current distance is a bit far from 04:09:663 (6) -
2018-03-13 11:35 Spectator: fixed!
2018-03-13 11:36 Ascendance: https://ascendance.s-ul.eu/hDgxnRiD 04:23:790 -
2018-03-13 11:36 Ascendance: this timeline seems nicer to me
2018-03-13 11:36 Spectator: fixed
2018-03-13 11:38 Ascendance: ok nice
2018-03-13 11:39 Ascendance: add a damn preview point
2018-03-13 11:40 Ascendance: https://ascendance.s-ul.eu/afrvZ3EL and snap these timing points
2018-03-13 11:40 Ascendance: then call me back
2018-03-13 11:40 Ascendance: post in thread when you've updated
2018-03-13 11:42 Spectator: oh preview point LOL
2018-03-13 11:42 Spectator: okok
2018-03-13 11:42 Spectator: I'm also final checking hitsounds
2018-03-13 11:49 Ascendance: okok

done irc checking with ascendance

updated!
Ascendance
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last updates
2018-03-12 23:11 Spectator: updated
2018-03-12 23:11 Spectator: :>
2018-03-12 23:11 Spectator: better redl it cuz I added some hitsound files
2018-03-12 23:11 Ascendance: post on thread so i dont triple post xD
2018-03-12 23:11 Spectator: yes i idd
2018-03-12 23:11 Spectator: did
2018-03-12 23:15 Ascendance: kd me plz w
2018-03-12 23:17 Spectator: done
2018-03-12 23:17 Spectator: can
2018-03-12 23:17 Spectator: it
2018-03-12 23:17 Spectator: can i update one more thing
2018-03-12 23:17 Ascendance: what is it
2018-03-12 23:17 Spectator: a very minor hitsound thing
2018-03-12 23:18 Spectator: okok
2018-03-12 23:19 Spectator: updated
2018-03-12 23:19 Ascendance: ok let me double check
2018-03-12 23:19 Ascendance: 03:14:720 (2) - unsnapped
2018-03-12 23:19 Spectator: oh
2018-03-12 23:20 Spectator: updated!
2018-03-12 23:20 Ascendance: 01:41:581 (7,1) - increase to hdash or reduce plz its an edge dash rn
2018-03-12 23:20 Ascendance: 01:47:511 (1,2) - same here, x:246
2018-03-12 23:20 Spectator: sure
2018-03-12 23:21 Ascendance: 01:57:279 (1,2) - o and hdash this, i forgot to mention it before
2018-03-12 23:21 Spectator: can I just reduce it
2018-03-12 23:21 Ascendance: yep
2018-03-12 23:21 Ascendance: x:376 seems fine for 2
2018-03-12 23:22 Spectator: fixed
2018-03-12 23:23 Ascendance: ok update
2018-03-12 23:25 Spectator: updated
2018-03-12 23:25 Spectator: didn't know this map is older than 1 year lol
2018-03-12 23:25 Ascendance: this map needs 1 easy/normal difficulty.

glad to be back in the bng to help move this forward. bubbled!
Spectator
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Ascendance wrote:

last updates
2018-03-12 23:11 Spectator: updated
2018-03-12 23:11 Spectator: :>
2018-03-12 23:11 Spectator: better redl it cuz I added some hitsound files
2018-03-12 23:11 Ascendance: post on thread so i dont triple post xD
2018-03-12 23:11 Spectator: yes i idd
2018-03-12 23:11 Spectator: did
2018-03-12 23:15 Ascendance: kd me plz w
2018-03-12 23:17 Spectator: done
2018-03-12 23:17 Spectator: can
2018-03-12 23:17 Spectator: it
2018-03-12 23:17 Spectator: can i update one more thing
2018-03-12 23:17 Ascendance: what is it
2018-03-12 23:17 Spectator: a very minor hitsound thing
2018-03-12 23:18 Spectator: okok
2018-03-12 23:19 Spectator: updated
2018-03-12 23:19 Ascendance: ok let me double check
2018-03-12 23:19 Ascendance: 03:14:720 (2) - unsnapped
2018-03-12 23:19 Spectator: oh
2018-03-12 23:20 Spectator: updated!
2018-03-12 23:20 Ascendance: 01:41:581 (7,1) - increase to hdash or reduce plz its an edge dash rn
2018-03-12 23:20 Ascendance: 01:47:511 (1,2) - same here, x:246
2018-03-12 23:20 Spectator: sure
2018-03-12 23:21 Ascendance: 01:57:279 (1,2) - o and hdash this, i forgot to mention it before
2018-03-12 23:21 Spectator: can I just reduce it
2018-03-12 23:21 Ascendance: yep
2018-03-12 23:21 Ascendance: x:376 seems fine for 2
2018-03-12 23:22 Spectator: fixed
2018-03-12 23:23 Ascendance: ok update
2018-03-12 23:25 Spectator: updated
2018-03-12 23:25 Spectator: didn't know this map is older than 1 year lol
2018-03-12 23:25 Ascendance: this map needs 1 easy/normal difficulty.

glad to be back in the bng to help move this forward. bubbled!
Thanks a lot! :)
Sorceress
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Sorceress
Oopsie woopsie! Since you updated after Ascendance's bubble I'll have to rebubble and then Ascendance will qualify. Only a few points though

[Boogie]
  1. Background: Higher res and lower file size
  2. No kiai times?
  3. 02:01:465 (1) - Possibly convert this to a 1/8 stream? Sound supports it and it's more unique than just a slider
  4. 02:01:814 (8) - Extend this to 02:02:075 -. It ends a bit a too soon right now to represent the held sound here
  5. 02:32:163 (1,2) - Hyper here like with 02:30:767 (1,2) - and 02:27:976 (1,2) - ?
  6. 02:35:564 (4) - This sounds better to me if you shorten this to the blue tick and and put in a new 1/2 slider starting at 02:35:825 -
  7. 04:00:854 (4,5) - Any reason for this standstill?
  8. 05:11:232 (1,1) - This distance is really weak, hyper would be great
Spectator
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Sorcerer wrote:

Oopsie woopsie! Since you updated after Ascendance's bubble I'll have to rebubble and then Ascendance will qualify. Only a few points though

[Boogie]
  1. Background: Higher res and lower file size ! fixed
  2. No kiai times? I feel like the fake kiai effects at 03:43:325 - and 01:29:372 - should be enough because the song has pretty long intense parts
  3. 02:01:465 (1) - Possibly convert this to a 1/8 stream? Sound supports it and it's more unique than just a slider sounds good!
  4. 02:01:814 (8) - Extend this to 02:02:075 -. It ends a bit a too soon right now to represent the held sound here sure
  5. 02:32:163 (1,2) - Hyper here like with 02:30:767 (1,2) - and 02:27:976 (1,2) - ? sure
  6. 02:35:564 (4) - This sounds better to me if you shorten this to the blue tick and and put in a new 1/2 slider starting at 02:35:825 - fixed
  7. 04:00:854 (4,5) - Any reason for this standstill? added some more rhythm at the part, should be better now
  8. 05:11:232 (1,1) - This distance is really weak, hyper would be great added! added
thanks for mod!
Sorceress
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Sorceress
Boogie?
Ascendance
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Ascendance
hi
Ascendance
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Ascendance
the mapset lacks quality all around.
Spectator
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Ascendance wrote:

the mapset lacks quality all around.
ikr
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