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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 23 de septiembre de 2017 at 3:36:58

Artist: Kanon Wakeshima
Title: Tsukinami
Tags: J-POP naotyu- 千葉 直樹 anime アニメマシテ
BPM: 180
Filesize: 3663kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,12 stars, 273 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4,28 stars, 773 notes)
  3. Kantan (1,42 stars, 163 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2,87 stars, 424 notes)
  5. Oni (3,43 stars, 577 notes)


Download: Kanon Wakeshima - Tsukinami
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Changelog
  1. Uploaded beatmap - 09/01
  2. All diff's done - 09/01
  3. Added BG - 09/01
  4. Applied Q____X's mod - 14/01
  5. Applied [ R ]'s Mod - 16/01
  6. Applied desireofpainx's Mod - 16/01
  7. Applied game rock's Mod - 18/01
  8. Applied Nifty's Mod - 19/01
  9. Applied Jaye's Mod - 21/01
  10. Applied Ellyu's Mod - 26/01
  11. Applied qoot8123's Mod - 30/01
  12. Renamed "Muzukashii" to "Lite Oni" - 30/01
  13. Adjusted SV - 30/01
  14. Added new "Muzukashii" - 30/01
  15. Applied Hitsu's Mod - 01/02
  16. Applied JessiChan's Mod - 02/02
  17. Applied Smallwu's Mod - 05/02
  18. Applied Diva Days's Mod - 05/02
  19. Applied Kurai's Mod - 06/02
  20. Applied Stefan's Mod - 09/02
  21. Applied frukoyurdakul's Mod - 10/02
  22. Applied Raphalge's Mod - 11/02
  23. Applied Skylish's Mod - 12/02
  24. Applied Etsu's Mod - 20/02
  25. Fixed BG resolution - 20/02
  26. Applied 404 AccNotFound's mod - 23/03
  27. Applied davidminh0111's mod - 06/03
  28. Applied Volta's mod - 05/05
  29. Renamed "Lite Oni" to "Oni" - 05/05
  30. Applied Taikocracy's mod - 18/05
  31. Applied Melanie's mod - 03/06
  32. Applied Kith190's mod - 19/06
  33. Applied Ak1o's mod - 19/06
  34. Applied IControl's mod - 18/07
  35. Applied toara_fict mod - 30/07
  36. Applied Jonawaga's mod - 30/08
  37. Applied Prophecy's mod - 11/09
  38. Applied xfranczynho's mod - 22/09
  39. xfranczynho's bubble - 22/09
  40. Surono's Qualified - 30/09
posted
Hola aqui esta mi mod ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/

[General]
  1. Desactiva el widescrren en kantan futsuu y muzukashii

    D: me perdonaras pero no encontre errores en la kantan, esta bien mapeada para mi


[Futsuu]

  • Aunque se que lo que haces es seguir el ritmo por lo general en una futsuu no se hacen combos muy largos, asi que trata de eliminar algunas notas

    00:11:658 (3) - d
    00:12:325 (4) - k para mantener simetria con 00:17:658 (17) - puesto que es el mismo ritmo
    00:16:992 (16) - d
    00:40:325 (73) - ^
    00:53:658 - hasta 01:09:658 - en mi opinion, partes como esta 00:54:991 (107,108) - deben ser k k sugeriria que pusieras ese ritmo en las otras partes iguales
    01:13:658 (152,153) - mover a 01:13:491 - y 01:13:325 (151) - cambiar a d
    01:16:325 (161,163) - k
    01:25:991 (184) - borra
    01:29:325 (193) - ^
    01:52:991 (2) - ^
    01:56:491 (15) - ^



[Muzukashii]

  • 00:12:492 - d hay sonido aqui
    00:17:825 - ^
    00:23:158 - ^
    00:25:825 - hasta 00:26:991 - sugeriria que probaras este patron si no, puedes dejarlo como esta
    00:28:325 (81,82,83) - estos me suenan mas como kdk y quita el finisher en el 83 creo que sobra
    00:35:491 (119) - muvelo a 00:35:325 - ahi hay sonido
    00:35:575 - d sonaria bien
    00:40:825 - ^
    01:17:325 (12) - k


[Oni]

  • 00:12:492 - d aqui claramente hay sonido
    00:17:825 - ^
    00:23:158 - ^
    00:28:658 (110) - en mi opinion creo que el finisher sobra
    00:36:325 (165) - k
    01:16:991 (439) - k siento que hay un tono alto aqui


Espero que te haya servido mis sugerencias :?
Buena suerte con tu mapa :D
posted

Q____X wrote:

Hola aqui esta mi mod ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/

[General]
  1. Desactiva el widescrren en kantan futsuu y muzukashii No me di cuenta, arreglado

    D: me perdonaras pero no encontre errores en la kantan, esta bien mapeada para mi No importa, me ayudas igual :D


[Futsuu]

  • Aunque se que lo que haces es seguir el ritmo por lo general en una futsuu no se hacen combos muy largos, asi que trata de eliminar algunas notas Veré qué puedo hacer

    00:11:658 (3) - d Ok
    00:12:325 (4) - k para mantener simetria con 00:17:658 (17) - puesto que es el mismo ritmo Ok
    00:16:992 (16) - d Modificado
    00:40:325 (73) - ^ Ok
    00:53:658 - hasta 01:09:658 - en mi opinion, partes como esta 00:54:991 (107,108) - deben ser k k sugeriria que pusieras ese ritmo en las otras partes iguales En algunas las he cambiado, pero trato de variar
    01:13:658 (152,153) - mover a 01:13:491 - y 01:13:325 (151) - cambiar a d Ok
    01:16:325 (161,163) - k Modificado
    01:25:991 (184) - borra Ok
    01:29:325 (193) - ^ Ok
    01:52:991 (2) - ^ Ok
    01:56:491 (15) - ^ Esa la dejo ya que se escucha la batería. Si alguien más me lo remarca quizás lo quite



[Muzukashii]

  • 00:12:492 - d hay sonido aqui
    00:17:825 - ^
    00:23:158 - ^ No los agregué ya que seguía el piano de fondo, pero creo quedó mejor
    00:25:825 - hasta 00:26:991 - sugeriria que probaras este patron si no, puedes dejarlo como esta Suena bien
    00:28:325 (81,82,83) - estos me suenan mas como kdk y quita el finisher en el 83 creo que sobra Lo cambié a kdk, pero el finisher lo dejo porque es mejor para mi
    00:35:491 (119) - muvelo a 00:35:325 - ahi hay sonido Corregido, no me di cuenta
    00:35:575 - d sonaria bien No pienso agregar kdk en Muzukashiis todavia
    00:40:825 - ^ Agregué ddd
    01:17:325 (12) - k Ok


[Oni]

  • 00:12:492 - d aqui claramente hay sonido
    00:17:825 - ^
    00:23:158 - ^ Agregados
    00:28:658 (110) - en mi opinion creo que el finisher sobra Lo mismo que en Muzukashii
    00:36:325 (165) - k No me gusta como queda
    01:16:991 (439) - k siento que hay un tono alto aqui Ok


Espero que te haya servido mis sugerencias :?Me han servido bastante :D
Buena suerte con tu mapa :D
Gracias por tu mod :)
Beatmap updated~
posted
yo

[General]
no need to put SV change in kantan~muzukashii (not recommended) volume change can stay with that

[Kantan]
00:15:658 - change don, piano sound still low (also match with drum)
00:50:658 - add note ?
02:05:325 - add note ?

[Futsuu]
00:15:325 - delete
00:15:325 - delete ? to follow the piano (to much dkd)
00:20:658 - ^
00:21:325 - change don, drum pitch has drop
00:29:991 - delete ?

try this pattern (cursor at 01:13:991 - ) it will fit the drum

01:32:658 - same ? ^

01:35:991 - can delete this
01:40:825 - add note ?
01:42:491 - sems weird to hit in this part, maybe move 01:42:158 -

01:56:491 - delete ?


well maybe just that to lazy to mod other diff xd
consider to reduce some note in muzukashii until around 500
different note between futsuu~muzu = 318
different note between muzu~oni = 187

good luck
posted

[R] wrote:

yo o/

[General]
no need to put SV change in kantan~muzukashii (not recommended) volume change can stay with that The change is not very noticeable, for now I'll leave it

[Kantan]
00:15:658 - change don, piano sound still low (also match with drum) Fixed
00:50:658 - add note ?
02:05:325 - add note ? Mmmm, added for now

[Futsuu]
00:15:325 - delete
00:15:325 - delete ? to follow the piano (to much dkd) Fixed
00:20:658 - ^ ^
00:21:325 - change don, drum pitch has drop Ok
00:29:991 - delete ? Ok

try this pattern (cursor at 01:13:991 - ) it will fit the drum
I don't like this
01:32:658 - same ? ^ ^

01:35:991 - can delete this Deleted
01:40:825 - add note ? Added
01:42:491 - sems weird to hit in this part, maybe move 01:42:158 - Moved

01:56:491 - delete ? Removed 01:56:825 -


well maybe just that to lazy to mod other diff xd
consider to reduce some note in muzukashii until around 500
different note between futsuu~muzu = 318
different note between muzu~oni = 187 I'll consider this, thanks

good luck
Thanks for mod! :D
Beatmap updated~
posted
NM from my queue
[General]
  1. Offset 10996


[Kantan]
  1. 01:42:325 (120) - delete
  2. 00:12:325 (3,4) - dk, the melody is the same but in semitone lower
  3. 00:17:658 (11,12) - ^
  4. 00:13:992 (6) - k, but you can keep d to not repeating dk dk
  5. 00:15:658 (8) - k
  6. 00:54:991 (61,62) - dk
  7. 01:00:325 (69,70) - ^


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:24:325 (31,32,33) - ddk
  2. move 00:29:158 (42) - to 00:29:158 (42) - to make nice KDKD finish
  3. 01:11:991 - add note here
  4. 01:51:825 - add note here to follow the vocal


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:325 (79,80) - dK
  2. 00:42:991 (161) - d
  3. 01:27:491 (62) - d


[Oni]
  1. 00:18:991 (51) - d sounds better here
  2. 00:30:991 (127,128,129,130,131) - kkddk
posted

desireofpainx wrote:

NM from my queue
[General]
  1. Offset 10996 Fixed


[Kantan]
  1. 01:42:325 (120) - delete Deleted
  2. 00:12:325 (3,4) - dk, the melody is the same but in semitone lower Ok
  3. 00:17:658 (11,12) - ^ ^
  4. 00:13:992 (6) - k, but you can keep d to not repeating dk dk I Keep
  5. 00:15:658 (8) - k Changed
  6. 00:54:991 (61,62) - dk Ok
  7. 01:00:325 (69,70) - ^ ^


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:24:325 (31,32,33) - ddk Fixed
  2. move 00:29:158 (42) - to 00:29:158 (42) - to make nice KDKD finish The same place?
  3. 01:11:991 - add note here No, not very prominent
  4. 01:51:825 - add note here to follow the vocal Added for now


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:325 (79,80) - dK This is kD (drum pitch)
  2. 00:42:991 (161) - d Fixed
  3. 01:27:491 (62) - d Ok


[Oni]
  1. 00:18:991 (51) - d sounds better here Ok
  2. 00:30:991 (127,128,129,130,131) - kkddk This is kat 00:31:079 (131) - (drum pitch), for now I not changes
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
posted
Hi!

Request from Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)
  1. "La imagen de fondo es más grande que 1366x768"
  2. "El tiempo de vista prevía hace conflicto con la dificultad Futsuu"
  3. "El tiempo de vista prevía hace conflicto con la dificultad Oni"

    Para la vista previa te recomiendo colocarlo 01:35:995 - para todas las dificultades para no alterar u ocasionar otro futuro problema.

    Y en cuanto a la imagen (BG) me tomé el tiempo de reducirle el tamaño de su imagen ya que es más grande que el tamaño requerido, espero le guste:

    1366x768 https://puu.sh/tpwOP/8cf14c9c52.jpg

    1024x768 https://puu.sh/tpwRG/b8861eeefd.jpg

    Personalmente y en este caso te recomiendo 1366x768.
  • [ Kantan]

    HP: 2

  1. 00:44:329 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - Esto lo veo un poco largo, te sugiero eliminar 00:46:329 (49) -
  2. 01:05:662 (77,78) - Ctrl G para tener ritmo y consistencia junto a 00:54:995 (61,62) -
  3. 01:06:995 (79,80) - Cambie esas notas a k para tener consistencia en 00:56:329 (63,64) -
  4. 01:08:329 (81,82) - Ctrl G, veo mejor el ritmo y el sonido de los golpes, además para seguir consistencia en 00:57:662 (65,66) -
  5. 01:49:662 (128,129,130) - Te recomiendo cambiarlo debido a que tiene eso mismo aquí 01:46:995 (125,126,127) - y eso lo hace repititivo. Así que puede cambiar esta nota a k 01:46:995 (125) - o esta a d 01:49:662 (128) -
  6. 02:02:328 (144) - Elimine esa nota para dejar un espacio de descanso para que los jugadores puedan preparse para continuar jugar la dificultad.
  • [ Futsuu]

    OD: 3

  1. 00:24:658 (31,32,33) - Se le olvidó seguir la secuencia y consistencia en esta parte. Así que, haga Ctrl G 00:24:658 (32,33) - para tener secuencia y consistencia en 00:13:658 (7,8,9) - , 00:18:991 (19,20,21) - , 00:13:658 (7,8,9) - , 00:18:991 (19,20,21) -
  2. 00:39:658 (66) - Cambia esa nota a k debido a que la melodía está subiendo en esta parte para culminar el aumento de la melodía con la nota 67 00:40:325 (67) -
  3. 01:07:658 (129) - Cámbialo a d para tener consistencia con 00:56:325 (102,103,104) - Al cambiarlo tendrás lo mismo acá 01:08:991 (130,131,132) - le recomiendo cambiar a k o d la nota 132 para variar un poco.
  4. 01:18:991 (157,158,159,160,161,162) - Esto se repite muy rápido, te sugiero cambia esto a k d k 01:18:991 (157,158,159) - Además para que puedas tener secuencia junto a 01:16:325 (151,152,153) -
  5. 01:23:325 (167) - Cambia a k para tener secuencia con 01:20:325 (160,161,162) -
  6. 01:56:325 (13) - Suena mejor una k o si no le gusta puede aplicarlo aquí 01:56:658 (15) -
  • [ Muzukashii]

    HP: 6
    OD: 4


  1. 00:12:995 (9,10,11) - Suena muy bien, aunque puedo darte una idea a ver si le gusta, puede mover esta nota 00:13:329 (11) - hacía acá 00:13:496 - también suena muy bien.
  2. 00:18:662 (36) - Mueva esta nota aquí 00:18:829 - Solamente si aplicó la sugerencia anterior para tener consistencia en ambas partes.
  3. 00:56:995 (229,230,231,232) - Necesitas agregarle una nota en esas partes para tener un poco más de densidad con las partes similares, debido a que tiene más densidad y notas en estas partes 01:02:329 (254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261) - , 01:07:662 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289) - Por la razón explicada le sugiero que cambie a d 00:57:495 - para agregarle un poco más de densidad comparada con las partes seleccionadas.
  4. 01:26:829 (57,58,59) - Suena mejor una kkk.
  5. 01:26:829 (57,58,59) - Puedo darte otra ideas, como por ejemplo --> ///
  • [ Oni]

    OD: 5

  1. 01:14:412 (431,432) - Diría que en este stream queda mejor como ddkkddk así que Ctrl G a esas notas.
  2. 01:27:329 (497) - Cámbialo a k, sigue muy bien el ritmo junto con la voz.
  3. 01:32:662 (532) - Cámbialo a k para mantener la coordinación del ritmo y así poder seguirlo con estás notas 01:30:995 (519,522,524,527,529) -
  4. 01:43:662 (618) - Quedaría muy bien una k, suena mejor con 01:43:829 (619,620,621,622,623) -
  5. 01:52:995 (687) - Cámbialo a k para mantener la coordinación del ritmo y seguirlo con 01:53:329 (689,692,694,696,700,703) -
  6. 02:02:662 (763,764,765,766,767) - Este stream suena un poco raro, ¿Le gustaría cambiarlo a ddkkd o kkddk?




Me gustó mucho su Beatmap ^w^ Buena suerte y espero que mi Mod le haya servido de ayuda :3
posted

game rock wrote:

Hi!

Request from Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)
  1. "La imagen de fondo es más grande que 1366x768"
  2. "El tiempo de vista prevía hace conflicto con la dificultad Futsuu"
  3. "El tiempo de vista prevía hace conflicto con la dificultad Oni"

    Para la vista previa te recomiendo colocarlo 01:35:995 - para todas las dificultades para no alterar u ocasionar otro futuro problema. Corregido, me he olvidado de la vista previa cuando ajusté el offset, gracias.

    Y en cuanto a la imagen (BG) me tomé el tiempo de reducirle el tamaño de su imagen ya que es más grande que el tamaño requerido, espero le guste: Las reglas han cambiado debido a este post --> t/516427
    Así que, 1920x1200 es el maximo permitido actualmente.


    1366x768 https://puu.sh/tpwOP/8cf14c9c52.jpg

    1024x768 https://puu.sh/tpwRG/b8861eeefd.jpg

    Personalmente y en este caso te recomiendo 1366x768. Agradezco que te tomes tu tiempo en reducir el tamaño del BG, pero me quedaré con el que tengo. Lo siento
  • [ Kantan]

    HP: 2 La gran mayoría de Kantan's rankeado tienen el HP elevadisimo, por lo tanto no habrá cambios

  1. 00:44:329 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - Esto lo veo un poco largo, te sugiero eliminar 00:46:329 (49) - Eliminado
  2. 01:05:662 (77,78) - Ctrl G para tener ritmo y consistencia junto a 00:54:995 (61,62) - Esta parte se repite 3 veces, las 2 primeras las hice similares pero la tercera (la que me pides cambiar) sería diferente para remarcar el final de esa parte. No quiero que sea muy repetitivo. Lo cambié a k k
  3. 01:06:995 (79,80) - Cambie esas notas a k para tener consistencia en 00:56:329 (63,64) - Las dejé en don, pero estas 00:56:329 (63,64) - los cambién a don también para consistencia
  4. 01:08:329 (81,82) - Ctrl G, veo mejor el ritmo y el sonido de los golpes, además para seguir consistencia en 00:57:662 (65,66) - Corregido
  5. 01:49:662 (128,129,130) - Te recomiendo cambiarlo debido a que tiene eso mismo aquí 01:46:995 (125,126,127) - y eso lo hace repititivo. Así que puede cambiar esta nota a k 01:46:995 (125) - o esta a d 01:49:662 (128) - Cambié esto 01:46:995 (124) - a kat
  6. 02:02:328 (144) - Elimine esa nota para dejar un espacio de descanso para que los jugadores puedan preparse para continuar jugar la dificultad. Eliminado
  • [ Futsuu]

    OD: 3 Es muy bajo. Las Futsuu en general se pone en 4

  1. 00:24:658 (31,32,33) - Se le olvidó seguir la secuencia y consistencia en esta parte. Así que, haga Ctrl G 00:24:658 (32,33) - para tener secuencia y consistencia en 00:13:658 (7,8,9) - , 00:18:991 (19,20,21) - , 00:13:658 (7,8,9) - , 00:18:991 (19,20,21) - Corregido
  2. 00:39:658 (66) - Cambia esa nota a k debido a que la melodía está subiendo en esta parte para culminar el aumento de la melodía con la nota 67 00:40:325 (67) - Para mi el tono es más bajo
  3. 01:07:658 (129) - Cámbialo a d para tener consistencia con 00:56:325 (102,103,104) - Al cambiarlo tendrás lo mismo acá 01:08:991 (130,131,132) - le recomiendo cambiar a k o d la nota 132 para variar un poco.Todo aplicado
  4. 01:18:991 (157,158,159,160,161,162) - Esto se repite muy rápido, te sugiero cambia esto a k d k 01:18:991 (157,158,159) - Además para que puedas tener secuencia junto a 01:16:325 (151,152,153) - Bien, corregido
  5. 01:23:325 (167) - Cambia a k para tener secuencia con 01:20:325 (160,161,162) - Cambiado
  6. 01:56:325 (13) - Suena mejor una k o si no le gusta puede aplicarlo aquí 01:56:658 (15) -Aplicado en (15)
  • [ Muzukashii]

    HP: 6
    OD: 4
    Está bien como es ahora a mi parecer

  1. 00:12:995 (9,10,11) - Suena muy bien, aunque puedo darte una idea a ver si le gusta, puede mover esta nota 00:13:329 (11) - hacía acá 00:13:496 - también suena muy bien. 00:13:329 (11) - Ahí hay claramente una bateria, no hay cambios
  2. 00:18:662 (36) - Mueva esta nota aquí 00:18:829 - Solamente si aplicó la sugerencia anterior para tener consistencia en ambas partes.No lo acepté ^
  3. 00:56:995 (229,230,231,232) - Necesitas agregarle una nota en esas partes para tener un poco más de densidad con las partes similares, debido a que tiene más densidad y notas en estas partes 01:02:329 (254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261) - , 01:07:662 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289) - Por la razón explicada le sugiero que cambie a d 00:57:495 - para agregarle un poco más de densidad comparada con las partes seleccionadas. Corregido, bien!
  4. 01:26:829 (57,58,59) - Suena mejor una kkk.
  5. 01:26:829 (57,58,59) - Puedo darte otra ideas, como por ejemplo --> /// Aplicado lo primero
  • [ Oni]

    OD: 5 Lo quiero hacer dificil, lo dejo como está

  1. 01:14:412 (431,432) - Diría que en este stream queda mejor como ddkkddk así que Ctrl G a esas notas. Ok
  2. 01:27:329 (497) - Cámbialo a k, sigue muy bien el ritmo junto con la voz. Cambiado
  3. 01:32:662 (532) - Cámbialo a k para mantener la coordinación del ritmo y así poder seguirlo con estás notas 01:30:995 (519,522,524,527,529) - Cambiado
  4. 01:43:662 (618) - Quedaría muy bien una k, suena mejor con 01:43:829 (619,620,621,622,623) - Muy bien
  5. 01:52:995 (687) - Cámbialo a k para mantener la coordinación del ritmo y seguirlo con 01:53:329 (689,692,694,696,700,703) - Cambiado a kkd
  6. 02:02:662 (763,764,765,766,767) - Este stream suena un poco raro, ¿Le gustaría cambiarlo a ddkkd o kkddk? Cambiado a kkddk




Me gustó mucho su Beatmap ^w^ Buena suerte y espero que mi Mod le haya servido de ayuda :3 Me has ayudado bastante, gracias!
Exelente mod! Muchas gracias Gemu c:
Beatmap updated~
posted
Hey my dude, love this song.

- Kantan -

00:12:329 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - d d d k k d d d k k d (predictable, comfortable, as a Kantan should)
00:28:495 (19) - k, fits better
00:48:329 (41) - k, matches k from last pattern

- Futsuu -

00:20:325 (22,23,24,25,26,27) - Would change to k dkkdd
00:47:991 - Add k
01:00:325 (113,114,115) - ddk, (dkd repeats the pattern from beat 1)
Switch 01:36:658 (201,202,203) - with 01:37:991 (205,206,207) -
02:00:991 (27) - k, starting on d too much

- Muzukashii -

Overall pretty good so I have to be petty
00:34:329 (115) - d, don't be afraid to throw in something other than ddd and kkk
01:30:995 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - dkddkdkk, more comfortable than whacking d's and k'd consecutively
That's all I could really find for this map, you could make it a lot more interesting and fun by changing some of the ddd's and kkk's to ddk's, kkd's, etc. It's not like it'll be too hard to play, there are 3.0's with those patterns.
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Nifty wrote:

Hey my dude, love this song. :)

- Kantan -

00:12:329 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - d d d k k d d d k k d (predictable, comfortable, as a Kantan should) I try follow the piano pitch. I change some things here
00:28:495 (19) - k, fits better It's is don (drum pitch)
00:48:329 (41) - k, matches k from last pattern Fixed

- Futsuu -

00:20:325 (22,23,24,25,26,27) - Would change to k dkkdd Changed to k kddkd. Drum pitch and consistence with 00:10:992 (1,2,3) -
00:47:991 - Add k Added
01:00:325 (113,114,115) - ddk, (dkd repeats the pattern from beat 1) Changed to kkd
Switch 01:36:658 (201,202,203) - with 01:37:991 (205,206,207) - Fixed
02:00:991 (27) - k, starting on d too much Ok

- Muzukashii -

Overall pretty good so I have to be petty
00:34:329 (115) - d, don't be afraid to throw in something other than ddd and kkk I don't like ddk or kkd in Muzukashii's, would become a Oni practically. But I'll think if add this
01:30:995 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - dkddkdkk, more comfortable than whacking d's and k'd consecutively I deleted notes and changed some notes
That's all I could really find for this map, you could make it a lot more interesting and fun by changing some of the ddd's and kkk's to ddk's, kkd's, etc. It's not like it'll be too hard to play, there are 3.0's with those patterns. I'll see what I do
Thanks for mod! :D
Beatmap updated~
posted
Con respecto al mod de game rock, en donde dice que la imagen es mayor a 1366x768, eso es porque no esta actualizado referiendome a el ranking criteria, el cual ahora permite 1920x1080
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RevengeZ wrote:

Con respecto al mod de game rock, en donde dice que la imagen es mayor a 1366x768, eso es porque no esta actualizado referiendome a el ranking criteria, el cual ahora permite 1920x1080
Claro, a eso me refería. No han actualizado y los que me han dicho sobre el tamaño del BG tuve que pasarles el thread
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Gday my dude.
[General]
  1. d = don & k = kat, Caps on either for a Finisher.
  2. After finishing this mod I've just realised that Futsuu has an offset of 10,992 whilst the other three difficulties have an offset of 10,996. Please change this to whichever is the correct offset.
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:45:325 - To follow to structure of notes you've laid our previously, I'd suggest putting a note here, and to compensate for the extra note, remove 00:47:325 (81).
  2. 00:46:991 (80) - Weak suggestion: but could change to d to emphasise the rise in pitch from here to 00:47:658 (82). Would also make sense if you're mapping to the background instruments, as there is a drum sound here but no cymbal (cymbal is on the following white tick).
  3. 00:52:325 (93,94,95,96) - Feels like there is one too many notes here; I'd suggest only having one double as you've done at 00:29:158 (42,43) and 00:30:991 (47,48). If you wish to follow the main melody, dd k sounds rather nice (that is to say, remove 00:52:991 (96)).
  4. 01:57:325 (18) - Weak suggestion: remove this note (yes I know there's a drum noise on it), however I think the removal of the note will give players some recovery after that fairly difficult Futsuu pattern, as well as making 01:57:658 (19) feel much more "explosive" when the music kicks back in.
  5. 02:08:325 (46) - Seems a little unusual to me that the spinner would not begin here, since the sound played at this note is held; consider changing.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:31:995 (101) - Change to k, really high-pitched piano key.
  2. 02:08:325 (300) - Same point about the finisher.
  3. Otherwise a very good difficulty.
[ Oni]
  1. 02:08:325 (801) - Spinner mah boi.
Really good mapset; I quite enjoyed it, so much so that I'll shoot you some stars!
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Jaye wrote:

Gday my dude.
[General]
  1. After finishing this mod I've just realised that Futsuu has an offset of 10,992 whilst the other three difficulties have an offset of 10,996. Please change this to whichever is the correct offset.
Actually the ranked mapset (http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1046339) have it as 10,992 so it shouldn't be really a problem
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Jaye wrote:

Gday my dude. o/
[General]
  1. d = don & k = kat, Caps on either for a Finisher.
  2. After finishing this mod I've just realised that Futsuu has an offset of 10,992 whilst the other three difficulties have an offset of 10,996. Please change this to whichever is the correct offset. Fixed
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:45:325 - To follow to structure of notes you've laid our previously, I'd suggest putting a note here, and to compensate for the extra note, remove 00:47:325 (81). Hmm, I change some thing
  2. 00:46:991 (80) - Weak suggestion: but could change to d to emphasise the rise in pitch from here to 00:47:658 (82). Would also make sense if you're mapping to the background instruments, as there is a drum sound here but no cymbal (cymbal is on the following white tick). Changed to d
  3. 00:52:325 (93,94,95,96) - Feels like there is one too many notes here; I'd suggest only having one double as you've done at 00:29:158 (42,43) and 00:30:991 (47,48). If you wish to follow the main melody, dd k sounds rather nice (that is to say, remove 00:52:991 (96)). Removed
  4. 01:57:325 (18) - Weak suggestion: remove this note (yes I know there's a drum noise on it), however I think the removal of the note will give players some recovery after that fairly difficult Futsuu pattern, as well as making 01:57:658 (19) feel much more "explosive" when the music kicks back in. Nice revision, removed
  5. 02:08:325 (46) - Seems a little unusual to me that the spinner would not begin here, since the sound played at this note is held; consider changing. Well, changed
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:31:995 (101) - Change to k, really high-pitched piano key. Fixed
  2. 02:08:325 (300) - Same point about the finisher. Ok
  3. Otherwise a very good difficulty.
[ Oni]
  1. 02:08:325 (801) - Spinner mah boi. Ok
Really good mapset; I quite enjoyed it, so much so that I'll shoot you some stars! Thanks!
Thanks for mod and stars! :D
Beatmap updated~


RevengeZ wrote:

Actually the ranked mapset (http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1046339) have it as 10,992 so it shouldn't be really a problem
El offset correcto es 10,996. Lo probé muchas veces y llegué a la conclusión de que era ese.
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gaston_2199 wrote:

RevengeZ wrote:

Actually the ranked mapset (http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1046339) have it as 10,992 so it shouldn't be really a problem
El offset correcto es 10,996. Lo probé muchas veces y llegué a la conclusión de que era ese.
Solo quería aclarar que no era un problema, pero mejor si ese es el correcto xD
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Oni
00:21:495 (67,68,69) - k k d,since you place (don kat) on the serial two guitar beats in this portion like 00:10:996 (1,2) - 00:12:329 (8,10) -,so I think it is better to keep the same here.
00:22:829 (76,77,78) - same as ^
00:42:495 (216,217) - d d works better imo.Cuz the string sound begin heavier at 00:42:662 (218) - .
01:01:662 (345) - d
01:06:995 (377) - d
01:41:495 (599,600,601) - d d k
01:47:162 (639,640) - Delete these and change 01:47:329 (641) - to K for the heavy beat at here
01:52:412 (680) - delete this and add a d at 01:52:579
01:56:995 (720) - delete this cuz no beat here, the song drum hit suddenly stop here and if the stream suddenly stop too this will plays fun imo.

Muzukashii
00:47:495 (180,181,182) - d d d works better imo.cuz there are kicks in the songs.
00:51:329 (198,199,200,201,202,203,204) - I prefer pattern like this https://puu.sh/tzw9Q/f2cc9326d3.png but that depends on u.
01:11:329 - u skip two beats here and that is weird for me. Try to add a d at here or 01:11:495 -
01:15:995 (5,6,7,8) - k ddd is better.cuz the rhythm drops here.
01:42:912 (151,152) - delete these and change 01:42:829 (150) - to D
01:50:829 (197,198,199) - ddd better imo

Futsuu
01:24:662 (168,169,170,171) - d d k D
01:54:995 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - this is strange cuz u actually know it plays like (DddDddDddDdDd) at here as same as 00:26:995 (38,39,40,41) - but u place different pattern here so u miss the heavy beat at 01:55:495 - .This way works better https://puu.sh/tzyQM/8967564ac6.png imo.

Kantan
It is pretty solid so i can't find any problem here. :)

Sry for the short mod cuz this is solid,maybe u can ask someone better to check this out.
GL and take my star.
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handsome muscle wrote:

Oni
00:21:495 (67,68,69) - k k d,since you place (don kat) on the serial two guitar beats in this portion like 00:10:996 (1,2) - 00:12:329 (8,10) -,so I think it is better to keep the same here. I follow the drum pitch (ddk), also these part is different an the before and I add more notes
00:22:829 (76,77,78) - same as ^ I don't like
00:42:495 (216,217) - d d works better imo.Cuz the string sound begin heavier at 00:42:662 (218) - . Ok
01:01:662 (345) - d Ok
01:06:995 (377) - d ^
01:41:495 (599,600,601) - d d k Drum pitch, nope
01:47:162 (639,640) - Delete these and change 01:47:329 (641) - to K for the heavy beat at here I don't like
01:52:412 (680) - delete this and add a d at 01:52:579 Ok
01:56:995 (720) - delete this cuz no beat here, the song drum hit suddenly stop here and if the stream suddenly stop too this will plays fun imo. Maybe I'll change this

Muzukashii
00:47:495 (180,181,182) - d d d works better imo.cuz there are kicks in the songs. kkk is better in my opinion.
00:51:329 (198,199,200,201,202,203,204) - I prefer pattern like this https://puu.sh/tzw9Q/f2cc9326d3.png but that depends on u. No for now
01:11:329 - u skip two beats here and that is weird for me. Try to add a d at here or 01:11:495 - Added
01:15:995 (5,6,7,8) - k ddd is better.cuz the rhythm drops here. Ok
01:42:912 (151,152) - delete these and change 01:42:829 (150) - to D Ok
01:50:829 (197,198,199) - ddd better imo Ok

Futsuu
01:24:662 (168,169,170,171) - d d k D d k k D
01:54:995 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - this is strange cuz u actually know it plays like (DddDddDddDdDd) at here as same as 00:26:995 (38,39,40,41) - but u place different pattern here so u miss the heavy beat at 01:55:495 - .This way works better https://puu.sh/tzyQM/8967564ac6.png imo. I changed with dk dk

Kantan
It is pretty solid so i can't find any problem here. :)

Sry for the short mod cuz this is solid,maybe u can ask someone better to check this out.
GL and take my star.
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
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hello o/
I just found that your map is rather good (especially oni), and would like to give some suggestions :)
It may not a full mod, just some suggestions that I think it could make the oni much better.

[General]
  1. Your kantan/futauu is an easier one but the muzu is a harder one which cause the difficulty gap between futsuu and muzu very large.there are some solutions:
    1.Make muzu easier 2. make futsuu harder 3.rename the current muzu to "Lite Oni" which means an easier oni, and make new muzu which contain more complex 1/2 than futsuu and has more 1/2 or 3/2 breaks.



[ Oni]
  1. I think the speed up on 01:32:412 - ~01:33:495 - could be improved by following the vocal's intensity. there is timing point code :
    SV
    10996,333.333333333333,4,1,0,80,1,0
    32329,-95.2380952380952,4,1,0,80,0,0
    53995,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
    74995,-111.111111111111,4,1,0,80,0,0
    90995,-108.695652173913,4,1,0,80,0,0
    91662,-106.382978723404,4,1,0,80,0,0
    92329,-104.166666666667,4,1,0,80,0,0
    92829,-103.092783505155,4,1,0,80,0,0
    93329,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
    93662,-97.0873786407767,4,1,0,80,0,0
    94162,-94.3396226415094,4,1,0,80,0,0
    94662,-91.743119266055,4,1,0,80,0,0
    94829,-89.2857142857143,4,1,0,80,0,0
    94995,-86.9565217391304,4,1,0,80,0,0
    95162,-84.7457627118644,4,1,0,80,0,0
    95495,-84.0336134453781,4,1,0,80,0,0
    95579,-83.3333333333333,4,1,0,80,0,0
    95662,-82.6446280991736,4,1,0,80,0,0
    95745,-81.9672131147541,4,1,0,80,0,0
    95829,-81.3008130081301,4,1,0,80,0,0
    95912,-80.6451612903226,4,1,0,80,0,0
    95995,-80,4,1,0,80,0,0
    96329,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
    106329,-100,4,1,0,90,0,0
    106995,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
    117662,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
  2. 01:36:329 (557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565) - although this pattern is not bad, I still recommend you follow the instrument to make the pattern more variety, like this,it not only keep the original structure but also follow the instrument perfectly
  3. The vocal has strong sounds on 01:38:329 (574) - ,maybe you can consider to change the note to d on 01:37:662 (568) -
  4. 01:39:329 - ~01:41:662 - it is not bad if you try to follow vocal on this part but the structure on this part contradicts with 01:36:329 - ~01:38:995 - ,maybe you can try to make similar structure like this.


hope this suggestion could help you :)
Good luck for your set!
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