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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mardi 19 septembre 2017 at 23:51:19

Artist: Interstellar Retribution
Title: Disbelief
Tags: Papyrus' Genocide Route Theme undertale
BPM: 108
Filesize: 2488kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. monster (4,7 stars, 475 notes)


Download: Interstellar Retribution - Disbelief
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Papyrus no longer belive in you !
it s a beautifull night
to be burning in hell !
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Sorry for the delay but im gonna mod your map :)


Use this bg
00:14:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Remove these square space streams people dont like these type of streams do something like this and give the second stream part a NC
00:20:097 (1,1,1,1,2) you should be more creative
00:42:811 (3,4) adjust the volume to 70%
01:40:668 (3) what kind of slider is that? you should be creative


its a small mod because the patterns are to complicated for me
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[monster]
Design:
Fix the watermark at the background please. Use some Photoshop or whatever. Still can put a smaller one somewhere in the corner.

Mapping:
00:15:693 - Spinner should start here. Listen to music carefully.
00:35:097 (3,4,5,6,7) - This looks like it's goes at one time (like a stream), but the last note is 1 tick away from the others and you can't see this while playng. Fix that please
00:37:989 (7,1,2,3,4) - A strange overlap
01:10:668 - Missing some needed sounds here. This will sound better like this.


Good luck !
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thanks for yours help

Lolinator2000 wrote:

Sorry for the delay but im gonna mod your map :)


Use this bg hell yes thanks for this
00:14:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Remove these square space streams people dont like these type of streams do something like this and give the second stream part a NC done
00:20:097 (1,1,1,1,2) you should be more creative i dn if it s more creative but i change something
00:42:811 (3,4) adjust the volume to 70% kk and i did it at the end slider too
01:40:668 (3) what kind of slider is that? you should be creative WOW im so creative a "LOOP" , xD

its a small mod because the patterns are to complicated for me
thanks

bezbashn wrote:

[monster]
Design:
Fix the watermark at the background please. Use some Photoshop or whatever. Still can put a smaller one somewhere in the corner. i use this [url=http://imgur.com/a/mU55j]

Mapping:
00:15:693 - Spinner should start here. Listen to music carefully. i want to keep the 4 circles so i started the spiner justabit after
00:35:097 (3,4,5,6,7) - This looks like it's goes at one time (like a stream), but the last note is 1 tick away from the others and you can't see this while playng. Fix that please done ^^
00:37:989 (7,1,2,3,4) - A strange overlap strange ... yes it s strange i dont remember when i put this here PARANORMAL , done
01:10:668 - Missing some needed sounds here. This will sound better like this. good idea


Good luck !
thanks for your help
KUDOSU RAIN !!!!!!!!
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Hi from my Queue

[General]
I think there's a lot of issues with the flow. In these alternating maps, you focus more on hitting objects than aiming, so having to worry about aiming is something you should avoid. Give a good look on ranked alternating maps and you should see what Im trying to say.

[Timing]
I think it should be 280 bpm. idk, gives the vibes lol
Kiai time where?

[Monster]
00:09:582 (10,1) - unnecessary spacing. this is really easy to break combo because you can't leave early to reach comfortably the next note. also this part isn't even intense.
00:24:704 (1,2) - ^ same
00:28:025 (5,1) - ^ same
00:35:847 (1) - end the slider on 00:36:061
00:41:954 (8) - kinda ugly imo lol. and doesn't fit the song. maybe try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7136990 (mm lol maybe not this shape, but take the idea)
00:44:418 (1,2,1,2,3) - theres is no reason for this to be this spaced isn't it?
00:45:168 (4) - same issue with the slider before.
00:57:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is really weird. either flow it better or break it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7137027 also add a NC.
01:05:311 (1) - this stream section is really boring considering how the rest of the map is. You can notice spacing changes on 01:06:382 - 01:07:239 - 01:07:668 - 01:08:525 - 01:06:382 - 01:07:239 - 01:07:668 - 01:08:097 - (well I guess you get the idea lol) I would play more with them.
01:18:811 (3,4,5,6) - and the rest of these are not regular squares? use the poligon tool to create them. and don't overspace them. it is a difficult shape to consistenly hit perfectly.

thats it. Hope it helps in any way :)
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General
1.280 bpm? :? maybe or not
2.only the highest difficulty in the mapset can have a unique name
3.01:29:632 (1) - to 01:29:632 (1) - give them a kiai time
01:29:632 (1) - to 01:29:632 (1) -
01:29:632 (1) - to 01:29:632 (1) -

-Monster-
wow i cant do this
you should let this map get more star for its difficulty

00:11:249 (5) - slow down
00:14:304 - try this http://i.imgur.com/mnIZnWH.jpg
00:15:415 - http://i.imgur.com/4vaKDML.jpg
00:15:971 (1) - spinner http://i.imgur.com/o8EC5Nq.jpg
00:21:811 (2) - http://i.imgur.com/x0rqoA0.jpg
00:24:704 (1) - so hard
00:25:882 (5) - move to x116 y264 & turn the sliders 90 degrees
00:26:954 (1) - overlapping sliders
00:52:132 (6,1,2,3,4) - so hard
00:56:954 (6) - Move this
01:16:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - so hard
01:29:632 (1) -Move this
posted
Heyo! Quick mod from me..
00:09:026 (9,10) - Slightly overlapping, would consider moving it a bit
00:11:249 (5) - consider changing the sv to be slower, the slider ends too early imo
00:25:025 (2,4) - again careful how you're organizing notes w/o accidentally overlapping them
00:26:954 (1) - I would suggest to move this downward, plus it's overlapping
00:30:168 (5,6) - I think it would look better to put 5 above 6, looks more time-distance proportionate
00:35:311 (4,5,6) - please nerf x_x spacing is too big for this fast stream
00:36:597 (1) - this is cool slider yes, but upon first glance the direction is sort of unclear
00:42:382 (1,2) - unnecessary jump, maybe stack these
00:47:525 (6) - the sound on the end of this sort of sticks out in a weird way. you could mute sliderend or just change into circle
01:29:632 (1) - this should have more space before 2,3,4,5
01:40:668 (3) - shape on the loop could look a little more prettier
Best of luck with your map!
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I Hate Smoothie wrote:

General
1.280 bpm? :? maybe or not i think 280 BPM will scare peoples
2.only the highest difficulty in the mapset can have a unique name are you sure https://osu.ppy.sh/b/589969
3.01:29:632 (1) - to 01:29:632 (1) - give them a kiai time
01:29:632 (1) - to 01:29:632 (1) -
01:29:632 (1) - to 01:29:632 (1) - lel it s the same time all the time

-Monster-
wow i cant do this
you should let this map get more star for its difficulty i cant decide how many stars i give to a map , it s an algorythme in osu who determine this

00:11:249 (5) - slow down done
00:14:304 - try this http://i.imgur.com/mnIZnWH.jpgok
00:15:415 - http://i.imgur.com/4vaKDML.jpg ok
00:15:971 (1) - spinner http://i.imgur.com/o8EC5Nq.jpg done
00:21:811 (2) - http://i.imgur.com/x0rqoA0.jpg done
00:24:704 (1) - so hard i hope this is easier
00:25:882 (5) - move to x116 y264 & turn the sliders 90 degrees like this ?
00:26:954 (1) - overlapping sliders fixed
00:52:132 (6,1,2,3,4) - so hard ok
00:56:954 (6) - Move this were lol ?here ?
01:16:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - so hardfixed i think
01:29:632 (1) -Move this fixed
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Ambrew wrote:

Heyo! Quick mod from me..
00:09:026 (9,10) - Slightly overlapping, would consider moving it a bit done
00:11:249 (5) - consider changing the sv to be slower, the slider ends too early imo i changed the slider
00:25:025 (2,4) - again careful how you're organizing notes w/o accidentally overlapping them ok i take care now
00:26:954 (1) - I would suggest to move this downward, plus it's overlapping done
00:30:168 (5,6) - I think it would look better to put 5 above 6, looks more time-distance proportionate done
00:35:311 (4,5,6) - please nerf x_x spacing is too big for this fast stream i stacked the stream
00:36:597 (1) - this is cool slider yes, but upon first glance the direction is sort of unclear i make it cooler but i think it s not necesaire to show the direction because this slider is short
00:42:382 (1,2) - unnecessary jump, maybe stack these kk
00:47:525 (6) - the sound on the end of this sort of sticks out in a weird way. you could mute sliderend or just change into circle i mute
01:29:632 (1) - this should have more space before 2,3,4,5yep
01:40:668 (3) - shape on the loop could look a little more prettier wow my loop is so nice now

Best of luck with your map!
thanks ^^
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