pkk wrote:

whoops i accidentally gave kds

fieryrage wrote:

i still forgot

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01:27:263 (2) - no whoosh here for the guitar shitty map 0/10 made it 3/4 cuz thats co ol and i dont want super whoosh here cuz its more like an ease-in into the n e x t section nothing crazy here ye t
01:36:629 (1) - see like wtf u did it here goddammit cuz this guitar whoohs is c ol
01:41:020 (6,7,8,9) - i get the mapping triple here but the guitar is more potent so i'd just map to that instead of the drums here tbh will consider
02:04:727 (3) - nc? ok
02:08:239 (5) - honestly was expecting this on the other side of the double lul ya but e mpahsis
02:10:288 (4,5) - stack these two maybe? would give emphasis to guitar here that could be cool, but what I was going for here was a constant movement with the low spacing to match the consistent guitar strumming that stood out to me here
02:14:385 (1) - to 02:17:898 (1) - why is there like no triples here helo i like the constant 1/2 here to map the vocals, then i put a triple in the next bar to lead into the stream
02:31:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - first 3 notes are ok but everything else after is pretty overmapped but i guess that goes for this entire vocal section anyway theres some 1/4 backtrack or something and i like the streams 4 int ens ity
02:39:556 (5,6) - wtf u doin LOL i wanted to keep the 1/2 but i didnt want to do circles so i just repeated the edgy slider i did for the vocal
02:47:166 (1,2,3) - pretty disorienting rhythm choice here i will see what others think about this, but noted for the time being
03:10:288 (3,4,5,6) - guitar more potent here again so id just follow that maybe i got spoiled by kites map 2 much Lol yea i could do that, but i feel that mapping the stream before the long slider in the next bar gives it more emphasis
03:24:190 (1) - wot the fuck start this on white tick??? red tick is stronger !!!
03:25:800 (1,2) - Wot the Fuck wigle wiglge wiggle
04:15:556 (3) - nc k
04:22:727 (5,6) - y stack this is the only time u do this garbag i also do it at 01:52:873 (5) - but i can c wot u mean so i will think about stacking other similar pl aces too
04:38:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - increase spacing a bit here? incrased to 1.02x
06:51:438 (2,3) - wouldnt put a triple here, feels out of place I find that it leads nicely into the guitar solo since there's a sound on the blue tick before it
07:36:526 (2) - if ur following vocals this should be white tick wow thats why it sounded so weird im retarded thx
07:43:096 (1) - to 07:47:778 (1) - this whole transition feels really awkward, i would use more sliders here personally than circles/triples I think the circles do a gud job of capturing the drums. but i think the last part with the 1/3 does feel a bit weird so ill look into it
08:45:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wheres the fail stream haha cant have a fail stream as tiebreaker material : )

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Abraxos wrote:

tragic ends depends on the context you want to put this phrase in so unless youre talking about a group of people each meeting their own tragic ends or a single person dying idk pick your poison ye that s was intended

05:11:093 (311093|1,311093|2) - can this be the one thats a single note and 05:11:166 (311166|3) - this be double I'd love to but the song says no
05:10:288 (310288|3,310361|2,310434|3,310507|2,310581|3) - seems pretty odd to have a split oh jumptrill here
05:11:605 (311605|3) - end the jumptrill here can't really see the reason
05:11:678 (311678|1,311678|2) - single but there's a clear snare sound right there
05:11:751 (311751|0) - double ??:D??

05:52:368 (352368|0,352443|1,352518|2,352593|3) - p.sure these are 1/3s
05:54:768 (354768|1,354843|0,354918|3,354993|2) - 06:01:968 (361968|3,362043|2,362118|1,362193|0) - ^^ I think I'll use pkk's snaps, it sounds more accurate to me

06:59:780 - did you just follow guitar are you even what idk u tell me

07:29:453 (449453|3,449550|2,449648|1) - you know i always figured these beats to be jacks but eh no, it's my style!1!

08:24:071 - dd kk dd kk 1/4s from here do you even taiko bro

Monstrata wrote:

Redemption

1. 00:33:995 (1,2,3) - Not sure what your spacing concept is with these sliders (if there is one), but try and keep the slider-ends even in terms of their visual consistency? 1>2 isn't as overlapped as 2>3. good idea, but the lower SV sliders are placed on the more emphasized beats and I would like to distinguish them from the other 1/2 sliders. In this case I think the different spacing is reflective of the music
2. 00:36:044 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Etc... Brush up this section and others like 00:43:361 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - as you see fit.
3. 01:11:166 - You could try adding circles in between spinners. tried it out but I like the continuity/momentum generated from the spinners without any space/circles in-between
   
4. 01:29:605 (8,3) - Stack is kinda off. fixd
5. 01:57:702 (5,6) - 1/2 slider is better because of how close these notes are to 01:58:288 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - . Don't make them feel too similar. I used two circles here because it felt more impactful instead of using a slider to map the two guitar notes there. I also don't think it's particularly similar to the six circles after it since the way I grouped them in 2's going in the same direction back and forth is quite different from the two circles that I arranged linearly from and to sliders
6. 02:16:142 (2,3,1) - 2>3 is too big imo. It doesn't need that much emphasis. 3>1 could be bitter tho. gUD POINT fix
7. 02:17:898 (1,2,3) - Same here, I think you can just move 2 down a bit xP ok my man i moved it down a lil
8. 03:21:849 (1) - The curve of this slider could be better imoxd KKKKKKKKKK curved the first curve so it's more curvy
9. 03:41:020 (1) - The loop in the center could be more tear droppy. agree
   
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10. 04:06:483 (1) - Form it like this to avoid the unnecessary slider-overlap near the head uhh changed it a little i think
    
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11. 04:22:727 (5,6) - Idk if stacking is good here. Emphasize the vocal's pitch with a jump or something? unstacked here and in the part near the beginning of the song
12. 05:49:743 - Unintentional break delay. 07:27:950 - too ya fix
13. 06:13:097 - Since you follow guitar later, you should map this out. I feel that this beat isn't strong enough to map out + it takes away the emphasis from when the guitar fully comes in, so I left this blank and the part after
14. 06:15:146 - ^
15. 06:53:633 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps don't follow any specifically strong rhythm or 1/2 heavy instrument xP. I think theyre too big. Consider how you space jumps like 06:57:731 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . They're almost the same in terms of concept, but the later jumps actually map to more 1/2 intensive rhythms and should be highlighted. good point, lowered ds of the jumps by a bit and changed the last 4 circles to two sliders
16. 07:40:770 (1,2) - Slightly triggering that they aren't parallel lol. fixed
17. 08:04:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - The 2/3 jumps could be bigger imo. Especially 08:05:925 (1,2,3) - , due to pitch and btter lead-in into the final kiai. ok i will do something about this
    
    

Vulkin wrote:

where did you find this edit of the background? I try to google image it but i literally get "water"
ok

Protastic101 wrote:

03:11:176 - Wtf is up with the guitar here. 03:11:664 (191664|1) - Move to 03:11:615 - and add a note at 03:11:688 -
03:11:273 (191273|1) - Up to 03:11:322 - .
03:11:371 (191371|0) - Is weird af, and idk where it goes cause it's like 03:11:432 - or something, but I'm not exactly sure. Fml snaps. Tbh, if you just want to leave it approximated to 1/3 (aside from the 1/4 notes I mentioned), I'm ok with that too. fml snapping


04:23:322 (263322|3) - Remove this note and turn 04:23:176 (263176|0) - into a 1/1 LN because that's how you mapped other similar crashes, like at 04:20:834 (260834|0,262005|3) - I think you misunderstand about my LN here prot, those ln for guitar sound not for cymbals xD

1. Updated puxtu's diff
2. Removed delay from hitsound + resnapped preview point
3. Updated drum-hitnormal, drum-hitnormal2, added soft-hitfinish5
4. Raised volumes of multiple inherited points

1. drum-hitnormal-old1
2. soft-hitnormal2-old1