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CS feels a little high for map style but thats my opinion. feels sorta forced.
i would strongly recommend lowering HP with sections like 3:50 to 4:02 and short, very intense jump/stream sections.
00:20:988 (1,1,1) - these being grouped is fine but i dont think they should group with 00:20:743 (2). also dont see reason for NC since the other groups like this weren't NC
00:22:736 (1,1) - remove NC? also why isnt 00:22:982 (1) - separated like earlier in this section? maybe im missing something though
00:42:866 (4) - feels better to end this on blue tick imo
00:45:817 (6) - feels weird to ignore the vocals that occur under this slider
00:48:768 (1,2) - i recommend following vocals here instead of the quite drum sound
00:53:440 (4,5,6,7) - make these more jumpy? 00:50:243 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - this aim is a lot more stressed but less energetic vocals. maybe just bump to 2.0x like 00:56:145 (1,2,3)
00:57:866 (2,3,4,5,1) - this looks pretty poor, and 00:58:112 (4,5) isnt mapped to anything. i suppose you could overmap for the rhythm here but the spacing makes it even more convoluted.
01:04:629 (1) - i would move NC to 01:04:751 (2) and remove NC on 01:04:997 (1) . improves readability for the rhythm, since it NCs on downbeat. personal choice though.
01:06:473 (2) - this is the only reverse slider between this section to the kiai, feels out of place
01:14:219 (2,3) - spacing feels awkward, too small? maybe just circle instead
01:16:801 (2,3) - this spacing / flow is awkward since a lot of this section is really expanded across the whole playfield, the overlap doesnt help
01:25:161 (5,1) - make 5 into jumps? would lead into kiai nicely
imo there are NC problems during kiai sections. not inconsistent but just confusing or misleading. the downbeats aren't NC'd which sorta makes the emphasis feel weird to me. 01:28:604 (6) - feels like it should be NC'd, same with 01:29:342 (5) and 01:30:817 (5). the NC 01:30:940 (1) is awkward since its right after downbeat and in between vocals. 01:33:030 (8) - same thing, this is the beginning of the first repeat of the chorus. just something to think about. it feels awkward to not NC the downbeat in so many places. not going to bring every single case up (unless you ask me to rofl).
01:32:292 (5,6,7) - not spaced enough i think, this part is very energetic and then the sliders are so close here
01:34:997 (3,4,5) - same thing. at least space 4 further since it is a downbeat
01:36:719 (5,6) - slider flow is awkward
01:41:391 (6,7) - space more?
01:44:588 (7) - ^
01:48:522 (4,5) - ^
01:46:801 (3,4) - ^
01:52:210 (6) - there is a vocal on slider tail, i think this would be better as jumps
01:54:915 (5,6) - space more?
01:56:391 (1) - remove NC and NC 01:56:637 (2). this NC separates 01:56:391 (1) from the jumps even though they are mapped to the same vocal phrase.
01:59:710 (2,3) - space more?
02:02:292 (1,2) - this visually reads like a jump. i would NC on 2 instead of 1, especially since its a group of 3 sliders.
02:40:284 (1,2,3,4) - 02:43:235 (1,2,3,4) - consider nerfing. feels out of place since the section gets more energetic with the drums starting 02:47:661 (1) - but its calmer to play and has more sliders. maybe use the spacing from 00:50:243 (2,3,4,1,2,3) section?
02:59:464 (1) - i really like how you used flow in this section to contrast the section before it (03:00:694 (5,1) - sharper flow but similar spacing)
03:09:300 (1,2,3,4,1) - jumps feel slightly out of place
03:24:054 (5,1) - jumps to lead into kiai section?
03:27:866 (2,4) - i really like these overlaps but i think you should space them like 0.1x apart so its slightly easier to read. not going to mention for all
03:30:202 (6,7) - space more? a vocal starts on 7 but it has small spacing / calm flow. like last kiai there are several of these, i wont paste every single one.
03:34:628 (6,7,1) - flows awkward
04:20:981 (3) - i think making this into circles to follow vocals would be better
04:27:989 (1) - jumps feel forced / overmapped in the section starting here imo. the rhythm isnt awful but spacing is too high considering that there is no sound on 04:28:357 (3) / 04:28:357 (3) etc.
04:38:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nearly unreadable. idk best way to fix but yeah. repeat sliders probably better here, for readability's sake
i have the same thoughts for this kiai as previous ones- sliders need to be spaced more since the jumps are so energetic, especially since vocals are sung on the sliders. especially places like 04:53:808 (5,6,7,8)
05:03:152 (1) - random NC. you didn't do this anywhere before in the map, i disagree with introducing it 5 minutes in. there doesn't seem to be a reason but i might be missing something.
05:05:119 (1,1) - ^ and etc.. wont paste for all. especially in this section 05:08:193 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - it hinders readability
05:19:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't see why this is a stream, guitar ended 1/3 rhythm on 05:19:955 (1)
05:22:906 (5,6) - same as ^
05:22:988 (6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - overlap is extremely confusing
05:24:054 (1,2) - very hard to read, i would just use the 1/3 circles rhythm.
05:25:037 (5) - missing NC? you NC for this every time before this, i would remove NC on 05:25:283 (1) - as well
05:25:365 (2,3) - no guitar rhythm here. i wouldnt recommend following the drums here, or if you are going to i would change this to 1/3 repeat slider or something. changing between guitar and drums makes this section feel very messy.
05:26:759 (1) - remove NC
05:27:046 (1,2) - shouldnt this be snapped to where the bookmarks are?
05:27:414 (2,3) - overlap doesnt look that nice since this section is so spaced and so few overlaps
05:28:726 (3,1) - spacing is EXTREMELY misleading. definitely needs to be a jump, it looks the exact same as 05:28:562 (1,2,3) spacing
05:30:939 (2) - make 2 circles? there is a guitar note on slider tail
05:31:923 (1) - remove NC
05:34:136 (1) - ^
05:34:709 (2,3) - same rhythm suggestion as before
05:37:087 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i dont think introducing stream jumps like this so late into the solo is a good idea. why not just have a spaced stream for this whole part?
05:42:373 (1) - remove NC (not pasting for rest of section)
05:46:185 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - imo should be a slider in here somewhere, this section doesnt feel like this rhythm.
05:50:365 (1) - remove NC?
despite this being a really long mod i really like the map, there are just many parts that don't need to be overmapped imo. 7 star map is fine but there are 7 star parts that are forced that don't need to be for the difficulty of that section. good luck with it, the jumps are really fun!