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StripE - FIRE FIRE

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kokono_tan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月1日 at 19:10:15

Artist: StripE
Title: FIRE FIRE
Source: beatmania IIDX14 GOLD
Tags: Konami Bemani kors-k Dance Dance Revolution X2 DDR
BPM: 150
Filesize: 2492kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 570 notes)
  2. Beginner (0.94 stars, 70 notes)
  3. Hyper (4.89 stars, 256 notes)
  4. Normal (3.87 stars, 145 notes)
Download: StripE - FIRE FIRE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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7
Somebody's scream!!!
bomber34
Cool map :3

Beginner: Add a new Combo Colour at 37:233
I think this diff. is ok :D

Another:
Maybe some spacing errors but i think it is ok

I think the KIAI time is a little to long, maybe you can cut it a little.


Will there more Difficulties? I mean, unless you want this Beatmap approved you should add a normal or hard Map
because Another is just insane.

I like this map :D
WeisCrahe
hi~

下手なりにMODさせてもらいました!!


Beginner

00:03:633 (2) - 1グリッド←
00:05:233 (3,4,5) - 1グリッド↓
00:08:433 (1) - 1グリッド→
00:19:633 (4) - 1グリッド←
00:40:433 (1) - 終点を00:43:033にしてください
01:23:633 (1) - 3グリッド←1グリッド↑
01:25:233 (2) - 3グリッド↑1グリッド→
01:26:833 (3) -    ↑
01:28:433 (4) - 4グリッド↑
01:30:033 (1) - 2グリッド→3グリッド↑
01:31:633 (2) - 2グリッド→3グリッド↑
01:33:233 (3,4) - 2グリッド↓


Another


00:02:633 (3) - 1グリッド↑
00:02:833 (4) - 1グリッド↓
00:03:033 (5) -   ↑
00:03:233 (6) - 2グリッド↓
00:03:433 (7) - 1グリッド←
00:03:633 (1) - 4グリッド↑
00:04:033 (2) - 3グリッド← 3グリッド↑
00:04:233 (3) - 1グリッド←
00:04:433 (4) - 2グリッド↑
00:04:633 (5) - 1グリッド→1グリッド↑
00:04:833 (6) - 2グリッド↑
00:05:033 (7) - 1グリッド→1グリッド↑
00:05:233 (1) - 5グリッド→4グリッド↑
00:05:633 (2) - 2グリッド←
00:06:033 (3) - 1グリッド←
00:06:433 (4) -  ↑
00:06:833 (1) - 1グリッド↑
00:07:233 (2) - 1グリッド←
00:07:633 (3) - 1グリッド↓
00:08:433 (1) - 1グリッド←2グリッド↓
00:08:833 (2) - 2グリッド↓
00:09:233 (3) -  ↑
00:09:633 (4) - 1グリッド←2グリッド↓
00:10:033 (1) - 3グリッド→2グリッド↑
00:10:233 (2) - 1グリッド→2グリッド↓
00:10:433 (3) - 2グリッド←4グリッド↓
00:10:633 (4) - 5グリッド←1グリッド↓
00:10:833 (5) - 8グリッド←



ごめんなさいこれで力尽きました><

良いで楽しい譜面です!!ランクド頑張ってください!!
Topic Starter
kokono_tan

Lolikon1202 wrote:

hi~

下手なりにMODさせてもらいました!!


Beginner

00:03:633 (2) - 1グリッド←
00:05:233 (3,4,5) - 1グリッド↓
00:08:433 (1) - 1グリッド→
00:19:633 (4) - 1グリッド←
00:40:433 (1) - 終点を00:43:033にしてください
01:23:633 (1) - 3グリッド←1グリッド↑
01:25:233 (2) - 3グリッド↑1グリッド→
01:26:833 (3) -    ↑
01:28:433 (4) - 4グリッド↑
01:30:033 (1) - 2グリッド→3グリッド↑
01:31:633 (2) - 2グリッド→3グリッド↑
01:33:233 (3,4) - 2グリッド↓
全て修正しました

Another


00:02:633 (3) - 1グリッド↑
00:02:833 (4) - 1グリッド↓
00:03:033 (5) -   ↑
00:03:233 (6) - 2グリッド↓
00:03:433 (7) - 1グリッド←
00:03:633 (1) - 4グリッド↑
00:04:033 (2) - 3グリッド← 3グリッド↑
00:04:233 (3) - 1グリッド←
00:04:433 (4) - 2グリッド↑
00:04:633 (5) - 1グリッド→1グリッド↑
00:04:833 (6) - 2グリッド↑
00:05:033 (7) - 1グリッド→1グリッド↑
00:05:233 (1) - 5グリッド→4グリッド↑
00:05:633 (2) - 2グリッド←
00:06:033 (3) - 1グリッド←
00:06:433 (4) -  ↑
00:06:833 (1) - 1グリッド↑
00:07:233 (2) - 1グリッド←
00:07:633 (3) - 1グリッド↓
00:08:433 (1) - 1グリッド←2グリッド↓
00:08:833 (2) - 2グリッド↓
00:09:233 (3) -  ↑
00:09:633 (4) - 1グリッド←2グリッド↓
00:10:033 (1) - 3グリッド→2グリッド↑
00:10:233 (2) - 1グリッド→2グリッド↓
00:10:433 (3) - 2グリッド←4グリッド↓
00:10:633 (4) - 5グリッド←1グリッド↓
00:10:833 (5) - 8グリッド←
全て修正しました


ごめんなさいこれで力尽きました><

良いで楽しい譜面です!!ランクド頑張ってください!!
keimntn
mod req で発見しました :D
軽めのmodです
参考程度にお願いします
SPOILER
General
・難易度の開きが大きすぎる?★3.5~4があると構成としてはいいかもです。
・Combo3と4の色が酷似しています。もう少し変えてください。
・02:02:113でKIAI TIMEを終了して良いのでは?

Beginner
・Difficultryの設定がこれだとunrankableかもです。HP+2,OD+2
・00:27:633(1) 完全に重なっているので直前までスライダーだと分からないです。

Another
・00:11:633(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3)重なりすぎで見えにくいです。↓

・00:52:443(5) New Combo?
・00:58:233(2,3)1grid down,2grid down?
・00:59:033(2,3)^
・00:59:833(2,3)^
・01:00:633(2,3)^
とても面白い譜面でした :)
頑張ってください!
Topic Starter
kokono_tan
keimntn
modありがとうございます!他の難易度は試行錯誤中ですが、指摘があったところはすぐに修正したいと思います :)
shikyu
like this song :D, quick mod

[Beginner]
overall : add more hitsounds
00:35:633 - (6) new combo?

[Normal]
overall : don't make it too stream
00:30:033 - (6,7) add clap
00:42:233 - too long break
01:01:233 - (1) repeat slider until 01:01:833 (don't make it stream)
01:01:633 - (2) delete slider
you can use my suggestion for notes until 01:04:233 (too hard for normal player)
01:18:033 - (1) don't stack like that, I suggest this
01:27:633 - (5) new combo?

[Another]
overall : add more hitsounds
00:24:433 - (1,2,3,4) crazy jump
01:01:233 - (1,2,3,4) don't stack like that
Topic Starter
kokono_tan
shikyu Mod Thank you! :)

shikyu wrote:

like this song :D, quick mod

[Beginner]
overall : add more hitsoundsadd hitsounds(Think I)
00:35:633 - (6) new combo?Fixed

[Normal]
overall : don't make it too streamFixed

00:30:033 - (6,7) add clapFixed

00:42:233 - too long breakFixed

01:01:233 - (1) repeat slider until 01:01:833 (don't make it stream)Fixed

01:01:633 - (2) delete sliderFixed

you can use my suggestion for notes until 01:04:233 (too hard for normal player)Fixed

01:18:033 - (1) don't stack like that, I suggest thisFixed

01:27:633 - (5) new combo?Fixed


[Another]
overall : add more hitsoundsFixed(Think I)

00:24:433 - (1,2,3,4) crazy jumpFixed

01:01:233 - (1,2,3,4) don't stack like thatsorry No fix
Verdisphena
this song
What
Hi,Your map is good map :3
it's my noob mod ~(o _O)~

[Biginner]
no point

[normal]
00:55:623 - 00:56:433 spacing
00:59:633 - 01:00:433 spacing too

[Another]
00:12:733 - Add note
02:01:233 - move 02:01:233
Lidan
Hey~

[General]
  1. There's a .osb without any storyboard in it, I think you can delete it.
[Another]
  1. You should use tick rate 1 since 0,5 is unrankable and Normal and Beginner are using 1 too.
  2. 00:18:833 (3) - End on 00:19:033
  3. 00:19:233 (X) - Add circle
  4. 00:51:633 (1) - I don't like that it's stacked, you should move it somewhere else.
  5. 01:49:733 (6,7) - The spacing seems a bit weird.
[Normal]
  1. I think you should use a higher HP Drain, 0 is a bit low... Maybe 4 or 5.
  2. 00:22:833 (5) - New combo
  3. 00:26:033 (5) - ^
[Beginner]
  1. 00:24:433 (7) - Move somewhere else. It's a bit too low.
  2. 00:27:633 (1,2) - ^
Nice map~
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

[General]

Check your Inheriting Points, because they are all off on all difficulties.
Maybe add Konami, Bemani, kors-k, Dance Dance Revolution X2, DDR to the tags?

[Beginner]

There is no Preview Point set, maybe 01:10:855 should suffice? (Add it to all difficulties)
Theres a lack of hitsounds in this difficulty :(
I suggest you an offset of 2,055.
The Slider Velocity is a bit too low, even if it's the Easiest difficulty it'll just bore the novices. I suggest you use a SV of 1.0 or 1.1.
00:03:633 (2) - This is an ugly overlap, with the new SV i gave you, it should space ot just fine.
00:18:055 (3) - New combo.
00:21:255 (5) - ^
00:24:455 (7) - I don't like how it's been overlapped by (6) can you move this some where else? (Add a New combo as well.)
00:30:855 (3) - New combo.
00:34:055 (2) - ^
00:37:255 (2) - ^
01:33:255 (3) - New combo and place this else where.
01:55:655 (1) - overlap, place this some where else.


[Normal]

HP Drain + 3, AR +1, OD +1.
Like in Beginner, there is a lack of hitsounds there.
00:11:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/149527
00:19:633 (5) - Align with (3).
00:53:233 (1) Stack properly under (2).
00:56:433 (3) - Move this a tick to the left.
01:00:433 (4) - Move this a grid to the right.
01:14:033 (7) - New combo?

[Another]

I don't think it's allowed to use 0.5 slider tick rate so change it to 1.0.
00:03:433 (7) - Uneven Spacing.

Well that's all i found so far~

Good luck~
Topic Starter
kokono_tan
What Thank you mod!! :)

What wrote:

Hi,Your map is good map :3
it's my noob mod ~(o _O)~

[Biginner]
no point

[normal]
00:55:623 - 00:56:433 spacingfixed
00:59:633 - 01:00:433 spacing toofixed

[Another]
00:12:733 - Add noteSorry No fixed
02:01:233 - move 02:01:233fixed
Topic Starter
kokono_tan
Crimmi Thank you mod!! :)

Crimmi wrote:

Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

[General]

Check your Inheriting Points, because they are all off on all difficulties.?
Maybe add Konami, Bemani, kors-k, Dance Dance Revolution X2, DDR to the tags?fixed

[Beginner]

There is no Preview Point set, maybe 01:10:855 should suffice? (Add it to all difficulties)fixed
Theres a lack of hitsounds in this difficulty :(Sorry I don't understand
I suggest you an offset of 2,055.
The Slider Velocity is a bit too low, even if it's the Easiest difficulty it'll just bore the novices. I suggest you use a SV of 1.0 or 1.1.Sorry No fixed
00:03:633 (2) - This is an ugly overlap, with the new SV i gave you, it should space ot just fine.fixed
00:18:055 (3) - New combo.fixed
00:21:255 (5) - ^fixed
00:24:455 (7) - I don't like how it's been overlapped by (6) can you move this some where else? (Add a New combo as well.)fixed
00:30:855 (3) - New combo.fixed
00:34:055 (2) - ^fixed
00:37:255 (2) - ^fixed
01:33:255 (3) - New combo and place this else where.fixed
01:55:655 (1) - overlap, place this some where else.fixed


[Normal]

HP Drain + 3, AR +1, OD +1.
Like in Beginner, there is a lack of hitsounds there.fixed(I Think)
00:11:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/149527fixed
00:19:633 (5) - Align with (3).fixed
00:53:233 (1) Stack properly under (2).fixed
00:56:433 (3) - Move this a tick to the left.Sorry No fixed
01:00:433 (4) - Move this a grid to the right.fixed
01:14:033 (7) - New combo?fixed

[Another]

I don't it's allowed to use 0.5 slider tick rate so change it to 1.0.fixed
00:03:433 (7) - Uneven Spacing.fixed

Well that's all i found so far~

Good luck~
Topic Starter
kokono_tan
L i d a N Thank you mod!! :)

L i d a N wrote:

Hey~

[General]
  1. There's a .osb without any storyboard in it, I think you can delete it.fixed
[Another]
  1. You should use tick rate 1 since 0,5 is unrankable and Normal and Beginner are using 1 too.fixed
  2. 00:18:833 (3) - End on 00:19:033fixed
  3. 00:19:233 (X) - Add circlefixed
  4. 00:51:633 (1) - I don't like that it's stacked, you should move it somewhere else.fixed
  5. 01:49:733 (6,7) - The spacing seems a bit weird.fixed
[Normal]
  1. I think you should use a higher HP Drain, 0 is a bit low... Maybe 4 or 5.fixed
  2. 00:22:833 (5) - New combofixed
  3. 00:26:033 (5) - ^
[Beginner]
  1. 00:24:433 (7) - Move somewhere else. It's a bit too low.fixed
  2. 00:27:633 (1,2) - ^fixed
Nice map~
YTYuyu
Yo modding ur song because of ur request :)

Beginner:
00:02:855(2) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:04:455(3) - ^ but keep that stack
00:06:055(2,3) - 1 grid left for both
00:11:655(1) - x:408 y:360 for the end point and move it somewhere else. looks like the slider is off the screen a bit
00:18:055(1) - 1 grid right
00:19:655(2) - x:296 y:156
00:20:255(3) - x:436 y:268 of u follow these 3 suggestions fix the spacing
00:27:655(1) - Aline it with (3)
00:58:055(3) - 1-2 grids down
01:10:855(1) - can u make the slider like this. http://puu.sh/6okD it doesnt look the same as the next slider
01:36:455(3) - 1 grid right

Normal:
00:08:433(1) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6orA
00:10:033(2) - Make it the same shape as the last slider on the suggestion.
00:16:433(5) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point
00:21:233(1,2,3,4) - Can u make it like this? (1) and (3) has to be at x:152 http://puu.sh/6otF and (2) and (4) has to be at x:64 http://puu.sh/6otO
01:52:433(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
01:58:833(1,2) - make those sliders point in the same direction as (3) and (4)

Hyper:
00:14:833(1) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 1 gird down for the end point
00:20:233(4) - 1 grid left for the end point
01:12:833(3) - Aline it with (2)
01:50:833(1) - x:336 y:88 for the end point

Another:
00:05:233(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:31:433(3) - x:120 y:120 for the end point and x:168 y:08 for the 2nd point
00:53:233(1) - Aline it with the stream
01:43:233(3) - x:280 y:216 for the end point and x:328 y:192 for the 2nd point

This is the best i can do. GL :D
Topic Starter
kokono_tan

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding ur song because of ur request :)

Beginner:
00:02:855(2) - 1 grid up for the end pointFixed
00:04:455(3) - ^ but keep that stackFixed
00:06:055(2,3) - 1 grid left for bothFixed
00:11:655(1) - x:408 y:360 for the end point and move it somewhere else. looks like the slider is off the screen a bitFixed
00:18:055(1) - 1 grid rightFixed
00:19:655(2) - x:296 y:156Fixed
00:20:255(3) - x:436 y:268 of u follow these 3 suggestions fix the spacingFixed
00:27:655(1) - Aline it with (3) Fixed
00:58:055(3) - 1-2 grids downFixed
01:10:855(1) - can u make the slider like this. http://puu.sh/6okD it doesnt look the same as the next sliderFixed
01:36:455(3) - 1 grid rightFixed

Normal:
00:08:433(1) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6orAFixed
00:10:033(2) - Make it the same shape as the last slider on the suggestion.Fixed
00:16:433(5) - 1 grid left for the 2nd pointFixed
00:21:233(1,2,3,4) - Can u make it like this? (1) and (3) has to be at x:152 http://puu.sh/6otF and (2) and (4) has to be at x:64 http://puu.sh/6otOFixed
01:52:433(1) - 1 grid up for the end pointFixed
01:58:833(1,2) - make those sliders point in the same direction as (3) and (4)Fixed

Hyper:
00:14:833(1) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 1 gird down for the end pointFixed
00:20:233(4) - 1 grid left for the end pointFixed
01:12:833(3) - Aline it with (2)Fixed
01:50:833(1) - x:336 y:88 for the end pointFixed

Another:
00:05:233(1) - 1 grid up for the end pointFixed
00:31:433(3) - x:120 y:120 for the end point and x:168 y:08 for the 2nd pointFixed
00:53:233(1) - Aline it with the stream Not fixed
01:43:233(3) - x:280 y:216 for the end point and x:328 y:192 for the 2nd pointFixed

This is the best i can do. GL :D
Thank you!!
Yuzeyun
#modreqs request

[General]

MP3 : 128
BG : Present
Preview Point : Beginner, Hyper don't have one.
Diff. Spread : So-so.
Offset and BPM Unicity : Beginner is 22ms off, regarding the other's offsets.

[Beginner]

Beat Placing

  1. 00:03:655 (1) - Put the Distance spacing to 0.0x to stack it better.
  2. 00:05:255 (1) - ^
  3. 00:05:255 (1,2,3) - Put :
    • 1 : (356;65)
      2 : (356;176)
      3 : (356;288)
  4. 00:06:055 (2) - I would rather put a slider than putting a circle here. 00:02:055 (1,2,1,2)
  5. 00:21:255 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158279 (00:22:855 (4) is : (196;216))
  6. 00:21:255 (3) - This should be a New Combo, in order to keep the 2 - 2 combo pattern.
  7. 00:37:255 (1,2,3,4) - Align them better. Press SHIFT and drag the notes until an horizontal or vertical line appears.
  8. 01:20:455 (3) - This should be a New Combo
  9. 01:34:855 (1,2,3) - Align them better. Press SHIFT and drag the notes until an horizontal or vertical line appears.

    Try to make more patterns.
Other stuff :

  1. Better use this as your timing points :
[Normal]
  1. Some sliders should be symmetrical.
  2. 00:38:033 (2,4) - Move 4 somewhere else.
  3. 00:54:033 (3,4,1,2) - Bad alignment.

    The rest is pretty the same, try to polish it.
    You can also use my timing stuff if you want.
[Another]

  1. 00:29:033 (6) - Align with 3.
    01:04:233 (4,1) - I doubt that anyone will not miss it.
This needs to be polished a little more, and can I make a taiko diff for it ?
Topic Starter
kokono_tan
_Gezo_ Thank you mod!!

_Gezo_ wrote:

#modreqs request

[General]

MP3 : 128No Change
BG : Present
Preview Point : Beginner, Hyper don't have one.Fixed
Diff. Spread : So-so.
Offset and BPM Unicity : Beginner is 22ms off, regarding the other's offsets.Fixed

[Beginner]

Beat Placing

  1. 00:03:655 (1) - Put the Distance spacing to 0.0x to stack it better.Fixed
  2. 00:05:255 (1) - ^Fixed
  3. 00:05:255 (1,2,3) - Put :
    • 1 : (356;65)Fixed
      2 : (356;176)Fixed
      3 : (356;288)Fixed
  4. 00:06:055 (2) - I would rather put a slider than putting a circle here. 00:02:055 (1,2,1,2)Fixed
  5. 00:21:255 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158279 (00:22:855 (4) is : (196;216))Fixed
  6. 00:21:255 (3) - This should be a New Combo, in order to keep the 2 - 2 combo pattern.Fixed
  7. 00:37:255 (1,2,3,4) - Align them better. Press SHIFT and drag the notes until an horizontal or vertical line appears.Fixed
  8. 01:20:455 (3) - This should be a New ComboFixed
  9. 01:34:855 (1,2,3) - Align them better. Press SHIFT and drag the notes until an horizontal or vertical line appears.Fixed

    Try to make more patterns.
                                Need some time
Other stuff :

  1. Better use this as your timing points :
sorry,No fixed

[Normal]
  1. Some sliders should be symmetrical.Fixed(I think)
  2. 00:38:033 (2,4) - Move 4 somewhere else.Fixed
  3. 00:54:033 (3,4,1,2) - Bad alignment.Fixed

    The rest is pretty the same, try to polish it.
    You can also use my timing stuff if you want.
[Another]

  1. 00:29:033 (6) - Align with 3.Fixed
    01:04:233 (4,1) - I doubt that anyone will not miss it.Fixed
This needs to be polished a little more, and can I make a taiko diff for it ?
if possible, please your taiko diff :)
merchat7
Sorry for late mod.

[General]

- Combo color 1 and 3 are almost the same. Please change one of the combo to a different color. Be sure to fix for all difficulties.

[Beginner]

- Lot of straight sliders, feel boring because of this
- Sliders could look better
- Beat placement could be more interesting

00:09:233 (2.3.4) - Place like this http://puu.sh/6ZH0
00:14:833 (1.2) - Try using red points (make a white point, then hold ctrl and click on that white point again) http://puu.sh/6ZHi.
00:18:033 (1.2) - ^ http://puu.sh/6ZHs
00:21:233 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6ZHI
00:27:633 (1.2 1.2 1.1) - Try something more interesting than straight sliders. Look at previous suggestions for ideas.
00:37:233 (1.2.3.4) - Place like this http://puu.sh/6ZI8
00:54:833 (1,2,3,4) - Place (1.2) like this http://puu.sh/6ZIl and (3.4) like this http://puu.sh/6ZIp
01:02:833 (2.3) - Like this http://puu.sh/6ZIy
01:21:233 (2) - Move it more down and adjust following notes.
01:30:033 (1.2.1) - Try something more interesting with the sliders.
01:34:833 (1,2,3) - Try this http://puu.sh/6ZJ8.

This still need work, try to make it more interesting.

[Normal]

- Same suggestions as Easy (use less straight sliders, use less box patterns / more interesting beat placement and your sliders could look better.
- Try not to use kick sliders (repeating sliders with more than one repeat) as they can be hard to read.

[Hyper]

- I don't think you should use streams in this difficulty [01:51:633 & 01:54:033 & 01:54:833 & 01:56:433 & 01:58:033 & 01:59:633]. Replace them with something else if possible.

01:30:033 (1.2.3 1.2.3) - This is a box pattern and is boring, try something more interesting.

Pretty nice, just make your sliders look nicer and replace the streams if possible.

[Another]

- Please resnap everything in grid 4 (View > Grid Level > 4) so that this difficulty feel more polish

00:03:633 (1) - This is touching the hp bar, move it down.
00:44:833 (9) - Please keep spacing the same (use 0.24x)
00:45:633 (5) - ^ (Use 0.38x)
00:53:633 (2) - Touching hp bar, move it down.
00:54:833 (1-10,1-10) - Rework this pattern, it's a box pattern and is boring.And snap the streams to a lower distant snap (try 0.5x)
01:50:833 - 01:58:833 - Use a lower distant snapping for the streams, it'll play better.

Not too good at modding stream map, but it was quite fun. Would be much better if you resnap every note to grid level 4.

Can't star, since [Beginner] and [Normal] need more work. Look at other beatmap and try to improve these two difficulties.Sorry for lazy mod.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
kokono_tan

merchat7 wrote:

Sorry for late mod.

[General]

- Combo color 1 and 3 are almost the same. Please change one of the combo to a different color. Be sure to fix for all difficulties.

[Beginner]

- Lot of straight sliders, feel boring because of this
- Sliders could look better
- Beat placement could be more interesting

00:09:233 (2.3.4) - Place like this http://puu.sh/6ZH0
00:14:833 (1.2) - Try using red points (make a white point, then hold ctrl and click on that white point again) http://puu.sh/6ZHi.
00:18:033 (1.2) - ^ http://puu.sh/6ZHs
00:21:233 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6ZHI
00:27:633 (1.2 1.2 1.1) - Try something more interesting than straight sliders. Look at previous suggestions for ideas.
00:37:233 (1.2.3.4) - Place like this http://puu.sh/6ZI8
00:54:833 (1,2,3,4) - Place (1.2) like this http://puu.sh/6ZIl and (3.4) like this http://puu.sh/6ZIp
01:02:833 (2.3) - Like this http://puu.sh/6ZIy
01:21:233 (2) - Move it more down and adjust following notes.
01:30:033 (1.2.1) - Try something more interesting with the sliders.
01:34:833 (1,2,3) - Try this http://puu.sh/6ZJ8.

This still need work, try to make it more interesting.

[Normal]

- Same suggestions as Easy (use less straight sliders, use less box patterns / more interesting beat placement and your sliders could look better.
- Try not to use kick sliders (repeating sliders with more than one repeat) as they can be hard to read.

[Hyper]

- I don't think you should use streams in this difficulty [01:51:633 & 01:54:033 & 01:54:833 & 01:56:433 & 01:58:033 & 01:59:633]. Replace them with something else if possible.

01:30:033 (1.2.3 1.2.3) - This is a box pattern and is boring, try something more interesting.

Pretty nice, just make your sliders look nicer and replace the streams if possible.

[Another]

- Please resnap everything in grid 4 (View > Grid Level > 4) so that this difficulty feel more polish

00:03:633 (1) - This is touching the hp bar, move it down.
00:44:833 (9) - Please keep spacing the same (use 0.24x)
00:45:633 (5) - ^ (Use 0.38x)
00:53:633 (2) - Touching hp bar, move it down.
00:54:833 (1-10,1-10) - Rework this pattern, it's a box pattern and is boring.And snap the streams to a lower distant snap (try 0.5x)
01:50:833 - 01:58:833 - Use a lower distant snapping for the streams, it'll play better.

All fixed!(I think)

Not too good at modding stream map, but it was quite fun. Would be much better if you resnap every note to grid level 4.

you want to edit slowly when I have time later

Can't star, since [Beginner] and [Normal] need more work. Look at other beatmap and try to improve these two difficulties.Sorry for lazy mod.

It would be most necessary for me

Good luck!
Thank you greatmod!!
Penguin1192
コンボカラーの色が赤が2個使われています
できれば別の色がいいとおもいますよ

Anotherだけ見ましたがスペーシングがずれてるところが多々あります。
Another以外もずれてるかもしれないので良く見てできるところ修正おねがいします。

いい譜面 いい曲だとおもいます
Topic Starter
kokono_tan

Penguin1192 wrote:

コンボカラーの色が赤が2個使われています
できれば別の色がいいとおもいますよ修正しました~

Anotherだけ見ましたがスペーシングがずれてるところが多々あります。
Another以外もずれてるかもしれないので良く見てできるところ修正おねがいします。
今見てずれてると思ったところは修正しました~(まだあったら後からこっそり修正しますw)
いい譜面 いい曲だとおもいます
MODありがとうございました!Vv´ヮ`)v
Nanakase Gizumo
I Love this Song! Ranked Go Go :D
Niva
Hi~
I saw this on #modreqs yesterday :3

[General]
-> Preview Time isn't same on all diffs! Set to 01:10:833 to all difficulty?
-> Tags should be written "kors k" instead of "kors-k" (reference : here)
-> Also, as far as I know, "beatmania IIDX" is enough for the source. Move "14 GOLD" to tags?

[Another]
  1. 00:04:433 (4) - Move this 2 or 3 grid left (not sure) so it's parallel with (2) and (6)?
  2. 00:08:233 (4) - Remove clap. Whistle only is enough here (:
  3. 00:12:033 (1,2,3) - Arrange them like what you did on 00:12:433 (1,1,1) but with 0.2x dist. spacing?
  4. 00:27:233 (3) - Use whistle here?
  5. 00:27:633 (1) - If you're following ^, add finish hitsound on slider's start?
  6. 00:32:033 (5,6,7) - Perhaps place this on the bottom, following the distance snap? It will form a beautiful pentagon:
  7. 00:48:233 (x) - Feels quite empty here... Add note with clap perhaps?
  8. 01:13:233 (5) - Add normal sound on the end of this slider? I can hear a loud bass sound here
  9. 01:22:033 (5) - To keep your New Combo consistent, add New Combo here. Also remove the new combo on next circle
  10. 01:50:433 (1) - 5% volume here is actually usable, but I suggest to use at least 15% volume to make it more audible
  11. 01:55:433 (4) - Where's the whistle here? :3
  12. 02:01:233 (4) - Look at the picture below, this note is too far to the top compared to (2)
[Hyper]
  1. 00:06:833 (1,2) - Add some curve twist to this slider stream?
  2. 00:19:633 (3) - Well, hard to guess it's actually 1/1 from the previous note. Space it apart, or at least add a new combo here
  3. 00:22:833 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uh... I personally dislike you're stacking too much notes in here. Maybe convert (1,2,3) into a repeating slider?
  4. 00:37:233 (1,2,3) - I think it would be nice if you add some normal sound here- maybe in (1)'s end and (3)'s start?
  5. 00:58:033 (1,2,3,4) - Here's something you can do: select them all, and then rotate by few degrees Selection Centre
  6. 01:20:033 (4) - Curved too much imo, compared to (1,2,3)
  7. 01:26:633 (6) - Missing soft-hitwhistle here? orz
  8. 01:46:033 (1) - Split this into two sliders?
  9. 01:58:833 (1,2,3,4) - Create a windmill pattern between these four? Linear doesn't flow really well here imo
[Normal]
-> Overall Difficulty -1?
  1. 00:11:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think double stacks would play really well (especially on DoubleTime mod), arrange like this perhaps?
  2. 00:21:233 (1) - Uh... Minor spacing error, it's too close to (6)
  3. 00:38:833 (3) - Stack this to (1)'s end?
  4. 01:01:233 (1,2) - Feels weird having a 3/2 blank after (1), maybe add note at 01:02:233?
  5. 01:02:833 (1,2) - Same as above, but add note on 01:03:833 this time
  6. 01:10:833 (1) - Kiai Time should start here (on the downbeat). Also, hitsound finish on slider's start?
  7. 01:14:833 (2) - I think, curve this upward would build more flow:
  8. 01:34:233 (3,4) - Hold SHIFT while placing this note, to make it perfectly horizontal with (2)
  9. 01:56:433 (2,1) - Don't make a sudden jump here >_<
[Beginner]
-> Your normal is 4.3 stars, but your Beginner is only 0.91 ... I think, to balance it, a 2-stars Beginner diff is better. Not something you have to do though
  1. 00:10:833 (4) - Two grids up and one grid left to make this circle symmetrical with (2)
  2. 00:19:633 (2) - Move your red waypoint up a bit, current slider is slightly tilted weirdly
  3. 00:56:433 (2) - You could try to use a slider wave here :3
  4. 00:59:633 (4,1) - Shocking spacing... It's definitely too sparse orz
  5. 01:04:433 (3) - To make it consistent, I prefer to remove one repeat and replace that last repeat with a circle. Optional though
  6. 01:34:833 (1) - No need to New Combo here, because there's already one on the previous slider
  7. 01:53:233 (2,3) - Arrange like this, to build more flow?
I love kors k's songs :3
I hope this could be ranked soon... Good luck (:
Topic Starter
kokono_tan

Niva wrote:

Hi~
I saw this on #modreqs yesterday :3

[General]
-> Preview Time isn't same on all diffs! Set to 01:10:833 to all difficulty?Fixed!
-> Tags should be written "kors k" instead of "kors-k" (reference : here)separation to kors and k,no change
-> Also, as far as I know, "beatmania IIDX" is enough for the source. Move "14 GOLD" to tags?I think this is the best,no change

[Another]
  1. 00:04:433 (4) - Move this 2 or 3 grid left (not sure) so it's parallel with (2) and (6)?Fixed!
  2. 00:08:233 (4) - Remove clap. Whistle only is enough here (:Fixed!
  3. 00:12:033 (1,2,3) - Arrange them like what you did on 00:12:433 (1,1,1) but with 0.2x dist. spacing?Fixed!
  4. 00:27:233 (3) - Use whistle here?Fixed!
  5. 00:27:633 (1) - If you're following ^, add finish hitsound on slider's start?Fixed!
  6. 00:32:033 (5,6,7) - Perhaps place this on the bottom, following the distance snap? It will form a beautiful pentagon:Fixed!
  7. 00:48:233 (x) - Feels quite empty here... Add note with clap perhaps?Fixed!
  8. 01:13:233 (5) - Add normal sound on the end of this slider? I can hear a loud bass sound hereFixed!
  9. 01:22:033 (5) - To keep your New Combo consistent, add New Combo here. Also remove the new combo on next circleremove new combo
  10. 01:50:433 (1) - 5% volume here is actually usable, but I suggest to use at least 15% volume to make it more audibleFixed!
  11. 01:55:433 (4) - Where's the whistle here? :3Fixed!
  12. 02:01:233 (4) - Look at the picture below, this note is too far to the top compared to (2)Fixed!
[Hyper]
  1. 00:06:833 (1,2) - Add some curve twist to this slider stream?sorry
  2. 00:19:633 (3) - Well, hard to guess it's actually 1/1 from the previous note. Space it apart, or at least add a new combo hereFixed!
  3. 00:22:833 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uh... I personally dislike you're stacking too much notes in here. Maybe convert (1,2,3) into a repeating slider?Fixed!
  4. 00:37:233 (1,2,3) - I think it would be nice if you add some normal sound here- maybe in (1)'s end and (3)'s start?Fixed!
  5. 00:58:033 (1,2,3,4) - Here's something you can do: select them all, and then rotate by few degrees Selection CentreFixed!
  6. 01:20:033 (4) - Curved too much imo, compared toFixed!
  7. 01:26:633 (6) - Missing soft-hitwhistle here? orzFixed!
  8. 01:46:033 (1) - Split this into two sliders?Fixed!
  9. 01:58:833 (1,2,3,4) - Create a windmill pattern between these four? Linear doesn't flow really well here imo
Fixed!(I think)

[Normal]
-> Overall Difficulty -1?Fixed!
  1. 00:11:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think double stacks would play really well (especially on DoubleTime mod), arrange like this perhaps?no change,Sorry
  2. 00:21:233 (1) - Uh... Minor spacing error, it's too close to (6)Fixed!
  3. 00:38:833 (3) - Stack this to (1)'s end?Fixed!
  4. 01:01:233 (1,2) - Feels weird having a 3/2 blank after (1), maybe add note at 01:02:233?no change,Sorry
  5. 01:02:833 (1,2) - Same as above, but add note on 01:03:833 this timeSorry
  6. 01:10:833 (1) - Kiai Time should start here (on the downbeat). Also, hitsound finish on slider's start?Fixed!
  7. 01:14:833 (2) - I think, curve this upward would build more flow:Fixed!
  8. 01:34:233 (3,4) - Hold SHIFT while placing this note, to make it perfectly horizontal with (2)Fixed!
  9. 01:56:433 (2,1) - Don't make a sudden jump here >_<Fixed!
[Beginner]
-> Your normal is 4.3 stars, but your Beginner is only 0.91 ... I think, to balance it, a 2-stars Beginner diff is better. Not something you have to do thoughThe lack of I,Sorry
  1. 00:10:833 (4) - Two grids up and one grid left to make this circle symmetrical with (2)Fixed!
  2. 00:19:633 (2) - Move your red waypoint up a bit, current slider is slightly tilted weirdlyFixed!
  3. 00:56:433 (2) - You could try to use a slider wave here :3Fixed!
  4. 00:59:633 (4,1) - Shocking spacing... It's definitely too sparse orzoh...Fixed!
  5. 01:04:433 (3) - To make it consistent, I prefer to remove one repeat and replace that last repeat with a circle. Optional thoughFixed!
  6. 01:34:833 (1) - No need to New Combo here, because there's already one on the previous sliderFixed!
  7. 01:53:233 (2,3) - Arrange like this, to build more flow?Fixed!
I love kors k's songs :3
I hope this could be ranked soon... Good luck (:
Thank you grat Mod!!
NewRulerNA
Mod reqより

[General]
osbを使う予定がないなら削除
それと難易度の偏りが気になりました
NormalをせめてStarrating4程度(さらに下げられるなら3.5くらい)に落としたほうがいいのでは?

[Normal]

00:11:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - Normalとしては見にくく難易度が高いかも 変えたほうが良いかと
01:26:833 (1,2,3,4) - ^


[Another]
StreamのDSのバラつきの指摘が主です

01:10:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Streamの一部のサークルのDSがちょっと浮いているので微調整
01:12:433 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:14:033 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:15:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:17:233 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:19:833 (3,4,5) - 1grid up
01:21:633 (1,2,3,4,1) - 見た目が良くないので調節
01:23:633 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここも一部のDSが浮いてます
01:25:233 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:26:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:28:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:33:233 (1) - 01:32:833 (5) - と距離が近すぎます
01:49:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - DS
01:52:433 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここもDSが0.78~0.84とバラけていてみた時に気になりました
01:57:233 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - DS
bmin11
[Another]
01:20:433 (1,2,3,4) - Straighten this up please
01:21:633 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:33:233 (1) - This is way too close and no, it doesn't works for a close up at all >_>;; Please fix it.
01:50:433 (1) - ^

[Hyper]
01:10:833 (1~) - Needs more Normal Hitsounds like the other parts. Sounds too calm for a kiai part to be honest.
01:50:833 (1~) - ^

[Normal]
00:08:433 (1,2) - These aren't symmetried at all. Better fix it then keep it.
00:16:433 (3) - ^ but not as important I guess
01:14:033 (1~) - Needs more Normal Hitsounds like the other parts. Sounds too calm for a kiai part to be honest.
01:50:833 (1~) - ^

[Easy]
01:10:833 (1~) - Needs more Normal Hitsounds like the other parts. Sounds too calm for a kiai part to be honest.
01:50:833 (1~) - ^
Topic Starter
kokono_tan

NewRulerNA wrote:

Mod reqより

[General]
osbを使う予定がないなら削除削除しました
それと難易度の偏りが気になりました
NormalをせめてStarrating4程度(さらに下げられるなら3.5くらい)に落としたほうがいいのでは?一応3.8辺りまで下げてみました。

[Normal]

00:11:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - Normalとしては見にくく難易度が高いかも 変えたほうが良いかと
01:26:833 (1,2,3,4) - ^


[Another]
StreamのDSのバラつきの指摘が主です

01:10:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Streamの一部のサークルのDSがちょっと浮いているので微調整
01:12:433 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:14:033 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:15:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:17:233 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:19:833 (3,4,5) - 1grid up
01:21:633 (1,2,3,4,1) - 見た目が良くないので調節
01:23:633 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここも一部のDSが浮いてます
01:25:233 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:26:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:28:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:33:233 (1) - 01:32:833 (5) - と距離が近すぎます
01:49:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - DS
01:52:433 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここもDSが0.78~0.84とバラけていてみた時に気になりました
01:57:233 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - DS

すべて修正しました(多分・・・)
気づくのが遅れて申し訳ないです。MODありがとうございました!!
Topic Starter
kokono_tan

bmin11 wrote:

[Another]
01:20:433 (1,2,3,4) - Straighten this up please
01:21:633 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:33:233 (1) - This is way too close and no, it doesn't works for a close up at all >_>;; Please fix it.
01:50:433 (1) - ^

[Hyper]
01:10:833 (1~) - Needs more Normal Hitsounds like the other parts. Sounds too calm for a kiai part to be honest.
01:50:833 (1~) - ^

[Normal]
00:08:433 (1,2) - These aren't symmetried at all. Better fix it then keep it.
00:16:433 (3) - ^ but not as important I guess
01:14:033 (1~) - Needs more Normal Hitsounds like the other parts. Sounds too calm for a kiai part to be honest.
01:50:833 (1~) - ^

[Easy]
01:10:833 (1~) - Needs more Normal Hitsounds like the other parts. Sounds too calm for a kiai part to be honest.
01:50:833 (1~) - ^

OK! All fixed!
Thank you MOD !! :)
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