Good story so far

Looking forward to the next chapter >w<

Emaal wrote:

I am starting to love you already. no homo.

Not that there's anything wrong with being gay, I don't give gay members a hard time...no homo.

Vext wrote:

Vext needs to be a naughty nurse real bad.

You're not a female...are you? You can be a cross dresser if that's what you mean...but no crossing the gender barrier sorry.

Haneii wrote:

Good story so far

Looking forward to the next chapter >w<

Hm, maybe I can type one up in the morning before work. I've never busted out so much fiction this fast though, I'm usually not very motivated. The stress from the other forum was probably the reason, I've been writing a lot more lately. But yea, I'll let you know when it comes out! If I could write what was on my head magically, the story would be on its 20th chapter by now haha.

Edit: I replaced the fiction in my signature with a link to this thread since it seems I'll be doing a lot of writing here.

Edit 2: I deleted this post and reposted it to avoid double posting, but it's a significant update.

I typed up Chapter 2 now, it's just to provide me a bridge from Chapter 1 to the (hopefully) small climax in Chapter 3. As fun as it is to write this it's still a story, and it needs some depth. So many references I'm encouraging you guys to find by the way. The thing is, when I type these I have ideas for future chapters already, and I tend to put subtle foreshadows in early chapters to foreshadow a chapter up to 6-7 chapters away. I work with what I have, so cliffhangers and weird clues are what I like to leave behind.

Numot has Camerupt because it's the evolve form of Numel. Not that I had to, but I'll say now that he will have a second pokemon later on. It'll be Swalot. You can see it's a play on his username. Every pokemon is usually chosen for a good reason, even if it's not obvious now. I put a lot more thought to these stories than it seems.

Also, I'm stuck. I need another person to play one of the antagonists. I say antagonist because they're not the "bad" guys, like shown in Chapter 2. But they might have a negative attitude. I was going to use DeathXShinigami or Cuddlebun but they got mad about being in the story it seems. Who should I use to fill this spot that hasn't already requested to not be in the story?

Cuddlebun. Antagonist. NOW! jk

Moi o/

Pasonia is antagonist, gogogo!

First off, I don't know anyone really. The only people I see fit for it are the two people who got sensitive over being in it, it has to be someone I talked to at least once. I don't think Vext has been added yet, as long as he's a male I'll add him then. Unless Vext is a female, but at this point it's fine. I just don't want to include someone that I haven't seen post or talked to.

Did anyone read Chapter 2 yet? Two main people that should be reading it are E-Hooker and Quaraezha, though I tried to add a lot of humor. It's mostly a filler/bridge, so I had a lot of leg room for that one haha.

ddrXero64 wrote:

Vext wrote:

Vext needs to be a naughty nurse real bad.

You're not a female...are you? You can be a cross dresser if that's what you mean...but no crossing the gender barrier sorry.

From a fictional story? Am I the only one that sees the irony in this? Fine I'll be an evil antagonist janitor then.

Vext wrote:

From a fictional story? Am I the only one that sees the irony in this?

ddrXero64 wrote:

Edit: Everyone is a human, and they'll have at least one pokemon who represents them.

ddrXero64 wrote:

Remember though, this story revolves around the community. Just post like you usually do, and be yourself. I tend to pull random stuff out of what's happening and sneak it into the story.

It's not too ironic when you think about it. And I found a good way to put you in, I'm tired now, but I might be able to type it up in the morning...

Oh man I so totally feel like getting involved in this. It's been so long since I last participated in a Pokémon-related fanfic... Except my previous ones involved partaking in our own individual roles directly AS Pokémon... but, close enough. Although, I haven't really talked to you enough in chat Xero, so I don't want you to misinterpret my behaviour... so maybe later.

Kitsunemimi wrote:

Oh man I so totally feel like getting involved in this. It's been so long since I last participated in a Pokémon-related fanfic... Except my previous ones involved partaking in our own individual roles directly AS Pokémon... but, close enough. Although, I haven't really talked to you enough in chat Xero, so I don't want you to misinterpret my behaviour... so maybe later.

My last one which consisted of longer chapters (I took my time, it had a lot more imagery too, it took place in a forest) was describing the community as pokemon themselves. It went up to ten chapters, with a mini event (a special chapter that was off the side from the main story). I need to finish it soon, but this is the first time I try something different. Other than my special Elite Four story which was done in one go (3 hours) I've never attempted to use people themselves. It's different for me, but fun. The imagery is lessened, symbolism is twisted into more obvious allusions and the humor is a little more straightforward. I enjoy trying new styles, this is strictly a hobby and not what I do on a regular basis.

It's hard to find me, I'm literally unpredictable. I've been on the vent sometimes, and I can go on chat if you want me too. But I'm still getting into the groove of things, so I always space out on chat.

I tend to look at what's happening in the forum, which is why I like to look at some of the popular threads. If you're a common forum member, I'll notice it. The more I post, the more replies I get, and the more threads I find, the more I'll get to know people by personality.

For the tl;dr people:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=68&t=53059

does anyone else see the irony in some new person who doesn't know the community writing a community-based fic




like at all

Cuddlebun wrote:

does anyone else see the irony in some new person who doesn't know the community writing a community-based fic




like at all

It's so bold, even I see it!

I agree with Tode for once.

You have been here only a short time.

I just hope you figure out all of our genders first.


posting after Vext~ yay

Ahh I do love stuff like this, seeing how one perceives others in a community.

Actually, if possible, I wouldn't mind being added in somewhere down the track. That aside keep up the writing, it's entertaining

Cuddlebun wrote:

does anyone else see the irony in some new person who doesn't know the community writing a community-based fic

like at all

I would've agreed, but it seems you'll say anything to try and take down this story. I was kinda encouraged to do this by others, and I knew I didn't know many people. But I never really heard of someone getting mad that they were in a story. C'mon Cuddlebun, many people want you in it. Even E-Hooker got to bitchslap someone, you sure you don't wanna join? I haven't written Chapter 3 yet, I need a REAL antagonist, the forum depends on you.

BakaloidSky wrote:

can I be gar trainer's anti-hero?

I don't think anyone can save or destroy him as much as he can himself. But tell me, what's your favorite kind of music?

Rantai wrote:

Actually, if possible, I wouldn't mind being added in somewhere down the track. That aside keep up the writing, it's entertaining

Just to make sure...male right? Oh wait, I saw the pictures, never mind I got it. Hm....

Pokemon Dancer, done.

Edit: Wow, Danzai is a Euro Raver and Rantai is Pokemon Dancer, that worked out well! Didn't even plan it haha, you guys have a part together in Chapter 4, I can already see it.

No.

If you really knew the community you would easily be able to come up with another antagonist. But you don't. Hence the irony. Being said by someone who doesn't like the subject doesn't make a statement less true.

This is terribly written.

Testing Tode's theory

ddrXero64 wrote:

I don't think anyone can save or destroy him as much as he can himself. But tell me, what's your favorite kind of music?

Classical, could care less if it's Sonata, Solo Concerto and what not. as long as it's classical music

I make such a good bitch.

Wojjan wrote:

This is terribly written.

Testing Tode's theory

I shall board the troll train for 5 seconds.

I see your terribly written and raise you a "How conceited do you have to be to make yourself the main character."

Cuddlebun wrote:

No.

Guaranteed answer.

E-Hooker wrote:

I make such a good bitch.

The truth's out.

BakaloidSky wrote:

Classical, could care less if it's Sonata, Solo Concerto and what not. as long as it's classical music

Welcome aboard Pokemon Musician.

Vext wrote:

I shall board the troll train for 5 seconds.

I see your terribly written and raise you a "How conceited do you have to be to make yourself the main character."

Welcome aboard. Read my last story. The main character was the owner of the new SMO, and the entire story revolved around him bringing and keeping a community together. I was in that community for over a year. I've been here *checks watch* not too long, and I got asked multiple times to write the story.

Personalities are generic, and they'll be inaccurate. I made myself the main for now because I know myself pretty well. I could completely change that up in one chapter, and I actually planned to. I have a second protagonist in my next chapter who will be focused on.

Oh, this is for fun, derp. You're taking it too seriously gaiz.

ddrXero64 wrote:

Oh, this is for fun, derp. You're taking it too seriously gaiz.

It's srsbsns.

Oh look, I wrote Chapter 3 and its extended ending.

Part 1 is done, and Part 2 will start when I can begin writing it. Here's a couple of things I don't feel like writing in paragraph form.

1. Off Topic=OT=Ohsu Thrashers. Symbolism guys.
2. Kitsunemimi PM'd me asking for Glaceon. I don't like writing with restriction, then it wouldn't be creative writing. So don't ask, or the story will most likely end up as awkward as it did at the end of Chapter 3.
3. I'm out of the story for now. Isn't that ironic.
4. Master 3 pokemon refers to the three modes in osu! So yea.
5. Medi-Chan is a girl now. I know what I'm dooooiiiiinnng, gosh.
6. Kirby and animask made a small appearance. I squeezed a lot in, which is why the extended ending is there. It wouldn't have made sense with the shift in story for Part 2. So Kirby and animask will definitely have bigger parts later on.
7. It's now 5 sections written. I don't know any story that explained everything at the beginning, so let the story unfold some before you start complaining about certain things. You know how I said before "I bullshitted my way through high school," right? Yea, this is how. This story is pulled out of nowhere as I write it because it, like the community, can change at any moment. It's a parody more than fiction, so it'll take actual forum events into the story, even if it doesn't make sense. Don't like it? lol, go write your own, no need to get dramatic.

Cuddlebun wrote:

No.

If you really knew the community you would easily be able to come up with another antagonist. But you don't. Hence the irony. Being said by someone who doesn't like the subject doesn't make a statement less true.

Right, because the person is wrong either way. Good point.

Derp.

Seems like someone finally gets it (fully). Thanks. I also seemed to find my old fan fiction account which was used for my old story. Since I'm finally writing a new story, I'm going to use that to update them all at once. Click my signature to view the stories I've written and still currently write.

Rentai

Some things just never change in my life hehe.

Rantai wrote:

Rentai

Some things just never change in my life hehe.

What are you talking about?

Whether deliberate or not, Rentai was always a common misspelling/mispronunciation of Rantai, even when I was young.

Edit: Guess I should be blunt, misspelling of the name on part 5.

ddrXero64 wrote:

1. Off Topic=OT=Ohsu Thrashers. Symbolism guys.

I vouch to replace all occurence of Ohsu Trashers by Ohsu Trashers In Manly Thong Mantles so it can be symbolism for off-topic being mean to you. If necessary I will provide art accompaniment of your story depicting the osu! trashers in manly thong mantles.

Wojjan wrote:

ddrXero64 wrote:

1. Off Topic=OT=Ohsu Thrashers. Symbolism guys.

I vouch to replace all occurence of Ohsu Trashers by Ohsu Trashers In Manly Thong Mantles so it can be symbolism for off-topic being mean to you. If necessary I will provide art accompaniment of your story depicting the osu! trashers in manly thong mantles.

No, they weren't mean to me lol, read between the lines. I made them a bad ass type group, with a hint from E-Hooker. Not once was I affected by them, and the encounter in Chapter 2 sheds some light on how I feel about them, both in the story and on the forum. I also wasn't embarassed on the stage from them, it was from having my offset so ridiculously off, which is why I was messing up my first couple of plays on osu!. Even more, Vash was the one to knock out the Furret. I haven't had a direct negative encounter with an Ohsu Thrasher in the story, just words so far. If you think there's drama already in my story, you haven't seen anything yet .

If you would like to provide art though (seriously), let me know. When I was writing my story on the old community I had a picture of every pokemon/member that was introduced in each chapter. If you want to draw people as they're introduced, go ahead. Do it how you want too, I won't judge them at all, so feel free to make people look bad. I'll put them in a spoiler under watch character name and give you the credit.

Because some people were described a bit, here's some stuff you might wanna take notice (or for anyone providing artwork).

-Quaraezha has red hair.
-Medi-Chan has a hat, and probably looks a little tomboyish.
-E-Hooker has a leather jacket and boots, over all Biker look. Use accessories if you wanna be creative.
-Danzai is a raver and wears phat pants/tripps and a black shirt (be creative with the shirt if you want), Rantai wears a suit and fedora.
-You might want to draw the pokemon that goes with each trainer, but it's optional. But it would be cool!

***Edit: Actually, if anyone wants to provide artwork of themselves (or others) depicted as trainers, feel free. Other than the guidelines above that are unavoidable, create yourself as the character you're listed please! This could help me not only see personality easier, but gives me a lot more to work with in terms of storywriting. If you'd like to submit a drawing of you or someone else as their trainer, just post it here or PM me (just post it, I don't need PM's c'mon...). As long as it doesn't have nudity or depict someone REALLY badly, I'll just post it under someone's name with your credit.

Multiple pictures of the same person are welcome, but the first one will be the one I'll base my character personality writing. And if you try to submit one that just shows poor and effortless artwork, no. I'm not basing my character on that, I kinda prefer manga/anime drawings since it is pokemon. But I'll still post it under the name.

BakaloidSky would make an interesting character as a musician haha...

Please provide art, Wojjan.

Pokebis wrote:

Please provide art, Wojjan.

On par with SapphireGhost I hope.

Pokebis wrote:

Please provide art, Wojjan.

On par with SapphireGhost I hope.

Update on Story

-I'm going to start writing it again soon, I've been working many shifts for my job lately.
-I decided to get a huge batch of fan made Pokemon Trainers and put them with each character in the story so far. They match well for the most part, so check the OP! You can still make your own if you want, but if not I'll be providing one myself.
-I don't have many people left to introduce, and they'll be introduced rather quickly. The story can continue with the current people so far, but if you would like to be in it and I have something to work with (I don't need to know you, but if you're a new person I've never met expect a generic personality) then I'll add you to the list.

I'm also going to add a poll to the OP. It will go on until I write the last chapter for Part 2. The question is,

"Someone will have to battle Gym Leader Omega. Who will it be?"

Just post your answer, the poll won't have actual choices since people will be added along the way. You only get one vote, and it can't be changed. So if you change it, first person still counts. If you post more than one person, I'll take the first person as the vote. If don't post anyone, it's a troll post.

Pretty much.

Useless Info:

I like ztrot's character art the best, his and Danzai's are pretty bad ass. Also, Vext has two, you'll see later in the story why. Look at that, I just foreshadowed.

That poll defeats the use of polls.

I've seen worse, but yea, the maximum is 10 choices, and I might need more, so I rather just use post voting.

I'll probably decide the person if no one else does. I really do enjoy writing this story, I'm not paying attention to how many people are reading it, though I know some do.

I've just read through the whole story recently, and I quite like the story up to now.
Looking forward for the next installment, though I'd rather you choose the opponent for Omega yourself, Xero.

I think it would be better if you just chose :3

I don't think you guys realize that I don't choose anything. Everything that has happened in the story was due to the community. Quaraezha's personality in this forum got him slapped by E-Hooker, who at first didn't like me, who still doesn't like me but accepts me. Then Kirby's professional vibe is there because he seems to be very literate and involved, and ztrot manages a lot in a very unconventional way resulting in how he did that speech.

You do realize I've chose nothing, I've just twisted the community posts/events into a story.

But in that case, because you seem to want me to choose, then that itself will affect the story now.

ddrXero64 wrote:

...E-Hooker, who at first didn't like me, who still doesn't like me but accepts me.

pssst

she doesn't

Psst, no one cares.

Edit: First chapter of Part 2, The Real Victory, is out. Just refer to the OP or w/e

Animask smiled, and nodded at Vext.

Even in fanfic we're besties~!

Start Power

No, START POWER.

Also, damn I'm so fking nice. Didn't see that coming.

Vext wrote:

No, START POWER.

Also, damn I'm so fking nice. Didn't see that coming.

You were one of my favorite people to put into the story so far truthfully. Here's you in one sentence:

You're a cool guy, but you can be a douchebag when you want to be.

That's the story behind your two faces, to be explained more in coming chapters. Tornado relief is delaying my chapters though.

Edit: I'll edit each chapter to say START POWER instead, you're right on that one.

Wojjan wrote:

ddrXero64 wrote:

...E-Hooker, who at first didn't like me, who still doesn't like me but accepts me.

pssst

she doesn't

pssst

speak for yoself

we gon take this outside?

cos ill take this outside if yo gonna

This was dropped long ago, no interest.

Just thought I'd say that.

For a second there I thought this thing was alive :<