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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 17 de octubre de 2017 at 20:16:16

Artist: M2U
Title: A Bella! (feat. Lucy)
Source: 하이파이브
Tags: PNIX Games HIGH5 Drugstep drug step square musiq original soundtrack JBHyperion Deif Chromoxx
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4169kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chromoxx' Inner Oni (4,82 stars, 786 notes)
  2. Chromoxx' Muzukashii (2,7 stars, 430 notes)
  3. Chromoxx' Oni (3,71 stars, 623 notes)
  4. Cup (1,35 stars, 197 notes)
  5. Deif's Overdose (5,02 stars, 410 notes)
  6. Futsuu (2,35 stars, 276 notes)
  7. Hyperion's Platter (3,1 stars, 359 notes)
  8. Kantan (1,83 stars, 164 notes)
  9. Rain (4,12 stars, 299 notes)
  10. Salad (1,78 stars, 229 notes)


Download: M2U - A Bella! (feat. Lucy)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#14 Mapset | #? Ranked

Cup by me
Salad by me
Platter by JBHyperion
Rain by me
Overdose by Deif

Kantan by me
Futsuu by me
Muzukashii by Chromoxx
Oni by Chromoxx
Inner Oni by Chromoxx
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posted
Where are taiko diffs?
posted

ZiRoX wrote:

Inner Oni by Chromoxx
posted
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General:

Don = d
Kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

>>>> Agrega un Preview Point <<<<

Aunque el tamaño maximo de imagen ya se subió hasta 1920x1080 si quedarían bastante pesadas (y esta es de 1600x1200 - casi cuadro), así que toma esto (JPG - 1366x768)

Quita el Widescreen Support en las diffs donde lo tenga (claro, los taiko)


Kantan


  • 00:13:881 - cambia esta nota a k ... para ya dejarle todo el sonido bajo a la siguiente nota.

    00:16:506 (15,17) - un ctrl+g a estas, precisamente por que el vocal todavía tiene mas agudeza en la nota 15, ya en la siguiente son tonos bajos.

    00:24:006 (26,27) - otro ctrl+g acá ... vocal.

    01:28:506 - cambia el slider por una k ... se ve muy raro seguir puntos en una parte donde no hay audio notorio.

    01:37:881 (24,25,26) - que sea pura nota azul ...
Futsuu

  • OD = 4

    00:07:881 (7,8) - un ctrl+g a estas ... curiosamente la nota 7 tiene mas sonido.

    00:13:881 - cambiala a k .. tiene cierta similitud con la nota anterior.

    00:54:193 - cambiala a d .. aun tiene mas similitud con la nota anterior que con las siguientes 2 de esta parte.
    00:54:568 - Quitale el finish, parece dificil una secuencia como esta...

    01:08:631 - cambiala a d .. ya tiene sonidos de golpe esta nota.

    01:29:068 - cambiala a k .. tiene mas fluidez si sigue la nota anterior por que en la siguiente cambia por un sample "burp".

    01:40:693 - cambiala a d ... misma razón que en 00:54:193-
    01:41:068 - quitale el finish, lo mismo que en 00:54:568-

    01:50:631 - cambiala a k ... tiene el mismo sonido que la nota 01:49:881-

    01:58:506 (277,278,279) - termina esto con un K D K (?)
Chromox's Muzukashii

  • HP/OD = 5

    00:07:693 (14,15,16,17) - change this for d kkk ... have more sense based in high sounds.

    00:14:068 - change this note to k .. is more fluid if follow previous note.

    00:30:943 - Change this note to d .. to leave with priority next note about cymbal.

    00:42:568 (139,140,141) - kkk ... consistence with 00:39:181-

    01:02:818 - Delete this note ... comparing with similar sequence in 01:07:881- have less sounds.

    01:17:443 - Change to k .. same reason as 00:30:943-
Chromoxx's Oni

  • 00:36:849 - Delete this note and add finish in next note .. is better leave with more emphasis about cymbal sound.

    01:06:381 (319,320,321,322,323) - this part can be better with this ... dD dK D

    01:23:349 - Same as 00:36:849-
Chromoxxx's Inner Oni

  • HP/OD = 6.5

    00:36:849 (194,195) - Contrary to Oni, it could remain as dK

    01:12:287 - Delete ... sounds too weird.

    01:12:849 - Move to 01:13:037- and change to d ... the triple sounds better here.

    01:18:287 - Delete ... same as 01:12:287-
posted
Hello there!

[ General]
  1. No preview point is set
[ Cup]
  1. 00:04:131 (2,1) - i feel like this can be spaced more since its the downbeat, theres room for more emphasis
  2. 00:05:631 (2,1) - ^ here as well, 0.90x or 1.00x DS would do the trick nicely
  3. 00:13:506 (1,2,3) - Having them spaced equally DS wise will convert better visually
  4. 00:17:631 (3) - I Feel like having a 1/2 slider here like the one here 00:15:943 (2) - can add some variety while still following the music quite nicely
  5. 00:23:443 - Similar to the point above
  6. 00:28:506 (1) - i feel like having 00:28:506 - this as a circle and a 1/2 slider starting here 00:28:693 - will compliment the vocals better
  7. 00:34:506 (1) - Same as above
  8. 00:44:443 (3,1) - Try to make this jump more noticable
  9. 00:55:506 (1) - This could be spaced more for the added contrast somewhere like x:472 ?
  10. 01:08:443 (2) - In my opinion control H Would be ideal here for a better transition
  11. 01:11:068 (2) - This throws me off since there isnt any noticeable emphasis on this really strong beat here 01:11:256 - . Maybe you can play around with the pattern so its emphasized more?
[ Salad]
  1. I Really like this salad!
  2. 00:04:506 (1) - 00:06:006 (1) - 00:07:506 (1) - I Would emphazise these more, so this 00:09:006 (1) - isnt so sudden
  3. 00:22:506 (1) - Since this is were the vocal peaks in this measure i would expect it to be more spaced so its noticable
  4. 00:44:068 (2) - DS should be about 1.20x so its consistent with 00:45:568 (2,2) -
  5. 01:11:068 (2,3) - Make this more noticable. Sound is pretty prominent. 01:11:068 (2) - moving this to the left will also do 01:10:506 (1,2) - justice by emphasizing more
  6. 01:56:818 (4,1) - I Think this is pretty ambiguous as a jump, maybe space it out more since its the downbeat
[ Hyperion's Platter]
  1. 00:06:381 (3,4) - deserves a tad bit more spacing in my eyes, to be consistent with 00:04:881 (2,3) -
  2. 00:10:881 (2,3) - This should be increased as well, for consistency
  3. 00:12:381 (3,4) - This definitely needs more spacing as well since there is not contrast between the normal jumps and the jump towards the downbeat
  4. 00:20:818 (7,1) - Shouldnt this be a hyperdash like 00:14:631 (4,1) - for consistency. Having only 1 hyper in this section is questionable in my eyes as it is, right in the start as well. Adding another hyper jump there will balance the hyperdash distribution
  5. 00:28:506 (1,2) - I Feel like more movement should be incorporated here so its a given that this platter should be walked
  6. 00:30:006 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing emphasis here is kinda off in my eyes since 00:30:006 (1,2) - this jump has more spacing than 00:30:381 (3,4) - . I believe it should have been the other way around
  7. 00:35:068 (3,4) - Keeping the same Visual distance the same when the gap changes from 1/2 to 1/1 can throw people off. Making this switch more noticable is the optimal solution here in my opinion
  8. 00:48:193 (2,3) - This could be made into a hyper to make this jump more noticable
  9. 01:11:631 (7) - Move more to the right so its more consistent with previous jump since this slider expresses a similar sound
  10. 01:34:693 (2) - Moving it more to the right as well so hyperdash is generated to emphasize the 01:34:881 (3) -
  11. 01:35:256 (4) - this isnt the same sound as 01:35:443 (5,6,7) - so im skeptical as to why this is part of the pattern of the following three circles. These three circles, being 3 different and distinct sound should be differentiated from 01:35:256 (4) - completely, and the 4 should play around with 01:34:881 (3) - more
  12. 01:43:318 (6,1) - Hyperdash here would probably play well too
[ Rain]
  1. 00:02:631 - I Dare say starting off with a 1/2 slider here will make the object placement consistent with the platter diff, which does it as well
  2. 00:14:256 (3,4) - Increase spacing so the visual distance isnt the same when the beat gap is different
  3. 00:40:037 (4,5) - feels pretty awkward to catch and rather uncomfortable to play since the hyper is on the edge. Maybe making the curve more noticable so the transition is better towards the hyper so there is only one swift movement being made
  4. 00:48:381 (3) - Would definitely play better as a 1/2 slider and the song definitely supports it
  5. 01:00:756 (1,2) - The placement really throws me off as there isnt any drastic switch in object placement in the grid and that circle feels so random. Also, adding a 1/2 slider here as well will improve playability for sure
  6. 01:08:068 (2,3) - Im not sure such a sharp anti jump should be in a rain, however i might be wrong
  7. 01:12:006 (1,2) - Shouldnt these be spaced more to be consistent with 01:18:006 (1,2) - ?
  8. 01:23:068 (4,5) - Rhythm is off here. 01:23:443 - is so much stronger than 01:23:631 - but 01:23:631 (5) - gets the jump. You should reconsider this pattern
  9. 01:26:256 (3,4) - Should be made into hyperdashes since later in the same kiai 01:38:256 (3,4) - same pattern is made into a hyperdash
  10. 01:34:881 (3) - Im staying adamant on the fact that these beats should be 1/2 slider not a circle :D
  11. 01:46:881 (3) - ^
  12. 01:49:881 (2,3) - isnt a jump like this really sudden for a rather calm section after kiai
[ Deif's Overdose]
  1. 00:07:506 (1) - move to somewhere like x:123 so the jump to the first 1/4 isnt as sudden. I get that its an overdose but its a bit to sudden and easily overdashable i believe
  2. 00:24:193 (2) - Introducing something so suddenly isnt really recommended in my opinion. You could try making the same pattern in a more forgiving manner so that it shows the players to expect this pattern later in the song. For example here 00:54:568 (3) - the same pattern is used but its more forgiving, which is questionable since this is the kiai so this should have been more intense
  3. 00:42:943 (6) - Try lowering the SV Here so the 2 circles are more stacked when converted
  4. 00:43:881 (3) - I Found that ctrl+g'ing this will improve playability in my opinion, doesnt hurt to try
  5. 01:12:006 (1) - Try reducing the spacing here. The beatmap was really intense in previous measures so intruducing something more forgiving will contribute to playability
  6. 01:18:381 (2,3) - I Feel like there should have been a hyperdash here, cause there is one here 01:19:131 (4,1) -
  7. 01:22:131 (4) - I Feel like the droplet converts rather wacky, making it rather hard to acc for no reason, smoothening out the curve will fix that i suppose
  8. 01:35:631 (3,4) - Really contrasts what you did with the first kiai, at least stick to jump here as well i reckon
  9. 01:47:443 - I Feel like this should have been the slider to have the super fast hyperstream along with 01:47:631 (3) - , not with 01:47:818 (4) -
Best of Luck~
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xtrem3x wrote:

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Chromox's Muzukashii

  • HP/OD = 5 OD is already 5 and as for the HP, Kantan/Futsuu should be 8/7

    00:07:693 (14,15,16,17) - change this for d kkk ... have more sense based in high sounds. sounds aren't really that high tbh and would feel weird

    00:14:068 - change this note to k .. is more fluid if follow previous note. it's a considerably lower pitch than the last note tho

    00:30:943 - Change this note to d .. to leave with priority next note about cymbal. both sounds are specially high

    00:42:568 (139,140,141) - kkk ... consistence with 00:39:181- the sounds are different tho and ddd flows better in this pattern

    01:02:818 - Delete this note ... comparing with similar sequence in 01:07:881- have less sounds. nice idea

    01:17:443 - Change to k .. same reason as 00:30:943- u mean change to d i guess, but no for the same reason
Chromoxx's Oni

  • 00:36:849 - Delete this note and add finish in next note .. is better leave with more emphasis about cymbal sound. feels more interesting as dk tbh

    01:06:381 (319,320,321,322,323) - this part can be better with this ... dD dK D would lose emphasis on the final D imo

    01:23:349 - Same as 00:36:849- same
Chromoxxx's Inner Oni

  • HP/OD = 6.5 HP can stay 6 tbh and as for the OD i find the song's nature is easy enough to get acc on so a smoothly scaling OD throughout all diffs is better here imo

    00:36:849 (194,195) - Contrary to Oni, it could remain as dK is emphasized enough through the SV, finisher would feel awkward

    01:12:287 - Delete ... sounds too weird. doesn't really sound weird imo and adds good buildup

    01:12:849 - Move to 01:13:037- and change to d ... the triple sounds better here. doesn't really sound better to me + the current variation flows more interestingly

    01:18:287 - Delete ... same as 01:12:287- same

@Zirox: delete 01:02:818 - in the Muzukashii and change HP in Kantan/Futsuu to 8/7 and OD to 3/4 pls
posted

Nokashi wrote:

Hello there!

[ Hyperion's Platter]
  1. 00:06:381 (3,4) - deserves a tad bit more spacing in my eyes, to be consistent with 00:04:881 (2,3) - This is actually higher spacing than the one you mentioned due to the SV change, but I increased it a bit more anyway xd
  2. 00:10:881 (2,3) - This should be increased as well, for consistency ^ Same
  3. 00:12:381 (3,4) - This definitely needs more spacing as well since there is not contrast between the normal jumps and the jump towards the downbeat Buffed a little, though the repeated direction changes here make this harder so I dropped the spacing a bit to compensate
  4. 00:20:818 (7,1) - Shouldnt this be a hyperdash like 00:14:631 (4,1) - for consistency. Having only 1 hyper in this section is questionable in my eyes as it is, right in the start as well. Adding another hyper jump there will balance the hyperdash distribution Done, and added one at 00:22:506 (1,2) - also
  5. 00:28:506 (1,2) - I Feel like more movement should be incorporated here so its a given that this platter should be walked Done here and 00:34:506 (1,2) - also for consistency
  6. 00:30:006 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing emphasis here is kinda off in my eyes since 00:30:006 (1,2) - this jump has more spacing than 00:30:381 (3,4) - . I believe it should have been the other way around
  7. 00:35:068 (3,4) - Keeping the same Visual distance the same when the gap changes from 1/2 to 1/1 can throw people off. Making this switch more noticable is the optimal solution here in my opinion Moved 00:35:068 (3) - left a bit so this flows better
  8. 00:48:193 (2,3) - This could be made into a hyper to make this jump more noticable This leaves a pretty dense hyper pattern and unexpected difficulty spike imo
  9. 01:11:631 (7) - Move more to the right so its more consistent with previous jump since this slider expresses a similar sound Increased a little
  10. 01:34:693 (2) - Moving it more to the right as well so hyperdash is generated to emphasize the 01:34:881 (3) - Same as 00:48:193 (2,3) -
  11. 01:35:256 (4) - this isnt the same sound as 01:35:443 (5,6,7) - so im skeptical as to why this is part of the pattern of the following three circles. These three circles, being 3 different and distinct sound should be differentiated from 01:35:256 (4) - completely, and the 4 should play around with 01:34:881 (3) - more They're part of the same pattern because they all map vocals. The differentiation comes from the increased spacing on 01:34:881 (3,4) -
  12. 01:43:318 (6,1) - Hyperdash here would probably play well too Meh, vocal is quite weak there so I'd prefer just a regular dash
Best of Luck~

Thanks for the suggestions!

Platter
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:A Bella !
TitleUnicode:A Bella !
Artist:M2U
ArtistUnicode:M2U
Creator:ZiRoX
Version:Hyperion's Platter
Source:하이파이브
Tags:PNIX Games JBHyperion Deif Chromoxx
BeatmapID:1149080
BeatmapSetID:541101

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
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SliderTickRate:1

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posted
Nokashi
Hello there!

[ Deif's Overdose]
  1. 00:07:506 (1) - move to somewhere like x:123 so the jump to the first 1/4 isnt as sudden. I get that its an overdose but its a bit to sudden and easily overdashable i believe (Alright)
  2. 00:24:193 (2) - Introducing something so suddenly isnt really recommended in my opinion. You could try making the same pattern in a more forgiving manner so that it shows the players to expect this pattern later in the song. For example here 00:54:568 (3) - the same pattern is used but its more forgiving, which is questionable since this is the kiai so this should have been more intense (The slider you mention is more forgiving because it's double as long as this one and less quick because otherwise it'd go offscreen. Anyway, made it less intense as you suggested)
  3. 00:42:943 (6) - Try lowering the SV Here so the 2 circles are more stacked when converted (No need to reduce the SV for that, just made the slider a bit more vertical instead)
  4. 00:43:881 (3) - I Found that ctrl+g'ing this will improve playability in my opinion, doesnt hurt to try (Changed the direction of that slider and optimised the surrounding ones)
  5. 01:12:006 (1) - Try reducing the spacing here. The beatmap was really intense in previous measures so intruducing something more forgiving will contribute to playability (I think the current distance of this note shouldn't cause too many issues. It uses a similar one on the previous note similar to the transition 01:11:162 (6,7) - and to the next slider, which is the default distance used in the upcoming patterns. Having a hyper to introduce a new section of the music is quite typical though)
  6. 01:18:381 (2,3) - I Feel like there should have been a hyperdash here, cause there is one here 01:19:131 (4,1) - (The hyper you mention gets a new stanza introduced plus there's a clear tone in the vocals that can justify it. For individual sections in this part of the melody like this one or 01:19:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - , I tried not to use too many hypers but just distanced notes so the difficulty doesn't get overcharged)
  7. 01:22:131 (4) - I Feel like the droplet converts rather wacky, making it rather hard to acc for no reason, smoothening out the curve will fix that i suppose (The point of having a rather sharp and fast curve is to represent better the high-pitched sound. Tried to smooth it and keep the intended effect)
  8. 01:35:631 (3,4) - Really contrasts what you did with the first kiai, at least stick to jump here as well i reckon (The interlude of the 2nd chorus is more intense and has more beats to map than the 1st one)
  9. 01:47:443 - I Feel like this should have been the slider to have the super fast hyperstream along with 01:47:631 (3) - , not with 01:47:818 (4) - (Not if there's no beat to map at 01:47:537 - )
Best of Luck~


Thanks for your mod!

@ZiRoX: Please add a preview point in my difficulty as well.

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Title:A Bella !
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Artist:M2U
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Creator:ZiRoX
Version:Deif's Overdose
Source:하이파이브
Tags:PNIX Games JBHyperion Deif
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posted

xtrem3x wrote:


>>>> Agrega un Preview Point <<<< Hecho

Aunque el tamaño maximo de imagen ya se subió hasta 1920x1080 si quedarían bastante pesadas (y esta es de 1600x1200 - casi cuadro), así que toma esto (JPG - 1366x768)Prefiero la resolución que tiene actualmente, ésta me parece muy distorsionada

[Futsuu]
00:07:881 (7,8) - un ctrl+g a estas ... curiosamente la nota 7 tiene mas sonido. El orden actual va bien con la batería IMO.

01:08:631 - cambiala a d .. ya tiene sonidos de golpe esta nota. Esto sigue bien el tono del violín

Nokashi wrote:

Hello there!

[ General]
  1. No preview point is set Added on all diffs
[ Cup]
  1. 00:04:131 (2,1) - i feel like this can be spaced more since its the downbeat, theres room for more emphasis Done
  2. 00:05:631 (2,1) - ^ here as well, 0.90x or 1.00x DS would do the trick nicely Done
  3. 00:13:506 (1,2,3) - Having them spaced equally DS wise will convert better visually Moved (2) a bit to the left, but didn't left with equal distances, as I feel unequal distances make the circles look like they continue the flow from the slider.
  4. 00:17:631 (3) - I Feel like having a 1/2 slider here like the one here 00:15:943 (2) - can add some variety while still following the music quite nicely
  5. 00:23:443 - Similar to the point above Done for both
  6. 00:28:506 (1) - i feel like having 00:28:506 - this as a circle and a 1/2 slider starting here 00:28:693 - will compliment the vocals better I think this is fine at it is, as it covers both the piano and the vocals. Also, it keeps density down and provides a break.
  7. 00:34:506 (1) - Same as above Same
  8. 00:44:443 (3,1) - Try to make this jump more noticable Done
  9. 00:55:506 (1) - This could be spaced more for the added contrast somewhere like x:472 ? Done
  10. 01:08:443 (2) - In my opinion control H Would be ideal here for a better transition I think it's better as it is, since it keeps a larger distance after the slider which emphasizes the downbeat better.
  11. 01:11:068 (2) - This throws me off since there isnt any noticeable emphasis on this really strong beat here 01:11:256 - . Maybe you can play around with the pattern so its emphasized more? I increased the distances a bit, but not much can be done because this is a Cup, and I don't want to introduce a larger 1/2 distances that's inconsistent with the rest of the diff.
[ Salad]
  1. I Really like this salad!
  2. 00:04:506 (1) - 00:06:006 (1) - 00:07:506 (1) - I Would emphazise these more, so this 00:09:006 (1) - isnt so sudden While I understand your concern, I also think having a dash less than 2 secs into the map would also be sudden for a diff that's meant to introduce dashes, so I'll see if this get mentioned again.
  3. 00:22:506 (1) - Since this is were the vocal peaks in this measure i would expect it to be more spaced so its noticable Increased the distance a bit so it's a bit more emphasized, but won't be adding a dash.
  4. 00:44:068 (2) - DS should be about 1.20x so its consistent with 00:45:568 (2,2) - Done
  5. 01:11:068 (2,3) - Make this more noticable. Sound is pretty prominent. 01:11:068 (2) - moving this to the left will also do 01:10:506 (1,2) - justice by emphasizing more Increased the distance a bit.
  6. 01:56:818 (4,1) - I Think this is pretty ambiguous as a jump, maybe space it out more since its the downbeat Moved 1 gridspace which already makes it a bit clearer.
[ Rain]
  1. 00:02:631 - I Dare say starting off with a 1/2 slider here will make the object placement consistent with the platter diff, which does it as well This fall under GD leniency, so I prefer not to add it for consistency within my diffs, rather than consistency with GDs. I noticed the Overdose doesn't do it as well
  2. 00:14:256 (3,4) - Increase spacing so the visual distance isnt the same when the beat gap is different I increased it a bit, but not that much to keep some leniency after the HDash.
  3. 00:40:037 (4,5) - feels pretty awkward to catch and rather uncomfortable to play since the hyper is on the edge. Maybe making the curve more noticable so the transition is better towards the hyper so there is only one swift movement being made Fixed on a different way: reduced the distance between the objects to make it slightly easier.
  4. 00:48:381 (3) - Would definitely play better as a 1/2 slider and the song definitely supports it Tried several patterns and couldn't find anything of my liking. Additionally, I think not having that beat places a bit more emphasis on the vocals.
  5. 01:00:756 (1,2) - The placement really throws me off as there isnt any drastic switch in object placement in the grid and that circle feels so random. Also, adding a 1/2 slider here as well will improve playability for sure Moved the pattern a bit, but I'm not removing the circle, since it's mapped to a sound, nor adding a 1/2 slider because the sound at 01:01:318 - is quite weak compared to the rest.
  6. 01:08:068 (2,3) - Im not sure such a sharp anti jump should be in a rain, however i might be wrong This isn't an anti jump, and removing the HDash would make this even more awkward.
  7. 01:12:006 (1,2) - Shouldnt these be spaced more to be consistent with 01:18:006 (1,2) - ? Variation doesn't hurt :(
  8. 01:23:068 (4,5) - Rhythm is off here. 01:23:443 - is so much stronger than 01:23:631 - but 01:23:631 (5) - gets the jump. You should reconsider this pattern Changed
  9. 01:26:256 (3,4) - Should be made into hyperdashes since later in the same kiai 01:38:256 (3,4) - same pattern is made into a hyperdash Previous Kiai didn't had HDashes between these, so it's fine. And that gives that last Kiai a bit more intensity.
  10. 01:34:881 (3) - Im staying adamant on the fact that these beats should be 1/2 slider not a circle :DSame reply as before
  11. 01:46:881 (3) - ^ ^
  12. 01:49:881 (2,3) - isnt a jump like this really sudden for a rather calm section after kiai I think it fits with the intensity of the accordion, so I'm keeping it for the moment
Best of Luck~


Thanks you both for the mods! Updated everything.
posted
Got asked to mod the other catch diffs so here we go now
Cup
  1. 00:06:006 (1) - A little more curve on this might be nice, feels a bit squashed towards the repeat for me
  2. 00:09:006 (1,1) - Could do with more spacing to emphasise the pitch change
  3. 00:22:506 (1,2) - I prefer antiflow here to highlight the strong vocal, so would move (2) to the left side of (1,3). Feels a bit weak currently
  4. 00:30:006 (1,2) - A little tricky to move left after the wiggle, I'd make (2) face right instead for smoother flow, as you did for 00:36:006 (1,2) -
  5. 00:36:568 (2,1) - Unexpectedly strong spacing considering what you had been using up to this point. I get that the kiai start needs emphasis, but this could be reduced slightly so as to fit better with the previous "low-ish" spacing concepts
  6. 01:01:506 (1) - The white tick at 01:02:256 - is quite a bit stronger, so I would extend this to a 2/1 slider or add a circle there to map both.
  7. 01:03:943 - Feels empty considering 01:04:131 (2) - is mapped and is the same strength
  8. 01:23:068 (2,1) - Same as previous kiai start
  9. 01:47:256 (2,1) - 01:48:756 (2,1) - etc. These are also kinda big compared to a lot of other spacings and in one of the calmest parts of the song, seems a bit weird. I'd reduce them slightly to like 1.8x or so
  10. 01:58:506 (1,2) - This is probably the only one that really deserves something like 2.0x imo
Salad
  1. 00:09:943 (3,1) - Walkable spacing though I think you intended dash here, maybe move 00:09:943 (3) - left a bit so your buffed jump isn't right against the wall
  2. 00:25:131 (3,1) - Overdashed this a couple times, might be worth increasing a little
  3. 00:35:631 (3,1) - Was really expecting to see a dash here for the high pitched vocal
  4. 00:44:443 (3,1) - 00:45:943 (3,1) - Seems like a bit of an odd place to introduce 1/2 dashes considering you opted not to use them on stronger sounds such as 00:40:506 (1,2) - 00:42:006 (1,2) - etc.
  5. 00:47:443 (3,1) - Dash for the vocal?
  6. 00:49:318 (5,1) - Like this is a cool 1/2 dash, compare this to what you used above and there's a real difference
  7. 00:52:131 (3,1) - Might want to buff this "dash" since it only just requires dash, and without the direction change the player is less inclined to do so
  8. 00:54:006 (1,2) - This would make a nice 1/2 dash, but it might be too dense considering I think you also missed a dash at 00:55:131 (3,1) -
  9. 01:00:756 (4,1) - Intentional walk? You could increase this a bit if you wanted a kiai-ending dash I guess
  10. 01:22:131 (3,1) - Would be another cool place for a dash on that distorted pitch vocal
  11. 01:23:068 (2,1) - 01:25:131 (3,1) - etc. These are all borderline walks, you could increase the distance on each of the 1/1 spacings to more clearly highlight the dash
  12. 01:41:631 (3,1) - Should probably also have more spacing, easily walkable
Rain
  1. 00:07:506 (1,2) - Kinda awkward "walk" after the hyper, consider reducing
  2. 00:08:818 (8,1) - Unexpectedly strong hyper leading into antiflow makes this a little uncomfortable, and odd compared to the stronger sounding 00:10:131 (3,1) -, consider weakening this
  3. 00:22:506 (1,2) - Vocal could support a stronger dash here imo
  4. 00:54:381 (2,3) - Strength of this sound could support a hyper imo, would be a nice way to start the second half of the kiai
  5. 01:02:068 (2,3) - Antiflow feels a bit forced here given the calm nature of this section, perhaps something like this might work better? You will need to tweak spacing to fix the dash (or if you want hyper) to 01:02:443 (5,1) - though
  6. 01:26:256 (3,4) - Quite a harsh dash after the previous hyper, consider reducing
  7. 01:29:631 (4) - SV change feels a tiny bit excessive here, the tail is really easy to miss when walking. 1.25x SV might be better
  8. 01:46:881 (3,4) - Really underwhelming spacing to end the kiai, perhaps map the missing red tick to create a dash to (4) instead?
Overdose
  1. 00:14:256 (3,4) - Unexpectedly high spacing after the hyper, easy to miss the tail of (4) also due to high SV. Rotating (4) more vertically would help
  2. 00:36:193 (2,3,4) - Personal preference, but the difference in strength in these hypers is a little annoying to play, I'd move (2) right a tiny bit
  3. 00:46:881 (3,4) - Hyper strength is kinda low for making this slider flow well, catcher runs out of momentum by the time you get to the left-most point. I'd curve (4) more to the right (C-shape) and/or buff the hyper strength a little for better flow. Same applies to 00:58:881 (3,4) -
  4. 01:23:068 (4,5) - This on the other hand is really easy to overshoot due to high hyper strength and shallow curve. I'd curve (5) a bit more
  5. 01:48:568 (2,3) - Possible hyper here for the high pitch sound? 01:50:818 (5,1) - is optional - though not as strong it would be more consistent with the Rain I guess
Hope this helps! (:
posted
JBHyperion
Overdose
  1. 00:14:256 (3,4) - Unexpectedly high spacing after the hyper, easy to miss the tail of (4) also due to high SV. Rotating (4) more vertically would help (Moved it more to the right instead)
  2. 00:36:193 (2,3,4) - Personal preference, but the difference in strength in these hypers is a little annoying to play, I'd move (2) right a tiny bit (Done)
  3. 00:46:881 (3,4) - Hyper strength is kinda low for making this slider flow well, catcher runs out of momentum by the time you get to the left-most point. I'd curve (4) more to the right (C-shape) and/or buff the hyper strength a little for better flow. Same applies to 00:58:881 (3,4) - (Moved the notes away as suggested)
  4. 01:23:068 (4,5) - This on the other hand is really easy to overshoot due to high hyper strength and shallow curve. I'd curve (5) a bit more (Done)
  5. 01:48:568 (2,3) - Possible hyper here for the high pitch sound? 01:50:818 (5,1) - is optional - though not as strong it would be more consistent with the Rain I guess (I wouldn't overcharge the last section that much. Just moved (2) a bit more away to have a stronger dash)
Hope this helps! (:

Just realised this got more mods lol. Thanks for your help!

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176,80,118412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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96,144,119256,1,14,0:0:0:0:
posted

JBHyperion wrote:

Got asked to mod the other catch diffs so here we go now
Cup
  1. 00:06:006 (1) - A little more curve on this might be nice, feels a bit squashed towards the repeat for me Done
  2. 00:09:006 (1,1) - Could do with more spacing to emphasise the pitch change Done
  3. 00:22:506 (1,2) - I prefer antiflow here to highlight the strong vocal, so would move (2) to the left side of (1,3). Feels a bit weak currently Personally I didn't like antiflow here.
  4. 00:30:006 (1,2) - A little tricky to move left after the wiggle, I'd make (2) face right instead for smoother flow, as you did for 00:36:006 (1,2) - Fixed
  5. 00:36:568 (2,1) - Unexpectedly strong spacing considering what you had been using up to this point. I get that the kiai start needs emphasis, but this could be reduced slightly so as to fit better with the previous "low-ish" spacing concepts Done
  6. 01:01:506 (1) - The white tick at 01:02:256 - is quite a bit stronger, so I would extend this to a 2/1 slider or add a circle there to map both.I think the 3/2 pattern follows the ¿piano? nicely
  7. 01:03:943 - Feels empty considering 01:04:131 (2) - is mapped and is the same strength Done
  8. 01:23:068 (2,1) - Same as previous kiai start Done
  9. 01:47:256 (2,1) - 01:48:756 (2,1) - etc. These are also kinda big compared to a lot of other spacings and in one of the calmest parts of the song, seems a bit weird. I'd reduce them slightly to like 1.8x or so Reduced them to 1.7x instead
  10. 01:58:506 (1,2) - This is probably the only one that really deserves something like 2.0x imo Not sure, but it was already x2.0 when I got to this :thinking:
Salad
  1. 00:09:943 (3,1) - Walkable spacing though I think you intended dash here, maybe move 00:09:943 (3) - left a bit so your buffed jump isn't right against the wall Done
  2. 00:25:131 (3,1) - Overdashed this a couple times, might be worth increasing a little Done
  3. 00:35:631 (3,1) - Was really expecting to see a dash here for the high pitched vocal I think keeping it as a walkable distance makes the next dash, which marks the beginning of the Kiai, really stand out, which I prefer.
  4. 00:44:443 (3,1) - 00:45:943 (3,1) - Seems like a bit of an odd place to introduce 1/2 dashes considering you opted not to use them on stronger sounds such as 00:40:506 (1,2) - 00:42:006 (1,2) - etc. I preferred to keep those first 1/2 patterns as walkable patterns because of the antiflow.
  5. 00:47:443 (3,1) - Dash for the vocal? Done
  6. 00:49:318 (5,1) - Like this is a cool 1/2 dash, compare this to what you used above and there's a real difference Yeah, it's cool :thinking:
  7. 00:52:131 (3,1) - Might want to buff this "dash" since it only just requires dash, and without the direction change the player is less inclined to do so Increased a bit
  8. 00:54:006 (1,2) - This would make a nice 1/2 dash, but it might be too dense considering I think you also missed a dash at 00:55:131 (3,1) - Added and increased the other
  9. 01:00:756 (4,1) - Intentional walk? You could increase this a bit if you wanted a kiai-ending dash I guess It was hardly walkable, especially for Salad players, but increased it anyway
  10. 01:22:131 (3,1) - Would be another cool place for a dash on that distorted pitch vocal Same reason as for the previous "Kiai"
  11. 01:23:068 (2,1) - 01:25:131 (3,1) - etc. These are all borderline walks, you could increase the distance on each of the 1/1 spacings to more clearly highlight the dash Moved stuff around to increase the spacings.
  12. 01:41:631 (3,1) - Should probably also have more spacing, easily walkable Fixed
Rain
  1. 00:07:506 (1,2) - Kinda awkward "walk" after the hyper, consider reducing Reduced
  2. 00:08:818 (8,1) - Unexpectedly strong hyper leading into antiflow makes this a little uncomfortable, and odd compared to the stronger sounding 00:10:131 (3,1) -, consider weakening this Weakened
  3. 00:22:506 (1,2) - Vocal could support a stronger dash here imo Increased a bit
  4. 00:54:381 (2,3) - Strength of this sound could support a hyper imo, would be a nice way to start the second half of the kiai Added HDash
  5. 01:02:068 (2,3) - Antiflow feels a bit forced here given the calm nature of this section, perhaps something like this might work better? You will need to tweak spacing to fix the dash (or if you want hyper) to 01:02:443 (5,1) - though Done and added HDash
  6. 01:26:256 (3,4) - Quite a harsh dash after the previous hyper, consider reducing Reduced
  7. 01:29:631 (4) - SV change feels a tiny bit excessive here, the tail is really easy to miss when walking. 1.25x SV might be better Yeah, fixed
  8. 01:46:881 (3,4) - Really underwhelming spacing to end the kiai, perhaps map the missing red tick to create a dash to (4) instead? Done
Hope this helps! (:

Thanks m8 - also updated Deif's diff
posted
Quick mod with stuff in it

General: Inconsistent tags with Deif's Overdose. Perhaps you need to update the overdose's tags.

[Cup]
00:10:506 (1) - Here I would increase movement of the slider because the pitch of the accordion shifts greatly.
00:24:006 (1) - This downbeat slider is a little confusing, because you've mainly hit sliders on the upbeat at this point. I would make this a 1/2 repeat slider to "stabilize" the player.
01:10:881 - You sure you want to leave this strong beat unmapped? I understand the need for sparseness, but if you're going to map those other beats you might as well map this one as well.
01:51:568 - A strong beat here--I would keep consistency and add a hitcircle here for variety, like at 01:53:068 (2). It follows the main accordion.

[Salad]
00:10:506 (1,2) - Similar to the cup, find some way to accent this huge pitch shift.
01:06:006 (1) - Strong synth, but you move nowhere. Make this a straight slider instead.
01:58:506 (1,2) - I would rather have a hitcircle then a 1/1 slider to follow the music closely (if you hear the synth and the accordion).

[Hyperion's Platter]
00:04:881 (2,3) - Looks walkable, and could cause platter players to miss early on. I would lower distancing here.
00:56:631 (3,4,1) - A challenging pattern here--I'd rather you simplify it than lower the distancing. However, both work.
01:30:006 (1,2,3,4) - Again, this back/forth is a challenging pattern for a platter. If you could nerf this by moving (2) to the other side of (1) and (3), that would work nicely.
01:37:506 (1,2) - Bit of an unexpected leap, in my opinion. Lower distance here. If you follow this comment, you'll have to move (3,4) as well.
01:48:662 - It's worth following this note, since you're following 01:47:912 (7).

[Rain]
00:14:631 (4,1) - I would make this introduction to the voice more "special" with increased distancing, rather than a similar distancing to 00:13:506 (1,2).
01:00:568 - Strong drumbeat here you ignore--put a hitcircle here. This applies to 00:48:568 as well.
01:00:943 (2) - I would increase SV here--strong sound in the vocals.
01:22:131 (3,4,5) - This is quite a large pitch spike but the distancing is so low! Increase distancing 01:22:131 (3,1), at least.
01:35:068 - Same as 01:00:568.

[Deif's Overdose]
00:39:568 (5,6,1) - The slanted direction of these vertical sliders is particularly unforgiving. I think you could tilt them the opposite direction at the same angle and it would be a little easier.
01:01:131 (2,1) - Antiflow's a bit weird to play here with a double hyper slider (what's the terminology???). However, this is a minor comment, so if you think it's fine, you can keep it the way and I would still be satisfied.
01:29:631 (5,1,2,3) - This is a surprisingly difficult set of jumps. I would at least simplify (5,1) or lower distance because it's really easy to miss and choke and die.
01:34:881 (3,4) - A little challenging to hit here, I would lower distancing slightly here.
posted

Absolute Zero wrote:



[Hyperion's Platter]
00:04:881 (2,3) - Looks walkable, and could cause platter players to miss early on. I would lower distancing here. Rearranged a bunch of shit here for more clear spacing
00:56:631 (3,4,1) - A challenging pattern here--I'd rather you simplify it than lower the distancing. However, both work. Alright, made it walkable as on previous patterns
01:30:006 (1,2,3,4) - Again, this back/forth is a challenging pattern for a platter. If you could nerf this by moving (2) to the other side of (1) and (3), that would work nicely. Done here and 01:42:006 (1,2,3) -
01:37:506 (1,2) - Bit of an unexpected leap, in my opinion. Lower distance here. If you follow this comment, you'll have to move (3,4) as well. Removed the dash
01:48:662 - It's worth following this note, since you're following 01:47:912 (7). Rip undermap xd

Thanks for the mod!

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General: Inconsistent tags with Deif's Overdose. Perhaps you need to update the overdose's tags. (Done)

[Deif's Overdose]
00:39:568 (5,6,1) - The slanted direction of these vertical sliders is particularly unforgiving. I think you could tilt them the opposite direction at the same angle and it would be a little easier. (Tried it as you suggested, but unfortunaly the hypers get cancelled like that. I've tried separating them more but the required movement doesn't look as natural as the current one, where you just need to do small stop&go's)
01:01:131 (2,1) - Antiflow's a bit weird to play here with a double hyper slider (what's the terminology???). However, this is a minor comment, so if you think it's fine, you can keep it the way and I would still be satisfied. (The same situation would occur if that slider would've been splitted into 2 notes and be called a hyperchain or whatever. The only "challenge" of this pattern is managing to get the droplets of the speedy slider... which is only one and gets along with the direction of the hyper at the head of the slider)
01:29:631 (5,1,2,3) - This is a surprisingly difficult set of jumps. I would at least simplify (5,1) or lower distance because it's really easy to miss and choke and die. (To be frankly, I've reduced the intensity of the jumps before and after the speedy slider so this difficulty spike is less noticeable. I hope it's better now)
01:34:881 (3,4) - A little challenging to hit here, I would lower distancing slightly here. (Nothing different than patterns like 00:48:381 (3,4) - 01:00:381 (3,4) - 01:46:881 (3,4) - , where the hypers with made with the least possible distance, which leads to a not-so-challenging movement into such direction changes without a hyper)

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posted

Absolute Zero wrote:

Quick mod with stuff in it

[Cup]
00:10:506 (1) - Here I would increase movement of the slider because the pitch of the accordion shifts greatly. Moved to the left of the previous object and curved a bit more.
00:24:006 (1) - This downbeat slider is a little confusing, because you've mainly hit sliders on the upbeat at this point. I would make this a 1/2 repeat slider to "stabilize" the player. I don't get what's confusing about this part. It's consistent with previous patterns, so the players kinda knows what to expect, and it also closely follows vocals.
01:10:881 - You sure you want to leave this strong beat unmapped? I understand the need for sparseness, but if you're going to map those other beats you might as well map this one as well. Personally I think the surrounding sounds are stronger than this, and it gives more emphasis to said notes if I don't map that beat.
01:51:568 - A strong beat here--I would keep consistency and add a hitcircle here for variety, like at 01:53:068 (2). It follows the main accordion. Done

[Salad]
00:10:506 (1,2) - Similar to the cup, find some way to accent this huge pitch shift. Personally I think the dash into antiflow is okay already.
01:06:006 (1) - Strong synth, but you move nowhere. Make this a straight slider instead.Tried something.
01:58:506 (1,2) - I would rather have a hitcircle then a 1/1 slider to follow the music closely (if you hear the synth and the accordion). Having it this way allows me to have a dash to (3), which is stronger than (2), so it's fine as it is.

[Rain]
00:14:631 (4,1) - I would make this introduction to the voice more "special" with increased distancing, rather than a similar distancing to 00:13:506 (1,2). Increased a bit
01:00:568 - Strong drumbeat here you ignore--put a hitcircle here. This applies to 00:48:568 as well. Forthe 00:48:568 - sound, omitting it places and keeps the emphasis on the vocals. The other is omitted for the same reason (not a distinct vocal in there).
01:00:943 (2) - I would increase SV here--strong sound in the vocals. Done
01:22:131 (3,4,5) - This is quite a large pitch spike but the distancing is so low! Increase distancing 01:22:131 (3,1), at least. Increased a bit.
01:35:068 - Same as 01:00:568. Same as there.
posted

[Salad]
  1. 00:03:943 (3,1) -; 00:05:443 (2,1) -; 00:06:943 (3,1) -; 00:12:943 (3,1) - Imo these has lack of the movement. I think you should be consistent with 00:08:443 (3,1) -; 00:09:943 (3,1) -; and so you can increase the distance between patterns I suggested
  2. 00:36:006 (1,2) - well, this one is tottaly underdone, so I suggest you to increase the distance, maybe even make a dash?
  3. 00:54:568 (2) - This curve looks somewhat ugly and also feels pretty awkward after a dash. maybe you could make this more curved?
  4. 00:59:443 (3,1) - again, compared to 00:56:443 (3,1) -; 00:57:943 (3,1) - it feels inconsistent and underdone, also 01:00:006 (1) - is even louder than 00:57:006 (1) -; 00:58:506 (1) - so I think you should make a dash to 01:00:006 (1) -
  5. 01:00:756 (4) - ... I don't quite understand how this one is emphasizing anything lol. I think you should rearrange that one into something more fun and densier, for example - 3 single notes or something like that. I also think 01:00:756 (4) - the sound on the sliders end is quite high and so it doesn't deserve to be on the sliders end
  6. 01:09:943 (3,1) - aaa again, a dash is required here for being consistent and emphasizing ideas. My suggestion is to CTRL G 01:10:506 (1) - and move it to somewhere x480
  7. 01:22:131 (3,1) - and once again, compared to 01:15:568 (2,1) - it's really undermapped. while 01:22:506 (1) - is a lot higher than 01:16:506 (1) -, it's a simple walkable?? I think you should increase the distance to make it a dash
  8. 01:35:256 (2,3,4,5) - make this one a little bit more curved, just for aesthetics
  9. 01:45:943 (3,1) - the same problem like 01:09:943 (3,1) - here
  10. 01:47:256 (1) - and the same problem I mentioned before. oh, also there's no dash leading to 01:48:006 (1) -, which is inconsistent to 01:00:756 (4,1) -. Also 01:47:256 (1) - this NC is inconsistent with 01:00:756 (4) -, so remove it


[Hyperion's Platter]
  1. 00:04:131 (4,1) - isn't this supposed to be a dash compared to 00:02:631 (1,2) -; 00:05:631 (4,1) -; 00:09:006 (1,2) -; 00:10:881 (2,3) -; 00:12:381 (3,4) -? The same goes for 00:07:131 (5,1) -.
  2. 00:23:818 (4,1) - increase a little bit, just to make it a clear dash
  3. 00:50:068 (2,3) -; 00:53:068 (2,3) -; 00:59:068 (2,3) - these are not consistent with 01:36:568 (2,3) -; 01:39:568 (2,3) -; 01:44:068 (2,3) - respectively, so increase the distance (it's fine if you used growing emphasize idea in the last kiai compared to the first one, if yes then sorry uwu)
    clear platter


[Rain]
  1. 00:03:568 (2,3) -; 00:05:068 (2,3) -; 00:06:568 (2,3) -; 00:09:568 (2,3) -; 00:11:068 (2,3) -; 00:12:568 (2,3) - hey, these a too ambiguous, I can even catch them without using a dash lol. I think you should decrease the distance between these, since even platter diff have much more densier dashes at these moments so yeah
  2. 01:00:756 (1,2) - ambiguous
  3. 01:57:568 (2,3) - What about a dash here?
    clear rain


[Deif's Overdose]
  1. amazing
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Myle wrote:



[Hyperion's Platter]
  1. 00:04:131 (4,1) - isn't this supposed to be a dash compared to 00:02:631 (1,2) -; 00:05:631 (4,1) -; 00:09:006 (1,2) -; 00:10:881 (2,3) -; 00:12:381 (3,4) -? The same goes for 00:07:131 (5,1) -. I kept these as walks because the pitch is lower, but also to avoid the intro being too difficult. Simplifying it like this eases the player into the map more gently
  2. 00:23:818 (4,1) - increase a little bit, just to make it a clear dash Done
  3. 00:50:068 (2,3) -; 00:53:068 (2,3) -; 00:59:068 (2,3) - these are not consistent with 01:36:568 (2,3) -; 01:39:568 (2,3) -; 01:44:068 (2,3) - respectively, so increase the distance (it's fine if you used growing emphasize idea in the last kiai compared to the first one, if yes then sorry uwu) Yeah I wanted first kiai to be a little easier so that way the end of the map is more intense and emphasised, hope you understand
    clear platter

Thanks for the suggestions!

@ZiRoX: please move 00:23:818 (4) - to x-20 thanks
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Myle wrote:


[Salad]
  1. 00:03:943 (3,1) -; 00:05:443 (2,1) -; 00:06:943 (3,1) -; 00:12:943 (3,1) - Imo these has lack of the movement. I think you should be consistent with 00:08:443 (3,1) -; 00:09:943 (3,1) -; and so you can increase the distance between patterns I suggested I didn't want to introduce dashes this soon into the map. That's why I left the first 4 stanzas dashless, and introduced them on the following 4 stanzas. The pitch also gets a bit higher on the second repetition, so there's also an audible cue for the change.
  2. 00:36:006 (1,2) - well, this one is tottaly underdone, so I suggest you to increase the distance, maybe even make a dash? Added a dash
  3. 00:54:568 (2) - This curve looks somewhat ugly and also feels pretty awkward after a dash. maybe you could make this more curved? Tried something but it doesn't do much due to the SV
  4. 00:59:443 (3,1) - again, compared to 00:56:443 (3,1) -; 00:57:943 (3,1) - it feels inconsistent and underdone, also 01:00:006 (1) - is even louder than 00:57:006 (1) -; 00:58:506 (1) - so I think you should make a dash to 01:00:006 (1) - Added the dash
  5. 01:00:756 (4) - ... I don't quite understand how this one is emphasizing anything lol. I think you should rearrange that one into something more fun and densier, for example - 3 single notes or something like that. I also think 01:00:756 (4) - the sound on the sliders end is quite high and so it doesn't deserve to be on the sliders end Made it a repeat slider. While I do get the sound at the end is high, I don't think having 2 dashes in a row of two different snaps is adequate for a Salad, so I prefer to keep the simpler 1/1 dash signaling the change of section.
  6. 01:09:943 (3,1) - aaa again, a dash is required here for being consistent and emphasizing ideas. My suggestion is to CTRL G 01:10:506 (1) - and move it to somewhere x480 Set a different position, but the basic idea is done.
  7. 01:22:131 (3,1) - and once again, compared to 01:15:568 (2,1) - it's really undermapped. while 01:22:506 (1) - is a lot higher than 01:16:506 (1) -, it's a simple walkable?? I think you should increase the distance to make it a dash Did some magic
  8. 01:35:256 (2,3,4,5) - make this one a little bit more curved, just for aesthetics Done
  9. 01:45:943 (3,1) - the same problem like 01:09:943 (3,1) - here Tried something
  10. 01:47:256 (1) - and the same problem I mentioned before. oh, also there's no dash leading to 01:48:006 (1) -, which is inconsistent to 01:00:756 (4,1) -. Also 01:47:256 (1) - this NC is inconsistent with 01:00:756 (4) -, so remove it Fixed the dash thing in a similar way than when mentioned before, and it removed the NC.


[Rain]
  1. 00:03:568 (2,3) -; 00:05:068 (2,3) -; 00:06:568 (2,3) -; 00:09:568 (2,3) -; 00:11:068 (2,3) -; 00:12:568 (2,3) - hey, these a too ambiguous, I can even catch them without using a dash lol. I think you should decrease the distance between these, since even platter diff have much more densier dashes at these moments so yeah Confused about this one, so asking you later
  2. 01:00:756 (1,2) - ambiguous Removed the SV multiplier and made it walkable.
  3. 01:57:568 (2,3) - What about a dash here? Added
    clear rain


Thanks for the mod!

Also updated JBH's diff.
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